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                <!-- SHOULD THIS BE THE PROPER TITLE?  I'LL HAVE TO MAKE A PROPOSAL TO KEN AND BRETT -->
                <title level="m" type="sub">a machine readable transcription</title>
                <author>Walt Whitman</author>
                <editor>Ed Folsom</editor>
                <editor>Kenneth M. Price</editor>
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                <sponsor>Center for Digital Research in the Humanities, University of
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                <sponsor>University of Iowa</sponsor>
                <funder>National Endowment for the Humanities</funder>
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               <addrLine>University of Nebraska-Lincoln</addrLine>
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                <availability>
                    <p>Copyright &#169; 2010 by Ed Folsom and Kenneth M. Price, all rights
                        reserved. Items in the Archive may be shared in accordance with the Fair Use
                        provisions of U.S. copyright law. Redistribution or republication on other
                        terms, in any medium, requires express written consent from the editors and
                        advance notification of the publisher, Center for Digital Research in the
                        Humanities. Permission to reproduce the graphic images in this archive has
                        been granted by the owners of the originals for this publication only.</p>
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                    changes to this file, as noted: <persName xml:id="el">Elizabeth
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                    <persName xml:id="ses">Sabrina Ehmke Sergeant</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="aj">Andrew Jewell</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="sp">Stacy Provan</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="js">Janel Simons</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="jf">Jeffrey Feldman</persName>
                    <persName xml:id="ds">David Seaman</persName>
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                    <orgName>Oscar Lion Collection<!-- PREFERRED CITATION? -->, The New York Public
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                <handNote xml:id="ht">Horace Traubel</handNote>
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            <note place="margintop" resp="ht" type="editorial"> Horace Traubel</note>
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                        <cell role="data">Words</cell>
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                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Words in the Bible, (the <hi rend="underline">Old</hi>
                            and <hi rend="underline">New Testament</hi>, excluding the Apocrypha,)
                            by printers <choice>
                                <orig>calcu-lation</orig>
                                <reg>calculation</reg>
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                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Words in New Testament by printers calculation</cell>
                        <cell role="data">212,000</cell>
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                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Words in Iliad</cell>
                        <cell role="data" />
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                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Virgil's works altogether &#8212;</cell>
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                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Words in &#198;neid, a literal prose translation by
                            Davidson, (Buckley's ed),</cell>
                        <cell role="data">115,500</cell>
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                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Davidsons translation edited by Buckley</cell>
                        <cell role="data">122,400</cell>
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                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Bucolics &#38; Georgics</cell>
                        <cell role="data">40,800</cell>
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                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Words in Dante's Inferno literal prose translation by Dr.
                            J. A. Carlyle &#8212; (printers calculation)</cell>
                        <cell role="data">53,100</cell>
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                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Words in Paradise Lost &#8212;</cell>
                        <cell role="data">96,500</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Words in Boston ed. Leaves of Grass by printers
                            calculation</cell>
                        <cell role="data">150,500</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">" " Drum Taps</cell>
                        <cell role="data">
                            <hi rend="underline">33000</hi>
                        </cell>
                    </row>
                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label" />
                        <cell role="data">183,500</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row role="data">
                        <cell role="label">Cowper's Works complete by printers calculation
                            about</cell>
                        <cell role="data">185,000</cell>
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            <note type="editorial" place="margintop" resp="ht">
                <!-- IT DOESN'T REALLY MAKE MUCH SENSE TO CALL
THIS "margintop"; SEE ABOVE FOR SAME PROBLEM.  NEW PLACE VALUE IN ORDER? -->
                <p>Property of:<lb /> Horace Traubel</p>
                <p>Received from Walt Whitman May 23rd 1890&#8212;W. saying: "You fellows value
                    these curios more than I do. This will help you to see how the book grew, if
                    that is <choice>
                        <orig>any&#8209;thing</orig>
                        <reg>anything</reg>
                    </choice>. But I guess you would know how it grew if you never possessed the
                    book. The book is a mile&#8209;post"&#8212;And he</p>
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            <!-- Note about this:  does this suggest WW was imagining a separate cluster entitled "Pioneers O pioneers?"  It would seem so.  Interestingly, the poem "Pioneers! O Pioneers!" didn't appear until '65 Drum Taps, "Song of the Broad-Axe" appeared first in '56,  "Night on the Prairie" is an 1860 poem, "O brood continental" is the second line of "Apostroph" in 1860 (see Arthur Golden, "A Note on a Whitman Holograph poem," PBSA 55 (1961):  233-236 - ref in Norton), "Song at Sunset" was part of Chants Democratic in 1860; "Now List My Morning's Romanza" is a revision of a poem from the '55 (p. 85 "[Signs]"?)-->
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                <list>
                    <head type="main-authorial">for Pioneers O pioneers</head>
                    <item>Song of the Broad axe</item>
                    <milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-left" />
                    <item>as I wandered the prairies alone at night</item>
                    <milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-left" />
                    <item>O brood continental</item>
                    <milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-left" />
                    <item>song at sunset</item>
                    <milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-left" />
                    <item>come list to my morning's romanza</item>
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            <note type="editorial" place="marginbot" resp="ht">
                <milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-full" />
                <p>(from preceding page)</p>
                <p>went on: "This <del type="overstrike">is</del> gives a glimpse into the workshop.
                    It is wonderful to me how great a store you fellows have got to set on these
                    things. God be with you!"</p>
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            <note type="editorial" place="margintop" resp="unk">
                <p>7HxH.</p>
                <p>Acquired Sept 1933</p>
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                    <figDesc>Oscar Lion's bookplate, with a row of books, an image of a lion in a
                        natural setting, and a bust of Walt Whitman. On a banner above Whitman are
                        the words "I SOUND MY BARABARIC YAWP OVER THE ROOFS OF THE WORLD."</figDesc>
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            <note type="editorial" place="marginbot" resp="unk">
                <p>1860-61</p>
                <p>&#42;KLW</p>
                <p>Leaves</p>
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                <figure>
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                    <figDesc>Engraving by Stephen Alonzo Schoff after an oil portrait by Charles W.
                        Hine, 1860.</figDesc>
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                <docTitle>
                    <titlePart type="main" rend="center">Leaves<lb />of<lb />Grass.</titlePart>
                </docTitle>
                <docImprint>
                    <lb /><milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-center" /><lb />
                    <pubPlace>Boston,</pubPlace>
                    <publisher>Thayer and Eldridge,</publisher>
                    <lb />
                    <date>year 85 of The States,<lb />(1860-61)</date>
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                    <note place="margintop" type="authorial" resp="#h1">
                        <p>words and phrases to put in German text, either wherever they occur, or
                            in pronounced situations</p>
                        <p>"divine average" "the unknown"</p>
                        <p>Democracy</p>
                        <p>the Soul</p>
                    </note> Entered, according to Act of Congress, in the year 1860,<lb />B<hi
                        rend="smallcaps">Y</hi> WALT WHITMAN,<lb />In the Clerk's Office of the
                    District Court of the District of Massachusetts.<lb /><lb />ELECTROTYPED AT
                    THE<lb />BOSTON STEREOTYPE FOUNDRY.<lb /><lb />PRINTED BY<lb />GEORGE C. RAND
                    &#38; AVERY.<lb /></docImprint>
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            <note type="authorial" place="margintop" resp="#h1">
                <list>
                    <head>Pieces to be included in next, issue, "Leaves of Grass"</head>
                    <milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-left" />
                    <item>"Quadriune" (?or "Deus Quadriune")</item>
                    <!-- See note to "Chanting the Square Deific" on p 443, B&B -->
                    <item>"Quicksand years that whirl me I know not whither"</item>
                    <!-- this poem was first published in "Drum-Taps" (1865) -->
                    <item>"I and the old round Earth."<del type="overstrike">)</del></item>
                    <!-- this poem apparently exists only in manuscript.  See page 668 of Bradley and Blodgett -->
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            </note>
            <note place="margintop" type="authorial" resp="#h1">
                <list>
                    <item>23</item>
                    <item>24</item>
                    <item>20</item>
                    <item>49</item>
                    <item>17</item>
                    <milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-center" />
                    <item>143</item>
                    <item>20</item>
                    <milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-center" />
                    <item>163</item>
                </list>
            </note>
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                <head type="main-authorial">CONTENTS.</head>
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                    <row>
                        <cell />
                        <cell />
                        <cell>PAGE</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>PROTO-LEAF</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>5. .to. . 22</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>WALT WHITMAN</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>23. . . . .104</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell><hi rend="bold">CHANTS DEMOCRATIC</hi><lb />and Native American</cell>
                        <cell><hi rend="italic">Numbers</hi>
                            <hi rend="bold">1</hi>. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>. . <hi rend="bold"
                                >21</hi></cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>105. . . . .194</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>
                            <hi rend="bold">LEAVES OF GRASS</hi>
                        </cell>
                        <cell><hi rend="italic">Numbers</hi>
                            <hi rend="bold">1</hi>. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>. . <hi rend="bold"
                                >24</hi></cell>
                        <cell>195. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>. . 242</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>SALUT AU MONDE</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>243. . . . .258</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>POEM OF JOYS</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>259. . . . .268</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>A WORD OUT OF THE SEA</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>269. . . . .277</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>A Leaf of Faces</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>278. . . . .282</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>Europe, the 72d and 73d Years T. S.</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>283</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>
                            <hi rend="bold">ENFANS D'ADAM</hi>
                        </cell>
                        <cell><hi rend="italic">Numbers</hi>
                            <hi rend="bold">1</hi>. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>. . <hi rend="bold"
                                >15</hi></cell>
                        <cell>287. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>. . 314</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>POEM OF THE ROAD</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>315. . . . .328</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>TO THE SAYERS OF WORDS</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>329. . . . .336</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>A Boston Ballad, the 78th Year T. S.</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>337</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>
                            <hi rend="bold">CALAMUS</hi>
                        </cell>
                        <cell><hi rend="italic">Numbers</hi>
                            <hi rend="bold">1</hi>. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>. . <hi rend="bold"
                                >45</hi></cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>341. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>. . 378</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>CROSSING BROOKLYN FERRY</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>379. . . . .388</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>Longings for Home</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>389</cell>
                    </row>
                </table>
                <table cols="4" rows="8">
                    <!-- I rearranged this table to reflect page layout -->
                    <head rend="bold">MESSENGER LEAVES.</head>
                    <row>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>PAGE</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>PAGE</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>To You, Whoever You Are</cell>
                        <cell>391</cell>
                        <cell>To a Cantatrice</cell>
                        <cell>401</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>To a foiled Revolter or Revoltress</cell>
                        <cell>394</cell>
                        <cell>Walt Whitman's Caution</cell>
                        <cell>401</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>To Him That was Crucified</cell>
                        <cell>397</cell>
                        <cell>To a President</cell>
                        <cell>402</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>To One Shortly To Die</cell>
                        <cell>398</cell>
                        <cell>To Other Lauds</cell>
                        <cell>402</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>To a Common Prostitute</cell>
                        <cell>399</cell>
                        <cell>To Old Age</cell>
                        <cell>402</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>To Rich Givers</cell>
                        <cell>399</cell>
                        <cell>To You</cell>
                        <cell>403</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>To a Pupil</cell>
                        <cell>400</cell>
                        <cell>To You</cell>
                        <cell>403</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>To The States, to Identify the 16th, 17th, or 18th Presidentiad</cell>
                        <cell>400</cell>
                    </row>
                </table>
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                <table>
                    <head type="main-authorial">CONTENTS.</head>
                    <row>
                        <cell />
                        <cell />
                        <cell>PAGE</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>Mannahatta</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>404</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>France, the 18th Year T. S.</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>406</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>THOUGHTS</cell>
                        <cell><hi rend="italic">Numbers</hi>. .1. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>.
                            .7</cell>
                        <cell>408. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>. .411</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>Unnamed Lands</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>412</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>Kosmos</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>414</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>A Hand Mirror</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>415</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>Beginners</cell>
                        <cell>Tests</cell>
                        <cell>416</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>Savantism</cell>
                        <cell>Perfections</cell>
                        <cell>417</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>Says</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>418</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>Debris</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>421</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>SLEEP-CHASINGS</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>426. .<hi rend="italic">to</hi>. .439</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>BURIAL</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>440. . . . .448</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>To My Soul</cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>449</cell>
                    </row>
                    <row>
                        <cell>
                            <hi rend="italic">So long</hi>
                        </cell>
                        <cell />
                        <cell>451</cell>
                    </row>
                </table>
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                    <figDesc>Image of a hand with a butterfly perched on the index finger.</figDesc>
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                <hi rend="underline">Starting from fish&#8209;shape Paumanok</hi>
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            <l>Or rude in my <del type="overstrike">
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                </del>
                <del type="overstrike">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212; for</add>
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                <del type="overstrike">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">hunter's</add>
                </del> home in <subst>
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                </subst> woods&#8212;<lb /><del type="overstrike">or a hunter, <add
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                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">from</add>the spring</del><lb /><del>my
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            <l>Or withdrawn to <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">muse and</add> to meditate
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            <l>Far from the clank of crowds, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
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                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my <choice>
                            <orig>extasy</orig>
                            <reg>ecstasy</reg>
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                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">through <del type="overstrike">
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                                <orig>extasies</orig>
                                <reg>ecstasies</reg>
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            <l>
                <del type="overstrike">Peering through vistas to destinies grand&#8212;<choice>
                        <orig>pas-<lb />sionate</orig>
                        <reg>passionate<lb /></reg>
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            <l>Of <del type="overstrike">hills,</del><del type="overstrike">
                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">fields,</add>
                </del><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">earths,</add> rocks, Fifth Month
                flowers experienced&#8212;<lb />stars, rain, snow, my amaze,</l>
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            <l>Aware of the fresh free&#8209;given, the flowing Missouri&#8212;<lb />aware
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            <l>Aware of the buffalo herds, the myriads grazing<lb />the plains, the hirsute and
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                    <del type="overwrite">h</del><add type="overwrite" place="over">H</add>aving
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                    >mountain</del><del type="overstrike">
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            <l>sea&#8209;hawk</l>
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            <l>Aware of the fresh free&#8209;given, the flowing Missouri &#8212; <del
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            <l>Aware of the buffalo herds, <del>the myriads</del> grazing<lb />the <del
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            <l>Of earths rocks, Fifth&#8209;Month flowers experienced&#8212;<lb />stars,
                rain, snow, my amaze,</l>
            <l>Having studied the mocking&#8209;bird's tones, and the<lb />mountain hawks'</l>
            <l>And heard at dusk <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">the unrivall'd
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                cedars</l>
            <l>Solitary, singing <del type="overstrike">
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                    type="overstrike">new world</del>
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                    <l><subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">With</add>
                        </subst> the mocking bird <del type="overstrike">,</del>
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                <head type="main-authorial">P<hi rend="smallcaps">ROTO-</hi>L<hi rend="smallcaps"
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                    <l>F<hi rend="smallcaps">REE</hi>, fresh, savage,</l>
                    <l>Fluent, luxuriant, self-content, fond of persons and <lb />places, </l>
                    <l>Fond of fish-shape Paumanok, where I was born,</l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">Fond of the sea&#8212;</del>lusty-begotten and
                        various,</l>
                    <l>Boy of the Mannahatta, the city of ships, my city,</l>
                    <l>Or raised inland, or of the south savannas,</l>
                    <l>Or full-breath'd on Californian air, or <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Texan or</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">central Nebraskan
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                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Cuban air, </del>
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                    <l>Tallying, vocalizing all&#8212;resounding Niagara&#8212;
                        <lb />resounding Missouri, </l>
                    <l>Or rude in my home in Kanuck woods,</l>
                    <l>Or wandering and hunting, my drink water, my diet <lb />meat, </l>
                    <l>Or withdrawn to muse and mediate in some deep <lb />recess, </l>
                    <l>Far from the clank of crowds, an interval passing, <lb />rapt and happy, </l>
                    <l>Stars, vapor, snow, the hills, rocks, the Fifth Month <lb />flowers, my
                        amaze, my love, </l>
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                    <l>Aware of the buffalo, the peace-herds, the bull, <lb />strong-breasted and
                        hairy, </l>
                    <l>Aware of the mocking-bird of the wilds at <choice>
                            <orig>day-<lb />break,</orig>
                            <reg>daybreak<lb /></reg>
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                    <l>Solitary, singing in the west, I strike up for a new <lb />world. </l>
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                    <l>Victory, union, faith, identity, time, <del type="overstrike">the
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                        <choice>
                            <orig>your-<lb />self,</orig>
                            <reg>yourself,<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> the present and future lands, the <choice>
                            <orig>indisso-<lb />luble</orig>
                            <reg>indissoluble<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> compacts, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
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                        eternal progress, <note type="authorial" place="marginright"
                        >?</note><lb />the kosmos,<del type="erasure">
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                    <l>This then is life,</l>
                    <l>Here is what has come to the surface after so many <lb />throes and
                        convulsions. </l>
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                    <l>How curious! <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="edit">h</add>
                        </subst>ow real!</l>
                    <l>Underfoot the divine soil&#8212;<subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="edit">o</add>
                        </subst>verhead the sun.</l>
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                    <l>See, revolving, <anchor xml:id="t1" />
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add></l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t1">The globe <add type="insertion"
                                place="marginleft">!</add>&#8212;</transpose>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the ancestor-continents,
                        away, grouped <lb />together, </l>
                    <l>The present and future continents, north and south, <lb />with the isthmus
                        between. </l>
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                    <l>See, vast, trackless spaces <del type="overstrike">,</del><add
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                    <l>As in a dream, they change, they swiftly fill,</l>
                    <l>Countless masses debouch upon them <del type="overstrike">,</del>
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                            </del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">&#8212;</add>
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                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">the conquerors come;</add></l>
                    <l>They are now covered with the foremost people, arts, <lb />institutions
                        known. </l>
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                    <l>See projected, through time,</l>
                    <l>For me, an audience interminable.</l>
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                    <l>With firm and regular step they wend&#8212;they never <lb />stop, </l>
                    <l>Successions of men, Americanos, a hundred millions,</l>
                    <l>One generation playing its part and passing on,</l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">And</del> another generation playing its part and
                        passing <lb />on in its turn, </l>
                    <l>With faces turned sideways or backward toward me <lb />to listen, </l>
                    <l>With eyes retrospective toward me.</l>
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                    <l>Americanos! <anchor xml:id="t2" />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Masters!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Conquerors!</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t2">Marches humanitarian!</transpose>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>Foremost! <anchor
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                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t3">Century marches! Libertad!
                            Masses!</transpose>
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                    <l>For you <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">my</add>
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                    <l>Chants of the prairies,</l>
                    <l>Chants of the <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">long-running Mississippi</del>
                        </restore>, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#38; down to the
                            Mexican Sea</add></l>
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                            <del type="overstrike">Ohio</del>
                        </restore>, Indiana, <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Illinois,</del>
                        </restore>
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                        </del>, Iowa, <add type="insertion" place="marginright">&#8212;Wisconsin
                            and Minnesota</add><lb /><del type="overstrike">and Minnesota, <add
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<subst>
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                            <milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-center" /> &#42;
                            &#182; <l>chants <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">going
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                                    >Nebraska</add>
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                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the <add type="insertion"
                                        place="supralinear">inland</add> central Nebraska and
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                            <l>&#182; Thence, equi&#8209;distant , <del type="overstrike"
                                    >launched forth</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">shooting my pulses of
                                    fire</add><lb /><del type="overstrike">for all</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">to <del type="overstrike"
                                        >surround</del>
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">embrace</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="surpalinear">represent</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">vivify</add>
                                all</add></l>
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                                <l>Chants going forth from the center, from<lb />Kansas &#38;
                                    thence equi&#8209;distant</l>
                                <l>Shooting <del type="overstrike">my</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">in</add> pulses of <del
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                                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">ceaseless</add>
                                    </del> fire <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                        >ceaseless</add> to <del type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">ceaslessly</add>
                                    </del> vivify all.</l>
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                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Inland chants&#8212;chants of Kanzas,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Chants away down to Mexico, and up north to</del>
                        <lb />
                        <del type="overstrike">Oregon<del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="low" resp="ses"
                                        >arkansas to Newfoundland</unclear>
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                            </del> &#8212;Kanadian chants,</del>
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                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Chants of teeming and turbulent
                            cities&#8212;chants of </del>
                        <lb />
                        <del type="overstrike">mechanics,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Illinois</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">Yankee</del>
                        <del type="edit">c</del><add type="edit">C</add>hants&#8212; <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">sweeping joyous along <del
                                type="overstrike">the West.</del></add>
                        <del type="overstrike">Pennsylvanian chants&#8212;chants
                        of</del><lb />Kentucky and Tennessee, </l>
                    <l>Chants of dim-lit mines&#8212;chants of <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">the</add>mountain-tops, <add type="insertion"
                            place="marginright">of Colorado, or Nevada</add></l>
                    <l> Chants of sailors<add type="insertion" place="marginleft"
                        >also</add>&#8212;chants of the Eastern Sea and the <lb />Western Sea, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Chants of the Mannahatta, the place of my
                            dearest</del>
                        <lb />
                        <del type="overstrike">love, the place surrounded by hurried and</del>
                        <lb />
                        <del type="overstrike">sparkling currents,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Health chants&#8212;joy chants&#8212;robust
                            chants of young</del>
                        <lb />
                        <del>men,</del>
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                    <l>Chants <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">including</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">inclusive</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">tolerating all</add>
                        </del><del type="overstrike">&#8212;wide reverberating chants,</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;from the <add
                                type="insertion" place="supralinear">inland</add> centre</add>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">the
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                    <l>
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                                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible"/>
                                        <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                            >d</unclear>
                                    block<gap reason="deletion, illegible" /></note>
                            </del> Many In One.</del>
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                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">including,</add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">embracing</add>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">tolerating all.</add>
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                    <l>In the Year 80 of The States,</l>
                    <l>My tongue, every atom of my blood, formed from <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">this</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">American</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> soil, this air, </l>
                    <l>Born here of parents born <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">here,</del>
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                        <l>From parents the same, and their <del type="overstrike">parents'</del>
                            parents <lb />the same, </l>
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                    <l>I, now thirty-six years old, in perfect health, <lb />begin, </l>
                    <l>Hoping to cease not till death.</l>
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                    <l>Creeds and schools in abeyance,</l>
                    <l><span type="bracketed" xml:id="s1" from="s1" to="s2" />Retiring back a
                        while, sufficed at what they are, but <lb />never forgotten,<anchor
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                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </note>
                    </del>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">With accumulations, now coming forward in
                            front,</del>
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                    <l><del type="overstrike">Arrived</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">again,</del> I harbor, <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">here in <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my</del>
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                            >these</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> leaves</add>
                        </del>for good or bad&#8212;I permit <lb />to speak, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">
                            <del type="overstrike">again</del>
                        </add><del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">once again</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">again</add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">at every hazard</add></l>
                    <l>Nature, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">now</add> without check,
                        with original energy.</l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <l>Take <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">my</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                        </del> leaves, <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">America!</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">take them South &#38; and take them
                            North!</add></l>
                    <l>Make welcome for them everywhere, for they are <lb />your own offspring; </l>
                    <l>Surround them, East and West! for they would <lb />surround you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And you precedents! connect lovingly with them, for <lb />they connect
                        lovingly with you. </l>
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                    <l>I conn <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion">'</add>
                        </subst> old times <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
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                    <l>I sat studying at the feet of the great masters <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Now, if eligible, O that the great masters might <lb />return and study me!
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf009r" type="recto" n="9" facs="nyp.00015.017" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>In the name of These States, shall I scorn the <lb />antique? </l>
                    <l>Why These are the children of the antique, to <lb />justify it. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>Dead poets, philosophs, priests,</l>
                    <l>Martyrs, artists, inventors, governments long since,</l>
                    <l>Language-shapers, on other shores,</l>
                    <l>Nations once powerful, now reduced, withdrawn, or <lb />desolate, </l>
                    <l>I dare not proceed till I respectfully credit what you <lb />have left,
                        wafted hither, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="inline">over <gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>I have perused it&#8212;<del type="overstrike">I</del> own it is
                        admirable, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><span type="bracketed"
                                xml:id="s3" from="s3" to="s4" />moving awhile among it<anchor
                                xml:id="s4" /></add></l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">I</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">think</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">think</add>
                            <del type="overstrike"><add seq="3" type="insertion" place="marginleft">
                                    <del type="edit">k</del>
                                </add>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="4" type="edit">K</add>
                                </del>now</del>
                        </subst> nothing can ever be greater&#8212;Nothing can <lb />ever
                        deserve more than it deserves; </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">I</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">r</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">R</add>
                        </subst> egard<add type="unmarked" place="inline">ing</add> it all <restore
                            rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">intently</del>
                        </restore> a long while, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >&#8212;then <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I</add>
                            </del>dismissing <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion">&#38; returning</add>
                            </del> it, <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /></add></l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">I stand in</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">To</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">Then</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">take</del> my place <del type="overstrike">for
                            good</del> with my own day <del type="overstrike">and</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">exclusively</add>
                        </del><del type="overstrike">race</del> here.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                    <l>Here lands female and male, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Here the heirship and heiress-ship of the world&#8212; <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">H</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">h</add>
                        </subst> ere the flame of materials <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Here Spirituality, the translatress, the openly-avowed,</l>
                    <l>The ever-tending, the finale of visible forms,</l>
                    <l><subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">The</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">My</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">The</add>
                        </subst> satisfier, after due long-waiting, now advancing,</l>
                    <l>Yes, here comes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">my</add>
                        </subst> the mistress, <del type="erasure">
                            <hi rend="underline">the Soul.</hi>
                        </del><del type="erasure">
                            <note type="authorial" place="infralinear">block letter</note>
                        </del></l>
                </lg>
                <!-- having issues with how to represent changes around the soul -->
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>The SOUL!</l>
                    <l>Forever and forever&#8212; <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">L</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">l</add>
                        </subst>onger than soil is brown and <lb />solid&#8212;<del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>Longer than water ebbs and flows. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                    <l>I will make the poems of materials, for I think they <lb />are to be the most
                        spiritual poems, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf009v" type="verso" n="10" facs="nyp.00015.018" />
                    <l>And I will make the poems of my body and of <lb />mortality, </l>
                    <l>For I think I shall then supply myself with the <lb />poems of my Soul and of
                        immortality. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>I will make a song for These States, <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                </del>that no one <lb />State may under any circumstances be
                                subjected <lb />to another State <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <l>And I will make a song that there shall be comity by <lb />day and by
                                night <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                </del> between all The States, and <lb />between any two of them <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                            <add type="edit" place="marginleft"><gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                                     /><unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                    >move</unclear> this in</add>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marginleft">&#9757;</add>
                    </subst>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>And I will make a song of the organic bargains of <lb />These
                            States&#8212;And a shrill song of curses on <lb />him who would
                            dissever the Union;</l>
                    </del>
                    <l>And I will make a song for the ears of the President, <lb />full of weapons
                        with menacing points, </l>
                    <l>And behind the weapons countless dissatisfied faces.</l>
                </lg>
                <del type="erasure">
                    <note type="authorial">&#9758;</note>
                </del>
                <!-- this addition actually appears on the top of page 11-->
                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                    <l>And a song of the <del type="overstrike">Mistress</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">one of many made <gap
                                reason="deletion, illegible" /></add> over all, <del
                            type="overstrike">the</del><lb /><del type="overstrike">glittering
                            delicate mistress over all</del></l>
                    <l>The fang'd &#38; glittering <del type="overstrike">Mistress</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">one that is</add> over all,</l>
                    <l>Resolute <del type="overstrike">mistress</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">warlike</add>; <del
                            type="overstrike">weapon'd Mistress</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">one that is</add> over all.</l>
                    <note type="authorial">&#42;(down)</note>
                </add>
                <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                    <l>&#42;(However high the head of any, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="supralinear">else,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">that</del></l>
                    <l>That head is higher far, &#38; over all.)</l>
                </add>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                    <l>I will acknowledge contemporary lands <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I will trail the whole geography of the globe, and <lb />salute courteously
                        every city large and small; </l>
                    <l>And employments! I will put in my poems, that <lb />with you is heroism, upon
                        land and sea <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </subst> And I <lb />will report all heroism from an American point <lb />of
                        view; </l>
                    <l>And sexual organs and acts! do you concentrate in <lb />me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add type="overwrite" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </subst> For I am determined to tell you <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike"> with</del>
                        </restore><lb /><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">courageous clear voice,</del>
                        </restore> to prove you illustrious. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                    <l>I will sing the song<del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">s</add>
                        </del> of companionship,</l>
                    <l>I will show what alone must <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >finally</add>compact These,</l>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginbot"><del type="overstrike">Not
                            I</del>More than by any agreement upon a paper, and more than by
                            weapons,</add>
                    </del>
                    <!-- This addition was initially to be placed between lines one and two; Whitman erased the line and changed the insertion between lines two and three. -->
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline"> &#182;</add>I believe These are to
                        found their own ideal of manly <lb />love, indicating it in me; </l>
                    <note rend="circled" type="authorial">take this in</note>
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                    <l>I will therefore let flame from me the burning fires <lb />that were
                        threatening to consume me, </l>
                    <l>I will lift what has too long kept down those <choice>
                            <orig>smoul-<lb />dering</orig>
                            <reg>smouldering<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> fires, </l>
                    <l>I will give them complete abandonment,</l>
                    <l>I will write the evangel-poem of comrades and <lb />of love, </l>
                    <l>(For who but I should understand love, with all its <lb />sorrow and joy? </l>
                    <l>And who but I should be the poet of comrades?)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                    <l>I am the credulous man of qualities, ages, races <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I advance from the people en&#8209;masse in their own <lb />spirit <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Here is what sings unrestricted faith.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                    <l>Omnes! Omnes!<anchor xml:id="t5" /></l>
                    <transpose anchored="true" target="t5">
                        <l>Let others ignore what they may <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </transpose>
                    <l>I make the poem of evil also&#8212;I commemorate that <lb />part also <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I am myself just as much evil as good <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">&#38; my nation
                        is&#8212;</add>&#8212;And I say <lb />there is in fact no evil <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Or if there is, I say it is just
                        as important to you, to <lb />the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">earth,</del>
                            <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">land,</add>
                        </subst>earth, or to me, as anything else.<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                    <l>I too, following many, and followed by many, <choice>
                            <orig>inau-<lb />gurate</orig>
                            <reg>inaugurate<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> a Religion&#8212;I too go to the wars <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>It may be I am destined to utter
                        the loudest cries <lb />thereof, the conqueror's shouts <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="inseration" place="marginleft">Who knows?</add>They may rise from
                        me yet, and soar above every <lb />thing.<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >).</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                    <l>Each is not for its own sake <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I say the whole earth, and all the stars in the sky, are <lb />for Religion's
                        sake. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf010v" type="verso" n="12" facs="nyp.00015.020" />
                <del type="overstrike">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">I say that life is nothing</add>
                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                    <l>I say no man has ever <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">yet</add>been
                        half devout enough,</l>
                    <l>None has ever <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">yet</add> adored or
                        worship'd half enough,</l>
                    <l>None has begun to think how divine he himself is, <lb />and how certain the
                        future is. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">specifically announce that</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">say</add>
                        </subst> the real and <choice>
                            <orig>perma-<lb />nent</orig>
                            <reg>permanent<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> grandeur of These States must be <add type="edit"
                            place="interlinear" rend="underline">their</add>
                        <lb /><add type="edit" place="interlinear" rend="underline">Religion,</add>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">(down)&#42;</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                            <del type="overstrike">lecture</del>
                            <l>&#42;(Nor character, nor life worthy the<lb />name without
                                religion,</l>
                            <l>Nor <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">State,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Land,</add>
                                </subst>> nor man or woman, without religion</l>
                        </add>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Otherwise there is no real and
                        permanent grandeur.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                    <l>What are you doing, young man?</l>
                    <l>Are you so earnest&#8212;so given up to literature, <lb />science, art,
                        amours? </l>
                    <l>These ostensible realities, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">materials,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">politics,</add>
                        </subst>materials, points?</l>
                    <l>Your ambition or business, whatever it may be?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                    <l>It is well&#8212;Against such I say not a word&#8212;I am <lb />their
                        poet also; </l>
                    <l>But behold! such swiftly subside&#8212;burnt up for <lb />Religion's
                        sake, </l>
                    <l>For not all matter is fuel to heat, impalpable flame, <lb />the essential
                        life of the earth, </l>
                    <l>Any more than such are to Religion.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                    <l>What <subst>
                            <restore seq="1" rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">do you seek</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">seek you</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>, so pensive and silent?</l>
                    <l>What <del type="overstrike">do you</del> need, <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">you,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">comrade?</del><anchor xml:id="t6" />
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">dear</add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">Camerado?</add></l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Mon cher!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Dear son!</add>
                        </subst> Mon cher! <transpose anchored="true" target="t6">do you think it is
                            love?</transpose></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Proceed, comrade,</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">Listen, dear son&#8212;listen
                            America, daughter &#38; son,</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>It is a painful thing to love a man or woman to <lb />excess&#8212;<add
                            type="insertion" place="marginleft">and</add>yet it
                        satisfies&#8212;it is great <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>But there is something else very great&#8212;it makes the <lb />whole
                        coincide <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf011r" type="recto" n="13" facs="nyp.00015.021" />
                    <!-- Whitman crossed out the heading at the top of the page and replaced it with: Starting from fish-shape Paumanok -->
                    <l>It, magnificent, beyond materials, with continuous <lb />hands, sweeps and
                        provides for all. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                    <l><del type="overstrike">O I see</del>
                        <del type="overstrike"><subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                            </subst> he following poems are indeed</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Know you,</add> to drop in the
                        <lb />earth the germs of <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">a greater</del>
                        </restore> Religion <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">,</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">for you,</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">My chants</add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">The following chants each for its
                            kind, I sing.</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="34">
                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d3" />
                    <l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Whoever you are,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">My <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">c</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="edit">C</add>
                            </subst> omrade!</del>
                        <anchor xml:id="t7" />
                    </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">For you, to</del>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t7">
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">come</add> share with me, two
                            greatnesses&#8212;</transpose><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add> And a <lb />third one, rising inclusive and more
                        resplendent, </l>
                    <l>The greatness of Love and Democracy&#8212;and <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion">that</add>
                        </subst><lb />greatness of Religion. </l>
                    <anchor xml:id="d3" />
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="35">
                    <l>Melange mine <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">o<gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="own" />! <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">interplay between</add>
                        </del> the <subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="inline">unseen and <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">the</add> seen;</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright"><del
                                        type="overstrike">hidden</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">unknown</add> &#38;
                                    the known;</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="marginright">unseen &#38; the
                                seen!</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Mysterious ocean where the streams empty,</l>
                    <l>Prophetic spirit of materials shifting and flickering <lb />around me, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Wondrous interplay between the seen and unseen,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Living beings, identities, now doubtless near us, in <lb />the air, that we
                        know not of, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Extasy everywhere touching and thrilling me,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Contact daily and hourly that will not release me,</l>
                    <l>These selecting&#8212;These, in hints, demanded of me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="36">
                    <l>Not he, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">adhesive, kissing me so long with his
                                daily</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">who <add
                                        type="insertion" place="surpalinear">has</add> kiss'd <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">me</add> day after day
                                        <del type="overstrike">with a</del>
                                    <add type="insertion" place="marginright">for years,</add></add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">with a daily kiss
                                kissing me from a child,</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">kiss,</del></l>
                    <l>Has winded and twisted around me that which holds <lb />me to him, </l>
                    <l>Any more than I am held to the heavens, to the <lb />spiritual world, </l>
                    <l>And to the identities of the Gods, my <del type="overstrike">unknown</del>
                        <lb />lovers<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">faithful and true</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>After what they have done to me, suggesting <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">such</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">my</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> themes. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf011v" type="verso" n="14" facs="nyp.00015.022" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="37">
                    <l>O such themes! Equalities!</l>
                    <l>O amazement of things! O divine average!</l>
                    <l>O warblings under the sun&#8212;ushered, as now, or at <lb />noon, or
                        setting! </l>
                    <l>O strain, musical, flowing through ages&#8212;now <lb />reaching hither, </l>
                    <l>I take to your reckless and composite chords&#8212;I <lb />add to them,
                        and cheerfully pass them forward. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="38">
                    <l>As I have walked in Alabama my morning walk,</l>
                    <l>I have seen where the she-bird, the mocking-bird, sat <lb />on her nest in
                        the briers, hatching her brood. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="39">
                    <l>I have seen the he-bird also,</l>
                    <l>I have paused to hear him, near at hand, inflating his <lb />throat, and
                        joyfully singing. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="40">
                    <l>And while I paused, it came to me that what he <lb />really sang for was not
                        there only, </l>
                    <l>Nor for his mate nor himself only, nor all sent back <lb />by the echoes, </l>
                    <l>But subtle, clandestine, away beyond,</l>
                    <l>A charge transmitted, and gift occult, for those <lb />being born. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="41">
                    <l>
                        <add type="edit" rend="underline">Democracy!</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>Near at hand to you a throat is now inflating itself <lb />and joyfully
                        singing. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="42">
                    <l>Ma femme!</l>
                    <l>For the brood beyond us and of us,</l>
                    <l>For those who belong here, and those to come,</l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf012r" type="recto" n="15" facs="nyp.00015.23" />
                    <l>I, exultant, to be ready for them, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>will now shake out <lb />carols <add type="insertion"
                            place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">&#182; The strongest and
                                haughtiest</add>
                        </del>stronger and haughtier than <restore type="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">have</del>
                        </restore>
                        <restore type="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">ever</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">any</add>
                        </del> yet <lb /><restore type="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">been</del>
                        </restore> heard upon the earth. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="43">
                    <l>I will make the songs of passions, to give them <lb />their way, </l>
                    <l>And your songs, <add type="insertion" place="marginright"
                        >outlaw'd</add>offenders&#8212;for I scan you with <lb />kindred eyes,
                            <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">&#182;</add>and <add
                            type="insertion" place="infralinear">I</add>carry you with me the same
                        <lb />as any. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="44">
                    <l>I will make the true poem of riches,</l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">Namely,</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                        </subst>o earn for the body and the mind, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">what</del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">whatever</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="marginright">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="marginright"><del type="overstrike"
                                    >only</del> whatever</add>
                        </subst>what <lb />adheres, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <restore rend="erased">and goes forward,</restore>
                        </del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">&#182; That which</add>
                        </del>and is not dropt by <lb />death. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="45">
                    <l>I will effuse egotism, and show it underlying all&#8212; <lb />And I will
                        be the bard of Personality; </l>
                    <l>And I will show of male and female that either is but <lb />the equal of the
                        other, </l>
                    <l>And I will show that there is <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">after
                            all</add>no imperfection in <del type="overstrike">male</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">or female, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>or in the earth, or in</del> the present&#8212;
                        <lb />and can be none in the future, </l>
                    <l>And I will show that whatever happens to anybody, it <lb />may be turned to
                        beautiful results <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite">&#182;</add>
                        </subst> And I will <lb />show that nothing can happen more beautiful
                        <lb />than death <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite">.</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>And I will thread a thread through my poems that <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike"><lb />no one thing in the universe is
                                inferior to another <lb />thing,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginbot"><del type="overstrike"
                                    >And</del> that time &#38; events are
                                compact&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And that all the things of the universe are perfect <lb />miracles, each as
                        profound as any. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf012v" type="verso" n="16" facs="nyp.00015.24" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="46">
                    <l>I will not make poems with reference to parts,</l>
                    <l>But I will make leaves, poems, poemets, songs, says, <lb />thoughts, with
                        reference to ensemble; </l>
                    <l>And I will not sing with reference to a day, but with <lb />reference to all
                        days, </l>
                    <l>And I will not make a poem, nor the least part of <lb />a poem, but has
                        reference to the Soul, </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Because, having looked at the
                        objects of the universe, <lb />I find there is no one, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">&#182; And I find there is
                                not</add>
                        </del>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">nor</del>
                        </restore> any particle of one, <lb />but has reference to the Soul. <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="47">
                    <l>Was somebody asking to see the Soul?</l>
                    <l>See! your own shape and countenance&#8212;persons, <lb />substances, <del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>beasts, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the trees,
                        the running rivers, <lb />the rocks and sands. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="48">
                    <l>All hold spiritual joys, and afterward loosen them,</l>
                    <l>How can the real body ever die, and be buried?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="49">
                    <l>Of your real body, and any man's or woman's real <lb />body, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> item for item, it will
                        elude the hands of <lb />the corpse-cleaners, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> and pass to fitting spheres, <add type="overwrite" place="over"
                            >,</add><lb />carrying what has accrued to it <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> from the moment <lb />of birth to the moment of death. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="50">
                    <l>Not the types set up by the printer return their <choice>
                            <orig>im-<lb />pression,</orig>
                            <reg>impression<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> the meaning, the main concern, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add> any <lb />more than a man's substance and life, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> or a <lb />woman's
                        substance and life, return in the body <lb />and the Soul, indifferently
                        before death and <lb />after death. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf013r" type="recto" n="17" facs="nyp.00015.25" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="51">
                    <l>Behold! the body includes and is the meaning, the <lb />main
                        concern&#8212;and includes and is the Soul; </l>
                    <l>Whoever you are! how superb and how divine is your <lb />body, or any part of
                        it. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="52">
                    <l>Whoever you are! to <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">y</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">Y</add>
                        </subst> ou endless announcements.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="53">
                    <l>Daughter of the lands, did you wait for your poet?</l>
                    <l>Did you wait for one with a flowing mouth and <lb />indicative hand? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="54">
                    <l>Toward the male of The States, and toward the <lb />female of The States, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Toward the President, the Congress, the diverse <choice>
                                <orig>Gov-<lb />ernors,</orig>
                                <reg>Governors<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> the new Judiciary,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Live words&#8212;words to the lands.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="55">
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t8">O the lands!</transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">Lands scorning invaders!</del>
                        <anchor xml:id="t8" />Interlinked, food-yielding <lb />lands! <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">land of the hay&#8209;field! <del
                                type="overstrike">underspreading all!</del></add></l>
                    <l>Land of coal and iron! Land of gold! Land<del type="overstrike">s</del> of
                        <lb />cotton, sugar, rice! </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Odorous and sunny land! Floridian land!</l>
                        <l>Land of the <del type="overstrike">spinal river, the Mississippi!</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">flowing Ohio!</add> Land of
                            <lb />the Alleghanies! Ohio's land! <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >land of <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Ohio and</add>
                                Illinios</add></l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Land of wheat, beef, pork! Land of wool and hemp! <lb />Land of the <del
                            type="overstrike">potato, the</del> apple, and <del type="overstrike"
                            >the</del> grape! </l>
                    <l>Land of <del type="overstrike">the pastoral plains,</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright"><del type="erasure">a<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /></del>
                                beyond&#8212;</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">the grass-fields of the</del><lb /><del
                            type="overstrike">world!</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">Land of those</del> sweet-aired interminable
                            <lb /><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Western</add>plateaus!
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>Land <del
                            type="overstrike">there</del> of the herd, the garden, <lb />the healthy
                        house of adobie! <del type="overstrike">Land there of rapt </del><lb /><del
                            type="overstrike">thought, and of the realization of the stars!
                            </del><lb /><del type="overstrike">Land of simple, holy, untamed lives!
                        </del></l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf013v" type="verso" n="18" facs="nyp.00015.26" />
                    <l>Lands where the northwest Columbia winds, and <lb />where the southwest
                        Colorado winds! </l>
                    <l>Land of the <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Eastern</add>Chesapeake!
                        Land of the Delaware!</l>
                    <l>Land of Ontario, Erie, Huron, Michigan!</l>
                    <l>Land of the Old Thirteen! Massachusetts land! <lb />Land of Vermont and
                        Connecticut! </l>
                    <l>Land of <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">many oceans!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the mighty ocean
                                shores!</add>
                        </subst> Land of sierras and peaks!</l>
                    <l>Land of boatmen and sailors! Fishermen's land!</l>
                    <l>Inextricable lands! the clutched together! the <lb />passionate <subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">lovers</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">ones</add>
                        </subst>!</l>
                    <l>The side by side! the elder and younger brothers! <lb />the bony-limbed! </l>
                    <l>The great women's land! the feminine! the <choice>
                            <orig>ex-<lb />perienced</orig>
                            <reg>experienced<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> sisters and the inexperienced sisters! </l>
                    <l>Far breath'd land! Arctic braced! Mexican breezed! <lb />the diverse! the
                        compact! </l>
                    <l>The Pennsylvanian! the Virginian! the double <lb />Carolinian! </l>
                    <l>O all and each well-loved by me! my intrepid nations! <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">South and North!</add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginright">O I at any rate include you all
                            with perfect love</add><lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">O</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">I</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">O</del> I <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">O I at any rate, include you <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">both</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked">all</add>
                                </subst>both with perfect love&#8212;I</add>
                        </del>cannot be discharged from you! <add type="insertion"
                            place="marginright">not from one any sooner than another</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>O Death! O for all that, I am yet of you, unseen, <lb />this hour, with
                        irrepressible love, </l>
                    <l>Walking New England, a friend, a traveller,</l>
                    <l>Splashing my bare feet in the edge of the summer <lb />ripples, on Paumanok's
                        sands, </l>
                    <l><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Yet</add>
                        </del>Crossing the prairies&#8212;dwelling again in Chicago&#8212;
                        <lb />dwelling in <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">many</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">every <del
                                    type="overstrike">American</del></add>
                        </subst> town<del type="edit">s</del>, </l>
                    <l>Observing shows, births, improvements, structures, <lb />arts, </l>
                    <l>Listening to the orators and the oratresses in public <lb />halls, </l>
                    <l>Of and through The States, as during life <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">(no separation for me)</add>
                        </del>&#8212;each <lb />man and woman my neighbor, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf014r" type="recto" n="19" facs="nyp.00015.27" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop">
                        <list>
                            <item>Colorado</item>
                            <item>Nevada</item>
                        </list>
                    </note>
                    <l>The Louisianian, the Georgian, as near to me, and I <lb />as near to him and
                        her, </l>
                    <l>The Mississippian and Arkansian<del type="overstrike">&#8212;the woman
                            and</del><lb /><del type="overstrike">man of <add type="insertion"
                                place="marginleft">Idaho</add> Utah, Dakotah, Nebraska,</del> yet
                        with me <lb /><del type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>and I yet with any of
                        them, </l>
                    <l>Yet upon the plains west of the spinal river&#8212;yet <lb />in my house
                        of adobie, </l>
                    <l>Yet returning eastward&#8212;yet in the Sea-Side State, <lb />or in
                        Maryland, </l>
                    <l>Yet <del type="overstrike">a child of the North&#8212;yet</del> Kanadian,
                        cheerily <lb />braving the winter&#8212;the snow and ice welcome
                        <lb />to me, </l>
                    <l>Yet a true son either of Maine, or of the Granite <lb />State, <del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>or of the Narragansett Bay State, or of <lb />the Empire State, </l>
                    <l>Yet sailing to other shores to annex the same&#8212;yet <lb />welcoming
                        every new brother, </l>
                    <l>Hereby applying these leaves to the new ones, from <lb />the hour they unite
                        with the old ones, </l>
                    <l>Coming among the new ones myself, to be their <lb />companion<add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#38;
                        equal&#8212;</add>&#8212;coming personally to you now, </l>
                    <l>Enjoining you to acts, characters, spectacles, with <lb />me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="56">
                    <l>With me, with firm holding&#8212;yet haste, haste on.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="57">
                    <l>For your life, adhere to me,</l>
                    <l>Of all the men of the earth, <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">perhaps</add>
                        </del> I only can unloose you <lb />and toughen you, </l>
                    <l>I may have to be persuaded many times before I <lb />consent to give myself
                        to you&#8212;but what of <lb />that? </l>
                    <l>Must not Nature be persuaded many times?</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf014v" type="verso" n="20" facs="nyp.00015.28" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="58">
                    <l>No dainty dolce affettuoso I;</l>
                    <l>Bearded, sunburnt, gray-necked, forbidding, I have <lb />arrived, </l>
                    <l>To be wrestled with as I pass, for the solid prizes <lb />of the universe, </l>
                    <l>For such I afford whoever can persevere to win them.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="59">
                    <l>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">On my way a moment I pause,</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Here for you! And here for America!</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                    <l><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Still</del>
                        </restore> the Present I raise aloft&#8212;<restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Still</del>
                        </restore>
                        <add type="edit" rend="underline">the Future of</add><lb /><add type="edit"
                            rend="underline">The States</add> I harbinge, glad and sublime, </l>
                    <l>And for the Past I pronounce what the air holds of <lb />the red aborigines.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="60">
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>The red aborigines!</l>
                    <l>Leaving natural breaths, sounds of rain and winds, <lb /><add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add>calls as of birds and animals in the
                        woods, <lb />syllabled to us for names, </l>
                    <l>Okonee, Koosa, Ottawa, Monongahela, Sauk, Natchez, <lb />Chattahoochee,
                        Kaqueta, Oronoco. </l>
                    <l>Wabash, Miami, Saginaw, Chippewa, Oshkosh, <choice>
                            <orig>Walla-<lb />Walla,</orig>
                            <reg>Walla Walla<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Leaving such to The States, they melt, they depart, <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>charging the water and
                        the land with names.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="61">
                    <l>O expanding and swift! O henceforth,</l>
                    <l>Elements, breeds, adjustments, turbulent, quick, and <lb />audacious, </l>
                    <l>A world primal again&#8212;Vistas of glory, incessant <lb />and
                        branching, </l>
                    <l>A new race, dominating previous ones, and grander <lb />far, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">with <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">new</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">grander</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">wars,</del> new contests,</add></l>
                    <l>New politics&#8212;New literatures and religions&#8212;New
                        <lb />inventions and arts. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf015r" type="recto" n="21" facs="nyp.00015.29" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="62">
                    <l>These<restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">!</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="overstrike">These,</del> my voice announcing&#8212;I will
                        sleep <lb />no more, but arise; </l>
                    <l>You oceans that have been calm within me! <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">how</del>
                        </restore><lb />I feel you, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">now</add>
                        </del> fathomless, stirring, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>preparing <lb />unprecedented waves and storms. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="63">
                    <l>See! steamers steaming through my poems!</l>
                    <l>See, in my poems immigrants continually coming <lb />and landing; </l>
                    <l>See, in arriere, the wigwam, the trail, the hunter's <lb />hut, the
                        flat-boat, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginright">&#8212;</add>the maize-leaf,
                        the claim, the <lb />rude fence, and the backwoods village; </l>
                    <l>See, on the one side the Western Sea, and on the <lb />other side the Eastern
                        Sea, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginright">&#8212;</add>how they advance
                        <lb />and retreat upon my poems, as upon their own <lb />shores; </l>
                    <l>See, pastures and forests in my poems&#8212;See, animals, <lb />wild and
                        tame&#8212;See, beyond the Kanzas, <choice>
                            <orig>count-<lb />less</orig>
                            <reg>countless<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> herds of buffalo, feeding on <add type="insertion"
                            place="marginright">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </add>short curly <lb />grass; </l>
                    <l>See, in my poems, <del type="overstrike">old and</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </add>
                        <del type="overstrike">new</del> cities, solid, vast, <lb />inland, with
                        paved streets, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginright">See, the</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">with</del> iron and stone <lb />edifices, <del
                            type="overstrike">and</del> ceaseless vehicles, and commerce; </l>
                    <del>
                        <l>See the populace, millions upon millions, handsome, <lb />tall, muscular,
                            both sexes, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del> clothed in easy and <lb />dignified clothes&#8212;<del
                                type="overstrike">teaching, commanding,<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                <choice>
                                    <orig>mar-<lb />rying,</orig>
                                    <reg>marrying,<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> generating, equally electing and elective;</del></l>
                    </del>
                    <l>See, the many-cylinder'd steam printing-press&#8212;See, <lb />the
                        electric telegraph <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">stretching across
                            the continent, from the Western Sea to Manhattan,</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst> See, the strong and <lb />quick locomotive, as it departs, panting,
                        blowing <lb />the steam-whistle; </l>
                    <l>See, ploughmen, ploughing farms&#8212;See, miners, <lb />digging
                        mines&#8212;See, the numberless factories; </l>
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                    <l>See, mechanics, busy at their benches, with tools&#8212; <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>See from among them, <del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> superior <del type="overstrike">judges,
                                    <choice><orig>philo-<lb />sophs,</orig><reg>philosophs,<lb /></reg></choice></del>
                        Presidents, emerge, dressed in working <lb />dresses; </l>
                    <l>See, lounging through the shops and fields of The <lb />States, me,
                        well-beloved, close-held by day and <lb />night, </l>
                    <l>Hear the loud echo of my songs there! Read the <lb />hints come at last. </l>
                </lg>
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                     <l><subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O my comrade!</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">O closer and closer!</add>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O Camerado close!</add>
                    </subst>
                   </l>
                    <l>O you and me at last&#8212;and us two only <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>O power, liberty, eternity at last!</l>
                        <l>O to be relieved of distinctions! to make as much <lb />of vices as
                            virtues! </l>
                        <l>O to level occupations and the sexes! O to bring <lb />all to common
                            ground! O adhesiveness! </l>
                        <l>O the pensive aching to <del type="overstrike">be</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">henceforth travel</add>
                                together&#8212;<add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>you
                            know not <lb />why, and I know not why.<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="65">
                    <l>O a word to clear <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">one's</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="supralinear">our</add>
                        </subst> one's path ahead endlessly!</l>
                    <l>O something extatic and undemonstrable! O music <lb />wild! </l>
                    <l>O now I triumph&#8212;and you shall also;</l>
                    <l>O hand in hand&#8212;O wholesome pleasure&#8212;O one <lb />more
                        desirer and lover <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">!</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>O haste, firm holding&#8212;haste, haste on, with me.</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
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                <head type="main-authorial">WALT WHITMAN.</head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">CELEBRATE</hi> myself,</l>
                    <l>And what I assume you shall assume,</l>
                    <l>For every atom belonging to me, as good belongs <lb />to you. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>I loafe and invite my Soul,</l>
                    <l>I lean and loafe at my ease, observing a spear of <lb />summer grass. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>Houses and rooms are full of perfumes&#8212;the shelves <lb />are crowded
                        with perfumes, </l>
                    <l>I breathe the fragrance myself, and know it and <lb />like it, </l>
                    <l>The distillation would intoxicate me also, but I shall <lb />not let it. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>The atmosphere is not a perfume&#8212;it has no taste of <lb />the
                        distillation, it is odorless, </l>
                    <l>It is for my mouth forever&#8212;I am in love with it,</l>
                    <l>I will go to the bank by the wood, and become <lb />undisguised and naked, </l>
                    <l>I am mad for it to be in contact with me.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf016v" type="verso" n="24" facs="nyp.00015.32" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>The smoke of my own breath,</l>
                    <l>Echoes, ripples, buzzed whispers, love-root, silk-<lb />thread, crotch and
                        vine <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>My respiration and inspiration, the beating of my <lb />heart, the passing of
                        blood and air through my <lb />lungs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The sniff of green leaves and dry leaves, and of the <lb />shore, and
                        dark-colored sea-rocks, and of hay in <lb />the barn <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The sound of the belched words of my voice, words <lb />loosed to the eddies
                        of the wind <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>A few light kisses, a few embraces, a reaching around <lb />of arms <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The play of shine and shade on the trees as the supple <lb />boughs wag <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The delight alone, or in the rush of the streets, or <lb />along the fields
                        and hill-sides <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The feeling of health, the full-noon trill, the song of <lb />me rising from
                        bed and meeting the sun. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>Have you reckon <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d a thousand acres much? Have <lb />you reckon <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst> d the earth much? </l>
                    <l>Have you practis <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d so long to learn to read?</l>
                    <l>Have you felt so proud to get at the meaning of <lb />poems? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                    <l>Stop this day and night with me, and you shall <choice>
                            <orig>pos-<lb />sess</orig>
                            <reg>possess<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> the origin of all poems <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>You shall possess the good of the earth and sun&#8212; <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>there are millions of suns left <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                    <l>You shall no longer take things at second or third <lb />hand, nor look
                        through the eyes of the dead, <lb />nor feed on the spectres in books <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf017r" type="recto" n="25" facs="nyp.00015.33" />
                    <l>You shall not look through my eyes either, nor take <lb />things from me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>You shall listen to all sides, and filter them from <lb />yourself. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>I have heard what the talkers were talking, the talk <lb />of the beginning
                        and the end <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>But I do not talk of the beginning or the end.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                    <l>There was never any more inception than there is <lb />now, </l>
                    <l>Nor any more youth or age than there is now <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>And will never be any more perfection than there is <lb />now, </l>
                    <l>Nor any more heaven or hell than there is now.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>Urge, and urge, and urge <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Always the procreant urge of the world.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>Out of the dimness opposite equals advance&#8212;always <lb />substance
                        and increase, always sex <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Always a knit of identity&#8212;always distinction&#8212;
                        <lb />always a breed of life. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>To elaborate is no avail&#8212;learned and unlearned <lb />feel that it
                        is so. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <l>Sure as the most certain sure, plumb in the uprights, <lb />well entretied,
                        braced in the beams, </l>
                    <l>Stout as a horse, affectionate, haughty, electrical,</l>
                    <l>I and this mystery here we stand.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                    <l>Clear and sweet is my Soul, and clear and sweet is <lb />all that is not my
                        Soul. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf017v" type="verso" n="26" facs="nyp.00015.34" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>Lack one lacks both, and the unseen is proved by the <lb />seen, </l>
                    <l>Till that becomes unseen, and receives proof in its <lb />turn. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>Showing the best, and dividing it from the worst, age <lb />vexes age <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Knowing the perfect fitness and equanimity of things, <lb />while they
                        discuss I am silent, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>and go bathe <lb />and admire myself. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                    <l>Welcome is every organ and attribute of me, and of <lb />any man hearty and
                        clean <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Not an inch, nor a particle of an inch, is vile, and <lb />none shall be less
                        familiar than the rest. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>I am satisfied&#8212;I see, dance, laugh, sing;</l>
                    <l>As the hugging and loving Bed-fellow sleeps at my <lb />side through the
                        night, and withdraws at the <lb />peep of the day, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">with stealthy tread,</add></l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">And leaves for</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Leaving</add>
                        </subst> me baskets covered with white towels, <lb />swelling the house with
                        their plenty, </l>
                    <l>Shall I postpone my acceptation and realization, and <lb />scream at my eyes, </l>
                    <l>That they turn from gazing after and down the road,</l>
                    <l>And forthwith cipher and show me to a cent,</l>
                    <l>Exactly the contents of one, and exactly the contents <lb />of two, and which
                        is ahead? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                    <l>Trippers and askers surround me,</l>
                    <l>People I meet&#8212;the effect upon me of my early life, <lb />or the
                        ward and city I live in, or the nation, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf018r" type="recto" n="27" facs="nyp.00015.35" />
                    <!-- Golden points out that Whitman had made a further revision to this page on the verso of the paste-on from 'A Word Out of the Sea' ('Out of the Cradle Endlessly Rocking'), page 269 -->
                    <l>The latest <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">news,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">dates,</add>
                        </subst> discoveries, inventions, societies, <lb />authors old and new, </l>
                    <l>My dinner, dress, associates, looks, <del type="overstrike">work,</del>
                        compliments, <lb />dues, </l>
                    <l>The real or fancied indifference of some man or <lb />woman I love, </l>
                    <l>The sickness of one of my folks, or of myself, or <lb />ill-doing, or loss or
                        lack of money, or depressions <lb />or exaltations <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                        <l>Battles, the horrors of fratricidal war, the fever<lb />of doubtful news,
                            the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">death of my friends</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">dropping of
                                    comrades</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">mortally wounded,</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">many</add>
                            </del> fitful events,</l>
                    </add>
                    <l>These come to me days and nights, and go from me <lb />again, </l>
                    <l>But they are not the Me myself.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                    <l>Apart from the pulling and hauling stands what I am <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Stands amused, complacent, compassionating, idle, <lb />unitary <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">pensive, content <del
                                            type="overstrike">to wait</del> submissive</add>
                                </del></l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <l>Looks down, is erect, or bends an arm on an <lb />impalpable certain rest, </l>
                    <l>Looking with side-curved head, curious what will <lb />come next <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Both in and out of the game, and watching and <lb />wondering at it. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                    <l>Backward I see in my own days where I sweated <lb />through fog with
                        linguists and contenders <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I have no mockings or arguments&#8212;I witness and <lb />wait. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                    <l>I believe in you, my Soul&#8212;the other I am must <lb />not abase
                        itself to you, </l>
                    <l>And you must not be abased to the other.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                    <l>Loafe with me on the grass&#8212;loose the stop from <lb />your throat <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf018v" type="verso" n="28" facs="nyp.00015.36" />
                    <l>Not words, not music or rhyme I want&#8212;not custom <lb />or lecture,
                        not even the best, </l>
                    <l>Only the lull I like, the hum of your valved voice.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                    <l>I mind how once we lay, such a transparent summer <lb />morning <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>How you settled your head athwart my hips, and <lb />gently turned over upon
                        me, </l>
                    <l>And parted the shirt from my bosom-bone, and <lb />plunged your tongue to my
                        bare-stript heart, </l>
                    <l>And reached till you felt my beard, and reached till <lb />you held my feet.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                    <l>Swiftly arose and spread around me the peace and <lb /><del type="overstrike"
                            >joy and</del> knowledge that pass all the <del type="overstrike">art
                            and</del>
                        <lb />argument of the earth <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And I know that the hand of God is the promise of <lb />my own <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And I know that the spirit of God is the brother of <lb />my own <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And that all the men ever born are also my brothers, <lb />and the women my
                        sisters and lovers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And that a kelson of the creation is love <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>And limitless are leaves, stiff or drooping in the <lb />fields <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And brown ants in the little wells beneath them <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>And mossy scabs of the worm-fence, and heaped <lb />stones, elder, mullen,
                        and pokeweed. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>A child said, <hi rend="italic">What is the grass?</hi> fetching it to me
                        <lb />with full hands; </l>
                    <l>How could I answer the child? I do not know what <lb />it is, any more than
                        he. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf019r" type="recto" n="29" facs="nyp.00015.37" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                    <l>I guess it must be the flag of my disposition, out of <lb />hopeful green
                        stuff woven. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                    <l>Or I guess it is the handkerchief of the Lord,</l>
                    <l>A scented gift and remembrancer, designedly drop <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ped</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                        </subst>,</l>
                    <l>Bearing the owner's name someway in the corners, <lb /><add type="unmarked"
                            place="marginleft">&#182;</add>that we may see and remark, and say
                            <hi rend="italic">Whose?</hi>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                    <l>Or I guess the grass is itself a child, the produced <lb />babe of the
                        vegetation. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                    <l>Or I guess it is a uniform hieroglyphic <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>And it means, Sprouting alike in broad zones and <lb />narrow zones, </l>
                    <l>Growing among black folks as among white <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Kanuck, Tuckahoe, Congressman, Cuff, I give them <lb />the same, I receive
                        them the same. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                    <l>And now it seems to me the beautiful uncut hair of <lb />graves. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                    <l>Tenderly will I use you, curling grass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>It may be you transpire from the breasts of young <lb />men <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>It may be if I had known them I would have loved <lb />them <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>It may be you are from old people, and from women, <lb /><add type="unmarked"
                            place="marginleft">&#182;</add> and from offspring taken soon out of
                        their <lb />mothers' laps <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And here you are the mothers' laps.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                    <l>This grass is very dark to be from the white heads of <lb />old mothers, </l>
                    <l>Darker than the colorless beards of old men,</l>
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                    <l>Dark to come from under the faint red roofs of <lb />mouths. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="34">
                    <l>O I perceive after all so many uttering tongues!</l>
                    <l>And I perceive they do not come from the roofs of <lb />mouths for nothing.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="35">
                    <l>I wish I could translate the hints about the dead <lb />young men and women, </l>
                    <l>And the hints about old men and mothers, and the <lb />offspring taken soon
                        out of their laps. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="36">
                    <l>What do you think has become of the young and <lb />old men? </l>
                    <l>And what do you think has become of the women <lb />and children? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="37">
                    <l>They are alive and well somewhere <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The smallest sprout shows there is really no death <subst>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And if ever there was, it led forward life, and does <lb />not wait at the
                        end to arrest it<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>And ceased the moment life appeared.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="38">
                    <l>All goes onward and outward&#8212;nothing collapses,</l>
                    <l>And to die is different from what any one supposed, <lb />and luckier. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="39">
                    <l>Has any one supposed it lucky to be born?</l>
                    <l>I hasten to inform him or her, it is just as lucky to <lb />die, and I know
                        it. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="40">
                    <l>I pass death with the dying, and birth with the new-<lb />washed babe, <del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>and am not contained between my <lb />hat and boots <subst>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf020r" type="recto" n="31" facs="nyp.00015.39" />
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">And</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">But</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> peruse manifold objects, no two alike, and every <lb />one good <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The earth good, and the stars good, and their <lb />adjuncts all good. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="41">
                    <l>I am not an earth, nor an adjunct of an earth <subst>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I am the mate and companion of people, <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">all</del>
                        </restore> just as <lb />immortal and fathomless as myself; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>They do not know how immortal, but
                        I know.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="42">
                    <l>Every kind for itself and its own&#8212;for me mine, male <lb />and
                        female <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>For me those that have been boys, and that love <lb />women <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>For me the man that is proud, and feels how it stings <lb />to be slighted <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>For me the sweetheart and the old maid&#8212;for me <lb />mothers, and
                        the mothers of mothers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>For me lips that have smiled, eyes that have shed <lb />tears <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>For me children, and the begetters of children.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="43">
                    <l><subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                            <l>Who need be afraid of the merge?</l>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>O mind <del type="overstrike">fears</del> not exposure to me<del
                                    type="overwrite">?</del><add type="overwrite" place="over"
                                    >!</add><del type="erasure"><gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                                     />mine?</del></l>
                        </add>
                    </subst></l>
                    <l>Undrape! you are not guilty to me, nor stale, nor <lb />discarded <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I see through the broadcloth and gingham, whether <lb />or no <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And am around, tenacious, acquisitive, tireless<del type="overstrike"
                            >,</del><add type="unmarked" place="marginright">&#8212;</add> and <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">can never</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">cannot</add>
                        </subst> be shaken away. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="44">
                    <l>The little one sleeps in its cradle <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I lift the gauze and look a long <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">long</add>
                        </del> time, and silently <lb />brush away flies with my hand. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf020v" type="verso" n="32" facs="nyp.00015.40" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="45">
                    <l>The youngster and the red-faced girl turn aside up <lb />the bushy hill <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I peeringly view them from the top.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="46">
                    <l>The suicide sprawls on the bloody floor of the <lb />bedroom; </l>
                    <l><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                        </del><del type="overstrike">It is so</del>&#8212;I witness <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">d</del>
                        </subst> the corpse <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">with <add
                                type="insertion" place="supralinear">its</add> dabbled
                            hair&#8212;I <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">saw</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">note</add>
                            </subst> where</add>&#8212;<del type="overstrike">there</del> the
                        pistol <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">had</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">has</add>
                        </subst> fallen. <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </del></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="47">
                    <l>The blab of the pave, the tires of carts, sluff of boot-<lb />soles, talk of
                        the promenaders, </l>
                    <l>The heavy omnibus, the driver with his interrogating <lb />thumb, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the clank of the shod
                        horses on the <lb />granite floor, </l>
                    <l>The snow-sleighs, the clinking, shouted jokes, pelts of <lb />snow-balls, </l>
                    <l>The hurrahs for popular favorites, the fury of roused <lb />mobs, </l>
                    <l>The flap of the curtained litter, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >(</add>a sick man inside, <lb />borne to the hospital, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add></l>
                    <l>The meeting of enemies, the sudden oath, the blows <lb />and fall, </l>
                    <l>The excited crowd, the policeman with his star, <lb />quickly working his
                        passage to the centre of <lb />the crowd, </l>
                    <l>The impassive stones that receive and return so many <lb />echoes, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>The Souls moving along&#8212;(are they invisible <del
                                type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">to those who can see
                                    them</add>
                            </del>, while <lb />the least of the stones is visible <del
                                type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">to those who can see
                                    them</add>
                            </del>?) </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>What groans of over-fed or half-starved who fall <choice>
                            <orig>sun-<lb />struck,</orig>
                            <reg>sunstruck<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> or in fits, </l>
                    <l>What exclamations of women taken suddenly, who <lb />hurry home and give
                        birth to babes, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf021r" type="recto" n="33" facs="nyp.00015.41" />
                    <l>What living and buried speech is always vibrating <lb />here&#8212;what
                        howls restrained by decorum, </l>
                    <l>Arrests of criminals, slights, adulterous offers made, <lb />acceptances,
                        rejections with convex lips <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I mind them or the show or resonance of them&#8212;I <lb />come and I
                        depart. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="48">
                    <l>The big doors of the country-barn stand open and <lb />ready, </l>
                    <l>The dried grass of the harvest-time loads the slow-<lb />drawn wagon, </l>
                    <l>The clear light plays on the brown gray and green <lb />intertinged, </l>
                    <l>The armfuls are pack <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> to the sagging mow.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="49">
                    <l>I am there&#8212;I help&#8212;I came stretch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst> atop of the <lb />load, </l>
                    <l>I felt its soft jolts&#8212;one leg reclined on the other;</l>
                    <l>I jump from the cross-beams and seize the clover and <lb />timothy, </l>
                    <l>And roll head over heels, and tangle my hair full of <lb />wisps. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="50">
                    <l>Alone, far in the wilds and mountains, I hunt,</l>
                    <l>Wandering, amazed at my own lightness and glee,</l>
                    <l>In the late afternoon choosing a safe spot to pass the <lb />night, </l>
                    <l>Kindling a fire and broiling the fresh-kill <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d game,</l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">Soundly</del> falling asleep on the gather <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d leaves, with <lb />my dog and gun by my side. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="51">
                    <l>The Yankee clipper is under her three sky-sails&#8212; <lb />she cuts the
                        sparkle and scud <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf021v" type="verso" n="34" facs="nyp.00015.42" />
                    <l>My eyes settle the land&#8212;I bend at her prow, or shout <lb />joyously
                        from the deck. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="52">
                    <l>The boatmen and clam-diggers arose early and <lb />stop <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ped</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> for me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I tuck <subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d my trowser-ends in my boots, and went and <lb />had a good time; </l>
                    <l>You should have been with us that day round the <lb />chowder-kettle. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="53">
                    <l>I saw the marriage of the trapper in the open air in <lb />the
                        far-west&#8212;the bride was a red girl <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Her father and his friends sat near, cross-legged and <lb />dumbly smoking <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst> they had moccasons to their <lb />feet, and large thick blankets
                        hanging from their <lb />shoulders; </l>
                    <l>On a bank lounged the trapper&#8212;he was dres <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />mostly in skins&#8212;<del type="overstrike">his luxuriant beard
                            and curls</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">protected his neck</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">he held by the hand his bride</add>, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>One hand rested on his rifle&#8212;the other hand held <lb />firmly
                            the wrist of the red girl, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>She had long eyelashes&#8212;her head was bare <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>her <lb />coarse straight locks <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>descended upon her <choice>
                            <orig>volup-<lb />tuous</orig>
                            <reg>voluptuous<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> limbs and reach <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d to her feet. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="54">
                    <l>The runaway slave came to my house and stop <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ped</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />outside, </l>
                    <l>I heard his motions crackling the twigs of the <choice>
                            <orig>wood-<lb />pile</orig>
                            <reg>woodpile<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Through the swung half-door of the kitchen I saw <lb />him limpsy and weak, </l>
                    <l>And went where he sat on a log, and led him in and <lb />assured him, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf022r" type="recto" n="35" facs="nyp.00015.43" />
                    <l>And brought water, and filled a tub for his sweated <lb />body and bruis <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d feet, </l>
                    <l>And gave him a room that enter <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d from my own, and <lb />gave him some coarse clean clothes, </l>
                    <l>And remember perfectly well his revolving eyes and <lb />his awkwardness, </l>
                    <l>And remember putting plasters on the galls of his <lb />neck and ankles; </l>
                    <l>He staid with me a week before he was recuperated <lb />and pass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d north <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I had him sit next me at
                        table&#8212;my fire-lock lean <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />in the corner.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="55">
                    <l>Twenty-eight young men bathe by the shore,</l>
                    <l>Twenty-eight young men, and all so friendly;</l>
                    <l>Twenty-eight years of womanly life, and all so <lb />lonesome. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="56">
                    <l>She owns the fine house by the rise of the bank <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>She hides, handsome and richly drest, aft the blinds <lb />of the window.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="57">
                    <l>Which of the young men does she like the best?</l>
                    <l>Ah, the homeliest of them is beautiful to her.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="58">
                    <l>Where are you off to, lady? for I see you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>You splash in the water there, yet stay stock still in <lb />your room. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="59">
                    <l>Dancing and laughing along the beach came the <lb />twenty-ninth bather <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The rest did not see her, but she saw them and lov <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />them. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf022v" type="verso" n="36" facs="nyp.00015.44" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="60">
                    <l>The beards of the young men glisten <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d with wet, it <lb />ran from their long hair, </l>
                    <l>Little streams pass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d all over their bodies.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="61">
                    <l>An unseen hand also pass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d over their bodies,</l>
                    <l>It descended tremblingly from their temples and <lb />ribs. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="62">
                    <l>The young men float on their backs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>their white <lb />bellies bulge to the sun&#8212;they do not ask
                        who <lb />seizes fast to them <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They do not know who puffs and declines with <lb />pendant and bending arch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They do not think whom they souse with spray.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="63">
                    <l>The butcher-boy puts off his killing-clothes, or <choice>
                            <orig>sharp-<lb />ens</orig>
                            <reg>sharpens<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> his knife at the stall in the market <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I loiter, enjoying his repartee and his shuffle and <lb />break-down. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="64">
                    <l>Blacksmiths with grimed and hairy chests environ the <lb />anvil <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Each has his main-sledge&#8212;they are all out&#8212;<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>there <lb />is a great heat in the
                            fire.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="65">
                    <l>From the cinder-strew <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d threshold I follow their <lb />movements <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The lithe sheer of their waists plays even with their <lb />massive arms <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Overhand the hammers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">roll</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                    >circle&#8212;</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">swing</add>
                        </subst>&#8212;overhand so slow&#8212; <lb />overhand so sure <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They do not hasten&#8212;each man hits in his place.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf023r" type="recto" n="37" facs="nyp.00015.45" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="66">
                    <l>The negro holds firmly the reins of his four horses <lb />&#8212;the
                            block<del type="overstrike">s</del> swags underneath on its tied-over
                            <lb />chain<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">; &#8212; <gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" /> holds the reins of his four
                                horses</add>
                        </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>The negro that drives the <del type="overstrike">huge</del> dray of the
                        stone-yard <lb />&#8212;steady and tall he stands, pois <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d on one leg on <lb />the string-piece <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>His blue shirt exposes his ample neck and breast, and <lb />loosens over his
                        hip-band, </l>
                    <l>His glance is calm and commanding&#8212;he tosses the <lb />slouch of his
                        hat away from his forehead <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The sun falls on his crispy hair and moustache&#8212; <lb />falls on the
                        black <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>of his polish <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst> and perfect <lb />limbs. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="67">
                    <l>I behold the picturesque giant and love him&#8212;and <lb />I do not stop
                        there <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I go with the team also.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="68">
                    <l>In me the caresser of life wherever moving&#8212;<choice>
                            <orig>back-<lb />ward</orig>
                            <reg>backward<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> as well as forward slueing <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>To niches aside and junior bending.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="69">
                    <l>Oxen that rattle the yoke <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#38;
                            chain,</add> or halt in the <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >leafy</add> shade! what <lb />is that you express in your eyes? </l>
                    <l>It seems to me more than all the print I have read in <lb />my life. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="70">
                    <l>My tread scares the wood-drake and wood-duck, on <lb />my distant and
                        day-long ramble <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They rise together&#8212;they slowly circle around.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="71">
                    <l>I believe in those wing <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d purposes,</l>
                    <l>And acknowledge red, yellow, white, playing within <lb />me, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf023v" type="verso" n="38" facs="nyp.00015.46" />
                    <l>And consider green and violet, and the tufted crown, <lb />intentional, </l>
                    <l>And do not call the tortoise unworthy because she is <lb />not something
                        else, </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">singing</add>
                        </del> And the <add type="unmarked" place="over">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">mocking-bird</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">jay</add>
                        </subst> in the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">swamp</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">woods</add>
                        </subst> never studied the <lb />gamut, yet trills pretty well to me, </l>
                    <l>And the look of the bay mare shames silliness out <lb />of me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="72">
                    <l>The wild gander leads his flock through the cool <lb />night, </l>
                    <l><hi rend="italic">Ya-honk!</hi> he says, and sounds it down to me like an
                        <lb />invitation <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">.</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>The pert may suppose it
                            meaningless, but I listen <lb /><del type="overstrike">close</del>, </l>
                        <l>I find its purpose and place up there toward the <lb />wintry sky.<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="73">
                    <l>The sharp-hoof <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d moose of the north, the cat on the <lb />house-sill, the
                        chickadee, the prairie-dog, </l>
                    <l>The litter of the grunting sow as they tug at her <lb />teats, </l>
                    <l>The brood of the turkey-hen, and she with her half-<lb />spread wings, </l>
                    <l>I see in them and myself the same old law.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="74">
                    <l>The press of my foot to the earth springs a hundred <lb />affections, </l>
                    <l>They scorn the best I can do to relate them.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="75">
                    <l>I am enamour <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d of growing outdoors,</l>
                    <l>Of men that live among cattle, or taste of the ocean <lb />or woods, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf024r" type="recto" n="39" facs="nyp.00015.47" />
                    <l>Of the builders and steerers of ships, <del type="overstrike">and</del> the
                        wielders <lb />of axes and mauls, and the drivers of horses <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                        </del>I can eat and sleep with them week in and week out.<del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </del></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="76">
                    <l>What is commonest, cheapest, <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">nearest,</del>
                        </restore> easiest, is Me,</l>
                    <l>Me going in for my chances, spending for vast <lb />returns, </l>
                    <l>Adorning myself to bestow myself on the first that <lb />will take me, </l>
                    <l>Not asking the sky to come down to my good will,</l>
                    <l>Scattering it freely forever.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="77">
                    <l>The pure contralto sings in the organ loft <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The carpenter dresses his plank&#8212;the tongue of his <lb />foreplane
                        whistles its wild ascending lisp <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The married and unmarried children ride home to <lb />their Thanksgiving
                        dinner <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The pilot seizes the king-pin&#8212;he heaves down with <lb />a strong
                        arm <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The mate stands braced in the whale-boat&#8212;<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">(</add>lance <lb />and harpoon are ready <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>The duck-shooter walks by silent and cautious <lb />stretches <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The deacons are ordained with cross <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                        </subst> hands at the <lb />altar <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The spinning-girl retreats and advances to the hum <lb />of the big wheel <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The farmer stops by the bars, as he walks on a First<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#8209;</add><lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">D</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">d</add>
                        </subst>ay loafe, and looks at the oats and rye <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The lunatic is carried at last to the asylum, a <choice>
                            <orig>con-<lb />firm</orig>
                            <reg>confirmed<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d case, </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>He will never sleep any more as he
                        did in the cot in <lb />his mother's bedroom;<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf024v" type="verso" n="40" facs="nyp.00015.48" />
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>The jour printer
                        with gray head and gaunt jaws <lb />works at his case, </l>
                    <l>He turns his quid of tobacco, while his eyes blurr <lb />with the manuscript; </l>
                    <l>The malform <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d limbs are tied to the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">anatomist's</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">surgeon's</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />table, </l>
                    <l>What is remov <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d drops horribly in a pail;</l>
                    <l>The quadroon girl is sold at the stand&#8212;the drunkard <lb />nods by
                        the bar-room stove <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The machinist rolls up his sleeves&#8212;the policeman <lb />travels his
                        beat&#8212;the gate-keeper marks who <lb />pass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The young fellow drives the express-wagon <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">,</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I love <lb />him, though I do not
                        know him <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>The half-breed straps on his light boots to compete <lb />in the race <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The western turkey-shooting draws old and young&#8212; <lb />some lean on
                        their rifles, some sit on logs, </l>
                    <l>Out from the crowd steps the marksman, takes his <lb />position, levels his
                        piece; </l>
                    <l>The groups of newly-come <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">im</add>
                        </subst> migrants cover the wharf <lb />or levee <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>As the woolly-pates hoe in the sugar-field, the <choice>
                            <orig>over-<lb />seer</orig>
                            <reg>overseer<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> views them from his saddle <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The bugle calls in the ball-room, the gentlemen run <lb />for their partners,
                        the dancers bow to each other <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The youth lies awake in the cedar-roof <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d garret, and <lb />harks to the musical rain <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The Wolverine sets traps on the creek that helps fill <lb />the Huron <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>The reformer ascends the platform, he spouts with <lb />his mouth and
                            nose, </l>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf025r" type="recto" n="41" facs="nyp.00015.49" />
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>The company returns from its excursion, the darkey <lb />brings up the
                            rear and bears the well-riddled <lb />target, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>The squaw, <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">walking the streets of the
                                city,</add>
                        </del>wrapt in her yellow-hemm <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d cloth, <del type="overstrike">is</del>
                        <lb />offer <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ing</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">s</add>
                        </subst> moccasons and bead-bags for sale <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The connoisseur peers along the exhibition-gallery <lb />with half-shut eyes
                        bent side-ways <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>As the deck-hands make fast the steamboat, the plank <lb />is thrown for the
                        shore-going passengers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The young sister holds out the skein, while the elder <lb />sister winds it
                        off in a ball, and stops now and <lb />then for the knots <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>The one-year wife is recovering and happy, having <lb />a week ago borne
                            her first child <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>The clean-hair <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d Yankee girl works with her sewing-<lb />machine, or in the factory
                        or mill <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The nine months' gone is in the parturition chamber, <lb />her faintness and
                        pains are advancing <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The paving-man leans on his two-handed rammer <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <restore rend="erasure">
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> the reporter's lead flies swiftly over the <choice>
                            <orig>note-<lb />book</orig>
                            <reg>notebook<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>&#8212;the sign-painter is lettering with red and <lb />gold <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The canal-boy trots on the tow-path&#8212;the bookkeeper <lb />counts at
                        his desk&#8212;the shoemaker waxes his <lb />thread <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The conductor beats time for the band, and all the <lb />performers follow
                        him <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The child is baptized&#8212;the convert is making his first
                        <lb />professions <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The regatta is spread on the bay<add type="insertion" place="marginright"
                            >&#8212;the race is begun&#8212;</add>&#8212;how the white
                        <lb />sails sparkle! </l>
                    <l>The drover, watching his drove, sings out to them that <lb />would stray <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf025v" type="verso" n="42" facs="nyp.00015.50" />
                    <l>The pedler sweats with his pack on his back, <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">delay'd,</add>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>the <lb />purchaser higgling
                        about the odd cent <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>The camera and plate are prepared, the lady must sit <lb />for her
                        daguerreotype <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The bride unrumples her white dress, the minute-<lb />hand of the clock moves
                        slowly <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The opium-eater reclines with rigid head and just-<lb />opened lips <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The prostitute draggles her shawl, her bonnet bobs on <lb />her tipsy and
                        pimpled neck, </l>
                    <l>The crowd laugh at her blackguard oaths, the men <lb />jeer and wink to each
                        other, </l>
                    <l>(Miserable!-I do not laugh at your oaths, nor jeer <lb />you;) </l>
                    <l>The President, holding a cabinet council, is <choice>
                            <orig>sur-<lb />rounded</orig>
                            <reg>surrounded<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> by the Great Secretaries <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>On the piazza walk <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">five</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">three</add>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">friendly</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">three old</add>
                        </subst> matrons <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">stately &#38;
                            friendly</add> with twined <lb />arms <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The crew of the fish-smack pack repeated layers of <lb />halibut in the hold <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The Missourian crosses the plains, toting his wares <lb />and his cattle <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>As the fare-collector goes through the train, he gives <lb />notice by the
                        jingling of loose change <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The floor-men are laying the floor&#8212;the tinners are <lb />tinning
                        the roof&#8212;the masons are calling for <lb />mortar <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>In single file, each shouldering his hod, pass onward <lb />the laborers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Seasons pursuing each other, the indescribable crowd <lb />is
                        gathered&#8212;it is the Fourth of Seventh<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">-</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">M</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">m</add>
                        </subst>onth <lb />&#8212;<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >(</add>What salutes of cannon and small arms!<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add>
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                    <l>Seasons pursuing each other, the plougher ploughs, <lb />the mower mows, and
                        the winter-grain falls in <lb />the ground <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Off on the lakes the pike-fisher watches and waits by <lb />the hole in the
                        frozen surface <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The stumps stand thick round the clearing, the <lb />squatter strikes deep
                        with his axe <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Flatboatmen make fast, towards dusk, near the <choice>
                            <orig>cotton-<lb />wood</orig>
                            <reg>cottonwood<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> or pekan-trees <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Coon-seekers go through the regions of the Red river, <lb />or through those
                        drained by the Tennessee, or <lb />through those of the Arkansaw <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Torches shine in the dark that hangs on the <choice>
                            <orig>Chatta-<lb />hooche</orig>
                            <reg>Chattahooche<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> or Altamahaw <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Patriarchs <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">on plantations</add>
                        </del> sit at supper with sons and grandsons and <lb />great-grandsons
                        around them <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>In walls of adobie, in canvas tents, rest hunters and <lb />trappers after
                        their day's sport <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The city sleeps and the country sleeps <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The living sleep for their time, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >(</add>the dead sleep for <lb />their time <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>The old husband sleeps by his wife, and the young <lb />husband sleeps by his
                        wife; </l>
                    <l>And these one and all tend inward to me, and I tend <lb />outward to them, </l>
                    <l>And such as it is to be of these, more or less, I am.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="78">
                    <l>I am of old and young, of the foolish as much as the <lb />wise, </l>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                                <l>(That <del type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">ever <gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" />ing</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />ttle composite <del
                                        type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">ever</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <hi rend="underline">I</hi>! that discord <del type="overstrike"
                                        >!</del> ! That contradiction!)</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                    </del>
                    <l>Regardless of others, ever regardful of others,</l>
                    <l>Maternal as well as paternal, a child as well as a man,</l>
                    <l>Stuffed with the stuff that is coarse, and stuffed with <lb />the stuff that
                        is fine, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf026v" type="verso" n="44" facs="nyp.00015.52" />
                    <l>One of the great nation, <add type="edit" rend="underline">the nation of many
                            nations</add>, <lb />the smallest the same, and the largest the same, </l>
                    <l>A <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">s</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marginleft">S</add>
                        </subst>outherner soon as a <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">n</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="margintop">N</add>
                        </subst>ortherner <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>, a planter <choice>
                            <orig>non-<lb />chalant</orig>
                            <reg>nonchalant<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and hospitable, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">down by the
                            Oconee I live,</add></l>
                    <l>A Yankee, bound my own way, ready for trade, my <lb />joints the limberest
                        joints on earth and the <lb />sternest joints on earth, </l>
                    <l>A Kentuckian, walking the vale of the Elkhorn in <lb />my deer-skin leggings,
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">a Louisianian, or Georgian</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>A boatman over lakes or bays, or along coasts&#8212;a <lb />Hoosier,
                        Badger, Buckeye, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>A <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Louisianian or Georgian</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">Carolinian North or
                                    South</add>
                            </subst>&#8212;a <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Poke-easy</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">man</add>
                            </subst> from sand-<lb />hills and pines <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>At home on Kanadian snow-shoes, or up in the bush, <lb />or with fishermen
                        off Newfoundland, </l>
                    <l>At home in the fleet of ice-boats, sailing with the rest, <lb />and tacking,
                            <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">in winter,</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>At home on the hills of Vermont, or in the woods <lb />of Maine, or the Texan
                        ranch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Comrade of Californians&#8212;comrade of free <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">n</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marinleft">N</add>
                        </subst>orth-<lb />westerners, <del type="overstrike">and</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>loving their big proportions <del
                            type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">best)</add>
                        </del>, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                    <l>Comrade of raftsmen and coalmen&#8212;comrade of all <lb />who shake
                        hands and welcome to drink and <lb />meat <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>A learner with the simplest, a teacher of the <choice>
                            <orig>thought-<lb />fullest</orig>
                            <reg>thoughtfullest<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>A novice beginning, yet experient of myriads of <lb />seasons, </l>
                    <l>Of every hue, <del type="overstrike">trade, rank, caste</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#38; caste am I,</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">of every rank</add> and religion <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="over">.</add>
                        </subst>,</l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Not merely of the New World, but of Africa, Europe,
                            <lb />Asia&#8212;a wandering savage, </l>
                    </del>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>A farmer, mechanic, artist, <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">gentleman,</del>
                                </restore> sailor, <del type="overstrike">lover,</del>
                                <lb /><restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">quaker,</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion">and priest.</add>
                                </del>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf027r" type="recto" n="45" facs="nyp.00015.53" />
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>A prisoner, fancy-man, rowdy, lawyer, physician, <lb />priest. </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="79">
                    <l>I resist anything better than my own diversity,</l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">And</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">I</add>
                        </subst> breathe the air, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">but</add>
                        </subst>and leave plenty after me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">.</add>
                        </subst>,</l>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <span type="bracketed" xml:id="s2a" from="s2a" to="s3a" />
                    </del>
                    <!-- how should we handle the deletion of empty elements? -->
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="maginleft">
                            <l>out</l>
                            <l><gap reason="deletion, illegible" />out</l>
                        </note>
                    </del>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>And am not stuck up, and am in my
                        place.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="80">
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>The moth and the fish-eggs are in
                        their place <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The suns I see, and the suns I cannot see, are in their <lb />place <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The palpable is in its place, and the impalpable is in <lb />its place. </l>
                </lg>
                <del type="erasure">
                    <anchor xml:id="s3a" />
                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="81">
                    <l><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">These</del>
                        </restore> are the thoughts of all men in all ages and
                        <lb />lands&#8212;they are not original with me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>If they are not yours as much as mine, they are <lb />nothing, or next to
                        nothing <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>If they do not enclose everything, they are next to <lb />nothing <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>If they are not the riddle and the untying of the <lb />riddle, they
                                are nothing <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <l>If they are not just as close as they are distant, they <lb />are nothing.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="82">
                    <l>This is the grass that grows wherever the land is <lb />and the water is <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>This is the common air that bathes the globe.</l>
                </lg>
                <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d4" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="83">
                    <l>This is the breath for America, <del type="overstrike">because it is my</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">breath,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">This is for laws, songs, behavior,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>This <del type="overstrike">is the tasteless water of Souls&#8212;this
                            is</del> the true <lb />sustenance <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#38;This the <gap
                                reason="deletion, illegible" /> law, so gentle</add></l>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                        <l><subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">This</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">That</add>
                            </subst>shall yet rule the world, and be<lb />received willingly.</l>
                    </add>
                </lg>
                <anchor xml:id="d4" />
                <pb xml:id="leaf027v" type="verso" n="46" facs="nyp.00015.54" />
                <delSpan type="hasmark" spanTo="#d5" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="84">
                    <l>This is for the <del type="overstrike">illiterate, and for the judges of
                            the</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">Supreme Court, and for the</del> Federal
                        capitol and <lb />the State capitols, </l>
                    <l>And for the <del type="overstrike">admirable</del> communes of literats, <choice>
                            <orig>com-<lb />posers,</orig>
                            <reg>composers<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> singers, lecturers, engineers, and savans <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">no less</add>for the endless
                        races of work-people, farmers, <lb />and seamen <del type="erasure"><subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">.</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">,</add>
                            </subst> no less than they.</del></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="85">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <span type="bracketed" xml:id="s5" from="s5" to="s6" />
                    <l>This is the trilling of thousands of clear cornets, <lb />screaming of octave
                        flutes, striking of triangles.<anchor xml:id="s6" />
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <anchor xml:id="d5" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="86">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>With <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />music <del type="overstrike"
                                >new</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">strong</add> I come, with <add
                                type="insertion" place="supralinear">my</add> cornets <del
                                type="overstrike">&#38; flutes</del> &#38; my drums</l>
                    </add>
                    <l>I play not <del type="overstrike">here</del> marches <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">great</add>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">for</del>
                        </restore> victors only <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>I play <lb />great marches for conquered and slain persons. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="87">
                    <l>Have you heard that it was good to gain the day?</l>
                    <l>I also say it is good to fall&#8212;battles are lost in the <lb />same
                        spirit in which they are won. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="88">
                    <l>I beat <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">my</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">triumphal drums</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#38; pound <del
                                type="overstrike">d</del></add> for the dead,</l>
                    <l>I blow through my embouchures my loudest and <lb />gayest <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">music to</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><del type="overstrike"
                                    >notes</del> for</add>
                        </subst> them. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="89">
                    <l>Vivas to those who have failed!</l>
                    <l>And to those whose war-vessels sank in the sea!</l>
                    <l>And those themselves who sank in the sea!</l>
                    <l>And to all generals that lost engagements! and all <lb />overcome heroes! </l>
                    <l>And the numberless unknown heroes, equal to the <lb />greatest heroes known.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="90">
                    <l>This is the meal pleasantly set&#8212;this is the meat <del
                            type="overstrike">and</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">drink</del> for natural hunger, </l>
                    <l>It is for the wicked just the same as the righteous&#8212;I <lb />make
                        appointments with all, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf028r" type="recto" n="47" facs="nyp.00015.55" />
                    <l>I will not have <subst>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a single</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">one</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> person slighted or left away <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The kept-woman, sponger, thief, are hereby invited,</l>
                    <l>The heavy-lipp <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d slave is invited&#8212;the venerealee is <lb />invited, </l>
                    <l>There shall be no difference between them and the <lb />rest. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>This is the press of a bashful hand&#8212;this <del type="overstrike"
                            >is</del> the float <lb />and odor of hair, </l>
                    <l>This is the touch of my lips to yours&#8212;this <del type="overstrike"
                            >is</del> the <lb />murmur of yearning, </l>
                    <l>This is the far-off depth and height reflecting my <lb />own face, </l>
                    <l>This <del type="overstrike">is</del> the thoughtful merge of myself, and the
                        outlet <lb />again. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="92">
                    <l>Do you guess I have some intricate purpose?</l>
                    <l>Well, I have&#8212;for the Fourth<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#8209;</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">M</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">m</add>
                        </subst>onth showers have, <lb />&#182;and the mica on the side of a
                        rock has. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="93">
                    <l>Do you take it I would astonish?</l>
                    <l>Does the daylight astonish? Does the early redstart, <lb />twittering through
                        the woods? </l>
                    <l>Do I astonish more than they?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="94">
                    <l>This hour I tell things in confidence,</l>
                    <l>I might not tell everybody, but I will tell you.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="95">
                    <l>Who goes there <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">?</add>
                        </subst> hankering, gross, mystical, nude <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">?</del>
                            <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">!</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="marginright">:</add>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">How is it I extract strength from the beef I
                            eat?</del>
                    </l>
                    <anchor xml:id="t9" />
                </lg>
                <transpose anchored="true" target="t9">
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="96">
                        <l>What is a man anyhow? What am I? What are <lb />you? </l>
                    </lg>
                </transpose>
                <pb xml:id="leaf028v" type="verso" n="48" facs="nyp.00015.56" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="97">
                    <l>All I mark as my own, you shall offset it with your <lb />own, </l>
                    <l>Else it were time lost listening to me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="98">
                    <l>I do not snivel that snivel the world over,</l>
                    <l>That months are vacuums, and the ground but <lb />wallow and filth, </l>
                    <l>That life is a <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">suck and a sell,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">hollow game,</add>
                        </subst> and nothing remains at <lb />the end <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">&#182;</add>
                        </del>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">but threadbare crape, and tears.</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="99">
                    <l>Whimpering and truckling fold with powders for
                        <lb />invalids&#8212;conformity goes to the fourth-removed, </l>
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">cock</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">wear</add>
                        </subst> my hat as I please, indoors or out.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="100">
                    <l>Why should I pray? Why should I venerate and be ceremonious?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="101">
                    <l>Having pried through the strata, analyzed to a hair, <lb />counsell'd with
                        doctors, and calculated close, </l>
                    <l>I find no sweeter fat than sticks to my own bones <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">,</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">and can hear of none in the
                                past.</add>
                        </del></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="102">
                    <l>In all people I see myself&#8212;none more, and not one a
                        <lb />barleycorn less, </l>
                    <l>And the good or bad I say of myself I say of them.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="103">
                    <l>And I know I am solid and sound,</l>
                    <l>To me the converging objects of the universe <choice>
                            <orig>per-<lb />petually</orig>
                            <reg>perpetually<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> flow, </l>
                    <l>All are written to me, and I must get what the <lb />writing means. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="104">
                    <l>I know I am deathless <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />I know this orbit of mine cannot be swept by a <lb />carpenter's
                        compass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf029r" type="recto" n="49" facs="nyp.00015.57" />
                    <l>I know I shall not pass like a child's carlacue cut <lb />with a burnt stick
                        at night. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="105">
                    <l>I know I am august <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I do not trouble my spirit to vindicate itself or be <lb />understood <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I see that the elementary laws never apologize <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I reckon I behave no prouder than
                        the level I plant <lb />my house by, after all. <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="106">
                    <l>I exist as I am&#8212;that is enough <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>If no other in the world be aware, I sit content <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>And if each and all be aware, I sit content.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="107">
                    <l>One world is aware, and by far the largest to me, and <lb />that is myself <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And whether I come to my own to-day, or in ten <lb />thousand or ten million
                        years, </l>
                    <l>I can cheerfully take it now, or with equal <choice>
                            <orig>cheerful-<lb />ness</orig>
                            <reg>cheerfulness<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> I can wait </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="108">
                    <l>My foothold is tenoned and mortised in granite <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I laugh at what you call dissolution,</l>
                    <l>And I know the amplitude of time.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="109">
                    <l>I am the poet of the body,</l>
                    <l>And I am the poet of the Soul.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="110">
                    <l>The pleasures of heaven are with me, and the pains <lb />of hell are with me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The first I graft and increase upon myself&#8212;the latter <lb />I
                        translate into a new tongue. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf029v" type="verso" n="50" facs="nyp.00015.58" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="111">
                    <l>I am the poet of the woman the same as the man,</l>
                    <l>And I say it is as great to be a woman as to be a <lb />man, </l>
                    <l>And I say there is nothing greater than the mother <lb />of men. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="112">
                    <l>I chant the chant of dilation or pride <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>We have had ducking and deprecating about enough <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I show that size is only development.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="113">
                    <l>Have you outstript the rest? Are you the President?</l>
                    <l>It is a trifle&#8212;they will more than arrive there every <lb />one,
                        and still pass on. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="114">
                    <l>I am <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">H</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="supralinear">h</add>
                        </subst> e that walks with the tender and growing <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">N</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marginleft">n</add>
                        </subst>ight <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I call to the earth and sea, half-held by the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">N</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marginleft">n</add>
                        </subst>ight.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="115">
                    <l>Press close, bare-bosomed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">N</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marginleft">n</add>
                        </subst>ight! <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">P</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">p</add>
                        </subst>ress close, <choice>
                            <orig>mag-<lb />netic,</orig>
                            <reg>magnetic<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> nourishing <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">N</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="inline">n</add>
                        </subst>ight! </l>
                    <l>Night of south winds! <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">N</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marginleft">n</add>
                        </subst>ight of the large few stars!</l>
                    <l>Still, nodding <subst>
                            <restore seq="3" rend="dotted">
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">n</del>
                            </restore>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marginleft">N</add>
                        </subst>ight! <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">M</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">m</add>
                        </subst>ad, naked, summer <subst>
                            <restore seq="3" rend="dotted">
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">n</del>
                            </restore>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marginleft">N</add>
                        </subst>ight.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="116">
                    <l>Smile, O voluptuous, cool-breath <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">d</del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                        </subst>ed Earth!</l>
                    <l>Earth of the slumbering and liquid trees!</l>
                    <l>Earth of departed sunset! <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">E</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">e</add>
                        </subst>arth of the mountains, <lb />misty-topt! </l>
                    <l>Earth of the vitreous pour of the full moon, just <lb />tinged with blue! </l>
                    <l>Earth of shine and dark, mottling the tide of the <lb />river! </l>
                    <l>Earth of the limpid gray of clouds, brighter and <lb />clearer for my sake! </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf030r" type="recto" n="51" facs="nyp.00015.59" />
                    <l>Far-swooping elbow <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">E</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">e</add>
                        </subst>arth! <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">R</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">r</add>
                        </subst>ich, apple-blossom <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">E</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">e</add>
                        </subst>arth! </l>
                    <l>Smile, for <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">Y</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">y</add>
                        </subst><hi rend="smallcaps">OUR</hi> L<hi rend="smallcaps">OVER</hi>
                        comes!</l>
                </lg>
                <!--how do I remove the small caps? -->
                <lg type="linegroup" n="117">
                    <l>Prodigal, you have given me love! Therefore I to <lb />you give love! </l>
                    <l>O unspeakable passionate love!</l>
                </lg>
                <del type="overstrike"><lg type="linegroup" n="118">
                    
                        <l>Thruster holding me tight, and that I hold tight!</l>
                        <l>We hurt each other as the bridegroom and the bride <lb />hurt each other.
                        </l>
                    
                </lg></del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="119">
                    <l>You <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">S</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">s</add>
                        </subst>ea! I resign myself to you also&#8212;I guess <lb />what you
                        mean <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I behold from the beach your crooked inviting fingers,</l>
                    <l>I believe you refuse to go back without feeling of me;</l>
                    <l>We must have a turn together&#8212;I undress&#8212;hurry <lb />me out
                        of sight of the land, </l>
                    <l>Cushion me soft, rock me in billowy drowse,</l>
                    <l>Dash me with amorous wet&#8212;I can repay you.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="120">
                    <l>Sea of stretched ground-swells!</l>
                    <l>Sea breathing broad and convulsive breaths!</l>
                    <l>Sea of the brine of life! <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">S</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">s</add>
                        </subst>ea of unshovell <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add></subst>d<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">yet</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />always-ready graves! </l>
                    <l>Howler and scooper of storms! <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">C</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">c</add>
                        </subst>apricious and dainty <lb /><subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">S</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">s</add>
                        </subst>ea! </l>
                    <l>I am integral with you&#8212;I too am of one phase, and <lb />of all
                        phases. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="121">
                    <l>Partaker of influx and efflux<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">I,</add>&#8212;extoller of
                        hate and <lb />conciliation, </l>
                    <l>Extoller of amies, and those that sleep in each others' <lb />arms. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf030v" type="verso" n="52" facs="nyp.00015.60" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="122">
                    <l>I am he attesting sympathy,</l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Shall I make my list of things in
                        the house, and skip <lb />the house that supports them?<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="123">
                    <l>I am <anchor xml:id="t10" /><del type="overstrike">the poet of common sense,
                            and of the <choice>
                                <orig>demon-<lb />strable,</orig>
                                <reg>demonstrable,</reg>
                            </choice> and of immortality,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t10"><del type="overstrike">And am</del>
                            not the poet of goodness only <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>I do not<lb />decline to be the poet of wickedness
                            also.</transpose>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="124">
                    <l>Washes and razors for <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">foofoos</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">those that
                                will&#8212; </add>
                        </subst>&#8212;for me freckles and <lb />a bristling beard. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="125">
                    <l>What blurt is this about virtue and about vice?</l>
                    <l>Evil propels me, and reform of evil propels me&#8212;I <lb />stand <add
                            type="insertion" place="marginleft">quite</add> indifferent <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>My gait <subst>
                            <restore seq="3" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">is</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">shall be</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>no fault-finder's or rejecter's gait,</l>
                    <l>I moisten the roots of all that has grown.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="126">
                    <l>Did you fear some scrofula out of the unflagging <lb />pregnancy? </l>
                    <l>Did you guess the celestial laws are yet to be worked <lb />over and
                        rectified? </l>
                </lg>
                <del type="hashmark">
                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                        <l>&#182; I say <del type="overstrike">that if you</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">ever</add>
                            </del> expect <del type="overstrike">that</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">no</add> different laws from
                            the laws of to&#8209;day,</l>
                        <l>Nor after death <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >either</add>&#8212;for the laws of life are the same.</l>
                    </add>
                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="127">
                    <l>I <del type="overstrike">step up to</del> say <anchor xml:id="t11" /><del
                            type="overstrike">that what we do is right, and what </del>
                        <del type="overstrike"><lb />we affirm is right&#8212;and some is only
                            the ore of <lb />right,<gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </del></l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t11"><del type="overstrike">Witnesses of
                                us&#8212;</del><add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I
                                call</add> one side <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">is</add>
                            </del> a balance, <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">as much
                                        as</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>and the <choice>
                                <orig>antip-<lb />odal</orig>
                                <reg>antipodal<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> side <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">is</add>
                            </del> a balance, </transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">And</add>
                        </del>Soft doctrine <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">is just</add>
                        </del> as steady help as stable doctrine, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">.</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Thoughts and deeds of the present, our rouse and
                                <lb />early start. </del>
                        </restore>
                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="128">
                    <l>This minute that comes to me over the past decillions,</l>
                    <l>There is no better than it and now.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf031r" type="recto" n="53" facs="nyp.00015.61" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="129">
                    <l>What behaved well in the past, or behaves well <lb />to-day, is not such a
                            wonder<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">to me</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>The wonder is, always and always, how can there be <lb />a mean man or an
                        infidel. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="130">
                    <l>Endless unfolding of words of ages!</l>
                    <l>And mine <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                        </subst> a word of the modern&#8212; <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                        </subst> word <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">E</add>
                        </subst>n-masse.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="131">
                    <l>A word of the faith that never balks,</l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">One time as good as another time&#8212;</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">h</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite">H</add>
                        </subst>ere or <choice>
                            <orig>hence-<lb />forward,</orig>
                            <reg>henceforward<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <add type="insertion" />
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">it is all the same to me.</del>
                        </restore>
                        <add type="insertion" place="inline">&#8212;I accept <del
                                type="overstrike">all</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite">T</add>
                                </subst>ime absolutely,</add></add></l>
                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">&#182;<l>(It <del type="overstrike"
                                >is w</del> alone is without flaw&#8212; it rounds<del
                                type="overstrike">&#8212; </del> completes all</l>
                        <l>That mystic baffling wonder I love, <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">alone</add> completes all)</l></add>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="132">
                    <l><del type="overstrike">A word of</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">I accept reality</add> reality<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#38; dare not question
                            it</add> &#8212;materialism first and last <choice>
                            <orig>im-<lb />buing.</orig>
                            <reg>imbuing<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="133">
                    <l>Hurrah for positive Science! long live exact <choice>
                            <orig>demon-<lb />stration!</orig>
                            <reg>demonstration<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Fetch stonecrop, mixt with cedar and branches of <lb />lilac, </l>
                    <l>This is the lexicographer&#8212;this the chemist&#8212;this
                        <lb />made a grammar of the old cartouches, </l>
                    <l>These mariners put the ship through dangerous <choice>
                            <orig>un-<lb />known</orig>
                            <reg>unknown<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> seas, </l>
                    <l>This is the geologist&#8212;this works with the scalpel&#8212;
                        <lb />and this is a mathematician. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="134">
                    <l>Gentlemen! <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I receive you, and attach and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">to you the <del
                                    type="overstrike">first</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">great</add> honors, <add
                                    type="insertion" place="supralinear">always,</add></add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">clasp</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">hands with you, </del><del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">(I would <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="supralinear">nestle</add> nursing you as a little
                                child.)</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">The</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">Your</add>
                        </subst>facts are useful and real <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#8212;&#38;
                                yet</add>
                        </subst>they are not my <lb />dwelling&#8212;<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;(</add>I <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">but</add> enter by them to an area of <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">my</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />dwelling.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="135">
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">I am</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">l</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">L</add>
                        </subst>ess the reminder<add type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add> of <del
                            type="overstrike">property or qualities</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">qualities <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">told</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">remain</del></add>, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><del type="overstrike">are</del>
                            my words</add> and <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">And</add>
                        more the reminder<add type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add> of life<del
                            type="overstrike">,</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">my words.</add>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">untold,<anchor xml:id="t12"
                             /></add></l>
                    <transpose anchored="true" target="t12">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">And of Freedom and
                            extrication</add>
                    </transpose>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf031v" type="verso" n="54" facs="nyp.00015.62" />
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">And go on the square for my own sake and for others'
                            <lb />sakes, </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>And make short account of neuters and geldings, and <lb />favor men and women
                        fully equip <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ped</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst>, </l>
                    <l>And beat the gong of revolt, and stop with fugitives, <lb />and them that
                        plot and conspire. </l>
                </lg>
                <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">
                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                </add>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="136">
                    <l>Walt Whitman, <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">am I, of mighty
                            Manhattan the son,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">an American, one of the roughs, a</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">kosmos,</del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Disorderly</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Turbulent</add>
                        </subst>, fleshy, sensual, eating, drinking, <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">and</add> breeding,</l>
                    <l>No sentimentalist&#8212;no stander above men and <choice>
                            <orig>wo-<lb />men,</orig>
                            <reg>women<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> or apart from them, </l>
                    <l>No more modest than immodest.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="137">
                    <l>Unscrew the locks from the doors!</l>
                    <l>Unscrew the doors themselves from their jambs!</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="138">
                    <l>Whoever degrades another degrades me,</l>
                    <l>And whatever is done or said returns at last to me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion">.</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">And whatever I do or say, I also return.</del>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="139">
                    <l>Through me the afflatus surging and surging&#8212; <lb />through me the
                        current and index. </l>
                </lg>
                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                    <!-- From Golden: Trial lines a and b were brought in from the top margin by a guideline to follow st 139, apparently as a separate stanza.  Whitman rejected them in this position, erased the guidline, and marked them 'tr'.  With two substantive changes they were transferred to 'Chants Democratic' no 1 ('By Blue Ontario's Shore'), p 125, below.)
   -->
                    <l>(<add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Now</add> Let my <del
                            type="overstrike">extatic</del>
                        <add type="insertion"><del type="overstrike">now</del> extatic</add> craze
                        rage&#8212;I but sing <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >anyhow</add> to please <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                            >&#38; vent myself</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">myself.)</del></l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">
                                <gap reason="illegible" />
                            </del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">To</add>
                        </subst> express that volcano, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">myself.)</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my will.)</add>
                        </subst></l>
                </add>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="140">
                    <l>I speak the pass-word primeval&#8212;I give the sign of <lb /><restore
                            rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">democracy,</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">
                                <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="low" resp="ses"
                                    >for</unclear> brother &#38; father,</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>By God! I will accept nothing which all cannot have <lb />their counterpart
                        of on the same terms. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="141">
                    <l>Through me many long dumb voices,</l>
                    <l>Voices of the interminable generations of slaves,</l>
                    <l>Voices of prostitutes, and of deformed persons,</l>
                    <l>Voices of the diseased and despairing, and of thieves <lb />and dwarfs, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf032r" type="recto" n="55" facs="nyp.00015.63" />
                    <l>Voices of cycles of preparation and accretion,</l>
                    <l>And of the threads that connect the stars&#8212;and of <lb />wombs, and
                        of the fatherstuff, </l>
                    <l>And of the rights of <subst>
                            <restore seq="6" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">them</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright"><del seq="3"
                                        type="overstrike">those</del>
                                    <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="superlinear">all</add>
                                    whom</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> the others are down upon,</l>
                    <l>Of the trivial, flat, foolish, despised,</l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Fog in the air, beetles rolling
                        balls of dung.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="142">
                    <l>Through me forbidden voices,</l>
                    <l>Voices of sexes and lusts&#8212;voices veil <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d, and I <lb />remove the veil, </l>
                    <l>Voices indecent, by me clarified and transfigur <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="143">
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="3" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I do not</del>
                            </restore>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Why should I</add>
                        </subst>press my finger <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">across</del>
                        </restore> my mouth, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Let who <gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" />t close?</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">for</add>
                        </del>I keep as delicate around the bowels as around the <lb />head and
                        heart, </l>
                    <l>Copulation is no more rank to me than death is.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="144">
                    <l>I believe in the flesh and the appetites,</l>
                    <l>Seeing, hearing, feeling, are miracles, and each part <lb />and tag of me is
                        a miracle. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="145">
                    <l>Divine am I inside and out, and I make holy <choice>
                            <orig>what-<lb />ever</orig>
                            <reg>whatever<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> I touch or am touch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst> from, </l>
                    <l>The scent of these arm-pits, aroma finer than prayer,</l>
                    <l>This head more than churches, bibles, and all the <lb />creeds. </l>
                </lg>
                <!-- Whitman has indicated here that he intended to create a single stanza out of 145-151.  This plan came to naught in the 1867 version.  How can we represent that? -->
                <lg type="linegroup" n="146">
                    <l>If I worship <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">any particular thing</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">one thing more than
                                another</add>
                        </subst>, it shall be <del type="overstrike">some of</del>
                        <lb />the spread of my own body<del type="overstrike">.</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">,or any part of it;</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="147">
                    <l>Translucent mould of me, it shall be you!</l>
                    <l>Shaded ledges and rests, it shall be you!</l>
                    <l>Firm masculine colter, it shall be you.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf032v" type="verso" n="56" facs="nyp.00015.64" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="148">
                    <l>Whatever goes to the tilth of me, it shall be you!</l>
                    <l>You my rich blood <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212; </add>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">Y</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">y</add>
                        </subst>our milky stream, pale <choice>
                            <orig>strip-<lb />pings</orig>
                            <reg>strippings<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of my life. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="149">
                    <l>Breast that presses against other breasts, it shall be <lb />you! </l>
                    <l>My brain, it shall be your occult convolutions.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="150">
                    <l>Root of wash <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> sweet-flag <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">T</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">t</add>
                        </subst>imorous pond-snipe <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">N</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">n</add>
                        </subst>est of guarded duplicate eggs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> it shall be <lb />you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Mix <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> tussled hay of head, beard, brawn, it shall <lb />be you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Trickling sap of maple <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">F</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">fi</add>
                        </subst>ibre of manly wheat <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>it <lb />shall be you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">.</add>
                        </subst></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="151">
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="supralinear">The</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="4" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Else</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>Sun so generous, it shall be <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">also</add> you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Vapors lighting and shading my face, it shall be <lb />you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>You sweaty brooks and dews, it shall be you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Winds whose soft-tickling genitals rub against me, it <lb />shall be you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Broad, muscular fields <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">B</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">b</add>
                        </subst>ranches of live oak <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <choice>
                            <orig><subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">L</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit">l</add>
                                </subst>ov-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>Loving<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> lounger in my winding paths <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> it shall be <lb />you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Hands I have taken&#8212;face I have kissed&#8212;mortal I <lb />have
                        ever touch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> it shall be you. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="152">
                    <l><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">O</add>
                        </del> I dote on myself&#8212;there is that lot of me, and all so
                        <lb />luscious, </l>
                    <l>Each moment, and whatever happens, thrills me with <lb />joy. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf033r" type="recto" n="57" facs="nyp.00015.65" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="153">
                    <l>O I am <del type="overstrike">so</del> wonderful!</l>
                    <l>I cannot tell how my ankles bend, nor whence the <lb />cause of my faintest
                        wish, </l>
                    <l>Nor the cause of the <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">friendship</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">love so
                                    tender</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> I emit, nor the cause <lb />of the <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">friendship</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">love</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> I take again. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="154">
                    <l>That I walk up my stoop <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">!</add>
                        </subst> I pause to consider if it <lb />really be <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">That I eat and drink is spectacle enough <del
                                type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">to me</add>
                            </del> for the great <lb />authors and schools, <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="inline">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                            >d</unclear>
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="4" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="inline">me,</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">beyond all operas &#38;
                                    plays,</add>
                            </del>
                        </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>A morning-glory at my window satisfies me more than <lb />the metaphysics of
                        books. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="155">
                    <l>To behold the day-break!</l>
                    <l>The little light fades the immense and diaphanous <lb />shadows, </l>
                    <l>The air tastes good to my palate.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="156">
                    <l>Hefts of the moving world, at innocent gambols, <lb />silently rising,
                        freshly exuding, </l>
                    <l>Scooting obliquely high and low.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="157">
                    <l>Something I cannot see puts upward libidinous <lb />prongs, </l>
                    <l>Seas of bright juice suffuse heaven.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="158">
                    <l>The earth by the sky staid with&#8212;the daily close of <lb />their
                        junction, </l>
                    <l>The heav <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d challenge from the east that moment over <lb />my head, </l>
                    <l>The mocking taunt, <add type="edit" rend="underline">See then whether you
                            shall be</add>
                        <lb /><add type="edit" rend="underline">master!</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf033v" type="verso" n="58" facs="nyp.00015.66" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="159">
                    <l>Dazzling and tremendous, how quick the sun-rise <lb />would kill me, </l>
                    <l>If I could not now and always send sun-rise out <lb />of me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="160">
                    <l>We also ascend, dazzling and tremendous as the sun,</l>
                    <l>We found our own, O my Soul, in the calm and cool <lb />of the day-break.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="161">
                    <l>My voice goes after what my eyes cannot reach,</l>
                    <l>With the twirl of my tongue I encompass worlds, and <lb />volumes of worlds.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="162">
                    <l>Speech is the twin of my vision&#8212;it is unequal to <lb />measure
                        itself; </l>
                    <l>It provokes me forever, <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                            <del type="overstrike">It says</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">&#8212; saying sarcastically, <add
                                    type="edit" rend="underline">Do you call this expressing
                                    yourself?</add></del>
                        </add></l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">It says sarcastically, <hi rend="italic">Walt, you <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">understand</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">contain</add>
                                </subst> enough</hi>&#8212; <lb /><hi rend="italic">why don't
                                you let it out then?</hi>
                        </del>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="163">
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Come now, I will not be
                                    tantalized&#8212;</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the <gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /> speech and <gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">you</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;it</add>
                        </subst> conceive<add type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add>
                        <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">too</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">so</add>
                        </subst> too much of articulation. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="164">
                    <l>Do you <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">not</del>
                        </restore> know <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">O <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">my</add>
                            </del> speech</add> how the buds beneath <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">you</add> are folded?</l>
                    <l>Waiting in gloom, protected by frost,</l>
                    <l>The dirt receding before my prophetical screams,</l>
                    <l>I underlying causes, to balance them at last,</l>
                    <l>My knowledge my live parts&#8212;it keeping tally with <lb />the meaning
                        of things, </l>
                    <l><!-- how do I add smallcaps to Happiness?  Later this decision is retracted --><add
                            type="edit" rend="smallcaps">Happiness</add>&#8212;which, whoever
                        hears me, let him or her <lb />set out in search of this day. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="165">
                    <l>My final merit I refuse <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">you</del>
                        </restore>&#8212;I refuse putting from <lb />me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the best</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="infralinear">what</add>
                        </subst> I am. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf034r" type="recto" n="59" facs="nyp.00015.67" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="166">
                    <l>Encompass worlds, <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">O speech<del type="overstrike"
                                    >,</del> and pen!</add>
                        </del> but never try to encompass me,</l>
                    <l>I crowd your sleekest <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">talk</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="infralinear">and best</add>
                        </subst> by simply looking toward <lb />you. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="167">
                    <l>Writing and talk do not prove me,</l>
                    <l>I carry the plenum of proof, and everything else, in <lb />my face, </l>
                    <l>With the hush of my lips I <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >wholly</add> confound the <del type="overstrike">topmost</del>
                        <lb />skeptic. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="168">
                    <l>I think I will do nothing <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">for a long time</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">now</add>
                        </subst> but listen,</l>
                    <l>To accrue what I hear into myself&#8212;to let sounds <lb />contribute
                        toward me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="169">
                    <l>I hear bravuras of birds, bustle of growing wheat, <lb /><add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add>gossip of flames, clack of sticks cooking
                        my <lb />meals <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <!-- Stanzas 169-70 were joined as a single stanze; Whitman overstruck the "170" -->
                <lg type="linegroup" n="170">
                    <l>I hear the sound I love, the sound of the human <lb />voice <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I hear <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">all</del>
                        </restore> sounds running together, combined, fused <lb />or following, </l>
                    <l>Sounds of the city and sounds out of the city&#8212; <lb />sounds of the
                        day and night, </l>
                    <l>Talkative young<add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8209;</add><del
                            type="edit"> </del>ones to those that like them<del type="overstrike"
                            >&#8212;the</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">recitative of fish-pedlers and
                            fruit-pedlers</del>&#8212;the <lb />loud laugh of work-people at
                        their meals, </l>
                    <l>The angry base of disjointed friendship&#8212;the faint <lb />tones of
                        the sick, </l>
                    <l>The judge with hands tight to the desk, his <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">shaky</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">pallid</add>
                        </subst> lips <lb />pronouncing a death-sentence, </l>
                    <l>The heave'e'yo of stevedores unlading ships by the
                        <lb />wharves&#8212;the refrain of the anchor-lifters, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf034v" type="verso" n="60" facs="nyp.00015.68" />
                    <l>The ring of alarm-bells&#8212;the cry of fire&#8212;the whirr
                        <lb />of swift-streaking engines and hose-carts, with <lb />premonitory
                        tinkles, and colored lights, </l>
                    <l>The steam-whistle&#8212;the solid roll of the train of <lb />approaching
                        cars, </l>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>The slow-march played <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">at night</del>
                                </restore> at the head of the <lb />association, marching two and
                                two, <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">as the day declines,</add>
                                </del></l>
                            <l>(They go to guard some corpse&#8212;the flag-tops are
                                <lb />draped with black muslin.) </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="171">
                    <l>I hear the violoncello, <del type="overstrike">or</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">('tis the young</add> man's heart's
                            complaint;<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                    <l>I hear the keyed cornet&#8212;it glides quickly in through <lb />my ears, </l>
                    <l>It shakes mad-sweet pangs through my belly and <lb />breast. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="172">
                    <l>I hear the chorus&#8212;it is a grand<del type="overstrike">-</del>opera <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Ah, this indeed is music! This suits me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="173">
                    <l>A tenor large and fresh as the creation fills me,</l>
                    <l>The orbic flex of his mouth is pouring and filling <lb />me full. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="174">
                    <l>I hear the trained soprano <del type="overstrike">&#8212;she convulses me
                            like</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">the climax of my love-grip,</del><add
                            type="unmarked" place="supralinear">(what work <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">with hers,</add>is this?)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>The orchestra wrenches such ardors from me, I did <lb />not know I possessed
                        them, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">It throbs me to gulps of the farthest down
                            horror,</del>
                    </l>
                    <restore rend="erasure">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>It sails me&#8212;I dab with bare feet&#8212;they are licked
                                <lb />by the indolent waves, </l>
                            <l>I am exposed, cut by bitter <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and poisoned</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#38;
                                        angry</add>
                                </subst> hail<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#8212; I lose my
                                    breath</add></l>
                            <l>Steeped amid honeyed morphine, my windpipe <add type="insertion"
                                    place="infralinear">is</add>
                                <choice>
                                    <orig>throt-<lb />tled</orig>
                                    <reg>throttled<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                                <del type="overstrike">in fakes of death</del>, </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf035r" type="recto" n="61" facs="nyp.00015.69" />
                    <l>At length <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">I am</add>
                        </del> let up again to feel the puzzle of puzzles,</l>
                    <l>And that we call B<hi rend="smallcaps">EING</hi>.</l>
                </lg>
                <!-- how do I remove the small caps? -->
                <lg type="linegroup" n="175">
                    <l>To be in any form&#8212;what is that?</l>
                    <l>(Round and round we go, all of us, and ever come <lb />back thither <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>) </l>
                    <l>If nothing lay more developed, the quahaug in its <lb />callous shell were
                        enough. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="176">
                    <l>Mine is no callous shell,</l>
                    <l>I have instant conductors all over me, whether I pass <lb />or stop, </l>
                    <l>They seize every object, and lead it harmlessly <lb />through me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="177">
                    <l>I merely stir, press, feel with my fingers, and am <lb />happy, </l>
                    <l>To touch my person to some one else's is about as <lb />much as I can stand.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="178">
                    <l>Is this then a touch? quivering me to a new identity,</l>
                    <l>Flames and ether making a rush for my veins,</l>
                    <l>Treacherous tip of me reaching and crowding to <lb />help them, </l>
                    <l>My flesh and blood playing out lightning to strike <lb />what is hardly
                        different from myself, </l>
                    <l>On all sides prurient provokers stiffening my limbs,</l>
                    <l>Straining the udder of my heart for its withheld <lb />drip, </l>
                    <l>Behaving licentious toward me, taking no denial,</l>
                    <l>Depriving me of my best, as for a purpose,</l>
                    <l>Unbuttoning my clothes, holding me by the bare <lb />waist, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf035v" type="verso" n="62" facs="nyp.00015.70" />
                    <l>Deluding my confusion with the calm of the sun-light <lb />and
                        pasture-fields, </l>
                    <l>Immodestly sliding the fellow-senses away,</l>
                    <l>They bribed to swap off with touch, and go and graze <lb />at the edges of
                        me, </l>
                    <l>No consideration, no regard for my draining strength <lb />or my anger, </l>
                    <l>Fetching the rest of the herd around to enjoy them <lb />a while, </l>
                    <l>Then all uniting to stand on a headland and worry <lb />me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="179">
                    <l>The sentries desert every other part of me,</l>
                    <l>They have left me helpless to a red marauder,</l>
                    <l>They all come to the headland, to witness and assist <lb />against me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="180">
                    <l>I am given up by traitors,</l>
                    <l>I talk wildly&#8212;I have lost my wits&#8212;I and nobody <lb />else
                        am the greatest traitor, </l>
                    <l>I went myself first to the headland&#8212;my own hands <lb />carried me
                        there. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="181">
                    <l>You villain touch! what are you doing? My breath <lb />is tight in its
                        throat, </l>
                    <l>Unclench your floodgates! you are too much for me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="182">
                    <l>Blind, loving, wrestling touch! sheathed, hooded, <lb />sharp-toothed touch! </l>
                    <l>Did it make you ache so, leaving me?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="183">
                    <l>Parting, tracked by arriving&#8212;perpetual payment of <lb />perpetual
                        loan, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf036r" type="recto" n="63" facs="nyp.00015.71" />
                    <l>Rich showering rain, and recompense richer <choice>
                            <orig>after-<lb />ward.</orig>
                            <reg>afterward<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="184">
                    <l>Sprouts take and accumulate&#8212;stand by the curb <lb />prolific and
                        vital, </l>
                    <l>Landscapes, projected, masculine, full-sized, and <lb />golden. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="185">
                    <l>All truths wait in all things,</l>
                    <l>They neither hasten their own delivery, nor resist it,</l>
                    <l>They do not need the obstetric forceps of the <lb />surgeon, </l>
                    <l>The insignificant is as big to me as any,</l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>What is less or more than a
                            touch?<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="186">
                    <l>Logic and sermons never convince,</l>
                    <l>The damp of the night drives deeper into my Soul.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="187">
                    <l>Only what proves itself to every man and woman <lb />is so, </l>
                    <l>Only what nobody denies is so.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="188">
                    <l>A minute and a drop of me settle my brain,</l>
                    <l>I believe the soggy clods shall become lovers and <lb />lamps, </l>
                    <l>And a compend of compends is the meat of a man or <lb />woman, </l>
                    <l>And a summit and flower there is the feeling they <lb />have for each other, </l>
                    <l>And they are to branch boundlessly out of that lesson <lb />until it becomes
                        omnific, </l>
                    <l>And until every one shall delight us, and we them.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf036v" type="verso" n="64" facs="nyp.00015.72" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="189">
                    <l>I believe a leaf of grass is no less than the <choice>
                            <orig>journey-<lb />work</orig>
                            <reg>journeywork<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of the stars, </l>
                    <l>And the pismire is equally perfect, and a grain of <lb />sand, and the egg of
                        the wren, </l>
                    <l>And the tree-toad is a chef-d'&#339;uvre for the highest,</l>
                    <l>And the running blackberry would adorn the parlors <lb />of heaven, </l>
                    <l>And the narrowest hinge in my hand puts to scorn all <lb />machinery, </l>
                    <l>And the cow crunching with depressed head surpasses <lb />any statue, </l>
                    <l>And a mouse is miracle enough to stagger sextillions <lb />of infidels, </l>
                    <l>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">And I could come every afternoon of my life to
                                look <lb />at the farmer's girl boiling her iron tea-kettle
                                <lb />and baking short-cake.</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="190">
                    <l>I find I incorporate gneiss, coal, long-threaded moss, <lb />fruits, grains,
                        esculent roots, </l>
                    <l>And am stucco <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d with quadrupeds and birds all over,</l>
                    <l>And have distanced what is behind me for good <lb />reasons, </l>
                    <l>And call anything close again, when I desire it.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="191">
                    <l>In vain the speeding or shyness <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>In vain the plutonic rocks send their old heat against <lb />my approach <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>In vain the mastodon retreats beneath its own <choice>
                            <orig>pow-<lb />dered</orig>
                            <reg>powdered<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> bones <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>In vain objects stand leagues off, and assume manifold <lb />shapes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>In vain the ocean settling in hollows, and the great <lb />monsters lying
                        low, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf037r" type="recto" n="65" facs="nyp.00015.73" />
                    <l>In vain the buzzard houses herself with the sky <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>In vain the snake slides through the creepers and <lb />logs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>In vain the elk takes to the inner passes of the <lb />woods <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>In vain the razor-bill <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d auk sails far north to <lb />Labrador <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I follow quickly, I ascend to the nest in the fissure <lb />of the cliff.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="192">
                    <l>I think I could <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">almost</add> turn
                        and live with animals, they are <lb />so placid and self-contained <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">I stand and look at them</del>
                        </restore>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sometimes an hour at a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">long &#38; long.
                                    <del type="overstrike">to absorb them.</del></add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />
                        <del type="overstrike">stretch.</del>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <!-- At one point Whitman joined st 192-193 to st 191 with a guideline which was later erased. -->
                <lg type="linegroup" n="193">
                    <l>They do not sweat and whine about their condition <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>They do not lie awake in the dark and weep for their <lb />sins <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They do not make me sick discussing their duty to <lb />God <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>No one is dissatisfied&#8212;not one is demented with the <lb />mania of
                        owning things <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Not one kneels to another, nor to his kind that lived <lb />thousands of
                        years ago <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Not one is respectable or industrious over the whole <lb />earth. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="194">
                    <l>So they show their relations to me, and I accept <lb />them <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They bring me tokens of myself&#8212;they evince them <lb />plainly in
                        their possession. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="195">
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">do not know</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">wonder</add>
                        </subst> where they get those tokens <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf037v" type="verso" n="66" facs="nyp.00015.74" />
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">N<gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                </del> may have <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del> passed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Did I pass</add>
                        </subst> that way untold times ago, and <lb />negligently dropt them, </l>
                    <l>Myself moving forward then and now forever,</l>
                    <l>Gathering and showing more always and with <lb />velocity, </l>
                    <l>Infinite and omnigenous, and the like of these among <lb />them <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>, </l>
                    <l>Not too exclusive toward the reachers of my <choice>
                            <orig>remem-<lb />brancers,</orig>
                            <reg>remembrancers<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Picking <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">out</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">here</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" />t</add>
                        </del> one <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        </del>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">that I love,</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="overstrike">to</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">and now</add> go with <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">him</add> on <lb />brotherly terms.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="196">
                    <l>A gigantic beauty of a stallion, fresh and responsive <lb />to my caresses, </l>
                    <l>Head high in the forehead, wide between the ears,</l>
                    <l>Limbs glossy and supple, tail dusting the ground,</l>
                    <l>Eyes well apart, full of sparkling wickedness&#8212;ears <lb />finely
                        cut, flexibly moving. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="197">
                    <l>His nostrils dilate, as my heels embrace him <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>His well-built limbs tremble with pleasure, as we <lb />speed around and
                        return. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="198">
                    <l>I but use you a moment, then I resign you stallion <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Why do I need your paces, when I
                        myself out-gallop <lb />them? </l>
                    <l>Even, as I stand or sit, passing faster than you.<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="199">
                    <l><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">O</del>
                        </restore> swift wind! <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O</add>
                        </del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">S</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">s</add>
                        </subst>pace <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">and Time!</add><del
                            type="overwrite">!</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">my Soul!</del> now I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">know</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">see</add>
                        </subst> it is <lb />true, what I guess <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">'d</add>
                        </subst>at <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>What I guess <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d when I loaf <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d on the grass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>What I guess <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d while I lay alone in my bed,</l>
                    <l>And again as I walk <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d the beach under the paling <lb />stars of the morning. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf038r" type="recto" n="67" facs="nyp.00015.75" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="200">
                    <l>My ties and ballasts leave me&#8212;I travel<del type="overstrike"
                            >&#8212;</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and</add>
                        </subst> sail&#8212; <lb />my elbows rest in the sea-gaps <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I skirt the sierras&#8212;my palms cover continents <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I am afoot with my vision <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">.</del>
                        </restore><del type="erasure"><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >s</add>></del></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="201">
                    <l>By the city's quadrangular houses&#8212;in log huts&#8212;
                        <lb />camping with lumbermen <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Along the ruts of the turnpike&#8212;along the dry gulch <lb />and
                        rivulet bed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Weeding my onion-patch, or hoeing rows of carrots <lb />and
                        parsnips&#8212;crossing savannas&#8212;trailing in <lb />forests <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Prospecting&#8212;gold-digging&#8212;girdling the trees of a
                        <lb />new purchase <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Scorch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d ankle-deep by the hot sand&#8212;hauling my <lb />boat down
                        the shallow river <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the panther walks to and fro on a limb <choice>
                            <orig>over-<lb />head</orig>
                            <reg>overhead<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>&#8212;Where the buck turns furiously at the <lb />hunter <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the rattlesnake suns his flabby length on a <lb />rock&#8212;Where
                        the otter is feeding on fish <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the alligator in his tough pimples sleeps by the <lb />bayou <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the black bear is searching for roots or honey <lb />&#8212;Where
                        the beaver pats the mud with his <lb />paddle<del type="overstrike"
                            >-</del><add type="insertion" place="marginleft"
                        >&#8209;shaped</add>tail <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Over the growing sugar&#8212;over the <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">yellow flower<subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">'d</add>
                            </subst></add> cotton plant&#8212; <lb />over the rice in its low
                        moist field <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Over the sharp-peak <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d farm house, with its scallop <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />scum and slender shoots from the gutters <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Over the western persimmon&#8212;over the long-leav <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />corn&#8212;over the delicate blue-flower<del
                            type="overstrike">ed</del> flax <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Over the white and brown buckwheat, a hummer <lb />and buzzer there with the
                        rest <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf038v" type="verso" n="68" facs="nyp.00015.76" />
                    <l>Over the dusky green of the rye as it ripples and <lb />shades in the breeze <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>; </l>
                    <l>Scaling mountains, pulling myself cautiously up, <lb />holding on by low
                        scragged limbs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Walking the path worn in the grass and beat through <lb />the leaves of the
                        brush <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the quail is whistling betwixt the woods and <lb />the wheat-lot <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the bat flies in the Seventh Month eve&#8212;</l>
                    <l>Where the great gold-bug drops through the <lb />dark <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the flails keep time on the barn floor <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Where the brook puts out of the roots of the old tree <lb />and flows to the
                        meadow <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where cattle stand and shake away flies with the <lb />tremulous shuddering
                        of their hides <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the cheese-cloth hangs in the kitchen&#8212;Where <lb />andirons
                        straddle the hearth-slab&#8212;Where <choice>
                            <orig>cob-<lb />webs</orig>
                            <reg>cobwebs<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> fall in festoons from the rafters <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where trip-hammers crash&#8212;Where the press is <lb />whirling its
                        cylinders <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Wherever the human heart beats with terrible throes <lb />out of its ribs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the pear-shaped balloon is floating aloft, <choice>
                            <orig>float-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>floating<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> in it myself and looking composedly down <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the life-car is drawn on the slip-noose&#8212;Where <lb />the heat
                        hatches pale-green eggs in the dented <lb />sand <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the she-whale swims with her calf, and never <lb />forsakes it <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the steam-ship trails hind-ways its long <choice>
                            <orig>pen-<lb />nant</orig>
                            <reg>pennant<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of smoke <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the fin of the shark cuts like a black chip out <lb />of the water <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf039r" type="recto" n="69" facs="nyp.00015.77" />
                    <l>Where the half-burn <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d brig is riding on unknown <lb />currents, </l>
                    <l>Where shells grow to her slimy deck&#8212;Where the <lb />dead are
                        corrupting below <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">striped and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">dense&#8209;</add>
                        </subst>starr <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d flag is borne at the <lb />head of the regiments <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Approaching Manhattan, up by the long-stretching <lb />island <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Under Niagara, the cataract falling like a veil over <lb />my countenance <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Upon a door-step&#8212;upon the horse-block of hard <lb />wood outside <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Upon the race-course, or enjoying picnics or jigs, or <lb />a good game of
                        base-ball <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>At he-festivals, with blackguard gibes, ironical license, <lb />bull-dances,
                        drinking, laughter, </l>
                    <l>At the cider-mill, tasting the sweet of the brown <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sqush,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">mash&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> sucking the juice through a straw <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>At apple-peelings, wanting kisses for all the red fruit <lb />I find <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>At musters, beach-parties, friendly bees, huskings, <lb />house-raisings; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>Where the mocking-bird
                        sounds his delicious <choice>
                            <orig>gur-<lb />gles,</orig>
                            <reg>gurgles<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> cackles, screams, weeps <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the hay-rick stands in the barn-yard&#8212;Where <lb />the
                        dry-stalks are scattered&#8212;Where the brood <lb />cow waits in the
                        hovel <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the bull advances to do his masculine work&#8212; <lb />Where the
                        stud to the mare&#8212;Where the cock <lb />is treading the hen <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where heifers browse&#8212;Where geese nip their food <lb />with short
                        jerks <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where sun-down shadows lengthen over the limitless <lb />and lonesome prairie <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf039v" type="verso" n="70" facs="nyp.00015.78" />
                    <l>Where herds of buffalo make a crawling spread of <lb />the square miles far
                        and near <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the humming-bird shimmers&#8212;Where the <lb />neck of the
                        long-lived swan is curving and <lb />winding <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the laughing-gull scoots by the shore, where <lb />she laughs her
                        near-human laugh <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where bee-hives range on a gray bench in the garden, <lb />half hid by the
                        high weeds <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where band-necked partridges roost in a ring on the <lb />ground with their
                        heads out <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where burial coaches enter the arched gates of a <lb />cemetery <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where winter wolves bark amid wastes of snow and <lb />icicled trees <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the yellow-crown <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d heron comes to the edge of <lb />the marsh at night and feeds upon
                        small crabs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the splash of swimmers and divers cools the <lb />warm noon <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Where the katy-did works her chromatic reed on the <lb />walnut-tree over the
                        well <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Through patches of citrons and cucumbers with <lb />silver-wired leaves <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Through the salt-lick or orange glade, or under <choice>
                            <orig>con-<lb />ical</orig>
                            <reg>conical<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> firs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Through the gymnasium&#8212;through the curtain <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />saloon&#8212;through the office or public hall <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Pleas <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d with the native, and pleased with the foreign
                        <lb />&#8212;pleas <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d with the new and old <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Pleas <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d with women, the homely as well as the <lb />handsome <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Pleas <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d with the quakeress as she puts off her bonnet <lb />and talks
                        melodiously <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf040r" type="recto" n="71" facs="nyp.00015.79" />
                    <l>Pleas <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d with the tunes of the choir of the <choice>
                            <orig>white-<lb />washed</orig>
                            <reg>whitewashed<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> church <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Pleas <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d with the earnest words of the sweating <lb />Methodist preacher,
                        or any preacher&#8212;Impress <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />seriously at the camp-meeting <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Looking in at the shop-windows of Broadway the <lb />whole
                            forenoon&#8212;<add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>flatting
                        the flesh of my nose <lb />on the thick plate-glass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                    <l>Wandering the same afternoon with my face turned <lb />up to the clouds, </l>
                    <l>My right and left arms round the sides of two <lb />friends, and I in the
                        middle; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>Coming home with the
                        silent and dark-cheeked <lb />bush-boy&#8212;riding behind him at the
                        drape of <lb />the day <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Far from the settlements, studying the print of <choice>
                            <orig>ani-<lb />mals'</orig>
                            <reg>animals<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> feet, or the moccason print <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>By the cot in the hospital, reaching lemonade to a <lb />feverish patient <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>By the coffin <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d corpse when all is still, examining <lb />with a candle <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Voyaging to every port, to dicker and adventure <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Hurrying with the modern crowd, as eager and fickle <lb />as any <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Hot toward one I hate, ready in my madness to knife <lb />him <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Solitary at midnight in my back yard, my thoughts <lb />gone from me a long
                        while <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Walking the old hills of Judea, with the beautiful <lb />gentle God by my
                        side <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Speeding through space&#8212;speeding through heaven <lb />and the stars <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf040v" type="verso" n="72" facs="nyp.00015.80" />
                    <l>Speeding amid the seven satellites, and the broad <lb />ring, and the
                        diameter of eighty thousand miles <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Speeding with tail <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d meteors&#8212;<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >(</add>throwing fire-balls <lb />like the rest,<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>Carrying the crescent child that carries its own full <lb />mother<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">in its belly <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Storming, enjoying, planning, loving, cautioning,</l>
                    <l>Backing and filling, appearing and disappearing,</l>
                    <l>I tread day and night such roads.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="202">
                    <l>I visit the orchards of spheres, and look at the product,</l>
                    <l>And look at quintillions ripen <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d, and look at <choice>
                            <orig>quin-<lb />tillions</orig>
                            <reg>quintillions<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> green. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="203">
                    <l>I fly the flight of the fluid and swallowing <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">s</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">S</add>
                        </subst>oul <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>My course runs below the soundings of plummets.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="204">
                    <l>I help myself to material and immaterial <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>No guard can shut me off, nor law prevent me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="205">
                    <l>I anchor my ship for a little while only <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>My messengers continually cruise away, or bring their <lb />returns to me.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="206">
                    <l>I go hunting polar furs and the seal<del type="overwrite"
                            >&#8212;</del><add type="overwrite" place="over"
                        >&#182;</add>Leaping <lb />chasms with a pike-pointed staff&#8212; <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">C</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">c</add>
                        </subst>linging to <lb />topples of brittle and blue. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="207">
                    <l>I ascend to the foretruck <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I take my place late at night in the crow's-nest <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>We sail the arctic sea&#8212;it is plenty light enough <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Through the clear atmosphere I stretch around on <lb />the wonderful beauty <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf041r" type="recto" n="73" facs="nyp.00015.81" />
                    <l>The enormous masses of ice pass me, and I pass them <lb />&#8212;the
                        scenery is plain in all directions <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The white-top<del type="overstrike">ped</del> mountains show in the
                        distance&#8212; <lb />I fling out my fancies toward them <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>We are approaching some great
                        battle-field in which <lb />we are soon to be engaged <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>We pass the colossal out-posts of the encampment&#8212; <lb />we pass
                        with still feet and caution <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Or we are entering by the suburbs some vast and <lb />ruin <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d city <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The blocks and fallen architecture more than all the <lb />living cities of
                        the globe. <add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="208">
                    <l>I am a free companion&#8212;I bivouac by invading <lb />watchfires. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="209">
                    <l>I turn the bridegroom out of bed, and stay with the <lb />bride myself <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I tighten her all night to my thighs and lips.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="210">
                    <l>My voice is the wife's voice, the screech by the rail <lb />of the stairs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They fetch my man's body up, dripping and drown <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="211">
                    <l>I understand the large hearts of heroes,</l>
                    <l>The courage of present times and all times <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>How the skipper saw the crowded and rudderless <lb />wreck of the steam-ship,
                        and Death chasing it up <lb />and down the storm <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>How he knuckled tight, and gave not back one inch, <lb />and was faithful of
                        days and faithful of nights, </l>
                    <l>And chalk <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d in large letters, on a board, <hi rend="italic">Be of good</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">cheer, We will not desert you <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></hi>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf041v" type="verso" n="74" facs="nyp.00015.82" />
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>How he follow <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d with them, and tack <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d with them&#8212; <lb />and would not give it up <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>How he saved the drifting company at last <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>How the lank loose-gown <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d women look <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d when <lb />boated from the side of their prepared graves <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>How the silent old-faced infants, and the lifted sick, <lb />and the
                        sharp-lipp <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d unshaved men <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>All this I swallow&#8212;it tastes good&#8212;I like it
                        well&#8212; <lb />it becomes mine <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I am the man&#8212;I suffer <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d&#8212;I was there.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="212">
                    <l>The disdain and calmness of martyrs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The mother, condemn <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d for a witch, burnt with dry <lb />wood, her children gazing on <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The hounded slave that flags in the race, leans by the <lb />the fence,
                        blowing, cover <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d with sweat <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The twinges that sting like needles his legs and neck <lb />&#8212;the
                        murderous buck-shot and the bullets <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>All these I feel or am.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="213">
                    <l>I am the hounded slave, I wince at the bite of the <lb />dogs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Hell and despair are upon me, crack and again crack <lb />the marksmen <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I clutch the rails of the fence, my gore dribs, thinn <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />with the ooze of my skin <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I fall on the weeds and stones <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The riders spur their unwilling horses, haul close,</l>
                    <l>Taunt my dizzy ears, and beat me violently over the <lb />head with
                        whip-stocks. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="214">
                    <l>Agonies are one of my changes of garments <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I do not ask the wounded <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">person</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> how he feels&#8212;I <lb />myself become the wounded <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">person,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />,</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <!-- Golden speculates that the deleted words were probably "slave" in both
instances; this makes sense contextually, but I can't really determine it from the image --></l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf042r" type="recto" n="75" facs="nyp.00015.83" />
                    <l>My hurt turns livid upon me as I lean on a cane and <lb />observe. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="215">
                    <l>I am the mash <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d fireman with breastbone broken <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Tumbling walls buried me in their debris <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Heat and smoke I inspired&#8212;I heard the yelling <lb />shouts of my
                        comrades <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I heard the distant click of their picks and shovels <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>They have clear <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d the beams away&#8212;they tenderly <lb />lift me forth. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="216">
                    <l>I lie in the night air in my red shirt&#8212;the pervading <lb />hush is
                        for my sake <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Painless after all I lie, exhausted but not so unhappy <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>White and beautiful are the faces around me&#8212;the <lb />heads are
                        bared of their fire-caps <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The kneeling crowd fades with the light of the <lb />torches. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="217">
                    <l>Distant and dead resuscitate <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>They show as the dial or move as the hands of me&#8212; <lb />I am the
                        clock myself. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="218">
                    <l>I am an old artillerist&#8212;I tell of my fort's <choice>
                            <orig>bombard-<lb />ment</orig>
                            <reg>bombardment<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I am there again.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="219">
                    <l>Again the reveille of drummers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Again the attacking cannon, <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                            >&#38; </add>mortars, <del type="overstrike">howitzers</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Again the attack <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d send cannon responsive.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="220">
                    <l>I take part&#8212;I see and hear the whole <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The cries, curses, roar&#8212;the plaudits for well-aim <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />shots <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf042v" type="verso" n="76" facs="nyp.00015.84" />
                    <l>The ambulanza slowly passing, trailing its red drip <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Workmen searching after damages, making <choice>
                            <orig>indis-<lb />pensable</orig>
                            <reg>indispensable<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> repairs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The fall of grenades through the rent roof&#8212;the <lb />fan-shaped
                        explosion <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The whizz of limbs, heads, stone, wood, iron, high in <lb />the air. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="221">
                    <l>Again gurgles the mouth of my dying general&#8212;he <lb />furiously
                        waves with his hand <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>He gasps through the clot, <hi rend="italic">Mind not me</hi>&#8212;<hi
                            rend="italic">mind</hi>&#8212; <lb /><hi rend="italic">the
                            entrenchments</hi>. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="222">
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>I tell not the fall of Alamo <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l></del>
                        <del type="overstrike">   <l>Not one escaped to tell the fall of Alamo <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The hundred and fifty are dumb yet at Alamo.</l>
                    </del>
                    <l><add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop"> Hear now <add type="unmarked"
                            place="supralinear">what I <del type="overstrike">saw in</del> knew of
                                <add type="insertion">
                                <del type="overstrike">cold blood</del>
                            </add></add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the deed at Goliad</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Texas</add>
                        </subst> in <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">war,</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">old times,</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">my early youth;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </add></l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out altogether</note>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="223">
                    <delSpan type="hasmark" spanTo="#d6" />
                    <l>Hear <del type="overstrike">now</del> the tale of the murder <restore
                            rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">in cold blood</del>
                        </restore> of four <lb />hundred and twelve young men. </l>
                </lg>
                <anchor xml:id="t13" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="224">
                    <l>Retreating, they <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">we</add>
                        </del> formed in a hollow square, with <lb />their baggage for breastworks <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Nine hundred lives out of the surrounding enemy's, <lb />nine times their
                            <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">our</add>
                        </del> number, was the price they took <lb />in advance <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Their <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">our</add>
                        </del> colonel was wounded and <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">their</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">our</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> ammunition <lb />gone <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They treated for an honorable capitulation, receiv <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />writing and seal, gave up their arms, <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">and</del>
                        </restore>
                        <lb /><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">marched back prisoners of war.</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <transpose anchored="true" target="t13">
                    <del type="erasure">Though <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /> myself</del>
                </transpose>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="225">
                    <l>They were the glory of the race of rangers,</l>
                    <l>Matchless with horse, rifle, song, supper, courtship,</l>
                    <anchor xml:id="d6" />
                    <pb xml:id="leaf043r" type="recto" n="77" facs="nyp.00015.85" />
                    <delSpan type="hasmark" spanTo="#d7" />
                    <l>Large, turbulent, generous, brave, handsome, proud, <lb />and affectionate, </l>
                    <l>Bearded, sunburnt, dres <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                        </subst> in the free costume of <lb />hunters, </l>
                    <l>Not a single one over thirty years of age.</l>
                </lg>
                <del type="erasure">
                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">Out of <del type="overstrike">the</del>
                        four hundred and thirty, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >only</add> eighteen had escaped alive.</add>
                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="226">
                    <l>The second First Day morning they <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">we</add>
                        </del> were brought out <lb />in squads <add type="unmarked"
                            place="supralinear">to be</add> and massacred<restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">&#182;Not one out of ten
                                escaped;</add>
                        </del> it was beautiful early <lb />summer <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <anchor xml:id="t14" /></l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t14a">The work commenc <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                            </subst>d about five o'clock, and was over <lb />by eight. </transpose>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="227">
                    <l>None obey <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">'</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d the command to kneel <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Some made a mad and helpless rush&#8212;some stood <lb />stark and
                        straight <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>A few fell at once, shot in the temple or heart&#8212;the <lb />living
                        and dead lay together <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The maim <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d and mangled dug in the dirt&#8212;the new-<lb />comers saw
                        them there <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>Some, half-kill <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d, attempted to crawl away <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>These were despatch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d with bayonets, or batter <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d with <lb />the blunts of muskets <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>A youth not seventeen
                        years old seiz <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d his assassin till <lb />two more came to release him <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The three were all torn, and cover <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d with the boy's <lb />blood. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="228">
                    <l>At eleven o'clock began the burning of the bodies:</l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>That is the tale of the
                        murder of the four hundred</l>
                    <l>and twelve young men.</l>
                </lg>
                <anchor xml:id="d7" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="229">
                    <l><gap reason="deletion, illegible" /><del type="overstrike">Did you read in
                            the sea-books<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">of</del> the</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Would you <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">also</add>
                            </del> hear <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">also</add>
                            </del> a tale of the sea? of an <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                >would you hear</add></add> old-fashion <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">'</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d</l>
                    <l>frigate-fight?</l>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                        <l>Now hear a tale of the sea&#8212; an old-fashion'd frigate fight <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>While I tell to you as my frandfather's father, the sailor, told it to
                            me</l>
                    </add>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf043v" type="verso" n="78" facs="nyp.00015.86" />
                <lg type="linegroup">
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Did</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Would</add>
                        </subst> you learn <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">who</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">how we</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>who won by the light of the moon and <lb />stars? </l>
                </lg>
                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                    <l>List <del type="overstrike">then</del> to the tale, as my grandfather <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear"><del type="overstrike">great</del>
                            father <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the sailor</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">himself</del></add> told it to me <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">in his old age.</del></l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">He was in</del>
                    </l>
                </add>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="230">
                    <l>Our foe<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                             />said he</add> was no skulk in his ship, <del type="overstrike">I tell
                            you, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">said he,</add></del></l>
                    <!-- Whitman seems to have changed the orginal terminal punctuation from a , to a ; only to restore the orginal comma and then to delete it, along with the rest of the passage.  Long story short: there's an extra comma or semi colon floating around here and I'm not sure what to do.  See Golden page 78 -->
                    <l>His was the <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">surely</add> English
                            pluck&#8212;<add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>and there is
                        no tougher <lb />or truer, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">said
                            he,</add> and never was, and <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >will</add> never <del type="overstrike">will</del> be;<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>Along the lowered eve he came, horribly raking us.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="231">
                    <l>We closed with him&#8212;the yards entangled&#8212;the <lb />cannon
                        touch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">'</add>
                        </subst>d <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>My captain lashed fast with his own hands.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="232">
                    <l>We had receiv <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d some eighteen-pound shots under <lb />the water <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>On our lower-gun-deck two large pieces had burst at <lb />the first fire,
                        killing all around, and blowing up <lb />overhead. </l>
                </lg>
                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Fighting at sundown, fighting at
                    dark,</add>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="233">
                    <l>Ten o'clock at night, and the full moon <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">shining</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">bright</add>
                        </subst>, and <lb />the leaks on the gain, and five feet of water
                        <lb />reported <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The master-at-arms loosing the prisoners confined in <lb />the after-hold, to
                        give them a chance for <choice>
                            <orig>them-<lb />selves.</orig>
                            <reg>themselves<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="234">
                    <l>The transit to and from the magazine was now <lb />stop <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ped</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> by the sentinels <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>They saw so many strange faces,
                        they did not know <lb />whom to trust.<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="235">
                    <l>Our frigate was afire <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The other ask <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d if we demanded quarter?</l>
                    <l>If our colors were struck, and the fighting done?</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf044r" type="recto" n="79" facs="nyp.00015.87" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="236">
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Now</add> I laugh <del
                            type="overstrike">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                            </subst>d</del> content <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">said my grandfather's
                                father,</add>
                        </del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">when</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">for</add>
                        </subst> I hear<del type="overstrike">d</del> the voice of my little
                            <lb />captain<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(says my grandfather's father)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l><hi rend="italic">We have not struck,</hi> he composedly crie <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">d</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">s</add>
                        </subst>, <hi rend="italic">We have</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">just begun our part of the fighting</hi>. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="237">
                    <l>Only three guns were <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">are</add> in
                            use<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">; (says my grandfather's father, the
                                sailor)</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>One <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">was</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">is</add>
                        </subst> directed by the captain himself against the <lb />enemy's main-mast <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Two, well serv <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d with grape and canister, silence<del type="overstrike">d</del> his
                        <lb />musketry and clear <del type="overstrike">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                            </subst>d</del> his decks. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="238">
                    <l>The tops alone second<del type="overstrike">ed</del> the fire of this little
                        battery, <lb />especially the main-top <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They <del type="overstrike">all</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">held</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">hold</add>
                        </subst> out bravely during the whole of the <lb />action. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="239">
                    <l>Not a moment's cease <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The leaks gain <del type="overstrike">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                            </subst> d</del> fast on the pumps&#8212;the fire eat<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add>
                        <lb />toward the powder-magazine <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>One of the pumps was <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">is</add> shot
                        away&#8212;it was <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">is</add>
                        generally <lb />thought we were <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                            >are</add> sinking. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="240">
                    <l>Serene stood <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">standing</add> the
                        little captain <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>He was <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">is</add> not
                        hurried&#8212;his voice was <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                            >is</add> neither high <lb />nor low <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>His eyes gave <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">give</add> more light
                        to us than our battle-<lb />lanterns. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="241">
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Toward</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">It comes</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> twelve at night, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#38;</add>
                        </del> there in the beams of the <lb />moon, they surrender <del
                            type="overstrike">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                            </subst> d</del> to us. </l>
                </lg>
                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">(O <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                        >now</add> it is not my <del type="overstrike">great</del> grandfather's
                    father there <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">in the
                        frigate&#8209;fight</add>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>&#8212;<add
                        type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I feel</add> it is I myself.)</add>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="242">
                    <l>Stretch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d and still lay <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">lies</add>
                        the midnight <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Two great hulls motionless on the breast of the <lb />darkness <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf044v" type="verso" n="80" facs="nyp.00015.88" />
                    <l>Our vessel riddled and slowly sinking&#8212;preparations <lb />to pass to
                        the one we had <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">have</add> conquer <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The captain on the quarter-deck coldly giving his <lb />orders through a
                        countenance <del type="overstrike">white as a sheet <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></del></l>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">Like a corpse <add type="unmarked"
                                place="supralinear"><del type="overstrike">death</del> a dead
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="low" resp="ses"
                                    >man's</unclear></add>
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /> over with
                            powder&#8209;smoke</add>
                    </del>
                    <l>Near by, the corpse of the child that served in the <lb />cabin <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The dead face of an old salt with long white hair and <lb />carefully curl <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d whiskers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The flames, spite of all that <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">could</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">can</add>
                        </subst> be done, flickering <lb />aloft and below <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The husky voices of the two or three officers yet fit <lb />for duty <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Formless stacks of bodies, and bodies by themselves <lb />&#8212;dabs of
                        flesh upon the masts and spars <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Cut of cordage, dangle of rigging, slight shock of the <lb />soothe of waves, </l>
                    <l>Black and impassive guns, litter of powder-parcels, <lb />strong scent, </l>
                    <l>Delicate sniffs of sea-breeze, smells of sedgy grass and <lb />fields by the
                        shore, death-messages given in <lb />charge to survivors, </l>
                    <l>The hiss of the surgeon's knife, the gnawing teeth of <lb />his saw, </l>
                    <l>Wheeze, cluck, swash of falling blood, short wild <lb />scream, and long dull
                        tapering groan <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>These so&#8212;these irretrievable.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="243">
                    <l>O Christ! This is mastering me!</l>
                    <l>Through the conquered doors they crowd. I am <lb />possessed. </l>
                </lg>
                <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d8" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="244">
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>What the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">rebel</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">convict</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="supralinear">pirate</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="7" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="6" type="unmarked">
                                        <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                            >trait</unclear>
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="8" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">spy</add>
                            </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">, l</add> said, gayly
                            adjusting his throat to the <lb />rope-noose <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                        <l>The days I live, the passions immense,</l>
                        <l>The bloody vindicitive battles, with thousands falling, or throes of
                            peace or war,</l>
                    </add>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf045r" type="recto" n="81" facs="nyp.00015.89" />
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <l>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <subst>
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="inline">The</add>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">With</add>
                                    <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">All</add>
                                </subst>
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </del>
                        </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#182; (Are the powerful
                                emotions, present or past</add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="over">What powerful emotions, present or
                            past</add>
                    </add>
                    <l>What the savage at the stump, his eye-sockets empty <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">present or past</add>
                        </del>, <lb />his mouth spirting whoops and defiance <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>What stills the traveller come to the vault at Mount <lb />Vernon, </l>
                    <note type="editorial">a missing pasteover is visible here due to the residiual
                        paste; the corresponding paper fragment has not been located</note>
                    <l>What sobers the Brooklyn boy as he looks down the <lb />shores of the
                        Wallabout and remembers the <lb />Prison Ships, </l>
                    <l>What burnt the gums of the red-coat at Saratoga <lb />when he surrender <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>d his brigades, </l>
                    <anchor xml:id="d8" />
                    <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">What powerful emotions present or
                        past</add>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">These</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">All</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">All</add>
                        </subst> become mine and me every one&#8212;and they are <lb />but
                        little <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I become as much more as I like.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="245">
                    <l>I become any presence <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">or truth of humanity here,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">outlaw'd or
                                suffering,</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>See myself in prison shaped like another man,</l>
                    <l>And feel the dull unintermitted pain.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="246">
                    <l>For me the keepers of convicts shoulder their <lb />carbines and keep watch <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>It is I let out in the morning and barr <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d at night.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="247">
                    <l>Not a mutineer walks hand-cuff <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d to the jail, but I <lb />am hand-cuffed to him and walk by his
                        side <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I am less the jolly one there, and
                        more the silent one, <lb />with sweat on my twitching lips.<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="248">
                    <l>Not a youngster is taken for larceny, but I go up too, <lb />and am tried and
                        sentenced. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="249">
                    <l>Not a cholera patient lies at the last gasp, but I also <lb />lie at the last
                        grasp <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>My face is ash-color <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d&#8212;my sinews gnarl&#8212;away <lb />from me people
                        retreat. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf045v" type="verso" n="82" facs="nyp.00015.90" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="250">
                    <l>Askers embody themselves in me, and I am embodied <lb />in them <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I project my hat, sit shame-faced, and beg.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="251">
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">But</add> Enough&#8212;<del
                            type="overstrike">I bring such</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">the like of this</add> to a
                            close,<add type="unmarked" place="inline"><del type="overstrike"
                                >&#8212;</del>I <del type="overstrike"><add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">must</add> bring</del></add></l>
                    <l>Rise extatic through all, sweep with the true <choice>
                            <orig>gravita-<lb />tion,</orig>
                            <reg>gravitation<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>The whirling and whirling <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">has far
                            enough <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                >around</unclear><gap reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">passing</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">pass'd</add>
                            </subst> me <del type="overstrike">around</del></add><del
                            type="overstrike">elemental within me.</del></l>
                </lg>
                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">Renew <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">'</add>
                    </subst>d, I leave <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">this in</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">these</add>
                    </subst> lessons.</add>
                <restore rend="erased">
                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d9" />
                </restore>
                <del type="erasure">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="252">
                    <l>Somehow I have been stunned. <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Stand back!</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">I <del type="overstrike"
                                    >would</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">must</add> recall the main
                                thing,</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Stand back!</add>
                        </del> Give me a little time beyond my cuffed head, <choice>
                            <orig>slum-<lb />bers,</orig>
                            <reg>slumbers<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> dreams<restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">, gaping</del>
                        </restore>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I discover myself on the verge of <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">a usual</del>
                        </restore>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                             />d</add> mistake.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="253">
                    <l>That I could forget the mockers and insults!</l>
                    <l>That I could forget the trickling tears, and the blows <lb />of the bludgeons
                        and hammers! </l>
                    <l>That I could look with a separate look on my own <lb />crucifixion and bloody
                        crowning. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="254">
                    <l>I remember now <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I resume the overstaid fraction <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The grave of rock multiplies what has been confided <lb />to it, or to any
                        graves <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Corpses rise, gashes heal, fastenings roll from me.</l>
                </lg>
                <anchor xml:id="d9" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="255">
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">I</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                            <add seq="3" type="overwrite" place="over">I</add>
                        </subst> troop forth replenish <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d with supreme power, one of <lb />an average unending procession <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">We walk the roads of the six North Eastern States,
                            <lb />and of Virginia, Wisconsin, Manhattan Island, <del
                                type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">and so onward,</add>
                            </del><lb />Philadelphia, New Orleans, Texas, Charleston, <lb />Havana,
                            Mexico, </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Inland and <del type="overstrike">by the</del> sea-coast <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and boundary lines,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">we go,</add>
                        </subst> and <lb /><del type="overstrike">we</del> pass all boundary lines.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf046r" type="recto" n="83" facs="nyp.00015.91" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="256">
                    <l>Our swift ordinances <del type="overstrike">are</del> on their way over the
                        whole <lb />earth <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The blossoms we wear in our hats <del type="overstrike">are</del> the growth
                        of <lb /><del type="overstrike">two</del> thousand<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">s</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">of</add> years. </l>
                </lg>
                <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d10" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="257">
                    <l>&#201;l&#232;ves, I salute you<del type="overstrike">!</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212; <del type="overstrike">and
                                reso to justify you;</del></add></l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">I see the approach of your numberless
                        gangs</del>&#8212;I see <lb />you understand <del type="overstrike"
                            >yourselves and</del> me, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">through <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">all</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">much</add>
                            </subst> questioning</add></l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>And know that they who have eyes and can walk are <lb />divine, and the
                            blind and lame are equally divine, </l>
                        <l>And <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">see</add> that my steps
                            drag behind yours, yet go before <lb />them, </l>
                        <l>And are aware how I am with you no more than I am <lb />with everybody.
                        </l>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <anchor xml:id="d10" />
                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                    <l>&#201;l&#232;ves, I salute you &#38; encourage you,</l>
                    <l>Continue your <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">intentions</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">annotations</add>
                        </subst>, continue your questionings</l>
                </add>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="258">
                    <l>The friendly and flowing savage, Who is he?</l>
                    <l>Is he waiting for civilization, or past it and <choice>
                            <orig>master-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>mastering<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> it? </l>
                </lg>
                <restore rend="erased">
                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d11" />
                </restore>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="259">
                    <l>Is he some <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">s</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit" place="marginright">S</add>
                        </subst>outh-westerner, raised out-doors? Is he <lb />Kanadian? </l>
                    <l>Is he from the Mississippi country? Iowa <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">?</add>
                        </subst> Oregon <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">or</add>
                        </subst><lb />California? <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>the mountains? prairie-life, bush-<lb />life? or from
                        the sea? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="260">
                    <l>Wherever he goes men and women accept and desire <lb />him <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>They desire he should like them, touch them, speak <lb />to them, stay with
                        them. </l>
                </lg>
                <anchor xml:id="d11" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="261">
                    <l>Behavior lawless as snow-flakes, words simple as <lb />grass, <del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> uncombed head, laughter, and n&#228;vet&#233;, </l>
                    <l>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Slow-stepping feet, common features, common modes
                                <lb />and emanations</del>
                        </restore>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="edit">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginbot">;</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="edit">.</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf046v" type="verso" n="84" facs="nyp.00015.92" />
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l><del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182; </add>
                                </del>They descend in new forms from the tips of his <lb />fingers, </l>
                            <l>They are wafted with the odor of his body or breath
                                <lb />&#8212;they fly out of the glance of his eyes. </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="262">
                    <l>Flaunt of the sunshine, I need not your bask,&#8212;lie <lb />over! </l>
                    <l>You light surfaces only&#8212;I force surfaces and depths <lb />also. </l>
                    <!-- Whitman inserted the missing stanza number here, altering the reamining stanza numbers on the page -->
                    <l>Earth! you seem to look for something at my hands <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Say, old Top-knot! what do you want?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="263">
                    <l>Man or woman! I might tell how I like you, but <lb />cannot <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And might tell what it is in me, and what it is in <lb />you, but cannot <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And might tell that pining I have&#8212;that pulse of my <lb />nights and
                        days. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="264">
                    <l>Behold! I do not give lectures or a little charity <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>What I give, I give out of myself.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="265">
                    <l>You there, impotent, loose in the knees,</l>
                    <l>Open your scarfed chops till I blow grit within you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Spread your palms, and lift the flaps of your pockets;</l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>I am not to be
                        denied&#8212;I compel&#8212;I have stores <lb />plenty and to spare, </l>
                    <l>And anything I have I bestow.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="266">
                    <l>I do not ask who you are&#8212;that is not <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">so</add> important to <lb />me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>You can do nothing, and be nothing, but what I will <lb />infold you. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf047r" type="recto" n="85" facs="nyp.00015.93" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="267">
                    <l>To a drudge of the cotton-fields or cleaner of privies <lb />I lean <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>On his right cheek I put the family kiss,</l>
                    <l>And <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">in</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop">by</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="margintop">deep in</add>
                        </subst> my <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">s</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">S</add>
                        </subst>oul I swear, I never will deny him.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="268">
                    <l>On women fit for conception I start bigger and <choice>
                            <orig>nim-<lb />bler</orig>
                            <reg>nimbler<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> babes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>This day I am jetting the stuff of
                        far more arrogant <lb />republics.<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="269">
                    <l>To any one dying&#8212;thither I speed, and twist the <lb />knob of the
                        door <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Turn the bed-clothes toward the foot of the bed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Let the physician and the priest go home.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="270">
                    <l>I seize the descending man, and raise him with <choice>
                            <orig>resist-<lb />less</orig>
                            <reg>resistless<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> will. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="271">
                    <l>O despairer, here is my neck <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>By God! you shall not go down! Hang your whole <lb />weight upon me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="272">
                    <l>I dilate you with tremendous breath&#8212;I buoy you up <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Every room of the house do I fill with an armed force,</l>
                    <l>Lovers of me, bafflers of graves.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="273">
                    <l>Sleep! I and they keep guard all night <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Not doubt&#8212;not decease shall dare to lay finger upon <lb />you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I have embraced you, and henceforth possess you to <lb />myself <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And when you rise in the morning you will find what <lb />I tell you is so.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf047v" type="verso" n="86" facs="nyp.00015.94" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="274">
                    <l>I am he bringing help for the sick as they pant on <lb />their backs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>And for strong upright men I bring yet more needed <lb />help. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="275">
                    <l>I heard what was said of the universe <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Heard it and heard it of several thousand years;</l>
                    <l>&#8212;It is middling well as far as it goes,&#8212;But is that
                        all?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="276">
                    <l>Magnifying and applying come I,</l>
                    <l>Outbidding at the start the old cautions hucksters <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">The most they offer for mankind and eternity less
                            <lb />than a spirt of my own seminal wet, </del>
                    </l>
                    <!-- Whitman added a "d" to the margin next to the crossed out line -->
                    <l>Taking myself the exact dimensions of Jehovah <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Lithographing Kronos, Zeus his son, and Hercules <lb />his grandson <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Buying drafts of Osiris, Isis, Belus, Brahma, Buddha <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>In my portfolio placing Manito loose, Allah on a leaf, <lb />the crucifix
                        engraved, </l>
                    <l>With Odin, and the hideous-faced Mexitli, and every <lb />idol and image <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Taking them all for what they are worth, and not a <lb />cent more<del
                            type="overstrike">,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Admitting they were alive and did the work of their <lb />day <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">Admitting</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>they bore mites, as for unfledg <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d birds, <lb />who have now to rise and fly and sing for <choice>
                            <orig>them-<lb />selves</orig>
                            <reg>themselves<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                    <l>Accepting the rough deific sketches to fill out better <lb />in
                        myself&#8212;bestowing them freely on each man <lb />and woman I see <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Discovering as much, or more, in a framer framing a <lb />house <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf048r" type="recto" n="87" facs="nyp.00015.95" />
                    <l>Putting higher claims for him there with his roll <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d-<lb />up sleeves, driving the mallet and chisel <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Not objecting to special revelations&#8212;considering a <lb />curl of
                        smoke <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> or a hair on the back of my hand <lb />just as curious as any
                        revelation <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Those</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Young <gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /> upon</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Men</add>
                        </subst> ahold of fire engines and hook-and-ladder ropes <lb />no less to me
                        than the Gods of the antique wars, </l>
                    <l>Minding their voices peal through the crash of <lb />destruction, </l>
                    <l>Their brawny limbs passing safe over charr <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d laths&#8212; <lb /><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>their white foreheads whole and unhurt out of <lb />the flames; </l>
                    <l>By the mechanic's wife with her babe at her nipple <lb />interceding for
                        every person born <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Three scythes at harvest whizzing in a row from <lb />three lusty angels with
                        shirts bagg <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d out at <lb />their waists <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The snag-tooth <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d hostler with red hair redeeming sins <lb />past and to come, </l>
                    <l>Selling all he possesses, travelling on foot to fee <lb />lawyers for his
                        brother, and sit by him while he <lb />is tried for forgery; </l>
                    <l>What was strewn in the amplest strewing the square <lb />rod about me, and
                        not filling the square rod <lb />then <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The bull and the bug never worship <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ped</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                        </subst> half enough <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Dung and dirt more admirable than was dreamed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The supernatural of no account&#8212;myself waiting my <lb />time to be
                        one of the Supremes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The day getting ready for me when I shall do as <lb />much good as the best,
                        and be as prodigious <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Guessing when I am it will not tickle me much to
                            <lb />receive puffs out of pulpit or print; </del>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf048v" type="verso" n="88" facs="nyp.00015.96" />
                    <l>By my life-lumps! becoming already a creator <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Putting myself here and now to the ambush <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="infralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d womb <lb />of the shadows. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="277">
                    <l>A call in the midst of the crowd <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>My own voice, orotund, sweeping, <add type="insertion" place="marginright"
                            >and</add> final.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="278">
                    <l>Come my children <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Come my boys and girls, my women, household, <lb />and intimates <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Now <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">i<gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                        </del> the performer launches his nerve&#8212;he has <lb />passed <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">his</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>his prelude <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">on the</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> reeds within. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="279">
                    <l>Easily written, loose-finger <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="superlinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d chords! I feel the thrum <lb />of <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">their</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">your</add>
                        </subst> climax and close. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="280">
                    <l>My head slues round on my neck <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Music rolls, but not from the organ <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Folks are around me, but they are no household of <lb />mine. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="281">
                    <l>Ever the hard unsunk ground <anchor xml:id="t14a" />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t15">Ever the eaters and
                            drinkers&#8212;</transpose><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>Ever the upward <lb />and downward sun&#8212;Ever
                        the air<add type="insertion" place="marginright">,</add> and the <choice>
                            <orig>cease-<lb />less</orig>
                            <reg>ceaseless<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> tides <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Ever myself and my neighbors, refreshing, wicked, <lb />real <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Ever the old inexplicable query&#8212;Ever that thorn <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />thumb&#8212;that breath of itches and thirsts <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Ever the vexer's <hi rend="italic">hoot! hoot!</hi> till we find where the
                        <lb />sly one hides, and bring him forth; </l>
                    <l>Ever love&#8212;Ever the sobbing liquid of life <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Ever the bandage under the chin&#8212;Ever the tressels <lb />of death.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf049r" type="recto" n="89" facs="nyp.00015.97" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="282">
                    <l>Here and there, with dimes on the eyes walking,</l>
                    <l>To feed the greed of the belly, the brains liberally <lb />spooning, </l>
                    <l>Tickets buying, taking, selling, but in to the feast <lb />never once going, </l>
                    <l>Many sweating, ploughing, thrashing, and then the <lb />chaff for payment
                        receiving, </l>
                    <l>A few idly owning, and they the wheat continually <lb />claiming. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="283">
                    <l>This is the city, and I am one of the citizens <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Whatever interests the rest interests me&#8212;politics, <lb />markets,
                        newspapers, schools, </l>
                    <l>Benevolent societies, improvements, banks, tariffs, <lb />steamships,
                        factories, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>stocks,
                        stores, real estate, <lb />and personal estate. </l>
                </lg>
                <!-- Whitman has indicated here that he intended to create a single stanza out of 284, rejected in 1867.  -->
                <lg type="linegroup" n="284">
                    <l><del type="overstrike">They who piddle and patter</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">The little <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">things</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">beings</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">plentiful
                                    mannikins</add>
                            </subst> skipping around</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">here</del> in collars and tailed
                            <lb />coats&#8212;<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>I am aware who they are&#8212;<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">(</add>they are not <add type="insertion"
                            place="marginright">actually</add><lb />worms or fleas.<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="285">
                    <l>I acknowledge the duplicates of myself&#8212;the weakest <lb />and
                        shallowest is deathless with me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>What I do and say, the same waits for them <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Every thought that flounders in me, the same <choice>
                            <orig>floun-<lb />ders</orig>
                            <reg>flounders<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> in them. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="286">
                    <l>I know perfectly well my own egotism <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I know my omnivorous <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">words</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">book,</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">lines</add>
                        </subst>, and cannot say any <lb />less <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And would fetch you, whoever you are, flush with <lb />myself. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf049v" type="verso" n="90" facs="nyp.00015.98" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="287">
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>My words are words of <del type="overstrike">a</del> questioning, and to
                            indicate <lb />reality and motive power: </l>
                    </del>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>No words of routine are <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">mine</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">here</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">mine,</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>But abruptly to question, to leap <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">b<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                            </del> beyond, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">that I
                                nearer</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">yet</del> bring <del type="overstrike">much
                                nearer.</del></l>
                    </add>
                    <l>This printed and bound book<add type="insertion" place="supralinear">may be
                            something&#8212;</add>&#8212;but the printer, and <lb />the
                        printing-office boy? </l>
                    <l>The well-taken photographs&#8212;but your wife or friend <lb />close and
                        solid in your arms? </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">The fleet of ships of the line, and all the modern
                            <lb />improvements&#8212;</del><add type="insertion"
                            place="margintop">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">The <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">black</add> ship mailed with iron, <del
                                type="overstrike">with</del>
                            <add type="insertion">her</add> mighty guns in her
                            turrets&#8212;</add>but the <del type="overstrike">craft and pluck
                            of the</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">pluck of the</add>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">admiral?</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">captain<del type="overstrike">?</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#38; <del type="overstrike"
                                    >crew?</del></add>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">engineers?</add></add>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">In the house,</add> The dishes and
                        fare and furniture&#8212;but the host and <lb />hostess, and the look
                        out of their eyes? </l>
                    <l>The sky up there&#8212;yet here, or next door, or across <lb />the way? </l>
                    <l>The saints and sages in history&#8212;but you yourself?</l>
                    <l>Sermons, creeds, theology&#8212;but the <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">fathomless</add> human brain <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">?</add>
                        </subst><lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182; </add>and what
                        is reason? and what is love? and what <lb />is life? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="288">
                    <l>I do not despise you, priests <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst><del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;I look back <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="supralinear">acceptively</add> over all
                                &#38; complain not,</add>
                        </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>My faith is the greatest of faiths, and the least of <lb />faiths, </l>
                    <l>Enclosing <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">all</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">your</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> worship ancient and modern, and all <lb />between ancient and
                        modern <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Believing I shall come again upon the earth after <lb />five thousand years, </l>
                    <l>Waiting responses from oracles, honoring the Gods, <lb />saluting the sun, </l>
                    <l>Making a fetish of the first rock or stump, pow<del type="overstrike"
                        >w</del>owing <lb />with sticks in the circle of obis, </l>
                    <l>Helping the lama or brahmin as he trims the lamps <lb />of the idols, </l>
                    <l>Dancing yet through the streets in a phallic <choice>
                            <orig>pro-<lb />cession</orig>
                            <reg>procession<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>rapt and austere in the woods, a <lb />gymnosophist, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf050r" type="recto" n="91" facs="nyp.00015.99" />
                    <l>Drinking mead from the skull-cup&#8212;to Shastas and <lb />Vedas
                        admirant&#8212;minding the Koran, </l>
                    <l>Walking the teokallis, spotted with gore from the <lb />stone and knife,
                        beating the serpent-skin drum, </l>
                    <l>Accepting the Gospels&#8212;accepting him that was <lb />crucified,
                        knowing assuredly that he is divine, </l>
                    <l>To the mass kneeling, or the puritan's prayer rising, <lb />or sitting
                        patiently in a pew, </l>
                    <l>Ranting and frothing in my insane crisis, or waiting <lb />dead-like till my
                        spirit arouses me, </l>
                    <l>Looking forth on pavement and land, or outside of <lb />pavement and land, </l>
                    <l>Belonging to the winders of the circuit of circuits.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="289">
                    <l>One of that centripetal and centrifugal gang, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add>I turn <lb />and talk like a man leaving
                        charges before a <lb />journey. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="290">
                    <l>Down-hearted doubters, dull and excluded,</l>
                    <l>Frivolous, sullen, moping, angry, affected, <choice>
                            <orig>disheart-<lb />en</orig>
                            <reg>disheartened<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">'</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d, atheistical, </l>
                    <l>I know every one of you&#8212;I know the <del type="overstrike"
                            >unspoken</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">interrogatories,</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline"><del type="overstrike">untold,
                                &#182; I know the</del> sea of despair &#38; unbelief.</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">By experience I know them.</del>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="291">
                    <l>How the flukes splash!</l>
                    <l>How they contort, rapid as lightning, with spasms, <lb />and spouts of blood!
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="292">
                    <l>Be at peace, bloody flukes of doubters and sullen <lb />mopers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">listen to me,</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>I take my place among you as much as among any <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">I teach that</add>
                        </del> The past is the push of you, me, all, precisely the <lb />same <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf050v" type="verso" n="92" facs="nyp.00015.100" />
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike"><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">And
                                that</add> Day and night are for you, me, all <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></del>
                    </l>
                    <l>And what is yet untried and afterward is for you, <lb />me, all, precisely
                        the same. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="293">
                    <l>I do not know what is untried and afterward,</l>
                    <l>But I know it <del type="overstrike">is sure,</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="infralinear"><del type="overstrike">and</del>
                            will in its turn prove <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">alive</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">entirely</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">and</del> sufficient &#38; cannot fail.</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">alive, sufficient.</del></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="294">
                    <l>Each who passes is considered&#8212; <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">E</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">e</add>
                        </subst>ach who stops is <lb />considered&#8212; <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">N</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">n</add>
                        </subst>ot a single one can it fail. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="295">
                    <l>It cannot fail the young man who died and was <lb />buried, </l>
                    <l>Nor the young woman who died and was put by his <lb />side, </l>
                    <l>Nor the little child that peeped in at the door, and <lb />then drew back,
                        and was never seen again, </l>
                    <l>Nor the old man who has lived without purpose, and <lb />feels it with
                        bitterness worse than gall, </l>
                    <l>Nor him in the poor-house, tubercled by rum and <lb />the bad disorder, </l>
                    <l>Nor the numberless slaughter <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d and wreck <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                        </subst>&#8212;nor <lb />the brutish koboo called the ordure of
                        humanity, </l>
                    <l>Nor the sacs merely floating with open mouths for <lb />food to slip in, </l>
                    <l>Nor anything in the earth, or down in the oldest <lb />graves of the earth, </l>
                    <l>Nor anything in the myriads of spheres&#8212;nor one of <lb />the myriads
                        of myriads that inhabit them, </l>
                    <l>Nor the present&#8212;nor the least wisp that is known.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="296">
                    <l>It is time to explain myself&#8212;Let us stand up.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="297">
                    <l>What is known I strip away <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I launch all men and women forward with me into <lb /><hi rend="smallcaps"
                            >THE</hi> U<hi rend="smallcaps">NKNOWN</hi>.
                        <!-- how do I remove small caps? --></l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf051r" type="recto" n="93" facs="nyp.00015.101" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="298">
                    <l>The clock indicates the moment&#8212;but what does <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">E</add>
                        </subst>ternity indicate? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="299">
                    <l>We have thus far exhausted trillions of winters and <lb />summers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>There are trillions ahead, and trillions ahead of them.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="300">
                    <l>Births have brought us richness and variety <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>And other births will bring us richness and variety.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="301">
                    <l>I do not call one greater and one smaller <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>That which fills its period and place is equal to any.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="302">
                    <l>Were mankind murderous or jealous upon you, my <lb />brother, my sister? </l>
                    <l>I am sorry for you&#8212;they are not murderous or <choice>
                            <orig>jeal-<lb />ous</orig>
                            <reg>jealous<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> upon me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>All has been gentle with
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>(What have I to do with lamentation?)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="303">
                    <l>I am an acme of things accomplish <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                        </subst>, and I an <lb />encloser of things to be. </l>
                </lg>
                <del type="overstrike">
                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">God and man every day embrace
                        me&#8212;</add>
                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="304">
                    <l>My feet strike an apex of the apices of the stairs <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>On every step bunches of ages, and larger bunches <lb />between the steps <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>All below duly travel <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">le</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="infralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d, and still I mount and mount.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="305">
                    <l>Rise after rise bow the phantoms behind me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Afar down I see the huge first Nothing&#8212;I know I <lb />was even
                        there <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I waited unseen and always, and slept through the <lb />lethargic mist, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf051v" type="verso" n="94" facs="nyp.00015.102" />
                    <l>And took my time, and took no hurt from the fetid <lb />carbon. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="306">
                    <l>Long I was hugg <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d close&#8212;long and long.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="307">
                    <l>Immense have been the preparations for me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Faithful and friendly the arms that have help <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst> me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="308">
                    <l>Cycles ferried my cradle, rowing and rowing like <lb />cheerful boatmen <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>For room to me stars kept aside in their own rings <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>They sent influences to look after what was to <lb />hold me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="309">
                    <l>Before I was born out of my mother, generations <lb />guided me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>My embryo has never been torpid&#8212;nothing could <lb />overlay it.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="310">
                    <l>For it the nebula cohered to an orb <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The long slow strata piled to rest it on <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Vast vegetables gave it sustenance <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Monstrous sauroids transported it in their mouths, <lb />and deposited it
                        with care. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="311">
                    <l>All forces have been steadily employ <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d to complete <lb />and delight me, </l>
                    <l>Now <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">on this spot</add> I stand <del
                            type="overstrike">on this spot</del> with my <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">robust</add>Soul.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="312">
                    <l>O span of youth! Ever-push <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                        </subst> elasticity!</l>
                    <l>O manhood, balanced, florid, and full.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="313">
                    <l>My lovers suffocate me!</l>
                    <l>Crowding my lips, thick in the pores of my skin <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Jostling me through streets and public halls&#8212; <lb />coming naked to
                        me at night <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf052r" type="recto" n="95" facs="nyp.00015.103" />
                    <l>Crying by day <hi rend="italic">Ahoy!</hi> from the rocks of the river
                        <lb />&#8212;swinging and chirping over my head, </l>
                    <l>Calling my name from flower-beds, vines, tangled <lb />under-brush, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="hashmark">Or while I swim in the bath, or drink from the pump
                            <lb />at the corner<del type="overstrike">&#8212;</del><add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>or the curtain is
                            down at the <lb />opera, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>or I glimpse at a woman's face in the
                            <lb />railroad car <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Lighting on every moment of my life,</l>
                    <l>Bussing my body with soft balsamic busses,</l>
                    <l>Noiselessly passing handfuls out of their hearts, and <lb />giving them to be
                        mine. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="314">
                    <l>Old age superbly rising! O welcome, ineffable grace <lb />of dying days! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="315">
                    <l>Every condition promulges not only itself&#8212;it <choice>
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                        </choice> what grows after and out of itself <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And the dark hush promulges as much as any.</l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="316">
                    <l>I open my scuttle at night and see the far-sprinkled <lb />systems, </l>
                    <l>And all I see, multiplied as high as I can cipher, edge <lb />but the rim of
                        the farther systems. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="317">
                    <l>Wider and wider they spread, expanding, always <lb />expanding, </l>
                    <l>Outward, outward, and forever outward.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="318">
                    <l>My sun has his sun, and round him obediently <lb />wheels <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>He joins with his partners a group of superior circuit <subst>
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                        </subst></l>
                    <l>And greater sets follow, making specks of the greatest <lb />inside them.
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                <pb xml:id="leaf052v" type="verso" n="96" facs="nyp.00015.104" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="319">
                    <l>There is no stoppage, and never can be stoppage <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>If I, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">and</add> you, <add
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                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">and</add> all beneath or upon their <choice>
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                            <reg>surfaces<lb /></reg>
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                        <del type="overstrike">and all the palpable life,</del>
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                        </del> were this moment <lb />reduced back to a pallid float, <del
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                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">in the long run <subst>
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                            </subst></del>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">It would not avail&#8212;
                        </add>We should <del type="overstrike">surely</del> bring up again where we
                        now <lb />stand, </l>
                    <l>And <del type="overstrike">as surely</del> go as much farther&#8212;and
                        then farther <lb />and farther. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="320">
                    <l>A few quadrillions of eras, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;
                        </add> a few octillions of cubic <lb />leagues, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182; </add>
                        </del> do not hazard the span, or make it <lb />impatient <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They are but parts&#8212;anything is but a part.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="321">
                    <l>See ever so far, there is limitless space outside <lb />of that <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Count ever so much<add type="insertion" place="marginleft">time,</add>, there
                        is limitless time around <lb />that. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="322">
                    <l>My rendezvous is appointed<del type="overstrike">,</del><add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#8212;;</add><add type="unmarked"
                            place="supralinear">&#8212;it is certain</add></l>
                    <l>The Lord will be there, and wait till I come <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">on lofty terms,</add>
                        </del>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">on
<choice><orig>per-<lb/></orig><reg>perfect<lb/></reg></choice></del>
                        </restore><lb /><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">fect terms.</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">
                        <l>(The great Camerado, the lover true for whom I pine will be there.)</l>
                    </add>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="323">
                    <l>I know I have the best of time and space, and was <lb />never measured, and
                        never will be measured. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="324">
                    <l>I tramp a perpetual journey <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                        >;</unclear>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(come listen all,)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>My signs are a rain-proof coat, good shoes, and a staff <lb />cut from the
                        woods <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>No friend of mine takes his ease in my chair,</l>
                    <l><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                        </del>I have no chair, no church, no philosophy <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>I lead no man to a dinner-table, library, or exchange <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf053r" type="recto" n="97" facs="nyp.00015.105" />
                    <l>But each man and each woman of you I lead upon <lb />a knoll, </l>
                    <l>My left hand hooking you round the waist,</l>
                    <l>My right hand pointing to landscapes of continents, <lb />and a plain public
                        road. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="325">
                    <l>Not I&#8212;not any one else, can travel that road for <lb />you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>You must travel it for yourself.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="326">
                    <l>It is not far&#8212;it is within reach <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Perhaps you have been on it since you were born, <lb />and did not know <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Perhaps it is every where on water and on land.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="327">
                    <l>Shoulder your <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">duds,</del>
                        </restore>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">dear son,</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">comrade <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                                </subst></del>
                        </add>and I will mine, and let us <lb />hasten forth <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Wonderful cities and free nations we shall fetch as <lb />we go. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="328">
                    <l>If you tire, give me both burdens, and rest the chuff <lb />of your hand on
                        my hip, </l>
                    <l>And in due time you shall repay the same service <lb />to me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>For after we start we never lie by again.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="329">
                    <l>This day before dawn I ascended a hill, and look <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />at the crowded heaven, </l>
                    <l>And I said to my Spirit, <hi rend="italic">When we become the</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">enfolders of those orbs, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del> and the pleasure and</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">knowledge of everything in them, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del> shall we be</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">fill <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                            </subst>d and satisfied then?</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>And my Spirit said <hi
                            rend="italic">No, we <add type="insertion" place="marginright">but</add>
                            level that lift, to pass and</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">continue beyond.</hi>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf053v" type="verso" n="98" facs="nyp.00015.106" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="330">
                    <l>You are also asking me questions, and I hear you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I answer that I cannot answer&#8212;you must find out <lb />for yourself.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="331">
                    <l>Sit a while, wayfarer <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Here are biscuits to eat, and here is milk to drink <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>But as soon as you sleep, and renew yourself in <lb />sweet clothes, <del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> I <del
                            type="overstrike">will certainly</del> kiss you with my <lb />good-bye
                        kiss, <add type="insertion" place="inline">&#182;</add> and open the
                        gate for your egress <lb />hence. <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">that you <del type="overstrike"
                                    >will</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">see</del> find <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">a</add> new land.</add>
                        </del></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="332">
                    <l>Long enough have you dream <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d contemptible dreams <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Now I wash the gum from your eyes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>You must habit yourself to the dazzle of the light, <lb />and of every moment
                        of your life. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="333">
                    <l>Long have you timidly waded, holding a plank by <lb />the shore <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Now I will you to be a bold swimmer,</l>
                    <l>To jump off in the midst of the sea, rise again, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add> nod <lb />to me, shout, and laughingly
                        dash with your hair. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="334">
                    <l>I am the teacher of athletes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>He that by me spreads a wider breast than my own, <lb />proves the width of
                        my own <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>He most honors my style who learns under it to <lb />destroy the teacher.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="335">
                    <l>The boy I love, the same becomes a man, not through <lb />derived power, but
                        in his own right, </l>
                    <l>Wicked, rather than virtuous out of conformity or <lb />fear, </l>
                    <l>Fond of his sweetheart, relishing well his steak,</l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf054r" type="recto" n="99" facs="nyp.00015.107" />
                    <l>Unrequited love, or a slight, cutting him worse than <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a wound</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop">the sharp steel</add>
                        </subst>, </l>
                    <l>First rate to ride, to fight, to hit the bull's-eye, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182; </add> to <lb />sail a skiff, to sing a song,
                        or play on the banjo, </l>
                    <l>Preferring scars<del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#38; the rough beard</add>
                        </del>, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">and the beard,</add> and
                        faces pitted with small-pox, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> over <lb />all latherers, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add> and <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">those
                            well tann'd, <del type="overstrike">over</del> to</add> those that keep
                        out of the sun. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="336">
                    <l>I teach straying from me&#8212;yet who can stray from <lb />me? </l>
                    <l>I follow you, whoever you are, from the present <lb />hour <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>My words itch at your ears till you understand <lb />them. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="337">
                    <l>I do not say these things for a dollar, or to fill up <lb />the time while I
                        wait for a boat <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>It is you talking just as much as myself&#8212;I act as <lb />the tongue
                        of you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Tied in your mouth, in mine it begins to be loosen <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="338">
                    <l>I swear I will never again mention love or death <lb />inside a house <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">in <gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                                 /> company, But</add>
                        </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>And I swear I will never translate myself at all, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> only <lb />to him or her <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> who privately stays with me in <lb />the open air. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="339">
                    <l>If you would understand me, go to the heights or <lb />water-shore <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The nearest gnat is an explanation, and a drop or <lb />motion of waves a key <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The maul, the oar, the hand-saw, second my words.</l>
                </lg>
                <del type="overstrike">
                    <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">The soldier camped, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="supralinear">or in battle,</add> or on the march, is <del
                            type="overstrike">mine,</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">my child.</del> mine.</add>
                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="340">
                    <l>No shuttered room or school can commune with me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>But roughs and little children better than they.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf054v" type="verso" n="100" facs="nyp.00015.108" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="341">
                    <l>The young mechanic is close<del type="overstrike">st</del> to me&#8212;he
                        knows me <lb /><del type="overstrike">pretty</del> well <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The woodman, that takes his axe and jug with him, <lb />shall take me with
                        him all day <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The farm-boy, ploughing in the field, feels good at the <lb />sound of my
                        voice <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>In vessels that sail, my words sail&#8212;I go with <choice>
                            <orig>fisher-<lb />men</orig>
                            <reg>fishermen<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and seamen, and love them. </l>
                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">&#182; <l>The soldier camp'd, or in
                            battle, on the march <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">is</add>
                            mine;</l>
                        <l>On the night ere the pending battle many seek me, &#38; I do not fail
                            them</l>
                        <l>On that solemn night, <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">(who
                                knows</add><!-- Golden thinks "who knows of" page 10 --> (it may be
                            last,) <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">not his to <gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" /></add> those that know me seek
                            me</l></add>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="342">
                    <l>My face rubs to the hunter's face, when he lies down <lb />alone in his
                        blanket <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The driver, thinking of me, does not mind the jolt <lb />of his wagon <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The young mother and old mother comprehend me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The girl and the wife rest the needle a moment, and <lb />forget where they
                        are <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>They and all would resume what I have told them.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="343">
                    <l>I have said that the Soul is not more than the <lb />body, </l>
                    <l>And I have said that the body is not more than <lb />the Soul, </l>
                    <l>And nothing, not God, is greater to one than one's <lb />self is. </l>
                    <l>And whoever walks a furlong without sympathy, <lb />walks to his own funeral,
                        dressed in his shroud, </l>
                    <l>And I or you, pocketless of a dime, may purchase <lb />the pick of the earth, </l>
                    <l>And to glance with an eye, or show a bean in its <lb />pod, confounds the
                        learning of all times, </l>
                    <l>And there is no trade or employment but the young <lb />man following it may
                        become a hero, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf055r" type="recto" n="101" facs="nyp.00015.109" />
                    <l>And there is no object so soft but it makes a hub <lb />for the wheel <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d universe, </l>
                    <l>And <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">I say to</add> any man or
                            woman<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">shall</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">must</add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Let your Soul</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">s</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">S</add>
                        </subst>tand cool and <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">supercilious</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="superlinear">composed</add>
                        </subst> before <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a million</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses">all
                                        the</unclear>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <!-- Golden did not
note this; probably not visible page 102) -->
                        </subst> universes. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="344">
                    <l>And I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">call to mankind,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">say,</add>
                        </subst> Be not curious about God <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>For I, who am curious about each, am not curious <lb />about God <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>No array of terms can say how much
                        I am at peace <lb />about God, and about death.<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="345">
                    <l>I hear and behold God in every object, yet <choice>
                            <orig>under-<lb />stand</orig>
                            <reg>understand<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> God not in the least <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Nor do I understand who <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">or what</add>
                        </del> there can be more <choice>
                            <orig>won-<lb />derful</orig>
                            <reg>wonderful<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> than myself. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="346">
                    <l>Why should I wish to see God better than this day?</l>
                    <l>I see <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">something</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> something of God each hour of the twenty-four, <lb />and each
                        moment then <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>In the faces of men and women I see God, and in <lb />my own face in the
                        glass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I find letters from God drop <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ped</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst> in the street&#8212;and <lb />every one is sign <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d by God's name <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And I leave them where they are, for I know that <add type="insertion"
                            place="marginright">wherever I go</add><lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">o</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">O</add>
                        </subst>thers<!-- Golden notes a line break here, which is implied with the capitalization of the "o," but since there is no clear notation for that from Whitman, I have not included it -->
                        will punctually come forever and ever. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="347">
                    <l>And as to you Death, and you bitter hug of mortality, <lb />it is idle to try
                        to alarm me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="348">
                    <l>To his work without flinching the accoucheur comes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I see the elder-hand, pressing, receiving, supporting,</l>
                    <l>I recline by the sills of the exquisite flexible doors, <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#38;</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">A</add>
                        </subst>nd mark the outlet, and mark the relief and <lb />escape. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf055v" type="verso" n="102" facs="nyp.00015.110" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="349">
                    <l>And as to you corpse, I think you are good manure, <lb />but that does not
                        offend me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I smell the white roses sweet-scented and growing <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I reach to the leafy lips&#8212;I reach to the polish <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst><lb />breasts of melons. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="350">
                    <l>And as to you life, I reckon you are the leavings of <lb />many deaths <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>No doubt I have died myself ten
                        thousand times <lb />before.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="351">
                    <l>I hear you whispering there, O stars of heaven <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>O suns! O grass of graves! O perpetual transfers and <lb />promotions! </l>
                    <l>If you do not say anything, how can I say anything?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="352">
                    <l>Of the turbid pool that lies in the autumn forest,</l>
                    <l>Of the moon that descends the steeps of the soughing <lb />twilight, </l>
                    <l>Toss, sparkles of day and dusk! toss on the black <lb />stems that decay in
                        the muck! </l>
                    <l>Toss to the moaning gibberish of the dry limbs.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="353">
                    <l>I ascend from the moon, I ascend from the night <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I perceive <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">of</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">that</add>
                        </subst> the ghastly glimmer <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">is</add>
                        </subst> sunbeams <choice>
                            <orig>re-<lb />flected,</orig>
                            <reg>reflected<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>And debouch to the steady and central from the <lb />offspring great or
                        small. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="354">
                    <l>There is that in me&#8212;I do not know what it is&#8212;but <lb />I
                        know it is in me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="355">
                    <l>Wrench <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> and sweaty&#8212;calm and cool then my body <lb />becomes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I sleep&#8212;I sleep long.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf056r" type="recto" n="103" facs="nyp.00015.111" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="356">
                    <l>I do not know it&#8212;it is without name&#8212;it is a word
                        <lb />unsaid <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>It is not in any dictionary, utterance, symbol.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="357">
                    <l>Something it swings on more than the earth I swing on <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>To it the creation is the friend whose embracing <lb />awakes me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="358">
                    <l>Perhaps I might tell more. Outlines! I plead for my <lb />brothers and
                        sisters. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="359">
                    <l>Do you see, O my brothers and sisters?</l>
                    <l>It is not chaos or death&#8212;it is form, union, plan <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>it <lb />is eternal <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">life</del>
                        </restore><!-- variation from Golden -->
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft"><gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" />t action&#8209;growth</add>
                        </del>&#8212;it is <add type="edit" rend="underline">HAPPINESS.</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="360">
                    <l>The past and present wilt&#8212;I have fill <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d them, <choice>
                            <orig>emp-<lb />tied</orig>
                            <reg>emptied<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> them, </l>
                    <l>And proceed to fill my next fold of the future.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="361">
                    <l>Listener up there! <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">H</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="edit">h</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>ere you! <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">W</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="edit">w</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>hat have you to <lb />confide to me? </l>
                    <l>Look in my face, while I snuff the sidle of evening <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Talk honestly&#8212;no one else hears you, and I stay <lb />only a minute
                        longer. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="362">
                    <l>Do I contradict myself?</l>
                    <l>Very well, then, I contradict myself <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I am large&#8212;I contain multitudes.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="363">
                    <l>I concentrate toward them that are nigh&#8212;I wait on <lb />the
                        door-slab. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="364">
                    <l>Who has done his day's work? Who will soonest be <lb />through with his
                        supper? </l>
                    <l>Who wishes to walk with me?</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf056v" type="verso" n="104" facs="nyp.00015.112" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="365">
                    <l>Will you speak before I am gone? Will you prove <lb />already too late? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="366">
                    <l>The spotted hawk swoops by and accuses me&#8212;he <lb />complains of my
                        gab and my loitering. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="367">
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I too am not a bit
                        tamed&#8212;I too am untranslatable <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I sound my barbaric yawp over the roofs of the world.<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="368">
                    <l>The last scud of day holds back for me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>It flings my likeness, after the rest, and true as any, <lb />on the shadow <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d wilds <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>It coaxes me to the vapor and the dusk.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="369">
                    <l>I depart as air&#8212;I shake my white locks at the <lb />run-away sun <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I effuse my flesh in eddies, and drift it in lacy jags.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="370">
                    <l>I bequeathe myself to the dirt, to grow from the <lb />grass I love <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>If you want me again, look for me under your boot-<lb />soles. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="371">
                    <l>You will hardly know who I am, or what I mean <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>But I shall be good health to you nevertheless,</l>
                    <l>And filter and fibre your blood.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="372">
                    <l>Failing to fetch me at first, keep encouraged <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Missing me one place, search another <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>I stop somewhere waiting for you.</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf057r" type="recto" n="105" facs="nyp.00015.113" />
            <del type="overstrike">
                <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">?Apostroph Democratic</add>
            </del>
            <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="underline">take this piece out
                altogether</note>
            <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="bracketed">tr to drum taps</note>
            <lg type="cluster" xml:id="ppp.01503">
                <relations>
                    <work ref="xxx.00411" />
                </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <del type="overstrike">CHANTS DEMOCRATIC AND NATIVE AMERICAN.</del>
                </head>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="bracketed">&#9757; tr to Drum
                    Taps</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01504">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00422" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Apostroph.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">O brood continental
                                (Apostroph.)</add>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O mater! O fils!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>O brood continental! <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">race of the future!</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>O flowers of the prairies! <anchor xml:id="t16" /></l>
                        <l>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t16">O space boundless! O hum of
                                mighty products!</transpose>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>O you teeming cities! <del type="overstrike">O</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">so</del> invincible, turbulent, <lb />proud! <del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="inline">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                        </del><!-- this is maybe not the best way to illustrate what's happening here.  From Golden: "Heavy erasures obliterate the guideline extending from teh caret following 'proud!'.  Possibly the guideline had joined line 6, below, to line 5, with line 6 later rejected." --></l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O race of the future! O women!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O fathers!</del>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t17">O <del type="overstrike">you</del>
                            men of passion and the storm!</transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O native power only!</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="inline">
                            <gap reason="illegible" />
                            <!-- I just don't understand what is going on here; sWhitman evidently intended some sort of transpose but where? -->
                        </add>
                        <del type="overstrike">O beauty!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O yourself! O God!</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">O divine average!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">O you bearded roughs! O bards!</del>
                        <anchor xml:id="t17" />O all <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">those</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">you</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>those <choice>
                            <orig>slum-<lb />berers!</orig>
                            <reg>slumberers<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">O</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Arouse!</add>
                        </del> arouse! the dawn-bird's throat <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sounds</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">pours</add>
                        </subst> shrill! <del type="overstrike">Do</del>
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">you not hear the cock <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">exultant</add>
                            </del> crowing?</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">O Arouse!</add>
                        </subst> as I <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">far</add>
                        </del> walk'd the beach, I heard the mournful notes <lb />foreboding a
                        tempest <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                <!-- Golden speculates "?I he ?ard    " but I can't make that out -->
                            </add>
                        </del> the low, oft-repeated <lb />shriek of the diver, the long-lived
                            loon<del type="overstrike">;</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">I heard</add>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf057v" type="verso" n="106" facs="nyp.00015.114" />
                    <l><del type="overstrike">O</del> I heard, and yet hear, angry
                        thunder;&#8212;O <del type="overstrike">you</del>
                        <lb />sailors! <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">you</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>O ships! make quick preparation! </l>
                    <l>O from his masterful sweep, the warning cry of the <lb />eagle! </l>
                    <l>(Give way there, all! It is useless! Give up your <lb />spoils;) </l>
                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d12" />
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>O sarcasms! Propositions! (O if the whole world <lb />should prove indeed
                            a sham, a sell!) </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>O I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">believe</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">know</add>
                        </subst> there is nothing real but <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">America</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">the West</add>
                        </subst> and <lb />freedom! </l>
                    <l>O <del type="overstrike">to</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">I will henceforth</add> sternly
                        reject all except <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">the West
                            and</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Democracy!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">freedom!</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike"><add type="insertion" place="marginbot">O <del
                                    type="overstrike">the</del> broad and brawny prairies! I see
                                your shape arising!<del type="overstrike">I see</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">your imperial centre!</del> your p<gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" /></add> I see the <del
                                type="overstrike">imperial</del>
                            <add type="insertion">mother</add> mistress!</del>
                    </l>
                    <del>
                        <l>O imperator<add type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add>! O who dare
                            confront you and me?</l>
                    </del>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O to promulgate our own! O to build for that which
                            <lb />builds for mankind! </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O feuillage! O North! O the slope drained by the
                            <lb />Mexican sea! </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O all, all inseparable&#8212;ages, ages,
                            ages!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O a curse on him that would dissever this Union for
                            <lb />any reason whatever! </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O climates, labors! O good and evil! O death!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>O you strong with iron and wood! O Personality <add type="insertion"
                            place="inline">for me!</add>!</l>
                    <l>O the village or place <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">for me,</add>
                        which has the greatest man or <lb />woman! <del type="overstrike">even if it
                            be only a few ragged huts;</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>O the city where women walk in public processions in <lb />the streets, the
                        same as the men; </l>
                    <l>O a wan and terrible emblem, by me adopted!</l>
                    <l>O shapes arising! shapes of the future centuries!</l>
                    <l>O muscle and pluck forever for me!</l>
                    <l>O workmen and workwomen forever for me!</l>
                    <l>O farmers and sailors! O drivers of horses forever <lb />for me! </l>
                    <l>O I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">will make</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">have made</add>
                        </subst> the new bardic list of trades and tools!</l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O you coarse and wilful! I love you!</del>
                    </l>
                    <anchor xml:id="d12" />
                    <pb xml:id="leaf058r" type="recto" n="107" facs="nyp.00015.115" />
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O South! O longings for my dear home! O soft and
                            <lb />sunny airs! </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O pensive! O I must return where the palm grows
                            <lb />and the mocking-bird sings, or else I die! </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O equality! O organic compacts! I am come to be
                            <lb />your born poet! </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O whirl, contest, sounding and resounding! I am
                            <lb />your poet, because I am part of you; </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O days by-gone! <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">E</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="edit">e</add>
                            </subst>nthusiasts! <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">A</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="edit">a</add>
                            </subst>ntecedents! <add type="unmarked" place="inline"><del
                                    type="overstrike">the</del> wars!</add></del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O vast preparations for These States! O years!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">for</add>
                            </del> what is now being sent forward <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">by These States</add>
                            </del> thousands of years <lb /><del type="overstrike">to come!</del>
                        </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O mediums! O to teach! to convey the invisible
                            faith!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">To promulge real things! to journey through all The
                            <lb />States! </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O creation! O to-day! O laws! O unmitigated
                            <lb />adoration! </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>O <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">for</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">henceforth</add>
                        </subst> mightier broods of orators, artists, and singers!</l>
                    <l>O <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">for</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">henceforth</add>
                        </subst> native songs! <add type="insertion" place="inline">farmer's</add>
                        carpenter's, boatman's, <choice>
                            <orig>plough-<lb />man's</orig>
                            <reg>ploughman<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> songs! <del type="overstrike">shoemaker's songs!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">O haughtiest growth of time!</del>
                        <anchor xml:id="t18" /> O free and extatic!</l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t19">O what I, here, preparing, warble
                            for!</transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t18">O you hastening light!</transpose>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginright">&#182;</add> O the sun of the
                        world will <lb />ascend, dazzling, and take his height&#8212;and you
                        <lb />too will ascend; </l>
                    <l>O so amazing and <del type="overstrike">so</del> broad! up there resplendent,
                        <lb />darting and burning; </l>
                    <l>O <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">vision</add> prophetic<del
                            type="overstrike">! O vision</del> stagger <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d with weight of light! <lb />with pouring glories! </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O copious! O hitherto unequalled!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>O Libertad! <del type="overstrike">O compact!</del> O union impossible <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">really</add> to <lb />dissever! </l>
                    <l>O my Soul! O lips becoming tremulous, powerless!</l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O centuries, centuries yet ahead!</del>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf058v" type="verso" n="108" facs="nyp.00015.116" />
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>O voices of <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">greater</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                            >competent</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">orators!</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">bards</add>
                                </subst>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><del type="overstrike">of
                                        Missouri!</del> Californian!</add> I pause&#8212;I
                                listen for <lb />you! </l>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">O</del> you <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">States!</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">inland</add>
                                </subst> Cities<del type="overstrike">! defiant of all outside
                                    authority!</del>
                                <lb />I spring <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">at once</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">forward</add>
                                </subst> into your arms! <del type="overstrike">you I most</del>
                                <lb /><del type="overstrike">love!</del>
                            </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                    <l>(Let my tongue wag on <del type="overstrike">here,</del>
                                        foolish, <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                            >inspired</add>
                                        <del type="overstrike">intoxicated</del>;)</l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">O</del> you grand Presidentiads <add
                                    type="insertion" place="supralinear">after these wars are
                                    over</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">!</del> I wait for you!</l>
                            <l>New history! New heroes <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                        >&#8212;</add>
                                </subst> I project you!</l>
                            <l>Visions of poets! only you really last! O sweep on! <lb />sweep on! </l>
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike">O Death! O you striding there! O I cannot
                                    yet!</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>O heights! <del type="overstrike">O infinitely</del> too swift and
                                dizzy yet!</l>
                            <l>O purged <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">lumine!</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">and
                                        luminous!</add>
                                </subst>! you threaten me more than I can <lb />stand! </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">(I must not venture&#8212;the ground
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">under my feet</add> menaces me
                            <del type="overstrike">and crumbles</del>, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="supralinear">&#8212;it</add> will not support me,)</add>
                    <l>O present! I return while yet I may to you!</l>
                    <l>O poets to come, I depend upon you!</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01505">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00221" />
                    </relations>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;Pioneers</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">take out &#38; finish for future
                        volume</note>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial"><note type="authorial">&#42;</note>America's
                            song I sing!</head>
                    </add>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear"><del type="overstrike">Am</del>
                            America<add type="unmarked" place="inline">n</add> isolated I sing, <del
                            type="overstrike">against all the remainder of the earth;</del></add>
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                        <delSpan type="pasteover" spanTo="#d13" />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                <head type="main-authorial">1.</head>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <head type="main-authorial">
                                        Many in One<lb/>
                                        E pluribus unum
                                    </head>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">
                            <hi rend="underline">America</hi>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">isolated, I sing</add>
                        </add>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear"><note type="authorial"
                                place="inline">(take in)</note> America, isolated, I sing <del
                                type="erasure">
                                <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                    >significant</unclear>
                            </del></add>
                        <anchor xml:id="d13" />
                        <add type="pasteon" place="over">
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">tr</note>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">Am</del> America<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">n</add> isolated I sing, <del type="overstrike"
                                    >against all the remainder of the earth;</del></l>
                            <l>&#8212;I say that works, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">poems</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">songs</add>
                                </subst>, (whether <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">made</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">born</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">made</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">grown</add> here or
                                imported)</l>
                            <l><unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="low" resp="ses"
                                    >W</unclear>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">That breathe</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">Out
                                            of</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Made
                                                <restore>in</restore><!-- there is no rend for this restore because none of the available attributes fit this context --></add>
                                    </del>
                                    <del seq="7" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="6" type="insertion" place="marginleft"
                                            >Breathing</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="8" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Conceiv'd</add>
                                </subst> in the spirit of other lands, are so much poison to These
                                States.</l>
                        </add>
                    </transpose>
                    <add type="pasteon" place="over">
                        <!-- this pasteon is actually on the top of 109 -->
                        <pb facs="nyp.00015.124" xml:id="leaf060p01r" type="pasteover_recto" />
                        <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">&#42;let this
                            commence</note>
                        <l>As I wandered the prairies alone at night</l><!-- This first <l> is
functioning as a <head>, but that is not allowed in this context. -->
                        <l>As I wandered the Prairies alone at night,</l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <l>(As I mused of these mighty days &#38; of peace returned, and the
                                dead that return no more,)</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>A Phantom, gigantic, superb, with stern visage, arrested me,</l>
                        <l><add type="edit" rend="underline">Chant me a poem</add>, it said, <add
                                type="edit" rend="underline">that breathes my native air
                            alone</add>,</l>
                        <l>Chant me a song of <del type="overstrike">Demo</del>
                            <add type="edit" rend="underline">the throes of Democracy</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#182; tr somewhere
                            else</note>
                        <span type="bracketed" xml:id="s7" from="s7" to="s8" />
                        <l>(Democracy, the destined conqueror&#8212;yet treacherous
                            lip&#8209;smiles everywhere,</l>
                        <l>And death and infidelity at every step <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;with wars,
                                    disruptions, <del type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">With</add>
                                    </del> and <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">all</add>
                                    apparent failures.)</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">with</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">And
                                            the</add>
                                    </subst>
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">deepest</add> wounds
                                    in the house of its friends, </add>
                            </del></l>
                        <anchor xml:id="s8" />
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                        <floatingText>
                            <body>
                                <head type="main-derived">Subject for a ballad</head>
                                <p>Subject for a ballad</p>
                                <p>The hand organ in the street</p>
                                <lg>
                                    <l><span type="bracketed" xml:id="s9" from="s9" to="s10" />"Old
                                        John Brown is a mouldering in his grave"<anchor xml:id="s10"
                                         /></l>
                                </lg>
                            </body>
                        </floatingText>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>A <hi rend="smallcaps">NATION</hi>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del> announcing itself, <del type="overstrike">(many in
                            one,)</del></l>
                        <l>I myself make the only growth by which I can be <lb />appreciated, </l>
                        <l>I reject none, accept all, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >then</add>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">M<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />new'd in one,</add>
                            </del> reproduce all in my own <lb />forms<restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">.</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(M<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />)</add>
                            </del></l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>A breed whose <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">testimony is behavior,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">proof is in <del
                                        type="overstrike">content</del> time &#38; deeds</add>
                            </subst>,</l>
                        <l>What we are W<hi rend="smallcaps">E ARE</hi>&#8212;nativity is answer
                            enough <lb />to objections; </l>
                        <l>We wield ourselves as a weapon is wielded,</l>
                        <note type="authorial" rend="circled" place="marginleft">? tr to Pioneers! O
                            Pioneers!</note>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf059r" type="recto" n="109" facs="nyp.00015.117" />
                        <l>We are powerful and tremendous in ourselves,</l>
                        <l>We are executive in ourselves&#8212;We are sufficient <lb />in the
                            variety of ourselves, </l>
                        <l>We are the most beautiful to ourselves, and in <choice>
                                <orig>our-<lb />selves,</orig>
                                <reg>ourselves<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                            <l>We stand self&#8209;poised in the centre <add type="insertion"
                                    >branching thence <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">to</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">over</add>
                                    </subst> the world</add></l>
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">from</del>
                                    <add seq="2" place="over" type="overwrite">From</add>
                                </subst> Missouri, Nebraska, or Kansas, laughing attacks to scorn,
                            </l>
                        </add>
                        <l>Nothing is sinful to us outside of ourselves,</l>
                        <l>Whatever appears, whatever does not appear, we are <lb />beautiful or
                            sinful in ourselves only. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                        <l>&#182;(If we are lost <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">O
                                mother, O sisters dear</add> no victor else has destroy'd us,
                            &#182;it is by ourselves we <del type="overstrike">are lost</del> go
                            down to eternal night)</l>
                        <add type="insertion">
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginright">&#9757;</note>
                        </add>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Have you thought there could be but a single <lb />Supreme? </l>
                        <l><del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                            </del>There can be any number of Supremes <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>One does <lb />not countervail another, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>any more than one <choice>
                                <orig>eye-<lb />sight</orig>
                                <reg>eyesight<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> countervails another, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>or one life <choice>
                                <orig>counter-<lb />vails</orig>
                                <reg>countervails<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> another. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>All is eligible to all,</l>
                        <l>All is for individuals&#8212;All is for you,</l>
                        <l>No condition is prohibited, not God's or any,</l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">If one is lost, you are inevitably lost.</del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="supralinear">?</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out?</note>
                        <span type="bracketed" xml:id="s11" from="s11" to="s12" />
                        <l>All comes by the body&#8212;only health puts you rapport <lb />with
                            the universe. </l>
                        <anchor xml:id="s12" />
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out?</note>
                        <span type="bracketed" xml:id="s13" from="s13" to="s14" />
                        <l>Produce great <add type="edit" rend="smallcaps">persons</add>, the rest
                            follows.</l>
                        <anchor xml:id="s14" />
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">In Caps</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">take in &#42;? America
                        isolated</note>
                    <anchor xml:id="t20" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>How dare <del type="overstrike">a sick man, or an obedient man, write
                                <lb /> poems for The<del type="overstrike">se</del> States?</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">these petty little creatures
                                write poems <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">for
                                    America?</add>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">f</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">F</add>
                                </subst>or our armies, <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the generations following
                                        them</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#38; the
                                        for offspring begotten by them?</add>
                                </subst></add></l>
                        <l>Which is the theory or <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">any
                                existing</add> book that, for <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">our</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">such</add>
                            </subst> purposes, is <lb />not diseased? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial">
                            <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses">&#42;
                                ?</unclear>
                        </note>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>Piety and conformity to them that like!</l>
                        <l>Peace, obesity, allegiance, to them that like!</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf059v" type="verso" n="110" facs="nyp.00015.118" />
                        <l>I am he who tauntingly compels men, women, <lb />nations, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">to</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">Saying</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="marginleft">Crying,</add>
                            </subst> leap from <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">their</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">your</add>
                            </subst> seats and contend <lb />for <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">their</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">your</add>
                            </subst> lives. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>I am he who <del type="overstrike">goes through the</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">walks through the</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">streets</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">West</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">States</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del> with a barbed <lb />tongue, questioning every one I
                                meet&#8212;<del type="overstrike">
<choice><orig>ques-<lb/>tioning</orig><reg>questioning<lb/></reg></choice> you up there now</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">:</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="over">&#8209;
                                    &#182;</add>
                                <!-- G's explanation is quite complicated (see page 110) how can we represent that best? -->
                            </subst> Who are you, that wanted only to be told what you <lb />knew
                            before? </l>
                        <l>Who are you, that wanted only a book to join you in <lb />your nonsense?
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                        <!-- How does G know that W wanted these two lines as a seperate stanza? -->
                        <l>(With pangs &#38; cries as your own O bearer of <add type="unmarked"
                                place="supralinear">many</add> children,</l>
                        <l>This chant all wild to a race of pride I give)</l>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Are you, or</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">O lands!</add>
                            </subst> would you be <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">, better</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">greater &#38;
                                    freer</add>
                            </subst> than all that has <lb /><del type="overstrike">ever</del> been
                            before? </l>
                        <l>If you would be better than all that has ever been <lb />before, come
                            listen to me <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">and not otherwise.</del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>Fear grace&#8212;Fear delicatesse,</l>
                        <l>Fear the mellow sweet, the sucking of honey-juice,</l>
                        <l>Beware the advancing mortal ripening of nature,</l>
                        <l>Beware what precedes the decay of the ruggedness of <lb />states and men.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>Ages, precedents, <del type="overstrike">poems,</del> have long been <choice>
                                <orig>accumu-<lb />lating</orig>
                                <reg>accumulating<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> undirected materials, </l>
                        <l>America brings builders, and brings its own styles.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Mighty</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">The</add>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">bards</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">poets of Asia and
                                    Europe</add>
                            </subst> have done their work, and passed to <lb />other spheres, </l>
                        <l>One work forever remains, the work of surpassing all <lb />they have
                            done. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                        <l>America, curious toward foreign characters, stands by <lb />its own at
                            all hazards, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf060r" type="recto" n="111" facs="nyp.00015.119" />
                        <l>Stands removed, spacious, composite, sound,<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#8212;</add><anchor xml:id="t21" /></l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Sees itself promulger of men and women,</del>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t21">initiates <lb /> the <del
                                    type="overstrike">true</del> use of precedents,</transpose>
                        </l>
                        <l>Does not repel them or the past, or what they have <lb />produced under
                            their forms, &#182;<del type="overstrike">or amid other <choice><orig>pol-<lb/>itics,</orig><reg>politics,<lb/></reg></choice> or amid the idea of
                                castes, or the old <lb /> religions,</del></l>
                        <l>Takes the lesson with calmness, perceives the corpse <lb />slowly borne
                                <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>from the <del type="overstrike">eating and sleeping rooms <lb />
                                of the</del> house, </l>
                        <l>Perceives that it waits a little while in the door&#8212; <lb />that
                            it was fittest for its days, </l>
                        <l>That its life has descended to the stalwart and well-<lb />shaped heir
                            who approaches, </l>
                        <l>And that he shall be fittest for his days.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                        <l>Any period, one nation must lead,</l>
                        <l>One land must be the promise and reliance of the <lb />future. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                        <l>These States are <del type="overstrike">the amplest poem,</del>
                            <del type="erasure"><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">their own
                                    poem <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /> amplest,</add>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">so<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /><unclear
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                        >own</unclear>
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /><unclear
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                        >com</unclear></add>plete</del></l>
                        <l>Here is not merely a nation, but a teeming nation of <lb />nations, </l>
                        <l>Here the doings of men correspond with the <choice>
                                <orig>broad-<lb />cast</orig>
                                <reg>broadcast<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> doings of the day and night, </l>
                        <l>Here is what moves in magnificent masses, careless<del type="overstrike"
                                >ly</del>
                            <lb /><del type="overstrike">faithful</del> of particulars, </l>
                        <l>Here are the roughs, beards, friendliness, <choice>
                                <orig>combative-<lb />ness,</orig>
                                <reg>combativeness<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> the Soul loves, </l>
                        <l>Here the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">flowing trains&#8212;here
                                    the</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">vehement tugs
                                    &#38; trails</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">crowds, equality, <lb /> diversity,</del> the
                            Soul loves. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Race of races,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Land of
                                    lands,</add>
                            </subst> and bards to corroborate!</l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">tr to
                            beginning</note>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                                <l>&#182;America, isolated, I sing, against all the remainder of
                                    the earth,</l>
                                <l>&#182;I say that works, <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">poems</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">songs</add>
                                    </subst>, <del type="overstrike">whether made here or
                                        imported</del>, breathing the spirit of other lands</l>
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Breathing the spirit of other
                                            lands</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Whether
                                            made here or imported</add>
                                    </subst>, are so much poison to These States </l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf060v" type="verso" n="112" facs="nyp.00015.120" />
                        <l>Of them, standing among them, one<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">from Paumanok
                                    coming,</add>
                            </del> lifts to the light <lb /><del type="overstrike"><restore
                                    rend="erased">his</restore> west-bred <restore rend="erased"
                                    >face,</restore></del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">from Paumanok, his
                                    face,</add>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>To him the hereditary countenance bequeathed, both <lb />mother's and
                            father's, </l>
                        <l>His first parts substances, earth, water, animals, trees,</l>
                        <l>Built of the common stock, having room for far and <lb />near, </l>
                        <l>Used to dispense with other lands, incarnating this <lb />land, </l>
                        <l>Attracting it body and Soul to himself, hanging on its <lb />neck with
                            incomparable love, </l>
                        <l>Plunging his semitic muscle into its merits and <lb />demerits, </l>
                        <l>Making its <del type="overstrike">geography,</del> cities, beginnings,
                            events, <lb /><del type="overstrike">glories, defections,</del>
                            diversities, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">wars,</add>vocal
                            in him, </l>
                        <l>Making its rivers, lakes, bays, embouchure in him,</l>
                        <l>Mississippi with yearly freshets and changing chutes <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="3" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                </restore>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst><del type="overstrike">Missouri,</del> Columbia, <del
                                type="overstrike">Ohio,</del> Niagara, Hudson, <lb />spending
                            themselves lovingly in him, </l>
                        <l>If the Atlantic coast stretch, or the Pacific coast <lb />stretch, he
                            stretching with them north or south, </l>
                        <l>Spanning between them east and west, and touching <lb />whatever is
                            between them, </l>
                        <l>Growths growing from him to offset the growth of <lb />pine, cedar,
                            hemlock, live-oak, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>locust, <choice>
                                <orig>chest-<lb />nut,</orig>
                                <reg>chestnut<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <del type="overstrike">cypress,</del> hickory, <del type="overstrike"
                                >lime-tree,</del> cotton-wood, <lb /><del type="overstrike"
                                >tulip-tree, cactus, tamarind,</del> orange, magnolia, <lb /><del
                                type="overstrike">persimmon,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Tangles as tangled in him as any cane-brake or <lb />swamp, <note
                                type="editorial">Here, Whitman erased a line initially inteded to
                                join the two lines together</note>
                        </l>
                        <l>He likening <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">sides and peaks of mountains,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>forests <lb />coated with <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">northern</add> transparent ice, <del
                                type="overstrike">and icicles hanging <lb /> from the boughs,</del>
                        </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf061r" type="recto" n="113" facs="nyp.00015.121" />
                        <l>Off him pasturage sweet and natural as savanna, <lb />upland, prairie, </l>
                        <l>Through him flights, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">songs,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">whirls,</add>
                            </subst> screams, answering those <lb />of the <del type="overstrike"
                                >wild-pigeon, coot,</del> fish-hawk,<del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">qua-bird</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                    >mocking&#8209;bird</add>
                            </subst>, <lb /><del type="overstrike">mocking-bird, condor,</del>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="3" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">night-heron</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="4" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#38;</add> eagle; </l>
                        <l>His spirit surrounding his country's spirit, unclosed <lb />to good and
                            evil, </l>
                        <l>Surrounding the essences of real things, old times <lb />and present
                            times, </l>
                        <l>Surrounding just found shores, islands, tribes of red <lb />aborigines, </l>
                        <l>Weather-beaten vessels, landings, settlements, <del type="overstrike">the
                                <lb /> rapid</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">embryo</add> stature and
                            muscle, </l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>The <del type="overstrike">haughty</del> defiance <del
                                    type="overstrike">of the Year 1</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">sent to King George,
                                    the</add>&#8212;war, peace, <lb />the formation of the
                                Constitution, </l>
                            <l>The <del type="overstrike">separate</del> States, <add
                                    type="insertion" place="marginright">distinct, yet inevitably
                                    one,&#8212;</add> the simple, elastic scheme, the
                                <lb />immigrants, </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <l>The Union, always swarming with blatherers, and
                                            <lb />always calm and impregnable, </l>
                                    </del>
                                </restore>
                            </del>
                        </del>
                        <l>The unsurveyed interior, log-houses, clearings, wild <lb />animals,
                            hunters, trappers; </l>
                        <l>Surrounding the multiform agriculture, mines, <choice>
                                <orig>tem-<lb />perature,</orig>
                                <reg>temperature<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> the gestation of new States, </l>
                        <l>Congress convening every Twelfth Month, the <choice>
                                <orig>mem-<lb />bers</orig>
                                <reg>members<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> duly coming up from the uttermost parts; </l>
                        <l>Surrounding the noble character of mechanics and <lb />farmers,
                            especially the young men, </l>
                        <l>Responding their manners, speech, dress, friendships <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>the gait they have of persons who never knew <lb />how it felt
                            to stand in the presence of superiors, </l>
                        <l>The freshness and candor of their physiognomy, the <lb />copiousness and
                            decision of their phrenology, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf061v" type="verso" n="114" facs="nyp.00015.122" />
                        <l>The picturesque looseness of their carriage, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del><del type="overstrike">their <lb /> deathless attachment to
                                freedom,</del> their fierceness <lb />when wronged, </l>
                        <l>The fluency of their speech, their delight in music, <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>their curiosity, good
                            temper, and <choice><orig>open-handed-<lb
                                />ness</orig><reg>open-handedness<lb /></reg></choice>&#8212;the whole composite make, </l>
                        <l>The prevailing ardor and enterprise, the large <choice>
                                <orig>am-<lb />ativeness,</orig>
                                <reg>amativeness<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>The perfect equality of the female with the male, the <lb />fluid
                            movement of the population, </l>
                        <l>The superior marine, free commerce, fisheries, <lb />whaling,
                            gold-digging, </l>
                        <l>Wharf-hemmed cities, railroad and steamboat lines, <lb />intersecting all
                            points, </l>
                        <l>Factories, mercantile life, labor-saving machinery, the <lb />north-east,
                            north-west, south-west, </l>
                        <l>Manhattan firemen, the Yankee swap, southern <choice>
                                <orig>plan-<lb />tation</orig>
                                <reg>plantation<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> life, </l>
                        <l>Slavery, the <del type="overstrike">tremulous spreading of hands to
                                shelter <lb /> it&#8212;</del>
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#9757;</note>
                            <add type="insertion" place="margintop">murderous, treacherous, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">uprising</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                        >conspiracy</add>
                                </subst> to raise it upon our <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="erasure"><gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                                         />t</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">raise it upon</add>
                                </subst>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">our ruins,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">the ruins of al<gap
                                            reason="illegible" /><note type="editorial">The
                                            remainder of the line is obscured by a paste-over that
                                            Whitman affixed to the upper right hand corner of page
                                            114. The paste-over does not intend to delete the words
                                            underneath it.</note></add>
                                </subst>
                            </add>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">the stern opposition to it, which ceases only
                                <lb /> when it ceases.</del><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">O</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">o</add>
                                </subst>n &#38; on to <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">T</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">t</add>
                                </subst>he grapple with it, (<del type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                    <unclear reason="illegible" cert="high" resp="ses">the one
                                        the</unclear> Scorning</add> assassin. then its life or ours
                                be the tug&#8212;&#38; respite no more.</add></l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                    <anchor xml:id="a2" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                        <l>For these and the like, their own voices! For these, <lb />space ahead! </l>
                        <l>Others take finish, but the Republic is ever <choice>
                                <orig>con-<lb />structive,</orig>
                                <reg>constructive<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and ever keeps vista; </l>
                        <l>Others adorn the past&#8212;but you, O, days of the <lb />present, I
                            adorn you! </l>
                        <l>O days of the future, I believe in you! <add type="insertion"
                                place="marginbot">I isolate myself for your sake!</add></l>
                        <l>O America, because you build for mankind, I build <lb />for you! </l>
                        <l>O well-beloved stone-cutters! I lead them who plan <lb />with decision
                            and science, </l>
                        <addSpan spanTo="#a2" type="pasteon" place="over"/>
                            <note type="authorial">&#42;</note>
                            <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Lo!</add>High toward
                                heaven, this day,</l>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">O</del> Libertad! from the Conqueress' field
                                return'd,</l>
                            <l>I mark the new aureola around your head,</l>
                            <l>No more of soft astral<del type="overstrike">,</del>&#8212;but
                                dazzling &#38; fierce,</l>
                            <l>With war's flames, &#38; the <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">lambent</add> lightning's <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">flash,</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                            >darts;</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">playing;</add>
                                </subst></l>
                            <l>And your port immovable where you stand;</l>
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">And</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">With</add>
                                </subst> still the inextinguishable glance, &#38; the clench'd
                                &#38; lifted fist;</l>
                            <l>And your foot on the neck of the one, the <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">last great</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">latest &#38;
                                        mightiest</add>
                                </del> Scorner, utterly crush'd <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">before</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked">beneath</add>
                                </subst>you;</l>
                            <l>The menacing, arrogant one, that strode &#38; advanced with his
                                senseless scorn, bearing the murderous knife;</l>
                            <l>Lo! the <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">great</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">wide</add>
                                </subst> swelling one, the <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">scorner,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">braggart</add>
                                </subst> that would yesterday do so <del type="overstrike">so</del>
                                much!</l>
                            <l>Already a carrion dead, &#38; <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">damned</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">despised</add>
                                    <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">damned</add>
                                </subst> of all the earth&#8212;an offal rank,</l>
                            <l>This day to the dunghill maggots spurn'd.</l>
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                            <pb facs="nyp.00015.131" xml:id="leaf061p01v" type="pasteover_verso" />
                            <note type="editorial">This is from the final 11 lines of the Drum-Taps
                                poem, "Come Up from the Fields Father"</note>
                            <floatingText>
                                <body>
                                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d30"/>
                                        <head type="main-derived">The little sisters huddle
                                            around,</head>
                                        <lg type="linegroup">
                                            <l>The little sisters huddle around, speechless
                                                &#38; dismayed,)</l>
                                            <l rend="underline">See, dearest mother, the letter<gap
                                                  reason="cut away" /><lb /> Pete will soon be
                                                better.</l>
                                        </lg>
                                        <lg type="linegroup">
                                            <l>Alas, poor boy, he will never be be<gap
                                                  reason="cut away" /><lb /> (nor may&#8209;be
                                                needs to be bette<gap reason="cut away" /><lb />
                                                that brave &#38; simple soul,)</l>
                                            <l>While they stand at home at t<gap reason="cut away"
                                                 /><lb /> door, he is dead already,</l>
                                            <l>The only son is dead.</l>
                                        </lg>
                                        <lg type="linegroup">
                                            <l>But the mother needs to be better,</l>
                                            <l>She, with thin form, presently dre<gap
                                                  reason="cut away" /><lb /> in black</l>
                                            <l>By day her meals untouch'd&#8212;<gap
                                                  reason="cut away" /><lb /> at night fitfully
                                                sleeping, often<lb /> waking,</l>
                                            <l>In the midnight waking, weeping<gap reason="cut away"
                                                 /><lb /> with one deep longing,</l>
                                            <l>O that she might withdraw unnoti<gap
                                                  reason="cut away" /><lb /> &#8212;silent from
                                                life escape &#38; withdr<gap reason="cut away"
                                                 /></l>
                                            <l>To follow, to seek, to be with her<lb /> dear absent
                                                son</l>
                                        </lg>
                                    <anchor xml:id="d30"/>
                                </body>
                            </floatingText>
                        
                        <pb xml:id="leaf062r" type="recto" n="115" facs="nyp.00015.123" />
                        <note type="authorial" place="margintop">&#42;</note>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t22">
                            <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                <l>(<del type="overstrike">O</del> soul<del type="overstrike"
                                        >s</del></l>
                                <l><del type="overstrike">O</del>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">vision</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">eyes</add>
                                    </subst>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">that pierces deep</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">to pierce
                                            the deepes deeps,</add>
                                    </subst> &#38; swee <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">ps</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">p</add>
                                    </subst> the world!</l>
                                <l><del type="overstrike">O</del> mother <del type="overstrike"
                                        >that</del> prolific &#38; teeming <add type="insertion"
                                        place="supralinear">as all <del type="overstrike">the
                                            rest</del> besides</add>&#8212;yet barren,
                                    barren!)</l>
                            </add>
                        </transpose>
                        <l>I lead the present with friendly hand toward the <lb />future. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                        <l>Bravas to <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">States</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">all</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">whose</del> semitic impulses send<add
                                type="unmarked" place="supralinear">ing</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                    <choice><orig>whole-<lb/>some</orig><reg>wholesome<lb/></reg></choice>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">strong</add>
                            </subst><lb /> some children to the next age! </l>
                        <l>But damn that which spends itself on flaunters and <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">scrofulous</add><lb />dalliers, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>with no thought of
                            the stain, pains, <lb /><del type="overstrike">dismay,</del> feebleness,
                            it is bequeathing. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <l>I heard the voice arising, demanding bards,</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>By <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">great bards only can series of
                                    peoples and States</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">the greatest of
                                    them only can <del type="overstrike">peoples</del> men</add>
                            </subst>
                            <lb />be fused into the compact organism of <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">one</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">a</add>
                            </subst>
                            <lb />nation. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                        <l>To hold <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">men</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">folks</add>
                            </subst> together by paper and seal, or by <choice>
                                <orig>com-<lb />pulsion,</orig>
                                <reg>compulsion<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> is no account, </l>
                        <l>That only holds <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">men</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">folks</add>
                            </subst> together which <add type="insertion">aggregates all in a</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">is</del> living <choice>
                                <orig>prin-<lb />ciple</orig>
                                <reg>principles<lb /></reg>
                            </choice><del type="overstrike">s</del>, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>as the hold of the limbs of the body,
                            or <lb />the fibres of plants. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <anchor xml:id="t22" />
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                            <l>Of all races and eras, These States, with veins full <lb />of
                                poetical stuff, most need <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">poets</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">bards</add>
                                </subst>, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and
                                are <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">surely</add>to have
                                <lb />the greatest, and use them the greatest, </l>
                            <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Their Presidents shall not
                                be their common referee <lb />so much as their poets shall.<add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Of mankind,</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                            </subst>he <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">American</add>
                            </del> poet <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">of the New
                                World</add> is the equable man,</l>
                        <l>Not in him, but off from him, things are grotesque, <lb />eccentric, fail
                            of their full returns, </l>
                        <l>Nothing out of its place is good, nothing in its place <lb />is bad, </l>
                        <l>He bestows on every object or quality its fit <choice>
                                <orig>propor-<lb />tions,</orig>
                                <reg>proportions<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> neither more nor less, </l>
                        <l>He is the arbiter of the diverse, he is the key,</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf062v" type="verso" n="116" facs="nyp.00015.124" />
                        <l>He is the equalizer of his age and land,</l>
                        <l>He supplies what wants supplying&#8212;he checks what <lb />wants
                            checking, </l>
                        <l>In peace, out of him speaks the spirit of peace, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>large, <lb />rich, thrifty, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>building populous towns,<del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>
                            <choice>
                                <orig>encour-<lb />aging</orig>
                                <reg>encouraging<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> agriculture, arts, commerce, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>lighting the <lb />study of man, the
                            Soul, health, immortality, <lb />government <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>In war, he is the best backer of the war&#8212;he fetches
                            <lb />artillery as good as the engineer's <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst><add type="insertion" place="marginright">Be not deceived,</add>
                            he can make <lb />every word he speaks draw blood; </l>
                        <l>The years straying toward infidelity, he withholds by <lb />his steady
                            faith, </l>
                        <l>He is no arguer, he is judgment, <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(his decision final,</add>
                            </del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;nature accepts him
                                    <del type="overstrike">over the lawyer's,)</del></add></l>
                        <l>He judges not as the judge judges, but as the sun <lb />falling round a
                            helpless thing; </l>
                        <l>As he sees the farthest he has the most faith,</l>
                        <l>His thoughts are the hymns of the praise of things,</l>
                        <l>In the dispute on God and eternity he is silent,</l>
                        <l>He sees eternity less like a play with a prologue and <lb />denouement, </l>
                        <l>He sees eternity in men and women&#8212;<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">(</add>he does not <lb />see men and women as dreams
                            or dots.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                        <l>Of the idea of perfect and free individuals, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">the</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Of that</add> idea <lb /><add
                                type="insertion" place="inline">the bard</add> of These States<del
                                type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">the bard</del> walks in advance, <lb />leader of
                            leaders, </l>
                        <l>The attitude of him cheers up slaves, and horrifies <lb /><del
                                type="overstrike">foreign</del> despots. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                        <l>Without extinction is Liberty! Without retrograde <lb />is Equality! </l>
                        <l>They live in the feelings of young men, and the <lb />best women, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf063r" type="recto" n="117" facs="nyp.00015.125" />
                        <l>Not for nothing have the indomitable heads of the <lb />earth been always
                            ready to fall for Liberty! </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Are YOU indeed for Liberty?</l>
                            </del>
                            <l>Are you a man who would assume a place to teach<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">,</add>
                                <lb /><del type="overstrike">here, or lead here,</del> or be a poet
                                here? </l>
                            <l>The place is august&#8212;the terms obdurate.</l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Who would assume to teach <add type="insertion"
                                        place="supralinear">or sing</add> here, may well prepare
                                    <lb /> himself, body and mind, </l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>He may well survey, ponder, arm, fortify, harden, <lb /> make
                                    lithe, himself, </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>He shall surely be questioned beforehand by me with <lb />many and
                                stern questions. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                        <l>Who are you, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">indeed,</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">anyhow,</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">who would talk or</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">to talk or</add>
                            </subst> sing <add type="insertion" place="marginright">to <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">th</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">a</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> the <del type="overstrike">race? of soldiers &#38; free
                                    men?</del> equal race of the free?</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">in <lb /> America?</del></l>
                        <l>Have you studied out M<hi rend="smallcaps">Y LAND</hi><!-- how do we remove small caps? -->
                            <note type="authorial" place="interlinear" rend="circled">lower
                                case</note>, its idioms and <lb />men? </l>
                        <l>Have you learned <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">indeed</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">the physiology, phrenology, <choice><orig>poli-<lb/>tics,</orig><reg>politcs,<lb/></reg></choice> geography, pride, freedom, friendship,
                                of </del><lb />my land? its substratums and objects? </l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>Have you considered the organic compact of the first <lb />day of the
                                first year of <del type="overstrike">the independence of</del> The
                                <lb />States, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>signed by the Commissioners, ratified by <lb />The
                                States, and read by Washington at the head <lb />of the army? </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Have you possessed yourself of the Federal <choice>
                                        <orig>Constitu-<lb />tion?</orig>
                                        <reg>Constitution<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice>
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>Do you acknowledge Liberty with audible and <choice>
                                    <orig>abso-<lb />lute</orig>
                                    <reg>absolute<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> acknowledgment, and set slavery at nought <lb />for <del
                                    type="overstrike">life and death?</del>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Do you see <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">know</add> who have
                            left described processes <del type="overstrike">and <lb /> poems</del>
                            behind them, and assumed new ones? </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf063v" type="verso" n="118" facs="nyp.00015.126" />
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Are you faithful to things? Do you teach whatever <lb /> the land
                                    and sea, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the
                                    bodies of men, womanhood, <lb />amativeness, angers, excesses,
                                    crimes, teach? </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>Have you sped through customs, laws, popularities?</l>
                            <l>Can you hold your hand against all seductions, follies, <lb /><del
                                    type="overstrike">whirls,</del> fierce contentions? <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>Are you very
                                strong? <lb />Are you of the whole people? </l>
                            <l>Are you not of some coterie? some school or religion?</l>
                            <l>Are you done with reviews and criticisms of life? <choice>
                                    <orig>ani-<lb />mating</orig>
                                    <reg>animating<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> to life itself? </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Have you vivified yourself from the maternity of <add type="unmarked"
                                place="marginright">all</add>
                            <lb />The<del type="overstrike">se</del> States? </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Have you <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sucked</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">fed at</add>
                                </subst> the nipples of the breast<del type="overstrike">s</del> of
                                the <lb />mother of many children? </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Have you too the old, ever-fresh, forbearance and <lb />impartiality? </l>
                        <l>Do you hold the like love for those hardening to <lb />maturity? <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>for the last-born?
                            little and big? <lb />and for the errant? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                        <l>What is this you bring my America?</l>
                        <l>Is it uniform with my country?</l>
                        <l>Is it not something that has been better told or done <lb />before? </l>
                        <l>Have you not imported this, or the spirit of it, in <lb />some ship? </l>
                        <l>Is it a mere tale? a rhyme? a prettiness?</l>
                        <l>Has it <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">never</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">not long</add>
                            </subst> dangled at the heels of the poets, <choice>
                                <orig>poli-<lb />ticians,</orig>
                                <reg>politicians<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> literats, of enemies' lands? </l>
                        <l>Does it not assume that what is notoriously gone is <lb />still here? </l>
                        <l>Does it answer universal needs? Will it improve <lb />manners? </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf064r" type="recto" n="119" facs="nyp.00015.127" />
                        <l>Can your performance face the open fields and the <lb />sea-side? </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Will it absorb into me as I absorb food, air, nobility,
                                <lb />meanness <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst>to appear again in my strength, <add type="insertion"
                                    place="superlinear">and</add> gait,<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="marginright">?</add>
                                <lb />face? </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Have real employments contributed to it? original
                            <lb />makers&#8212;not amanuenses? </l>
                        <l>Does it meet modern discoveries, calibers, facts, face <lb />to face? </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Does it respect me? Democracy? the Soul? to-day?</l>
                        </del>
                        <l>What does it mean to me? to American persons, <lb />progresses, cities?
                            &#182;Chicago, Kanada, Arkansas? <lb />the planter, Yankee,
                            Georgian, &#182;native, <choice>
                                <orig>immi-<lb />grant,</orig>
                                <reg>immigrant<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> sailors, squatters, old States, new States? </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Does it encompass all The States, and the <choice>
                                    <orig>unexcep-<lb />tional</orig>
                                    <reg>unexceptional<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> rights of all the men and women of the <lb />earth, <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>the genital impulse of
                                These States?<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l><note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#182;</note>Does it see
                            behind <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">all</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> apparent custodians, the <lb />real custodians, standing,
                            menacing, silent, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>the <lb />mechanics, Manhattanese, western men, <choice>
                                <orig>south-<lb />erners,</orig>
                                <reg>southerners<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>significant alike in
                            their apathy <add type="insertion" place="marginright">their
                                contests,</add>and in <lb />the promptness of their love? </l>
                        <l>Does it see what befalls and has always befallen <lb />each temporizer,
                                <del type="overstrike"><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add>patcher, outsider,</del> partialist, <lb /><del
                                type="overstrike">alarmist, infidel, who has ever asked
                                anything</del>
                            <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">of</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">in</add>
                            </subst> America? </l>
                        <l>What mocking and scornful negligence?</l>
                        <l>The track strewed with the dust of skeletons?</l>
                        <l>By the roadside others disdainfully tossed?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                        <l>Rhymes and rhymers pass away&#8212;poems distilled <lb />from other
                            poems pass away, </l>
                        <l>The swarms of reflectors and the polite pass, and <lb />leave ashes; </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf064v" type="verso" n="120" facs="nyp.00015.128" />
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Admirers, importers, obedient persons, make the soil <lb />of
                                literature; </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>America justifies itself, give it time&#8212;no disguise can
                            <lb />deceive it, <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">or conceal from it</del>
                            </restore><del type="overstrike">&#8212;it is impassive <lb />
                                enough, </del></l>
                        <l>Only toward the likes of itself will it advance to meet <lb />them, </l>
                        <l>If its poets appear, it will advance to meet them <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212; <lb /> there is no fear
                                    of mistake, </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">in due time</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>The proof of a poet shall
                                be sternly deferred, till his <lb />country absorbs him as
                                affectionately as he has <lb />absorbed it.<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">)</add>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                        <l>He masters whose spirit masters&#8212;he tastes sweetest <lb />who
                            results sweetest in the long run, </l>
                        <l>The blood of the brawn beloved of time is <choice>
                                <orig>uncon-<lb />straint,</orig>
                                <reg>unconstraint<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">?out</note>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>In the need of poems, philosophy, politics, manners,
                                <lb />engineering, an appropriate native grand-opera,
                                <lb />shipcraft, any craft, he or she is greatest who
                                <lb />contributes the greatest original practical <choice>
                                    <orig>ex-<lb />ample.</orig>
                                    <reg>example<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                        <l>Already a nonchalant breed, <del type="overstrike">silently</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">emerging, fills <lb />the</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">emerging from</add>
                            </subst> houses<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and streets,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">appears in the
                                    streets,</add>
                            </subst>and streets, </l>
                        <l>People's lips salute only doers, lovers, satisfiers, <lb />positive
                            knowers; </l>
                        <l>There will shortly be no more priests&#8212;I say their <lb />work is
                            done, </l>
                        <l>Death is without emergencies here, but life is <choice>
                                <orig>per-<lb />petual</orig>
                                <reg>perpetual<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> emergencies here, </l>
                        <l>Are your body, days, manners, superb? after death <lb />you shall be
                            superb; </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf065r" type="recto" n="121" facs="nyp.00015.129" />
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Friendship, self-esteem,</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">j</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">J</add>
                            </subst>ustice, health, <add type="insertion" place="superlinear"
                                >self&#8209;esteem</add> clear the way <lb />with irresistible
                            power; </l>
                        <l>How dare you place anything before a man?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                        <l>Fall behind me, States!</l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">A</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">One</add>
                            </subst> man, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">by himself,</add>
                            </del> before all&#8212;myself, typical, before all.</l>
                        <l>34. Give me the pay I have served for!</l>
                        <l>Give me to <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">speak beautiful words</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright"><gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />ate</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="marginright">sing the <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">warlike</add> song of
                                    the land!</add>
                            </subst>! take all the <lb />rest; </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#182;</note>
                        <l><del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                            </del>I have loved the earth, sun, animals&#8212;I have despised
                            <lb />riches, </l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>I have given alms to every one that asked, stood up <lb />for the
                                stupid and crazy, devoted my income <lb />and labor to others, </l>
                            <l>I have hated tyrants, argued not concerning God, <lb />had patience
                                and indulgence toward the people, <lb />taken off my hat to nothing
                                known or unknown, </l>
                            <l>I have gone freely with powerful uneducated persons, <lb /><add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>and with the
                                young, and with the mothers of <lb />families, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>I have read these leaves to myself in the open air&#8212; <lb />I
                            have tried them by trees, stars, rivers, </l>
                        <l>I have dismissed whatever insulted my own Soul or <lb />defiled my body, </l>
                        <l>I have claimed nothing to myself which I have not <lb />carefully claimed
                            for others on the same terms. </l>
                        <l>I have <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">studied my land, its idioms and
                                    men,</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="marginleft" rend="circled">sped
                                    to the camp, I have been with the <del type="overstrike"
                                        >soldiers</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">natives</add> of every
                                        <del type="overstrike">part,</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">state,</add> I have
                                    studied their idioms,</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>I am willing to wait to be understood by the growth <lb />of the taste of
                            myself, </l>
                        <l>I reject none, I permit all,</l>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginbot" rend="circled">
                            <l>&#182;(say, O mother! <del type="overstrike">of all</del> have I
                                not <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">to your thought</add>
                                been faithful?<del type="overstrike">)</del></l>
                            <l>Have I not through life kept that <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">alone</add> before me?)</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>Whom I have staid with once I have found longing <lb />for me ever
                            afterward. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf065v" type="verso" n="122" facs="nyp.00015.130" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="34">
                        <l>I swear I begin to see the meaning of these things!</l>
                        <l>It is not the earth, it is not America, who is so great,</l>
                        <l>It is I who am great, or to be great&#8212;it is <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">y</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">Y</add>
                            </subst>ou, or <lb />any one, </l>
                        <l>It is to walk rapidly through civilizations, <choice>
                                <orig>govern-<lb />ments,</orig>
                                <reg>governments<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <del type="erasure">&#182;</del>theories,<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">nature, </del><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Through
                                    <del type="overstrike">every</del></add> poems, <add
                                type="insertion" place="supralinear">pageants</add> shows, to <choice>
                                <orig>indi-<lb />viduals.</orig>
                                <reg>individuals<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="35">
                        <l>Underneath all<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">are</del> individuals,</l>
                        <l>I swear nothing is good to me now that ignores <lb />individuals! </l>
                        <l>The American compact is altogether with individuals,</l>
                        <l>The only government is that which makes minute of <lb />individuals, </l>
                        <l>The whole theory of the universe is directed to one <lb />single
                            individual&#8212;namely, to You. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                    <anchor xml:id="t23" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="36">
                        <l>Underneath all is nativity,</l>
                        <l>I swear I will stand by my own nativity&#8212;pious or <lb />impious,
                            so be it; </l>
                        <l>I swear I am charmed with nothing except nativity,</l>
                        <l>Men, women, cities, nations, are only beautiful from <lb />nativity. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="37">
                        <l>Underneath all is the need of the expression of love <lb />for men and
                            women, </l>
                        <l>I swear I have <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">had</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">seen</add>
                            </subst> enough of mean and impotent <lb />modes of expressing love for
                            men and women, </l>
                        <l>After this day I take my own modes of expressing <lb />love for men and
                            women. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="38">
                        <l>I swear I will have each quality of my race in <lb />myself, </l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t23">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                                <l>(Mother! with subtle sense &#38; the naked sword in your
                                    hand</l>
                                <l>I saw you refuse <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                        >finally</add> to treat <del type="overstrike">with
                                        any</del> but <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                        >with</add> single individual only.)</l>
                            </add>
                        </transpose>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf066r" type="recto" n="123" facs="nyp.00015.131" />
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Talk as you like, he <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">only</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">best</add>
                            </subst> suits These States whose <lb />manners favor the audacity and
                            sublime <choice>
                                <orig>turbu-<lb />lence</orig>
                                <reg>turbulence<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> of The States.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
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                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="39">
                            <l>Underneath the lessons of things, <del type="overstrike">spirits,
                                    nature,</del>
                                <lb />
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">governments</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                        >adjustments</add>
                                </subst>, ownerships, I swear I perceive <lb />other lessons, </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Underneath all to me is myself&#8212;to you, yourself,
                                    <lb />(the same monotonous old song,) </l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>If all had not kernels for you and me, what were it <lb />to you
                                    and me? </l>
                            </del>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="40">
                        <l>O I see now, flashing, <del type="overstrike">that</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">this</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </subst> America <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="supralinear">I sing to <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="supralinear">I sing is <del
                                        type="overstrike">merely</del><add type="unmarked"
                                        place="supralinear">merely</add></add>
                            </subst> is only you <lb />and me, </l>
                        <l>Its power, weapons, testimony, are you and me,</l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>Its roughs, beards, haughtiness, ruggedness, are you <lb />and me, </l>
                            <l>Its ample geography, the sierras, the prairies, <choice>
                                    <orig>Mis-<lb />sissippi,</orig>
                                    <reg>Mississippi<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> Huron, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add>Colorado, Boston, Toronto, <lb />Raleigh,
                                Nashville, Havana, are you and me, </l>
                            <l>Its settlements, wars, <del type="overstrike">the organic
                                    compact,</del> peace, <lb />Washington, <del type="overstrike"
                                    >the Federal Constitution,</del>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">the central inland
                                    west,</add> are you <lb />and me, </l>
                            <l>Its young men's manners, speech, dress, friendships, <lb />are you
                                and me, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Its crimes, lies, thefts, defections, slavery, are you <lb />and me, </l>
                        <l>Its Congress is you and me&#8212;the officers, capitols,
                            <lb />armies, ships, are you and me, </l>
                        <l>Its endless gestations of new States are you and me,</l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Its inventions, science, schools, are you and me,</l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Its deserts, forests, clearings, log-houses, hunters, are <lb />you
                                and me, </l>
                        </del>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf066v" type="verso" n="124" facs="nyp.00015.132" />
                        <l>Natural and artificial are you and me,</l>
                        <l>Freedom, language, poems, employments, are you <lb />and me, </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Failures, successes, births, deaths, are you and me,</l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Past, present, future, are only you and me.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="41">
                        <l>I swear I dare not shirk <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">or
                                refuse</add> any part of myself,</l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Not any part of America, good or bad, <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">dare I refuse</add></l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>No <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">r</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> my body&#8212;no <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">r</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> friendship, hospitality, <choice>
                                    <orig>pro-<lb />creation,</orig>
                                    <reg>procreation<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>No <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">r</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> my Soul, nor the last explanation of prudence,</l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>No <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">r</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> the similitude that interlocks me with all <choice>
                                    <orig>iden-<lb />tities</orig>
                                    <reg>identities<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> that exist, or ever have existed, </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>No <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">r</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> faith, sin, defiance, nor any disposition or duty <lb />of
                                myself, </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>No <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">r</add>
                                </subst> the promulgation of Liberty&#8212;no <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">r</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> to cheer up <lb />slaves and horrify despots, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>No <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">r</add>
                            </subst> to build for that which builds for mankind,</l>
                        <l>No <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">r</add>
                            </subst> to balance ranks, complexions, creeds, and the <lb />sexes, </l>
                        <l>No <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">t</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">r</add>
                            </subst> to justify science, nor the march of equality,</l>
                        <l>Nor to feed the arrogant blood of the brawn beloved <lb />of time. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="42">
                        <l>I swear I am for <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">those</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">one</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">him</add>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">that</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">who</add>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">have</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">has</add>
                            </subst> never been <lb />mastered! </l>
                        <l>For <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">a</add> m <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">a</add>
                            </subst>n <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">or</add>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">women</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">woman</add>
                            </subst> whose <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">temper<del type="overstrike"
                                    >s</del></del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">genius</add>
                            </subst> ha <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ve</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">s</add>
                            </subst> never been <lb />mastered, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">For those</del> whom laws, theories, conventions, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">can</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">have</add>
                            </subst> never <lb />master<add type="unmarked" place="inline">ed</add>.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="43">
                        <l>I swear I am for <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">those</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">him</add>
                            </subst> who walk<add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">s</add>
                            abreast with the <lb />whole earth! </l>
                        <l>Who inaugurate<add type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add> one to
                            inaugurate all.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <!-- This addition was eventually recopied on page 125 -->
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                            <l><del type="overstrike">O</del> (Democracy! <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I know</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I
                                            believe</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </add> you shall yet <del type="overstrike">conquer</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">overhead</add>
                                </del> revive the lands</l>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">Mother!</del>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">i</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">I</add>
                                </subst>n dreams I see you with spreading mantle, covering the
                                world)</l>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf067r" type="recto" n="125" facs="nyp.00015.133" />
                    <!-- From Golden: These lines had initially appeared in 'Walt Whitman,' page 54, above.  They were marked "transpose" and were rewritten here with two substantial changes. -->
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                <l>
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">
                                <l>(Why let my extatic craze rage! I but sing anyhow to please
                                    myself,</l>
                                <l>To express that volcano my will.)</l>
                            </add>
                        </subst>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="44">
                        <l>I swear I will not be outfaced by irrational things!</l>
                        <l>I will penetrate what it is in them that is sarcastic <lb />upon me! </l>
                        <l>I will make cities and civilizations defer to me!</l>
                        <l>(This is what I have learnt from America&#8212;it is the
                            <lb />amount&#8212;and it I teach again.) </l>
                    </lg>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <l>(Democracy! while <del type="overstrike">the</del> weapons were every
                            where aim'd at your breast,</l>
                        <l>I saw you serenely give birth to children, saw in dreams your dilating
                            form,</l>
                        <l>Saw you with spreading mantle covering the world.)</l>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="45">
                        <l>I will confront these shows of the day and night!</l>
                        <l>I will know if I am to be less than they!</l>
                        <l>I will see if I am not as majestic as they!</l>
                        <l>I will see if I am not as subtle and real as they!</l>
                        <l>I will see if I am to be less generous than they!</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="46">
                        <l>I will see if I have no meaning, while the houses and <lb />ships have
                            meaning! </l>
                        <l>I will see if the fishes and birds are to be enough <lb />for themselves,
                                <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>and I am not to be enough for <lb />myself. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <anchor xml:id="t24" />
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="47">
                        <l>I match my spirit against yours, you orbs, growths, <lb />mountains,
                            brutes, </l>
                        <l>Copious as you are, I absorb you all in myself, and <lb />become the
                            master myself. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="48">
                        <l><del type="overstrike">The Many In One</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over"
                                        >America&#8212;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </add>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">isolated, yet embod <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">y</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit" place="supralinear">ing</add>
                                </subst> all&#8212;</add>&#8212;what is it finally except
                            myself?</l>
                        <l>These States&#8212;what are they <add type="insertion"
                                place="marginright">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">all</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">for</add>
                                </subst>></add> except myself?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="49">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I have learned</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">O I know now</add>
                            </subst> why the earth is gross, tantalizing, <lb />wicked&#8212;it
                            is for my sake, </l>
                        <l>I <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">must <unclear
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                        >need</unclear></add>
                            </del> take you to be mine, you <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">beautiful</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erased">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>beautiful, terrible, rude <lb />forms. </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
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                    <add type="marginbot">
                        <l>(Mother! bend <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">toward</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">down</add>
                            </subst> me your <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">bend close
                                to</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">mighty</del> face!</l>
                        <l>I know not what <del type="overstrike">all</del> these <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">struggles &#38; plots</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">plots &#38;
                                        <del type="overstrike">endless</del> deferments</add>
                            </subst> are for,</l>
                        <l>I know not success&#8212;but I know that <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">your</add>
                            </subst> work <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">goes</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">goes on
                                    &#38;</add>
                            </subst> must <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">yet</add> go on.
                                <del type="overstrike">&#38; on</del>)</l>
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                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01506">
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="erasure">Shapely, naked, wan</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over" rend="underline">Song of the
                                Broad&#8209;Axe</add>
                        </subst>
                    </note>
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00116" />
                    </relations>
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                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">CHANTS DEMOCRATIC.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Song <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Chant</add> of the
                                Broad&#8209;Axe.</add>
                        </subst><lb /><milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-center"
                         /><lb /> 2.</head>
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop">Pioneers</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop"><gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                         />&#9757;</note>
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                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">B<hi rend="smallcaps"
                                    >ROAD-AXE</hi></del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Weapon</add>
                            </subst>, shapely, naked, wan!</l>
                        <l>Head from the mother's bowels drawn!</l>
                        <l>Wooded flesh and metal bone! limb only one and <lb />lip only one! </l>
                        <l>Gray-blue leaf by red-heat grown! helve produced <lb />from a little seed
                            sown! </l>
                        <l>Resting the grass amid and upon,</l>
                        <l>To be leaned, and to lean on.</l>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Strong shapes, and attributes of strong shapes&#8212; <lb />masculine
                            trades, sights and sounds, </l>
                        <l>Long varied train of an emblem, dabs of music,</l>
                        <l>Fingers of the organist skipping staccato over the <lb />keys of the
                            great organ. </l>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Welcome are all earth's lands, each for its kind,</l>
                        <l>Welcome are lands of pine and oak,</l>
                        <l>Welcome are lands of the lemon and fig,</l>
                        <l>Welcome are lands of gold,</l>
                        <l>Welcome are lands of wheat and maize&#8212;welcome <lb />those of the
                            grape, </l>
                        <l>Welcome are lands of sugar and rice,</l>
                        <l>Welcome the cotton-lands&#8212;welcome those of the <lb />white
                            potato and sweet potato, </l>
                        <l>Welcome are mountains, flats, sands, forests, prairies,</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf068r" type="recto" n="127" facs="nyp.00015.135" />
                        <l>Welcome the rich borders of rivers, table-lands, <lb />openings, </l>
                        <l>Welcome the measureless grazing lands&#8212;welcome <lb />the teeming
                            soil of orchards, flax, honey, hemp, </l>
                        <l>Welcome just as much the other more hard-faced <lb />lands, </l>
                        <l>Lands rich as lands of gold, or wheat and fruit lands,</l>
                        <l>Lands of mines, lands of the manly and rugged ores,</l>
                        <l>Lands of coal, copper, lead, tin, zinc,</l>
                        <l>L<hi rend="smallcaps">ANDS OF</hi> I<hi rend="smallcaps">RON</hi>! lands
                            of the make of the axe!</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>The log at the wood-pile, the axe supported by it,</l>
                        <l>The sylvan hut, the vine over the doorway, the space <lb />cleared for a
                            garden, </l>
                        <l>The irregular tapping of rain down on the leaves, <lb />after the storm
                            is lulled, </l>
                        <l>The wailing and moaning at intervals, the thought of <lb />the sea, </l>
                        <l>The thought of ships struck in the storm, and put on <lb />their
                            beam-ends, and the cutting away of masts; </l>
                        <l>The sentiment of the huge timbers of old-fashioned <lb />houses and
                            barns; </l>
                        <l>The remembered print or narrative, the voyage at a <lb />venture of men,
                            families, goods, </l>
                        <l>The disembarkation, the founding of a new city,</l>
                        <l>The voyage of those who sought a New England and <lb />found
                            it&#8212;the outset anywhere, </l>
                        <l>The settlements of the Arkansas, Colorado, Ottawa, <lb />Willamette, </l>
                        <l>The slow progress, the scant fare, the axe, rifle, <lb />saddle-bags; </l>
                        <l>The beauty of all adventurous and daring persons,</l>
                        <l>The beauty of wood-boys and wood-men, with their <lb />clear untrimmed
                            faces, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf068v" type="verso" n="128" facs="nyp.00015.136" />
                        <l>The beauty of independence, departure, actions that <lb />rely on
                            themselves, </l>
                        <l>The American contempt for statutes and ceremonies, <lb />the boundless
                            impatience of restraint, </l>
                        <l>The loose drift of character, the inkling through <lb />random types, the
                            solidification; </l>
                        <l>The butcher in the slaughter-house, the hands aboard <lb />schooners and
                            sloops, the raftsman, the pioneer, </l>
                        <l>Lumbermen in their winter camp, daybreak in the <lb />woods, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> stripes of snow on
                            the limbs of trees, the <lb />occasional snapping, </l>
                        <l>The glad clear sound of one's own voice, the merry <lb />song, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> the natural life of
                            the woods, the strong <lb />day's work, </l>
                        <l>The blazing fire at night, the sweet taste of supper, <lb />the talk,
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> the bed of
                            hemlock boughs, and the <lb />bear-skin; </l>
                        <l>The house-builder at work in cities or anywhere,</l>
                        <l>The preparatory jointing, squaring, sawing, <choice>
                                <orig>mor-<lb />tising,</orig>
                                <reg>mortising<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>The hoist-up of beams, the push of them in their <lb />places, laying
                            them regular, </l>
                        <l>Setting the studs by their tenons in the mortises, <lb />according as
                            they were prepared, </l>
                        <l>The blows of mallets and hammers, the attitudes of <lb />the men, their
                            curved limbs, </l>
                        <l>Bending, standing, astride the beams, driving in pins, <lb />holding on
                            by posts and braces, </l>
                        <l>The hooked arm over the plate, the other arm <lb />wielding the axe, </l>
                        <l>The floor-men forcing the planks close, to be nailed,</l>
                        <l>Their postures bringing their weapons downward on <lb />the bearers, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf069r" type="recto" n="129" facs="nyp.00015.137" />
                        <l>The echoes resounding through the vacant building;</l>
                        <l>The huge store-house carried up in the city, well <lb />under way, </l>
                        <l>The six framing-men, two in the middle and two at <lb />each end, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> carefully bearing on
                            their shoulders a <lb />heavy stick for a cross-beam, </l>
                        <l>The crowded line of masons with trowels in their <lb />right hands, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> rapidly laying the
                            long side-wall, <lb />two hundred feet from front to rear, </l>
                        <l>The flexible rise and fall of backs, the continual click <lb />of the
                            trowels striking the bricks, </l>
                        <l>The bricks, one after another, each laid so workman-<lb />like in its
                            place, and set with a knock of the <lb />trowel-handle, </l>
                        <l>The piles of materials, the mortar on the mortar-<lb />boards, and the
                            steady replenishing by the <choice>
                                <orig>hod-<lb />men;</orig>
                                <reg>hodmen<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>Spar-makers in the spar-yard, the swarming row of <lb />well-grown
                            apprentices, </l>
                        <l>The swing of their axes on the square-hewed log, <lb />shaping it toward
                            the shape of a mast, </l>
                        <l>The brisk short crackle of the steel driven slantingly <lb />into the
                            pine, </l>
                        <l>The butter-colored chips flying off in great flakes and <lb />slivers, </l>
                        <l>The limber motion of brawny young arms and hips <lb />in easy costumes; </l>
                        <l>The constructor of wharves, bridges, piers, bulk-heads, <lb />floats,
                            stays against the sea; </l>
                        <l>The city fireman&#8212;the fire that suddenly bursts forth <lb />in
                            the close-packed square, </l>
                        <l>The arriving engines, the hoarse shouts, the nimble <lb />stepping and
                            daring, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf069v" type="verso" n="130" facs="nyp.00015.138" />
                        <l>The strong command through the fire-trumpets, the <lb />falling in line,
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> the rise and
                            fall of the arms <lb />forcing the water, </l>
                        <l>The slender, spasmic blue-white jets&#8212;the bringing <lb />to bear
                            of the hooks and ladders, <del type="overstrike">and their <lb />
                                execution,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>The crash and cut away of connecting wood-work, or <lb />through floors,
                            if the fire smoulders under them, </l>
                        <l>The crowd with their lit faces, watching&#8212;the glare <lb />and
                            dense shadows; </l>
                        <l>The forger at his forge-furnace, and the user of iron <lb />after him, </l>
                        <l>The maker of the axe large and small, and the <lb />welder and temperer, </l>
                        <l>The chooser breathing his breath on the cold steel, <lb />and trying the
                            edge with his thumb, </l>
                        <l>The one who clean-shapes the handle and sets it <lb />firmly in the
                            socket, </l>
                        <l>The shadowy processions of the portraits of the past <lb />users also, </l>
                        <l>The primal patient mechanics, the architects and <lb />engineers, </l>
                        <l>The far-off Assyrian edifice and Mizra edifice,</l>
                        <l>The Roman lictors preceding the consuls,</l>
                        <l>The antique European warrior with his axe in <lb />combat, </l>
                        <l>The uplifted arm, the clatter, of blows on the <lb />helmeted head, </l>
                        <l>The death-howl, the limpsey tumbling body, the rush <lb />of friend and
                            foe thither, </l>
                        <l>The siege of revolted lieges determined for liberty,</l>
                        <l>The summons to surrender, the battering at castle <lb />gates, the truce
                            and parley, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf070r" type="recto" n="131" facs="nyp.00015.139" />
                        <l>The sack of an old city in its time,</l>
                        <l>The bursting in of mercenaries and bigots <choice>
                                <orig>tumul-<lb />tuously</orig>
                                <reg>tumultuously<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and disorderly, </l>
                        <l>Roar, flames, blood, drunkenness, madness,</l>
                        <l>Goods freely rifled from houses and temples, screams <lb />of women in
                            the gripe of brigands, </l>
                        <l>Craft and thievery of camp-followers, men running, <lb />old persons
                            despairing, </l>
                        <l>The hell of war, the cruelties of creeds,</l>
                        <l>The list of all executive deeds and words, just or <lb />unjust, </l>
                        <l>The power of personality, just or unjust.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>Muscle and pluck forever!</l>
                        <l>What invigorates life, invigorates death,</l>
                        <l>And the dead advance as much as the living advance,</l>
                        <l>And the future is no more uncertain than the present,</l>
                        <l>And the roughness of the earth and of man encloses <lb />as much as the
                            delicatesse of the earth and of <lb />man, </l>
                        <l>And nothing endures but personal qualities.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>What do you think endures?</l>
                        <l>Do you think the greatest city endures?</l>
                        <l>Or a teeming manufacturing state? or a prepared <lb />constitution? or
                            the best built steamships? </l>
                        <l>Or hotels of granite and iron? or any chef-d'&#339;uvres <lb />of
                            engineering, forts, armaments? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>Away! These are not to be cherished for themselves,</l>
                        <l>They fill their hour, the dancers dance, the musicians <lb />play for
                            them, </l>
                        <l>The show passes, all does well enough of course,</l>
                        <l>All does very well till one flash of defiance.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginbot">&#42;</note>
                    <!-- From Golden: St. 11, p 133 was brought in to follow st. 7, a plan Whitman later rejected -->
                    <pb xml:id="leaf070v" type="verso" n="132" facs="nyp.00015.140" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop">? a seperate piece (The Great
                        City.)</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out &#38; tr</note>
                    <transpose rend="bracketed" anchored="false">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                            <l>The greatest <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">great</add>
                                city is that which has the greatest man <lb />or woman, </l>
                            <l>If it be a few ragged huts, it is still the greatest city <lb />in
                                the whole world. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                            <l>The place where the greatest city stands <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                </del> is not the <lb />place of stretched wharves, docks,
                                manufactures, <lb />deposits of produce, </l>
                            <l>Nor the place of ceaseless salutes of new comers, or <lb />the
                                anchor-lifters of the departing, </l>
                            <l>Nor the place of the tallest and costliest buildings, <lb />or shops
                                selling goods from the rest of the earth, </l>
                            <l>Nor the place of the best libraries and schools&#8212;nor
                                <lb />the place where money is plentiest, </l>
                            <l>Nor the place of the most numerous population.</l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                            <l>Where the city stands with the brawniest breed of <lb />orators and
                                bards, </l>
                            <l>Where the city stands that is beloved by these, and <lb />loves them
                                in return, and understands them, </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Where these may be seen going every day in the <lb />streets,
                                    with their arms familiar to the shoulders <lb />of their
                                    friends, </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>Where no monuments exist to heroes, but in the <lb />common words and
                                deeds, </l>
                            <l>Where thrift is in its place, and prudence is in its <lb />place, </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Where behavior is the finest of the fine arts,</l>
                            </del>
                            <l>Where the men and women think lightly of the <lb />laws, </l>
                            <l>Where the slave ceases <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">to be a slave</add>
                                </del>, and the master of slaves <lb />ceases, </l>
                            <l>Where the populace rise <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erasure">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">at once</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">from time
                                            to time</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> against the <choice>
                                    <orig>never-<lb />ending</orig>
                                    <reg>neverending<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> audacity of elected persons, </l>
                            <pb xml:id="leaf071r" type="recto" n="133" facs="nyp.00015.141" />
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out &#38; tr</note>
                            <l>Where fierce men and women pour forth, as the sea <lb />to the
                                whistle of death<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">pours</del> its sweeping and <lb />unript
                                waves, </l>
                            <l>Where outside authority enters always after the <lb />precedence of
                                inside authority, </l>
                            <l>Where the citizen is always the head and ideal&#8212;and
                                <lb />President, Mayor, Governor, and what not, are <lb />agents for
                                pay, </l>
                            <l>Where children are taught <del type="overstrike">from the jump that
                                    they <lb /> are</del> to be laws to themselves, and to depend on
                                <lb />themselves, </l>
                            <l>Where equanimity is illustrated in affairs,</l>
                            <l>Where speculations on the Soul are encouraged,</l>
                            <l>Where women walk in public processions in the <lb />streets, the same
                                as the men, </l>
                            <l>Where they enter the public assembly and take <lb />places the same
                                as the men, <del type="overstrike">and are appealed <lb /> to by the
                                    orators, the same as the men, </del></l>
                            <l>Where the city of the faithfulest friends stands,</l>
                            <l>Where the city of the cleanliness of the sexes stands,</l>
                            <l>Where the city of the healthiest fathers stands,</l>
                            <l>Where the city of the best-bodied mothers stands,</l>
                            <l>There the greatest city stands.</l>
                        </lg>
                    </transpose>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>How beggarly appear <del type="overstrike">poems,</del> arguments, <del
                                type="overstrike">orations,</del>
                            <lb />before <add type="edit" rend="underline">an electric</add> deed! </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginright">? a defiant</note>
                        <l>How the floridness of the materials of cities shrivels <lb />before a
                            man's or woman's look! </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>All waits, or goes by default, till <add type="edit" rend="underline">a
                                strong being</add>
                            <lb />appears; </l>
                        <l>A strong being is the proof of the race, and of the <lb />ability of the
                            universe, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf071v" type="verso" n="134" facs="nyp.00015.142" />
                        <l>When he or she appears, materials are overawed,</l>
                        <l>The dispute on the Soul stops,</l>
                        <l>The old customs and phrases are confronted, turned <lb />back, or laid
                            away. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <l>What is your money-making now? What can it do <lb />now? </l>
                        <l>What is your respectability now?</l>
                        <l>What are your theology, tuition, society, traditions, <lb />statute-books
                            now? </l>
                        <l>Where are your jibes of being now?</l>
                        <l>Where are your cavils about the Soul now?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                        <l>Was that your best? Were those your vast and <lb />solid? </l>
                        <l>Riches, opinions, politics, institutions, to part <choice>
                                <orig>obe-<lb />diently</orig>
                                <reg>obediently<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> from the path of one man or woman! </l>
                        <l>The centuries, and all authority, to be trod under <lb />the foot-soles
                            of one man or woman! </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                        <note type="editorial">Whitman put a bbracket beside the stanza number
                            15--neither Golden nor I have any clue why</note>
                        <l>&#8212;A sterile landscape covers the ore&#8212;there is as
                            <lb />good as the best, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>for
                            all the forbidding <choice>
                                <orig>appear-<lb />ance,</orig>
                                <reg>appearance<lb /></reg>
                            </choice><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                        <l>There is the mine, there are the miners,</l>
                        <l>The forge-furnace is there, the melt is accomplished, <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> the hammers-men are
                            at hand with their tongs <lb />and hammers, </l>
                        <l>What always served and always serves, is at hand.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                        <l>Than this nothing has better served&#8212;it has served <lb />all, </l>
                        <l>Served the fluent-tongued and subtle-sensed Greek, <lb />and long ere the
                            Greek, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf072r" type="recto" n="135" facs="nyp.00015.143" />
                        <l>Served in building the buildings that last longer <lb />than any, </l>
                        <l>Served the Hebrew, the Persian, the most ancient <lb />Hindostanee, </l>
                        <l>Served the mound-raiser on the Mississippi&#8212;served <lb />those
                            whose relics remain in Central America, </l>
                        <l>Served Albic temples in woods or on plains, with <lb />unhewn pillars,
                                <del type="erasure">&#182;</del> and <del type="overstrike"
                                >the</del> druids, <del type="overstrike">and the bloody <lb /> body
                                laid in the hollow of the great stone,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Served the artificial clefts, vast, high, silent, on the
                            <lb />snow-covered hills of Scandinavia, </l>
                        <l>Served those who, time out of mind, made on the <lb />granite walls <del
                                type="erasure">&#182;</del> rough sketches of the sun, moon,
                            <lb />stars, ships, ocean-waves, </l>
                        <l>Served the paths of the irruptions of the Goths&#8212; <lb />served
                            the pastoral tribes and nomads, </l>
                        <l>Served the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">incalculably</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">long, long</add>
                            </subst> distant Kelt&#8212;served the <lb />hardy pirates of the
                            Baltic, </l>
                        <l>Served before any of those, the venerable and <choice>
                                <orig>harm-<lb />less</orig>
                                <reg>harmless<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> men of Ethiopia, </l>
                        <l>Served the making of helms for the galleys of <lb />pleasure, and the
                            making of those for war, </l>
                        <l>Served all great works on land, and all great works <lb />on the sea, </l>
                        <l>For the medival ages, and before the medi&#230;val <lb />ages, </l>
                        <l>Served not the living only, then as now, but served <lb />the dead. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                        <l>I see the European headsman,</l>
                        <l>He stands masked, clothed in red, with huge legs, <lb />and strong naked
                            arms, </l>
                        <l>And leans on a ponderous axe.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf072v" type="verso" n="136" facs="nyp.00015.144" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                        <l>Whom have you slaughtered lately, European <choice>
                                <orig>heads-<lb />man?</orig>
                                <reg>headsman<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>Whose is that blood upon you, so wet and sticky?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                        <l>I see the clear sunsets of the martyrs,</l>
                        <l>I see from the scaffolds the descending ghosts,</l>
                        <l>Ghosts of dead lords, uncrowned ladies, impeached <lb />ministers,
                            rejected kings, </l>
                        <l>Rivals, traitors, poisoners, disgraced chieftains, and <lb />the rest.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                        <l>I see those who in any land have died for the good <lb />cause, </l>
                        <l>The seed is spare, nevertheless the crop shall never <lb />run out, </l>
                        <l>(Mind you, O foreign kings, O priests, the crop shall <lb />never run
                            out.) </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                        <l>I see the blood washed entirely away from the axe,</l>
                        <l>Both blade and helve are clean,</l>
                        <l>They spirt no more the blood of European nobles&#8212; <lb />they
                            clasp no more the necks of queens. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                        <l>I see the headsman withdraw and become useless,</l>
                        <l>I see the scaffold untrodden and mouldy&#8212;I see no <lb />longer
                            any axe upon it, </l>
                        <l>I see the mighty and friendly emblem of the power of <lb />my own race,
                            the newest largest race. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                        <l>America! I do not vaunt my love for you,</l>
                        <l>I have what I have.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                        <l>The axe leaps!</l>
                        <l>The solid forest gives fluid utterances,</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf073r" type="recto" n="137" facs="nyp.00015.145" />
                        <l>They tumble forth, they rise and form,</l>
                        <l>Hut, tent, landing, survey,</l>
                        <l>Flail, plough, pick, crowbar, spade,</l>
                        <l>Shingle, rail, prop, wainscot, jamb, lath, panel, gable,</l>
                        <l>Citadel, ceiling, saloon, academy, organ, exhibition-<lb />house,
                            library, </l>
                        <l>Cornice, trellis, pilaster, balcony, window, shutter, <lb />turret,
                            porch, </l>
                        <l>Hoe, rake, pitch-fork, pencil, wagon, staff, saw, <choice>
                                <orig>jack-<lb />plane,</orig>
                                <reg>jackplane<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> mallet, wedge, rounce, </l>
                        <l>Chair, tub, hoop, table, wicket, vane, sash, floor,</l>
                        <l>Work-box, chest, stringed instrument, boat, frame, <lb />and what not, </l>
                        <l>Capitols of States, and capitol of the nation of States,</l>
                        <l>Long stately rows in avenues, hospitals for orphans or <lb />for the poor
                            or sick, </l>
                        <l>Manhattan steamboats and clippers, taking the <choice>
                                <orig>meas-<lb />ure</orig>
                                <reg>measure<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> of all seas. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                        <l>The shapes arise!</l>
                        <l>Shapes of the using of axes anyhow, and the users, <lb />and all that
                            neighbors them, </l>
                        <l>Cutters down of wood, and haulers of it to the <choice>
                                <orig>Pe-<lb />nobscot,</orig>
                                <reg>Penobscot<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> or Kennebec, </l>
                        <l>Dwellers in cabins among the Californian mountains, <lb />or by the
                            little lakes, or on the Columbia, </l>
                        <l>Dwellers south on the banks of the Gila or Rio
                            <lb />Grande&#8212;friendly gatherings, the characters and
                            <lb />fun, </l>
                        <l>Dwellers up north in Minnesota and by the <choice>
                                <orig>Yellow-<lb />stone</orig>
                                <reg>Yellowstone<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> river&#8212;dwellers on coasts and off coasts, </l>
                        <l>Seal-fishers, whalers, arctic seamen breaking passages <lb />through the
                            ice. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf073v" type="verso" n="138" facs="nyp.00015.146" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                        <l>The shapes arise!</l>
                        <l>Shapes of factories, arsenals, foundries, markets,</l>
                        <l>Shapes of the two-threaded tracks of railroads,</l>
                        <l>Shapes of the sleepers of bridges, vast frameworks, <lb />girders,
                            arches, </l>
                        <l>Shapes of the fleets of barges, tows, lake craft, river <lb />craft. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                        <l>The shapes arise!</l>
                        <l>Ship-yards and dry-docks along the Eastern and <lb />Western Seas, and in
                            many a bay and by-place, </l>
                        <l>The live-oak kelsons, the pine planks, the spars, the
                            <lb />hackmatack-roots for knees, </l>
                        <l>The ships themselves on their ways, the tiers of <lb />scaffolds, the
                            workmen busy outside and inside, </l>
                        <l>The tools lying around, the great auger and little <lb />auger, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> the adze, bolt,
                            line, square, gouge, and <lb />bead-plane. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                        <l>The shapes arise!</l>
                        <l>The shape measured, sawed, jacked, joined, stained,</l>
                        <l>The coffin-shape for the dead to lie within in his <lb />shroud; </l>
                        <l>The shape got out in posts, in the bedstead posts, in <lb />the posts of
                            the bride's bed, </l>
                        <l>The shape of the little trough, the shape of the <lb />rockers beneath,
                            the shape of the babe's cradle, </l>
                        <l>The shape of the floor-planks, the floor-planks for <lb />dancers' feet, </l>
                        <l>The shape of the planks of the family home, the <lb />home of the
                            friendly parents and children, </l>
                        <l>The shape of the roof of the home of the happy <lb />young man and woman,
                            the roof over the well-<lb />married young man and woman, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf074r" type="recto" n="139" facs="nyp.00015.147" />
                        <l>The roof over the supper joyously cooked by the <lb />chaste wife, and
                            joyously eaten by the chaste <lb />husband, content after his day's
                            work. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                        <l>The shapes arise!</l>
                        <l>The shape of the prisoner's place in the court-room, <lb />and of him or
                            her seated in the place, </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The shape of the pill-box, the disgraceful ointment-<lb />box, <del
                                    type="erasure">&#182;</del> the nauseous application, and
                                him or her <lb />applying it, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>The shape of the liquor-bar leaned against by the <lb />young rum-drinker
                            and the old rum-drinker, </l>
                        <l>The shape of the shamed and angry stairs, trod by <lb />sneaking
                            footsteps, </l>
                        <l>The shape of the sly settee, and the adulterous <lb />unwholesome couple, </l>
                        <l>The shape of the gambling-board with its devilish <lb />winnings and
                            losings, </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The shape of the slats of the bed of a corrupted body, <lb />the bed
                                of the corruption of gluttony or alcoholic <lb />drinks, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>The shape of the step-ladder for the convicted and <lb />sentenced
                            murderer, <del type="erasure">&#182;</del> the murderer with haggard
                            <lb />face and pinioned arms, </l>
                        <l>The sheriff at hand with his deputies, the silent and <lb />white-lipped
                            crowd, <del type="erasure">&#182;</del> the sickening dangling of
                            <lb />the rope. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                        <l>The shapes arise!</l>
                        <l>Shapes of doors <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">giving so</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">with <add
                                        type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#38;</add>
                                    their</add>
                            </subst> many exits and <choice>
                                <orig>en-<lb />trances,</orig>
                                <reg>entrances<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>The door passing the dissevered friend, flushed, and <lb />in haste, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf074v" type="verso" n="140" facs="nyp.00015.148" />
                        <l>The door that admits good news and bad news,</l>
                        <l>The door whence the son left home, confident and <lb />puffed up, </l>
                        <l>The door he <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">returning</add>
                            entered again from a long and <choice>
                                <orig>scan-<lb />dalous</orig>
                                <reg>scandalous<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> absence, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            diseased, broken down, without <lb />innocence, without means. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <del type="edit">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                            <l>Their shapes arise, above all <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the rest&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">else,</add>
                                </subst> the shapes of <lb />full-sized men, </l>
                            <l>Men taciturn yet loving, used to the open air, and the <lb />manners
                                of the open air, </l>
                            <l>Saying their ardor in native forms, saying the old <lb />response, </l>
                            <l>Take what I have then, (saying fain,) take the pay <lb />you
                                approached for, </l>
                            <l>Take the white tears of my blood, if that is what you <lb />are
                                after. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                        <l>Her shape arises, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">the perfect
                                matron,</add></l>
                        <l>She, less guarded than ever, yet more guarded than <lb />ever, </l>
                        <l>The gross and soiled she moves among do not make <lb />her gross and
                            soiled, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;she is the <add
                                    type="edit" rend="underline">perfect matron</add>,</add></l>
                        <l>She knows the thoughts as she passes&#8212;nothing is <lb />concealed
                            from her, </l>
                        <l>She is none the less considerate or friendly therefore,</l>
                        <l>She is the best-beloved&#8212;it is without exception&#8212;
                            <lb />she has no reason to fear, and she does not fear, </l>
                        <l>Oaths, quarrels, hiccupped songs, <del type="overstrike">proposals,</del>
                            smutty <lb />expressions, are idle to her as she passes, </l>
                        <l>She is silent&#8212;she is possessed of herself&#8212;they do
                            <lb />not offend her, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf075r" type="recto" n="141" facs="nyp.00015.149" />
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                        <del type="edit">
                            <l>She receives them as the laws of nature receive them
                                <lb />&#8212;she is strong, </l>
                            <l>She too is a law of nature&#8212;there is no law stronger
                                <lb />than she is. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                        <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d31"/>
                            <l>His shape arises,</l>
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike">Arrogant, masculine, n&#228;ive,
                                    rowdyish,</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>Laugher, weeper, <del type="overstrike">worker,</del> idler, citizen,
                                countryman,</l>
                            <l>Saunterer of woods, stander upon hills, summer <lb />swimmer in
                                rivers or by the sea, </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Of pure American breed, of reckless health, his body
                                    <lb />perfect, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                        >&#182;</add> free from taint from top to toe, free
                                    <lb />forever from headache and dyspepsia, clean-<lb />breathed,
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>Ample-limbed, a good feeder, weight a hundred and <lb />
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">eighty</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">ninety</add>
                                </subst> pounds, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add> full-blooded, six feet high, forty<add
                                    type="insertion" place="marginright">&#8209;two</add>
                                <lb />inches round the breast and back, </l>
                            <l>Countenance sun-burnt, bearded, calm, unrefined,</l>
                            <l>Reminder of animals, meeter of savage and gentleman <lb />on equal
                                terms <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                                </subst></l>
                            <l>Attitudes lithe and erect, costume free, neck gray <lb />and open, of
                                slow movement on foot, </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Passer of his right arm round the shoulders of his <lb />friends,
                                    companion of the street <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>Persuader always of people to give him their sweetest <lb />touches,
                                and never their meanest, </l>
                            <l>A Manhattanese bred, fond of Brooklyn, fond of <lb />Broadway, <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> fond of the life
                                of the wharves and <lb />the great ferries, </l>
                            <l>Enterer everywhere, welcomed everywhere, easily <lb />understood
                                after all, </l>
                            <l>Never offering others, always offering himself, <choice>
                                    <orig>corrob-<lb />orating</orig>
                                    <reg>corroborating<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> his phrenology, </l>
                        <anchor xml:id="d31"/>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf075v" type="verso" n="142" facs="nyp.00015.150" />
                        <note type="authorial" place="margintop">This wants a verse to finish the
                            piece properly &#9758; see beginning (page 126)</note>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>Voluptuous, inhabitive, combative, conscientious, <lb />alimentive,
                                intuitive, <del type="overstrike">of copious friendship,
                                    <lb />sublimity, firmness, self-esteem, comparison, <lb />
                                    individuality, form, locality, eventuality,</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>Avowing by life, manners, works, to contribute <choice>
                                    <orig>illus-<lb />trations</orig>
                                    <reg>illustrations<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> of results of The States, </l>
                            <l>Teacher of the unquenchable creed, namely, egotism,</l>
                            <l>Inviter of others continually henceforth to try their <lb />strength
                                against his. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="34">
                            <l>The <del type="overstrike">main</del> shapes <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        </del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">of our own</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </add> arise!</l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Shapes of Democracy, final <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;result of</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                            >&#8212;out of the</add>
                                    </subst> centuries <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                                    </subst></l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Shapes of those that do not joke with life, but are <lb />in
                                    earnest with life, </l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Shapes, ever projecting other shapes,</l>
                            </del>
                            <l>Shapes of a hundred <del type="overstrike">Free</del> States, <del
                                    type="overstrike">begetting another <lb /> hundred north and
                                        south,<anchor xml:id="t25" />
                                </del></l>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t25">
                                <l>Shapes of turbulent manly cities,</l>
                            </transpose>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Shapes of an untamed breed of young men, and <lb />natural
                                    persons, </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>Shapes of the women fit for These States,</l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Shapes of the composition of all the varieties of the
                                    <lb />earth, </l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Shapes of the friends and home-givers of the whole <lb />earth,
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">Shapes of Democracy, sons of the
                                mother of all,</add>
                            <l>Shapes bracing the whole earth, and braced with the <lb />whole
                                earth. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf076r" type="recto" n="143" facs="nyp.00015.151" />
                <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">? take this out &#38;
                    alter it &#38; vivify for future volume &#9757;</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01507">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00119" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="10" type="hashmark">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">CHANTS DEMOCRATIC.</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Song of Workers
                                        and Tools.</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><del
                                            type="overwrite">Song</del>
                                        <add type="overwrite" place="over">Chant</add> of
                                        Mechanics</add>
                                </del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">To Mechanics.</add>
                                <del seq="7" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Song of Trades
                                        and Implements.</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="9">
                                    <add seq="8" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><del
                                            type="overstrike">Work<del type="overstrike">ing</del>
                                            Mechanics</del>
                                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">Laborers</add> and
                                        Tools</add>
                                </del>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="11" place="infralinear"><del type="overstrike">Chant</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">Song</add> of
                                Occupations</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb /><milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-center"
                         /><lb />3.</head>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">This is satisfactory
                        as it now is Dec 7, 1864</note>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>C<hi rend="smallcaps">OME</hi> closer to me,</l>
                        <l>Push closer, my lovers, and take the best I possess,</l>
                        <l>Yield closer and closer, and give me the best you</l>
                        <l>possess.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>This is unfinished business with me&#8212;How is it with <lb />you? </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I was chilled with the cold
                            types, cylinder, wet paper <lb />between us.<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Male and Female!</l>
                        <l>I pass so poorly with paper and types, I must pass <lb />with the contact
                            of bodies and <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">s</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="edit">S</add>
                            </subst>ouls. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>American masses!</l>
                        <l>I do not thank you for liking me as I am, and liking <lb />the touch of
                            me <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>I know that it is good for you <lb />to do so. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <anchor xml:id="t26" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>Workmen and Workwomen!</l>
                        <l>Were all educations, practical and ornamental, well <lb />displayed out
                            of me, what would it amount to? </l>
                        <l>Were I as the head teacher, charitable proprietor, <lb />wise statesman,
                            what would it amount to? </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginbot">&#42;</note>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t26">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">This is the chant of
                                            the</del>
                                        <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">(I am
                                                the poet</add>
                                        </del>
                                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">This is the
                                                <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="low"
                                                resp="ses">chantet</unclear></add>
                                    </subst>
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">of occupations,
                                        &#38; the</add>
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /> of occupations </l>
                                <l> In <del type="overstrike">the labor</del> of <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">laboring with
                                        engines,</add> trades &#38; <del type="overstrike"
                                        >the</del> fields I perceive <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">God's</add>
                                    </subst>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">greatest meanings,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear"><del
                                                type="overstrike">God's</del> the etnernal
                                            meaning.)</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <l>Impossible else or on less terms.</l>
                                </del>
                            </add>
                        </transpose>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf076v" type="verso" n="144" facs="nyp.00015.152" />
                        <l>Were I to you as the boss employing and paying <lb />you, would that
                            satisfy you? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>The learned, virtuous, benevolent, and the usual <lb />terms, </l>
                        <l>A man like me, and never the usual terms.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>Neither a servant nor a master am I,</l>
                        <l>I take no sooner a large price than a small price&#8212; <lb />I will
                            have my own, whoever enjoys me, </l>
                        <l>I will be even with you, and you shall be even <lb />with me. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>If you stand at work in a shop, I stand as nigh as <lb />the nighest in
                            the same shop, </l>
                        <l>If you bestow gifts on your brother or dearest friend, <lb />I demand as
                            good as your brother or dearest <lb />friend, </l>
                        <l>If your lover, husband, wife, is welcome by day or <lb />night, I must be
                            personally as welcome, </l>
                        <l>If you become degraded, criminal, ill, then I become <lb />so for your
                            sake, </l>
                        <l>If you remember your foolish and outlawed deeds, do <lb />you think I
                            cannot remember my own foolish <lb />and outlawed deeds? <del
                                type="overstrike">plenty of them;</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>If you carouse at the table, I carouse at the opposite <lb />side of the
                            table, </l>
                        <l>If you meet some stranger in the streets, and love <lb />him or her, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">do</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">why</add>
                            </subst> I <del type="overstrike">not</del> often meet strangers in the
                            <lb />street, and love them? </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>If you see <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a good deal</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">so much</add>
                                </subst> remarkable in me, I see just <lb />as much, perhaps more,
                                in you. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf077r" type="recto" n="145" facs="nyp.00015.153" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>Why, what have you thought of yourself <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">mechanic</add>
                            </del>?</l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Is it you then that thought yourself less?</l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Is it you that thought the President greater than <lb />you? </l>
                        <l>Or the rich better off than you? or the educated <lb />wiser than you?
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                <l>
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <l>Because you are greasy or pimpled,<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add> or that you was <lb />once drunk,<del
                                type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del> or a thief, or diseased, <del type="overstrike">or
                                rheumatic,</del>
                            <lb />or a prostitute <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                            </subst> or are so now, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add><del type="overstrike">or from frivolity or <lb />
                                impotence,</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">o</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">O</add>
                            </subst>r that you are no scholar, and never <lb />saw your name in
                            print, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>do you give
                            in that you <lb />are any less immortal? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>Souls of men and women! it is not you I call unseen, <lb />unheard,
                            untouchable and untouching, </l>
                        <l>It is not you I go argue pro and con about, and to <lb />settle whether
                            you are alive or no, </l>
                        <l>I own publicly who you are, if nobody else owns <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                            </subst>
                            <lb /><del type="overstrike">I see and hear you, and what you give and
                                take,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike"><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>What
                                is there you cannot give and take?<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">)</add></del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>I see not merely that you are polite or white-faced, <lb /><add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>married, single,
                                citizens of old States, citizens of <lb />new States, </l>
                            <l>Eminent in some profession, a lady or gentleman in a <lb />parlor,
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>or dressed
                                in the jail uniform, or pulpit <lb />uniform <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                                </subst></l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <note type="authorial">13.&#8212;</note>
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                                <l>Grown, half-grown, and babe, of this country and <lb />every
                                    country, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add>indoors and outdoors, one just as <lb />much as
                                    the other<del type="overstrike">,</del> I see, <add
                                        type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182; <subst>
                                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                                        </subst>he Souls <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                            >of ever &#38; all I acknowledge,</add> I <del
                                            type="overstrike">see <unclear
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" cert="low" resp="ses"
                                                >ownt</unclear></del> the main things,</add></l>
                                <l><add type="insertion" place="marginbot">Them before all I
                                        see</add> And all else <del type="overstrike">is</del>
                                    behind or through them.</l>
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                        <l>The wife&#8212;and she is not one jot less than the <lb />husband, </l>
                        <l>The daughter&#8212;and she is just as good as the son,</l>
                        <l>The mother&#8212;and she is every bit as much as the <lb />father.
                        </l>
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                        <l>Offspring of <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">those not rich,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">ignorant and
                                    poor,</add>
                            </subst> boys apprenticed to <lb />trades, </l>
                        <l>Young fellows working on farms, and old fellows <lb />working on farms, </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The n&#228;ive, the simple and hardy, he going to the <lb />polls
                                to vote, he who has a good time, and he <lb />has who a bad time,
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Mechanics, southerners, new arrivals,</del><add
                                type="insertion" place="supralinear">Sailor&#8209;men,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">laborers, sailors, <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">before the mast</add>
                                <lb /> man-o'wars-men,</del> merchantmen, coasters, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">immigrants,</add></l>
                        <l>All these I see&#8212;but nigher and farther the same I <lb />see, </l>
                        <l>None shall escape me, and none shall wish to escape <lb />me. </l>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                        <l>I bring what you much need, yet always have,</l>
                        <l>Not money, amours, dress, eating, but as good;</l>
                        <l>I send no agent or medium, offer no representative <lb />of value, but
                            offer the value itself. </l>
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                        <l>There is something that comes home to one now and <lb />perpetually, </l>
                        <l>It is not what is printed, preached, discussed&#8212;it <lb />eludes
                            discussion and print, </l>
                        <l>It is not to be put in a book&#8212;it is not in this <lb />book, </l>
                        <l>It is for you, whoever you are&#8212;it is no farther from <lb />you
                            than your hearing and sight are from you, </l>
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                        <l>It is hinted by nearest, commonest, readiest&#8212;it is <lb /><del
                                type="overstrike">not them, though it is</del> endlessly provoked by
                            <lb />them <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add><del
                                type="overstrike">(what is there ready and near you now?)</del>
                        </l>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>You may read in many languages, yet read nothing <lb />about it, </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>You may read the President's Message, and read <lb />nothing about it
                                there, </l>
                        </del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                <l>Nothing in the reports from the State department or
                                    <lb />Treasury department, or in the daily papers or <lb />the
                                    weekly papers, </l>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                    <l>And the daily <del type="overstrike">&#38; weekly</del>
                                        papers &#38; prices current read, &#38; nothing
                                        about it there,</l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Or in the census returns, assessors' returns, prices <lb />current,
                                or any accounts of stock. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                        <l>The sun and stars that float in the open air <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>the <lb />apple-shaped earth, and we upon it&#8212;surely
                            the <lb />drift of <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">them</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">all this</add>
                            </del> is something grand! </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I do not know what it <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">is</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">says</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>, except that it is grand, <lb />and that it is happiness, </l>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">block cap letter</note>
                        </del>
                        <l>And that the enclosing purport of us here is not a <lb />speculation, or
                            bon-mot, or reconnoissance, </l>
                        <l>And that it is not something which by luck may <lb />turn out well for
                            us, and without luck must be <lb />a failure for us, </l>
                        <l>And not something which may yet be retracted in <lb />a certain
                                contingency.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
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                        <l>The light and shade, the curious sense of body <lb />and identity, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the greed that with
                            perfect <choice>
                                <orig>com-<lb />plaisance</orig>
                                <reg>complaisance<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> devours all things, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>the endless pride <lb />and out-stretching of
                                man,<del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                            </del><del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">with</add>
                            </del> unspeakable joys and <lb />sorrows, </l>
                        <l>The wonder every one sees in every one else he sees, <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>and the wonders that
                            fill each minute of time <choice>
                                <orig>for-<lb />ever,</orig>
                                <reg>forever<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <del type="overstrike">and each acre of surface and space forever,</del>
                        </l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                            <l>What have you reckon'd them for <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                                </subst> camerado?</l>
                        </add>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf078v" type="verso" n="148" facs="nyp.00015.156" />
                        <l>Have you reckoned them <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">all</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">for <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">your</add>
                                </subst>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">merely</add> trade, or
                                farm-work? <lb />
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> or for the
                                profits of <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">your</add>
                                </subst> store? or to achieve <choice>
                                    <orig>your-<lb />self</orig>
                                    <reg>yourself<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> a position? <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add></del> or to fill a gentleman's leisure,
                            <lb />or a lady's leisure? </l>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Have you reckoned</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overwrite">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                        <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                            >that</unclear>
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Or that</add>
                            </subst> the landscape took substance and <lb />form that it might be
                            painted in a picture? </l>
                        <l>Or men and women that they might be written of, <lb />and songs sung? </l>
                        <l>Or the attraction of gravity, and the great <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">laws and</del>
                            </restore>
                            <lb />harmonious combinations, <del type="overstrike">and the fluids of
                                the <lb /> air,</del> as subjects for the savans? </l>
                        <l>Or the brown land and the blue sea for maps and <lb />charts? </l>
                        <l>Or the stars to be put in constellations and named <lb />fancy names? </l>
                        <l>Or that the growth of seeds is for agricultural tables, <lb />or
                            agriculture itself? </l>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                        <l>Old institutions&#8212;these arts, libraries, legends, <add
                                type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#182; These</add>
                            <choice>
                                <orig>col-<lb />lections,</orig>
                                <reg>collections<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and the practice handed along in <choice><orig>manu-<lb />factures</orig><reg>manufactures<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;will we rate them so high? </l>
                        <l>Will we rate our cash and business high? I have <lb />no objection, </l>
                        <l>I rate them high as the highest&#8212;then a child born <lb />of a
                            woman and man I rate beyond all rate. </l>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                        <l>We thought our Union grand, and our Constitution <lb />grand, </l>
                        <l>I do not say they are not grand and good, for they <lb />are, </l>
                        <l>I am this day just as much in love with them as <lb />you, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf079r" type="recto" n="149" facs="nyp.00015.157" />
                        <l>Then I am in love with you, and with all my fellows <lb />upon the earth.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                        <l>We consider bibles and religions divine&#8212;I do not <lb />say they
                            are not divine, </l>
                        <l>I say they have all grown out of you, and may grow <lb />out of you
                            still, </l>
                        <l>It is not they who give the life&#8212;it is you who give <lb />the
                            life, </l>
                        <l>Leaves are not more shed from the trees, or trees <lb />from the earth,
                            than they are shed out of you. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">&#42; bring in page
                        158 &#9757;</note>
                    <del type="hashmark">
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                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <l>
                                        <subst>
                                            <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                            </del>
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">You as a man
                                                or woman, <del type="overstrike">as</del> a mystic
                                                soul,</add>
                                        </subst>
                                    </l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <l>The sum of all known reverence I add up in you, <lb />whoever you
                                are, </l>
                            <l>The President is there in the White House for you&#8212; <lb />it
                                is not you who are here for him, </l>
                            <l>The Secretaries act in their bureaus for you&#8212;not <lb />you
                                here for them, </l>
                            <l>The Congress convenes every Twelfth Month for <lb />you, <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">little</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">petty</add>
                                </subst> things these <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><del
                                        type="overstrike">compared</del> compared to you</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">to you, to the mystic soul you are)</del></l>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                    <l>Compared to the mystic soul to you (&#8212;what are
                                        they?)</l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                            </del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                                    <l>You as a <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />, a mystic
                                        soul,</l>
                                    <l>Awake! arise <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /> all you are
                                        eligible.)</l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Laws, courts, the forming of States, the charters of
                                    <lb />cities, the going and coming of commerce and <lb />mails,
                                    are all for you. </l>
                            </del>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
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                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>List well, <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">now</add> my
                                scholars dear:</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>All doctrines, <del type="overstrike">all</del> politics<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">and</del> civilization, exurge from <lb />you, </l>
                        <l>All sculpture and monuments, and anything inscribed <lb />anywhere, are
                            tallied in you, </l>
                        <l>The gist of histories and statistics as far back as the <lb />records
                            reach, is in you this hour, and myths <lb />and tales the same, </l>
                        <l>If you were not breathing and walking here, where <lb />would they all
                            be? </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf079v" type="verso" n="150" facs="nyp.00015.158" />
                        <l>The most renowned poems would be ashes, orations <lb />and plays would be
                            vacuums. </l>
                    </lg>
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                        <l><restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">All</del>
                            </restore> architecture is what you do to it when you look <lb />upon
                            it, </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Did you think it was in the
                            white or gray stone? <lb />or the lines of the arches and cornices?<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
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                        <l><restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">All</del>
                            </restore> music is what awakes from you, when you are <lb />reminded by
                            the instruments, </l>
                        <l>It is not the violins and the cornets&#8212;it is not the <lb />oboe
                            nor the beating drums, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>nor the score of the <lb />baritone singer singing
                            his sweet romanza <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst> nor <lb />that of the men's chorus, nor that of the women's
                            <lb />chorus <subst>
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                        <l>It is nearer and farther than they.</l>
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                        <l>Will the whole come back then?</l>
                        <l>Can each see signs of the best by a look in the <lb />looking-glass? is
                            there nothing greater or more? </l>
                        <l>Does all sit there with you, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and here with me?</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">with the mystic
                                        <del type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">unseen</add>
                                    </del><add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">unseen</add>
                                    soul?</add>
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                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                        <l><del type="erasure">(</del>Strange &#38; hard <subst>
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                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">that</add>
                            </subst> paradox true I give,</l>
                        <l>Objects gross &#38; the unseen <subst>
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                        <l>The old, forever-new things <subst>
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                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>you foolish child! the <lb />closest, simplest things, this
                            moment with you <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>Your person, and every particle that relates to your <lb />person, <add
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                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The pulses of your brain, waiting their chance and
                                <lb />encouragement at every deed or sight <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                                </subst>
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                            <l>Anything you do in public by day, and anything <lb />you do in secret
                                between-days <subst>
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                                </subst>
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                            <l>What is called right and what is called wrong&#8212; <lb />what
                                you behold or touch, or what causes your <lb />anger or wonder <subst>
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                        <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                            <l>The old forever&#8209;new things,</l>
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                        <pb xml:id="leaf080r" type="recto" n="151" facs="nyp.00015.159" />
                        <note type="authorial">all out</note>
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                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>The ankle-chain of the slave, the bed of the bed-<lb />house, the
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                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </subst></l>
                            </del>
                            <l>What is seen or learnt in the street, or intuitively <lb />learnt, </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>What is learnt in <subst>
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                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                                    </subst>he public school, <add type="insertion">with its</add>
                                    spelling, reading, <lb />writing, ciphering, the black-board,
                                    the teacher's <lb />diagrams <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>The panes of the <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
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                                        <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over"
                                                >&#182;</add>
                                        </del>
                                        <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="marginleft"
                                            >&#8212;</add>
                                    </subst> the going forth in the morning, the aimless
                                    <lb />spending of the day <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>(What is it that you made money? What is it that you <lb />got
                                    what you wanted?) </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>The usual routine, the <del type="overstrike">work-</del>shop,
                                factory, <del type="overstrike">yard,</del> office, <lb />store,
                                desk <subst>
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                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>The jaunt of hunting or fishing, and the life of <choice>
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                                    </choice> or fishing, </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Pasture</del>
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                                </subst>-life, foddering, milking, herding, and all the <lb /><del
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                                    <del seq="3" type="overwrite">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="4" type="overwrite" place="over">&#38;
                                        tools,</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>The plum-orchard, apple-orchard, gardening, <choice>
                                        <orig>seed-<lb />lings,</orig>
                                        <reg>seedlings<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice> cuttings, flowers, vines, </l>
                            </del>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">Grains, manures, marl, clay, loam, the
                                    subsoil</del>
                                <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">The</add> plough, the
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                                    hoe, irrigation, <lb /> draining <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </subst></del></l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>The curry-comb, the horse-cloth, the halter, bridle, <lb />bits,
                                    the very wisps of straw, </l>
                            </del>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t27">
                                <l>The barn and barn-yard, the bins, mangers, mows, <lb />racks <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                            </transpose>
                            <l>Manufactures, <del type="overstrike">commerce,</del> engineering, the
                                building of <lb />cities, <del type="erasure">&#182;</del>every
                                    trade<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">carried on there,</del> and the
                                <lb />implements of every trade, </l>
                            <l>The anvil, tongs, hammer, the axe and wedge, the <lb />square, mitre,
                                jointer, smoothing-plane, </l>
                        </del>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf080v" type="verso" n="152" facs="nyp.00015.160" />
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l><del type="overstrike">The plumbob,</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">The</add> trowel, level, <del
                                    type="overstrike">the</del> wall-scaffold, <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">&#38;</add> the <lb />work of walls and
                                ceilings, or any mason-work <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">The steam-engine,</del> lever, crank, axle,
                                piston, shaft, <lb />air-pump, boiler, <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">pulley,</add> beam, <del type="overstrike"
                                    >pulley,</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182; </add> hinge, flange,
                                <lb />band, bolt, throttle, governors, up and down <lb />rods <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <l>The ship's compass, the sailor's tarpaulin, the stays <lb />and
                                lanyards, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182; </add> the
                                ground tackle for anchoring or <lb />mooring, the life-boat for
                                wrecks, </l>
                            <l>The sloop's tiller, the pilot's wheel and bell, the yacht <lb />or
                                fish-smack <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182; </add>
                                </subst>the great gay-pennanted three-<lb />hundred-foot steamboat,
                                under full headway, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;
                                </add>with <lb />her proud fat breasts, and her delicate
                                swift-<lb />flashing paddles <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>The trail, line, hooks, sinkers, and the seine, and <lb />hauling
                                    the seine <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>The arsenal, small-arms, rifles, gunpowder, shot, caps,
                                    <lb />wadding, ordnance for war, and carriages; </l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft"
                                    >&#8212;</add>Every-day objects, house-chairs, carpet, bed, <choice>
                                        <orig>coun-<lb />terpane</orig>
                                        <reg>counterpane<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice> of the bed, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                        >&#182;</add>him or her sleeping at night, <lb />wind
                                    blowing, indefinite noises <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>The snow-storm or rain-storm, the tow-trowsers, the <lb />lodge-hut
                                in the woods, the still-hunt <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <l>City and country, fire-place, candle, gas-light, heater,
                                <lb />aqueduct <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <l>The message of the Governor, Mayor, Chief of Police
                                <lb />&#8212;the dishes of breakfast, dinner, supper <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <l>The bunk-room, the fire-engine, the string-team, the <lb />car or
                                truck behind <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <l>The paper I write on or you write on, <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">and</add>every word we <lb />write, <add
                                    type="insertion" place="marginleft">and</add> every cross and
                                twirl of the pen, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add>and the <lb />curious way we write what we
                                think, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>yet very
                                <lb />faintly <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf081r" type="recto" n="153" facs="nyp.00015.161" />
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The directory, the detector, the ledger, the books in <lb />ranks on
                                the book-shelves, the clock attached to <lb />the wall <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The ring on your finger, the lady's wristlet, the scent-<lb />powder,
                                the druggist's vials and jars, the draught <lb />of lager-beer, </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>The etui of surgical instruments, the etui of oculist's <lb />or
                                aurist's instruments, or dentist's instruments, </l>
                            <l>The permutating lock that can be turned and locked <lb />as many
                                different ways as there are minutes in a <lb />year, </l>
                        </del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                            <l><add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">Blacksmithing</add>
                                House&#8209;building, measuring, sawing the boards,</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>Glass-blowing, nail-making, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">salt-making,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">coopering,</add>
                            </subst> tin-roofing, <lb />shingle-dressing, <del type="overstrike"
                                >candle-making, lock-making and <lb /> hanging, </del></l>
                        <l>Ship- <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">carpentering</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and all the work</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="marginleft">joining</add>
                            </subst>, dock-building, fish-curing, ferrying, <lb /><del
                                type="overstrike">stone-breaking,</del> flagging of <del
                                type="overstrike">side-</del>walks by flaggers, </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The pump, the pile-driver, the great derrick, the coal-<lb />kiln and
                                brick-kiln, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Coal-mines <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">and</add>
                            </subst> all that is down there <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                    >below&#8212;</add>
                            </subst>the lamps in the <lb />darkness, echoes, songs, what
                            meditations, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> what
                            <lb />vast native thoughts <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">are
                                there</add> looking through smutch'd <lb />faces <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>Iron-works, forge-fires in the mountains, or by <choice>
                                <orig>river-<lb />banks,</orig>
                                <reg>riverbanks<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> men <del
                                type="overstrike">around</del> feeling the melt with huge
                                <lb />crowbars<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add type="overwrite" place="over">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </subst> lumps of ore, the due combining of <lb />ore, limestone, coal <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>the blast-furnace and the <lb />puddling-furnace, the loup-lump
                            at the bottom of <lb />the melt at last <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>the rolling-mill, the stumpy <lb />bars of pig-iron, the strong
                            clean-shaped T rail <lb />for railroads <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>Oil-works, silk-works, white-lead-works, the <choice>
                                <orig>sugar-<lb />house,</orig>
                                <reg>sugarhouse<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> steam-saws, the great mills and factories <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Lead-mines, and all that is done in lead-mines, or <lb />with the
                                lead afterward <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf081v" type="verso" n="154" facs="nyp.00015.162" />
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Copper-mines, the sheets of copper, and what is <lb />formed out of
                                the sheets, and all the work in <lb />forming it <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>Stone-cutting,
                            shapely trimmings for fa&#231;ades, or <choice>
                                <orig>win-<lb />dow</orig>
                                <reg>window<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> or door lintels <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>the mallet, the tooth-chisel, <lb />the jib to protect the thumb <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Oakum, the oakum-chisel, the caulking-iron&#8212;the <lb />kettle
                                of boiling vault-cement, and the fire under <lb />the kettle <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>The <del type="overstrike">cotton-bale,</del> the stevedore's hook, the
                            saw and <lb />buck of the sawyer, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>the screen of the coal-<lb />screener, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>the mould of the moulder <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">the <choice><orig>work-<lb />
                                ing-knife</orig><reg>working-knife<lb/></reg></choice> of the butcher, the ice-saw, and all the <lb /> work with
                                ice <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </del></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">four</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">five</add>
                                </subst>-double cylinder press, the hand-press, the <lb />frisket
                                and tympan, the compositor's stick and <lb />rule, type-setting,
                                making up the forms, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add>all the <lb />work of newspaper counters,
                                folders, carriers, <lb />news-men <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></l>
                        </del>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">The implements for daguerreotyping&#8212;the
                                tools</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">The work</add> of <lb />the
                            rigger, grappler, sail-maker, block-maker <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Goods of gutta-percha, papier-mach <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">e</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit">&#233;</add>
                                </subst>, colors, brushes, <lb />brush-making, glazier's implements,
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The veneer and glue-pot, the confectioner's <choice>
                                    <orig>orna-<lb />ments,</orig>
                                    <reg>ornaments<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> the decanter and glasses, the shears and <lb />flat-iron <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>The awl and knee-strap, <del type="overstrike">the pint measure and quart
                                <lb /> measure,</del> the counter and stool <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                            </subst>the <add type="insertion" place="marginright">shears &#38;
                                flat&#8209;iron</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">writing-pen <lb /> of quill or
                                metal&#8212;the making of all sorts of <lb /> edged tools <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                                <lb /></del></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The ladders and hanging-ropes of the gymnasium, <lb />manly
                                exercises, the game of base-ball, running, <lb />leaping, pitching
                                quoits <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf082r" type="recto" n="155" facs="nyp.00015.163" />
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The designs for wall-papers, oil-cloths, carpets, the <lb />fancies
                                for goods for women, the book-binder's <lb />stamps <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>The brewery, brewing, the malt, the vats, every <lb />thing that is done
                            by brewers, <del type="overstrike">also by <choice><orig>wine-<lb />makers,</orig><reg>winemakers,<lb/></reg></choice> also vinegar-makers <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </del><lb /></l>
                        <l>Leather-dressing, coach-making, boiler-making, rope-<lb />twisting, <del
                                type="overstrike">distilling, sign-painting, <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">&#182;</add></del>lime-burning, <del
                                type="overstrike">coopering,
                                cotton-picking&#8212;electro-plating, <choice>
                                    <orig>elec-<lb />trotyping,</orig>
                                    <reg>electrotyping<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> stereotyping <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </del></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Stave-machines, planing-machines, reaping-machines,
                                <lb />ploughing-machines, thrashing-machines, steam-<lb />wagons <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">The cart of the carman, the omnibus,</del> the
                            ponderous <lb />dray <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#38; all
                                        waggoning;</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">This</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">The</add>
                                    </subst> message sent <del type="overstrike">at once</del>
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">over a continent, <del
                                            type="overstrike">&#182;and then</del></add> from
                                    the East<del type="erasure">ern</del> to the Western sea;</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>The wires of the
                                electric telegraph stretched on land, <lb />or laid at the bottom of
                                the sea, and then the <lb />message in an instant from a thousand
                                miles off, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>The <del type="overstrike">snow-plough, and two engines pushing
                                it&#8212;the <lb /> ride in the express-train of only one car,
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the <lb />
                                swift go through a howling storm&#8212;the</del>
                            <choice>
                                <orig>locomo-<lb />tive,</orig>
                                <reg>locomotive<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and all that is done about <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">or with</add>
                            </del> a locomotive<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">&#38; the train
                                following,</add></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The bear-hunt or coon-hunt&#8212;the bonfire of shavings <lb />in
                                the open lot in the city, and the crowd of <lb />children watching <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The blows of the fighting-man, the upper-cut, and <lb />one-two-three <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Pyrotechny, letting off colored fire-works at night, <lb />fancy
                                figures and jets <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Shop-windows, coffins in the sexton's ware-room,
                                fruit <lb /> on the fruit-stand <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </subst></del>beef <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">in</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">on</add>
                            </subst> the butcher's stall, <lb />the slaughter-house of the butcher,
                            the butcher <lb />in his killing-clothes <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf082v" type="verso" n="156" facs="nyp.00015.164" />
                        <l>The <del type="overstrike">area of</del> pens of live pork, the
                            killing-hammer, the <lb />hog-hook, the scalder's tub, gutting, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the cutter's
                            <lb />cleaver, the packer's maul, and the plenteous <lb />winter-work of
                            pork-packing <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>Flour-works, grinding of wheat, <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">rye,</del>
                            </restore> maize, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >&#38;</add>rice&#8212; <lb />
                            <del type="overstrike">the barrels and the half and quarter barrels,
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the
                                <lb />loaded barges, the high piles on wharves and <lb />levees,
                            </del></l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <l>The work of men on railroads, coasters, fish&#8209;boats,
                                canals,</l>
                        </add>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Bread and cakes in the bakery, the milliner's <choice>
                                    <orig>rib-<lb />bons,</orig>
                                    <reg>ribbons<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> the dress-maker's patterns, the tea-table, <lb />the
                                home-made sweetmeats; </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Cheap literature, maps, charts, lithographs, daily and <lb />weekly
                                newspapers <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The column of wants in the <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">one-cent</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                            >morning</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> paper, the news <lb />by telegraph, amusements, operas,
                                shows <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The business parts of a city, the trottoirs of a city <lb />when
                                thousands of well-dressed people walk up <lb />and down <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The cotton, woollen, linen you wear <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                        >&#8212;</add>
                                </subst>the money you <lb />make and spend, </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Your room and bed-room, your piano-forte, the stove <lb />and
                                cook-pans, </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The house you live in, the rent, the other tenants, the <lb />deposit
                                in the savings-bank, the trade at the <lb />grocery, </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The pay on Seventh Day night, the going home, and <lb />the
                                purchases; </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>In them the heft of the heaviest&#8212;in them far more
                                <lb />than you estimated, and far less also, </l>
                        </del>
                        <note type="authorial">&#42;</note>
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">&#42; <l>The daily routine of
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">any man's</add> life,
                                the shop, yard, store, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                    >&#38;</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">desk</del> factory;</l>
                            <l>These shows <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ever</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">all</add>
                                </subst>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                        <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                            >near</unclear>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">near</add>
                                </subst> you by day or night, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">your trade,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;
                                        workman!</add>
                                </subst> whoever you are, your daily work <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">!</add>
                                </subst></l></add>
                        <l>In them <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">the</add> realities for
                            you and me&#8212;in them <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >the</add> poems for <lb />you and me, </l>
                        <l>In them, not yourself&#8212;you and your Soul enclose all
                            <lb />things, regardless of estimation, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf083r" type="recto" n="157" facs="nyp.00015.165" />
                        <l>In them <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">your</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">themes,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">arousing pleasures
                                &#38;</add> hints, <del type="overstrike"
                            >provokers</del>&#8212;if not, the whole <lb />earth has no <del
                                type="overstrike">themes,</del>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">hints,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">for you</add>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">for you <gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /> soul,</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">provokers,</del>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">and never <lb /> had.</del>
                            </restore>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                        <l>I do not affirm what you see beyond is futile&#8212;I do <lb />not
                            advise you to stop, </l>
                        <l>I do not say leadings you thought great are not great,</l>
                        <l>But I say that none lead <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >on</add> to greater, <del type="overstrike">sadder, happier,</del>
                            <lb />than those lead to <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">.</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                            <l>And I say <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">your</add>
                                </subst>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">mechanics</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                            >trades</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="4" place="infralinear">occupation<del
                                            type="overstrike">s</del></add>
                                </subst>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">are</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">is</add>
                                </subst> great <del type="overstrike">as any</del>&#8212;and <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">their</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">its</add>
                                </subst> very tools are great.</l>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                        <l>Will you seek afar off? You surely come back at last,</l>
                        <l>In things best known to you, finding the best, or <del type="overstrike"
                                >as</del>
                            <lb />good as the best, </l>
                        <l>In folks nearest to you finding <del type="overstrike">also</del> the
                            sweetest, <lb />strongest, lovingest, </l>
                        <l>Happiness, knowledge, not in another place, but this
                            <lb />place&#8212;not for another hour, but this hour, </l>
                        <l>Man in the first you see or touch<restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            </restore>always <del type="overstrike">in your <lb /> friend,
                                brother,</del><add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">in</add>
                            nighest neighbor&#8212;Woman in <lb /><del type="overstrike"
                                >your</del> mother, lover, wife, </l>
                        <l>The popular tastes and <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">occupations</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">employments</add>
                            </subst> taking precedence <lb />in poems or any where, </l>
                        <l>You workwomen and workmen of These States having <lb />your own divine
                            and strong life, </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Looking the President always sternly in the face, <lb />unbending,
                                nonchalant, </l>
                            <l>Understanding that he is to be kept by you to short <lb />and sharp
                                account of himself, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>And <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">to me</add>
                            </del> all else <del type="overstrike">thus far</del> giving place to
                            men and women <lb />like you. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial">END.</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                <l>O you robust, sacred!</l>
                                <l>I cannot tell you how I love you;</l>
                            </del>
                            <note type="authorial">
                                <unclear reason="illegible" cert="high" resp="ses">om</unclear>
                            </note>
                            <del type="hashmark">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                                    <l>To me, robust the mystic soul,</l>
                                    <l>Out of all phenomena, pageants, it descends to <del
                                            type="overstrike">there to</del> you,</l>
                                    <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">And</add> Over all
                                        rites, histories, wealth,</l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf083v" type="verso" n="158" facs="nyp.00015.166" />
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>All I love America for, is contained in men and <lb />women like you.
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                <l>This song &#38; indeed all my songs are for <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">men &#38; women
                                        like</add> you,</l>
                                <l>Who or what can I make much of except you?</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                                <l>This song of the joy of <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">occupations</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                            >employments</add>
                                    </subst>
                                    <del type="overstrike">&#8212;the enthusiasm thereof, is all
                                        for you</del></l>
                                <l>O all my songs are for you.</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42; tr to page 149</note>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out without fail</note>
                    </del>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr to page 149</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                <l><del type="overstrike">To me, persons like you,</del>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">o</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">O</add>
                                    </subst>ver all rites, histories, wealth;</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>When the psalm sings instead
                            of the singer,</l>
                        <l>When the script preaches instead of the preacher,</l>
                        <l>When the pulpit descends and goes instead of the <lb />carver that carved
                            the supporting-desk, </l>
                        <l>When I can touch the body of books, by night or by <lb />day, and when
                            they touch my body back again, </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>When the holy vessels, or the bits of the eucharist, <lb />or <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="supralinear">or of the churches or
                                    the</add> the lath and plast, procreate as effectually as
                                <lb />the young silver-smiths or bakers, or the masons <lb />in
                                their over-alls, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>When a university course convinces like a slumbering <lb />woman and
                            child convince, </l>
                        <l>When the minted gold in the vault smiles like the <lb />night-watchman's
                            daughter, </l>
                        <l>When warrantee deeds loafe in chairs opposite, and <lb />are my friendly
                            companions, </l>
                        <l>I intend to reach them my hand, and make as much <lb />of them as I do of
                            men and women like you. </l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf084r" type="recto" n="159" facs="nyp.00015.167" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01508">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00114" />
                    </relations>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">leave this out for present</note>
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">CHANTS DEMOCRATIC.</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">An American
                                        Bouquet!</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="margintop">Feuillage
                                    Continental.</add>
                                <del seq="6" type="hashmark">
                                    <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="margintop">Feuillage</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="8" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="7" type="unmarked" place="margintop">American
                                        Feuillage.</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="9" type="unmarked" place="margintop">A Bunch of</add>
                                <add seq="10" type="unmarked" place="margintop">America always! Her
                                    and hers do I always sing!</add>
                                <add seq="11" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">America always!
                                    Her and hers do I always sing!</add>
                            </subst><lb /><milestone unit="undeclared" rend="horbar-short-center"
                             /><lb />4.</head>
                        <l>A<hi rend="smallcaps">MERICA</hi> always! <add type="insertion"
                                place="inline">Always to cull from our own</add></l>
                        <l>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">Always me joined with you, whoever you
                                    are!</del>
                            </restore>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Always</add>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">the compact union <add
                                    type="insertion" place="supralinear">together</add> of you and
                                me and all!</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">Always our own feuillage!</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">demain the continent!</add>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr down somewhere else</note>
                        <l>Always Florida's green peninsula! Always the <choice>
                                <orig>price-<lb />less</orig>
                                <reg>priceless<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> delta of Louisiana! Always the cotton-fields <lb />of Alabama
                            and Texas! </l>
                        <l>Always California's golden hills and hollows&#8212;and <lb />the
                            silver mountains of New Mexico! <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>Always <lb />soft-breath'd Cuba<del
                                type="overstrike">!</del><add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >where she stretches</add>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline"><del type="overstrike">off</del>
                                there in the sea;</add></l>
                        <l>Always the vast slope drained by the Southern Sea
                            <lb />&#8212;inseparable with the slopes drained by the
                            <lb />Eastern and Western Seas, </l>
                        <del type="edit">
                            <l>The area the Eighty-third <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">y</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit">Y</add>
                                </subst>ear of These States&#8212;the <lb />three and a half
                                millions of square miles, </l>
                            <l>The eighteen thousand miles of sea-coast and bay-<lb />coast on the
                                main&#8212;the thirty thousand miles <lb />of river navigation, </l>
                            <l>The seven millions of distinct families, and the same <lb />number of
                                dwellings&#8212;Always these and more, <lb />branching forth
                                into numberless branches; </l>
                            <l>Always the free range and diversity! Always the <lb />continent of
                                Democracy! </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Always the prairies, pastures, forests, vast cities, <lb />travellers,
                            Kanada, the snows; </l>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf084v" type="verso" n="160" facs="nyp.00015.168" />
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Mannahatta's streets I reach afar.</head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>Always these <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">really</add>
                            compact lands&#8212;lands tied at the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">hips</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">breast</add>
                            </subst>
                            <lb />with the belt stringing the huge oval lakes; </l>
                        <l>Always the West, with strong native persons&#8212;the
                            <lb />increasing density there&#8212;the habitans, friendly,
                            <lb />threatening, ironical, scorning invaders; </l>
                        <l>All sights, South, North, East&#8212;all deeds, <choice>
                                <orig>promis-<lb />cuously</orig>
                                <reg>promiscuously<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> done at all times, </l>
                        <l>All characters, movements, growths&#8212;a few noticed, <lb />myriads
                            unnoticed, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Through</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">From</add>
                        </subst> Mannahatta's streets I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">walking</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">reach<del
                                    type="overwrite">ing</del></add>
                        </subst>, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">this <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">native</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">native</add>
                            </subst> bouquet</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">these things</del>
                        <lb />gathering <del type="overstrike">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#8212;</add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">chant<unclear
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses">ing</unclear>
                                in the name of all;)</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>On interior rivers, by night, in the glare of pine <lb />knots, steamboats
                        wooding up; </l>
                    <l>Sunlight by day on the valley of the Susquehanna, <lb />and on the valley<del
                            type="overstrike">s</del> of the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Potomac and <choice><orig>Rappa-<lb />hannock</orig><reg>Rappahannock<lb/></reg></choice></del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Mohawk</add>
                        </subst>, <del type="overstrike">and the valleys of the Roanoke and <lb />
                            Delaware; </del></l>
                    <l>In their northerly wilds beasts of prey haunting the <lb />Adirondacks, the
                        hills&#8212;or lapping the Saginaw <lb />waters to drink; </l>
                    <l>In a lonesome inlet, a sheldrake, lost from the flock, <lb />sitting on the
                        water, rocking silently; </l>
                    <l>In farmers' barns, oxen in the stable, their harvest <lb />labor done <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>they rest standing<del
                            type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>they are too <lb />tired;<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>Afar on arctic ice, the she-walrus lying drowsily, <lb />while her cubs play
                        around; </l>
                    <l>The hawk sailing where men have not yet sailed&#8212; <lb />the farthest
                        polar sea, ripply, crystalline, open, <lb />beyond the floes; </l>
                    <l>White drift spooning ahead, where the ship in the <lb />tempest dashes; </l>
                    <l>On solid land, what is done in cities, as the bells <del type="overstrike"
                            >all</del>
                        <lb />strike midnight <del type="overstrike">together;</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">loud &#38; strong &#38;
                            slow,</add>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf085r" type="recto" n="161" facs="nyp.00015.169" />
                    <l>In primitive woods, the sounds there also sounding&#8212; <lb />the howl
                        of the wolf, the scream of the panther, <lb />and the hoarse bellow of the
                        elk; </l>
                    <l>In winter beneath the hard blue ice of Moosehead <lb />Lake&#8212;in
                        summer visible through the clear <lb />waters, the great trout swimming; </l>
                    <l>In lower latitudes, in warmer air, in the Carolinas, <lb />the large black
                        buzzard floating slowly high <lb />beyond the tree-tops, </l>
                    <l>Below, the red cedar, festooned with tylandria&#8212;the <lb />pines and
                        cypresses, growing out of the white <lb />sand that spreads far and flat; </l>
                    <l>Rude boats descending the big Pedee&#8212;climbing <lb />plants,
                        parasites, with colored flowers and berries, <lb />enveloping huge trees, </l>
                    <l>The waving drapery on the live oak, trailing long and <lb />low, noiselessly
                        waved by the wind; </l>
                    <l>The camp of Georgia wagoners, just after dark&#8212;the
                        <lb />supper-fires, and the cooking and eating by <lb />whites and negroes, </l>
                    <l>Thirty or forty great wagons&#8212;the mules, cattle, <lb />horses,
                        feeding from troughs, </l>
                    <l>The shadows, gleams, up under the leaves of the old
                        <lb />sycamore-trees&#8212;the flames <add type="unmarked"
                            place="supralinear">&#38;</add><del type="overstrike"
                            >&#8212;also the black</del>
                        <lb />smoke from the pitch-pine, curling and rising; </l>
                    <l>Southern fishermen fishing&#8212;the sounds and inlets <lb />of North
                        Carolina's coast&#8212;the shad-fishery <lb />and the herring-fishery <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#38;</add>
                        </subst>the large sweep-seines <lb />&#8212;the windlasses on shore
                        worked by horses&#8212; <lb />the clearing, curing, and packing houses; </l>
                    <l>Deep in the forest, in the piney woods, turpentine <lb />and tar dropping
                        from the incisions in the trees <lb />&#8212;There is the turpentine
                        distillery, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf085v" type="verso" n="162" facs="nyp.00015.170" />
                    <l>There are the negroes at work, in good health&#8212;the <lb />ground in
                        all directions is covered with pine <lb />straw; </l>
                    <l>In Tennessee and Kentucky, slaves busy in the <choice>
                            <orig>coal-<lb />ings,</orig>
                            <reg>coalings<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> at the forge, by the furnace-blaze, or at the <lb />corn-shucking; </l>
                    <l>In Virginia, the planter's son returning after a long <lb />absence, joyfully
                        welcomed and kissed by the <lb />aged mulatto nurse; </l>
                    <l>On <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Western</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">American</add>
                        </del> rivers, boatmen safely moored at night-fall, in their <lb />boats,
                        under the shelter of high banks, </l>
                    <l>Some of the younger men dance to the sound of the <lb />banjo or
                        fiddle&#8212;others sit on the gunwale, <lb />smoking and talking; </l>
                    <l>Late in the afternoon, the mocking-bird, the American <lb />mimic, singing in
                        the Great Dismal Swamp&#8212; <lb /><add type="unmarked"
                            place="marginleft">&#182;</add><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >(</add>there are the greenish waters, the resinous odor, <lb />the
                        plenteous moss, the cypress tree, and the <lb />juniper tree;<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>Northward, young men of Mannahatta&#8212;the target <lb />company from an
                        excursion returning home at <lb />evening&#8212;the musket-muzzles all
                        bear bunches <lb />of flowers presented by women; </l>
                    <l>Children at play&#8212;or on his father's lap a young boy <lb />fallen
                        asleep, (how his lips move! how he smiles <lb />in his sleep!) </l>
                    <l>The scout riding on horseback over the plains west of <lb />the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Mississippi</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">Missouri</add>
                        </subst>&#8212;he ascends a knoll and sweeps <lb />his eye around; </l>
                    <l>California life&#8212;the miner, bearded, dressed in his <lb />rude
                        costume&#8212;the stanch California friendship <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>the sweet air&#8212;the graves one, in passing, <lb />meets,
                        solitary, just aside the horse-path; </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf086r" type="recto" n="163" facs="nyp.00015.171" />
                    <l>Down in Texas, the cotton-field, the negro-cabins&#8212; <lb />drivers
                        driving mules or oxen before rude carts <lb />&#8212;cotton-bales piled
                        on banks and wharves; </l>
                    <del type="edit">
                        <l>Encircling all, vast-darting, up and wide, the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                    <choice>
                                        <orig>Amer-<lb />ican</orig>
                                        <reg>American<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">
                                    <add type="edit" rend="underline">National</add>
                                </add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="edit" rend="underline">Soul</add>, with equal
                            hemispheres&#8212;one Love, <lb />one Dilation or Pride; </l>
                    </del>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr</note>
                    <del type="edit">
                        <l>In arriere, the peace-talk with the Iroquois, the
                            <lb />aborigines&#8212;the calumet, the pipe of good-will
                            <lb />arbitration, and indorsement, </l>
                        <l>The sachem blowing the smoke first toward the sun <lb />and then toward
                            the earth, </l>
                        <l>The drama of the scalp-dance enacted <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">for sport</add> with painted <lb />faces and
                            guttural exclamations, </l>
                        <l>The setting out of the war-party&#8212;the long and <lb />stealthy
                            march, </l>
                        <l>The single file&#8212;the swinging hatchets&#8212;the surprise
                            <lb />and slaughter of enemies; </l>
                        <l>All the acts, scenes, ways, persons, attitudes of These
                                <lb />States&#8212;<del type="overstrike">reminiscences, all
                                institutions,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">with me observant <add
                                    type="insertion" place="marginright">&#8212;me <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">these</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">them</add>
                                    </subst>
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">and my</add> flowers
                                    gathering</add></add></l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>All These States, compact&#8212;Every square mile of
                                    <lb />These States, without excepting a particle&#8212;you
                                    <lb />also&#8212;me also, </l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Me pleased, rambling in lanes and country fields,
                                    <lb />Paumanok's fields, </l>
                            </del>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">Me, observing</del> the spiral flight of two
                                little yellow <lb />butterflies, shuffling between each other, <choice>
                                    <orig>ascend-<lb />ing</orig>
                                    <reg>ascending<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> high in the air; </l>
                            <l>The darting swallow, the destroyer of insects&#8212;the
                                <lb />fall traveller southward, but returning northward <lb />early
                                in the spring; </l>
                        </del>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr</note>
                        <l>The country boy at the close of the day, driving the <lb />herd of cows,
                            and shouting to them as they loiter <lb />to browse by the road-side;
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf086v" type="verso" n="164" facs="nyp.00015.172" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <del type="edit">
                        <l>The city wharf&#8212;Boston, Philadelphia, Baltimore,
                            <lb />Charleston, New Orleans, San Francisco, </l>
                        <l>The departing ships, when the sailors heave at the <lb />capstan <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                            </subst><anchor xml:id="t28" /></l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t28">
                            <l>Evening&#8212;<del type="overstrike">me in my
                                room</del>&#8212;the setting sun,</l>
                        </transpose>
                        <l>The setting summer sun shining in my open window, <lb />showing me flies,
                            suspended, balancing in the <lb />air in the centre of the room, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>darting athwart,
                            <lb />up and down, casting swift shadows in specks on <lb />the opposite
                            wall, where the shine is; </l>
                        <l>The athletic American matron speaking in public to <lb />crowds of
                            listeners; </l>
                        <l>Males, females, immigrants, combinations&#8212;the <choice>
                                <orig>co-<lb />piousness</orig>
                                <reg>copiousness<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>the individuality and sovereignty <lb />of The States, each for
                            itself&#8212;the money-<lb />makers; </l>
                        <l>Factories, machinery, the mechanical forces&#8212;the <lb />windlass,
                            lever, pulley&#8212;All certainties, </l>
                        <l>The certainty of space, increase, freedom, futurity,</l>
                    </del>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <del type="edit">
                        <l>In space, the sporades, the scattered islands, the stars
                            <lb />&#8212;on the firm earth, the lands, my lands, </l>
                        <l>O lands! <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">O</add> all so dear to
                            me&#8212;what you are, (<choice>
                                <orig>what-<lb />ever</orig>
                                <reg>whatever<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> it is,) I become a part of that, whatever <lb />it is, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Southward there, I screaming, with wings slow <choice>
                            <orig>flap-<lb />ping,</orig>
                            <reg>flapping<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> with the myriads of gulls wintering along <lb />the coasts of
                            Florida<del type="overstrike">&#8212;or in Louisiana, with
                            <lb />pelicans breeding,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Otherways, there, atwixt the banks of the Arkansaw, <lb />the Rio Grande, the
                        Nueces, the Brazos, the <lb />Tombigbee, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>the Red River, the Saskatchawan<del type="overstrike"
                            >,</del> or <lb />the Osage, I with the spring waters laughing and
                        <lb />skipping and running; </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf087r" type="recto" n="165" facs="nyp.00015.173" />
                    <l>Northward, on the sands, on some shallow bay of <lb />Paumanok, I, with
                        parties of snowy herons <lb />wading in the wet<add type="insertion"
                            place="marginright">,</add> to seek worms and aquatic <lb />plants; </l>
                    <l>Retreating, triumphantly twittering, the king-bird, <lb />from piercing the
                        crow with its bill, for <choice><orig>amuse-<lb />ment</orig><reg>amusement<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;And I triumphantly twittering; </l>
                    <l>The migrating flock of wild geese alighting in autumn <lb />to refresh
                        themselves&#8212;the body of the flock feed <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>the sentinels outside move around with erect <lb />heads watching,
                        and are from time to time <choice>
                            <orig>re-<lb />lieved</orig>
                            <reg>relieved<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> by other sentinels <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">; &#182;</add>
                        </subst><del type="overstrike">And I feeding and <lb />taking turns with the
                            rest;</del>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>In Kanadian forests,
                        the moose, large as an ox, <choice>
                            <orig>cor-<lb />nered</orig>
                            <reg>cornered<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> by hunters, rising desperately on his <choice>
                            <orig>hind-<lb />feet,</orig>
                            <reg>hindfeet<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182; Then</add>
                        </subst> plunging with his fore-feet, the hoofs <lb />as sharp as
                        knives&#8212;And I, plunging at the <lb />hunters, cornered and
                        desperate; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>In the Mannahatta,
                        streets, piers, shipping, store-<lb />houses, and the countless workmen
                        working in <lb />the shops, </l>
                    <l>And I too of the Mannahatta, singing thereof&#8212; <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">singing the sights <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">&#38; songs</add> of all my lands</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">and <lb />no less in myself than the whole of the <choice>
                                <orig>Manna-<lb />hatta</orig>
                                <reg>Mannahatta<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> in itself,</del>
                    </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Singing the song of These, my <del type="overstrike">ever</del> united
                            lands <lb />&#8212;my body no more inevitably united, part to
                            <lb />part, and made one identity, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>any more than <lb />my lands are inevitably united,
                            and made <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">ONE <lb />IDENTITY</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="edit">one identity</add>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>Nativities,
                        climates, the grass of the great Pastoral <lb />Plains, </l>
                    <l>Cities, labors, death, animals, products, good and evil
                        <lb />&#8212;these me, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf087v" type="verso" n="166" facs="nyp.00015.174" />
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">How can</add>
                    <l>These affording, in all their particulars, endless <lb />feuillage <add
                            type="insertion" place="margintop">and blossoms</add> to me and to
                        America, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> how can I do <lb />less than pass <del type="overstrike">the clew of
                            the union of</del> them, <del type="overstrike">to <lb />afford the like
                            to you?</del>
                    </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Whoever you are! how can I but offer you divine <lb />leaves, that you
                            also be eligible as I am? </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>How can I but, as here, chanting, invite you for <lb />yourself to collect
                        bouquets of <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">the incomparable <lb /> feuillage of</del>
                        </restore> The<restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">se</del>
                        </restore> States? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01509">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00433" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Propositions.</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="4" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Respondez!</add>
                            <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">A cry in a dream I
                                heard</add>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                    <head type="main-authorial">5.</head>
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">A cry in a dream I heard with
                            ironical taunting, voice</add>R<hi rend="smallcaps">ESPONDEZ</hi>!
                            <anchor xml:id="t29" /> Respondez!</l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t29">Let every one answer</transpose>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Respondez! it called&#8212; <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">you</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">(we</add>
                            </subst> may as well say it, as think it,)</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">(A cry in a dream I heard, with
                            ironical taunting)</add>! <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>Let those who sleep be <lb />waked! Let none
                        evade&#8212;not you, any more <lb />than others! </l>
                    <l>(If it really be as is <del type="overstrike">pretended,</del><add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">felt at bottom,</add> how much
                        longer must <lb />we go on with our affectations and sneaking? </l>
                    <l>Let me bring this to a close&#8212;I pronounce openly for <lb />a new
                        distribution of roles <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>) </l>
                    <l>Let that which stood in front go behind! and let <lb />that which was behind
                        advance to the front and <lb />speak <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let murderers, thieves, bigots, fools, unclean persons, <lb />offer new
                        propositions <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the old propositions <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">of the
                            good</add> be postponed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Let faces and theories be turned inside out <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let <lb />meanings be freely criminal, as well as results <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf088r" type="recto" n="167" facs="nyp.00015.175" />
                    <l>Let there be no suggestion above the suggestion of <lb />drudgery <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let none be pointed toward his destination <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">(Say! <lb /> do you know your destination?)</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let trillions of men and women be mocked with <lb />bodies and mocked with
                        Souls <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the love that waits in them, wait <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let it die, <lb />or pass still-born to other spheres <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the sympathy that waits in every man, wait <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />or let it also pass, a dwarf, to other spheres <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let contradictions prevail <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let one thing contradict <lb />another <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> and let one line of my poems contradict <lb />another <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the people sprawl with yearning aimless hands <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />Let their tongues be broken <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let their eyes be <lb />discouraged <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let none descend into their hearts <lb />with the fresh
                        lusciousness of love <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the theory of America be management, caste, <lb />comparison <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> (<del type="overstrike">Say!</del> what other theory would
                        <lb />you?) </l>
                    <l>Let them that distrust birth and death lead the <lb />rest <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> (<del type="overstrike">Say!</del> why shall they not lead you?) </l>
                    <l>Let the crust of hell be neared and trod on <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let the <lb />days be darker than the nights <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let slumber <lb />bring less slumber than waking-time brings <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the world never appear to him or her for whom <lb />it was all made <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the heart of the young man exile itself from the <lb />heart of the old
                        man <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> and let the heart of the <lb />old man be exiled from that of the
                        young man <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the sun and moon go <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let scenery take the <lb />applause of the audience <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let there be apathy <lb />under the stars <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf088v" type="verso" n="168" facs="nyp.00015.176" />
                    <l>Let freedom prove no man's inalienable right <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Every <lb />one who can
                        tyrannize, let him tyrannize to his <lb />satisfaction <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let none but infidels be countenanced <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Let the eminence of meanness, treachery, sarcasm, <lb />hate, greed,
                        indecency, impotence, lust, be taken <lb />for granted above all<del
                            type="overstrike">!</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>Let writers,
                        judges, <choice>
                            <orig>gov-<lb />ernments,</orig>
                            <reg>governments<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> households, religions, philosophies, take <lb />such for granted
                        above all <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the worst men beget children out of the worst <lb />women <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let priests still play at immortality <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Let Death be inaugurated <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Let <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">nothing remain upon the earth</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">the treasure of</add>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">except</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">be</add>
                        </subst> the ashes of <lb />teachers, artists, moralists, lawyers, and
                        learned <lb />and polite persons <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let him who is without my poems be assassinated <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Let the cow, the horse, the camel, the garden-bee&#8212; <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>Let the mud-fish, the
                        lobster, the mussel, eel, the <lb />sting-ray, and the grunting pig-fish <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>Let these, <lb />and the like of these, be put on a perfect equality
                        <lb />with man and woman <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let churches accommodate serpents, vermin, and the <lb />corpses of those who
                        have died of the most filthy <lb />of diseases <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let marriage slip down among fools, and be for none <lb />but fools <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let men <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">gather</add>among themselves
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#38;</add> talk and think
                        obscenely <lb />of women <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> and let women <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >gather</add> among themselves <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#38;</add>talk and think obscenely of men <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let every man doubt every woman <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> and let every <lb />woman trick every man <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf089r" type="recto" n="169" facs="nyp.00015.177" />
                    <l>Let us all, without missing one, be exposed in public, <lb />naked, monthly,
                        at the peril of our lives <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>Let <lb />our bodies be
                        freely handled and examined by <lb />whoever chooses <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Let nothing but copies, pictures, statues, <choice>
                                <orig>reminis-<lb />cences,</orig>
                                <reg>reminiscences<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> elegant works, be permitted to exist <lb />upon the earth <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                    <l>Let the earth desert God, nor let there ever <choice>
                            <orig>hence-<lb />forth</orig>
                            <reg>henceforth<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> be mentioned the name of God <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let there be no God <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(so call'd this voice in my
                            dream;)</add></l>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42; tr up</note>
                    <transpose rend="bracketed" anchored="true" target="t30">
                        <l>Let there be money, business, imports, exports, <choice>
                                <orig>cus-<lb />tom,</orig>
                                <reg>custom<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> authority, precedents, pallor, dyspepsia, <lb />smut,
                            ignorance, unbelief! </l>
                    </transpose>
                    <l>Let judges and criminals be transposed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let the <lb />prison-keepers be put in prison <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> Let those that
                        <lb />were prisoners take the keys <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> ( <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Say!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">for</add>
                        </subst> why might <lb />they not just as well be transposed?) </l>
                    <l>Let the slaves be masters <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>! Let the masters become <lb />slaves <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the reformers descend from the stands where <lb />they are forever
                        bawling <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> Let an idiot or insane
                        <lb />person appear on each of the stands <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the Asiatic, the African, the European, the <lb />American and the
                        Australian, go armed against <lb />the murderous stealthiness of each other <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> Let <lb />them sleep
                        armed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>Let none believe in good-will <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let there be no unfashionable wisdom <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let such be <lb />scorned and derided off from the earth! </l>
                    <l>Let a floating cloud in the sky&#8212;Let a wave of the <lb />sea <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst><del type="overstrike">Let one glimpse of your eye-sight upon the
                            <lb /> landscape or grass <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst></del>Let growing mint, spinach, <lb />onions, tomatoes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>Let these be exhibited as <lb />shows at a great price for admission <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf089v" type="verso" n="170" facs="nyp.00015.178" />
                    <l>Let all the men of These States stand aside for a <lb />few smouchers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let the few seize on what they <lb />choose <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let the rest gawk, giggle, starve, obey <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Let shadows be furnished with genitals <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let <choice>
                            <orig>sub-<lb />stances</orig>
                            <reg>substances<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> be deprived of their genitals <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let there be wealthy and immense cities&#8212;but <lb />through any of
                        them, not <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">one</add>
                        </subst> single poet, saviour, <lb />knower, lover <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the infidels of These States laugh all faith away <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />If one man be found who has faith, let the rest <lb />set upon him<del
                            type="overstrike">!</del><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add> Let them affright faith <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> Let <lb />them destroy the power of breeding faith <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the she-harlots and the he-harlots be prudent! <lb />Let them dance on,
                        while seeming lasts <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> (O <lb />seeming! seeming! seeming!) </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Let the preachers recite <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">the inherited</add>
                            </del> creeds <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                            </subst> Let them teach only <lb />what they have been taught! <del
                                type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">by rote;</add>
                            </del></l>
                    </del>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Let the preachers of creeds never dare to go meditate <lb />candidly upon
                            the hills, alone, by day or by <lb />night! (If one ever once dare, he
                            is lost!) </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Let insanity <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">have</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">henceforth take</add>
                        </subst> charge of sanity <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Let books take the place of trees, animals, rivers, <lb />clouds <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the daubed portraits of heroes supersede heroes <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Let the manhood of man never take steps after itself <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>Let it take steps
                        after eunuchs, and after <choice>
                            <orig>con-<lb />sumptive</orig>
                            <reg>consumptive<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and genteel persons <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let the white person tread the black person under his <lb />heel <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> ( <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Say!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Ah,</add>
                        </subst> which is trodden under heel, after <lb />all ?) </l>
                    <l>Let the reflections of the things of the world be studied <lb />in mirrors <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> Let the things
                        themselves continue <lb />unstudied <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf090r" type="recto" n="171" facs="nyp.00015.179" />
                    <l>Let a man seek pleasure everywhere except in <choice>
                            <orig>him-<lb />self!</orig>
                            <reg>himself<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> Let a woman seek
                        happiness everywhere <lb />except in herself! <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add> (<del type="overstrike">Say!</del> what
                        real happiness <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">for instance</add>
                        </del>
                        <lb />have you had <del type="overstrike">one</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">single</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">time</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">hour</add>
                        </subst> through your whole <lb />life ?) </l>
                    <l>Let the limited years of life do nothing for the <choice>
                            <orig>limit-<lb />less</orig>
                            <reg>limitless<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> years of death! <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add> (<del type="overstrike">Say!</del> what do you suppose
                        <lb />death will do, then ?) </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01510">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00431" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                <l>To one just maturing</l>
                                <l>American Remembrances.</l>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">To a youth just
                                    maturing</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="inline">Youth</add>
                            <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="infralinear" rend="circled">To a
                                Youth</add>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                    <head type="main-authorial">6.</head>
                    <note type="authorial" place="supralinear">tr to Leaves of Grass</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">out</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">This must be cut up and
                        re&#8209;written</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">better out altogether</note>
                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d15" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>You just maturing <del type="overstrike">youth</del><restore
                                rend="erased">! You</restore> male or female!</l>
                        <l>Remember the organic compact of These States,</l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Remember the pledge of the Old Thirteen <choice>
                                    <orig>thence-<lb />forward</orig>
                                    <reg>thenceforward<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> to the rights, life, liberty, equality of <lb />man, </l>
                            <l>Remember what was promulged by the founders, <choice>
                                    <orig>rat-<lb />ified</orig>
                                    <reg>ratified<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> by The States, signed in black and white by <lb />the
                                Commissioners, and read by Washington at <lb />the head of the army,
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Remember the purpose of the founders,&#8212;Remember
                            <lb />Washington; </l>
                        <l>Remember the copious humanity streaming from every <lb />direction toward
                            America; </l>
                        <l>Remember the hospitality that belongs to nations and <lb />men; (Cursed
                            be nation, woman, man, without <lb />hospitality!) </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Remember, government is to subserve
                                individuals,</del>
                        </l>
                        <anchor xml:id="d15" />
                        <pb xml:id="leaf090v" type="verso" n="172" facs="nyp.00015.180" />
                        <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">out this whole
                            page</note>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                            <head type="main-authorial">Think! think! think!</head>
                        </add>
                        <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d16" />
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Not any, not the President, is
                            to have one jot more <lb />than you or me, </l>
                        <l>Not any habitan of America is to have one jot less <lb />than you or
                                me.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Anticipate when the thirty or fifty millions, are to <choice>
                                <orig>be-<lb />come</orig>
                                <reg>become<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> the hundred, or two hundred millions, of <lb /><del
                                type="overstrike">equal freemen and freewomen, amicably
                                joined.</del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <anchor xml:id="d16" />
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    </del>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Think! think! think!</add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Recall ages&#8212;One age is but a part&#8212;ages are but a
                            <lb />part; </l>
                        <l>Recall the angers, bickerings, delusions, superstitions, <lb />of the
                            idea of caste, </l>
                        <l>Recall the bloody cruelties and crimes.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42; carry forward</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <transpose rend="bracketed" anchored="true" target="t31">
                            <l>Anticipate the best women;</l>
                            <l>I say an unnumbered new race of hardy and <choice>
                                    <orig>well-<lb />defined</orig>
                                    <reg>welldefined<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> women are to spread through all These <lb />States, </l>
                            <l>I say a girl fit for These States must be free, capable,
                                <lb />dauntless, just the same as a boy. </l>
                        </transpose>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>Anticipate your own life&#8212;retract with merciless <lb />power, </l>
                        <l>Shirk nothing&#8212;retract in time&#8212;Do you see those
                            <lb />errors, diseases, weaknesses, lies, thefts? </l>
                        <l>Do you see that lost character?&#8212;Do you see <choice>
                                <orig>de-<lb />cay,</orig>
                                <reg>decay<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> consumption, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add> rum-drinking, dropsy, fever, <lb />mortal cancer
                            or inflammation? </l>
                        <l>Do you see death, and the approach of death?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">piece by itself</note>
                    </del>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                        >Think of the soul</unclear>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over" rend="underline">Think of
                                    the soul</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>Think of the Soul;</l>
                        <l>I <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">swear to you</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">know</add>
                            </subst> that body of yours gives proportions to <lb />your Soul somehow
                            to live in other spheres, </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I do not know how, but I know
                            it is so.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf091r" type="recto" n="173" facs="nyp.00015.181" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">out this whole
                        page</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>Think of loving and being loved;</l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">I swear to you,</del> whoever you are, you can
                            interfuse <lb />yourself with such things <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add> that everybody that sees <lb />you
                            shall look longingly upon you. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">take in &#42;
                        &#9756; <del type="overstrike">over <gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                             /></del></note>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <l>Anticipate the best women;</l>
                    </add>
                    <anchor xml:id="t31" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>Think of the past;</l>
                        <l>I warn you that in a little while, others will find their <lb />past in
                            you and your times. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>The race is never
                            separated&#8212;nor man nor woman <lb />escapes, </l>
                        <l>All is inextricable&#8212;things, spirits, nature, nations, <lb />you
                            too&#8212;from precedents you come.<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>Recall the ever-welcome defiers, (The mothers precede <lb />them;) </l>
                            <l>Recall the sages, poets, saviours, inventors, lawgivers, <lb />of the
                                earth, </l>
                            <l>Recall Christ, brother of rejected persons&#8212;brother <lb />of
                                slaves, felons, idiots, and of insane and diseased <lb />persons.
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>Think of the time when you <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">was</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">were</add>
                            </subst> not yet born,</l>
                        <l>Think of times you stood at the side of the dying,</l>
                        <l>Think of the time when your own body will be dying.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>Think of spiritual results,</l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Sure as the earth swims
                            through the heavens, does <lb />every one of its objects pass into
                            spiritual results.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <l>Think of manhood, and you <del type="overstrike">to be</del> a man;</l>
                        <l>Do you count manhood, and the sweet of manhood, <lb />nothing? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf091v" type="verso" n="174" facs="nyp.00015.182" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                        <l>Think of womanhood, and you <del type="overstrike">to be</del> a
                            woman;</l>
                        <l>The creation is womanhood,</l>
                        <l>Have I not said that womanhood involves all?</l>
                        <l>Have I not told how the universe has nothing better <lb />than the best
                            womanhood? </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01511">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00129" />
                    </relations>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">With antecedents, <del
                                type="overstrike">arrived.</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">Pomet.</del></head>
                    </add>
                    <head type="main-authorial">7.</head>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">ITH</hi> antecedents,</l>
                        <l>With my fathers and mothers, and the accumulations <lb />of past ages, </l>
                        <l>With all which, had it not been, I would not now be <lb />hero, as I am, </l>
                        <l>With Egypt, India, Phenicia, Greece, and Rome,</l>
                        <l>With the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">C</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">K</add>
                            </subst>elt, the Scandinavian, the Alb, and the <lb />Saxon, </l>
                        <l>With antique maritime ventures&#8212;with laws, <choice>
                                <orig>arti-<lb />sanship,</orig>
                                <reg>artisanship<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> wars, and journeys, </l>
                        <l>With the poet, the skald, the saga, the myth, and the <lb />oracle, </l>
                        <l>With the sale of slaves&#8212;with enthusiasts&#8212;with
                            <lb />the troubadour, the crusader, and the monk, </l>
                        <l>With those old continents whence we have come to this <lb />new
                            continent, </l>
                        <l>With the fading kingdoms and kings over there,</l>
                        <l>With the fading religions and priests,</l>
                        <l>With the small shores we look back to, from our own <lb />large and
                            present shores, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf092r" type="recto" n="175" facs="nyp.00015.183" />
                        <l>With countless years drawing themselves onward, and <lb />arrived at
                            these years, </l>
                        <l>You and Me arrived&#8212;America arrived, and making <lb />this year, </l>
                        <l>This year! sending itself ahead countless years to <lb />come. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>O but it is not the years&#8212;it is I&#8212;it is You,</l>
                        <l>We touch all laws, and tally all antecedents,</l>
                        <l>We are the skald, the oracle, the monk, and the <lb />knight&#8212;we
                            easily include them, and more, </l>
                        <l>We stand amid time, beginningless and endless&#8212;we <lb />stand
                            amid evil and good, </l>
                        <l>All swings around us&#8212;there is as much darkness as <lb />light, </l>
                        <l>The very sun swings itself and its system of planets <lb />around us, </l>
                        <l>Its sun, and its again, all swing around us.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>As for me, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">( <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">peaceful, calm</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">torn,
                                        stormy</add>
                                </subst>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">even as I</add> amid <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">these</add>
                                </subst> vehement days.)</add></l>
                        <l>I have the idea of all, and an all, and believe in all;</l>
                        <l>I believe materialism is true, and spiritualism is true&#8212;
                            <lb />I reject no part. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>Have I forgotten any part?</l>
                        <l>Come to me, whoever and whatever, till I give you <lb />recognition. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>I respect Assyria, China, Teutonia, and the Hebrews,</l>
                        <l>I adopt each theory, myth, god, and demi-god,</l>
                        <l>I see that the old accounts, bibles, genealogies, are <lb />true, without
                            exception, </l>
                        <l>I assert that all past days were what they should have <lb />been, </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf092v" type="verso" n="176" facs="nyp.00015.184" />
                    <lg type="linegroup">
                        <l>And that they could no-how have been better than <lb />they were, </l>
                        <l>And that to-day is what it should be&#8212;and that <lb />America is, </l>
                        <l>And that to-day and America could no-how be better <lb />than they are.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>In the name of These States, and in your and my <lb />name, the Past, </l>
                        <l>And in the name of These States, and in your and my <lb />name, the
                            Present time. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>I know that the past was great, and the future will <lb />be great, </l>
                        <l>And I know that both curiously conjoint in the <choice>
                                <orig>pres-<lb />ent</orig>
                                <reg>present<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> time, </l>
                        <l>(For the sake of him I typify&#8212;for the common <lb />average
                            man's sake&#8212;your sake, if you are he;) </l>
                        <l>And that where I am, or you are, this present day, <lb />there is the
                            centre of all days, all races, </l>
                        <l>And there is the meaning, to us, of all that has ever <lb />come of races
                            and days, or ever will come. </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01512">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00297" />
                    </relations>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Song at sunset.</head>
                    </add>
                    <head type="main-authorial">8.</head>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">finale religious</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>S<hi rend="smallcaps">PLENDOR</hi> of falling day, floating and filling
                            me,</l>
                        <l>Hour prophetic&#8212;hour resuming the past,</l>
                        <l>Inflating my throat&#8212;you, divine average!</l>
                        <l>You, Earth and Life, till the last ray gleams, I sing.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf093r" type="recto" n="177" facs="nyp.00015.185" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Open mouth of my Soul, uttering gladness,</l>
                        <l>Eyes of my Soul, seeing perfection,</l>
                        <l>Natural life of me, faithfully praising things,</l>
                        <l>Corroborating forever the triumph of things.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Illustrious every one!</l>
                        <l>Illustrious what we name space&#8212;sphere of <choice>
                                <orig>unnum-<lb />bered</orig>
                                <reg>unnumbered<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> spirits, </l>
                        <l>Illustrious the mystery of motion, in all beings, even <lb />the tiniest
                            insect, </l>
                        <l>Illustrious the attribute of speech&#8212;the senses&#8212;the
                            <lb />body, </l>
                        <l>Illustrious the passing light! Illustrious the pale <lb />reflection on
                            the <add type="insertion" place="marginright">new</add> moon in the
                            western sky! </l>
                        <l>Illustrious whatever I see, or hear, or touch, to the <lb />last. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>Good in all,</l>
                        <l>In the satisfaction and aplomb of animals,</l>
                        <l>In the annual return of the seasons,</l>
                        <l>In the hilarity of youth,</l>
                        <l>In the strength and flush of manhood,</l>
                        <l>In the grandeur and exquisiteness of old age,</l>
                        <l>In the superb vistas of Death.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>Wonderful to depart!</l>
                        <l>Wonderful to be here!</l>
                        <l>The heart, to jet the all-alike and innocent blood,</l>
                        <l>To breathe the air, how delicious!</l>
                        <l>To speak! to walk! to seize something by the hand!</l>
                        <l>To prepare for sleep, for bed&#8212;to look on my rose-<lb />colored
                            flesh, </l>
                        <l>To be conscious of my body, so amorous, so large,</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf093v" type="verso" n="178" facs="nyp.00015.186" />
                        <l>To be this incredible God I am,</l>
                        <l>To have gone forth among other Gods&#8212;those men <lb />and women I
                            love. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>Wonderful how I celebrate you and myself!</l>
                        <l>How my thoughts play subtly at the spectacles <lb />around! </l>
                        <l>How the clouds pass silently overhead!</l>
                        <l>How the earth darts on and on! and how the sun, <lb />moon, stars, dart
                            on and on! </l>
                        <l>How the water sports and sings! (Surely it is <lb />alive!) </l>
                        <l>How the trees rise and stand up&#8212;with strong trunks
                            <lb />&#8212;with branches and leaves! </l>
                        <l>(Surely there is something more in each of the trees&#8212;
                            <lb />some living Soul.) </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>O amazement of things! even the least particle!</l>
                        <l>O spirituality of things!</l>
                        <l>O strain musical, flowing through ages and continents
                            <lb />&#8212;now reaching me and America! </l>
                        <l>I take your strong chords&#8212;I intersperse them, and
                            <lb />cheerfully pass them forward. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>I too carol the sun, ushered, or at noon, or <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">as now</add> setting,</l>
                        <l>I too throb to the brain and beauty of the earth, and <lb />of all the
                            growths of the earth, </l>
                        <l>I too have felt the resistless call of myself.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>As I sailed down the Mississippi,</l>
                        <l>As I wandered over the prairies,</l>
                        <l>As I have lived&#8212;As I have looked through my <lb />windows, my
                            eyes, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf094r" type="recto" n="179" facs="nyp.00015.187" />
                        <l>As I went forth in the morning&#8212;As I beheld the <lb />light
                            breaking in the east, </l>
                        <l>As I bathed on the beach of the Eastern Sea, and <lb />again on the beach
                            on the Western Sea, </l>
                        <l>As I roamed the streets of inland Chicago&#8212;whatever
                            <lb />streets I have roamed, </l>
                        <l>Wherever I have been, I have charged myself with <lb />contentment and
                            triumph. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <l>I sing the Equalities,</l>
                        <l>I sing the endless finales of things,</l>
                        <l>I say Nature continues&#8212;Glory continues,</l>
                        <l>I praise with electric voice,</l>
                        <l>For I do not see one imperfection in the universe,</l>
                        <l>And I do not see one cause or result lamentable at <lb />last in the
                            universe. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>O setting sun! O when <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my</add>
                            </subst> time comes,</l>
                        <l>I still warble under you, if none else does, <choice>
                                <orig>unmiti-<lb />gated</orig>
                                <reg>unmitigated<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> adoration! </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01513">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00413" />
                    </relations>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">tr to Drum Taps</note>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial">Thought</head>
                        </add>
                        <head type="main-authorial">9.</head>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">A <hi rend="smallcaps">THOUGHT</hi> of what I am
                                here for,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Of these years I sing&#8212;how they pass through <choice>
                                <orig>con-<lb />vulsed</orig>
                                <reg>convulsed<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> pains, as through parturitions; </l>
                        <l>How America illustrates birth, gigantic youth, the <lb />promise, the
                            sure fulfilment, despite of people <lb />&#8212;Illustrates evil as
                            well as good; </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf094v" type="verso" n="180" facs="nyp.00015.188" />
                        <l>Of how many hold despairingly yet to the models <lb />departed, caste,
                            myths, obedience, compulsion, <lb />and to infidelity; </l>
                        <l>How few see the arrived models, <add type="edit" rend="smallcaps">the
                                Athletes</add><!-- how do I add SMALL CAPS? -->, The
                            <lb />States&#8212;or see freedom or spirituality&#8212;or <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">hold</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">have</add>
                            </subst><lb />any faith in results, </l>
                        <l>(But I see the Athletes&#8212;and I see the results <lb />glorious
                            and inevitable&#8212;and they again leading <lb />to other results;) </l>
                        <l>How the great cities appear&#8212;How the Democratic <lb />masses,
                            turbulent, wilful, as I love them, </l>
                        <l>How the whirl, the contest, the wrestle of evil with <lb />good, <add
                                type="insertion" place="marginleft">the fierce disruptions,</add>
                            the sounding and resounding, keep on <lb />and on; </l>
                        <l>How society waits unformed, and is between things <lb />ended and things
                            begun; </l>
                        <l>How America is the continent of glories, and of the <lb />triumph of
                            freedom, and of the Democracies, and <lb />of the fruits of society, and
                            of all that is begun; </l>
                        <l>And how The States are complete in themselves <add type="insertion"
                                place="marginbot">despite of any disruptions,</add>&#8212;
                            <lb />And how all triumphs and glories are complete <lb />in themselves,
                            to lead onward, </l>
                        <l>And how these of mine, and of The States, will in <lb />their turn be
                            convulsed, and serve other <choice>
                                <orig>par-<lb />turitions</orig>
                                <reg>parturitions<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and transitions, </l>
                        <l>And how all people, sights, combinations, the <choice>
                                <orig>Demo-<lb />cratic</orig>
                                <reg>Democratic<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> masses too, serve&#8212;and how every fact <lb />serves, </l>
                        <l>And how now, or at any time, each serves the <lb />exquisite transition
                            of Death. </l>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf095r" type="recto" n="181" facs="nyp.00015.189" />
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">Out this piece</note>
                <del type="erasure">
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop">tr to Leaves of Grass</note>
                </del>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01514">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00028" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">10.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">
                        <head type="main-authorial">To a Historian</head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    </del>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
                    </del>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">H<hi rend="smallcaps">ISTORIAN</hi>!</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">y</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">Y</add>
                        </subst>ou who <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">celebrate</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">outline</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> bygones!</l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">You</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">who</add> have explored the <del
                            type="overstrike">outward, the</del> surface of the
                        <lb />races&#8212;the life that has exhibited itself, </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">You</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">who</add> have treated man as the
                        creature of politics, <lb />aggregates, rulers, and priests; </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">But now</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">Lo!</add>
                            </subst> I also, arriving, <add type="insertion" place="marginright"
                                >now</add> contribute something:</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>I, an habitu&#233; of the Alleghanies, treat man as he is in <lb />the
                        influences of Nature, in himself, in his own <lb /><del type="overstrike"
                            >inalienable</del> right<del type="overstrike">s</del>, </l>
                    <l>Advancing, to give the spirit and the traits of new <lb />Democratic ages,
                        myself, personally, </l>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>(Let the future behold them all in me&#8212;Me, so <lb />puzzling and
                            contradictory&#8212;Me, <del type="overstrike">a <choice><orig>Manhattan-<lb
/>ese,</orig><reg>Manhattanese,<lb/></reg></choice></del> the most
                            loving and arrogant of men;) </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">d</note>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">d</note>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginright">d</note>
                        <l>I do not tell the usual facts, proved by records and <lb />documents, </l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>What I tell, (talking to every born American,) <lb />requires no
                                further proof than he or she who <lb />will hear me, will furnish,
                                by silently meditating <lb />alone; </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>I press the pulse of the life that has hitherto seldom <lb />exhibited
                            itself, but has generally sought <choice>
                                <orig>con-<lb />cealment,</orig>
                                <reg>Concealment<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> (the great pride of man, in himself,) </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">illuminate</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">celebrate</add>
                        </subst> feelings, faults, yearnings, hopes&#8212; <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I have come at last,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">celebrate man in <del
                                    type="overstrike">himself,</del></add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginright">his own right,</add> no more
                        ashamed <del type="overstrike">n</del>or afraid; </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">Chanter of Personality,</del><add type="insertion"
                            place="marginbot">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Outlining</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Celebrate</add>
                            </subst> no bygones <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </subst> sing much that does not exhibit itself</add> outlining a
                        history yet to be,</l>
                    <l><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">I</del>
                        </restore> project the <del type="overstrike">ideal man, the</del> American
                        of the future.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf095v" type="verso" n="182" facs="nyp.00015.190" />
                <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">tr to Drum Taps</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01515">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00413" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">11.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Thoughts</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">T<hi rend="smallcaps">HE</hi> thought of
                            fruitage,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Of Death, (the life greater)&#8212;of seeds dropping into <lb />the
                        ground&#8212;of birth, </l>
                    <l>Of the steady concentration of America, inland, <lb />upward, to impregnable
                        and swarming places, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Of what Indiana, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Kentucky</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion">Illinois</add>
                            </subst>, Ohio and the rest, are <lb />to be, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Of what a few years will show there in <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Missouri</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Nebraska</add>
                        </subst>, <lb />Kansas, <del type="overstrike">Iowa, Wisconsin, Minnesota
                            and the <lb />rest,</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">Colorado,</add></l>
                    <l>Of what <del type="overstrike">the feuillage of America</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">to&#8209;day</add> is the
                        preparation <lb />for&#8212;and of what all the sights, North, South,
                        <lb />East and West, are; </l>
                    <l>Of the temporary use of materials for identity's <lb />sake, </l>
                    <l>Of departing&#8212;of the growth of a mightier race <lb />than any yet, </l>
                    <l>Of myself, soon, perhaps, closing up my songs by <lb />these shores, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Of California&#8212;of Oregon&#8212;and of me journeying
                            <lb />hence to live and sing there; </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Of the Western Sea&#8212;of the spread inland between <lb />it and the
                        spinal river, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Of the great pastoral area, athletic and feminine,</l>
                    </del>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Of all sloping down there where the fresh <choice>
                                <orig>free-<lb />giver,</orig>
                                <reg>freegiver<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> the mother, the Mississippi flows&#8212;and <lb />Westward
                            still; </l>
                    </del>
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                    <l>Of future men and women there<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >,</add>&#8212; <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">of happiness</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">very large,</add>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">in <lb /> those</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;of the</add>
                        </subst> high plateau<del type="overstrike">s</del>, ranging three thousand
                        <lb />miles, <del type="overstrike">warm and cold,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Of cities yet unsurveyed and unsuspected, (as I am <lb />also, and as it must
                        be,) </l>
                    <l>Of the new and good names&#8212;of the strong <choice><orig>develop-<lb/>ments</orig><reg>developments<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;of the inalienable homesteads <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Of a free original life there&#8212;of simple diet, and <lb />clean and
                        sweet blood, </l>
                    <l>Of litheness, majestic faces, clear eyes, and perfect <lb />physique there, </l>
                    <l>Of immense spiritual results, future years, inland, <lb />spread there each
                        side of the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Anahuacs,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">mountains</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Of these Leaves well-understood there, (being made <lb />for that area,) </l>
                    <l>Of the native scorn of grossness and gain there,</l>
                    <l>(O it lurks in me night and day&#8212;What is gain, <lb />after all, to
                        savageness and freedom?) </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01516">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00237" />
                    </relations>
                    <delSpan type="overstrike" spanTo="#d17" />
                    <head type="main-authorial">12.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="erasure">Leaves of Grass (<gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" />)</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">I was musing on
                                    vocalism</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">The road is long <add
                                    type="insertion" place="supralinear" rend="underline">A
                                    voice.</add></add>
                        </subst>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I was musing on vocalism,</add>
                        </del>
                        <l>To <del type="overstrike">oratists&#8212;to</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">male or female,</del></l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Thus <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">o</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">O</add>
                                </subst>n</add><del type="overstrike">Vocalism,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">vocalism</add> breath, measure,
                            concentration, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                    <choice>
                                        <orig>determina-<lb />tion</orig>
                                        <reg>determination<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I mused</add>
                            </subst>, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">a</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">A</add>
                            </subst>nd the divine power to use words. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Are you eligible?</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Would you be
                                        eligible?</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Are you full-lung'd and</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginbot">The road is
                                        long,<del type="overstrike">&#8212;it is to
                                    be</del></add>
                            </subst> limber-lipp'd from long trial <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">?</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </subst><lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">f</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">F</add>
                            </subst>rom vigorous practice <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">?</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                            </subst> from physique <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">?</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <anchor xml:id="d17" />
                        <pb xml:id="leaf096v" type="verso" n="184" facs="nyp.00015.192" />
                        <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">&#9758; This may
                            go in Jan '65</note>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underlined">
                            <head type="main-authorial">The road is long I mused</head>
                        </add>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Do you move in these broad lands as broad as
                                they?</del>
                        </l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>Remembering inland America, the high plateaus, <lb />stretching long? </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">this line out tr somewhere
                                    else</note>
                            </del>
                            <l>Remembering <del type="overstrike">Kanada&#8212;Remembering</del>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">what edges <lb />the vast round
                                        edge of</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the lands
                                        drain'd by</add>
                                </subst> the Mexican Sea? <lb /></l>
                            <l>Come duly to the divine power to use words?</l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">The road is long <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                                </subst> I mused</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">For only at last,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>after many years <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">a voice,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">after chastity, <lb />friendship, procreation,
                                prudence, and nakedness, </del></l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">After treading ground and breasting river and
                                lake,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>After a loosened throat&#8212;<del type="overstrike">after absorbing
                            eras, <choice><orig>tem-<lb
/>peraments,</orig><reg>temperaments,<lb/></reg></choice>
                                races&#8212;after knowledge, freedom, <lb /> crimes,
                                <lb /></del></l>
                        <l><del>After complete faith&#8212;</del>after clarifyings, elevations,
                            <lb />and removing obstructions, </l>
                        <l>After these, and more, it is just possible there comes <lb />to a man, a
                            woman, the <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">divine</del>
                            </restore> power <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">to
                                speak,</add>
                            <!-- how do I add smallcaps to to use Words?--><add type="edit"
                                rend="smallcaps">to use <lb />
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">w</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit">W</add>
                                </subst>ords.</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>Then toward that man or that woman swiftly hasten
                            <lb />all&#8212;None refuse, all attend, </l>
                        <l>Armies, ships, antiquities, the dead, libraries, <choice>
                                <orig>paint-<lb />ings,</orig>
                                <reg>paintings<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> machines, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>cities, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del> hate, despair, amity, pain, <lb />theft, murder, aspiration, form
                            in close ranks, </l>
                        <l>They debouch as they are wanted to march obediently <lb />through the
                            mouth of that man, or that woman. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                <l>O now I see arise orators fit for inland America,</l>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                <l>Yet The road is long long,</l>
                            </add>
                        </subst>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">And I see</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">And I see</add>
                            </subst> it is as slow to become <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">an orator</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">a great
                                    vocalist</add>
                            </subst> as to <lb />become a man, </l>
                        <l>And I see that <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">all</add> power
                            is folded in <subst>
                                <restore seq="6" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a great</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrke">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">actual</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the
                                        mightiest</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> vocalism.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                            <l>And that it is not in the words themselves, but <del
                                    type="overstrike">in <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                        >wondrous</add> him or her that they come from.</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">that is such</del><add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">something else.</add></l>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Of</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">From</add>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a great</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the
                                        mightiest</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">a great</add>
                            </subst> vocalism, when you hear it, the <del type="overstrike"
                                >merciless</del>
                            <lb />light shall pour, and the storm rage around, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf097r" type="recto" n="185" facs="nyp.00015.193" />
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                <l>Thus upon vocalism, breath, I mused, <add type="insertion"
                                        place="supralinear">In America,</add></l>
                                <l>And the divine power to use words.</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>Every flash shall be a revelation, an insult,</l>
                            <l>The glaring flame turned on depths, on heights, on <lb />suns, on
                                stars, </l>
                            <l>On the interior and exterior of man or woman,</l>
                            <l>On the laws of Nature&#8212;on passive materials,</l>
                            <l>On what you called death&#8212;<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">(</add>and what to you <choice>
                                    <orig>there-<lb />fore</orig>
                                    <reg>therefore<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> was death, </l>
                            <l>As far as there can be death.<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >)</add></l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <del type="hashmark">
                    <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01517">
                        <relations>
                            <work ref="xxx.00240" />
                        </relations>
                        <head type="main-authorial">13.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="erasure">Laws.</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">Laws.</add>
                                </subst>
                            </head>
                        </add>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                                <head type="sub-authorial" rend="underlined">A voice.</head>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                            <l><del type="overstrike">L<hi rend="smallcaps">AWS</hi></del> for
                                    Creation<del type="overstrike">s</del>,</l>
                            <anchor xml:id="t32" />
                            <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t32">For strong artists and
                                    leaders</transpose>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </subst>for fresh broods of <lb />teachers, and perfect literats for
                                America, </l>
                            <l><del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">And</add>
                                </del> For diverse savans, and coming musicians.</l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <del type="hashmark">
                                <l><del type="overstrike">There shall be no subject but it</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Subjects</add> shall be
                                    treated with <lb />reference to the ensemble of the world, and
                                    the <lb />compact truth of the world <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                    </subst>And no coward or <lb />copyist shall be allowed <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                                    </subst></l>
                            </del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                            <!-- how can we show that Whitman intended these markings to indicate seperate stanzas? -->
                            <l>There shall be no subject too pronounced <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </subst> All works <lb />shall illustrate the divine law of
                                indirections; </l>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                            <!-- how can we show that Whitman intended these markings to indicate seperate stanzas? -->
                            <l><del type="overstrike">There they stand&#8212;</del>I see them
                                already, each poised <lb />and in its place, </l>
                            <l>Statements, models, censuses, poems, dictionaries, <lb />biographies,
                                essays, theories&#8212; <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">How</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">They are</add>
                                </subst> complete! <lb /><del type="overstrike">How</del> relative
                                and interfused <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                </subst> No one <choice>
                                    <orig>super-<lb />sedes</orig>
                                    <reg>supersedes<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> another; </l>
                            <l>They do not seem to me like the old specimens<del type="overstrike"
                                    >,</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">&#8212;they seem to tally
                                    with Nature again ( <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">having</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="above">they have</add>
                                    </subst> gone the round of the circle and return'd.)</add></l>
                            <pb xml:id="leaf097v" type="verso" n="186" facs="nyp.00015.194" />
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>They seem to me like Nature at last, (America has <lb />given
                                    birth to them, and I have also;) </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>They seem to me at last as perfect as the animals, <lb />and as the
                                rocks and weeds&#8212;fitted to them, </l>
                            <l>Fitted to the sky, to float with floating clouds&#8212;to
                                <lb />rustle among the trees with rustling leaves, </l>
                            <l>To stretch with stretched and level waters, where <lb />ships
                                silently sail in the distance. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                            <l>What do you suppose Creation is?</l>
                            <l>What do you suppose will satisfy the Soul, except to <lb />walk free
                                and own no superior? </l>
                            <l>What do you suppose I have intimated to you in a <lb />hundred ways,
                                but that man or woman is as good <lb />as God? </l>
                            <l>And that there is no God any more divine than <lb />
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">Yourself</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit" rend="smallcaps">Yourself</add>
                                    <!-- how do I add smallcaps? -->
                                </subst>? </l>
                            <l>And that that is what the oldest and newest myths <lb />finally mean? </l>
                            <l>And that you or any one must approach Creations <lb />through such
                                laws? </l>
                        </lg>
                    </lg>
                </del>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01518">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00045" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">14.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">
                        <head type="main-authorial"><del type="overstrike">To</del> Poets to
                            Come</head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike">P<hi rend="smallcaps">OETS</hi> to
                                    come!</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>Not to-day is to justify me, <del type="overstrike">and Democracy,
                                    and <lb />what we are for, </del></l>
                            <l>But <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">you,</del>
                                </restore> a new brood, native, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">athletic,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and</add>
                                </subst> continental, <lb /><del type="overstrike">greater than
                                    before known,</del><del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="inline">&#8212;even you,</add>
                                </del>
                            </l>
                            <l>You must justify me.</l>
                        </lg>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf098r" type="recto" n="187" facs="nyp.00015.195" />
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                            <head type="main-authorial">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I am a bard untouch'd</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Complete or
                                        clear am I not</add>
                                </subst>
                            </head>
                        </add>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>Indeed, if it were not for you, what would <subst>
                                    <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="supralinear">amount
                                            to?</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="supralinear">become of
                                        me?</add>
                                </subst><del type="overstrike">I be?</del></l>
                            <l>What is the little I have done, except to arouse you?</l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                            <l>I depend on being realized, long hence, <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">There</add> where the
                                <lb />broad fat prairies spread, and thence to Oregon <lb />and
                                California inclusive <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></l>
                            <l>I expect that the Texan and the Arizonian, ages <lb />hence, will
                                understand me, </l>
                            <l>I expect that the future Carolinian and Georgian will
                                <lb />understand me and love me, </l>
                            <l>I expect that Kanadians, a hundred, and perhaps <lb />many hundred
                                years from now, <del type="overstrike">in winter,</del><add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> in the
                                <lb />splendor of the snow and woods, or on the icy <lb />lakes,
                                will take me with them, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add>and permanently <lb />enjoy themselves with me.
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial">I am a bard untouch'd.</head>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Of to-day</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">I know I am momentary, untouched&#8212;I
                                <lb />am the bard of the future, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >myself do little anyhow</add><lb /></del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">I but write one or two indicative words for the
                                future,</del>
                        </l>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                            <l>Complete or clear am I not</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>I but advance a moment, only to wheel and hurry <lb />back in the
                            darkness. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>I am a man who, sauntering along, without fully <lb />stopping, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>turns a casual look
                            upon you, and then <lb />averts his face, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline"><del type="overstrike">idly</del> humming a
                                strain</add></l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Leaving it to you to prove and define it</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">afterward,</add>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Expecting the main things from you.</del>
                        </l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">
                            <l>Leaving to you to hear it in dreams.</l>
                        </add>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf098v" type="verso" n="188" facs="nyp.00015.196" />
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01519">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00278" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">15.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Excelsior</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">Who has gone
                                        farthest yet?</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                        >Excelsior.</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="7" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                        rend="underline">Who has gone farthest?</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="8" type="unmarked" place="supralinear" rend="underline"
                                    >Excelsior.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HO</hi> has gone farthest<del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">yet</add>
                        </del>? For I swear I <subst>
                            <restore seq="6" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">will</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> go <lb />farther; </l>
                    <l>And who has been just? For I would be the most <lb />just person of the
                        earth; </l>
                    <l>And who most cautious? For I would be more <lb />cautious; </l>
                    <l>And who has been happiest? O I think it is I! I <lb />think no one was ever
                        happier than I; </l>
                    <l>And who has lavished all? For I lavish constantly <lb />the best I have; </l>
                    <l>And who has been firmest? For I would be firmer;</l>
                    <l>And who proudest? For I think I have reason to be <lb />the proudest son
                        alive&#8212;for I am the son of the <lb />brawny and tall-topt city; </l>
                    <l>And who has been bold and true? For I would be <lb />the boldest and truest
                        being of the universe; </l>
                    <l>And who benevolent? For I would show more <choice>
                            <orig>be-<lb />nevolence</orig>
                            <reg>benevolence<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> than all the rest; </l>
                    <l>And who has projected beautiful words through the <lb />longest time? <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">By God!</del> I will outvie him! I <lb />will say
                        such words, they shall stretch through <lb />longer time! </l>
                    <l>And who has received the love of the most friends? <lb />For I know what it
                        is to receive the passionate <lb />love of many friends; </l>
                    <l>And to whom has been given the sweetest from <lb />women, and paid them in
                        kind? For I will <lb />take the like sweets and pay them in kind; </l>
                    <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                        <l>And who has adopted the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">highest</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">loftiest</add>
                            </subst> motto? O I will put <del type="overstrike">over it</del> my
                            motto <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">over it&#8212;</add>
                            &#8212;as it is over the top of this song!</l>
                    </add>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf099r" type="recto" n="189" facs="nyp.00015.197" />
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>And who possesses a perfect and enamoured body? <lb />For I do not
                            believe any one possesses a more <lb />perfect or enamoured body than
                            mine; </l>
                        <l>And who thinks the amplest thoughts? For I will <lb />surround those
                            thoughts; </l>
                        <l>And who has made hymns fit for the earth? For I <lb />am mad with
                            devouring extacy to make joyous <lb />hymns for the whole earth! </l>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01520">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00281" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">16.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Mediums</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">HEY</hi> shall arise in the States&#8212;<del
                            type="overstrike">mediums shall,</del></l>
                    <l>They shall report Nature, laws, physiology, and <lb />happiness, </l>
                    <l>They shall illustrate Democracy and the kosmos,</l>
                    <l>They shall be alimentive, amative, perceptive,</l>
                    <l>They shall be complete women and men&#8212;their pose <lb />brawny and
                        supple, their drink water, their blood <lb /><del type="overstrike">clean
                            and</del> clear, </l>
                    <l>They shall enjoy materialism and the sight of <choice><orig>prod-<lb/>ucts</orig><reg>products<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;they shall enjoy the sight of the
                        beef, <lb />lumber, bread-stuffs, of Chicago, the great city, </l>
                    <l>They shall train themselves to go in public to become <lb /><del
                            type="overstrike">oratists, (</del>orators and oratresses,<del
                            type="overstrike">)</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Strong and sweet shall their tongues be&#8212;poems and <lb />materials
                        of poems shall come from their lives&#8212; <lb />they shall be makers
                        and finders, </l>
                    <l>Of them, and of their works, shall emerge divine <lb />conveyers, to convey
                        gospels, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf099v" type="verso" n="190" facs="nyp.00015.198" />
                    <l>Characters, events, retrospections, shall be conveyed <lb />in
                        gospels&#8212;Trees, animals, waters, shall be <lb />conveyed, </l>
                    <l>Death, the future, the invisible faith, shall all be <lb />conveyed. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01521">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00036" />
                    </relations>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">On journeys through the States we start</head>
                    </add>
                    <head type="main-authorial">17.</head>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr to Leaves of Grass</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Now</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">On journeys through the
                                States</add> we start<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">hence,</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">I with the rest, on our <choice>
                                    <orig>jour-<lb />neys</orig>
                                    <reg>journeys<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> through The States, </del></l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">We</del> willing learners of all, teachers of all,
                            and lovers <lb />of all. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">We</add>
                            </subst> have watched the seasons dispensing themselves, <lb />and
                            passing on, </l>
                        <l>And <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">We</add>
                            </subst> have said, Why should not a man or woman <lb />do as much as
                            the seasons, and effuse as much? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>We dwell a while in every city and town,</l>
                        <l>We pass through Kanada, the north-east, the vast <lb />valley of the
                            Mississippi, and the Southern <lb />States, </l>
                        <l>We confer on equal terms with each of The States,</l>
                        <l>We make trial of ourselves, and invite men and <lb />women to hear, </l>
                        <l>We say to ourselves, Remember, fear not, be candid, <lb />promulge the
                            body and the Soul, </l>
                        <l>Promulge real things&#8212;Never forget the equality of
                            <lb />humankind, and never forget immortality; </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf100r" type="recto" n="191" facs="nyp.00015.199" />
                        <l>Dwell a while, and pass on&#8212;Be copious, temperate, <lb />chaste,
                            magnetic, </l>
                        <l>And what you effuse may then return as the seasons <lb />return, </l>
                        <l>And may be just as much as the seasons.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01522">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00038" />
                    </relations>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">or <del
                                type="overstrike">in a</del> as one of three or four</note>
                    </del>
                    <head type="main-authorial">18.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Sonnet</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Leaf</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">Me
                                Imperturbe</add>
                        </subst>
                    </add>
                    <l>M<hi rend="smallcaps">E</hi> imperturbe, <anchor xml:id="t33" /></l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Me</del>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t33">standing at ease in
                            Nature,</transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l>Master of all, or mistress of all&#8212;aplomb in the <lb />midst of
                        irrational things, </l>
                    <l>Imbued as they&#8212;passive, receptive, silent as they,</l>
                    <l>Finding my occupation, poverty, notoriety, foibles, <lb />crimes, less
                        important than I thought; </l>
                    <l>Me private, or public, or menial, or solitary&#8212;all <lb />these
                        subordinate, (I am eternally equal with <lb />the best&#8212;I am not
                        subordinate;) </l>
                    <l>Me toward the Mexican Sea, or in the Mannahatta, <lb />or the Tennessee, or
                        far north, or inland, </l>
                    <l>A river-man, or a man of the woods, or of any farm-<lb />life of These
                        States, or of the coast, or the lakes, <lb />or Kanada, </l>
                    <l>Me, wherever my life is <del type="overstrike">to be</del> lived, O to be <choice>
                            <orig>self-bal-<lb />anced</orig>
                            <reg>self-balanced<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> for contingencies! </l>
                    <l>O to confront night, storms, hunger, ridicule, <choice>
                            <orig>acci-<lb />dents,</orig>
                            <reg>accidents<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> rebuffs, as the trees and animals do. </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf100v" type="verso" n="192" facs="nyp.00015.200" />
                </lg>
                <del type="hashmark">
                    <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01523">
                        <relations>
                            <work ref="xxx.00241" />
                        </relations>
                        <head type="main-authorial">19.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial">
                                <subst>
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Meanings</add>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Sonnet</add>
                                </subst>
                            </head>
                        </add>
                        <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">WAS</hi> looking a long while for <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the history</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">those</add>
                            </subst> of the <lb />past <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">to
                                rely on&#8212;</add><del type="overstrike">for myself, and for
                                these Chants</del>&#8212;and now <lb />I have found <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">it</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">them</add>
                            </subst>, </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It is</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">They are</add>
                            </subst> not in those paged fables in the libraries, (them <lb />I
                            neither accept nor reject,) </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It is</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">They are</add>
                            </subst> no more in the legends <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">than in all else,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop"><del
                                        type="overstrike">they</del><add type="unmarked"
                                        place="supralinear">those</add> are not the <add type="edit"
                                        rend="underline">Meaning</add></add>
                            </subst><anchor xml:id="t34" /></l>
                        <l>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="#t34">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It is</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">they are</add>
                                </subst> in the present&#8212;</transpose>
                            <del type="overstrike">it is this earth to-day,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It is</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">They are</add>
                            </subst> in Democracy&#8212;in this America&#8212;the old world
                            <lb />also, </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It is</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">In</add>
                            </subst> the life of one man or one woman to-day, the <lb />average man
                            of to-day; </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It is</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">In</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">in</add>
                            </del> languages, social customs, literatures, arts,</l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">It is</del> the broad show of artificial things,
                            ships, <choice>
                                <orig>ma-<lb />chinery,</orig>
                                <reg>machinery<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> politics, creeds, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">They are the
                                    meaning&#8212;</add>
                            </del> modern improvements, <lb />and the interchanges of nations,<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;they are the meaning</add>
                        </l>
                        <l>All for the average man of to-day.</l>
                    </lg>
                </del>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01524">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00041" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">20.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">I hear America singing,
                                        <del type="overstrike">f</del> the varied carols I
                                    hear.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr to Leaves of Grass</note>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">A<hi rend="smallcaps">MERICAN</hi>
                                mouth-songs!</del>
                        </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">1</note>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Those</del>
                            <del type="overstrike"><subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">o</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">O</add>
                                </subst>f mechanics&#8212;</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">E</add>
                            </subst>ach one singing, his, as it <lb />should be, blithe and strong, </l>
                        <l>The carpenter singing his, as he measures his plank <lb />or beam, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf101r" type="recto" n="193" facs="nyp.00015.201" />
                        <l>The mason singing his, as he makes ready for work, <lb />or leaves off
                            work, </l>
                        <l>The boatman singing what belongs to him in his boat <lb />&#8212;the
                            deck-hand singing on the steamboat deck, </l>
                        <l>The shoemaker singing as he sits on his bench&#8212;the <lb />hatter
                            singing as he stands, </l>
                        <l>The wood-cutter's song&#8212;the ploughboy's, on his way <lb />in the
                            morning, or at the noon intermission, or at <lb />sundown; </l>
                        <l>The delicious singing of the mother&#8212;or of the <lb />young wife
                            at work&#8212;or of the girl sewing or <lb />washing&#8212;Each
                            singing what belongs to her, <lb />and to none else, </l>
                        <l>The day what belongs to the day&#8212;At night, the <lb />party, of
                            young fellows, robust, friendly, <del type="overstrike">clean-<lb />
                                blooded,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> singing with
                            melodious <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">voices,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">mouths, their
                                    strong</add>
                            </subst>
                            <choice>
                                <orig>melo-<lb />dious</orig>
                                <reg>melodious<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">thoughts.</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">songs.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>Come! some of you! <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">still be flooding</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">flood</add>
                                </subst> The States<add type="unmarked" place="marginright">!</add>
                                <lb /><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182; Flood
                                    them</add> with <del type="overstrike">hundreds and</del>
                                thousands of mouth-songs, <lb />fit for The States only. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01525">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00290" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">21.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Realities</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline"
                                    >Leaves.</add>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="superlinear">As I walk,
                                    solitary, unattended</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright"><del type="overstrike">&#8212;?
                            or</del> tr to Leaves of Grass</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>As I walk, solitary, unattended,</l>
                        <l>Around me I hear that eclat of the world&#8212;politics,
                            <lb />produce, </l>
                        <l>The announcements of recognized things&#8212;science,</l>
                        <l>The approved growth of cities, and the spread of <lb />inventions. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf101v" type="verso" n="194" facs="nyp.00015.202" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>I see the ships, (they will last a few years,)</l>
                        <l>The vast factories with their foremen and workmen,</l>
                        <l>And hear the indorsement of all, and do not object <lb />to it. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>But <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">we</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">I</add>
                            </subst> too announce solid things,</l>
                        <l>Science, ships, politics, cities, factories, are not <choice>
                                <orig>noth-<lb />ing</orig>
                                <reg>nothing<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>&#8212;they serve, </l>
                        <l>They stand for realities&#8212;all is as it should be.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>Then my realities,</l>
                        <l>What else is so real as mine?</l>
                        <l>Libertad, and the divine average&#8212;Freedom to every <lb />slave
                            on the face of the earth, </l>
                        <l>The rapt promises and lumine of seers&#8212;the <choice>
                                <orig>spir-<lb />itual</orig>
                                <reg>spiritual<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> world&#8212;<del type="overstrike">these centuries-lasting
                                songs,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>And our visions, the visions of poets, the most solid <lb />announcements
                            of any. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>For we support all,</l>
                        <l>After the rest is done and gone, <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">we</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses">our
                                        visions</unclear>
                                </add>
                            </del> remain,</l>
                        <l>There is no final reliance but upon us,</l>
                        <l>Democracy rests finally upon us, (I, my brethren, <lb />begin it,) </l>
                        <l>And our visions sweep through eternity.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf102r" type="recto" n="195" facs="nyp.00015.203" />
            <lg type="cluster" xml:id="ppp.01526">
                <relations>
                    <work ref="xxx.00436" />
                </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">LEAVES OF GRASS.</head>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01527">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00132" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">1.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">As I<gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                                     />know</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">As I <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />pples <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />Paumanok,</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="over">As I ebbed with an ebb
                                        of the ocean of life</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="7" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="margintop"> Where <add
                                            type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Wh<unclear
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                                >ile</unclear></add>
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />an ebb of <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /> of life</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="8" type="unmarked" place="over" rend="underline">As I
                                    walked where the sea&#8209;ripples wash you Paumanok</add>
                                <note type="authorial">?</note>
                                <add seq="9" type="unmarked" place="supralinear" rend="circled">As I
                                    ebb'd with the <note type="authorial">?</note> ebb of <del
                                        type="overstrike">life</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the></add> ocean.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>E<hi rend="smallcaps">LEMENTAL</hi> drifts!</l>
                            <l>O I wish I could impress others as you and the waves <lb />have just
                                been impressing me. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t35">
                            <l>
                                <restore type="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike"> As I ebbed with an ebb of the ocean of
                                        life,</del>
                                </restore>
                                <anchor xml:id="t34a" />
                            </l>
                            <l>
                                <restore type="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <del type="edit">
                                            <transpose anchored="true" target="#t34a">As I wended the
                                                shores I know,</transpose>
                                        </del>
                                    </del>
                                </restore>
                            </l>
                        </transpose>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr below</note>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>As I walked <del
                                type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">alone</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /> light</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">rhythmic</add>
                            </del> where the sea-ripples wash you, <choice>
                                <orig>Pau-<lb />manok,</orig>
                                <reg>Paumanok<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>Where they rustle up, hoarse and sibilant,</l>
                        <l>Where the fierce old mother endlessly cries for her <lb />castaways, </l>
                        <anchor xml:id="t35" />
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">take in</note>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">I,</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">m</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="edit">M</add>
                            </subst>using, late in the autumn<del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </del>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">day,</del>
                            </restore> gazing off <choice>
                                <orig>south-<lb />ward,</orig>
                                <reg>southward<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>Alone, held by th <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">is</add>
                            </subst> eternal <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">s</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">S</add>
                            </subst>elf of me that threatens <lb />to get the better of me, and
                            stifle me, </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="marginleft">I</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="over">I</add>
                            </subst> Was seized by the spirit that trails in the lines
                            <lb />underfoot, </l>
                        <l>In the rim, the sediment, that stands for all the water <lb />and all the
                            land of the globe. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf102v" type="verso" n="196" facs="nyp.00015.204" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Fascinated, my eyes<del type="overstrike">, reverting from the
                                south,</del>
                            <lb />drop <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ped</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                            </subst>, to follow <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">those</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </subst> slender winrows, </l>
                        <l>Chaff, straw, splinters of wood, weeds, and the sea-<lb />gluten, </l>
                        <l>Scum, scales from shining rocks, leaves of salt-<lb />lettuce, left by
                            the tide; </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>Miles walking, the
                            sound of breaking waves <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >by</add> the <del type="overstrike">other</del>
                            <lb />side of me, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">O my</add>
                            </del> Paumanok, there and then, as I thought the old <lb />thought of
                            likenesses, </l>
                        <l>These you presented to me, you fish-shaped island,</l>
                        <l>As I wended <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>the shores I know,</l>
                        <l><restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">As I walk <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                        <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                                        </del>
                                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                                    </subst>d</del>
                            </restore> with that eternal self of me, seeking <lb />types. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>As I <subst>
                                <restore seq="3" rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">wend</del>
                                </restore>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">walk</add>
                            </subst> the shores I know not,</l>
                        <l>As I listen to the dirge, the voices of men and women <lb />wreck <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                            </subst>d, </l>
                        <l>As I inhale the impalpable breezes that set in <lb />upon me, </l>
                        <l>As the ocean so mysterious rolls toward me closer <lb />and closer, </l>
                        <l>At once I find, the least thing that belongs to me, or <lb />that I see
                            or touch, I know not; </l>
                        <l>I, too, but signify, at the utmost, a little wash <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                            </subst>-up <lb />drift, </l>
                        <l>A few sands and dead leaves to gather,</l>
                        <l>Gather, and merge myself as part of the sands and <lb />drift. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>O baffled, balk <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                            </subst>,<anchor xml:id="t36" /></l>
                        <l>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t36">Bent to the very earth, <del
                                    type="overstrike">here preceding what follows,</del></transpose>
                        </l>
                        <l>Oppres <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sed</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                            </subst> with myself that I have dared to open my <lb />mouth, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf103r" type="recto" n="197" facs="nyp.00015.205" />
                        <l>Aware now, that, amid all the blab whose echoes <lb />recoil upon me,
                                <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>I have not once had the least <lb />idea who or what I <add
                                type="insertion" place="supralinear">really</add> am, </l>
                        <l>But that before all <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </subst> insolent poems the real M<hi rend="smallcaps">E</hi>
                            <lb />still stands <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">altogether</add>
                            </del> untouch <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                            </subst>, untold, <del type="overstrike">altogether <choice><orig>un-<lb
/>reach</orig><reg>unreached<lb/></reg></choice><subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                                </subst>, </del></l>
                        <l>Withdrawn far, mocking <del type="overstrike">me</del> with <choice>
                                <orig>mock-congrat-<lb />ulatory</orig>
                                <reg>mock-congratulatory<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> signs and bows, </l>
                        <l>With peals of distant ironical laughter at every word <lb />I have
                                written<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">or <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">shall</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">can ever</add>
                                </subst> write,</del>
                        </l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                <l>Striking me with insults till I fall helpless upon the
                                    <lb />sand. </l>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                <l>
                                    <del type="overstrike">Striking me</del>
                                    <del type="overstrike">Striking me, &#38; crying, Is it you
                                        that</del> Pointing in silence to all <del type="overstrike"
                                        >my</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">these</add> songs, and
                                    then to the <del type="overstrike">sand beneath</del>
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">sand &#38;</add>
                                    <del type="overstrike">trails of debris, sand beneath</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">beneath</add>
                                </l>
                            </add>
                        </subst>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike">O I perceive I have not understood
                                    anything&#8212;not a <lb />single object&#8212;and that
                                    no man ever can. </del>
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                            <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">While</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Ah, O I think</add>
                                </del>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">think</add>
                                </del> I perceive Nature here, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">in sight of the sea,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">riding out of
                                        the oceans,</add>
                                </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> is
                                taking <lb />advantage of me, to dart upon me, and sting me, </l>
                            <l>Because <anchor xml:id="t37" /><del type="overstrike">I was assuming
                                    so much,<lb /> And because</del>
                                <transpose anchored="true" target="t37">I <del type="overstrike"
                                        >have</del> dared <del type="overstrike">to</del> open my
                                    mouth to sing <lb />at all.</transpose>
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>You <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">shores</add> oceans both!
                                <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Eleme<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                            </del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#38; pale, your <del
                                    type="overstrike">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </del> trails of debris!</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">You tangible land! Nature!</del></l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Be not too rough with me&#8212;I
                                submit&#8212;I close with</del>
                            <lb /><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">I understand</add> you,
                                <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">relentless <gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /> &#182; Y<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>These little shreds shall, indeed, stand <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">better than <gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                            </del> for all.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                            <note type="authorial">&#42;</note>
                            <l>(Thus I <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">cry</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">cried</add>
                                </subst>, while the least wave <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">has</add>
                                </del> obliterated all my poems,</l>
                            <l>And the <del type="overstrike">hoars</del> lowest <del
                                    type="overstrike">and hoarsest</del> rustling of water and sand
                                    <del type="overstrike">is</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">proved</add>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">a rhythm<add
                                        type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add>
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                            >and</unclear>
                                    </del></add> incomparable.)</l>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">You friable shore, with trails of debris!</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>You fish-shaped island! I take what is underfoot;</l>
                        <l>What is yours is mine, my father.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <l>I too Paumanok,</l>
                        <l><restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">I too</del>
                            </restore> have bubbled up, floated the measureless float, <lb />and
                            been wash <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">t</add>
                            </subst> on your shores; </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf103v" type="verso" n="198" facs="nyp.00015.206" />
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike">I too</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">coming with</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">am but a trail of drift and debris,</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike"><restore rend="erased">
                                        <del type="overstrike">I too</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <subst>
                                        <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">l</del>
                                        </restore>
                                        <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">L</add>
                                        </del>
                                    </subst>eave little wrecks upon you, you fish-shaped
                                    <lb />island. </del>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l><del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">O</add>
                            </del> I throw myself upon your breast, my father,</l>
                        <l>I cling to you so that you cannot unloose me,</l>
                        <l>I hold you so firm, till you answer me something.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>Kiss me, my father,</l>
                        <l>Touch me with your lips, as I touch those I love,</l>
                        <l>Breathe to me, while I hold you close, the secret of <lb />the <del
                                type="overstrike">wondrous</del> murmuring I envy, </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>For I fear I shall become crazed, if I cannot emulate <lb />it, <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>and utter myself
                                as well as it<del type="overstrike">.</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">utters itself.</add>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Sea-raff! Crook-tongued waves!</l>
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O, I <restore rend="erased">
                                                <del type="overstrike">will</del>
                                            </restore>
                                            <del type="erasure">
                                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">think I
                                                  shall</add>
                                            </del> yet sing, some day, what</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O give me
                                            to sing at least the song</add>
                                    </subst> you have said<lb />to me. </l>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                        <l>Ebb, ocean of life, (the flow will return,)</l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Cease not</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Continue</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> your moaning, you fierce old mother,</l>
                        <l>Endlessly cry for your castaways&#8212;but fear not, <lb />deny not
                            me, </l>
                        <l><del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Nor</add>
                            </del> Rustle <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">not up</del>
                            </restore> so hoarse and angry against my feet, as <lb />I touch you, or
                            gather from you. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I mean tenderly by you,</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                        <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="low" resp="ses">
                                            I do not <del type="overstrike">
                                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                            </del>
                                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">seek</add> to
                                            emulate you</unclear>
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>I <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">but</add> gather for myself,
                            and for this phantom, looking <lb />down where we lead, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="infralinear">This phantom, this
                                    moment</add>
                            </subst> following me and <lb />mine. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                        <l>Me and mine!</l>
                        <l>We, loose winrows, little corpses,</l>
                        <l>Froth, snowy white, and bubbles,</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf104r" type="recto" n="199" facs="nyp.00015.207" />
                        <l>(See! from my dead lips the ooze exuding at last!</l>
                        <l>See&#8212;the prismatic colors, glistening and rolling!)</l>
                        <l>Tufts of straw, sands, fragments,</l>
                        <l>Buoyed hither from many moods, one contradicting <lb />another, </l>
                        <l>From the storm, the long calm, the darkness, the <lb />swell, </l>
                        <l>Musing, pondering, a breath, a briny tear, a dab of <lb />liquid or soil, </l>
                        <l>Up just as much out of fathomless workings <choice>
                                <orig>fer-<lb />mented</orig>
                                <reg>fermented<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and thrown, </l>
                        <l>A limp blossom or two, <del type="overstrike">torn,</del> just as much
                            over waves <lb />floating, drifted at random, </l>
                        <l>Just as much for us that sobbing dirge of Nature,</l>
                        <l>Just as much, whence we come, that blare of the <lb />cloud-trumpets; </l>
                        <l>We, capricious, brought hither, we know not whence, <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">s</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">S</add>
                            </subst>pread out before <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del> You, up there, walking or <lb />sitting, </l>
                        <l>Whoever you are&#8212;we too lie in drifts at your feet.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01528">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00430" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">2.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Great are the Myths</head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>G<hi rend="smallcaps">REAT</hi> are the myths&#8212;I too delight in
                            them,</l>
                        <l>Great are Adam and Eve&#8212;I too look back and <lb />accept them, </l>
                        <l>Great the risen and fallen nations, and their poets, <lb />women, sages,
                            inventors, rulers, warriors, and <lb />priests. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf104v" type="verso" n="200" facs="nyp.00015.208" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Great is Liberty! great is Equality! I am their <choice>
                                <orig>fol-<lb />lower,</orig>
                                <reg>follower<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>Helmsmen of nations, choose your craft! where you <lb />sail, I sail, <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="inline">t<gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        <del type="overstrike">
                                            <add type="insertion" place="margintop">win or
                                                lose,</add>
                                        </del> you</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182; I weather it
                                    out with you, or sink with you.</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Yours is the muscle of life <del
                                    type="overstrike">or</del> death&#8212;yours is the
                                <lb />perfect science&#8212;in you I have absolute faith. </del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>Great is To-day, and beautiful,</l>
                            <l>It is good to live in this age&#8212;there never was any
                                <lb />better. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="interlinear">(&#42; (take in) below)</note>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                            <l>Great are the plunges, throes, triumphs, downfalls of
                                <lb />Democracy, <add type="insertion" place="margintop"> (have you
                                    thought it would not rise again? have you thought it was not
                                    provided for in the essence of things?) </add></l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr up to &#42;</note>
                            </del>
                            <l>Great the reformers, with their lapses and screams,</l>
                            <l>Great the daring and venture of <del type="overstrike">sailors,
                                    on</del> new <choice>
                                    <orig>ex-<lb />plorations.</orig>
                                    <reg>explorations<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                            <l>Great are Yourself and Myself,</l>
                            <l>We are just as good and bad as the oldest and <choice>
                                    <orig>young-<lb />est</orig>
                                    <reg>youngest<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> or any, </l>
                            <l>What the best and worst did, we could do,</l>
                            <l>What they felt, do not we feel it in ourselves?</l>
                            <l>What they wished, do we not wish the same?</l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>Great is Youth<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">yet</add>
                            </subst> equally great <del type="overstrike">is</del> Old
                            Age&#8212;great <lb />are the Day and Night, </l>
                        <l>Great is Wealth <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </subst> great is Poverty <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </subst> great is <choice>
                                <orig>Ex-<lb />pression</orig>
                                <reg>Expression<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </subst> great is Silence. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>Youth, large, lusty, loving&#8212;Youth, full of grace, <lb />force,
                            fascination, </l>
                        <l>Do you <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">not</add> know that Old
                            Age may come after you, with <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">equal</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginbot">superior</add>
                            </subst> grace, force, fascination? </l>
                    </lg>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>Day, full-blown and splendid&#8212;Day of the immense <lb />sun,
                            action, ambition, laughter, </l>
                        <l>The Night follows close, with millions of suns, and <lb />sleep, and
                            restoring darkness. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>Wealth with the flush hand, fine clothes, hospitality <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Ah, yes&#8212;</add>But then
                            the Soul's wealth, which is candor, <choice>
                                <orig>knowl-<lb />edge,</orig>
                                <reg>knowledge<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> pride, enfolding love; </l>
                        <l>(Who goes for men and women showing Poverty <lb />richer than wealth?)
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <l>Expression of speech! in what is written or said, <choice>
                                <orig>for-<lb />get</orig>
                                <reg>forget<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> not that Silence is also expressive, </l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>That anguish as hot as the hottest, and contempt as <lb />cold as the
                                coldest, may be without words, </l>
                            <l>That the true adoration is likewise without words, <lb />and without
                                kneeling. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d18" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>Great is the greatest Nation <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#182; Room, O
                                    Earth!</add>
                            </subst> the nation of clusters <lb />of equal nations<del
                                type="overstrike">.</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">advances!</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>Great is the Earth, and the way it became what it is;</l>
                        <l>Do you imagine it is stopped at this? the increase <lb />abandoned? </l>
                        <l>Understand then that it goes as far onward from <lb />this, <del
                                type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del> as this <del type="overstrike">is</del> from the times <del
                                type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del> when it lay in <lb />covering waters and gases, before man had <choice>
                                <orig>ap-<lb />peared.</orig>
                                <reg>appeared<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <l>Great is the quality of Truth in man,</l>
                        <l>The quality of truth in man supports itself through <lb />all changes, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf105v" type="verso" n="202" facs="nyp.00015.210" />
                        <l>It is inevitably in the man&#8212;he and it are in love, <lb />and
                            never leave each other. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                        <l>The truth in man is no dictum, it is vital as <choice>
                                <orig>eye-<lb />sight,</orig>
                                <reg>eyesight<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>If there be any Soul, there is truth<del type="hashmark">&#8212;if
                                there be man <lb />or woman <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">at all,</add>
                                </subst> there is truth&#8212;if there be physical <lb />or
                                moral, there is truth, </del></l>
                        <l>If there be equilibrium or volition, there is truth&#8212; <lb />if
                            there be things at all upon the earth, there <lb />is truth. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                        <l>O truth of the earth! O truth of things! I am <choice>
                                <orig>de-<lb />termined</orig>
                                <reg>determined<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> to press my way toward you, </l>
                        <l>Sound your voice! I scale mountains, or dive in the <lb />sea after you.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <anchor xml:id="d18" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                        <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Yet</add> Great is
                            Language&#8212;it is the mightiest of the <choice><orig>sci-<lb />ences,</orig><reg>sciences,<lb/></reg></choice> </l>
                        <l>It is the fulness, color, form, diversity of the earth, <lb />and of men
                            and women, and of all qualities <lb />and processes, </l>
                        <l>It is greater than wealth&#8212;it is greater than <choice>
                                <orig>build-<lb />ings,</orig>
                                <reg>buildings<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> ships, religions, paintings, music. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                            <l>Great is the English speech&#8212;what speech is so <lb />great
                                as the English? </l>
                            <l>Great is the English brood&#8212;what brood has so vast <lb />a
                                destiny as the English? </l>
                            <l>It is the mother of the brood that must rule the earth <lb />with the
                                new rule, </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>The new rule shall rule as the Soul rules, and as the <lb />love,
                                    justice, equality in the Soul, rule. </l>
                            </del>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf106r" type="recto" n="203" facs="nyp.00015.211" />
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                            <l>Great is Law&#8212;great are the old few landmarks of <lb />the
                                law, </l>
                            <l>They are the same in all times, and shall not be <lb />disturbed.
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Great are commerce, newspapers, books, free-trade, <lb />railroads,
                                steamers, international mails, <choice>
                                    <orig>tele-<lb />graphs,</orig>
                                    <reg>telegraphs<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> exchanges. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                        <l>Great is Justice!</l>
                        <l>Justice is not settled by legislators and laws&#8212;it is in
                            <lb />the Soul, </l>
                        <l>It cannot be varied by statues, any more than love, <lb />pride, the
                            attraction of gravity, can, </l>
                        <l>It is immutable&#8212;it does not depend on majorities<del
                                type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> majorities or
                            what not <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del> come at last before the <lb />same passionless and exact
                            tribunal. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                        <l>For justice are the grand natural lawyers and perfect
                            <lb />judges&#8212;it is in their Souls, </l>
                        <l>It is well assorted&#8212;they have not studied for <choice>
                                <orig>noth-<lb />ing</orig>
                                <reg>nothing<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>&#8212;the great includes the less, </l>
                        <l>They rule on the highest grounds&#8212;they oversee all <lb />eras,
                            states, administrations. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                            <l>The perfect judge fears nothing&#8212;he could go front <lb />to
                                front before God, </l>
                            <l>Before the perfect judge all shall stand back&#8212;<del
                                    type="overstrike">life <lb />and death shall stand
                                back</del>&#8212;heaven and hell <lb />shall stand back. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                            <l>Great is Goodness <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></l>
                            <l>I do not know what it is, any more than I know what <lb />health
                                is&#8212;but I know it is great. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf106v" type="verso" n="204" facs="nyp.00015.212" />
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                            <l>Great is Wickedness&#8212;I find I often admire it, just as
                                <lb />much as I admire goodness, </l>
                            <l>Do you call that a paradox? It certainly is a paradox.</l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                            <l>The eternal equilibrium of things is great, and the <lb />eternal
                                overthrow of things is great, </l>
                            <l>And there is another paradox.</l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                        <l>Great is Life, real and mystical, wherever and whoever,</l>
                        <l>Great is Death&#8212;sure as Life holds all parts together,
                            <lb />Death holds all parts together, </l>
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                            <l>Has Life much purport? ah Death also has much purport.</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Death has <add type="insertion"
                                    place="marginleft">surely</add> just as much purport as Life<add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">has,</del></del>
                        </l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>Do you enjoy what Life confers? <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">you shall</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop"><gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" /> do you know <gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" /><unclear
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                                >you shall more</unclear></add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="marginright">O you <del
                                            type="overstrike">may</del>
                                        <note type="authorial">?</note>
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">will</add> still
                                        more</add>
                                </subst> enjoy what <lb />Death confers, </l>
                            <l>I do not understand the realities of Death, but I know <lb />they are
                                great, </l>
                            <l>I do not understand the least reality of Life&#8212;how then
                                <lb />can I understand the realities of Death? </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01529">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00113" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">3.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                        >bringing a message.</unclear>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">Come <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /> romanza,</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="over" rend="underline">The
                                    Signs.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">L of G</note>
                    </del>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">Pioneers</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="interlinear">&#42;</note>
                    <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                        <note type="authorial">&#42;</note>
                        <l>Now list to my morning's romanza,</l>
                        <l>To the cities &#38; farms I sing, as they spread in the sunshine
                            before me</l>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                <l>Come list to my morning's romanza,</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">List</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">How</add>
                            </del> A <hi rend="smallcaps">YOUNG</hi> man <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">came</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">comes</add>
                            </subst> to me <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">with</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">bearing</add>
                            </subst> a message from his <lb />brother, </l>
                        <l>How should the young man know the whether and <lb />when of his brother? </l>
                        <l>Tell him to send me the signs.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>And I <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">stood</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">stand</add>
                            </subst> before the young man face to face, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add> and <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">took</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">take</add>
                            </subst> his right hand in my left hand, and his left <lb />hand in my
                            right hand, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf107r" type="recto" n="205" facs="nyp.00015.213" />
                        <l>And I answer<del type="overstrike">ed</del> for his brother, and for men,
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and I
                                <lb />answer<del type="overstrike">ed</del> for <hi rend="smallcaps"
                                >THE</hi> P<hi rend="smallcaps">OET</hi>, and sen <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="edit">t</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="edit">d</add>
                            </subst> these signs. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Him all wait for&#8212;him all yield up to&#8212;his word is
                            <lb />decisive and final, </l>
                        <l>Him they accept, in him lave, in him perceive <choice>
                                <orig>them-<lb />selves,</orig>
                                <reg>themselves<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> as amid light, </l>
                        <l>Him they immerse, and he immerses them.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>Beautiful women, the haughtiest nations, laws, the <lb />landscape,
                            people, animals, </l>
                        <l>The profound earth and its attributes, and the unquiet <lb />ocean, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">(so tell I my morning's
                                romanza,)</add></l>
                        <l>All enjoyments and properties, and money, and <choice>
                                <orig>what-<lb />ever</orig>
                                <reg>whatever<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> money will buy, </l>
                        <l>The best farms&#8212;others toiling and planting, and he
                            <lb />unavoidably reaps, </l>
                        <l>The noblest and costliest cities&#8212;others grading and
                            <lb />building, and he domiciles there, </l>
                        <l>Nothing for any one, but what is for him&#8212;near and <lb />far are
                            for him, <anchor xml:id="t38" />
                        </l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t38">
                            <l>The ships in the offing <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </subst>the perpetual shows and <lb />marches on land, are for him,
                                if they are for any <lb />body. </l>
                        </transpose>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>He puts things in their attitudes,</l>
                        <l>He puts to-day out of himself, with plasticity and <lb />love, </l>
                        <l>He places his own city, times, reminiscences, parents, <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>brothers and sisters,
                            associations, employment, <lb />politics, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>so that the rest never shame them <choice>
                                <orig>after-<lb />ward,</orig>
                                <reg>afterward<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> nor assume to command them. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf107v" type="verso" n="206" facs="nyp.00015.214" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>He is the answerer,</l>
                        <l>What can be answered he answers&#8212;and what cannot <lb />be
                            answered, he shows how it cannot be answered. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>A man is a summons and challenge;</l>
                        <l>(It is vain to skulk&#8212;Do you hear that mocking and
                            <lb />laughter? Do you hear the ironical echoes?) </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>Books, friendships, philosophers, priests, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>action, <choice>
                                <orig>pleas-<lb />ure,</orig>
                                <reg>pleasure<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> pride, beat up and down, seeking to give <lb />satisfaction, </l>
                        <l>He indicates the satisfaction, and indicates them that <lb />beat up and
                            down also. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>Whichever the sex, whatever the season or place, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add> he <lb />may go freshly and gently
                            and safely, by day or <lb />by night, </l>
                        <l>He has the pass-key of hearts&#8212;to him the response <lb />of the
                            prying of hands on the knobs. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <l>His welcome is universal&#8212;the flow of beauty is not <lb />more
                            welcome or universal than he is, </l>
                        <l>The person he favors by day or sleeps with at night is <lb />blessed.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>Every existence has its idiom&#8212;everything has an <lb />idiom and
                            tongue, </l>
                        <l>He resolves all tongues into his own, and bestows it <lb />upon men, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and any man
                            translates, and any man <lb />translates himself also, </l>
                        <l>One part does not counteract another part&#8212;he is the
                            <lb />joiner&#8212;he sees how they join. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>He says indifferently and alike, <hi rend="italic">How are you,
                                friend?</hi>
                            <lb />to the President at his levee, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf108r" type="recto" n="207" facs="nyp.00015.215" />
                        <l>And he says, <hi rend="italic">Good-day, my brother!</hi> to Cudge that
                            <lb />hoes in the sugar-field, </l>
                        <l>And both understand him, and know that his speech <lb />is right. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <l>He walks with perfect ease in the capitol,</l>
                        <l>He walks among <del type="overstrike">the</del> Congress, and one
                            representative <lb />says to another, <hi rend="italic">Here is our
                                equal, appearing and</hi>
                            <lb /><hi rend="italic">new</hi>. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                        <l>Then the mechanics take him for a mechanic,</l>
                        <l>And the soldiers suppose him to be a captain, and the <lb />sailors that
                            he has followed the sea, </l>
                        <l>And the authors take him for an author, and the <lb />artists for an
                            artist, </l>
                        <l>And the laborers perceive he could labor with them <lb />and love them, </l>
                        <l>No matter what the work is, that he is the one to <choice>
                                <orig>fol-<lb />low</orig>
                                <reg>follow<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> it, or has followed it, </l>
                        <l>No matter what the nation, that he might find his <lb />brothers and
                            sisters there. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                        <l>The English believe he comes of their English stock,</l>
                        <l>A Jew to the Jew he seems&#8212;a Russ to the Russ&#8212;
                            <lb />usual and near, removed from none. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                        <l>Whoever he looks at in the traveller's coffee-house <lb />claims him, </l>
                        <l>The Italian or Frenchman is sure, and the German is <lb />sure, and the
                            Spaniard is sure, and the island <lb />Cuban is sure; </l>
                        <l>The engineer, the deck-hand on the great lakes, or on <lb />the
                            Mississippi, or St. Lawrence, or Sacramento, <lb />or Hudson, or
                            Paumanok Sound, claims him. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf108v" type="verso" n="208" facs="nyp.00015.216" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                        <l>The gentleman of perfect blood acknowledges his <choice>
                                <orig>per-<lb />fect</orig>
                                <reg>perfect<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> blood, </l>
                        <l>The insulter, the prostitute, the angry person, the <lb />beggar, see
                            themselves in the ways of him&#8212;he <lb />strangely transmutes
                            them, </l>
                        <l>They are not vile any more&#8212;they hardly know <choice>
                                <orig>them-<lb />selves,</orig>
                                <reg>themselves<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> they are so grown. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                            <l>Do you think it would be good to be the writer of <lb />melodious
                                verses? </l>
                            <l>Well, it would be good to be the writer of melodious <lb />verses; </l>
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">But</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">(Then
                                        finally</add>
                                </subst> what are verses beyond the flowing character you
                                <lb />could have? <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add> or beyond beautiful manners and
                                <lb />behavior? </l>
                            <l>Or beyond one manly or affectionate deed of an <choice><orig>ap-<lb
/>prentice-boy</orig><reg>apprentice-boy<lb/></reg></choice>? or old woman?
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> or man that
                                has <lb />been in prison, or is likely to be in prison?<add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01530">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00229" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">4.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">Earth corrupted with drunk<del
                                        type="overwrite">enness</del><add type="overwrite"
                                        place="over">ards.</add>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">and gluttons <del
                                            type="overstrike">fed</del>
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">fed</add></add></del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">Something startles me
                                    where I thought I was safest</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <l>
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">you,</add>
                                    </l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="4" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="over">Earth <gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /> drunkards and gluttons <del
                                        type="overstrike">dead</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">fed</add>!</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="hashmark">
                                <l>S<hi rend="smallcaps">OMETHING</hi> startles me where I thought I
                                    was safest,</l>
                                <l>I withdraw from the still woods I loved,</l>
                                <l>I will not go now on the pastures to walk,</l>
                                <l>I will not strip the clothes from my body to meet my <lb />lover
                                    the sea, </l>
                                <l>I will not touch my flesh to <subst>
                                        <restore seq="6" rend="erased">
                                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the earth,</del>
                                        </restore>
                                        <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                                >yours,</add>
                                        </del>
                                        <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="infralinear"
                                                >you,</add>
                                        </del>
                                    </subst> as to other <lb />flesh, to renew me. </l>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf109r" type="recto" n="209" facs="nyp.00015.217" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">O Earth!</del>
                        </l>
                        <l><restore rend="earsed">
                                <del type="overstrike">O</del>
                            </restore> how can the ground <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                    ><del type="overstrike">of you</del>&#8212;how can the
                                forests</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">of you</del> not sicken?</l>
                        <l>How can you be alive, you growths of spring?</l>
                        <l>How can you furnish health, you blood of herbs, roots, <lb />orchards,
                            grain? </l>
                        <l>Are they not continually putting distempered corpses <lb />in you? </l>
                        <l>Is not every continent worked over and over with sour <lb />dead? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Where have you disposed of <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">those</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">their</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="overwrite" place="over">their</add>
                            </subst> carcasses <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                        >&#8212;</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="inline">?</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">of the</del>
                            <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add><subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="inline">T<gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">Those</add>
                            </subst>
                            <restore rend="erased">drunkards and gluttons of</restore> so many
                            generations? </l>
                        <l>Where have you drawn off all the foul liquid and meat?</l>
                        <l>I do not see any of it upon you to-day&#8212;or perhaps <lb />I am
                            deceived, </l>
                        <l>I will run a furrow with my plough&#8212;I will press <lb />my spade
                            through the sod, and turn it up <choice>
                                <orig>un-<lb />derneath,</orig>
                                <reg>underneath<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>I am sure I shall expose some of the foul meat.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">Behold!</del>
                            </restore>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline"> This compost! behold it well!</add>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">This is the compost of billions of premature
                                corpses <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                                </subst></del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Perhaps every mite <del type="overstrike">has</del> once formed part of a
                            sick <lb />person&#8212;Yet behold! </l>
                        <l>The grass covers the prairies,</l>
                        <l>The bean bursts noiselessly through the mould in the <lb />garden, </l>
                        <l>The delicate spear of the onion pierces upward,</l>
                        <l>The apple-buds cluster together on the apple-branches,</l>
                        <l>The resurrection of the wheat appears with pale visage <lb />out of its
                            graves, </l>
                        <l>The tinge awakes over the willow-tree and the <choice>
                                <orig>mul-<lb />berry-tree,</orig>
                                <reg>mulberry-tree<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf109v" type="verso" n="210" facs="nyp.00015.218" />
                        <l>The he-birds carol mornings and evenings, while the <lb />she-birds sit
                            on their nests, </l>
                        <l>The young of poultry break through the hatched eggs,</l>
                        <l>The new-born of animals appear&#8212;the calf is dropt <lb />from the
                            cow, the colt from the mare, </l>
                        <l>Out of its little hill faithfully rise the potato's dark <lb />green
                            leaves, </l>
                        <l>Out of its hill rises the yellow maize-stalk;</l>
                        <l>The summer growth is innocent and disdainful above <lb />all those strata
                            of sour dead. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>What chemistry!</l>
                        <l>That the winds are really not infectious,</l>
                        <l>That this is no cheat, this transparent green-wash of <lb />the sea,
                            which is so amorous after me, </l>
                        <l>That it is safe to allow it to lick my naked body all <lb />over with its
                            tongues, </l>
                        <l>That it will not endanger me with the fevers that <lb />have deposited
                            themselves in it, </l>
                        <l>That all is clean, forever and forever,</l>
                        <l>That the cool drink from the well tastes so good,</l>
                        <l>That blackberries are so flavorous and juicy,</l>
                        <l>That the fruits of the apple-orchard, and of the <lb />orange-orchard <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>that melons, grapes, peaches, <lb />plums, will none of them
                            poison me, </l>
                        <l>That when I recline on the grass I do not catch any <lb />disease, </l>
                        <l>Though probably every spear of grass rises out of <lb />what was once a
                            catching disease. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>Now I am terrified at the Earth! it is that calm and <lb />patient, </l>
                        <l>It grows such sweet things out of such corruptions,</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf110r" type="recto" n="211" facs="nyp.00015.219" />
                        <l>It turns harmless and stainless on its axis, with such <lb />endless
                            successions of diseased corpses, </l>
                        <l>It distils such exquisite winds out of such infused <lb />fetor, </l>
                        <l>It renews, with such unwitting looks, its prodigal, <lb />annual,
                            sumptuous crops, </l>
                        <l>It gives such divine materials to men, and accepts <lb />such leavings
                            from them at last. </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01531">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00223" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">5.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">Song of prudence, (the sum of all)</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Now sing I the
                                        sum of all.</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="over">Manhatten's streets <del
                                        type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">as</add>
                                    </del> I saunter'd pondering</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Now sing I the sum of all, the
                                song of Prudence</add>
                        </del>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike"><del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">For</add>
                                </del>
                                <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">A<hi rend="smallcaps"
                                            >LL</hi></del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="infralinear"><gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" />whole</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> day I have walked the city, and talked with my
                                <lb />friends, and thought of prudence, </del>
                        </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">I thought of</add>
                            </del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Of</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">On</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">On</add>
                            </subst> time, space, reality&#8212; <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">of</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">on</add>
                            </subst> such as these, and abreast <lb />with them, <add type="edit"
                                rend="underline">prudence</add>. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>After all, the last explanation remains to be made <lb />about prudence, </l>
                        <l>Little and large alike drop quietly aside from the <lb />prudence that
                            suits immortality. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>The Soul is of itself,</l>
                        <l>All <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">else</add>
                            </del> verges to it&#8212;all has reference to what ensues,</l>
                        <l>All that a person does, says, thinks, is of <choice>
                                <orig>conse-<lb />quence,</orig>
                                <reg>consequence<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>Not a move can a man or woman make, that affects <lb />him or her in a
                            day, month, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> any
                            part of the <lb />direct life-time, or the hour of death, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> but the <lb />same
                            affects him or her onward afterward <lb />through the indirect
                            life-time. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf110v" type="verso" n="212" facs="nyp.00015.220" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>The indirect is <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">more than</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">just as much as
                                        <del type="overstrike">t</del></add>
                            </subst> the direct,</l>
                        <l>The spirit receives from the body just as much as it <lb />gives to the
                            body, if not more. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>Not one word or deed <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>not venereal sore, <choice>
                                <orig>discolor-<lb />ation,</orig>
                                <reg>discoloration<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> privacy of the onanist, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>putridity of gluttons <lb />or rum-drinkers,
                            peculation, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>cunning,
                            betrayal, <lb />murder, seduction, prostitution, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>but has results <lb />beyond death,
                            as really as before death. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>Charity and personal force are the only investments <lb />worth anything.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>No specification is necessary <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>all that a male or <lb />female does, that is vigorous,
                            benevolent, clean, <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>is so much profit to him or her, in the unshakable
                            <lb />order of the universe, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>and through the whole <lb />scope of it forever.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>Who has been wise, receives interest,</l>
                        <l>Savage, felon, President, judge, farmer, sailor, <choice>
                                <orig>me-<lb />chanic,</orig>
                                <reg>mechanic<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">literat</add> young, old, it is
                            the same, </l>
                        <l>The interest will come round&#8212;all will come round.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>Singly, wholly, to affect now, affected their time, will <lb />forever
                            affect, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>all of the
                            past, and all of the <lb />present, and all of the future, </l>
                        <l>All the brave actions of war and peace,</l>
                        <l>All help given to relatives, strangers, the poor, old, <lb />sorrowful,
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>young children,
                            widows, the sick, and <lb />to shunned persons, </l>
                        <l>All furtherance of fugitives, and of the escape of <lb />slaves, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf111r" type="recto" n="213" facs="nyp.00015.221" />
                        <l>All <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">that superb</add>
                            </del> self-denial that stood steady and aloof on wrecks, <lb />and saw
                            others fill the seats of the boats, </l>
                        <l>All offering of substance or life for the good old cause, <lb />or for a
                            friend's sake, or opinion's sake, </l>
                        <l>All pains of enthusiasts, scoffed at by their neighbors,</l>
                        <l>All the limitless sweet love and precious suffering of <lb />mothers, </l>
                        <l>All honest men baffled in strifes recorded or <choice>
                                <orig>unre-<lb />corded,</orig>
                                <reg>unrecorded<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>All the grandeur and good of ancient nations whose <lb />fragments we
                            inherit, </l>
                        <l>All the good of the hundreds of ancient nations <choice>
                                <orig>un-<lb />known</orig>
                                <reg>unknown<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> to us by name, <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                >or</add> date, <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">or</add>
                            <restore type="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">location,</del>
                            </restore>
                        </l>
                        <l>All that was ever manfully begun, <add type="insertion"
                                place="marginright">indifferent</add> whether it <choice>
                                <orig>suc-<lb />ceeded</orig>
                                <reg>succeeded<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> or no, </l>
                        <l>All suggestions of the divine mind of man, or the <lb />divinity of his
                            mouth, or the shaping of his great <lb />hands; </l>
                        <l>All that is well thought or said this day on any part <lb />of the
                            globe&#8212;or on any of the wandering stars, <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>or on any of the
                            fixed stars, by those there as we <lb />are here, </l>
                        <l>All that is henceforth to be thought or done by you, <lb />whoever you
                            are, or by any one, </l>
                        <l>These inure, have inured, shall inure, to the identities <lb />from which
                            they sprang, or shall spring. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <l>Did you guess <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">they or</add>
                            anything lived only its moment?</l>
                        <l>The world does not so exist&#8212;no parts palpable or
                            <lb />impalpable so exist, </l>
                        <l>No consummation exists without being from some <lb />long previous
                            consummation&#8212;and that from <lb />some other, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf111v" type="verso" n="214" facs="nyp.00015.222" />
                        <l>Without the farthest conceivable one coming a bit <lb />nearer the
                            beginning than any. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>Whatever satisfies Souls is true,</l>
                        <l>Prudence entirely satisfies the craving and glut of <lb />Souls, </l>
                        <l>Itself <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">only perhaps</add>
                            finally satisfies the Soul,</l>
                        <l>The Soul has that measureless pride which revolts <lb />from every lesson
                            but its own. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Now</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Shall</add>
                            </subst> I give you an inkling <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">?</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Now</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Shall</add>
                            </subst> I breathe the word of the prudence that walks <lb />abreast
                            with time, space, reality <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">?</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>That answers the pride which refuses every lesson but <lb />its own <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">?</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <l>What is prudence, is indivisible,</l>
                        <l>Declines to separate one part of life from every part,</l>
                        <l>Divides not the righteous from the unrighteous, or <lb />the living from
                            the dead, </l>
                        <l>Matches every thought or act by its correlative,</l>
                        <l>Knows no possible forgiveness or deputed atonement,</l>
                        <l>Knows that the young man who composedly perilled <lb />his life and lost
                            it, has done exceeding well for <lb />himself, without doubt, </l>
                        <l>That he who never perilled his life, but retains it to <lb />old age in
                            riches and ease, has probably achieved <lb />nothing for himself worth
                            mentioning; </l>
                        <l>Knows that only <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">that</add>
                            </subst> person has really learned, who <lb />has learned to prefer
                            results, </l>
                        <l>Who favors body and Soul the same,</l>
                        <l>Who perceives the indirect assuredly following the <lb />direct, </l>
                        <l>Who in his spirit in any emergency whatever neither <lb />hurries
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">or avoids</del>
                            </restore> death<del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">or avoids it.</add>
                            </del>. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf112r" type="recto" n="215" facs="nyp.00015.223" />
                </lg>
                <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d19" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01532">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00113" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">6.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline"
                                        >The Poets</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="4" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline"
                                        >Poems</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="margintop">Time, always without
                                    flaw.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop">Leaves one of a collation of three or
                        four</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">P<hi rend="smallcaps">ERFECT</hi> sanity shows
                                the master among philosophs,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Time, always without flaw, indicates itself in parts,</l>
                        <l>What always indicates the poet, is the crowd of the <lb />pleasant
                            company <del type="overstrike">of singers,</del> and their words, </l>
                        <l>The words of the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">singers</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">pleasant
                                    company</add>
                            </subst> are the <del type="overstrike">hours or</del> minutes of
                            <lb />the light or dark&#8212;but the words of the maker <lb />of
                            poems are the general light and dark, </l>
                        <l>The maker of poems settles justice, reality, <choice>
                                <orig>immor-<lb />tality,</orig>
                                <reg>immortality<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">take in live</note>
                        <l>His insight and power encircle things and the human <lb />race, </l>
                        <l>He is the glory and extract<del type="overstrike">, thus far,</del> of
                            things, and <lb />of the human race. </l>
                        <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">
                            <l>His words are the tufts &#38; final applause of science.</l>
                        </add>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                        <l>The singers <del type="overstrike"> do not beget&#8212;only <hi
                                    rend="smallcaps">THE</hi> P<hi rend="smallcaps"
                                >OET</hi>begets,</del></l>
                        <l>The singers are welcomed, understood, appear often <lb />enough <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>but rare has the day been, likewise the <lb />spot, of the birth
                            of the maker of poems, </l>
                        <l>Not every century, or every five centuries, has <choice>
                                <orig>con-<lb />tained</orig>
                                <reg>contained<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> such a day, for all its names. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>The singers of successive hours of centuries may have <lb />ostensible
                            names, but the name of each of them <lb />is one of the singers, </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                        <l>The name of each is, a heart-singer, eye-singer, <del type="overstrike"
                                >hymn-<lb />singer, law-singer,</del> ear-singer, <del
                                type="overstrike">head-singer, sweet-<lb />singer,
                                wise-singer,</del> droll-singer, thrift-singer, <del
                                type="overstrike">sea-<lb />singer,</del> wit-singer, <del
                                type="overstrike">echo-singer, parlor-singer, love-<lb />singer,
                                passion-singer, mystic-singer, fable-singer, <lb />item-singer,
                                weeping-singer,</del> or something else. </l>
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                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                        <del type="hashmark">
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                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <l>All this time, and at all times, wait the words of
                                        <lb />poems; </l>
                                </del>
                                <l>The greatness of sons is the exuding of the greatness <lb />of
                                    mothers and fathers, </l>
                                <l>
                                    <del type="overstrike">The words of poems are the tuft and final
                                        applause of <lb />science. </del>
                                </l>
                            </lg>
                        </del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">
                            <head type="main-authorial">Nine Idaho beads.</head>
                        </add>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                            <l>Divine instinct, breadth of vision, the law of reason, <lb />health,
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>rudeness of
                                body, withdrawnness, gayety, <lb />sun-tan, air-sweetness <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </subst><del type="overstrike">such are some of the <lb />words of
                                    poems. </del></l>
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                    </del>
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                        <l>The sailor and traveller underlie the maker of poems,</l>
                        <l>The builder, geometer, <del type="overstrike">mathematician,
                                astronomer,</del>
                            <lb />melodist, chemist, anatomist, spiritualist, <del type="overstrike"
                                ><choice><orig>lan-<lb
/>guage-searcher,</orig><reg>language-searcher<lb/></reg></choice>
                                geologist, phrenologist, artist&#8212;</del>
                            <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>all these
                            underlie the maker of poems. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">as I lay with my head in the lap of a
                            comrade</head>
                    </add>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <l>As a lay with my headin the lap of a comrade, tired of reading the
                            poems</l>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>The words of poems give you more than poems,</l>
                        <l>They give you to form for yourself poems, religions, <lb />politics, war,
                            peace, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>behavior,
                            histories, essays, <lb />romances, and everything else <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>They balance ranks, colors, races, creeds, and the <lb />sexes, </l>
                        <l>They do not seek beauty&#8212;they are sought,</l>
                        <l>Forever touching them, or close upon them, follows <lb />beauty, longing,
                            fain, love-sick. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>They prepare for death&#8212;yet are they not the finish, <lb />but
                            rather the outset, </l>
                        <l>They bring none to his or her terminus, or to be <choice>
                                <orig>con-<lb />tent</orig>
                                <reg>content<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and full; </l>
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                        <l>Whom they take, they take into space, to behold the <lb />birth of stars,
                                <del type="overstrike">to learn one of the meanings,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>To launch off with absolute faith&#8212;to sweep through <lb />the
                            ceaseless rings, and never be quiet again. </l>
                    </lg>
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                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="interlinear">? Leaves (one of three)</note>
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                    <head type="main-authorial">7.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="interlinear"
                                        >Assurances.</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="4" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Faith.</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">I do not doubt <del
                                        type="overstrike">that from under my very feet</del></add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I <hi rend="smallcaps">NEED</hi> no
                                    assurances</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Assurances I need
                                    them not</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">!</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inl">(</add>I am a man who is <choice>
                            <orig>pre-<lb />occupied,</orig>
                            <reg>preoccupied<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of his own Soul;<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt that whatever I know at a given time, <lb /><del
                            type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the best</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                            >better</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the best</add>
                                </subst>
                            </add>
                        </del><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">there</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">The best</add>
                                </subst> there waits for me<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >,</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">more,</del></del>
                        </restore>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">which I do not know;</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt that from under <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my very</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> feet, and beside <lb />the hands and face I am cognizant of, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>are now <lb />looking
                        faces I am not cognizant of&#8212;calm and <lb />actual faces; </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt but the majesty and beauty of the <lb />world are latent in
                        any iota of the world; </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">I do not doubt there are realizations I have no idea
                            of, <lb />waiting for me through time, and through the
                            <lb />universes&#8212;also upon this earth; </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt I am limitless, and that the universes <lb />are
                            limitless&#8212;<add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>in vain I
                        try to think how <lb />limitless;<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt that the orbs, and the systems of orbs, <lb />play their swift
                        sports through the air on purpose <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>and that I shall one day be eligible to do as <lb />much as they,
                        and more than they; </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt there is far more in trivialities, insects, <lb />vulgar
                        persons, slaves, dwarfs, weeds, rejected <lb />refuse, than I have supposed; </l>
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                    <l>I do not doubt there is more in myself than I have <lb />supposed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>and more in all men and women&#8212; <lb />and more in my poems
                        than I have supposed; </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt that temporary affairs keep on and on, <lb />millions of
                        years; </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt interiors have their interiors, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>and <lb />exteriors have their exteriors <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>and that the <lb />eye-sight has another eye-sight,<del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> and the hearing <lb />another hearing, and the voice another voice; </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt that the passionately-wept deaths of <lb />young men <restore
                            rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">are provided for</del>
                        </restore>
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">and turn out better than we
                            know,</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>and that the <lb />deaths of young women, and the deaths of little
                        <lb />children, are provided for; </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt that wrecks at sea, no matter what the <lb />horrors of them <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>no matter whose wife, child, <lb />husband, father, lover, has gone
                        down <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>are <choice>
                            <orig>pro-<lb />vided</orig>
                            <reg>provided<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> for, to the minutest point; </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt that shallowness, meanness, <choice>
                            <orig>malig-<lb />nance,</orig>
                            <reg>malignance<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> are provided for; </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt that cities, you, America, the <choice>
                            <orig>re-<lb />mainder</orig>
                            <reg>remainder<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of the earth, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >&#182;</add>politics, freedom, <choice>
                            <orig>degra-<lb />dations,</orig>
                            <reg>degradations<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> are carefully provided for; </l>
                    <l>I do not doubt that whatever can possibly happen, <lb />any where, at any
                        time, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>is provided for, in the <lb />inherences of things. </l>
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                    <head type="main-authorial">8.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Whether I walk the streets of
                                    Manhatten.</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">Miracles.</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><add
                                        type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Why</add>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Who makes much of</add>
                                    Miracles. <del type="overstrike">?</del></add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                            <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HAT</hi> shall I give? and which are my
                                miracles?</l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>Realism is mine&#8212;my miracles&#8212;Take freely,</l>
                            <l>Take without end&#8212;I offer them to you wherever <lb />your
                                feet can carry you, or your eyes reach. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Why! who makes much of <del type="overstrike">a</del> miracle<del
                                        type="overstrike">?</del><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                        >s?</add>
                                    <del type="erasure">
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        </add>
                                    </del></l>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>As to me, I know of nothing else but <subst>
                                        <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">miracles</del>
                                        </restore>
                                        <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                                >them</add>
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                        <l>Whether I walk the streets of Manhattan,</l>
                        <l>Or dart my sight over the roofs of houses toward the <lb />sky, </l>
                        <l>Or wade with naked feet along the beach, just in the <lb />edge of the
                            water, </l>
                        <l>Or stand under trees in the woods,</l>
                        <l>Or talk by day with any one I love&#8212;or sleep in the <lb />bed at
                            night with any one I love, </l>
                        <l>Or sit at the table at dinner with my mother,</l>
                        <l>Or look at strangers opposite me riding in the car,</l>
                        <l>Or watch honey-bees busy around the hive, of a <choice>
                                <orig>sum-<lb />mer</orig>
                                <reg>summer<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> forenoon, </l>
                        <l>Or animals feeding in the fields,</l>
                        <l>Or birds&#8212;or the wonderfulness of insects in the air,</l>
                        <l>Or the wonderfulness of the sun-down&#8212;or of stars <lb />shining
                            so quiet and bright, </l>
                        <l>Or the exquisite, delicate, thin curve of the new-moon <lb />in spring; </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Or whether I go among those I like best, and that
                                like <lb />me best&#8212;mechanics, boatmen, farmers, </del>
                        </l>
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                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Or among the savans&#8212;or to the
                                soiree&#8212;or to the <lb />opera, </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Or stand a long while looking at the movements of <lb />machinery, </l>
                        <l>Or behold children at their sports,</l>
                        <l>Or the admirable sight of the perfect old man, or the <lb />perfect old
                            woman, </l>
                        <l>Or the sick in hospitals, or the dead carried to burial,</l>
                        <l>Or my own eyes and figure in the glass,</l>
                        <l>These, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">with the rest</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">indifferent</add>
                            </subst>, one and all, are to me <add type="edit" rend="underline"
                                >miracles</add>,</l>
                        <l>The whole referring&#8212;yet each distinct and in its <lb />place.
                        </l>
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                        <l>To me, every hour of the light and dark is miracle,</l>
                        <l>Every inch of space is a miracle,</l>
                        <l>Every square yard of the surface of the earth is spread <lb />with the
                            same, </l>
                        <l>Every cubic foot of the interior swarms with the same;</l>
                        <l>Every spear of grass&#8212;the frames, limbs, organs, of <lb />men
                            and women, and all that concerns them, </l>
                        <l>All these to me are unspeakably perfect miracles.</l>
                    </lg>
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                        <l>To me the sea is a continual miracle,</l>
                        <l>The fishes that swim&#8212;the rocks&#8212;the motion of the
                            <lb />waves&#8212;the ships, with men in them, </l>
                        <l>What stranger miracles are there?</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
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                    <head type="main-authorial">9.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial"><del type="overstrike"
                            >Poemet.&#8212;</del>"There Was a Child Went Forth."</head>
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                        <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">HERE</hi> was a child went forth every day,</l>
                        <l>And the first object he looked upon <del type="overstrike">and received
                                <lb />with wonder, pity, love, or dread,</del> that object he
                            <lb />became, </l>
                        <l>And that object became part of him for the day, or a <lb />certain part
                            of the day, <add type="insertion" place="inline">&#182;</add>or for
                            many years, or <lb />stretching cycles of years. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>The early lilacs became part of this child,</l>
                        <l>And grass, and white and red morning-glories, <add type="insertion"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>and <lb />white and red clover, and
                            the song of the ph&#339;be-<lb />bird, </l>
                        <l>And the Third Month lambs, and the sow's pink-faint <lb />litter, and the
                            mare's foal, and the cow's calf, </l>
                        <l>And the noisy brood of the barn-yard, or by the mire <lb />of the
                            pond-side, </l>
                        <l>And the fish suspending themselves so curiously below
                            <lb />there&#8212;and the beautiful curious liquid, </l>
                        <l>And the water-plants with their graceful flat heads&#8212; <lb />all
                            became part of him. </l>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>The field-sprouts of Fourth Month and Fifth Month <lb />became part of
                            him, </l>
                        <l>Winter-grain sprouts, and those of the light-yellow <lb />corn, and the
                            esculent roots of the garden, </l>
                        <l>And the apple-trees covered with blossoms, and the <lb />fruit afterward,
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and
                            wood-berries, and the <choice>
                                <orig>com-<lb />monest</orig>
                                <reg>commonest<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> weeds by the road; </l>
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                        <l>And the old drunkard staggering home from the <choice>
                                <orig>out-<lb />house</orig>
                                <reg>outhouse<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> of the tavern, whence he had lately risen, </l>
                        <l>And the school-mistress that passed on her way to the <lb />school, </l>
                        <l>And the friendly boys that passed&#8212;and the <choice>
                                <orig>quarrel-<lb />some</orig>
                                <reg>quarrelsome<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> boys, </l>
                        <l>And the tidy and fresh-cheeked girls&#8212;and the <choice>
                                <orig>bare-<lb />foot</orig>
                                <reg>barefoot<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> negro boy and girl, </l>
                        <l>And all the changes of city and country, wherever he <lb />went. </l>
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                        <l>His own parents,</l>
                        <l>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">He that had father <subst>
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                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                                    </subst>d him, and she that conceived him <lb />in her womb, and
                                    birth <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                                    </subst>d him, </del>
                            </restore>
                        </l>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>They gave this child more of themselves than that,</l>
                                <l>They gave him afterward every day&#8212;they <del
                                        type="overstrike">and of <lb />them</del> became part of
                                    him. </l>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>The mother at home, quietly placing the dishes on the <lb />supper-table, </l>
                        <l>The mother with mild words&#8212;clean her cap and <lb />gown, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>a wholesome odor
                            falling off her person <lb />and clothes as she walks by; </l>
                        <l>The father, strong, self-sufficient, manly, mean, <choice>
                                <orig>an-<lb />gered,</orig>
                                <reg>angered<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> unjust, </l>
                        <l>The blow, the quick loud word, the tight bargain, the <lb />crafty
                                lure<del type="overstrike">,</del><del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                            </del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(the mixture, fused)</add>
                        </l>
                        <l>The family usages, the language, the company, the
                            <lb />furniture&#8212;the yearning and swelling heart, </l>
                        <l>Affection that will not be gainsayed&#8212;the sense of <lb />what is
                            real&#8212;the thought if, after all, it should <lb />prove unreal, </l>
                        <l>The doubts of day-time and the doubts of night-time&#8212; <lb />the
                            curious whether and how, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">( <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">your</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">the</add>
                                </subst> growing soul's first wonder,)</add></l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf116r" type="recto" n="223" facs="nyp.00015.231" />
                        <l>Whether that which appears so is so, or is it all flashes <lb />and
                            specks? </l>
                        <l>Men and women crowding fast in the streets&#8212;if they <lb />are
                            not flashes and specks, what are they? </l>
                        <l>The streets themselves, and the fa&#231;ades of houses, and
                            <lb />goods in the windows, </l>
                        <l>Vehicles, teams, the heavy-planked wharves&#8212;the <lb />huge
                            crossing at the ferries, </l>
                        <l>The village on the highland, seen from afar at sunset&#8212;
                            <lb />the river between, </l>
                        <l>Shadows, aureola and mist, light falling on roofs and <lb />gables of
                            white or brown, three miles off, </l>
                        <l>The schooner near by, sleepily dropping down the <lb />tide&#8212;the
                            little boat slack-towed astern, </l>
                        <l>The hurrying tumbling waves, quick-broken crests, <lb />slapping, </l>
                        <l>The strata of colored clouds <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">, the</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;
                                    that</add>
                            </subst> the long bar of maroon-<lb />tint, away solitary by
                            itself&#8212;the spread of purity <lb />it lies motionless in, </l>
                        <l>The horizon's edge, the flying sea-crow, the fragrance <lb />of
                            salt-marsh and shore-mud; </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">These</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Such</add>
                            </subst> became part of that child who went forth every <lb />day, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>and who now goes, and
                            will always go forth <lb />every day, </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">And <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">these</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">such</add>
                                </subst> become part of him or her that peruses <lb /><del
                                    type="overstrike">them here.</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline"><del type="overstrike">in</del>
                                    this chant.</add>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf116v" type="verso" n="224" facs="nyp.00015.232" />
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01536">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00122" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">10.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">I inure myself <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /> leap, swim</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="overwrite" place="over">Myself &#38; mine to
                                    wrestle &#38; fight, <del type="overstrike">I
                                    inure</del></add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">(bring in verse &#9758; <gap
                                reason="deletion, illegible" /> over <gap
                                reason="deletion, illegible" /> for the <gap
                                reason="deletion, illegible" /></note>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">I<hi rend="smallcaps">T</hi> is
                                ended&#8212;</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">I <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">will</add>
                                </del> dally no more,</del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />;</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">After to-day I inure myself to run, leap, swim,
                                <lb />wrestle, <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                    >&#38;</add> fight, </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>To stand the cold or heat&#8212;to take good aim with a <lb />gun <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>to sail a boat&#8212;to manage horses&#8212;to
                            <lb />beget superb children, </l>
                        <l>To speak readily and clearly&#8212;to feel at home among <lb />common
                            people, </l>
                        <l>And to hold <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">our</add>
                            </subst> own in terrible positions, on land <lb />and sea. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Not for <del type="overstrike">an</del> embroiderer<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">s</add>,</l>
                        <l>(There will always be plenty of embroiderers&#8212;I <lb />welcome
                            them also;) </l>
                        <l>But for the fibre of things, and for inherent men and <lb />women. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Not to chisel ornaments,</l>
                        <l>But to chisel with free stroke the heads and limbs of <lb />plenteous
                            Supreme Gods, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>that
                            The States may <lb />realize them, walking and talking. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l><del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                                </del>Let me have my own way,</l>
                            <l>Let others promulge the laws&#8212;I will make no <choice>
                                    <orig>ac-<lb />count</orig>
                                    <reg>account<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> of the laws, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Let others <del type="overstrike">praise eminent men and</del> hold up
                            peace&#8212; <lb />I hold up agitation and conflict, </l>
                        <l>I praise <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">no<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                        >t</add> eminent man</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">few</add>
                            </subst> &#8212;I rebuke to his face the <lb />one that was thought
                            most worthy.<del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf117r" type="recto" n="225" facs="nyp.00015.233" />
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                            <l>(Who are you? you mean devil!<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#8212;</add>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">A</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">a</add>
                                </subst>nd what are you <lb />secretly guilty of, all your life? </l>
                            <l>Will you turn aside all your life? Will you grub <lb />and chatter
                                all your life?) </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>(<del type="overstrike">And</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">w</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">W</add>
                            </subst>ho <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">after all</add> are
                            you&#8212;blabbing by rote, years, pages, <lb />languages,
                            reminiscences, </l>
                        <l>Unwitting to-day that you do not know how to speak <lb />a single word?)
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr to first verse</note>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>Let others finish specimens&#8212;I never finish specimens,</l>
                        <l>I shower them by exhaustless laws, as nature does, <lb />fresh and modern
                            continually. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>I give nothing as duties,</l>
                        <l>What others give as duties, I give as living impulses;</l>
                        <l>(Shall I give the heart's action as a duty?)</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>Let others dispose of questions&#8212;I dispose of <choice><orig>noth-<lb />ing</orig><reg>nothing<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;I arouse unanswerable
                            questions; </l>
                        <l>Who are they I see and touch, and what about them?</l>
                        <l>What about these likes of myself, that draw me so <lb />close by tender
                            directions and indirections? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">end</note>
                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d24" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10"><l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Let others deny the evil their enemies charge
                                against <lb />them&#8212;but how can I the like? </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Nothing ever has been, or ever can be, charged
                                against <lb />me, half as bad as the evil I really am; </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">I call to the world to distrust the accounts of
                                my <lb />friends, but listen to my enemies&#8212;as I <choice>
                                    <orig>my-<lb />self</orig>
                                    <reg>myself<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> do; </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>I charge you, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">dear</add>
                                </subst> comrades &#38; children</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">too,</del> forever, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>reject those who would <lb />expound
                            me&#8212;for I cannot expound myself, </l>
                        <anchor xml:id="d24" />
                        <pb xml:id="leaf117v" type="verso" n="226" facs="nyp.00015.234" /> 
                            <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>I charge that there be no theory or school founded out <lb />of me, </l>
                            <l>I charge you to leave all free, as I have left all free.</l>
                        </del></lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="interlinear">end</note>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr to <gap
                                reason="deletion, illegible" /></note>
                    </del>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr somewhere else</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>After me, vista!</l>
                        <l>O, I see life is not short, but immeasurably long,</l>
                        <l>I henceforth tread the world, chaste, temperate, an <lb />early riser, a
                            gymnast, a steady grower, </l>
                        <l>Every hour the semen of centuries&#8212;and still of <choice>
                                <orig>cen-<lb />turies.</orig>
                                <reg>centuries<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>I will follow up these continual lessons of the air, <lb />water, earth, </l>
                        <l>I perceive I have no time to lose.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <del type="edit">
                    <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01537">
                        <relations>
                            <work ref="xxx.00250" />
                        </relations>
                        <head type="main-authorial">11.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Poemet</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">Who wishes to
                                        learn my lesson?</add>
                                </subst>
                            </head>
                        </add>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">leave out</note>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                            <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HO</hi>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">learns</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">wishes to
                                        learn</add>
                                </subst> my lesson <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                    >?</add><del type="overstrike">complete?</del></l>
                            <l>Boss, journeyman, apprentice&#8212;churchman and <choice>
                                    <orig>athe-<lb />ist,</orig>
                                    <reg>atheist<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                            </l>
                            <l>The stupid and the wise thinker&#8212;parents and <choice><orig>off-<lb />spring</orig><reg>offspring<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;merchant,
                                clerk, porter, and customer, </l>
                            <l>Editor, author, artist, and schoolboy&#8212;Draw nigh and
                                <lb />commence <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                                </subst><add type="insertion" place="marginleft"
                                >&#182;</add></l>
                            <l>It is no lesson &#8212; it lets down the bars to a good
                                <lb />lesson, </l>
                            <l>And that to another, and every one to another still.</l>
                        </lg>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr</note>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>The great laws take and effuse without argument,</l>
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike">I am of the same style, for I am their
                                    friend,</del>
                            </l>
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">run on</note>
                            <pb xml:id="leaf118r" type="recto" n="227" facs="nyp.00015.235" />
                            <note type="authorial" prev="marginright">out</note>
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike">I love them quits and quits&#8212;I do
                                    not halt and make <lb />salaams. </del>
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                            <l>I lie abstracted, and hear beautiful tales of things, <lb />and the
                                reasons of things, </l>
                            <l>They are so beautiful, I nudge myself to listen.</l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                            <l>I cannot say to any person what I hear&#8212;I cannot <lb />say
                                it to myself&#8212;it is very wonderful. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <note type="authorial" prev="marginleft">tr to another poem</note>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                            <l>It is no small <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">matter</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">thing</add>
                                </subst>, this round and delicious globe, <lb />moving so exactly in
                                its orbit forever and ever, <lb /><add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">&#182;</add>without one jolt, or the untruth
                                of a single <lb />second <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                                </subst></l>
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">6.</note>
                            <l>I do not think <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">it</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">this
                                        globe</add>
                                </subst> was made in six days, nor in ten <lb />thousand years, nor
                                ten billions of years, </l>
                            <l>Nor planned and built one thing after another, as an <lb />architect
                                plans and builds a house. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                            <l>I do not think seventy years is the time of a man or <lb />woman, </l>
                            <l>Nor that seventy millions of years is the time of a <lb />man or
                                woman, </l>
                            <l>Nor that years will ever stop the existence of me, or <lb />any one
                                else. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                            <l>Is it wonderful that I should be immortal? as every <lb />
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">one</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">thing</add>
                                </subst> is immortal, </l>
                            <l>I know it is wonderful&#8212;but my eye-sight is equally
                                <lb />wonderful, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add><del type="overstrike">and how I was conceived
                                    in my <choice>
                                        <orig>moth-<lb />er's</orig>
                                        <reg>mother's<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice> womb is equally wonderful;</del>
                            </l>
                            <pb xml:id="leaf118v" type="verso" n="228" facs="nyp.00015.236" />
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr to another poem</note>
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr out</note>
                            <del type="edit">
                                <l>And how I was not palpable once, but am now <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                    </subst>and <lb />was born on the last day of Fifth Month, in
                                    the <lb />Year 43 of America, </l>
                                <l>And passed from a babe, in the creeping trance of <lb />three
                                    summers and three winters, to articulate <lb />and walk <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                    </subst>All this is equally wonderful. </l>
                            </del>
                        </lg>
                        <del type="edit">
                            <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                                <l>And that I grew six feet high, <add type="unmarked"
                                        place="inline">&#182;</add> and that I have become
                                    <lb />a man thirty-six years old in the Year 79 of <lb />America <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                    </subst>and that I am here anyhow&#8212;are all
                                    <lb />equally wonderful. </l>
                            </lg>
                        </del>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                            <l>And that my Soul embraces you <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">here</add> this hour, <add type="insertion"
                                    place="supralinear">(as I walk <del type="overstrike">here</del>
                                    in the moonlight)</add>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and <add
                                    type="insertion" place="supralinear">that</add> we <choice>
                                    <orig>af-<lb />fect</orig>
                                    <reg>affect<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> each other without ever seeing each other, <lb />and never
                                perhaps to see each other, <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                </del>is every bit <lb />as wonderful. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                            <l>And that I can think such thoughts as these, is just as
                                <lb />wonderful, <anchor xml:id="t71" /></l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>And that I can remind you, <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and you</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">to</add>
                                    </subst> think them and <lb />know them to be true, is just as
                                    wonderful. </l>
                            </del>
                        </lg>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t71">
                            <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                                <l>And that the moon spins round the earth, and on with <lb />the
                                    earth, is equally wonderful, </l>
                                <l>And that they balance themselves with the sun and <lb />stars, is
                                    equally wonderful. </l>
                            </lg>
                        </transpose>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                            <l>Come! I should like to hear you tell me what there <lb />is in
                                yourself that is not just as wonderful, </l>
                            <l>And I should like to hear <del type="overstrike">the name</del> of
                                anything <choice>
                                    <orig>be-<lb />tween</orig>
                                    <reg>between<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> First Day morning and Seventh Day night <lb />that is not
                                just as wonderful. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf119r" type="recto" n="229" facs="nyp.00015.237" />
                    </lg>
                </del>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01538">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00138" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">12.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline"> On the beach, at night, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">walking</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">silent</add>
                        </subst> alone.</add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>On the beach, at night, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">walking</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                            >silent</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> alone,</l>
                        </add>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">HIS</hi> night I am happy;</l>
                        </del>
                        <l>As I <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">walk the beach</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">pass<del
                                        type="erasure">'d</del></add>
                            </subst> where the <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >fierce</add> old mother sway <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">s</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">'d</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> to <lb />and fro, singing her savage and husky song, </l>
                        <l>As I watch<del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">'d</add>
                            </del> the stars shining&#8212;I <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">think</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">thought</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">the</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> thought of <lb />the clef of the universes, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and of the future
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright"><add type="unmarked"
                                    place="marginright">&#38; past &#38; of</add> all the
                                things of the present and <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">of</add>
                                </subst></add>. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>What <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">(thought I,)</add> can
                                the future bring me more than I have?</l>
                            <l>Do <del type="overstrike">you suppose</del> I wish to enjoy life in
                                other spheres?</l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I say distinctly</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Why</add>
                                </subst> I comprehend no better sphere than <lb />this earth, </l>
                            <l>I comprehend no better life than the life of my body.</l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                            <l>I do not know what follows the death of my body,</l>
                            <l>But I know well that whatever it is, it is best for me,</l>
                            <l>And I know well that whatever is really Me shall live <lb />just as
                                much as before. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                            <l>I am not uneasy but I shall have good housing to <lb />myself, </l>
                            <l>But this is my first&#8212;how can I like the rest any
                                <lb />better? </l>
                            <l>Here I grew up&#8212;the studs and rafters are grown <lb />parts
                                of me. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                            <l>I am not uneasy but I am to be beloved by young and <lb />old men,
                                and to love them the same, </l>
                            <pb xml:id="leaf119v" type="verso" n="230" facs="nyp.00015.238" />
                            <l>I suppose the pink nipples of the breasts of women <lb />with whom I
                                shall sleep will touch the side of my <lb />face the same, </l>
                            <l>But this is the nipple of a breast of my mother, always <lb />near
                                and always divine to me, her true child and <lb />son, whatever
                                comes. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                            <l>I <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">suppose</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">think</add>
                                </subst> I am to be eligible to visit the stars, in my <lb />time, </l>
                            <l>I <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">suppose</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">think</add>
                                </subst> I shall have myriads of new experiences&#8212;
                                <lb />and that the experience of this earth will prove <lb />only
                                one out of myriads; </l>
                            <l>But I believe my body and my Soul already indicate <lb />those
                                experiences, </l>
                            <l>And I believe I shall find nothing in the stars more <lb />majestic
                                and beautiful than I have already found <lb />on the earth, </l>
                            <l>And I believe I have this night a clew through the <lb />universes, </l>
                            <l>And I believe I have this night thought a thought of <lb />the clef
                                of eternity. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>A <!-- how can I remove the smallcaps? --><hi rend="smallcaps">VAST
                                SIMILITUDE</hi> interlocks all,</l>
                        <l>All spheres, grown, ungrown, small, large, suns, <lb />moons, planets,
                            comets, asteroids, </l>
                        <l>All the substances of the same, and all that is spiritual, <lb />upon the
                            same, </l>
                        <l>All distances of place, however wide,</l>
                        <l>All distances of time&#8212;all inanimate forms,</l>
                        <l>All Souls&#8212;all living bodies, though they be ever so
                            <lb />different, or in different worlds, </l>
                        <l>All gaseous, watery, vegetable, mineral processes&#8212; <lb />the
                            fishes, the brutes, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf120r" type="recto" n="231" facs="nyp.00015.239" />
                        <l>All men and women&#8212;me also, <add type="insertion" place="inline"
                                >(for all this I enclose, and you do also,)</add></l>
                        <l>All nations, colors, barbarisms, civilizations, languages,</l>
                        <l>All identities that have existed, or may exist, on this <lb />globe or
                            any globe, </l>
                        <l>All lives and deaths&#8212;all of past, present, future,</l>
                        <l>This <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">vast</del>
                            </restore> similitude spans them, and always has <lb />spanned, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>and shall forever
                            span them, and <lb />compactly hold them. </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01539">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00239" />
                    </relations>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">? out</note>
                    <head type="main-authorial">13.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">Bitter sprig of confession</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over" rend="underline">Sprig of
                                    Confession</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>Sprig of confession abject confession!</l>
                        </add>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">O</del>
                            <hi rend="smallcaps">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">B</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">B</add>
                                    <!-- Whitman changed a small caps lowercase "B" to a small caps uppercase "B" -->
                                </subst>ITTER</hi> sprig<del type="overstrike">! Confession
                                sprig!</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">of con</add>
                            </del></l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">In the bouquet</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">In these
                                        leaves</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">I give you place also</del>&#8212;I bind you
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">also</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">in,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">in these leaves!</add></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Proceeding no further till, humbled publicly,</l>
                            <l>I give fair warning, <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">here &#38;</add>
                                </del> once for all.</l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>I own that I have been sly, thievish, mean, a <choice>
                                    <orig>prevari-<lb />cator,</orig>
                                    <reg>prevaricator<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> greedy, derelict, </l>
                            <l>And I own that I remain so yet.</l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>What foul thought but I think it<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >?</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">&#8212;or have in me the <lb />stuff out of
                                which it is thought? </del></l>
                        <l>What in darkness in bed at night, alone or with a <lb />companion? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>You felons on trials in courts,</l>
                        <l>You convicts in prison cells&#8212;you sentenced <choice>
                                <orig>assas-<lb />sins,</orig>
                                <reg>assassins<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> chain <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                            </subst>d and handcuff <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                            </subst>d with iron, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf120v" type="verso" n="232" facs="nyp.00015.240" />
                        <l>Who am I, that I am not on trial, or in prison?</l>
                        <l>Me, <del type="overstrike">ruthless and devilish as any,</del> that my
                            wrists are <lb />not chained with iron, or my ankles with iron? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>You prostitutes flaunting over the trottoirs, or obscene <lb />in your
                            rooms, </l>
                        <l>Who am I, that I should call you more obscene than <lb />myself? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>O culpable! O traitor!</l>
                        <l>O I acknowledge&#8212;I expos&#233;!</l>
                        <l>(O admirers! praise not me! compliment not me! you <lb />make me wince, </l>
                        <l>I see what you do not&#8212;I know what you do not;)</l>
                        <l>Inside these breast-bones I lie smutch'd and choked,</l>
                        <l>Beneath this face that appears so impassive, hell's <lb />tides
                            continually run, </l>
                        <l>Lusts and wickedness are acceptable to me,</l>
                        <l>I walk with delinquents with passionate love,</l>
                        <l>I feel I am of them&#8212;I belong to those convicts and
                            <lb />prostitutes myself, </l>
                        <l>And henceforth I will not deny them&#8212;for how can I <lb />deny
                            myself? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf121r" type="recto" n="233" facs="nyp.00015.241" />
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01540">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00246" />
                    </relations>
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">out for present</note>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <head type="main-authorial">14.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">Out of the folds of the woman</add>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out altogether</note>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">U<hi rend="smallcaps">NFOLDED</hi></del> out of
                            the folds of the woman, man comes <lb />unfolded, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">as</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">and</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">is always to come unfolded,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Unfolded only out of the superbest woman</del> of
                            the <lb />earth, is to come the superbest man of the earth, </l>
                        <l>Unfolded out of the friendliest woman, is to come <lb />the friendliest
                            man, </l>
                        <l>Unfolded only out of the perfect body of a woman, <lb />can a man be
                            formed of perfect body, </l>
                        <l>Unfolded only out of the inimitable poem of the <lb />woman, can come the
                            poems of man&#8212;<add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>only
                            <lb />thence have my poems come,<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >)</add>
                        </l>
                        <l>Unfolded out of the strong and arrogant woman I <lb />love, only thence
                            can appear the strong and <lb />arrogant man I love, </l>
                        <l>Unfolded by brawny embraces from the well-muscled <lb />woman I love,
                            only thence come the brawny <lb />embraces of the man, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Unfolded</del> out of the folds of the woman's
                            brain, come <lb />all the folds of the man's brain, duly obedient, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Unfolded</del> out of the justice of the woman,
                            all <add type="insertion" place="marginright">the</add> justice <add
                                type="insertion" place="marginright">of man</add><lb />is unfolded, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Unfolded</del> out of the sympathy of the woman is
                            all <lb />sympathy; </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>A man is a great
                            thing upon the earth, and through <lb />eternity <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>but every jot of the greatness of man <lb />is unfolded out of
                            woman <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">.</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>First the man is shaped in the woman, he can then be <lb />shaped in
                                himself. </l>
                        </del>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf121v" type="verso" n="234" facs="nyp.00015.242" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01541">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00016" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">15.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline"
                                        >The wearied emigrants sleep</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="4" type="edit">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">The fire
                                        on the ground burns low</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline"
                                    >Night on the Prairies</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">&#42; <l><del type="overstrike"
                                    >The wearied emigrants sleep, <add type="unmarked"
                                        place="supralinear">wrapt in their
                                    blankets</add>&#8212;</del>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                                </subst>he supper is <del type="overstrike">of</del>
                                over&#8212;the fire on the ground burns low</l>
                            <l>The wearied immigrants sleep, wrapt in their blankets</l></add>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>N<hi rend="smallcaps">IGHT</hi> on the Prairies;</l>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                        <l>I walk <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">away</add> by
                            myself&#8212;I stand and look at the stars, <lb />which I think now
                            I never realized before. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Now I absorb immortality and peace,</l>
                        <l>I admire death and test propositions.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>How plenteous! How spiritual! How resum&#233;!</l>
                        <l>The same Old Man and Soul&#8212;the same old <choice>
                                <orig>aspi-<lb />rations,</orig>
                                <reg>aspirations<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and the same content. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>I was thinking the day most splendid, till I saw what <lb />the not-day
                            exhibited, </l>
                        <l>I was thinking this globe enough, till there <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">tumbled <lb />upon</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">spring <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">out</add> so noiseless
                                    around</add>
                            </subst> me myriads of other globes. <lb /></l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>Now <del type="overstrike">while</del> the great thoughts of space and
                            eternity <lb />fill me, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I will</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#38; I</add>
                            </subst> measure myself by them, </l>
                        <l>And now, touched with the lives of other globes, <lb />arrived as far
                            along as those of the earth, </l>
                        <l>Or waiting to arrive, or passed on farther than those <lb />of the earth, </l>
                        <l>I henceforth no more ignore them than I ignore my <lb />own life, </l>
                        <l>Or the lives on the earth arrived as far as mine, or <lb />waiting to
                            arrive. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O how</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">How</add>
                            </subst> plainly I see now that life cannot exhibit all to
                            <lb />me&#8212;as the day cannot, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">O</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">How</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">I</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">And</add> see that I am to wait
                            for what will be exhibited <lb />by death. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf122r" type="recto" n="235" facs="nyp.00015.243" />
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01542">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00137" />
                    </relations>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out?</note>
                    </del>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="edit">
                            <head type="main-authorial">16.</head>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                <head type="main-authorial">
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                            <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="margintop"
                                                rend="underline">Sea<gap
                                                  reason="deletion, illegible" />er</add>
                                        </del>
                                        <del seq="4" type="erasure">
                                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="margintop"
                                                rend="underline"><gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                                                 />ocean <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                                  >dense</add></add>
                                        </del>
                                        <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="margintop"
                                            rend="underline">Atmosphere of Ocean dense</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </head>
                            </add>
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">S<hi rend="smallcaps"
                                            >EA-WATER</hi>, and all living below it,</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">T<gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                    </del>
                                    <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" />ocean dense <del
                                                type="overstrike">yet</del>
                                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and</add>
                                            all</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Atmosphere of
                                        ocean dense, &#38; all within it,</add>
                                </subst>
                            </l>
                            <l>Forests <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">down</add>
                                </del> at <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike"> the bottom of the sea</del>
                                </restore>
                                <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="edit">&#8212;</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">with</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst>the branches and <lb />leaves, </l>
                            <l>Sea-lettuce, vast lichens, <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">strange flowers and seeds</del>
                                </restore>
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginright"><gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />,</add>
                                </del>
                                <lb /><del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                </del>
                                <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst>he thick tangle, the openings, and the pink turf, </l>
                            <l>Different colors, pale gray and green, purple, white, <lb />and <add
                                    type="insertion" place="supralinear">dingy transparent</add>
                                gold <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </subst>the play of light through the water, </l>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">Dumb swimmers there among the
                                    rocks&#8212;</del>
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">the</add> coral<del
                                    type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">and</add><lb />gluten, <del
                                    type="overstrike">grass, rushes&#8212;and the aliment of the
                                    <lb />swimmers,</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>Sluggish existences <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                    >down</add> grazing there, suspended, or <lb />slowly crawling
                                close to the bottom, </l>
                            <l>The sperm-whale at the surface, blowing air and <lb />spray, or
                                disporting with his flukes, </l>
                            <l>The leaden-eyed shark, the walrus, the turtle, the <lb />hairy
                                sea-leopard, and the sting-ray; </l>
                            <l>Passions there<subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                                </subst> wars, pursuits, tribes&#8212;sight in <lb />those
                                ocean-depths&#8212; <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">breathing</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright"
                                            >living</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> that <choice>
                                    <orig>thick-breath-<lb />ing</orig>
                                    <reg>thick-breathing<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">air,</del>
                                </restore> as so many do, </l>
                            <l>The change thence to the sight here, and to the subtle <lb /><del
                                    type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">of</add>
                                </del>
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">air breathed by</del>
                                </restore> beings like <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">us, who</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">we are</add>
                                </subst> walk<add type="insertion" place="supralinear">ing</add>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">walking</add>
                                </del>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">and breathe</add>
                                </del> this<lb />sphere; </l>
                            <l>The change onward from ours to that of beings who <lb /><restore
                                    rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">walk other</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">and subtler</add>
                                </del>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">breathe the air of
                                        still subtler</add>
                                </del> spheres. </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf122v" type="verso" n="236" facs="nyp.00015.244" />
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01543">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00153" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">17.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="edit">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="margintop">I sit and look
                                        out <del type="overstrike">upon</del>
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">over</add> all the
                                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">worlds'</add>
                                        sorrows <del type="overstrike">of the world.</del></add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">As I
                                    sat &#38; looked out <del type="overstrike">on</del> upon
                                    all the worlds' sorrows</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">religious pieces</add>
                    </del>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I <hi rend="smallcaps">SIT</hi></del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">As I sat</add>
                        </subst> and look<add type="unmarked" place="inline">'d</add> out <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">upon</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">over</add>
                        </subst> all the <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">world's</add>
                        sorrows <del type="overstrike">of the world, <lb /> and upon</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#38; <del type="overstrike"
                                >at</del></add> all oppression and shame, </l>
                    <l>I hear<add type="unmarked" place="inline">d</add> secret convulsive sobs from
                        young men, <del type="overstrike">at <lb />anguish with themselves,</del>
                        remorseful after deeds <lb />done; </l>
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">see</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">saw</add>
                        </subst>, in low life, the mother misused by her children, <lb />dying,
                        neglected, gaunt, desperate, </l>
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">see</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">saw</add>
                        </subst> the wife misused by her husband&#8212;I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">see</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">saw</add>
                        </subst> the <lb />treacherous seducer of the young woman, </l>
                    <l>I mark<add type="unmarked" place="inline">'d</add> the ranklings of jealousy
                        and unrequited love, <lb />attempted to be hid&#8212;<del
                            type="overstrike">I see these sights on the <lb />earth,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">see</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">mark<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">'d</add></add>
                        </subst> the workings of battle, pestilence, tyranny&#8212;I <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">see</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">obvserve<add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">d</add></add>
                        </subst> martyrs and prisoners, </l>
                    <l>I observe<add type="unmarked" place="inline">d</add> a famine at
                            sea&#8212;<del type="overstrike">I observe<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">d</add></del> the sailors <lb />cast<del
                            type="overstrike">ing</del> lots who <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">shall</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">should</add>
                        </subst> be killed, to preserve the <lb />lives of the rest, </l>
                    <l>I observe<add type="unmarked" place="inline">d</add> the slights and
                        degradations cast by <choice>
                            <orig>arro-<lb />gant</orig>
                            <reg>arrogant<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> persons upon laborers, the poor, and upon <lb />negroes, and the
                        like; </l>
                    <l>All these&#8212;All the meanness<add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >es</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">the</add>
                        </subst> agony without end, <lb />I<add type="insertion" place="marginleft"
                            >,</add> sitting, look<add type="unmarked" place="inline">'d</add> out
                        upon, </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">See, hear, <del type="overstrike">and
                                    am</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">&#8212;yet
                                        remain</add>
                                </del> silent.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginbot">Saw, heard, &#38;
                                remained silent</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
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                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01544">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00276" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">18.</head>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">
                            <head type="main-authorial">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />Truth </head>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                    <l>As I <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /> with <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /> in the lap of a
                                        comrade</l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="4" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked">
                                    <l>As I lay on my breast in the shade a-dreaming,</l>
                                    <l>As I lay with closed eyes I pondered on truth &#38; <add
                                            type="unmarked" place="supralinear">on</add> perfect
                                        returns</l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                <l>As I lay on my breast in the shade a-dreaming,</l>
                                <l>As with closed eyes I ponder'd on truth &#38; on perfect
                                    returns,</l>
                            </add>
                        </subst>
                    </add>
                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d24a" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>S<gap reason="deletion, illegible" />portions denying</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">O <hi rend="smallcaps">ME</hi>, man of slack
                                faith so long!</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Standing aloof&#8212;denying portions so
                                long;</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Me with mole's eyes, unrisen to buoyancy and
                                vision <lb />&#8212;unfree, </del>
                        </l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <l>As I lay &#38; c</l>
                            <l>As I mused with closed eyes</l>
                        </add>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Only</del> aware <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">but</add> to-day of compact, all-diffused
                            truth,</l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Discovering to-day</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">I saw to
                                    myself</add>
                            </subst> there is no lie, or form of lie, <lb /><del type="overstrike"
                                >and can be none,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>but grows <del
                                type="overstrike">just</del> as inevitably <lb />upon itself as the
                            truth does upon itself, </l>
                        <l>Or as any law of the earth, or any natural production <lb />of the earth
                            does. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>(This is curious, and may not be realized <choice><orig>immedi-<lb />ately</orig><reg>immediately<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;But it must be realized; </l>
                        <l>I feel in myself that I represent falsehoods equally <lb />with the rest, </l>
                        <l>And that the universe does.)</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Where has failed a perfect return, indifferent of lies <lb />or the
                            truth? </l>
                        <l>Is it upon the ground, or in water or fire? or in the <lb />spirit of
                            man? or in the meat and blood? </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>As I lay with closed eyes &#182; I</l>
                        </add>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Meditating among liars, and retreat <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ing</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">ed</add>
                                </subst> sternly into <lb /> myself,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>I <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">see</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">saw</add>
                            </subst> that there are really no liars or <lb />lies after all, </l>
                        <anchor xml:id="d24a" />
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">And</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I saw</add>
                            </subst> that nothing fail <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">s</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">'d</add>
                            </subst> its perfect return&#8212;And that <lb />what are called
                            lies are perfect returns, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf123v" type="verso" n="238" facs="nyp.00015.246" />
                        <l>And that each thing exactly represents itself, and <lb />what has
                            preceded it, </l>
                        <l>And that the truth includes all, and is compact, just <lb />as much as
                            space is compact, </l>
                        <l>And that there is no flaw or vacuum in the amount <lb />of the
                            truth&#8212;but that <add type="edit" rend="small caps">all is
                                truth</add> without <choice>
                                <orig>ex-<lb />ception,</orig>
                                <reg>exception<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>And <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">I rose &#38; saw</add>
                            henceforth I will go celebrate anything I see <lb />or am, </l>
                        <l>And sing and laugh, and deny nothing.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <del type="hashmark">
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">out</note>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="margintop">Leaves of Grass</note>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01545">
                        <relations>
                            <work ref="xxx.00147" />
                        </relations>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">Leaves of Grass</note>
                        </del>
                        <head type="main-authorial">19.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        </add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="interlinear"
                                        rend="underline">As I lay with my head in the lap of a
                                        comrade</add>
                                </subst>
                            </head>
                        </add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                            <l>As I lay with <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">closed eyes</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my head</add>
                                </subst> in the lap of a comrade</l>
                            <l>As I lay with closed eyes under the trees <del type="overstrike">so
                                    still</del> a-dreaming.</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>F<hi rend="smallcaps">ORMS</hi>, qualities, lives, humanity, language,
                            thoughts,</l>
                        <l>The ones known, and the ones unknown&#8212;the ones <lb />on the
                            stars, </l>
                        <l>The stars themselves, some shaped, others unshaped,</l>
                        <l>Wonders as of those countries&#8212;the soil, trees, cities,
                            <lb />inhabitants, whatever they may be, </l>
                        <l>Splendid suns, the moons and rings, the countless <lb />combinations and
                            effects, </l>
                        <l>Such-like, and as good as such-like, visible here or <lb />anywhere, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> stand provided for
                            in a handful of <lb />space, which I extend my arm and half enclose
                            <lb />with my hand <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">:</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>That contains the start of each and all&#8212;the virtue, <lb />the
                            germs of all <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>That is <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">my</add>
                            </subst> theory <del type="overstrike">as</del> of origins.</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf124r" type="recto" n="239" facs="nyp.00015.247" />
                    </lg>
                </del>
                <del type="hashmark">
                    <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01546">
                        <relations>
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                        </relations>
                        <head type="main-authorial">20.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                            <head type="main-authorial">So far, and so far.</head>
                        </add>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">out</note>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                        <l>S<hi rend="smallcaps">o</hi> far, and so far, and on toward the end,</l>
                        <l>Singing what is sung in this book, from the <choice>
                                <orig>irresisti-<lb />ble</orig>
                                <reg>irresistible<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> impulses of me; </l>
                        <l>But whether I continue beyond this book, to <choice>
                                <orig>ma-<lb />turity,</orig>
                                <reg>maturity<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>Whether I shall dart forth the true rays, the ones <lb />that wait
                            unfired, </l>
                        <l>(Did you think the sun was shining its brightest?</l>
                        <l>No&#8212;it has not yet fully risen ;)</l>
                        <l>Whether I shall complete what is here started,</l>
                        <l>Whether I shall attain my own height, to justify these, <lb />yet
                            unfinished, </l>
                        <l>Whether I shall make <hi rend="smallcaps">THE</hi> P<hi rend="smallcaps"
                                >OEM OF THE</hi> N<hi rend="smallcaps">EW</hi> W<hi rend="smallcaps"
                                >ORLD</hi>, <lb />transcending all others&#8212;depends, rich
                            persons, <lb />upon you, </l>
                        <l>Depends, whoever you are now filling the current</l>
                        <l>Presidentiad, upon you,</l>
                        <l>Upon you, Governor, Mayor, Congressman,</l>
                        <l>And you, contemporary America.</l>
                    </lg>
                </del>
                <pb xml:id="leaf124v" type="verso" n="240" facs="nyp.00015.248" />
                <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d25" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01547">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00223" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">21.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">Voices</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="margintop">O what is it in
                                        me that makes me tremble so at voices?</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="margintop">What is it in me
                                        that makes me tremble so at voices?</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="margintop">A leaf of voices now
                                    I make</add>
                                <add seq="7" type="unmarked" place="margintop">A leaf of
                                    voices</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">one of three or
                            four</note>
                    </del>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">Leaves of
                            Grass</note>
                    </del>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">? <gap
                                reason="deletion, illegible" /></note>
                    </del>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">put all</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">N<hi rend="smallcaps">OW</hi> I make a
                                        leaf of Voices&#8212;</del>
                                </restore> for I have found <choice>
                                    <orig>noth-<lb />ing</orig>
                                    <reg>nothing<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> mightier <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">than they</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del type="overstrike">are,</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>And I have found that no word spoken, but is <choice>
                                    <orig>beau-<lb />tiful,</orig>
                                    <reg>beautiful<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                                <del type="overstrike">in its place.</del>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">O</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">what is it in me that makes me tremble so at
                                <lb />voices?</del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">The right Voice</head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Surely, whoever speaks to me in <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the right voice</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">that</add>
                            </subst>, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> him
                            <lb />or her I shall follow, as the waters follow the <lb />moon, <add
                                type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>silently, with
                            fluid steps, any where around <lb />the globe. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Now I believe that all waits for the right
                                voices;</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Where is th <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">at</add>
                            </subst> practised and perfect organ? Where <del type="overstrike"
                                >is</del>
                            <lb />the developed Soul? </l>
                        <l>For <del type="overstrike">I see</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">every word</del> uttered thence <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">has</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">come</add>
                            </subst> deeper, <lb />sweeter, new<add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">er</add> sounds, impossible on less terms. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I see</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">But</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">brains and lips <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">are</add>
                                </del> closed&#8212;I see</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                            </subst>ympans and <choice>
                                <orig>tem-<lb />ples</orig>
                                <reg>temples<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <add type="insertion" place="inline">remaining</add> unstruck, </l>
                        <l>Until that comes which has the quality to strike and <lb />to unclose, </l>
                        <l>Until that comes which has the quality to bring forth <lb />what lies
                            slumbering, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> forever
                            ready, in all words. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <anchor xml:id="d25" />
                    <pb xml:id="leaf125r" type="recto" n="241" facs="nyp.00015.249" />
                </lg>
                <del type="hashmark">
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                        </relations>
                        <head type="main-authorial">22.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                            <head type="main-authorial">What am I after all but a child.</head>
                        </add>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                            <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HAT</hi> am I, after all, but a child, pleased
                                with the <lb />sound of my own name? <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">&#182;</add>repeating it over and <lb />over,
                                    <anchor xml:id="t39" /></l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>I cannot tell why it affects me so much, when I hear <lb />it
                                    from women's voices, and from men's voices, <lb />or from my own
                                    voice, </l>
                            </del>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t39">
                                <l>I stand apart to hear&#8212;it never tires me.</l>
                            </transpose>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>To you, your name also,</l>
                            <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Did you think there was
                                nothing but two or three <lb />pronunciations in the sound of your
                                    name?<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </lg>
                </del>
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                        <head type="main-authorial">23.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Locations and times</head>
                        </add>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginright">Le of G</note>
                        <l>L<hi rend="smallcaps">OCATIONS</hi> and times&#8212;what is it in me
                            that meets <lb />them all, whenever and wherever, and makes me <lb />at
                            home? </l>
                        <l>Forms, colors, densities, odors&#8212;what is it in me that
                            <lb />corresponds with them? </l>
                        <l>What is the relation between me and them?</l>
                    </lg>
                </del>
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                <restore rend="erased">
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                            <head type="main-authorial">24.</head>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                <head type="main-authorial">Lift me close to your face</head>
                            </add>
                            <note type="authorial" place="margintop"><del type="overstrike"
                                >?</del>&#9757; tr to close of Pioneers?</note>
                            <note type="authorial" place="margintop">Close of L. of G. before Drum
                                Taps</note>
                            <l>L<hi rend="smallcaps">IFT</hi> me close to your face till I
                                whisper,</l>
                            <l>What you are holding is in reality no book, nor part <lb />of a book, </l>
                            <l>It is a man, flushed and full-blooded&#8212;it is I&#8212;<hi
                                    rend="italic">So</hi>
                                <lb /><hi rend="italic">long!</hi>
                            </l>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                                <l>(At ever leaf I <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">feel</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><del
                                                type="overstrike">have</del> felt</add>
                                    </subst> the pressure of your hand <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and return it;</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">more than
                                            you know;</add>
                                    </subst>)</l>
                            </add>
                            <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">For</add>
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft"><del type="overstrike"
                                        >But</del> now</add>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="inline">
                                            <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high"
                                                resp="ses">now</unclear>
                                        </add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Now</add>
                                </subst> We <del type="overstrike">must</del> separate <add
                                    type="insertion" place="supralinear">a
                                while&#8212;</add>&#8212;Here! take from my lips this
                                <lb />kiss, </l>
                            <l>Whoever you are, I give it especially to you;</l>
                            <l><hi rend="italic">So long</hi>&#8212;and I hope we shall meet
                                again.</l>
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                    </del>
                </restore>
            </lg>
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                <head type="main-authorial" rend="italic">Salut au Monde!</head>
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                    <l>O <hi rend="smallcaps">TAKE</hi> my hand, Walt Whitman!</l>
                    <l>Such gliding wonders! Such sights and sounds!</l>
                    <l>Such joined unended links, each hooked to the next!</l>
                    <l>Each answering all&#8212;each sharing the earth with all.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>What widens within you, Walt Whitman?</l>
                    <l>What waves and soils exuding?</l>
                    <l>What climes? What persons and lands are here?</l>
                    <l>Who are the infants? Some playing, some <choice>
                            <orig>slum-<lb />bering?</orig>
                            <reg>slumbering<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Who are the girls? Who are the married women?</l>
                    <l>Who are the three old men going slowly with their <lb />arms about each
                        others' necks? </l>
                    <l>What rivers are these? What forests and fruits are <lb />these? </l>
                    <l>What are the mountains called that rise so high in <lb />the mists? </l>
                    <l>What myriads of dwellings are they, filled with <lb />dwellers? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>Within me latitude widens, longitude lengthens,</l>
                    <l>Asia, Africa, Europe, are to the east&#8212;America is <lb />provided for
                        in the west, </l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup">
                    <l>Banding the bulge of the earth winds the hot equator,</l>
                    <l>Curiously north and south turn the axis-ends;</l>
                    <l>Within me is the longest day&#8212;the sun wheels in <lb />slanting
                        rings&#8212;it does not set for months, </l>
                    <l>Stretched in due time within me the midnight sun <lb />just rises above the
                        horizon, and sinks again, </l>
                    <l>Within me zones, seas, cataracts, plains, volcanoes, <lb />groups, </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Oceanica, Australasia,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Malaysia,</add>
                        </subst> Polynesia, and the great West <lb />Indian islands. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>What do you hear, Walt Whitman?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>I hear the workman singing, and the farmer's wife <lb />singing, </l>
                    <l>I hear in the distance the sounds of children, and of <lb />animals early in
                        the day, </l>
                    <l>I hear quick rifle-cracks from the riflemen of East <lb />Tennessee and
                        Kentucky, hunting on hills, </l>
                    <l>I hear emulous shouts of Australians, pursuing the <lb />wild horse, </l>
                    <l>I hear the Spanish dance, with castanets, in the <choice>
                            <orig>chest-<lb />nut</orig>
                            <reg>chestnut<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> shade, to the rebeck and guitar, </l>
                    <l>I hear continual echoes from the Thames,</l>
                    <l>I hear fierce French liberty songs,</l>
                    <l>I hear of the Italian boat-sculler the musical recitative <lb />of old poems, </l>
                    <l>I hear the Virginia plantation chorus of negroes, of <lb />a harvest night,
                        in the glare of pine knots, </l>
                    <l>I hear the strong baritone of the 'long-shore-men of <lb />Man<add
                            type="insertion" place="marginleft">na</add>hatta, </l>
                    <l>I hear the stevedores unlading the cargoes, and <lb />singing, </l>
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                    <l>I hear the screams of the water-fowl of solitary north-<lb />west lakes, </l>
                    <l>I hear the rustling pattering of locusts, as they strike <lb />the grain and
                        grass with the showers of their <lb />terrible clouds, </l>
                    <l>I hear the Coptic refrain, toward sundown, pensively <lb />falling on the
                        breast of the black venerable vast <lb />mother, the Nile, </l>
                    <l>I hear the bugles of raft-tenders on the streams of <lb />Kanada, </l>
                    <l>I hear the chirp of the Mexican muleteer, and the <lb />bells of the mule, </l>
                    <l>I hear the Arab muezzin, calling from the top of the <lb />mosque, </l>
                    <l>I hear Christian priests at the altars of their churches <lb />&#8212;I
                        hear the responsive base and soprano, </l>
                    <l>I hear the wail of utter despair of the white-haired <lb />Irish
                        grand-parents, when they learn the death <lb />of their grand-son, </l>
                    <l>I hear the cry of the Cossack, and the sailor's voice, <lb />putting to sea
                        at Okotsk, </l>
                    <l>I hear the wheeze of the slave-coffle, as the slaves <lb />march
                        on&#8212;as the husky gangs pass on by twos <lb />and threes, fastened
                        together with wrist-chains <lb />and ankle-chains, </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I hear the entreaties of women
                        tied up for punishment <lb />&#8212;I hear the sibilant whisk of thongs
                        through <lb />the air;<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>I hear the Hebrew reading his records and psalms,</l>
                    <l>I hear the rhythmic myths of the Greeks, and the <lb />strong legends of the
                        Romans, </l>
                    <l>I hear the tale of the divine life and bloody death <lb />of the beautiful
                        God, the Christ, </l>
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                    <l>I hear the Hindoo teaching his favorite pupil the <lb />loves, wars, adages,
                        transmitted safely to this <lb />day from poets who wrote three thousand
                        years <lb />ago. </l>
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                    <l>What do you see, Walt Whitman?</l>
                    <l>Who are they who salute, and that one after another <lb />salute you? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                    <l>I see a great round wonder rolling through the air,</l>
                    <l>I see diminute farms, hamlets, ruins, grave-yards, jails, <lb />factories,
                        palaces, hovels, huts of barbarians, tents <lb />of nomads, upon the
                        surface, </l>
                    <l>I see the shaded part on one side, where the sleepers <lb />are
                        sleeping&#8212;and the sun-lit part on the other <lb />side, </l>
                    <l>I see the curious silent change of the light and shade,</l>
                    <l>I see distant lands, as real and near to the inhabitants <lb />of them, as my
                        land is to me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>I see plenteous waters,</l>
                    <l>I see mountain peaks <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst> I see the sierras of Andes and <lb />Alleghanies, where they range, </l>
                    <l>I see plainly the Himmalehs, Chian Shahs, Altays, <lb />Gauts, </l>
                    <l>I see the Rocky Mountains, and the Peak of Winds,</l>
                    <l>I see the Styrian Alps, and the Karnac Alps,</l>
                    <l>I see the Pyrenees, Balks, Carpathians&#8212;and to the <lb />north the
                        Dofrafields, and off at sea Mount Hecla, </l>
                    <l>I see Vesuvius and Etna <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>I see the Anahuacs,</l>
                    <l>I see the Mountains of the Moon, and the Snow <choice>
                            <orig>Moun-<lb />tains,</orig>
                            <reg>Mountains<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and the Red Mountains of Madagascar, </l>
                    <l>I see the Vermont hills, and the long string of <choice>
                            <orig>Cor-<lb />dilleras;</orig>
                            <reg>Cordilleras<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
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                    <l>I see the vast deserts of Western America,</l>
                    <l>I see the Libyan, Arabian, and Asiatic deserts;</l>
                    <l>I see huge dreadful Arctic and Antarctic icebergs,</l>
                    <l>I see the superior oceans and the inferior ones&#8212;the <lb />Atlantic
                        and Pacific, the sea of Mexico, the <choice>
                            <orig>Bra-<lb />zilian</orig>
                            <reg>Brazilian<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> sea, and the sea of Peru, </l>
                    <l>The Japan waters, those of Hindostan, the China Sea, <lb />and the Gulf of
                        Guinea, </l>
                    <l>The spread of the Baltic, Caspian, Bothnia, the British <lb />shores, and the
                        Bay of Biscay, </l>
                    <l>The clear-sunned Mediterranean, and from one to <choice>
                            <orig>an-<lb />other</orig>
                            <reg>another<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of its islands, </l>
                    <l>The inland fresh-tasted seas of North America,</l>
                    <l>The White Sea, and the sea around Greenland.</l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>I behold the mariners of the world,</l>
                    <l>Some are in storms&#8212;some in the night, with the <lb />watch on the
                        look-out, </l>
                    <l>Some drifting helplessly&#8212;some with contagious diseases <lb />eases.
                    </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>I behold the steam-ships of the world, <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">some in clusters in port, some <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">are</add> on their way</add></l>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">commas only</note>
                    <l>Some double the Cape of Storms <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>some Cape Verde <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>others Cape Guardafui, Bon, or Bajadore, </l>
                    <l>Others Dondra Head&#8212;others pass the Straits of <choice>
                            <orig>Sun-<lb />da</orig>
                            <reg>Sunda<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>others Cape Lopatka <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>others Behring's <lb />Straits, </l>
                    <l>Others Cape Horn <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>others the Gulf of Mexico, or <lb />along Cuba or Hayti <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>others Hudson's Bay or <lb />Baffin's Bay, </l>
                    <l>Others pass the Straits of Dover <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>others enter the <lb />Wash <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>others the Firth of Solway <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>others round <lb />Cape Clear <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">,</add>
                        </subst>others the Land's End, </l>
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                    <l>Others traverse the Zuyder Zee, or the Scheld,</l>
                    <l>Others add to the exits and entrances at Sandy Hook,</l>
                    <l>Others to the comers and goers at Gibraltar, or the <lb />Dardanelles, </l>
                    <l>Others sternly push their way through the northern <lb />winter-packs, </l>
                    <l>Others descend or ascend the Obi or the Lena,</l>
                    <l>Others the Niger or the Congo&#8212;others the Indus, <lb />the
                        Burampooter and Cambodia, </l>
                    <l>Others wait at the wharves of Manahatta, steamed up, <lb />ready to start, </l>
                    <l>Wait, swift and swarthy, in the ports of Australia,</l>
                    <l>Wait at Liverpool, Glasgow, Dublin, Marseilles, <choice>
                            <orig>Lis-<lb />bon,</orig>
                            <reg>Lisbon<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> Naples, Hamburg, Bremen, Bourdeaux, the <lb />Hague, Copenhagen, </l>
                    <l>Wait at Valparaiso, Rio Janeiro, Panama,</l>
                    <l>Wait at their moorings at Boston, Philadelphia, <choice>
                            <orig>Balti-<lb />more,</orig>
                            <reg>Baltimore<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> Charleston, New Orleans, Galveston, San <lb />Francisco. </l>
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                    <l>I see the <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">thin
                                two&#8209;threaded</add>
                        </del> tracks of the rail-roads of the earth,</l>
                    <l>I see them welding State to State, city to city, through <lb />North America; </l>
                    <l>I see them in Great Britain, I see them in Europe,</l>
                    <l>I see them in Asia and in Africa.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>I see the electric telegraphs of the earth,</l>
                    <l>I see the filaments of the news of the wars, deaths, <lb />losses, gains,
                        passions, of my race. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>I see the long river- <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">stripes</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">threads</add>
                        </subst> of the earth,</l>
                    <l>I see where the Mississippi flows&#8212;I see where the. <lb />Columbia
                        flows, </l>
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                    <l>I see the Great River, and the Falls of Niagara,</l>
                    <l>I see the Amazon and the Paraguay,</l>
                    <l>I see the four great rivers of China, the Amour, the <lb />Yellow River, the
                        Yiang-tse, and the Pearl; </l>
                    <l>I see where the Seine flows, and where the Loire, the <lb />Rhone, and the
                        Guadalquiver flow, </l>
                    <l>I see the windings of the Volga, the Dnieper, the <lb />Oder, </l>
                    <l>I see the Tuscan going down the Arno, and the <choice>
                            <orig>Vene-<lb />tian</orig>
                            <reg>Venetian<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> along the Po, </l>
                    <l>I see the Greek seaman sailing out of Egina bay.</l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>I see the site of the old empire of Assyria, and that <lb />of Persia, and
                        that of India, </l>
                    <l>I see the falling of the Ganges over the high rim of <lb />Saukara. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>I see the place of the idea of the Deity incarnated by <lb />avatars in human
                        forms, </l>
                    <l>I see the spots of the successions of priests on the earth
                        <lb />&#8212;oracles, sacrificers, brahmins, sabians, lamas,
                        <lb />monks, muftis, exhorters; </l>
                    <l>I see where druids walked the groves of Mona&#8212;I see <lb />the
                        mistletoe and vervain, </l>
                    <l>I see the temples of the deaths <del type="overstrike">of the bodies of</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">of <del type="overstrike"
                            >the</del></add> Gods&#8212; <lb />I see the old signifiers. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>I see Christ once more eating the bread of his last <choice>
                            <orig>sup-<lb />per,</orig>
                            <reg>supper<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> in the midst of youths and old persons, </l>
                    <l>I see where the strong divine young man, the Hercules, <lb />toiled
                        faithfully and long, and then died, </l>
                    <l>I see the place of the innocent rich life and hapless <lb />fate of the
                        beautiful nocturnal son, the full-limbed <lb />Bacchus, </l>
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                    <l>I see Kneph, blooming, dressed in blue, with the crown <lb />of feathers on
                        his head, </l>
                    <l>I see Hermes, unsuspected, dying, well-beloved, saying <lb />to the people,
                            <hi rend="italic">Do not weep for me,</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <hi rend="italic">This is not my true country, I have lived banished
                            from</hi>
                        <lb />
                        <hi rend="italic">my true country&#8212;I now go back there,</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l><hi rend="italic">I return to the celestial sphere, where every one goes</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">in his turn</hi>. </l>
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                    <l>I see the battle-fields of the earth&#8212;grass grows upon <lb />them,
                        and blossoms and corn, </l>
                    <l>I see the tracks of ancient and modern expeditions.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>I see the nameless masonries, venerable messages of <lb />the unknown events,
                        heroes, records of the earth. </l>
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                    <l>I see the places of the sagas,</l>
                    <l>I see pine-trees and fir-trees torn by northern blasts,</l>
                    <l>I see granite boulders and cliffs&#8212;I see green meadows <lb />and
                        lakes, </l>
                    <l>I see the burial-cairns of Scandinavian warriors,</l>
                    <l>I see them raised high with stones, by the marge of <lb />restless oceans,
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> that the dead men's
                        spirits, when <lb />they wearied of their quiet graves, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add> might rise up <lb />through the mounds,
                        and gaze on the tossing <lb />billows, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add> and be refreshed by storms, immensity, <lb />liberty,
                        action. </l>
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                    <l>I see the steppes of Asia,</l>
                    <l>I see the tumuli of Mongolia&#8212;I see the tents of <choice>
                            <orig>Kal-<lb />mucks</orig>
                            <reg>Kalmucks<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and Baskirs, </l>
                    <l>I see the nomadic tribes, with herds of oxen and cows,</l>
                    <l>I see the table-lands notched with ravines&#8212;I see the <lb />jungles
                        and deserts, </l>
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                    <!-- Whitman corrected the mislabeled running head from Leaves of Grass. to Salut au Monde! -->
                    <l>I see the camel, the wild steed, the bustard, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add> the fat-<lb />tailed sheep, the
                        antelope, and the burrowing <lb />wolf. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                    <l>I see the high-lands of Abyssinia,</l>
                    <l>I see flocks of goats feeding, and see the fig-tree, <lb />tamarind, date, </l>
                    <l>And see fields of teff-wheat, and see the places of <lb />verdure and gold.
                    </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>I see the Brazilian vaquero,</l>
                    <l>I see the Bolivian ascending Mount Sorata,</l>
                    <l>I see the Wacho crossing the plains&#8212;I see the <lb />incomparable
                        rider of horses with his lasso on <lb />his arm, </l>
                    <l>I see over the pampas the pursuit of wild cattle for <lb />their hides. </l>
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                    <l>I see little and large sea-dots, some inhabited, some <lb />uninhabited; </l>
                    <l>I see two boats with nets, lying off the shore of <choice>
                            <orig>Pau-<lb />manok,</orig>
                            <reg>Paumanok<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> quite still, </l>
                    <l>I see ten fishermen waiting&#8212;they discover now a <lb />thick school
                        of mossbonkers&#8212;they drop the <lb />joined seine-ends in the water, </l>
                    <l>The boats separate&#8212;they diverge and row off, each <lb />on its
                        rounding course to the beach, enclosing <lb />the mossbonkers, </l>
                    <l>The net is drawn in by a windlass by those who stop <lb />ashore, </l>
                    <l>Some of the fishermen lounge in the boats&#8212;others <lb />stand
                        negligently ankle-deep in the water, poised <lb />on strong legs, </l>
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                    <l>The boats are partly drawn up&#8212;the water slaps <lb />against them, </l>
                    <l>On the sand, in heaps and winrows, well out from the <lb />water, lie the
                        green-backed spotted mossbonkers. </l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                    <l>I see the despondent red man in the west, lingering <lb />about the banks of
                        Moingo, and about Lake <lb />Pepin, </l>
                    <l>He has heard the quail and beheld the honey-bee, and <lb />sadly prepared to
                        depart. </l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                    <l>I see the regions of snow and ice,</l>
                    <l>I see the sharp-eyed Samoiede and the Finn,</l>
                    <l>I see the seal-seeker in his boat, poising his lance,</l>
                    <l>I see the Siberian on his slight-built sledge, drawn by <lb />dogs, </l>
                    <l>I see the porpoise-hunters&#8212;I see the whale-crews of <lb />the South
                        Pacific and the North Atlantic, </l>
                    <l>I see the cliffs, glaciers, torrents, valleys, of <choice><orig>Switzer-<lb/>land</orig><reg>Switzerland<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;I mark the long winters, and the
                        <lb />isolation. </l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                    <l>I see the cities of the earth, and make myself at <choice>
                            <orig>ran-<lb />dom a</orig>
                            <reg>random<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> part of them, </l>
                    <l>I am a real Parisian,</l>
                    <l>I am a habitan of Vienna, St. Petersburg, Berlin, <lb />Constantinople, </l>
                    <l>I am of Adelaide, Sidney, Melbourne,</l>
                    <l>I am of London, Manchester, Bristol, Edinburgh, <lb />Limerick, </l>
                    <l>I am of Madrid, Cadiz, Barcelona, Oporto, Lyons, <lb />Brussels, Berne,
                        Frankfort, Stuttgart, Turin, <lb />Florence, </l>
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                    <l>I belong in Moscow, Cracow, Warsaw&#8212;or northward <lb />in
                        Christiania or Stockholm <subst>
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                        </subst>or in Siberian <lb />Irkutsk&#8212;or in some street in Iceland; </l>
                    <l>I descend upon all those cities, and rise from them <lb />again. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                    <l>I see vapors exhaling from unexplored countries,</l>
                    <l>I see the savage types, the bow and arrow, the <lb />poisoned splint, the
                        fetish, and the obi. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                    <l>I see African and Asiatic towns,</l>
                    <l>I see Algiers, Tripoli, Derne, Mogadore, Timbuctoo, <lb />Monrovia, </l>
                    <l>I see the swarms of Pekin, Canton, Benares, Delhi, <lb />Calcutta, Yedo, </l>
                    <l>I see the Kruman in his hut, and the Dahoman and <lb />Ashantee-man in their
                        huts, </l>
                    <l>I see the Turk smoking opium in Aleppo,</l>
                    <l>I see the picturesque crowds at the fairs of Khiva, and <lb />those of Herat, </l>
                    <l>I see Teheran&#8212;I see Muscat and Medina, and the <lb />intervening
                        sands&#8212;I see the caravans toiling <lb />onward; </l>
                    <l>I see Egypt and the Egyptians&#8212;I see the pyramids <lb />and
                        obelisks, </l>
                    <l>I look on chiselled histories, songs, philosophies, cut <lb />in slabs of
                        sand-stone, or on granite blocks, </l>
                    <l>I see at Memphis mummy-pits, containing mummies, <lb />embalmed, swathed in
                        linen cloth, lying there <lb />many centuries, </l>
                    <l>I look on the fall'n Theban, the large-ball'd eyes, the <lb />side-drooping
                        neck, the hands folded across the <lb />breast. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>I see the menials of the earth, laboring,</l>
                    <l>I see the prisoners in the prisons,</l>
                    <l>I see the defective human bodies of the earth,</l>
                    <l>I see the blind, the deaf and dumb, idiots, <choice>
                            <orig>hunch-<lb />backs,</orig>
                            <reg>hunchbacks<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> lunatics, </l>
                    <l>I see the pirates, thieves, betrayers, murderers, slave-<lb />makers of the
                        earth, </l>
                    <l>I see the helpless infants, and the helpless old men <lb />and women. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                    <l>I see male and female everywhere,</l>
                    <l>I see the serene brotherhood of philosophs,</l>
                    <l>I see the constructiveness of my race,</l>
                    <l>I see the results of the perseverance and industry of <lb />my race, </l>
                    <l>I see ranks, colors, barbarisms, civilizations&#8212;I go <lb />among
                        them&#8212;I mix indiscriminately, </l>
                    <l>And I salute all the inhabitants of the earth.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                    <l>You, where you are!</l>
                    <l>You daughter or son of England!</l>
                    <l>You of the mighty Slavic tribes and empires! you <lb />Russ in Russia! </l>
                    <l>You dim-descended, black, divine-souled African, <lb />large, fine-headed,
                        nobly-formed, superbly <choice>
                            <orig>des-<lb />tined,</orig>
                            <reg>destined<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> on equal terms with me! </l>
                    <l>You Norwegian! Swede! Dane! Icelander! you <lb />Prussian! </l>
                    <l>You Spaniard of Spain! you Portuguese!</l>
                    <l>You Frenchwoman and Frenchman of France!</l>
                    <l>You Belge! you liberty-lover of the Netherlands!</l>
                    <l>You sturdy Austrian! you Lombard! Hun! <choice>
                            <orig>Bohe-<lb />mian!</orig>
                            <reg>Bohemian<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> farmer of Styria! </l>
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                    <!-- Whitman corrected the mislabeled running head from Leaves of Grass. to Salut au Monde! -->
                    <l>You neighbor of the Danube!</l>
                    <l>You working-man of the Rhine, the Elbe, or the <lb />Weser! you working-woman
                        too! </l>
                    <l>You Sardinian! you Bavarian! you Swabian! Saxon! <lb />Wallachian! Bulgarian! </l>
                    <l>You citizen of Prague! you Roman! Neapolitan! <lb />Greek! </l>
                    <l>You lithe matador in the arena at Seville!</l>
                    <l>You mountaineer living lawlessly on the Taurus or <lb />Caucasus! </l>
                    <l>You Bokh horse-herd, watching your mares and <choice>
                            <orig>stal-<lb />lions</orig>
                            <reg>stallions<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> feeding! </l>
                    <l>You beautiful-bodied Persian, at full speed in the <lb />saddle, shooting
                        arrows to the mark! </l>
                    <l>You Chinaman and Chinawoman of China! you <choice>
                            <orig>Tar-<lb />tar</orig>
                            <reg>Tartar<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of Tartary! </l>
                    <l>You women of the earth subordinated at your tasks!</l>
                    <l>You Jew journeying in your old age through every <lb />risk, to stand once on
                        Syrian ground! </l>
                    <l>You other Jews waiting in all lands for your Messiah!</l>
                    <l>You thoughtful Armenian, pondering by some stream <lb />of the Euphrates! you
                        peering amid the ruins of <lb />Nineveh! you ascending Mount Ararat! </l>
                    <l>You foot-worn pilgrim welcoming the far-away sparkle <lb />of the minarets of
                        Mecca! </l>
                    <l>You sheiks along the stretch from Suez to Bab<add type="insertion"
                            place="marginright">&#8209;</add>el-<lb />mandel, ruling your
                        families and tribes! </l>
                    <l>You olive-grower tending your fruit on fields of <choice>
                            <orig>Naz-<lb />areth,</orig>
                            <reg>Nazareth<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> Damascus, or Lake Tiberias! </l>
                    <l>You Thibet trader on the wide inland, or bargaining <lb />in the shops of
                        Lassa! </l>
                    <l>You Japanese man or woman! you liver in <choice>
                            <orig>Madagas-<lb />car,</orig>
                            <reg>Madagascar<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> Ceylon, Sumatra, Borneo! </l>
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                    <l>All you continentals of Asia, Africa, Europe, <choice>
                            <orig>Aus-<lb />tralia,</orig>
                            <reg>Australia<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> indifferent of place! </l>
                    <l>All you on the numberless islands of the archipelagoes <lb />of the sea! </l>
                    <l>And you of centuries hence, when you listen to me!</l>
                    <l>And you, each and everywhere, whom I specify not, <lb />but include just the
                        same! </l>
                    <l>Health to you! Good will to you all&#8212;from me and <lb />America sent, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">For <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">we</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">I &#38; my
                                        land</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> acknowledge you all and each.</del>
                    </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>Each of us inevitable,</l>
                    <l>Each of us limitless&#8212;each of us with his or her <lb />right upon
                        the earth, </l>
                    <l>Each of us allowed the eternal purport of the earth,</l>
                    <l>Each of us here as divinely as any is here.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">You Hottentot with clicking palate!</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">You woolly-haired hordes! you white or black owners
                            <lb />of slaves! </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>You owned persons, dropping sweat-drops or blood-<lb />drops! </l>
                    <l>You human forms with the fathomless ever-impressive <lb />countenances of
                        brutes! </l>
                    <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">I dare not <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">refuse to</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">refuse you, <del
                                    type="overstrike">for the</del></add>
                        </subst> (the <del type="overstrike">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </del> scope of the world &#38; of time &#38; space are upon
                        me.)</add>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                    <l>You poor koboo whom the meanest of the rest look <lb />down upon, <del
                            type="overstrike">for all your glimmering language <lb />and
                            spirituality! </del></l>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>You low expiring aborigines of the hills of Utah, <lb />Oregon,
                            California! </l>
                        <l>You dwarfed Kamtschatkan, Greenlander, Lapp!</l>
                        <l>You Austral negro, naked, red, sooty, with protrusive <lb />lip,
                            grovelling, seeking your food! </l>
                        <l>You Caffre, Berber, Soudanese!</l>
                    </del>
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                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>You haggard, uncouth, untutored Bedowee!</l>
                        <l>You plague-swarms in Madras, Nankin, Kaubul, <lb />Cairo! </l>
                        <l>You bather bathing in the Ganges!</l>
                        <l>You benighted roamer of Amazonia! you Patagonian! <lb />you Fegee-man!
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>You peon of Mexico! you Russian serf! you slave of <lb />Carolina, Texas,
                        Tennessee! </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">I do not prefer others so very much before you
                            either,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>I do not say one word against you, away back there, <lb />where you stand, </l>
                    <l>(You will come forward in due time to my side.)</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                    <l>My spirit has passed in compassion and determination <lb />around the whole
                        earth, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">I have looked for equals and lovers, and found them
                            <lb />ready for me in all lands; </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>I think some divine rapport has equalized me with <lb /><del
                            type="overstrike">them.</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">all lands.</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="34">
                    <l>O vapors! I think I have risen with you, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add><del type="overstrike">and</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">m</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">M</add>
                        </subst>oved <lb />away to distant continents, and fallen down <lb />there,
                        for reasons <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">35.</note>
                    <l>I think I have blown with you, O winds <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>O waters, I have fingered every shore with you.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="35">
                    <l>I <del type="overstrike">have</del> run through what any river or strait of
                        the <lb />globe has run through, </l>
                    <l>I <del type="overstrike">have</del> take<del type="overstrike">n</del> my
                        stand on the bases of peninsulas, and <lb />on the highest embedded rocks,
                        to cry thence. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="36">
                    <l>
                        <hi rend="italic">Salut au Monde!</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l>What cities the light or warmth penetrates, I <choice>
                            <orig>pen-<lb />etrate</orig>
                            <reg>penetrate<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> those cities myself, </l>
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                    <l>All islands to which birds wing their way, I wing my <lb />way myself. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="37">
                    <l>Toward all, <anchor xml:id="t40" /></l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t40">I raise high the perpendicular
                            hand</transpose>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>I make <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">a</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />signal, <anchor xml:id="t41" /></l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t41">To remain after me in sight
                            forever,</transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l>For all the haunts and homes of men.</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
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            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01552">
                <relations>
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                            </relations>
                <del type="erasure">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Song</head>
                    </add>
                </del>
                <head type="main-authorial">P<hi rend="smallcaps">OEM OF</hi> J<hi rend="smallcaps"
                        >OYS.</hi></head>
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                    <l>O <hi rend="smallcaps">TO</hi> make <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                        </subst> most jubilant poem!</l>
                    <l>O full of music! Full of manhood, womanhood, <lb />infancy! </l>
                    <l>O full of common employments! Full of grain and <lb />trees. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>O for the voices of animals! O for the swiftness and <lb />balance of fishes! </l>
                    <l>O for the dropping of rain-drops in a poem!</l>
                    <l>O for the sunshine and motion of waves in a poem.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>O to be on the sea! the wind, the wide waters <lb />around; </l>
                    <l>O to sail in a ship under full sail at sea.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>O the joy of my spirit! It is uncaged! It darts like <lb />lightning! </l>
                    <l>It is not enough to have this globe, or a certain time<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">,</add>
                        <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
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                        </subst>I will have thousands of globes, and all time. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>O the engineer's joys! <anchor xml:id="t42" /></l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t42"><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >O</add> To go with a locomotive!</transpose>
                    </l>
                </lg>
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                <l><del type="overstrike">
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">O</add>
                    </del> To hear the hiss of steam&#8212;the merry shriek&#8212;the
                    <lb />steam-whistle&#8212;the laughing locomotive! </l>
                <l>To push with resistless way, and speed off in the <lb />distance. </l>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>O the horseman's and horsewoman's joys!</l>
                    <l>The saddle&#8212;the gallop&#8212;the pressure upon the seat
                        <lb />&#8212;the cool gurgling by the ears and hair. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>O the fireman's joys!</l>
                    <l>I hear the alarm at dead of night,</l>
                    <l>I hear bells&#8212;shouts!&#8212;I pass the crowd&#8212;I
                        run!</l>
                    <l>The sight of the flames maddens me with pleasure.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>O the joy of the strong-brawned fighter, towering <lb />in the arena, in
                        perfect condition, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        conscious of <lb />power, thirsting to meet his opponent. </l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
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                        <l>O the joy of that vast elemental sympathy <del type="overstrike">which
                                only</del>
                            <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> the human
                            Soul is capable of generating and <lb />emitting in steady and limitless
                            floods. </l>
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                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>O the mother's joys!</l>
                    <l>The watching&#8212;the endurance&#8212;the precious love&#8212;
                        <lb />the anguish&#8212;the patiently yielded life. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>O the joy of increase, growth, recuperation,</l>
                    <l>The joy of soothing and pacifying&#8212;the joy of <lb />concord and
                        harmony. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>O to go back to the place where I was born!</l>
                    <l>O to hear the birds sing once more!</l>
                    <l>To ramble about the house and barn, and over the <lb />fields, once more, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf135r" type="recto" n="261" facs="nyp.00015.269" />
                    <l>And through the orchard and along the old lanes <lb />once more. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <l>O male and female!</l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">O the presence of women! (I swear, nothing is more
                            <lb />exquisite to me than the presence of women;) </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>O for the girl, my mate! O for happiness with my <lb />mate! <anchor
                            xml:id="t43" /></l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t43">O the young man as I pass!</transpose>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#182;</add>O I am sick after
                        the <lb />friendship of him who, I fear, is indifferent <lb />to me. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>O the streets of cities!</l>
                    <l>The flitting faces&#8212;the expressions, eyes, feet, <choice>
                            <orig>cos-<lb />tumes!</orig>
                            <reg>costumes<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <del type="overstrike">O I cannot tell how welcome they are <lb />to me;
                        </del></l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">O of men&#8212;of women toward me as I pass</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>The <lb />memory of only one look&#8212;the boy lingering
                        <lb />and waiting. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>O to have been brought up on bays, lagoons, creeks, <lb />or along the coast! </l>
                    <l>O to continue and be employed there all my life!</l>
                    <l>O the briny and damp smell&#8212;the shore&#8212;the salt <lb />weeds
                        exposed at low water <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">!</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The work of fishermen&#8212;the work of the eel-fisher <lb />and
                        clam-fisher. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>O it is I!</l>
                    <l>I come with my clam-rake and spade! I come with <lb />my eel-spear; </l>
                    <l>Is the tide out? I join the group of clam-diggers on <lb />the flats, </l>
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                    <l>I laugh and work with them&#8212;I joke at my work, <lb />like a
                        mettlesome young man. </l>
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                    <l>O the sweetness of the Fifth Month morning upon the <lb />water, <del
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                    <l>I go to all the places, one after another, and then row <lb />back to the
                        shore, </l>
                    <l>There, in a huge kettle of boiling water, the lobsters <lb />shall be boiled
                        till their color becomes scarlet. </l>
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                    <l>Or, another time, mackerel-taking,</l>
                    <l>Voracious, mad for the hook, near the surface, they <lb />seem to fill the
                        water for miles; </l>
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                    <l>Or, another time, fishing for rock-fish in Chesapeake <lb />Bay&#8212;I
                        one of the brown-faced crew; </l>
                    <l>Or, another time, trailing for blue-fish off Paumanok, <lb />I stand with
                        braced body, </l>
                    <l>My left foot is on the gunwale&#8212;my right arm throws <lb />the coils
                        of slender rope, </l>
                    <l>In sight around me the quick veering and darting of <lb />fifty skiffs, my
                        companions. </l>
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                    <l>O boating on the rivers!</l>
                    <l>The voyage down the <del type="overstrike">Niagara, (the</del> St.
                            Lawrence,<del type="overstrike">)</del>&#8212; <lb />the superb
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                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t45">The ships sailing&#8212;the
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                    <l>The little huts on the rafts, and the stream of smoke <lb />
                        <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">from the fires as they
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                    <l>O something <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">now</add> pernicious
                        and dread!</l>
                    <l>Something far away from a puny and pious life!</l>
                    <l>Something unproved! Something in a trance!</l>
                    <l>Something escaped from the anchorage, and driving <lb />free. </l>
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                    <l>O to work in mines, or forging iron!</l>
                    <l>Foundry casting&#8212;the foundry itself&#8212;the rude high
                        <lb />roof&#8212;the ample and shadowed space, </l>
                    <l>The furnace&#8212;the hot liquid poured out and running.</l>
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                    <l>O the joys of the soldier!</l>
                    <l>To feel the presence of a brave general! to feel his <lb />sympathy! </l>
                    <l>To behold his calmness! to be warmed in the rays of <lb />his smile! </l>
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                    <l>To go to battle! to hear the bugles play, and the drums <lb />beat! </l>
                    <l>To hear the artillery! to see the glittering of the <choice>
                            <orig>bay-<lb />onets</orig>
                            <reg>bayonets<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and musket-barrels in the sun! </l>
                    <l>To see men fall and die and not complain!</l>
                    <l>To taste the savage taste of blood! to be so devilish!</l>
                    <l>To gloat so over the wounds and deaths of the enemy.</l>
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                    <l>O the whaleman's joys! O I cruise my old cruise <lb />again! </l>
                    <l>I feel the ship's motion under me&#8212;I feel the Atlantic <lb />breezes
                        fanning me, </l>
                    <l>I hear the cry again sent down from the mast-head, <lb /><hi rend="italic"
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                    <l>Again I spring up the rigging, to look with the rest&#8212; <lb />We
                        see&#8212;we descend, wild with excitement, </l>
                    <l>I leap in the lowered boat&#8212;We row toward our prey, <lb />where he
                        lies, </l>
                    <l>We approach, stealthy and silent&#8212;I see the <choice>
                            <orig>moun-<lb />tainous</orig>
                            <reg>mountainous<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> mass, lethargic, basking, </l>
                    <l>I see the harpooner standing up&#8212;I see the weapon <lb />dart from
                        his vigorous arm; </l>
                    <l>O swift, again, now, far out in the ocean, the wounded <lb />whale, settling,
                        running to windward, tows me, </l>
                    <l>Again I see him rise to breathe&#8212;We row close <lb />again, </l>
                    <l>I see a lance driven through his side, pressed deep, <lb />turned in the
                        wound, </l>
                    <l>Again we back off&#8212;I see him settle again&#8212;the life
                        <lb />is leaving him fast, </l>
                    <l>As he rises, he spouts blood&#8212;I see him swim in <choice>
                            <orig>cir-<lb />cles</orig>
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                        </choice> narrower and narrower, swiftly cutting the <lb />water&#8212;I
                        see him die, </l>
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                    <l>He gives one convulsive leap in the centre of the <choice>
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                    <l>O the old manhood of me, my joy!</l>
                    <l>My children and grand-children&#8212;my white hair and <lb />beard, </l>
                    <l>My largeness, calmness, majesty, out of the long <lb />stretch of my life.
                    </l>
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                    <l>O the ripened joy of womanhood!</l>
                    <l>O perfect happiness at last!</l>
                    <l>I am more than eighty years of age&#8212;my hair, too, is <lb />pure
                        white&#8212;I am the most venerable mother; </l>
                    <l>How clear is my mind! how all people draw nigh to <lb />me! </l>
                    <l>What attractions are these <subst>
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                        <del type="overstrike">beyond any before?</del> what <lb />bloom, more than
                        the bloom of youth? </l>
                    <l>What beauty is this that descends upon me, and rises <lb />out of me? </l>
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                    <l>O the joy of my Soul leaning poised on itself <subst>
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                            <orig>receiv-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>receiving<lb /></reg>
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                    <l>O my Soul, vibrated back to me, from them&#8212;from <lb />facts, sight,
                        hearing, touch, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> my
                        phrenology, <lb />reason, articulation, comparison, memory, and <lb />the
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                    <l>O the real life of my senses and flesh, transcending <lb />my senses and
                        flesh; </l>
                    <l>O my body, done with materials&#8212;my sight, done <lb />with my
                        material eyes; </l>
                    <l>O what is proved to me this day, beyond cavil, that it <lb />is not my
                        material eyes which finally see, </l>
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                    <l>Nor my material body which finally loves, walks, <lb />laughs, shouts,
                        embraces, procreates. </l>
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                    <l>O the farmer's joys!</l>
                    <l>Ohioan's, Illinoisian's, Wisconsinese', Kanadian's, <choice>
                            <orig>Io-<lb />wan's,</orig>
                            <reg>Iowan's<lb /></reg>
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                        joys, </l>
                    <l>To rise at peep of day, and pass forth nimbly to work,</l>
                    <l>To plough land in the fall for winter-sown crops,</l>
                    <l>To plough land in the spring for maize,</l>
                    <l>To train orchards&#8212;to graft the trees&#8212;to gather
                        <lb />apples in the fall. </l>
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                    <l>O the pleasure with trees!</l>
                    <l>The orchard&#8212;the forest&#8212;the oak, cedar, pine,
                        <lb />pekan-tree, </l>
                    <l>The honey-locust, black-walnut, cottonwood, and <choice>
                            <orig>mag-<lb />nolia.</orig>
                            <reg>magnolia<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
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                        <l>
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                        <l>O that of myself, discharging my excrementitious <lb />body, to be
                            burned, or rendered to powder, or <lb />buried, </l>
                        <l>My real body doubtless left to me for other spheres,</l>
                        <l>My voided body, nothing more to me, returning to the <lb />purifications,
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182; To the</add>
                            further offices, eternal uses of the <lb />earth. </l>
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                    <l>O to bathe in the swimming-bath, or in a good place <lb />along shore! </l>
                    <l>To splash the water! to walk ankle-deep; to race <lb />naked along the shore.
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                    <l>O to realize space!</l>
                    <l>The plenteousness of all&#8212;that there are no bounds;</l>
                    <l>To emerge, and be of the sky<del type="overstrike">&#8212;of the sun and
                            moon,</del>
                        <lb />and the flying clouds, as one with them. </l>
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                    <l>O, while I live, to be the ruler of life&#8212;not a slave,</l>
                    <l>To meet life as a powerful conqueror,</l>
                    <l>No fumes&#8212;no ennui&#8212;no more complaints or <choice>
                            <orig>scorn-<lb />ful</orig>
                            <reg>scornful<lb /></reg>
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                        <l>O me repellent and ugly!</l>
                        <l>O to these proud laws of the air, the water, and <lb />the ground, <add
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                            Soul <choice>
                                <orig>impreg-<lb />nable,</orig>
                                <reg>impregnable<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
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                        <l>And nothing exterior shall ever take command of me.</l>
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                    <l>O to attract by more than attraction!</l>
                    <l>How it is I know not&#8212;yet behold! the something <lb />which obeys
                        none of the rest, </l>
                    <l>It is offensive, never defensive&#8212;yet how magnetic <lb />it draws.
                    </l>
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                    <l>O the joy of suffering!</l>
                    <l>To struggle against great odds! to meet enemies <choice>
                            <orig>un-<lb />daunted!</orig>
                            <reg>undaunted<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
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                    <l>To be entirely alone with them! to find how much <subst>
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                        </subst>
                        <lb />can stand! </l>
                    <l>To look strife, torture, prison, popular odium, death, <lb />face to face! </l>
                    <l>To mount the scaffold! to advance to the muzzles of <lb />guns with perfect
                        nonchalance! </l>
                    <l>To be indeed a God!</l>
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                    <l>O the gleesome saunter over fields and hill-sides!</l>
                    <l>The leaves and flowers of the commonest weeds&#8212;the <lb />moist fresh
                        stillness of the woods, </l>
                    <l>The exquisite smell of the earth at day-break, and all <lb />through the
                        forenoon. </l>
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                        <l>O love-branches! love-root! love-apples!</l>
                        <l>O chaste and electric torrents! O mad-sweet drops.</l>
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                    <l>O the orator's joys!</l>
                    <l>To inflate the chest&#8212;to roll the thunder of the voice <lb />out
                        from the ribs and throat, </l>
                    <l>To make the people rage <subst>
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                        </subst> weep, <del type="overstrike">hate <subst>
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                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">at will.</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">desire, with <lb />yourself,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">To lead America&#8212;to quell America with a
                            great <lb />tongue. </del>
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                    <l>O <del type="overstrike">the</del> joy of a <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">manly self-hood!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">grand
                                personality!</add>
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                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Personality&#8212;to be servile to
                            none&#8212;to defer to none <lb />&#8212;not to any tyrant,
                            known or unknown, </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>To walk with erect carriage, a step springy and <lb />elastic, </l>
                    <l>To look with calm gaze, or with a flashing eye,</l>
                    <l>To speak with a full and sonorous voice, out of a <lb />broad chest, </l>
                    <l>To confront with your personality all the other<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">s</add>
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                    <l>O to have my life henceforth my poem of joys!</l>
                    <l>To dance, clap hands, exult, shout, skip, leap, roll on, <lb />float on, </l>
                    <l>An athlete&#8212;full of rich words&#8212;full of joys.</l>
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                    <l>Here <subst>
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                            <note type="authorial" rend="circled">article on</note>
                            <p>Death of Brooklyn's most ancient citizen, <add type="edit"
                                    rend="underline">Andrew Demarest&#8212;Reminiscences of our
                                    city, years ago.</add></p>
                            <l>Battles, the <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">whirl of </del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">horrors of
                                        fratricidal</add>
                                </subst>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="low" resp="ses"
                                        >first</unclear>
                                </del>
                                <del type="overstrike">intestine</del> war, <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">the deaths of</add></l>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">The news of</del> my friends mortally
                                wounded.</l>
                        </body>
                    </floatingText>
                </add>
                <add type="pasteon" place="margintop">
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">A Word the rustling sea&#8209;lips
                                whisper'd.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">The Word of the
                                Sea</add>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                    <l>A word the rustling sea&#8209;lips whisper'd</l>
                    <l>A word there lowly <del type="overstrike">down</del> on the sands brought
                        from the deeps profound</l>
                    <l>That word of beauty out of the <del type="overstrike">sea</del> deeps <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">profound,</add></l>
                    <l>That murmured word I loved so well in youth</l>
                    <l>Again invoking <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">over the
                            sands,</add> out of the Ninth&#8209;Month midnight</l>
                    <note type="authorial">&#42;</note>
                    <note type="authorial" rend="circled">Jan '65 This is satisfactory as it is
                        (W</note>
                </add>
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">A WORD OUT OF THE SEA.</del>
                        <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="superlinear">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Out of the
                            sea&#8209;lips, hoarsely murmuring</add>
                        <del seq="6" type="overstrike">
                            <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">What
                                does the sea&#8209;lips whisper?</add>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="7" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">What so
                            curious lisping, hoarsley murmuring sea&#8209;lips?</add>
                        <add seq="7" type="unmarked" place="infralinear" rend="underline"
                            >Prelude.</add>
                    </subst>
                </head>
                <lg type="section">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>What does the sea&#8209;lips whisper?</l>
                        <l>As <del type="overstrike">it</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">hoarsely</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">hoarse and low
                                    it</add>
                            </subst> rustles over the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sand</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">shores</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">sands</add>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">?</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>What <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">does it say</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">is the word it
                                    brings</add>
                            </subst> out of its deep profound?</l>
                    </add>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>Out of the sea&#8209;lips, hoarsely murmuring</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">O<hi rend="smallcaps">UT</hi> of the rocked
                                cradle <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> (to answer the <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                    >curious</add> question)</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Out of the mocking-bird's throat, the musical shuttle <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Out of the boy's mother's womb, and from the
                                nipples <lb />of her breasts <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Out of the Ninth Month midnight <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">again I invoke it,</add></l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Over the <del type="overstrike">sterile</del> sands, and the fields beyond,
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#182;</add>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>where <lb />the child, leaving
                        his bed, wandered alone, <choice>
                            <orig>bare-<lb />headed,</orig>
                            <reg>bareheaded<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> barefoot <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst><add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Down from the showered halo <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#38; &#8212;up from
                                the <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">rustling</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">hissing</add>
                                </subst> liquid,</add></del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Up from the mystic play of shadows, twining and <lb />twisting as if they
                        were alive <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Out from the patches of briers and blackberries <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>From the memories of the bird that chanted to me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>From your memories, sad brother&#8212;from the fitful <lb />risings and
                        fallings I heard <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>From under that yellow half-moon, late-risen, and <lb />swollen as if with
                        tears <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>From those beginning notes of sickness and love, <lb />there in the
                        transparent mist <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>From the thousand responses of my heart, never to <lb />cease <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
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                    <l>From the myriad thence-aroused words <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>From the word stronger and more delicious than any <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>From such, as <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">again</add> they
                        start, the scene revisiting,</l>
                    <l>As a flock, twittering, rising, or overhead passing,</l>
                    <l>Borne hither&#8212;ere all eludes me, hurriedly,</l>
                    <l>A man&#8212;yet by these tears a little boy again,</l>
                    <l>Throwing myself on the <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sands,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">shore,</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> confronting the waves,</l>
                    <l>I, chanter of pains and joys, uniter of here and <choice>
                            <orig>here-<lb />after,</orig>
                            <reg>hereafter<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Taking all hints to use them&#8212;but swiftly leaping <lb />beyond them, </l>
                    <l>A reminiscence sing.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="section">
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">REMINISCENCE.</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Of the bird's
                                    complaint.</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">A tale, how</add>O<hi
                                rend="smallcaps">NCE</hi>, Paumanok,</l>
                        <l>When the snows had melted, and the Fifth Month <lb />grass was growing, </l>
                        <l>Up this <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sea-shore,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">bank this
                                    sea-shore</add>
                            </subst> in some briers,</l>
                        <l>Two guests <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">there were</add>
                            </del> from Alabama&#8212;two together,</l>
                        <l>And their nest, and four light-green eggs, spotted with <lb />brown <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>And every day the he-bird, to and fro, near at hand,</l>
                        <l>And every day the she-bird, crouched on <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">her</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">the</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> nest, <lb />silent, with bright eyes, </l>
                        <l>And <del type="overstrike">every day</del> I, a curious boy, never too
                            close, never <lb />disturbing them, </l>
                        <l>Cautiously peering, absorbing, translating.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Shine! <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">S</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit">s</add>
                                </subst>hine!</hi>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline" rend="underline">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">S</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit">s</add>
                                </subst>hine! </add>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Pour down your warmth, great Sun!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">While we bask&#8212;we two together</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf140r" type="recto" n="271" facs="nyp.00015.279" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Two together!</hi>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline" rend="underline">There!
                                    There!</add>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Winds blow South, or winds blow North,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Day come white, or night come black,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Home, or rivers and mountains from home,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Singing all time, minding no time,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">If we two but keep together</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>Till of a sudden,</l>
                        <l>May-be killed, unknown to her mate,</l>
                        <l>One forenoon the she-bird crouched not on the nest <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>Nor returned that afternoon, nor the next,</l>
                        <l>Nor ever appeared again.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>And thenceforward, all summer, <del type="overstrike">in</del>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the sound of</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erased">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>the sound of the <lb />sea, </l>
                        <l>And at night, under the full of the moon, in calmer <lb />weather, </l>
                        <l>Over the hoarse surging of the sea,</l>
                        <l>Or flitting from brier to brier by day,</l>
                        <l>I saw, I heard at intervals, the remaining one, the <lb />he-bird, </l>
                        <l>The solitary guest from Alabama.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Blow! Blow!</hi>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline" rend="underline">Blow!</add>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Blow up sea-winds along Paumanok's shore;</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear" rend="underline">O</add>
                            <hi rend="italic">I wait and I wait, till you blow my mate to
                            me</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>Yes, when the stars glistened,</l>
                        <l>All night long, on the prong of a moss-scallop'd stake,</l>
                        <l>Down, almost amid the slapping waves,</l>
                        <l>Sat the lone singer, wonderful, causing tears.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>He called on his mate <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>He poured forth the meanings which I, of all men, <lb />know. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf140v" type="verso" n="272" facs="nyp.00015.280" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>Yes, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my brother</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">poor <del
                                        type="overstrike">dusky</del> demon</add>
                            </subst>, I know <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The rest might not&#8212;but I have treasured every note <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>For once, and more than once, dimly, down to the <lb />beach gliding, </l>
                        <l>Silent, avoiding the moonbeams, blending myself with <lb />the shadows, </l>
                        <l>Recalling now the obscure shapes, the echoes, the <lb />sounds and sights
                            after their sorts, </l>
                        <l>The white arms out in the breakers tirelessly tossing,</l>
                        <l>I, with bare feet, a child, the wind wafting my hair,</l>
                        <l>Listened long and long.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <l>Listened, to keep, to sing&#8212;now translating the <lb />notes, </l>
                        <l>Following you, my brother.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Soothe! <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">S</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit">s</add>
                                </subst>oothe! <add type="unmarked" place="inline">
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="edit">S</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="edit">s</add>
                                    </subst>oothe! </add></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Close on its wave soothes the wave behind,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">And again another behind, embracing and lapping,</hi>
                            <lb />
                            <hi rend="italic">every one close,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic"><del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                                </del>But my love <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">, my love</add>
                                </del> soothes not me</hi>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">.</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                            </del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">not me.</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Low hangs the moon&#8212;it rose late <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O it is lagging&#8212;O I think it is heavy with
                                love</hi>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">.</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">,</add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">with love</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O madly the sea <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">the se<gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                </del> pushes<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">pushes</add> upon the
                                land,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">With love&#8212;with love</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O night! <add type="unmarked" place="inline">do</add>
                                <anchor xml:id="t47" /></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">
                                <del type="overstrike">O do</del>
                            </hi>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t47">
                                <hi rend="italic">I not see my love fluttering out there among
                                    the</hi>
                                <lb />
                                <hi rend="italic">breakers?</hi>
                            </transpose>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">What is that little black thing I see there in
                                the</hi>
                            <lb />
                            <hi rend="italic">white?</hi>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf141r" type="recto" n="273" facs="nyp.00015.281" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Loud! <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="edit">L</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="edit">l</add>
                                </subst>oud! <add type="unmarked" place="inline">Loud!</add></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic"><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">So</add> Loud
                                I call<add type="insertion" place="marginright">I call</add> to you
                                my love!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic"><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">So</add> High
                                and clear I shoot my voice over the waves <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Surely you must know who is here, <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">is here.</add></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">You must know who I am, my love</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Low-hanging moon! <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="inline">wet, sul</add>
                                </del></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">What is that dusky spot in your brown yellow?</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O it is the shape <add type="insertion"
                                    place="marginleft">the shape</add> of my mate!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">O moon, do not keep her from me any longer</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Land! <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                    >land!</add> O <add type="insertion" place="marginright">dim and
                                    sullen</add> land!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic"><del type="overstrike">Whichever way I turn,</del> O I
                                think you could give me</hi>
                            <lb />
                            <hi rend="italic">my mate back again, if you <add type="insertion"
                                    place="marginright">only</add> would <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">For I am almost sure I see her dimly whichever way</hi>
                            <lb /><hi rend="italic">I look</hi>. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O rising stars!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">Perhaps the one I want so much will rise <add
                                    type="insertion" place="supralinear">will rise</add> with
                                some</hi>
                            <lb /><hi rend="italic">of you</hi>. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O throat! <add type="insertion" place="inline">O
                                    trembling throat!</add></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Sound clearer through the atmosphere!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic"><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Pierce</add>
                                Pierce the woods, the earth <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic"><add type="unmarked" place="inline">O</add> Somewhere
                                listening to catch you must be the one I</hi>
                            <lb /><hi rend="italic">want</hi>. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Shake out, carols! <anchor xml:id="t48" /></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">
                                <del type="overstrike">Solitary here&#8212;</del>
                                <transpose anchored="true" target="t48">the night's
                                    carols!</transpose>
                            </hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Carols of lonesome love! Death's carols!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Carols under that lagging, yellow, waning moon!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O, under that moon, where she droops almost down</hi>
                            <lb />
                            <hi rend="italic">into the sea<del type="overstrike">!</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">the sea,</add></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic"><restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">O</del>
                                </restore> reckless, despairing carols</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf141v" type="verso" n="274" facs="nyp.00015.282" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">But soft! <anchor xml:id="t49" /></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">
                                <transpose anchored="true" target="t49">Sink low
                                    &#8212;</transpose>
                                <del type="overstrike">soft!</del>
                            </hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Soft! Let me just <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="marginright">just</add>
                                </del> murmur <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">And do you wait a moment, you husky-noised sea <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">For somewhere I <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">believe</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">think</add>
                                </subst> I heard my mate responding</hi>
                            <lb />
                            <hi rend="italic">to me <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">So faint&#8212;I must be still <add
                                    type="insertion" place="marginright">be still</add> to
                                listen,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">But not altogether still, for then she might not
                                come</hi>
                            <lb /><hi rend="italic">immediately to me</hi>. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Hither, my love! <anchor xml:id="t50" /></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">
                                <transpose anchored="true" target="t50">Here I am!</transpose>
                                <del type="overstrike">Here!</del>
                            </hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">With this just-sustained note I announce myself
                                to</hi>
                            <lb />
                            <hi rend="italic">you <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">This gentle call is for you, my love</hi>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">.</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">,</add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">for you.</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">Do not be decoyed elsewhere <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">That is the whistle of the wind&#8212;it is not my
                                voice <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">That is the fluttering <add type="insertion"
                                    place="marginright">the fluttering</add> of the spray <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </subst></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">Those are the shadows of leaves</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O darkness! O in vain! <add type="insertion"
                                    place="inline">(no answer comes&#8212;nor will ever
                                    come;)</add></hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">O I am very sick and sorrowful</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O brown halo in the sky, near the moon, drooping</hi>
                            <lb />
                            <hi rend="italic">upon the sea!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O troubled reflection in the sea!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">O throat! O throbbing heart!</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi rend="italic">O all&#8212;and I <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">singing</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">chanting</add>
                                    <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="infralinear"
                                        >murmuring</add>
                                </subst> uselessly<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">uselessly through</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">all</del> the night</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                            <l>
                                <hi rend="italic">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Yet will I</add>
                                    <del type="overstrike">Murmur! Murmur on <subst>
                                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                        </subst></del>
                                </hi>
                            </l>
                            <l><hi rend="italic">O murmurs&#8212;you yourselves make me continue
                                    to</hi>
                                <lb /><hi rend="italic">sing, I know not why</hi>. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf142r" type="recto" n="275" facs="nyp.00015.283" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                        <l>
                            <hi>O past! <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O joy!</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O life!</add>
                                </subst>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">O songs of joy!</add></hi>
                        </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                <l>Day coming white, or night coming black,</l>
                                <l>Winds blowing North, or winds blowing South,</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>
                                <hi>In the air&#8212;in the woods&#8212;over fields,</hi>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>
                                <hi>Loved! <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="edit">L</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="edit">l</add>
                                    </subst>oved! <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="edit">L</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="edit">l</add>
                                    </subst>oved! <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="edit">L</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="edit">l</add>
                                    </subst>oved! <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="edit">L</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="edit">l</add>
                                    </subst>oved!</hi>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>
                            <hi><del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Happily</add>
                                </del>
                                <del type="overstrike">Loved</del>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">O my love</add>
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">in the past</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">&#8212;but</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Once</add>
                                </del> no more <add type="insertion" place="inline">no more</add>
                                with me,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l><hi>We two together no more</hi>.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">The Boy, and his
                                Soul.</head>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                        <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">Now</add> The aria sinking <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>All else continuing&#8212;the stars shining <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The winds blowing&#8212;the notes of the <del type="overstrike"
                                >wondrous</del> bird <lb />echoing <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>With angry moans the fierce old mother yet, as ever, <lb />incessantly
                            moaning, </l>
                        <l>On the sands of Paumanok's shore gray and rustling <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The yellow half-moon, enlarged, sagging down, <choice>
                                <orig>droop-<lb />ing,</orig>
                                <reg>drooping<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> the face of the sea almost touching <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>The boy extatic&#8212;with his bare feet the waves, with <lb />his
                            hair the atmosphere dallying <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>The love in the heart pent, now loose, <del type="overstrike">now</del>
                            at last<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <lb /><add type="insertion" place="inline">and</add> tumultuously
                            bursting <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>The aria's meaning, the ears, the Soul, <add type="insertion"
                                place="infralinear">there in the <del type="overstrike">depth of
                                    the</del> night,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">swiftly</del>
                            <choice>
                                <orig>depos-<lb />iting</orig>
                                <reg>depositing<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <del type="overstrike">,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>The strange tears down the cheeks coursing <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The colloquy there&#8212;the trio&#8212;each uttering <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The undertone&#8212;the savage old mother, incessantly <lb />crying, </l>
                        <l>To the boy's Soul's questions sullenly timing&#8212;<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>some <lb />drowned secret
                            hissing, </l>
                        <l>To the outsetting bard of love.<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >)</add></l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                        <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Demon or</add> Bird! (<del
                                type="overstrike">then</del> said <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">that</add>
                            </del> the boy's Soul,)</l>
                        <l>Is it indeed toward your mate you sing? or is it <lb />mostly to me? </l>
                        <l>For I that was a child, my tongue's use sleeping,</l>
                        <l>Now that I have heard you,</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf142v" type="verso" n="276" facs="nyp.00015.284" />
                        <l>Now in a moment I know what I am for&#8212;I awake,</l>
                        <l>And already a thousand singers&#8212;a thousand songs, <lb />clearer,
                            louder, more sorrowful than yours, </l>
                        <l>A thousand warbling echoes have started to life <lb />within me, </l>
                        <l>Never to die.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">O throes!</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">
                                        <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                            >with</unclear>
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">you demon,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">you singer,
                                    solitary,</add>
                            </subst> singing by yourself&#8212;projecting me,</l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">
                                        <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                            >with</unclear>
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> solitary me, listening&#8212;never <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">more</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="infralinear">after this
                                    hour</add>
                            </subst> shall I cease <lb /><del type="overstrike">imitating,</del>
                            perpetuating you, </l>
                        <l>Never more shall I escape,<anchor xml:id="t51" /><del type="edit">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                            </del></l>
                        <l>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t51">Never more <del type="overstrike"
                                    >shall</del> the reverberations,</transpose>
                        </l>
                        <l>Never <del type="overstrike">more</del> the cries of unsatisfied love be
                            absent <lb />from me, </l>
                        <l>Never again leave me to be the peaceful child I was <lb />before what
                                <del type="overstrike">t</del>here, in the night, </l>
                        <l>By th <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">is</add>
                            </subst> sea, under th <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">at</add>
                            </subst> yellow and sagging moon,</l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">The</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">You O</add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">The messenger sent</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">dusky</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">demon</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">singer</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> aroused&#8212;the fire, the sweet hell <lb />within, </l>
                        <l>The unknown want, the destiny of me.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                        <l>O give me some clew! <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(<del
                                    type="overstrike">for</del> it lurks in the night here
                                somewhere;)</add></l>
                        <l>O if I am to have so much, let me have more!</l>
                        <l>O a word! O what is my destination? <anchor xml:id="t52" /></l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">O</del>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t52"><add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">(</add> I fear it is henceforth chaos!<add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></transpose>
                        </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O how</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">For</add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">lo!</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">joys, dreads,</del> convolutions, human shapes,
                            and <lb />all shapes, spring as from graves around me! </l>
                        <!-- W marked 31.6-7 and 8-9 as seperate stanzas; rejected in 1867 -->
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">32</note>
                        <l><restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">O</del>
                            </restore> phantoms! you <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >who</add> cover <del type="overstrike">all</del> the land, and <del
                                type="overstrike">all</del> the sea!</l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">O</del> I cannot <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">see</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">tell</add>
                            </subst>see in the dimness whether you smile or <lb />frown upon me; </l>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">33</note>
                        <l>O <del type="overstrike">vapor,</del> a look, a word! <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O well-beloved!</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Only One word</add>
                                <anchor xml:id="t53" />
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t53">O you dear women's and men's
                                phantoms!</transpose>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf143r" type="recto" n="277" facs="nyp.00015.285" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">A word then,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">The word of the
                                        <del type="overstrike">sea</del>
                                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">deeps, <del
                                            type="overstrike">profound,</del></add></add>
                            </subst> (for I <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">will</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">did</add>
                            </subst> conquer it,)</l>
                        <l>The word <add type="insertion" place="marginright">so husky,
                                strange,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">final,</del> superior to all,</l>
                        <l>Subtle, sent up&#8212;what is it?&#8212;I listen;</l>
                        <l>Are you whispering it, and have been all the time, <lb />you <del
                                type="overstrike">sea-</del>waves? </l>
                        <l>Is that it from your liquid rims and wet sands?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">
                            <head type="main-authorial">The Word.</head>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                        <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Whereto,</add> Answering, the
                            sea,</l>
                        <l>Delaying not, hurrying not,</l>
                        <l>Whispered me through the night, and very plainly <lb />before daybreak, </l>
                        <l>Lisped to me <del type="overstrike">constantly</del> the low and
                            delicious word
                                <lb />D<!-- how can we show that W intended to change the small caps to lower case here? --><hi
                                rend="smallcaps">EATH</hi>, </l>
                        <l>And again Death&#8212;ever Death, Death, Death,</l>
                        <l>Hissing melodious, neither like the bird, nor like my <lb />aroused
                            child's heart, </l>
                        <l>But edging near, as privately for me, rustling at <lb />my feet, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">And</del> creeping thence steadily up to my ears,
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">and laving me softly all
                                over,</add></l>
                        <l>Death, Death, Death, Death, Death.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="34">
                        <l>Which I do not forget,</l>
                        <l>But fuse the song of <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">two together,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline"><del type="overstrike"
                                        >the</del><add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my</add>
                                    dusky demon and brother</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>That <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">was</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">he</add>
                            </subst> s <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">u</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">a</add>
                            </subst>ng to me in the moonlight on Paumanok's <lb />gray beach, </l>
                        <l>With the thousand responsive songs, at random,</l>
                        <l>My own songs, awaked from that hour, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >and now chanted</add></l>
                        <l>And with them the key, the word <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">up from the waves,</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright"><gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />lips</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginright">from the deeps
                                    profound,</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The word of the sweetest song, and all songs,</l>
                        <l>That strong and delicious word which, creeping to <lb />my feet, </l>
                        <l>The sea<add type="insertion" place="marginbot">&#8209;lips</add>
                            whispered <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">me</del>
                            </restore>.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf143v" type="verso" n="278" facs="nyp.00015.286" />
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01554">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00271" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">LEAF OF FACES.</del>
                        <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><del type="overstrike"
                                    >Poemet</del> Sauntering <del type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Manhattan's</add>
                                pavement, lo, such faces</add>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear" rend="underline"
                            >Faces</add>
                    </subst>
                </head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>S<hi rend="smallcaps">AUNTERING</hi>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">Manhattan's</add>
                        </del>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">the</del>
                        </restore> pavement, <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">or riding the country <choice><orig>by-<lb
/>road,</orig><reg>byroad,<lb/></reg></choice></del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;lo! such
                                    faces!</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">here then are faces!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">lo! such faces!</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Faces of friendship, precision, caution, suavity, <choice>
                            <orig>ide-<lb />ality,</orig>
                            <reg>ideality<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>The spiritual prescient face&#8212;the always welcome, <lb />common,
                        benevolent face, </l>
                    <l>The face of the singing of music&#8212;the grand faces of <lb />natural
                        lawyers and judges, broad at the back-<lb />top, </l>
                    <l>The faces of hunters and fishers, bulged at the brows <lb />&#8212;the
                        shaved blanched faces of orthodox citizens, </l>
                    <l>The pure, extravagant, yearning, questioning artist's <lb />face, </l>
                    <l>The ugly face of some beautiful Soul, the handsome <lb />detested or despised
                        face, </l>
                    <l>The sacred faces of infants, the illuminated face of the <lb />mother of many
                        children, </l>
                    <l>The face of an amour, the face of veneration,</l>
                    <l>The face as of a dream, the face of an immobile rock,</l>
                    <l>The face withdrawn of its good and bad, a castrated <lb />face, </l>
                    <l>A wild hawk, his wings clipped by the clipper,</l>
                    <l>A stallion that yielded at last to the thongs and knife <lb />of the gelder.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf144r" type="recto" n="279" facs="nyp.00015.287" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>Sauntering <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">the</del>
                        </restore> pavement, or crossing the ceaseless <lb />ferry, <del
                            type="overstrike">here then are faces <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></del><add type="unmarked" place="inline"><del type="overstrike"
                                >&#8212;such</del><add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">faces
                                &#38;</add> faces!</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>I see them and complain not, and am content with <lb />all. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>Do you suppose I could be content with all; if I <lb />thought them their own
                        finale? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>This now is too lamentable a face for a man,</l>
                    <l>Some abject louse, asking leave to be&#8212;cringing for it,</l>
                    <l>Some milk-nosed maggot, blessing what lets it wrig to <lb />its hole. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>This face is a dog's snout <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">sniffling</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">sniffing</add>
                        </subst> for garbage;</l>
                    <l>Snakes nest in that mouth&#8212;I hear the sibilant threat.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>This face is a haze more chill than the arctic sea,</l>
                    <l>Its sleepy and wobbling icebergs crunch as they go.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                    <l>This is a face of bitter herbs&#8212;this an emetic&#8212;they
                        <lb />need no label <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And more of the drug-shelf, laudanum, caoutchouc, <lb />or hog's-lard. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>This face is an epilepsy, its wordless tongue gives out <lb />the unearthly
                        cry, </l>
                    <l>Its veins down the neck distend, its eyes roll till they <lb />show nothing
                        but their whites, </l>
                    <l>Its teeth grit, the palms of the hands are cut by the <lb />turned-in nails<subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>The man falls struggling and foaming to the ground <lb />while he speculates
                        well. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                    <l>This face is bitten by vermin and worms,</l>
                    <l>And this is some murderer's knife with a half-pulled <lb />scabbard. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf144v" type="verso" n="280" facs="nyp.00015.288" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>This face owes to the sexton his dismalest fee,</l>
                    <l>In unceasing death-bell tolls there.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>Those then are really men&#8212;the bosses and tufts of <lb />the great
                        round globe! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>Features of my equals, would you trick me with your <lb /><restore
                            rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">creased and</del>
                        </restore> cadaverous march? </l>
                    <l>Well, you cannot trick me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <l>I see your rounded <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">and</add>
                        never-erased flow,</l>
                    <l>I see neath the rims of your haggard and mean <choice>
                            <orig>dis-<lb />guises.</orig>
                            <reg>disguises<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                    <l>Splay and twist as you like&#8212;poke with the tangling <lb />fores of
                        fishes or rats <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>You'll be unmuzzled, you certainly will.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>I saw the face of the most smeared and slobbering <lb />idiot they had at the
                        asylum, </l>
                    <l>And I knew for my consolation what they knew not <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">And</del>
                            <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">And</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> I knew of the agents that emptied and broke my <lb />brother, </l>
                    <l>The same wait to clear the rubbish from the fallen <lb />tenement<subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>And I shall look again in a score or two of ages,</l>
                    <l>And I shall meet the real landlord, perfect and <choice>
                            <orig>un-<lb />harmed,</orig>
                            <reg>unharmed<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> every inch as good as myself. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>The Lord advances, and yet advances<subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Always the shadow in front&#8212;always the reached <lb />hand bringing
                        up the laggards. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                    <l>Out of this face emerge banners and horses&#8212;O <lb />superb! I see
                        what is coming, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf145r" type="recto" n="281" facs="nyp.00015.289" />
                    <l>I see the high pioneer-caps&#8212;I see the staves of <lb />runners
                        clearing the way, </l>
                    <l>I hear victorious drums.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>This face is a life-boat <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>This is the face commanding and bearded, it asks no <lb />odds of the rest <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>This face is flavored fruit, ready for eating<subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>This face of a healthy honest boy is the program<del type="overstrike"
                            >me</del> of <lb />all good. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                    <l>These faces bear testimony slumbering or awake,</l>
                    <l>They show their descent from the Master himself.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                    <l>Off the word I have spoken I except not one&#8212;red, <lb />white,
                        black, are all deific, </l>
                    <l>In each house is the ovum&#8212;it comes forth after a <lb />thousand
                        years. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                    <l>Spots or cracks at the windows do not disturb me,</l>
                    <l>Tall and sufficient stand behind, and make signs to <lb />me, </l>
                    <l>I read the promise, and patiently wait.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                    <l>This is a full-grown lily's face,</l>
                    <l>She speaks to the limber-hipp'd man near the garden <lb />pickets, </l>
                    <l><hi rend="italic">Come here,</hi> she blushingly cries&#8212;<hi
                            rend="italic">Come nigh to me,</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">limber-hipp'd man,</hi>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <hi rend="italic">and give me your finger and</hi>
                            <lb />
                            <hi rend="italic">thumb,</hi>
                        </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <hi rend="italic">Stand at my side till I lean as high as I can upon
                            you,</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <hi rend="italic">Fill me with albescent honey, bend down to me,</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l><hi rend="italic">Rub to me with your chafing beard, rub to my breast</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">and shoulders</hi>. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf145v" type="verso" n="282" facs="nyp.00015.290" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                    <l>The old face of the mother of many children!</l>
                    <l>Whist! I am fully content.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                    <l>Lull <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d and late is the smoke of the First Day <lb />morning, </l>
                    <l>It hangs low over the rows of trees by the fences,</l>
                    <l>It hangs thin by the sassafras, the wild-cherry, and <lb />the cat-brier
                        under them. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                    <l>I saw the rich ladies in full dress at the soiree,</l>
                    <l>I heard what the singers were singing so long,</l>
                    <l>Heard who sprang in crimson youth from the white <lb />froth and the
                        water-blue. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                    <l>Behold a woman!</l>
                    <l>She looks out from her quaker cap&#8212;her face is <lb />clearer and
                        more beautiful than the sky. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                    <l>She sits in an arm-chair, under the shaded porch of <lb />the farm-house, </l>
                    <l>The sun just shines on her old white head.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                    <l>Her ample gown is of cream-hued linen,</l>
                    <l>Her grand-sons raised the flax, and her <choice>
                            <orig>grand-<lb />daughters</orig>
                            <reg>granddaughters<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> spun it with the distaff and the <lb />wheel. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                    <l>The melodious character of the earth,</l>
                    <l>The finish beyond which philosophy cannot go, and <lb />does not wish to go, </l>
                    <l>The justified mother of men.</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf146r" type="recto" n="283" facs="nyp.00015.291" />
            <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">? tr to Drum Taps</note>
            <del type="erasure">
                <note type="authorial" place="margintop">
                    <p>1776 72 = 48</p>
                </note>
            </del>
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01555">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00144" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">EUROPE, The 72d and 73d Years of <note type="authorial"
                        >?</note><add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">1848</add>These
                    States.</head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>S<hi rend="smallcaps">UDDENLY</hi> out of its stale and drowsy lair, the lair
                        of <lb />slaves, </l>
                    <l>Like lightning it le'pt forth, half startled at itself,</l>
                    <l>Its feet upon the ashes and the rags&#8212;its hands tight <lb />to the
                        throats of kings. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Ah!</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>hope and faith!</l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Ah!</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> aching close of exiled patriots' lives!</l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Ah!</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> many a sickened heart!</l>
                    <l>Turn back unto this day, and make yourselves <lb />afresh. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>And you, paid to defile the People! you liars, mark!</l>
                    <l>Not for numberless agonies, murders, lusts,</l>
                    <l>For court thieving in its manifold mean forms, <choice>
                            <orig>worm-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>worming<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> from his simplicity the poor man's wages, </l>
                    <l>For many a promise sworn by royal lips, and broken, <lb />and laughed at in
                        the breaking, </l>
                    <l>Then in their power, not for all these did the blows <lb />strike revenge, or
                        the heads of the nobles fall; </l>
                    <l>The People scorned the ferocity of kings.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>But the sweetness of mercy brew <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                        </subst>d bitter destruction, <lb />and the frightened rulers come back <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf146v" type="verso" n="284" facs="nyp.00015.292" />
                    <l>Each comes in state with his train&#8212;hangman, priest,
                        <lb />tax-gatherer, </l>
                    <l>Soldier, lawyer, lords, jailers, and sycophants.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>Yet behind all, hovering, stealing&#8212;lo, a Shape,</l>
                    <l>Vague as the night, draped interminably, head<add type="insertion"
                            place="marginright">,</add> front <lb />and form, in scarlet folds, </l>
                    <l>Whose face and eyes none may see,</l>
                    <l>Out of its robes only this&#8212;the red robes, lifted by <lb />the arm, </l>
                    <l>One finger crook'd, pointed high over the top, like <lb />the head of a snake
                        appears. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>Meanwhile, corpses lie in new-made graves&#8212;bloody <lb />corpses of
                        young men; </l>
                    <l>The rope of the gibbet hangs heavily, the bullets of <lb />princes are
                        flying, the creatures of power laugh <lb />aloud, </l>
                    <l>And all these things bear fruits&#8212;and they are good.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                    <l>Those corpses of young men,</l>
                    <l>Those martyrs that hang from the gibbets&#8212;those <lb />hearts pierced
                        by the gray lead, </l>
                    <l>Cold and motionless as they seem, live elsewhere with <lb />unslaughter'd
                        vitality. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>They live in other young men, O kings!</l>
                    <l>They live in brothers, again ready to defy you!</l>
                    <l>They were purified by death&#8212;they were taught and <lb />exalted.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                    <l>Not a grave of the murder <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d for freedom, but grows <lb />seed for freedom, in its turn to bear
                        seed, </l>
                    <l>Which the winds carry afar and re-sow, and the rains <lb />and the snows
                        nourish. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf147r" type="recto" n="285" facs="nyp.00015.293" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>Not a disembodied spirit can the weapons of tyrants <lb />let loose, </l>
                    <l>But it stalks invisibly over the earth, whispering, <lb />counselling,
                        cautioning. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>Liberty! let others despair of you!<add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >&#8212;</add>I never despair <lb />of you. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>Is the house shut? Is the master away?</l>
                    <l>Nevertheless be ready&#8212;be not weary of watching,</l>
                    <l>He will soon return&#8212;his messengers come anon.</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf147v" type="verso" n="286" facs="nyp.00015.294" />
            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
            <del type="edit">
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01556">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00413" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">THOUGHT.</head>
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">F</hi> Public Opinion,</l>
                    <l>Of a calm and cool fiat, sooner or later, (How <choice>
                            <orig>im-<lb />passive!</orig>
                            <reg>impassive<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> How certain and final!) </l>
                    <l>Of the President with pale face asking secretly to <lb />himself, <hi
                            rend="italic">What will the people say at last?</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l>Of the frivolous Judge&#8212;Of the corrupt Congressman, <lb />Governor,
                        Mayor&#8212;Of such as these, standing <lb />helpless and exposed; </l>
                    <l>Of the mumbling and screaming priest&#8212;(soon, soon <lb />deserted;) </l>
                    <l>Of the lessening, year by year, of venerableness, and <lb />of the dicta of
                        officers, statutes, pulpits, schools, </l>
                    <l>Of the rising forever taller and stronger and broader, <lb />of the
                        intuitions of men and women, and of <choice>
                            <orig>self-<lb />esteem,</orig>
                            <reg>selfesteem<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and of personality; </l>
                    <l>Of the New World&#8212;Of the Democracies, resplendent, <lb />en-masse, </l>
                    <l>Of the conformity of politics, armies, navies, to them <lb />and to me, </l>
                    <l>Of the shining sun by them&#8212;Of the inherent light, <lb />greater
                        than the rest, </l>
                    <l>Of the envelopment of all by them, and of the effusion <lb />of all from
                        them. </l>
                </lg>
            </del>
            <pb xml:id="leaf148r" type="recto" n="287" facs="nyp.00015.295" />
            <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">Enfans Adam all satisfactory Jan
                '65</note>
            <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">piece to lead one
                livraison</note>
            <lg type="cluster" xml:id="ppp.01557">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00049" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Enfans d'Adam.</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Children of Adam</add>
                    </subst>
                </head>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01558">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00050" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">1.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear" rend="underline">To the
                                garden, the world. <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">anew
                                    ascending</add></add>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">Pioneers</note>
                    <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">O</hi> the garden, the world, anew ascending,</l>
                    <l>Potent mates, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">or these my </add>
                        </del>daughters, sons, preluding,</l>
                    <l>The love, the life of their bodies, meaning and being,</l>
                    <l>Curious, here behold my resurrection, after slumber,</l>
                    <l>The revolving cycles, in their wide sweep, having <lb />brought me again, </l>
                    <l>Amorous, mature&#8212;all beautiful to me&#8212;all <choice>
                            <orig>won-<lb />drous,</orig>
                            <reg>wondrous<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>My limbs, and the quivering fire that ever plays</l>
                    <l>through them, for reasons, most wondrous;</l>
                    <l>Existing, I peer and penetrate still,</l>
                    <l>Content with the present&#8212;content with the past,</l>
                    <l>By my side, or back of me, Eve following,</l>
                    <l>Or in front, and I following her just the same.</l>
                </lg>
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                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00051" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">2.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Song of Procreation.</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">From that of
                                        myself, without which I were nothing</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">From
                                    pent&#8209;up aching rivers</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">satisfactory Jan
                        '65</note>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>From pent&#8209;up aching rivers</l>
                    </add>
                    <l>F<hi rend="smallcaps">ROM</hi> that of myself, without which I were
                        nothing,</l>
                    <l>From what I am determined to make illustrious, even <lb />if I stand sole
                        among men, </l>
                    <l>From my own voice resonant&#8212;singing the phallus,</l>
                    <l>Singing the song of procreation,</l>
                    <l>Singing the need of superb children, and therein <lb />superb grown people, </l>
                    <l>Singing the muscular urge and the blending,</l>
                    <l>Singing the bedfellow's song, (O resistless yearning!</l>
                    <l>O for any and each, the body correlative attracting!</l>
                    <l>O for you, whoever you are, <del type="overstrike">your correlative
                            body!</del>
                        <lb />O it, more than all else, you delighting!) </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike"><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#8212;</add>From the pent up rivers of myself,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>From the hungry gnaw
                        that eats me night and day,</l>
                    <l>From native moments&#8212;from bashful pains&#8212;<choice>
                            <orig>sing-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>singing<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> them, </l>
                    <l>Singing something yet unfound, though I have <choice>
                            <orig>dili-<lb />gently</orig>
                            <reg>diligently<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> sought it, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ten thousand</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">many a long</add>
                        </subst> year<del type="overstrike">s</del>, </l>
                    <l>Singing the true song of the Soul, fitful, at random,</l>
                    <l>Singing what, to the Soul, entirely redeemed her, the <lb />faithful one,
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">even</add> the prostitute, who
                        detained me when <lb />I went to the city, </l>
                    <l>Singing the song of prostitutes;</l>
                    <l>Renascent with grossest Nature, or among animals,</l>
                    <l>Of that&#8212;of them, and what goes with them, my <lb />poems informing, </l>
                    <l>Of the smell of apples and lemons&#8212;of the pairing <lb />of birds, </l>
                    <l>Of the wet of woods&#8212;of the lapping of waves,</l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf149r" type="recto" n="289" facs="nyp.00015.297" />
                    <l>Of the mad pushes of waves upon the land&#8212;I them <lb />chanting, </l>
                    <l>The overture lightly sounding&#8212;the strain <choice>
                            <orig>antici-<lb />pating,</orig>
                            <reg>anticipating<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>The welcome nearness&#8212;the sight of the perfect <lb />body, </l>
                    <l>The swimmer swimming naked in the bath, or <choice>
                            <orig>mo-<lb />tionless</orig>
                            <reg>motionless<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> on his back lying and floating, </l>
                    <l>The female form approaching&#8212;I, pensive, love-flesh <lb />tremulous,
                        aching; </l>
                    <l>The slave's body for sale&#8212;I, sternly, with harsh <lb />voice,
                        auctioneering, </l>
                    <l>The divine list, for myself or you, or for any one, <lb />making, </l>
                    <l>The face&#8212;the limbs&#8212;the index from head to foot, <lb />and
                        what it arouses, </l>
                    <l>The mystic deliria&#8212;the madness amorous&#8212;the utter
                        <lb />abandonment, </l>
                    <l>(Hark, close and still, what I now whisper to you,</l>
                    <l><add type="edit" rend="underline">I love you</add>&#8212;O you entirely
                        possess me,</l>
                    <l>O I wish that you and I escape from the rest, and go <lb />utterly
                        off&#8212;O free and lawless, </l>
                    <l>Two hawks in the air&#8212;two fishes swimming in the <lb />sea<add
                            type="insertion" place="marginleft">,</add> not more lawless than we;) </l>
                    <l>The furious storm through me careering&#8212;I <choice>
                            <orig>passion-<lb />ately</orig>
                            <reg>passionately<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> trembling, </l>
                    <l>The oath of the <del type="overstrike">inseparableness of</del> two
                        together&#8212;of <lb />the woman that loves me, and whom I love more
                        <lb />than my life&#8212; <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">T</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst>hat oath swearing, </l>
                    <l>(O I willingly stake all, <add type="edit" rend="underline">for
                        you</add>!</l>
                    <l>O let me be lost, if it must be so!</l>
                    <l>O you and I&#8212;what is it to us what the rest do or <lb />think? </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf149v" type="verso" n="290" facs="nyp.00015.298" />
                    <l>What is all else to us? only that we enjoy each other, <lb />and exhaust each
                        other, if it must be so;) </l>
                    <l>From the master&#8212;the pilot I yield the vessel to,</l>
                    <l>The general commanding me, commanding all&#8212;from <lb />him permission
                        taking, </l>
                    <l>From time the program<del type="overstrike">me</del> hastening, (I have
                        loiter <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d <lb />too long, as it is;) </l>
                    <l>From sex&#8212;From the warp and from the woof,</l>
                    <l>(To talk to the perfect girl who understands<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">me<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >,</add></del><del type="overstrike">&#8212;the <lb />girl of The
                            States,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>To waft to her these from my own lips&#8212;to effuse <lb />them from my
                        own body;) </l>
                    <l>From privacy&#8212;From frequent repinings alone,</l>
                    <l>From plenty of persons near, and yet the right person <lb />not near, </l>
                    <l>From the soft sliding of hands over me, and thrusting <lb />of fingers
                        through my hair and beard, </l>
                    <l>From the long-sustain <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d kiss upon the mouth or <lb />bosom, </l>
                    <l>From the close pressure that makes me or any man <lb />drunk, fainting with
                        excess, </l>
                    <l>From what the divine husband knows&#8212;from the <lb />work of
                        fatherhood, </l>
                    <l>From exultation, victory, and relief&#8212;from the <choice>
                            <orig>bed-<lb />fellow's</orig>
                            <reg>bedfellow<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> embrace in the night, </l>
                    <l>From the <del type="overstrike">act-</del>poems of eyes, hands, hips, and
                        bosoms,</l>
                    <l>From the cling of the trembling arm,</l>
                    <l>From the bending curve and the clinch,</l>
                    <l>From side by side, the pliant coverlid off <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">&#8209;</add>throwing,</l>
                    <l>From the one so unwilling to have me leave&#8212;and <lb />me just as
                        unwilling to leave, </l>
                    <l>(Yet a moment, O tender waiter, and I return,)</l>
                    <l>From the hour of shining stars and dropping dews,</l>
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                    <l>From the night, a moment, I, emerging, flitting out,</l>
                    <l>Celebrate you, <add type="insertion" place="margintop">act
                            divine&#8212;and you</add>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="8" rend="dotted">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">enfans</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">daughters</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">children</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="7" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">children</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> prepared for,</l>
                    <l>And you, stalwart loins.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01560">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00052" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">3.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">
                        <head type="main-authorial">A sing the body electric.</head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>I sing the body electric, <del type="overstrike">with love</del></l>
                        </add>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">O <hi rend="smallcaps">MY</hi> children! O
                                mates!</del>
                        </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">O the bodies of you, and of all men and
                                women,</del>
                            <lb /><note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;
                                &#9759;</note>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="1">The <del type="overstrike">bodies</del>
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">armies</add> of
                                        those I love</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="marginbot">&#42; The <del
                                        type="overstrike">army</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">armies</add> of those I
                                    love engirth me &#38; I engirth them.</add>
                            </subst> engirth me, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginright">their bodies engirth
                                    me,</add>
                            </del> and I engirth them, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">O</del> they will not let me off, <del
                                type="overstrike">nor I them,</del> till I go with <lb />them,
                            respond to them, </l>
                        <l>And <del type="overstrike">respond to the contact of them, and</del>
                            discorrupt <lb />them, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>and charge them <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">full</add> with the charge of the <lb />Soul.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Was it doubted if those who corrupt their own bodies <lb />conceal
                            themselves? </l>
                        <l>And if those who defile the living are as bad as they <lb />who defile
                            the dead? </l>
                        <l>And if the body does not do as much as the Soul?</l>
                        <l>And if the body were not the Soul, what is the Soul?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>The love of the body of man or woman balks account <lb />&#8212;the
                            body itself balks account, </l>
                        <l>That of the male is perfect, and that of the female is <lb />perfect.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>The expression of the face balks account,</l>
                        <l>But the expression of a well made man appears not <lb />only in his face, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf150v" type="verso" n="292" facs="nyp.00015.300" />
                        <l>It is in his limbs and joints also, it is curiously in the <lb />joints
                            of his hips and wrists, </l>
                        <l>It is in his walk, the carriage of his neck, the flex <lb />of his waist
                            and knees&#8212;dress does not hide <lb />him, </l>
                        <l>The strong, sweet, supple quality he has, strikes <lb />through the
                            cotton and flannel, </l>
                        <l>To see him pass conveys as much as the best poem, <lb />perhaps more, </l>
                        <l>You linger to see his back, and the back of his neck <lb />and
                            shoulder-side. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>The sprawl and fulness of babes, the bosoms and <lb />heads of women, the
                            folds of their dress, <add type="insertion" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add> their <lb />style as we pass in the street, the
                            contour of their <lb />shape downwards, </l>
                        <l>The swimmer naked in the swimming bath, seen as <lb />he swims through
                            the transparent green-shine, <del type="overstrike">or</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">&#182; As he</add>
                            <lb />lies with his face up, and rolls silently to and fro <lb />in the
                            heave of the water <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The bending forward and backward of rowers in <choice><orig>row-<lb />boats</orig><reg>rowboats<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;the horseman in his saddle, </l>
                        <l>Girls, mothers, house-keepers, in all their <choice>
                                <orig>perform-<lb />ances,</orig>
                                <reg>performances<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>The group of laborers seated at noon-time with their <lb />open
                            dinner-kettles, and their wives waiting, </l>
                        <l>The female soothing a child&#8212;the farmer's daughter <lb />in the
                            garden or cow-yard, </l>
                        <l>The young fellow hoeing corn&#8212;the sleigh-driver <lb />guiding
                            his six horses through the crowd, </l>
                        <l>The wrestle of wrestlers, two apprentice-boys, quite <lb />grown, lusty,
                            good-natured, <add type="insertion" place="marginright">&#182;</add>
                            native-born, out on <lb />the vacant lot at sun-down, after work, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf151r" type="recto" n="293" facs="nyp.00015.301" />
                        <l>The coats and caps thrown down, the embrace of love <lb />and resistance, </l>
                        <l>The upper-hold and under-hold, the hair rumpled <lb />over and blinding
                            the eyes; </l>
                        <l>The march of firemen <del type="overstrike">in their own costumes</del>,
                            the <lb />play of masculine muscle through clean-setting <lb />trousers
                            and waist-straps, </l>
                        <l>The slow return from the fire, the pause when the <lb />bell strikes
                            suddenly again, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </subst> the listening on <lb />the alert,<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#8212;</add><anchor xml:id="t54" />
                        </l>
                        <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t54">The natural, perfect, varied
                                attitudes&#8212;</transpose><add type="insertion" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>the bent head, <lb />the curved neck, and the
                            counting, </l>
                        <l>Such-like I love&#8212;I loosen myself, pass freely, am at <lb />the
                            mother's breast with the little child, </l>
                        <l>Swim with the swimmers, wrestle with wrestlers, <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">m</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">M</add>
                            </subst>arch in line with the firemen, <del type="overstrike">and</del>
                            pause, listen, <lb />and count. </l>
                    </lg>
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                        <l>I knew <del type="overstrike">a man,</del><anchor xml:id="t55" /></l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">He was</del>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t55">a common
                                farmer&#8212;</transpose><del type="overstrike">he was</del> the
                            father of five <lb />sons, </l>
                        <l>And in them <del type="overstrike">were</del> the fathers of
                            sons&#8212;and in them <lb /><del type="overstrike">were</del> the
                            fathers of sons. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>This man was of wonderful vigor, calmness, beauty <lb />of person, </l>
                        <l>The shape of his head, the richness and breadth of <lb />his manners,
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the pale yellow
                            and white of his <lb />hair and beard, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>the immeasurable meaning <lb />of his black eyes, <add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">as they beam'd forth,</add></l>
                        <l>These I used to go and visit him to see&#8212;he was wise <lb />also <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
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                        <l>He was six feet tall <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>
                            </subst>he was over eighty years old<del type="overstrike"
                                >&#8212;</del><lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">h</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">H</add>
                            </subst>is sons were massive, clean, bearded, tan-faced, <lb /><add
                                type="insertion" place="marginright">and</add> handsome <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>They and his daughters loved him&#8212;all who saw him <lb />loved
                            him <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>They did not love <del type="overstrike">him</del> by
                            allowance&#8212;they loved him <lb />with personal love; </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>He drank water
                            only&#8212;the blood show <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                            </subst>d like scarlet <lb />through the clear-brown skin of his face <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrke">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>He was a frequent gunner and fisher&#8212;he sailed <lb />his boat
                            himself <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>he had a fine one presented <lb />to him by a ship-joiner <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>he had fowling-<lb />pieces, presented to him by men that loved
                            <lb />him; </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>When he went with
                            his five sons and many <choice>
                                <orig>grand-<lb />sons</orig>
                                <reg>grandsons<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> to hunt or fish, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>you would pick him out <lb />as the most beautiful
                            and vigorous of the <lb />gang <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>You would wish long and long to be with him&#8212;<del
                                type="overstrike">you</del>
                            <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add><del
                                type="overstrike">would wish</del> to sit by him in the boat, that
                            you <lb />and he might touch <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="interlinear">personally</add>
                            </del> each other. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>I have perceived that to be with those I like is <lb />enough <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>To stop in company with the rest at evening is <lb />enough <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>To be surrounded by beautiful, curious, breathing, <lb />laughing flesh
                            is enough <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>To <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">personally</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">pass among them, or</del> touch any one, or rest
                            my <lb />arm ever so lightly round his or her neck for a
                            <lb />moment&#8212;what is this, then? </l>
                        <l>I do not ask any more delight&#8212;I swim in it, as in <lb />a sea.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf152r" type="recto" n="295" facs="nyp.00015.303" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>There is something in staying close to men and <lb />women, and looking
                            on them, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and in the
                            contact <lb />and odor of them, that pleases the Soul well <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>All things please the Soul&#8212;but these please the <lb />Soul
                            well. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <l>This is the female form,</l>
                        <l>A divine nimbus exhales from it from head to foot,</l>
                        <l>It attracts with fierce undeniable attraction,</l>
                        <l>I am drawn by its breath as if I were no more than <lb />a helpless vapor <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>all falls aside but myself <lb />and it <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>Books, art, religion, time, the visible and solid earth, <lb />the
                            atmosphere and the clouds, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add><del type="overstrike">and</del> what was
                            <lb />expected of heaven or feared of hell, are now <lb />consumed <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>Mad filaments, ungovernable shoots <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">out of it,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add>
                            </subst>play the <lb />response likewise ungovernable <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>Hair, bosom, hips, bend of legs, negligent falling <lb />hands, all
                            diffused&#8212;mine too diffused <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>Ebb stung by the flow, and flow stung by the ebb&#8212;
                            <lb />love-flesh swelling and deliciously aching, </l>
                        <l>Limitless limpid jets of love hot and enormous, <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">q</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">Q</add>
                            </subst>uivering jelly of love, white-blow and delirious <lb />juice, </l>
                        <l>Bridegroom-night of love, working surely and softly <lb />into the
                            prostrate dawn <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>Undulating into the willing and yielding day,</l>
                        <l>Lost in the cleave of the clasping and sweet-fleshed <lb />day. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">This</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Such</add>
                            </subst> is the nucleus&#8212;after the child is born of
                            <lb />woman, the man is born of woman <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf152v" type="verso" n="296" facs="nyp.00015.304" />
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">This</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Such</add>
                            </subst> is the bath of birth&#8212; <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">this is</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">such</add>
                            </subst> the merge of small <lb />and large, and the outlet again. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                        <l>Be not ashamed, women&#8212;your privilege encloses <lb />the rest,
                            and is the exit of the rest, </l>
                        <l>You are the gates of the body, and you are the gates <lb />of the Soul.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <l>The female contains all qualities, and tempers them <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>&#8212; <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">s</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">S</add>
                            </subst>he is in her place, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and moves</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">moving</add>
                            </subst> with perfect <lb />balance <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>She is all things duly veiled&#8212;she is both passive and
                            <lb />active, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">She is</del> to conceive daughters as well as
                            sons, and sons <lb />as well as daughters. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                        <l>As I see my Soul reflected in nature,</l>
                        <l>As I see through a mist, one with inexpressible <choice>
                                <orig>com-<lb />pleteness</orig>
                                <reg>completeness<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and beauty, </l>
                        <l>See the bent head and arms folded over the breast&#8212; <lb />the
                            female I see. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                        <l>The male is not less the Soul, nor more&#8212;he too is in <lb />his
                            place <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>He too is all qualities&#8212;he is action and power <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The flush of the known universe is in him <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>Scorn becomes him well, and appetite and defiance <lb />become him well <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>The <del type="overstrike">wildest largest</del> passions, bliss that is
                            utmost, <lb />sorrow <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">that is</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </subst> utmost, become him well&#8212;pride <lb />is for him, </l>
                        <l>The full-spread pride of man is calming and excellent <lb />to <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="infralinear">my</add>
                            </subst> Soul <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf153r" type="recto" n="297" facs="nyp.00015.305" />
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">16.</note>
                        <l>Knowledge becomes him&#8212;he likes it always&#8212;he
                            <lb />brings everything to the test of himself <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>Whatever the survey, whatever the sea and the sail, <lb />he strikes
                            soundings at last only here <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Where else does he strike
                            soundings, except here?<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                        <l>The man's body is sacred, and the woman's body is <lb />sacred, </l>
                        <l>No matter who it is, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">I
                                say</add>it is sacred;</l>
                        <l>Is it a slave? Is it one of the dull-faced immigrants <lb />just landed
                            on the wharf? </l>
                        <l>Each belongs here or anywhere just as much as the
                            <lb />well-off&#8212;just as much as you, </l>
                        <l>Each has his or her place in the procession.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                        <l>All is a procession <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <del seq="3">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;<gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />through Time,</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="overwrite" place="over">(<del type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">lo!</add>
                                    </del>the pageant is moving through Time,)</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The universe is a procession, with measured and <lb />beautiful motion.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                        <l>Do you know so much yourself, that you call the slave <lb />or the
                            dull-face ignorant? </l>
                        <l>Do you suppose you have a right to a good sight, and <lb />he or she has
                            no right to a sight? </l>
                        <l>Do you think matter has cohered together from its <lb />diffused float <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>and the soil is on the surface, <lb />and water runs, and
                            vegetation sprouts, </l>
                        <l>For you only, and not for him and her?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                        <l>A man's <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">B</add>
                            </subst>ody at auction!</l>
                        <l>I help the auctioneer&#8212;<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >(</add><del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I talk to</add>
                            </del> the sloven does not half know <lb />his business.<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                        <l>Gentlemen, look on this wonder!</l>
                        <l>Whatever the bids of the bidders, they cannot be high <lb />enough for it <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf153v" type="verso" n="298" facs="nyp.00015.306" />
                        <l>For it the globe lay preparing quintillions of years, <lb />without one
                            animal or plant, </l>
                        <l>For it the revolving cycles truly and steadily roll <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                            </subst>d.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">In this head the all-baffling brain,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>In it <del type="overstrike">and below it, the making of</del> the
                            attributes of <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >the</add><lb />heroes<del type="overstrike">.</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">that <del type="overstrike"
                                    >only</del> poets understand.</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                        <l>Examine these limbs, red, black, or white&#8212;they are <lb />so
                            cunning in tendon and nerve, </l>
                        <l>They shall be stript, that you may see them.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                        <l>Exquisite senses, life-lit eyes, pluck, volition,</l>
                        <l>Flakes of breast-muscle, pliant back-bone and neck, <lb />flesh not
                            flabby, good-sized arms and legs, </l>
                        <l>And wonders within there yet.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                        <l>Within there runs blood,</l>
                        <l>The same old blood!<anchor xml:id="t56" /></l>
                        <l>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t56">The same red-running
                                blood!</transpose>
                        </l>
                        <l>There swells and jets a heart&#8212;there all passions,
                            <lb />desires, reachings, aspirations <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>Do you think they are not there because they are <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">not <lb />expressed</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">dumb</add>
                            </subst> in <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">the</add> parlors
                            and lecture-rooms? <lb /></l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                        <l>This is not only one man&#8212;this is the father of those <lb />who
                            shall be fathers in their turns <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>In him the start of populous states and rich republics <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>Of him countless immortal lives, with countless <choice>
                                <orig>em-<lb />bodiments</orig>
                                <reg>embodiments<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and enjoyments. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>How do you know who shall come from the offspring <lb />of his
                                offspring through the centuries? </l>
                        </del>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf154r" type="recto" n="299" facs="nyp.00015.307" />
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>Who might you find you have come from yourself, if <lb />you could
                                trace back through the centuries? </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                        <l>A woman's <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">B</add>
                            </subst>ody at auction!</l>
                        <l>She too is not only herself&#8212;she is the teeming <lb />mother of
                            mothers, </l>
                        <l>She is the bearer of them that shall grow and be <lb />mates to the
                            mothers. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                            <l>Her daughters, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">or their daughters'
                                        daughters&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and theirs
                                        again&#8212;</add>
                                </subst>who <lb />knows who shall mate with them? </l>
                            <l>Who knows through the centuries what heroes may <lb />come from them?
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                            <l>In them, and of them, <del type="overstrike">natal</del> love <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </subst>in them that <lb />divine mystery, the same old beautiful
                                mystery. </l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">The mystery of love,
                                    contained in sex, which conta</add>
                            </del>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                        <l>Have you ever loved the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">B</add>
                            </subst>ody of a woman?</l>
                        <l>Have you ever loved the <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">B</add>
                            </subst>ody of a man?</l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">Your father&#8212;where is your father?</del>
                        </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Your mother&#8212;is she living? have you been much <lb />with
                                her? and has she been much with you? </l>
                        </del>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Do you not see that th <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">o</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">o</add>
                                    </subst>se are exactly the same to all, <lb />in all nations and
                                    times, all over the earth? </l>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                        <l>If any thing is sacred, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the human body is</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><del
                                        type="overstrike">that</del> those are</add>
                            </subst> sacred,</l>
                        <l>And the glory and sweet of a man, is the token of <lb />manhood
                            untainted, </l>
                        <l>And in man or woman, a clean, strong, firm-fibred <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">B</add>
                            </subst>ody, is beautiful as the most beautiful face. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                        <l>Have you seen the fool that corrupted his own live <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">B</add>
                            </subst>ody? or the fool that corrupted her own live <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">B</add>
                            </subst>ody? </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf154v" type="verso" n="300" facs="nyp.00015.308" />
                        <l>For they do not conceal themselves, and cannot <choice>
                                <orig>con-<lb />ceal</orig>
                                <reg>conceal<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> themselves. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                        <l>O my <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">B</add>
                            </subst>ody! <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">(my Soul's
                                identity!)</add>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>I dare not desert
                            the likes of you <del type="overstrike">in <lb />other men and
                                women,</del>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">nor the likes of the parts <lb />of you;
                                </del>
                            </restore></l>
                        <l>I believe the likes of you are to stand or fall with the <lb />likes of
                            the Soul, (and that they are the Soul,) <lb />I believe the likes of you
                            shall stand or fall with my <lb />poems&#8212;and that they are
                            poems, </l>
                        <l>Man's, woman's, child's, youth's, wife's, husband's, <lb />mother's,
                            father's, young man's, young woman's <lb />poems, </l>
                        <l>Head, neck, hair, ears, drop and tympan of the ears,</l>
                        <l>Eyes, eye-fringes, iris of the eye, eye-brows, and the <lb />waking or
                            sleeping of the lids, </l>
                        <l>Mouth, tongue, lips, teeth, roof of the mouth, jaws, <lb />and the
                            jaw-hinges, </l>
                        <l>Nose, nostrils of the nose, and the partition,</l>
                        <l>Cheeks, temples, forehead, chin, throat, back of the <lb />neck,
                            neck-slue, </l>
                        <l>Strong shoulders, manly beard, <del type="overstrike">scapula, <choice><orig>hind-shoul-<lb />ders,</orig><reg>hind-shoulders,<lb/></reg></choice></del> and the
                            ample side-round of the chest, </l>
                        <l>Upper-arm, arm-pit, elbow-socket, lower-arm, arm-<lb />sinews, arm-bones, </l>
                        <l>Wrist and wrist-joints, hand, palm, knuckles, thumb, <lb />fore-finger,
                            finger-balls, finger-joints, finger-nails, </l>
                        <l>Broad breast-front, curling hair of the breast, breast-<lb />bone,
                            breast-side, </l>
                        <l>Ribs, belly, back-bone, joints of the back-bone,</l>
                        <l>Hips, hip-sockets, hip-strength, inward and outward <lb />round,
                            man-balls, man-root, </l>
                        <l>Strong set of thighs, well carrying the trunk above,</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf155r" type="recto" n="301" facs="nyp.00015.309" />
                        <l>Leg-fibres, knee, knee-pan, upper-leg, under-leg,</l>
                        <l>Ankles, instep, foot-ball, toes, toe-joints, the heel,</l>
                        <l>All attitudes, all the shapeliness, all the belongings of <lb /><del
                                type="overstrike">my or your body, or of</del> any one's <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">B</add>
                            </subst>ody, male or <lb />female, </l>
                        <l>The lung-sponges, the stomach-sac, the bowels sweet <lb />and clean, </l>
                        <l>The brain in its folds inside the skull-frame,</l>
                        <l>Sympathies, heart-valves, palate-valves, sexuality, <choice>
                                <orig>ma-<lb />ternity,</orig>
                                <reg>maternity<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>Womanhood, and all that is a woman&#8212;and the man <lb />that comes
                            from woman, </l>
                        <l>The womb, the teats, nipples, breast-milk, tears, <choice><orig>laugh-<lb />ter,</orig><reg>laughter,<lb/></reg></choice> <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add>weeping, love-looks, love-perturbations and
                            <lb />risings, </l>
                        <l>The voice, articulation, language, whispering, <choice>
                                <orig>shout-<lb />ing</orig>
                                <reg>shouting<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> aloud, </l>
                        <l>Food, drink, pulse, digestion, sweat, sleep, walking, <lb />swimming, </l>
                        <l>Poise on the hips, leaping, reclining, embracing, arm-<lb />curving, and
                            tightening, </l>
                        <l>The continual changes of the flex of the mouth, and <lb />around the
                            eyes, </l>
                        <l>The skin, the sun-burnt shade, freckles, hair,</l>
                        <l>The curious sympathy one feels, when feeling with <lb />the hand the
                            naked <del type="overstrike">meat of his own body, or <lb />another
                                person's</del> body, </l>
                        <l>The circling rivers, the breath, and breathing it in <lb />and out, </l>
                        <l>The beauty of the waist, and thence of the hips, and <lb />thence
                            downward toward the knees, </l>
                        <l>The thin red jellies within you, or within me&#8212;the <lb />bones,
                            and the marrow in the bones, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf155v" type="verso" n="302" facs="nyp.00015.310" />
                        <l>The exquisite realization of health,</l>
                        <l>O I say now these are not the parts and poems of the <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">B</add>
                            </subst>ody only, but of the Soul, </l>
                        <l>O I say these are the Soul!</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01561">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00053" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">4.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /> waits</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="over">A woman America
                                    knows</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">satisfactory <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">Jan</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">July</add>
                        </subst> '65</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                <l>A woman america waits for you &#38; for</l>
                                <l>She <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /> lacks</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <l><restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">A <hi rend="smallcaps">WOMAN</hi></del>
                            </restore>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">America knows <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">(</add>
                                </subst>or shall yet know)</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">waits for me</del>&#8212;she contains all,
                            nothing is <lb />lacking, </l>
                        <l>Yet all were lacking, if sex were lacking <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">or the right man lacking.</add><del
                                type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">or if the <lb />moisture of the right man were
                                lacking.</del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l><del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">For all</add>
                            </del>Sex contains <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >reciprocates</add> all<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <anchor xml:id="t57" /></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t57"><add type="unmarked"
                                        place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>Bodies,
                                    Souls,</transpose>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                                </del>meanings, proofs, purities, delicacies, <lb />results,
                                promulgations, </l>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Songs, commands, health, pride, the maternal mystery, <lb />the
                                semitic milk, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>All hopes, benefactions, bestowals, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >spirit as well as flesh,</add></l>
                        <l>All the passions, loves, beauties, delights of the <lb />earth, </l>
                        <l>All the governments, judges, gods, followed persons <lb />of the earth, </l>
                        <l>These are contained in sex, as parts of itself, and <choice>
                                <orig>jus-<lb />tifications</orig>
                                <reg>justifications<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> of itself. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="overwrite" place="over">(This is <del
                                    type="overstrike">a</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my</add> chanson for
                                powerfuly <del type="overstrike">be</del>getting<del type="edit"
                                    >,</del><add type="insertion"><del type="overstrike"
                                        >&#38;</del> the fervor divine of sense;</add></add>
                        </subst>
                        <l>Without shame the man I like knows and avows the <lb />deliciousness of
                            his sex, <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#38; his power of
                                    begetting</add>
                            </del>
                        </l>
                        <l>Without shame the woman I like knows and avows <lb />hers.<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="3" type="hashmark">
                                <restore seq="2" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="hashmark">
                                        <l>
                                            <del type="overstrike">O I will fetch bully breeds of
                                                children yet!</del>
                                        </l>
                                        <l><del type="overstrike">
                                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">O</add>
                                            </del> I <del type="overstrike">will</del> dismiss
                                            myself from impassive women,</l>
                                        <l>I <del type="overstrike">will</del>
                                            <del type="overstrike">go</del>
                                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">come</add> stay
                                            with <del type="erasure">
                                                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">you who are
                                                  waiting</add>
                                            </del>
                                            <del type="overstrike">her who waits for me, and with
                                                <lb />those women that are warm-blooded and <choice>
                                                  <orig>suffi-<lb />cient</orig>
                                                  <reg>sufficient<lb /></reg>
                                                </choice> for me <del type="erasure">
                                                  <add type="unmarked" place="inline">America</add>
                                                </del>;</del>
                                        </l>
                                        <l>
                                            <del type="overstrike">I see that they understand me,
                                                and do not deny me <del type="erasure">
                                                  <add type="insertion" place="marginright">f<gap
                                                  reason="deletion, illegible" /> America</add>
                                                </del>,</del>
                                        </l>
                                        <l>
                                            <del type="overstrike">I see that they are worthy of
                                                me&#8212;I will be the <del type="overstrike"
                                                  >robust</del>
                                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">new</add>
                                                <lb />husband of those women. </del>
                                        </l>
                                    </del>
                                </restore>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                    </lg>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike"><del type="overstrike"
                                                >They</del>
                                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">You</add> are
                                            not one jot less than I am,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O you <add
                                                type="insertion">whom</add> America <del
                                                type="erasure">
                                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                            </del> knows, <del type="overstrike">I also known
                                                you!</del>
                                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">(or soon shall
                                                know)</add></add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled"
                                        >out</note>
                                </del>
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">They</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">You</add>
                                    </subst> are tanned in the face by shining suns and <choice>
                                        <orig>blow-<lb />ing</orig>
                                        <reg>blowing<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice> winds, </l>
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Their</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">You</add>
                                    </subst> flesh has the old divine suppleness and strength,</l>
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">They</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">You</add>
                                    </subst> know how to swim, row, <del type="overstrike">ride,
                                        wrestle,</del> shoot, <lb />run, strike, retreat, <del
                                        type="overstrike">advance, resist,</del> defend <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike"><choice><orig>them-<lb />selves</orig><reg>themselves<lb/></reg></choice></del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright"
                                            >yourself</add>
                                    </subst>,</l>
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">They</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">You</add>
                                    </subst> are ultimate in <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">their</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">your</add>
                                    </subst> own right&#8212; <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">they</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">you</add>
                                    </subst> are calm, <lb />clear, well-possessed of <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">themselves</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                            >yourself</add>
                                    </subst>. </l>
                            </lg>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>I draw you close <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">to me,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">clo<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">you women!</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">in you America
                                    drawing)</add>
                            </del></l>
                        <l>
                            <del type="overstrike">I cannot let you go, I would do you good,</del>
                        </l>
                        <l>I am for you, and you are for me, not only for our <lb />own sake, but
                            for others' sakes; </l>
                        <l>Enveloped in you sleep <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >the</add>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">great</del>
                            </restore><del type="overstrike">er</del> heroes and bards,</l>
                        <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">I think</add> They refuse to
                            awake at the touch of any <del type="overstrike">man</del> but me.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <note place="marginleft" type="authorial">&#182;</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It is I, you women</del>
                                        <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I a<del
                                                  type="erasure">m <gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                                                   /></del></add>
                                        </del>
                                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><del
                                                type="overstrike">Your</del><add type="unmarked"
                                                place="supralinear">A</add> robust husband </add>
                                    </subst>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;I make my
                                            way,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear"><del
                                                type="overstrike">and</del> I, making my way;</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                                <l>I am stern, acrid, large, undissuadable&#8212;but <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">deeply</add> I love
                                    <lb />you <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                                    </subst></l>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="3" type="hashmark">
                                <restore seq="2" type="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="hashmark">
                                        <l>I do not hurt you any more than is necessary for you,</l>
                                        <l>I pour the stuff to start sons and daughters fit for
                                            These <lb />States&#8212;I press with slow rude
                                            muscle, </l>
                                        <l>I brace myself effectually&#8212;I listen to no
                                            entreaties,</l>
                                    </del>
                                </restore>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf156v" type="verso" n="304" facs="nyp.00015.312" />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <restore seq="2" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="hashmark">
                                        <l>I dare not withdraw till I deposit what has so long
                                            <lb />accumulated within me. </l>
                                    </del>
                                </restore>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <!-- Whitman intially cancelled the stanza 8 marker by overstriking the number, but he then erased his cancellation -->
                        <restore type="erased">
                            <del seq="1" type="hashmark">
                                <l>Through you I drain the pent-up rivers of myself,</l>
                                <l>In you I wrap a thousand onward years,</l>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                        <restore type="erased">
                            <del type="hashmark">
                                <l>On you I graft the grafts of the <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">best-beloved of me and</del>
                                        <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                                >future</add>
                                        </del>
                                        <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="marginright">the race
                                            of the west,</add>
                                    </subst>
                                    <lb />of <del type="overstrike">America,</del>
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">and the strongest,</add>
                                    </del></l>
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">The drops I distil upon you
                                            shall</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop">From me
                                            shall you</add>
                                    </subst>
                                    <restore rend="erased">
                                        <del type="overstrike">grow</del>
                                    </restore> fierce and <lb />athletic girls, new artists,
                                    musicians, and singers, </l>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                        <l><gap reason="deletion, illegible" /><add type="insertion"
                                                place="supralinear">so</add>
                                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />, for <gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" /> terms.</l>
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <l>The babes I beget upon you are to beget babes in
                                            <lb />their turn, </l>
                                    </del>
                                </restore>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <l>I shall demand perfect men and women out of my <lb />love-spendings, </l>
                            <l>I shall expect them to interpenetrate with others, as I <lb />and you
                                interpenetrate now, </l>
                        </del>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>I shall count on the fruits of <del type="overstrike">the gushing
                                        showers of</del>
                                    <lb /><del type="overstrike">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">you
                                            &#38;</add>
                                    </del>them, as I count on the fruits <del type="overstrike">of
                                        the</del>
                                    <del type="overstrike">gushing</del>
                                    <lb /><restore rend="erased">
                                        <del type="overstrike"><del type="overstrike">showers</del>
                                            I <subst>
                                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">give</del>
                                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                                  <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                                  >o<gap reason="deletion, illegible" />t<gap
                                                  reason="deletion, illegible" />t</add>
                                                </del>
                                            </subst>
                                            <del type="overstrike">now,</del></del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">I vouchsafe now</add>
                                </l>
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">
                                        <l>I shall look for loving crops from the birth, life,
                                            death, <lb />immortality, I plant so lovingly now. </l>
                                    </del>
                                </restore>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01562">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00054" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">5.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">Spontaneous</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">A <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="over"><add type="insertion"
                                        place="infralinear">"</add>Spontaneous Me, Nature.<add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">"</add></add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <!-- This is a really confused site of revisions.  There are three insertion carets, but what they mean to insert is unclear.
   Golden's explaination is: "Whitman wrote his final trial title 'Spontaneous Me, Nature.' over the erasure of a previous title which he had brought in to the text
    with a guideline and caret (in ink) to serve as his new opening line as well. In the right margin he drew a simliar guideline, enclosing quotation marks, which 
   apparently had served the same purpose."  Nothing seems apparent to me, but I've tried to encode what Golden sees happening (seems almost plausable to me) as 
   best I can. -->
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <l><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                        </del>S<hi rend="smallcaps">PONTANEOUS</hi> me, <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Nature,</del>
                        </restore></l>
                    <l>The loving day, <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">the mounting
                            sun,</add> the friend I am happy with,</l>
                    <l>The arm of my friend hanging idly over my shoulder,</l>
                    <l>The hill-side whitened with blossoms of the mountain <lb />ash, </l>
                    <l>The same, late in autumn&#8212;the gorgeous hues of <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">red,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">deep</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />yellow, <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">red</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">with</add> drab, purple, and light
                        and dark green, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf157r" type="recto" n="305" facs="nyp.00015.313" />
                    <l>The rich coverlid of the grass&#8212;animals and birds&#8212;
                            <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the private
                        untrimmed bank&#8212;the primitive apples <lb />&#8212;the
                        pebble-stones, </l>
                    <l>Beautiful dripping fragments&#8212;the negligent list of <lb />one after
                        another, as I happen to call them to me, <lb />or think of them, </l>
                    <l>The real poems, (what we call poems being merely <lb />pictures,) </l>
                    <l>The poems of the privacy of the night, and of men <lb />like me, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>This poem, drooping shy and unseen, that I always <lb />carry, and that
                            all men carry, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>(Know, once for all, avowed on purpose, wherever are <lb />men like me, are
                        our lusty, lurking, masculine, <lb />poems,) </l>
                    <l>Love-thoughts, love-juice, love-odor, love-yielding, love-<lb />climbers, and
                        the climbing sap, </l>
                    <l>Arms and hands of love&#8212;lips of love&#8212;phallic thumb
                        <lb />of love <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>breasts of love&#8212;bellies pressed and <lb />glued together
                        with love, </l>
                    <l>Earth of chaste love&#8212;life that is only life after <lb />love, </l>
                    <l>The body of my love&#8212;the body of the woman I <lb />love <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>the body of the man&#8212;the body of the <lb />earth, </l>
                    <l>Soft forenoon airs that blow from the south-west,</l>
                    <l>The hairy wild-bee that murmurs and hankers up and <lb />down <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>that gripes the full-grown lady-flower, <lb />
                        <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">c</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">C</add>
                        </subst>urves upon her with amorous firm legs<del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>, takes <lb />his will of her, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>and holds himself tremulous and <lb />tight upon her till he is
                        satisfied <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The wet of woods through the early hours,</l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf157v" type="verso" n="306" facs="nyp.00015.314" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">Satisfactory Jan
                        1865</note>
                    <l>Two sleepers at night lying close together as they sleep, <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>one with an arm slanting
                        down across and below <lb />the waist of the other, </l>
                    <l>The smell of apples, aromas from crushed sage-plant, <lb />mint, birch-bark, </l>
                    <l>The boy's longings, the glow and pressure as he <choice>
                            <orig>con-<lb />fides</orig>
                            <reg>confides<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> to me what he was dreaming, </l>
                    <l>The dead leaf whirling its spiral whirl, and falling still <lb />and content
                        to the ground, </l>
                    <l>The no-formed stings that sights, people, objects, sting <lb />me with, </l>
                    <l>The hubbed sting of myself, stinging me as much as it <lb />ever can any one, </l>
                    <l>The sensitive, orbic, underlapped brothers, that only <add type="unmarked"
                            place="marginright">the</add>
                        <lb />privileged <del type="overstrike">feelers</del> may be intimate where
                        they <lb />are, </l>
                    <l>The curious roamer, the hand, roaming all over the <lb />body <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>the bashful withdrawing of flesh where <lb />the fingers soothingly
                        pause and edge themselves, </l>
                    <l>The limpid liquid within the young man,</l>
                    <l>The vexed corrosion, so pensive and so painful,</l>
                    <l>The torment&#8212;the irritable tide that will not be at <lb />rest, </l>
                    <l>The like of the same <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">you</add>
                        </subst> feel&#8212;the like of the same in <lb />others, </l>
                    <l>The young woman that flushes and flushes, and the <lb />young man that
                        flushes and flushes, </l>
                    <l>The young man that wakes, deep at night, the hot <lb />hand seeking to
                        repress what would master him <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">The amorous night</add> the strange
                        half-welcome pangs, visions, sweats, </l>
                    <l>The pulse pounding through palms and trembling <lb />encircling fingers <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>the young man all colored, <lb />red, ashamed, angry; </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf158r" type="recto" n="307" facs="nyp.00015.315" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">Satisfactory Jan
                        1865</note>
                    <l>The souse upon me of my lover the sea, as I lie willing <lb />and naked, </l>
                    <l>The merriment of the twin-babes that crawl over the <lb />grass in the sun,
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the mother never
                        turning her <lb />vigilant eyes from them, </l>
                    <l>The walnut-trunk, the walnut-husks, and the ripening <lb />or ripened
                        long-round walnuts, </l>
                    <l>The continence of vegetables, birds, animals,</l>
                    <l>The consequent meanness of me should I skulk or find <lb />myself
                            indecent,<add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> while
                        birds and animals never <lb />once skulk or find themselves indecent, </l>
                    <l>The great chastity of paternity, to match the great <lb />chastity of
                        maternity, </l>
                    <l>The oath of procreation I have sworn&#8212;my Adamic <lb />and fresh
                        daughters, </l>
                    <l>The greed that eats me day and night with hungry <lb />gnaw,<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> till I saturate what
                        shall produce boys to <lb />fill my place when I am through, </l>
                    <l>The wholesome relief, repose, content,</l>
                    <l>And this bunch plucked at random from myself,</l>
                    <l>It has done its work&#8212;I toss it carelessly to fall <lb />where it
                        may. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01563">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00055" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">6.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="earsure">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over"><del type="overstrike"
                                    >One</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O an</add>
                                </del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">One</add> hour <del
                                    type="overstrike">to</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">to</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">for</add>
                                </del> madness and joy.</add>
                        </subst>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O an</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">One</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O an</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">One</add>
                                </subst> hour <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">to</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">for</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">to</add>
                                </subst> madness and joy!</l>
                        </add>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>O <hi rend="smallcaps"
                                >FURIOUS!</hi> O confine me not!</l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">(</del>What is this that frees me so in
                            storms?</l>
                        <l>What do my shouts amid lightnings and raging winds <lb />mean?) </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf158v" type="verso" n="308" facs="nyp.00015.316" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">will answer Jan
                        '65</note>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>O to drink the mystic deliria deeper than any other <lb />man! </l>
                        <l>O savage and tender achings!</l>
                        <l>(I bequeath them to you, my children,</l>
                        <l>I tell them to you, for reasons, O bridegroom and <lb />bride.) </l>
                    </lg>
                    <!-- Whitman indicated here that stanzas 3 and 4 were to be combined  -->
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>O to be yielded to you, whoever you are, and you to <lb />be yielded me,
                            in defiance of the world! </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>(Know, I am a man, attracting, at any time, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">her</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the one</add>
                                </subst> I but <lb />look upon, or touch with the tips of my
                                fingers, </l>
                            <l>Or that touches my face, or leans against me.)</l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>O to return to Paradise! <add type="unmarked" place="inline">O <del
                                    type="overstrike">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </del> bashful and feminine!</add></l>
                        <l>O to draw you to me&#8212;to plant on you, for the first <lb />time,
                            the lips of a determined man! </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>O rich and feminine! O to show you to realize the <lb />blood of life
                                for yourself, whoever you are&#8212;and <lb />no matter when and
                                where you live. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>O the puzzle&#8212;the thrice-tied knot&#8212;the deep and
                            <lb />dark pool! O all untied and illumined! </l>
                        <l>O to speed where there is space enough and air <lb />enough at last! </l>
                        <l>O to be absolved from previous <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">follies and <choice>
                                        <orig>degrada-<lb />tions</orig>
                                        <reg>degradations<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice></del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">ties &#38;
                                    conventions</add>
                            </subst>&#8212;I from mine, and you from yours! </l>
                        <l>O to find a new unthought-of nonchalance with the <lb />best of nature! </l>
                        <l>O to have the gag removed from one's mouth!</l>
                        <l>O to have the feeling, to-day or any day, I am <choice>
                                <orig>suffi-<lb />cient</orig>
                                <reg>sufficient<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> as I am! </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>O something unproved! something in a trance!</l>
                        <l>O madness amorous! O trembling!</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf159r" type="recto" n="309" facs="nyp.00015.317" />
                        <l>O to escape utterly from others' anchors and holds!</l>
                        <l>To drive free! to love free! to dash reckless and <lb />dangerous! </l>
                        <l>To court destruction with taunts&#8212;with invitations!</l>
                        <l>To ascend&#8212;to leap to the heavens of the love <lb />indicated to
                            me! </l>
                        <l>To rise thither with my inebriate Soul!</l>
                        <l>To be lost, if it must be so!</l>
                        <l>To feed the remainder of life with one hour of <choice>
                                <orig>ful-<lb />ness</orig>
                                <reg>fulness<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> and freedom! </l>
                        <l>With one brief hour of madness and joy.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01564">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00058" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">7.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">We two&#8212;how long we
                            were fool'd. <del type="overstrike">!</del></head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>We two&#8212;how long we were fool'd!</l>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Y<hi rend="smallcaps">OU</hi> and I&#8212;what the earth is, we
                            are,</l>
                    </del>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>We two&#8212;how long we were fooled!</l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <l><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Now</del>
                        </restore>
                        <!-- Whitman used a blue pencil to make marks around the "w" of Now.  Golden explains: "WW marked the broken 'w' of 'Now' for correction in blue pencil."  
   He also used the blue pencil to put a "w" in the right hand margin.  Not sure how to encode this? -->
                        <del type="overstrike">delicious,</del> transmuted, <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">we</add> swiftly <del type="overstrike">we</del>
                        escape, as <lb />Nature escapes, </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="marginleft">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="4" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="marginleft">For</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> We are Nature&#8212;long have we been absent, but now <lb />we
                        return, </l>
                    <l>We become plants, leaves, foliage, roots, bark,</l>
                    <l>We are bedded in the ground&#8212;we are rocks,</l>
                    <l>We are oaks&#8212;we grow in the openings side by side,</l>
                    <l>We browse&#8212;we are two among the wild herds, <lb />spontaneous as
                        any, </l>
                    <l>We are two fishes swimming in the sea together,</l>
                    <l>We are what the locust blossoms are&#8212;we drop scent</l>
                    <l>around the lanes, mornings and evenings,</l>
                    <l>We are also the coarse smut of beasts, vegetables, <lb />minerals, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf159v" type="verso" n="310" facs="nyp.00015.318" />
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>We are what the flowing wet of the Tennessee is&#8212; <lb /><add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>we are two peaks of
                            the Blue Mountains, rising <lb />up in Virginia, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>We are two predatory hawks&#8212;we soar above and <lb />look down,<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;we are as two comets</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>We are two resplendent suns&#8212;we it is who balance <lb />ourselves
                        orbic and stellar <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst><del type="overstrike">we are as two <lb />comets; </del></l>
                    <l>We prowl fanged and four-footed in the woods&#8212;we <lb />spring on
                        prey; </l>
                    <l>We are two clouds, forenoons and afternoons, driving <lb />overhead, <anchor
                            xml:id="t58" />
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t58">We are seas mingling <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>we are two of those cheerful <lb />waves, rolling over each
                            other, and interwetting <lb />each other, </transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l>We are what the atmosphere is, transparent, receptive, <lb />pervious,
                        impervious, </l>
                    <l>We are snow, rain, cold, darkness&#8212;we are each <lb />product and
                        influence of the globe, </l>
                    <l>We have circled and circled till we have arrived <lb />home
                        again&#8212;we two have, </l>
                    <l>We have voided all but freedom, and all but our <lb />own joy. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01565">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00061" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">8.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Native Moments.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>N<hi rend="smallcaps">ATIVE</hi> moments! when you come upon me&#8212;Ah
                        <lb />you are here now! </l>
                    <l>Give me now libidinous joys only!</l>
                    <l>Give me the drench of my passions! Give me life <lb />coarse and rank! </l>
                    <l>To-day, I go consort with nature's darlings&#8212;to-night <lb />too, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf160r" type="recto" n="311" facs="nyp.00015.319" />
                    <l>I am for those who believe in loose delights&#8212;I share <lb />the
                        midnight orgies of young men, </l>
                    <l>I dance with the dancers, and drink with the <choice>
                            <orig>drink-<lb />ers,</orig>
                            <reg>drinkers<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>The echoes ring with our indecent calls,</l>
                    <l>I take for my love some prostitute&#8212;I pick out some <lb />low person
                        for my dearest friend, </l>
                    <l>He shall be lawless, rude, illiterate&#8212;he shall be one
                        <lb />condemned by others for deeds done; </l>
                    <l>I will play a part no longer&#8212;Why should I exile <lb />myself from
                        my companions? </l>
                    <l>O you shunn <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                        </subst>d persons! I at least do not shun you,</l>
                    <l>I come forthwith in your midst&#8212;I will be your poet,</l>
                    <l>I will be more to you than to any of the rest.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01566">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00062" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">9.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Once I pass'd through a
                            populous city.</head>
                    </add>
                    <!-- WW marked line 1 and lines 2-7 as separate stanzas; not sure how to encode -->
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">NCE</hi> I passed through a populous city, <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#182;</add>imprinting <lb />my
                        brain, for future use, with its shows, <choice>
                            <orig>architec-<lb />ture,</orig>
                            <reg>architecture<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> customs, and traditions <del type="overstrike">;</del></l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Yet now,</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">And</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">But</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">years, years have elaps <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">'</add>
                            </subst>d,</add> of all that city, I <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">now</add> remember only a woman <lb />I <del
                            type="overstrike">casually</del> met there, who detained me for love
                        <lb />of me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Day by day and night by night we were together,&#8212; <lb />All else has
                        long been forgotten <del type="overstrike">by me</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>I remember I say only that woman who passionately <lb />clung to me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Again we wander&#8212;we love&#8212;we separate again,</l>
                    <l>Again she holds me by the hand&#8212;I must not go!</l>
                    <l>I see her close beside me, with silent lips, sad and <lb />tremulous. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf160v" type="verso" n="312" facs="nyp.00015.320" />
                <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">tr to Drum Taps</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01567">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00064" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">10.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Looking</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Facing</add>
                            </subst> West from California<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >'s</add>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">shore<del type="overstrike"
                                    >s</del>.</add>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Looking</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Facing</add>
                            </subst> west from California's shore,</l>
                    </add>
                    <l>I<hi rend="smallcaps">NQUIRING</hi>, tireless, seeking <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">that</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">what is</add>
                        </subst> yet unfound,</l>
                    <l>I, a child, very old, over waves, toward the house of <lb />maternity, the
                        land of migrations, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">look</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">glance</add>
                        </subst> afar, </l>
                    <l>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Look off the shores of my Western
                                    Sea&#8212;<del type="overstrike">having <lb />arrived at
                                    last where I am</del>&#8212;the circle almost
                                    <lb />circled<del type="overstrike">;</del></del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline"><gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                circle</add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>For <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">coming</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">travelling</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">starting</add>
                            <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">starting</add>
                        </subst> westward from Hindustan, from the vales <lb />of Kashmere, </l>
                    <l>From Asia&#8212;from the north&#8212;from the God, the <lb />sage,
                        and the hero, </l>
                    <l>From the south&#8212;from the flowery peninsulas, and <lb />the spice
                        islands, </l>
                    <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                        <l>Long, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">have I</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">long have I</add>
                            </subst> wandered&#8212; <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">almost</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">nearly</add>
                            </subst> round the earth having <del type="overstrike">I</del> wandered,
                                <del type="overstrike">the circle almost circled,</del></l>
                    </add>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Now</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">T<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> I face <del type="overstrike">the old</del> home
                            again&#8212;<del type="overstrike">looking over to it,</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">very pleased &#38;
                                joyous</add>
                        </subst><lb />joyous, <del type="overstrike">as after long travel, growth,
                            and sleep;</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">journeying in a dream <add
                                    type="insertion" place="marginright">and much
                                experienced;</add>;</add>
                        </del>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>But where is what I started for,
                        so long ago?</l>
                    <l>And why is it yet unfound?<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01568">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00434" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">11.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="interlinear"
                                        rend="underline">In the new garden.</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">In cities now
                                    modern I wander.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l><hi rend="smallcaps">IN</hi> the new garden, in all the parts,</l>
                    </del>
                    <l>In cities now, modern, I wander,<add type="unmarked" place="inline"><add
                                type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;though ancient, <del
                                    type="overstrike">and</del></add>&#8212;<del
                                type="overstrike">primitive</del> yet,</add></l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Though the second or third result, or still further, <lb />primitive yet,
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Days, places, indifferent&#8212;though various, the same,</l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <l>Time, Paradise, the Mannahatta, the prairies, finding <lb />me unchanged <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Death indifferent&#8212;Is it that I lived long since? <lb />Was I
                            buried <del type="overstrike">very</del> long ago? </l>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf161r" type="recto" n="313" facs="nyp.00015.321" />
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>For all that, I may now be watching you here, this <lb />moment;
                                </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">For the future,</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop">Yet
                                            alive,</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst>
                                <add type="insertion" place="margintop">For all that, <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">an unknown</add>
                                    something,</add>
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">with</del>
                                </restore> determined <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">will</del>
                                </restore>, I seek<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add><del
                                    type="overstrike">&#8212;</del><del type="overstrike">the
                                    <lb />woman of the future, </del></l>
                            <l>You, born years, centuries after me, I seek.</l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01569">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00057" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">12.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline"> With the <add type="unmarked"
                                place="supralinear">old, the</add> portent orginal loins. </head>
                    </add>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">A<hi rend="smallcaps">GES</hi> and ages,
                                returning at intervals,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">With the <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="supralinear">old, the</add> portent
                                orginal</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Undestroyed, wandering immortal,</l>
                    <l>Lusty, phallic, <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">with the potent <del type="overstrike"
                                    >original</del> loins,</del>
                        </restore> perfectly <lb />sweet, </l>
                    <l>I, chanter of Adamic songs,</l>
                    <l>Through the new garden, the West, the great cities, <lb />calling, </l>
                    <l>Deliriate, thus prelude what <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">is</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">I set to be</add>
                        </del> generated, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >&#8212;first</add> offering <lb />these, offering myself, </l>
                    <l>Bathing myself, bathing my songs in sex,</l>
                    <l>Offspring of my loins.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01570">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00059" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">13.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">O hymen! O hymenee!</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>O <hi rend="smallcaps">HYMEN</hi>! O hymenee!</l>
                    <l>Why do you tantalize me thus?</l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">O</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">w</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">W</add>
                        </subst>hy sting me for a swift moment only?</l>
                    <l>Why can you not continue? O why do you now <lb />cease? </l>
                    <l>Is it because, if you continued beyond the swift <lb />moment, you would soon
                        certainly kill me? </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf161v" type="verso" n="314" facs="nyp.00015.322" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01571">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00060" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">14.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">I am he that aches with love.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>I<hi rend="smallcaps">AM</hi> he that aches with love;</l>
                    <l>Does the earth gravitate? Does not all matter, <choice>
                            <orig>ach-<lb />ing,</orig>
                            <reg>aching<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> attract all matter? </l>
                    <l>So the body of me to all I meet, or <del type="overstrike">that I</del>
                        know.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01572">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00065" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">15.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <add type="insertion" place="inline">As Adam<del type="overstrike"
                                    >ic</del>, Early in the morning.</add>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">As Adam<del type="overstrike"
                                >ic</del>,</add> E<hi rend="smallcaps">ARLY</hi> in the morning,</l>
                    <l>Walking forth from the bower, refreshed with sleep,</l>
                    <l>Behold me where I pass&#8212;hear my voice&#8212;approach,</l>
                    <l>Touch me&#8212;touch the palm of your hand to my <lb />body as I pass, </l>
                    <l>Be not afraid of my body.</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <!-- this addition is a spill-over trial title for the revisions on page 315 -->
            <add type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="erasure">Light of heart</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">Now afoot the world to roam, and
                            breathe the open air</add>
                    </subst>
                </head>
            </add>
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            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01573">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00111" />
                            </relations>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#9758;</note>
                <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">Now
                                    afoot the world to roam, and breath the open air</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="4" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="margintop">Healthy, free, the
                                    road I take</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="6" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline"
                                    >Light of <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /> afoot to
                                    roam</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="8" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="7" type="unmarked" place="margintop"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /> afoot before me</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="10" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="9">Light <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /> road</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="11" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">Light
                                of heart and free, and the endless road before me</add>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                </add>
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop">(? Song of)</note>
                    <del type="overstrike">POEM OF</del> THE <add type="insertion"
                        place="supralinear">open</add> ROAD.</head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <subst>
                        <restore seq="7" rend="erased">
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                <l>A<hi rend="smallcaps">FOOT</hi> and light-hearted I take to the
                                    open road,</l>
                                <l>Healthy, free, the world before me,</l>
                                <l>The long brown path before me, leading wherever I <lb />choose.
                                </l>
                            </del>
                        </restore>
                        <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                <l>Light <gap reason="deletion, illegible" /></l>
                                <l><gap reason="deletion, illegible" />road before</l>
                                <l><gap reason="deletion, illegible" />.</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                <l>Now afoot the world to roam, and breath the open air</l>
                                <l>Light of heart and free, the endless road before me</l>
                                <l>The long brown <restore rend="delete">
                                        <del type="overstrike">path</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del type="erasure">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">road</add>
                                    </del> before me, leading <del type="erasure">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">and leading</add>
                                    </del> wherever I choose</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                            <l><del type="overstrike">Now afoot the world to roam</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Light of heart afoot to
                                    roam</add>, and breathe the open air,</l>
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike">Light of heart, and free, and the road spread
                                    before me,</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>The long brown paths before me, leading wherever I choose.</l>
                        </add>
                    </subst>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>Henceforth I ask not good-fortune&#8212;I <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">myself</add> am good-<lb />fortune, </l>
                    <l>Henceforth I whimper no more, postpone no more, <lb />need nothing, </l>
                    <l>Strong and content, I travel the open road.</l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft" rend="circled">? tr to Pioneers</note>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>The earth&#8212;that is sufficient,</l>
                    <l>I do not want the constellations any nearer,</l>
                    <l>I know they are very well where they are,</l>
                    <l>I know they suffice for those who belong to them.</l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">? tr to Pioneers</note>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>Still here I carry my old delicious burdens,</l>
                    <l>I carry them, men and women&#8212;I carry them with <lb />me wherever I
                        go, </l>
                    <l>I swear it is impossible for me to get rid of them,</l>
                    <l>I am filled with them, and I will fill them in return.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>You road I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">travel and look</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">enter upon,
                                looking</add>
                        </subst> around! I believe you <lb />are not all that is here, </l>
                    <l>I believe that much unseen is also here.</l>
                </lg>
                <del type="overstrike">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr forward</note>
                </del>
                <pb xml:id="leaf162v" type="verso" n="316" facs="nyp.00015.324" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>Here is the profound lesson of reception, neither <lb />preference or denial, </l>
                    <l>The black with his woolly head, the felon, the <choice>
                            <orig>dis-<lb />eased,</orig>
                            <reg>diseased<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> the illiterate person, are not denied; </l>
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">The hearse</add> The birth, the
                        hasting after the physician, the <choice>
                            <orig>beg-<lb />gar's</orig>
                            <reg>beggar's<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> tramp, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the
                        drunkard's stagger, the laughing <lb />party of mechanics, </l>
                    <l>The escaped youth, the rich person's carriage, the fop, <lb />the eloping
                        couple, </l>
                    <l>The early market-man, <del type="overstrike">the hearse,</del> the moving of
                        <lb />furniture into the town, the return back from <lb />the town, </l>
                    <l>They pass, I also pass, any thing passes&#8212;none can <lb />be
                        interdicted, </l>
                    <l>None but are accepted, none but are dear to me.</l>
                </lg>
                <del type="overstrike">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">take in verse 5</note>
                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                    <l>You air that serves me with breath to speak!</l>
                    <l>You objects that call from diffusion my meanings and <lb />give them shape! </l>
                    <l>You light that wraps me and all things in delicate <lb />equable showers! </l>
                    <l>You animals moving serenely over the earth!</l>
                    <l>You birds that wing yourselves through the air! you <lb />insects! </l>
                    <l>You sprouting growths from the farmers' fields! you <lb />stalks and weeds by
                        the fences! </l>
                    <l>You paths worn in the irregular hollows by the <choice>
                            <orig>road-<lb />sides!</orig>
                            <reg>roadsides<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>I think you are latent with <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">curious</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">unseen</add>
                        </subst> existences&#8212;you <lb />are so dear to me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>You flagged walks of the cities! you strong curbs at <lb />the edges! </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf163r" type="recto" n="317" facs="nyp.00015.325" />
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      i.e. 
   1. Light of heart and the world before me
   was replaced with
   2. Now afoot the world to roam and breathe the open air
   was replaced with
   3. Light of heart, afoot to roam
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                    <l>You ferries! you planks and posts of wharves! you <lb />timber-lined sides!
                        you distant ships! </l>
                    <l>You rows of houses! you window-pierced fa&#231;ades! <lb />you roofs! </l>
                    <l>You porches and entrances! you copings and iron <lb />guards! </l>
                    <l>You windows whose transparent shells might expose <lb />so much! </l>
                    <l>You doors and ascending steps! you arches!</l>
                    <l>You gray stones of interminable pavements! you <choice>
                            <orig>trod-<lb />den</orig>
                            <reg>trodden<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> crossings! </l>
                    <l>From all that has been near you I believe you have <lb />imparted to
                        yourselves, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> and now would impart <lb /><del type="overstrike">the same
                            secretly</del> to me, </l>
                    <l>From the living and the dead I think you have peopled <lb />your impassive
                        surfaces, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and the
                        spirits thereof <lb />would be <del type="overstrike">evident and</del>
                        amicable with me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                    <l>The earth expanding right hand and left hand,</l>
                    <l>The picture alive, every part in its best light,</l>
                    <l>The music falling in where it is wanted, and stopping <lb />where it was not
                        wanted, </l>
                    <l>The cheerful voice of the public road&#8212;the gay fresh <lb />sentiment
                        of the road. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>O highway I travel! O public road! do you say to <lb />me, Do not leave me? </l>
                    <l>Do you say, Venture not? If you leave me, you are <lb />lost? </l>
                    <l>Do you say, I am already prepared&#8212;I am well-beaten <lb />and
                        undenied&#8212;adhere to me? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>O public road! I say back, I am not afraid to leave <lb />you&#8212;yet I
                        love you, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf163v" type="verso" n="318" facs="nyp.00015.326" />
                    <l>You express me better than I can express myself,</l>
                    <l>You shall be more to me than my poem.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>I think heroic deeds were all conceived in the open <lb />air, </l>
                    <l>I think I could stop here myself, and do miracles,</l>
                    <l>I think whatever I meet on the road I shall like, and <lb />whoever beholds
                        me shall like me, </l>
                    <l>I think whoever I see must be happy.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <l>From this hour, freedom!</l>
                    <l>From this hour I ordain myself loosed of limits and <lb />imaginary lines, </l>
                    <l>Going where I list&#8212;my own master, total and <choice>
                            <orig>abso-<lb />lute,</orig>
                            <reg>absolute<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Listening to others, and considering well what they <lb />say, </l>
                    <l>Pausing, searching, receiving, contemplating,</l>
                    <l>Gently, but with undeniable will, divesting myself of <lb />the holds that
                        would hold me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                    <l>I inhale great draughts of air,</l>
                    <l>The east and the west are mine, and the north and <lb />the south are mine.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>I am larger than I thought,</l>
                    <l>I did not know I held so much goodness.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>All seems beautiful to me,</l>
                    <l>I can repeat over to men and women, You have done <lb />such good to me, I
                        would do the same to you. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                    <l>I will recruit for myself and you as I go,</l>
                    <l>I will scatter myself among men and women as I go,</l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf164r" type="recto" n="319" facs="nyp.00015.327" />
                    <!-- Whitman altered the running head on page 319 to correspond with the new (in progress) title, i.e.:
      Light of heart afoot to roam &#38; breathe the open air -->
                    <l>I will toss <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the new</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my own</add>
                        </subst> gladness and roughness among <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">them;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">men &#38; women,</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Whoever denies me, it shall not trouble me,</l>
                    <l>Whoever accepts me, he or she shall be blessed, and <lb />shall bless me.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>Now if a thousand perfect men were to appear, it <lb />would not amaze me, </l>
                    <l>Now if a thousand beautiful forms of women appeared, <lb />it would not
                        astonish me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                    <l>Now I see the secret of the making of the best <lb />persons, </l>
                    <l>It is to grow in the open air, and to eat and sleep <lb />with the earth.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                    <l>Here is space&#8212;here a great personal deed has room,</l>
                    <l>A great deed seizes upon the hearts of the whole race <lb />of men, </l>
                    <l>Its effusion of strength and will overwhelms law, and <lb />mocks all
                        authority and all argument against it. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                    <l>Here is the test of wisdom,</l>
                    <l>Wisdom is not finally tested in schools,</l>
                    <l>Wisdom cannot be passed from one having it, to <choice>
                            <orig>an-<lb />other</orig>
                            <reg>another<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> not having it, </l>
                    <l>Wisdom is <del type="overstrike">of</del> the Soul, is not susceptible of
                        proof, is <lb />its own proof, </l>
                    <l>Applies to all stages and objects and qualities, and is <lb />content, </l>
                    <l>Is the certainty of the reality and immortality of <lb />things, and the
                        excellence of things; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Something there is in the float of
                        the sight of things <lb />that provokes it out of the Soul.<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf164v" type="verso" n="320" facs="nyp.00015.328" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                    <l>Now I re&#235;xamine philosophies and religions,</l>
                    <l>They may prove <del type="overstrike">well</del> in lecture-rooms, yet not
                        prove <lb />at all under the spacious clouds, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add> and along the <lb />landscape and
                        flowing currents. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                    <l>Here is realization,</l>
                    <l>Here is a man tallied&#8212;he realizes here what he has <lb />in him, </l>
                    <l>The animals, the past, the future, light, space, <lb />majesty, love, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> if they are vacant of
                        you, you <lb />are vacant of them. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                    <l>Only the kernel of every object nourishes;</l>
                    <l>Where is he who tears off the husks for you and me?</l>
                    <l>Where is he that undoes stratagems and envelopes for <lb />you and me? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                    <l>Here is adhesiveness&#8212;it is not previously fashioned
                        <lb />&#8212;it is apropos; </l>
                    <l>Do you know what it is, as you pass, to be loved by <lb />strangers? </l>
                    <l>Do you know the talk of those turning eye-balls?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                    <l>Here is the efflux of the Soul,</l>
                    <l>The efflux of the Soul comes <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">from
                            within</add> through <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">beautiful</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">embowered</add>
                        </subst> gates <lb /><del type="overstrike">of laws</del>, provoking
                        questions; </l>
                    <l>These yearnings, why are they? These thoughts in <lb />the darkness, why are
                        they? </l>
                    <l>Why are there men and women that while they are <lb />nigh me, the sun-light
                        expands my blood? </l>
                    <l>Why, when they leave me, do my pennants of joy sink <lb />flat and lank? </l>
                    <l>Why are there trees I never walk under, but large and <lb />melodious
                        thoughts descend upon me? </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf165r" type="recto" n="321" facs="nyp.00015.329" />
                    <l>(I think they hang there winter and summer on those <lb />trees, and always
                        drop fruit as I pass;) </l>
                    <l>What is it I interchange so suddenly with strangers?</l>
                    <l>What with some driver, as I ride on the seat by his <lb />side? </l>
                    <l>What with some fisherman, drawing his seine by the <lb />shore, as I walk by
                        and pause? </l>
                    <l>What gives me to be free to a woman's or man's <choice>
                            <orig>good-<lb />will?</orig>
                            <reg>goodwill<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> What gives them to be free to mine? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                    <l>The efflux of the Soul is happiness&#8212;here is <lb />happiness, </l>
                    <l>I think it pervades the air, waiting at all times,</l>
                    <l>Now it flows into us&#8212;we are rightly charged.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                    <l>Here rises the fluid and attaching character;</l>
                    <l>The fluid and attaching character is the freshness and <lb />sweetness of man
                        and woman, </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Do</add> The herbs of the morning
                        sprout <del type="overstrike">no</del> fresh<del type="overstrike">er</del>
                        and <lb />sweet<del type="overstrike">er</del> every day out of the roots of <choice>
                            <orig>them-<lb />selves</orig>
                            <reg>themselves<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">?</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">than</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">So</add>
                        </del> it <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">too</add> sprouts fresh
                        and sweet <choice>
                            <orig>contin-<lb />ually</orig>
                            <reg>continually<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> out of itself. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>Toward the fluid and attaching character exudes the <lb />sweat of the love
                        of young and old, </l>
                    <l>From it falls distilled the charm that mocks beauty <lb />and attainments, </l>
                    <l>Toward it heaves the shuddering longing ache of <lb />contact. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>Allons! Whoever you are, come travel with me!</l>
                    <l>Travelling with me, you find what never tires.</l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>The earth never tires, <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(nor the road</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>The earth is rude, silent, incomprehensible at first&#8212; <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>Nature is rude and
                        incomprehensible at first; </l>
                    <l>Be not discouraged&#8212;keep on&#8212;there are divine <lb />things,
                        well enveloped, </l>
                    <l>I swear to you there are divine things more beautiful <lb />than words can
                        tell. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                    <l>Allons! We must not stop here!</l>
                    <l>However sweet these laid-up stores&#8212;however <choice>
                            <orig>con-<lb />venient</orig>
                            <reg>convenient<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> this dwelling, we cannot remain here, </l>
                    <l>However sheltered this port, and however calm these <lb />waters, we must not
                        anchor here, </l>
                    <l>However welcome the hospitality that surrounds us, <lb />we are permitted to
                        receive it but a little while. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                    <l>Allons! The inducements shall be great to you;</l>
                    <l>We will sail pathless and wild seas;</l>
                    <l>We will go where winds blow, waves dash, and the <lb />Yankee clipper speeds
                        by under full sail. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="34">
                    <l>Allons! With power, liberty, the earth, the elements!</l>
                    <l>Health, defiance, gayety, self-esteem, curiosity;</l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>Allons! from all
                            formules!</l>
                        <l>From your formules, O bat-eyed and materialistic <lb />priests! </l>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="35">
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>The stale cadaver blocks up
                            the passage&#8212;the burial <lb />waits no longer.<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="36">
                    <l>Allons! Yet take warning!</l>
                    <l>He travelling with me needs the best blood, thews, <lb />endurance, </l>
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                    <l>None may come to the trial, till he or she bring <lb />courage and health.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="37">
                    <l>Come not here if you have already spent the best of <lb />yourself; </l>
                    <l>Only those may come, who come in sweet and <choice>
                            <orig>deter-<lb />mined</orig>
                            <reg>determined<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> bodies, </l>
                    <l>No diseased person&#8212;no rum-drinker or venereal <lb />taint is
                        permitted here. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="38">
                    <l>I and mine do not convince by arguments, similes, <lb />rhymes, </l>
                    <l>We convince by our presence.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="39">
                    <l>Listen! I will be honest with you,</l>
                    <l>I do not offer the old smooth prizes, but offer rough <lb />new prizes <subst>
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                        </subst></l>
                    <l>These are the days that must happen to you:</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="40">
                    <l>You shall not heap up what is called riches,</l>
                    <l>You shall scatter with lavish hand all that you earn <lb />or achieve, </l>
                    <l>You but arrive at the city to which you were <choice>
                            <orig>des-<lb />tined</orig>
                            <reg>destined<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" type="erased">
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                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
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                        </subst>you hardly settle yourself to satisfaction, <lb />before you are
                        called <del type="overstrike">by an irresistible call</del> to <lb />depart, </l>
                    <l>You shall be treated to the ironical smiles and <choice>
                            <orig>mock-<lb />ings</orig>
                            <reg>mockings<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of those who remain behind you, </l>
                    <l>What beckonings of love you receive, you shall only <lb />answer with
                        passionate kisses of parting, </l>
                    <l>You shall not allow the hold of those who spread <lb />their reached hands
                        toward you. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="41">
                    <l>Allons! After the G<hi rend="smallcaps">REAT</hi> C<hi rend="smallcaps"
                            >OMPANIONS</hi>! and to belong <lb />to them! </l>
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                    <l>They too are on the road! they are the swift and <lb />majestic men! they are
                        the greatest women. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="42">
                    <l>Over that which hindered them&#8212;over that which
                        <lb />retarded&#8212;passing impediments large or small, </l>
                    <l>Committers of crimes, committers of many beautiful <lb />virtues, </l>
                    <l>Enjoyers of calms of seas, and storms of seas,</l>
                    <l>Sailors of many a ship, walkers of many a mile of <lb />land, </l>
                    <l>Habitu <subst>
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                        </subst>s of many different countries, habitu <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#233;</add>
                        </subst>s of far-<lb />distant dwellings, </l>
                    <l>Trusters of men and women, observers of cities, <choice>
                            <orig>soli-<lb />tary</orig>
                            <reg>solitary<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> toilers, </l>
                    <l>Pausers and contemplaters of tufts, blossoms, shells of <lb />the shore, </l>
                    <l>Dancers at wedding-dances, kissers of brides, tender <lb />helpers of
                        children, bearers of children, </l>
                    <l>Soldiers of revolts, standers by gaping graves, <choice>
                            <orig>lower-<lb />ers</orig>
                            <reg>lowerers<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> down of coffins, </l>
                    <l>Journeyers over consecutive seasons, over the years&#8212; <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>the curious years, each emerging
                        from that which <lb />preceded it,<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>Journeyers as with companions, namely, their own <lb />diverse phases, </l>
                    <l>Forth-steppers from the latent unrealized baby-days,</l>
                    <l>Journeyers gayly with their own youth&#8212;journeyers <lb />with their
                        bearded and well-grained manhood, </l>
                    <l>Journeyers with their womanhood, ample, <choice>
                            <orig>unsur-<lb />passed,</orig>
                            <reg>unsurpassed<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> content, </l>
                    <l>Journeyers with their sublime old age of manhood or <lb />womanhood, </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Old age, calm, expanded, broad
                        with the haughty <lb />breadth of the universe, </l>
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                    <l>Old age, flowing free with the delicious near-by <choice>
                            <orig>free-<lb />dom</orig>
                            <reg>freedom<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of death.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="43">
                    <l>Allons! To that which is endless, as it was <choice><orig>beginning-<lb/>less,</orig><reg>beginningless<lb/></reg></choice></l>
                    <l>To undergo much, tramps of days, rests of nights,</l>
                    <l>To merge all in the travel they tend to, and the days <lb />and nights they
                        tend to, </l>
                    <l>Again to merge them in the start of superior <choice>
                            <orig>jour-<lb />neys;</orig>
                            <reg>journeys<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>To see nothing anywhere but what you may reach it <lb />and pass it, </l>
                    <l>To conceive no time, however distant, but what you <lb />may reach it and
                        pass it, </l>
                    <l>To look up or down no road but it stretches and waits <lb />for you <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
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                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
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                        </subst>however long, but it stretches and waits <lb />for you; </l>
                    <l>To see no being, not God's or any, but you also go <lb />thither, </l>
                    <l>To see no possession but you may possess it&#8212;<choice>
                            <orig>enjoy-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>enjoying<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> all without labor or purchase <subst>
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                        </subst>abstracting <lb />the feast, yet not abstracting one particle of it; </l>
                    <l>To take the best of the farmer's farm and the rich <lb />man's elegant villa,
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                        </del>and the chaste blessings of <lb />the well-married couple, <del
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                        </del>and the fruits of <choice>
                            <orig>or-<lb />chards</orig>
                            <reg>orchards<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and flowers of gardens, </l>
                    <l>To take to your use out of the compact cities as you <lb />pass through, </l>
                    <l>To carry buildings and streets with you afterward <lb />wherever you go, </l>
                    <l>To gather the minds of men out of their brains as you <lb />encounter them <subst>
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                        </subst>to gather the love out of their <lb />hearts, </l>
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                    <l>To take your <del type="overstrike">own</del> lovers on the road with you,
                        for all <lb />that you leave them behind you, </l>
                    <l>To know the universe itself as a road&#8212;as many
                        <lb />roads&#8212;as roads for travelling Souls. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="44">
                    <l>The Soul travels,</l>
                    <l>The body does not travel as much as the Soul,</l>
                    <l>The body has just as great a work as the Soul, and <lb />parts away at last
                        for the journeys of the Soul. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="45">
                    <l>All parts away for the progress of Souls,</l>
                    <l>All religion, all solid things, arts, governments <subst>
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                        </subst>all <lb />that was or is apparent upon this globe or any
                        <lb />globe, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>falls into
                        niches and corners before the <lb />procession of Souls <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>along the grand roads of the <lb />universe. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="46">
                    <l>Of the progress of the Souls of men and women along <lb />the grand roads of
                        the universe, <del type="erasure">
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                        </del>all other <choice>
                            <orig>prog-<lb />ress</orig>
                            <reg>progress<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> is the needed emblem and sustenance. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="47">
                    <l>Forever alive, forever forward,</l>
                    <l>Stately, solemn, sad, withdrawn, baffled, mad, <choice>
                            <orig>turbu-<lb />lent,</orig>
                            <reg>turbulent<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> feeble, dissatisfied, </l>
                    <l>Desperate, proud, fond, sick, accepted by men, <choice>
                            <orig>re-<lb />jected</orig>
                            <reg>rejected<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> by men, </l>
                    <l>They go! they go! I know that they go, but I know <lb />not where they go, </l>
                    <l>But I know that they go toward the best&#8212;toward <lb />something
                        great. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="48">
                    <l>Allons! Whoever you are! come forth!</l>
                    <l>You must not stay <del type="overstrike">sleeping and</del> dallying there in
                        the <lb />house, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>though you built it, or though it has been <lb />built for you. </l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="49">
                    <l>Allons! out of the dark confinement!</l>
                    <l>It is useless to protest&#8212;I know all, and expose it.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="50">
                    <l>Behold, through you as bad as the rest,</l>
                    <l>Through the laughter, dancing, dining, supping, of <lb />people, </l>
                    <l>Inside of dresses and ornaments, inside of those <lb />washed and trimmed
                        faces, </l>
                    <l>Behold a secret silent loathing and despair.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="51">
                    <l>No husband, no wife, no friend, <del type="overstrike">no lover,</del> so
                        trusted <lb /><del type="overstrike">as</del> to hear the confession, </l>
                    <l>Another self, a duplicate of every one, skulking <lb />and hiding it goes,
                            <del type="overstrike">open and above board it <lb />goes, </del></l>
                    <l>Formless and wordless through the streets of the <lb />cities, polite and
                        bland in the parlors, </l>
                    <l>In the cars of rail-roads, in steam-boats, in the public <lb />assembly, </l>
                    <l>Home to the houses of men and women, <del type="overstrike">among their
                            <lb />families,</del> at the table, in the bed-room, <choice>
                            <orig>every-<lb />where,</orig>
                            <reg>everywhere<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Smartly attired, countenance smiling, form upright, <lb /><add
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                        <subst>
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                        </subst>eath under the breast-bones, hell under the <lb />skull-bones, </l>
                    <l>Under the broadcloth and gloves, under the ribbons <lb />and artificial
                        flowers, </l>
                    <l>Keeping fair with the customs, speaking not a syllable <lb />of itself, </l>
                    <l>Speaking of anything else, but never of itself.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup">
                    <l>52. Allons! Through struggles and wars!</l>
                    <l>The goal that was named cannot be countermanded.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf168v" type="verso" n="328" facs="nyp.00015.336" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="53">
                    <l>Have the past struggles succeeded?</l>
                    <l>What has succeeded? Yourself? Your nation? <lb />Nature? </l>
                    <l>Now understand me well&#8212;<add type="edit" rend="underline">It is
                            provided in the <lb /> essence of things, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>that from any fruition of <choice><orig>suc-<lb />cess,</orig><reg>success,<lb/></reg></choice> no matter what, <add
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                            something <lb />to make a greater struggle necessary.</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="54">
                    <l>My call is the call of battle&#8212;I nourish active <choice>
                            <orig>re-<lb />bellion,</orig>
                            <reg>rebellion<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>He going with me must go well armed,</l>
                    <l>He going with me goes often with spare diet, poverty, <lb />angry enemies,
                        desertions. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="55">
                    <l>Allons! The road is before us!</l>
                    <l>It is safe&#8212;I have tried it&#8212;my own feet have tried
                        <lb />it well. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="56">
                    <l>Allons! Be not detained!</l>
                    <l>Let the paper remain on the desk unwritten, and the <lb />book on the shelf
                        unopened! </l>
                    <l>Let the tools remain in the workshop! let the money <lb />remain unearned! </l>
                    <l>Let the school stand! mind not the cry of the teacher! <anchor xml:id="t59"
                         /></l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t59">Let the preacher preach in his
                            pulpit!</transpose>
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                        <lb />plead in the court, and the judge expound the <lb />law. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="57">
                    <l>Mon enfant! I give you my hand!</l>
                    <l>I give you my love, more precious than money,</l>
                    <l>I give you myself, before preaching or law;</l>
                    <l>Will you give me yourself? Will you come travel <lb />with me? </l>
                    <l>Shall we stick by each other as long as we live?</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
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                <del type="overstrike">
                    <head type="main-authorial"><del type="overstrike">TO THE SAYERS OF</del>
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                            <add seq="5" type="unmarked" place="margintop">This rolling earth is
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                                </del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
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                    <l>Watery, vegetable, sauroid advances&#8212;beings, <choice>
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                            <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="inline">your own Soul.)</add>
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                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>those delicious sounds
                        out of <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">your</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">our</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> friends' <lb />mouths? </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>No, the real words are
                        more delicious than they.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>Human bodies are words, myriads of words,</l>
                    <l>In the best poems re-appears the body, man's or <lb />woman's, <restore
                            rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">well-shaped, natural, gay,</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                    <l>Every part able, active, receptive, without shame or <lb />the need of shame.
                    </l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>Air, soil, water, fire, <del type="overstrike">these</del> are <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="4" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> words,</l>
                    <l>I myself am a word with them&#8212;my qualities <choice>
                            <orig>inter-<lb />penetrate</orig>
                            <reg>interpenetrate<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> with theirs<restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">&#8212;<del type="overstrike">my</del>
                                    name<add type="insertion" place="supralinear">s</add>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">is</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">are</add>
                                </subst> nothing to <lb />them, <lb /></del>
                        </restore></l>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Though <del type="overstrike">it were</del> told in the three
                                thousand languages, <lb />what would air, soil, water, fire, know of
                                    <del type="overstrike">my</del>
                                <lb />name<add type="insertion" place="supralinear">s</add><del
                                    type="overstrike">?</del>
                                <lb /></l>
                        </del>
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                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>A healthy presence, a friendly or commanding <choice>
                            <orig>ges-<lb />ture,</orig>
                            <reg>gesture<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> are words, sayings, meanings, </l>
                    <l>The charms that go with the mere looks of some men <lb />and women, are
                        sayings and meanings also. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">The</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">True</add>
                            </subst> workmanship <del type="overstrike">of Souls</del> is by the
                            inaudible words <lb />of the earth, </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>The great masters<del type="overstrike">, the sayers,</del> know the earth's
                        words, <lb />and use them more than the audible words. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>Amelioration is one of the earth's words,</l>
                    <l>The earth neither lags nor hastens,</l>
                    <l>It has all attributes, growths, effects, latent in itself <lb />from the
                        jump, </l>
                    <l>It is not half beautiful only&#8212;defects and <choice>
                            <orig>excres-<lb />cences</orig>
                            <reg>excrescences<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> show just as much as perfections show. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                    <l>The earth does not withhold, it is generous enough,</l>
                    <l>The truths of the earth continually wait, they are <lb />not so concealed
                        either, </l>
                    <l>They are calm, subtle, untransmissible by print,</l>
                    <l>They are imbued through all things, conveying <choice>
                            <orig>them-<lb />selves</orig>
                            <reg>themselves<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> willingly, </l>
                    <l>Conveying a sentiment and invitation of the earth&#8212;<add
                            type="unmarked" place="supralinear">saying,</add>
                        <lb />I utter and utter, </l>
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                    <l>I speak not, yet if you hear me not, of what avail am <lb />I to you? </l>
                    <l>To bear&#8212;to better&#8212;lacking these, of what avail <lb />am
                        I? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>Accouche! Accouchez!</l>
                    <l>Will you rot your own fruit in yourself there?</l>
                    <l>Will you squat and stifle there?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>The earth does not argue,</l>
                    <l>Is not pathetic, has no arrangements,</l>
                    <l>Does not scream, haste, persuade, threaten, promise,</l>
                    <l>Makes no discriminations, has no conceivable <choice>
                            <orig>fail-<lb />ures,</orig>
                            <reg>failures<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Closes nothing, refuses nothing, shuts none out,</l>
                    <l>Of all the powers, objects, states, it notifies, shuts <lb />none out. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>The earth does not exhibit itself, nor refuse to exhibit
                        <lb />itself&#8212;possesses still underneath, </l>
                    <l>Underneath the ostensible sounds, the august chorus <lb />of heroes, the wail
                        of slaves, </l>
                    <l>Persuasions of lovers, curses, gasps of the dying, <lb />laughter of young
                        people, accents of bargainers, </l>
                    <l>Underneath these, possessing the words that never <lb />fail. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <l>To her children, the words of the eloquent dumb <lb />great mother never
                        fail, </l>
                    <l>The true words do not fail, for motion does not fail, <lb />and reflection
                        does not fail, </l>
                    <l>Also the day and night do not fail, and the voyage <lb />we pursue does not
                        fail. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf170v" type="verso" n="332" facs="nyp.00015.340" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                    <l>Of the interminable sisters,</l>
                    <l>Of the ceaseless cotillions of sisters,</l>
                    <l>Of the centripetal and centrifugal sisters, the elder <lb />and younger
                        sisters, </l>
                    <l>The beautiful sister we know dances on with the rest.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>With her ample back toward every beholder,</l>
                    <l>With the fascinations of youth, and the equal <choice>
                            <orig>fascina-<lb />tions</orig>
                            <reg>fascinations<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of age, </l>
                    <l>Sits she whom I too love like the rest&#8212;sits <choice>
                            <orig>undis-<lb />turbed,</orig>
                            <reg>undisturbed<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Holding up in her hand what has the character of a <lb />mirror, while her
                        eyes glance back from it, </l>
                    <l>Glance as she sits, inviting none, denying none,</l>
                    <l>Holding a mirror day and night tirelessly before her <lb />own face. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>Seen at hand, or seen at a distance,</l>
                    <l>Duly the twenty-four appear in public every day,</l>
                    <l>Duly approach and pass with their companions, or <lb />a companion, </l>
                    <l>Looking from no countenances of their own, but from <lb />the countenances of
                        those who are with them, </l>
                    <l>From the countenances of children or women, or the <lb />manly countenance, </l>
                    <l>From the open countenances of animals, or from <lb />inanimate things, </l>
                    <l>From the landscape or waters, or from the exquisite <lb />apparition of the
                        sky, </l>
                    <l>From our countenances, mine and yours, faithfully <lb />returning them, </l>
                    <l>Every day in public appearing without fail, but never <lb />twice with the
                        same companions. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf171r" type="recto" n="333" facs="nyp.00015.341" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                    <l>Embracing man, embracing all, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>proceed the three <lb />hundred and sixty-five
                        resistlessly round the sun, </l>
                    <l>Embracing all, soothing, supporting, follow close <add type="insertion"
                            place="marginright">&#182;</add> three <lb />hundred and sixty-five
                        offsets of the first, <add type="insertion" place="marginright"
                            >&#182;</add> sure <lb />and necessary as they. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>Tumbling on steadily, nothing dreading,</l>
                    <l>Sunshine, storm, cold, heat, forever withstanding, <lb />passing, carrying, </l>
                    <l>The Soul's realization and determination still <choice>
                            <orig>inherit-<lb />ing,</orig>
                            <reg>inheriting<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>The fluid vacuum around and ahead still entering <lb />and dividing, </l>
                    <l>No balk retarding, no anchor anchoring, on no rock <lb />striking, </l>
                    <l>Swift, glad, content, unbereaved, nothing losing,</l>
                    <l>Of all able and ready at any time to give strict <lb />account, </l>
                    <l>The divine ship sails the divine sea.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                    <l>Whoever you are! motion and reflection are <choice>
                            <orig>espe-<lb />cially</orig>
                            <reg>especially<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> for you, </l>
                    <l>The divine ship sails the divine sea for you.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                    <l>Whoever you are! you are he or she for whom the <lb />earth is solid and
                        liquid, </l>
                    <l>You are he or she for whom the sun and moon hang <lb />in the sky, </l>
                    <l>For none more than you are the present and the past,</l>
                    <l>For none more than you is immortality.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup">
                    <l>21. Each man to himself, and each woman to herself, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="supralinear">&#182; Such</add> is <lb />the word of the past
                        and present, and the word <lb />of immortality, </l>
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                    <l>No one can acquire for another&#8212;not one!</l>
                    <l>Not one can grow for another&#8212;not one!</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                    <l>The song is to the singer, and comes back most to <lb />him, </l>
                    <l>The teaching is to the teacher, and comes back most <lb />to him, </l>
                    <l>The murder is to the murderer, and comes back most <lb />to him, </l>
                    <l>The theft is to the thief, and comes back most to him,</l>
                    <l>The love is to the lover, and comes back most to him,</l>
                    <l>The gift is to the giver, and comes back most to him <lb />&#8212;it
                        cannot fail, </l>
                    <l>The oration is to the orator, and the acting is to the <lb />actor and
                        actress, not to the audience, </l>
                    <l>And no man understands any greatness or goodness <lb />but his own, or the
                        indication of his own. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                    <l>I swear the earth shall surely be complete to him or <lb />her who shall be
                        complete! </l>
                    <l>I swear the earth remains broken and jagged only to <lb />him or her who
                        remains broken and jagged! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                    <l>I swear there is no greatness or power that does not <lb />emulate those of
                        the earth! </l>
                    <l>I swear there can be no theory of any account, unless <lb />it corroborate
                        the theory of the earth! </l>
                    <l>No politics, art, religion, behavior, or what not, is of <lb />account,
                        unless it compare with the amplitude of <lb />the earth, </l>
                    <l>Unless it face the exactness, vitality, impartiality, <lb />rectitude of the
                        earth. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                    <l>I swear I begin to see love with sweeter spasms than <lb />that which
                        responds love! </l>
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                    <l>It is that which contains itself, which never invites <lb />and never
                        refuses. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                    <l>I swear I begin to see little or nothing in audible <lb />words! </l>
                    <l>I swear I think all merges toward the presentation of <lb />the unspoke<del
                            type="overstrike">n</del> meanings of the earth! </l>
                    <l>Toward him who sings the songs of the body, and of <lb />the truths of the
                        earth, </l>
                    <l>Toward him who makes the dictionaries of the words <lb />that print cannot
                        touch. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                    <l>I swear I see what is better than to tell the best,</l>
                    <l>It is always to leave the best untold.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                    <l>When I undertake to tell the best, I find I cannot,</l>
                    <l>My tongue is ineffectual on its pivots,</l>
                    <l>My breath will not be obedient to its organs,</l>
                    <l>I become a dumb man.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                    <l>The best of the earth cannot be told anyhow&#8212;all or <lb />any is
                        best, </l>
                    <l>It is not what you anticipated&#8212;it is cheaper, easier, <lb />nearer, </l>
                    <l>Things are not dismissed from the places they held <lb />before, </l>
                    <l>The earth is just as positive and direct as it was <lb />before, </l>
                    <l>Facts, religions, improvements, politics, trades, are as <lb />real as
                        before, </l>
                    <l>But the Soul is also real,&#8212;it too is positive and <lb />direct, </l>
                    <l>No reasoning, no proof has established it,</l>
                    <l>Undeniable growth has established it.</l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                    <l>This is a poem for the sayers of words&#8212;these are <lb />hints of
                        meanings, </l>
                    <l>These are they that echo the tones of Souls, and the <lb />phrases of Souls; </l>
                    <l>If they did not echo the phrases of Souls, what were <lb />they then? </l>
                    <l>If they had not reference to you in especial, what were <lb />they then? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                    <l>I swear I will never henceforth have to do with the <lb />faith that tells
                        the best! </l>
                    <l>I will have to do with that faith only that leaves the <lb />best untold.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                    <l>Say on, sayers!</l>
                    <l>Delve! mould! pile the words of the earth!</l>
                    <l>Work on&#8212;it is materials you bring, not breaths;</l>
                    <l>Work on, age after age! nothing is to be lost,</l>
                    <l>It may have to wait long, but it will certainly come <lb />in use, </l>
                    <l>When the materials are all prepared, the architects <lb />shall appear. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                    <l>I swear to you the architects shall appear without fail! <lb />I announce
                        them and lead them, </l>
                    <l>I swear to you they will understand you and justify <lb />you, </l>
                    <l>I swear to you the greatest among them shall be he <lb />who best knows you, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="insertion" place="inline">Who</add> encloses all, and is
                        <lb />faithful to all, </l>
                    <l>I swear to you, he and the rest shall not forget you <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst> they shall perceive that you are not an iota <lb />less than they, </l>
                    <l>I swear to you, you shall be glorified in them.</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
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            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01575">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00143" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial"><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>A BOSTON
                    BALLAD, <lb /> The 78th Year of These States.<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >)</add></head>
                <add type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <del type="erasure">I ros</del> To get betimes in Boston town, I rose this
                        morning early. </head>
                </add>
                <anchor xml:id="t60" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>C<hi rend="smallcaps">LEAR</hi> the way there, Jonathan!</l>
                    <l>Way for the President's marshal! Way for the <choice>
                            <orig>gov-<lb />ernment</orig>
                            <reg>government<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> cannon! </l>
                    <l>Way for the federal foot and dragoons&#8212;<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">(</add>and the <choice>
                            <orig>appa-<lb />ritions</orig>
                            <reg>apparitions<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> copiously tumbling.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr up to be first</note>
                <transpose anchored="true" target="t60">
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l><del type="overstrike">I rose this morning early,</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                            </subst>o get betimes in Boston <lb />town, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">I rose this morning early;</add>
                        </l>
                        <l>Here's a good place at the corner, I must stand and <lb />see the show.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                </transpose>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>I love to look on the stars and stripes, I hope the fifes <lb />will play
                        Yankee Doodle. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>How bright shine the cutlasses of the foremost troops!</l>
                    <l>Every man holds his revolver, marching stiff through <lb />Boston town. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>A fog follows&#8212;antiques of the same come limping,</l>
                    <l>Some appear wooden-legged, and some appear <choice>
                            <orig>ban-<lb />daged</orig>
                            <reg>bandaged<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and bloodless. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf173v" type="verso" n="338" facs="nyp.00015.346" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>Why this is <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">indeed</add> a show! It
                        has called the dead out of <lb />the earth! </l>
                    <l>The old grave-yards of the hills have hurried to <lb />see! </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Uncountable</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Phantoms!</add>
                        </subst> phantoms gather by flank and rear <lb />of it! </l>
                    <l>Cocked hats of mothy mould! crutches made of <lb />mist! </l>
                    <l>Arms in slings! old men leaning on young men's <lb />shoulders! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                    <l>What troubles you, Yankee phantoms? What is all <lb />this chattering of bare
                        gums? </l>
                    <l>Does the ague convulse your limbs? Do you <choice>
                            <orig>mis-<lb />take</orig>
                            <reg>mistake<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> your crutches for fire-locks, and level <lb />them? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>If you blind your eyes with tears, you will not see <lb />the President's
                        marshal, </l>
                    <l>If you groan such groans you might balk the <choice>
                            <orig>govern-<lb />ment</orig>
                            <reg>government<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> cannon. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                    <l>For shame, old maniacs! Bring down those tos <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">t</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />arms, and let your white hair be, </l>
                    <l>Here gape your <del type="overstrike">smart</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft"
                        >great&#8209;</add>grand-sons&#8212;their wives gaze <lb />at them
                        from the windows, </l>
                    <l>See how well-dressed&#8212;see how orderly they conduct <lb />themselves.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>Worse and worse! Can't you stand it! Are you <lb />retreating! </l>
                    <l>Is this hour with the living too dead for you?</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf174r" type="recto" n="339" facs="nyp.00015.347" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>Retreat then! Pell-mell!</l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">Back</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">t</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">T</add>
                        </subst>o your graves! Back <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >&#8212;back</add> to the hills, old <lb />limpers! </l>
                    <l>I do not think you belong here, anyhow.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>But there is one thing that belongs here&#8212;shall I tell <lb />you
                        what it is, gentlemen of Boston? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <l>I will whisper it to the Mayor&#8212;he shall send a <choice>
                            <orig>com-<lb />mittee</orig>
                            <reg>committee<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> to England, </l>
                    <l>They shall get a grant from the Parliament, go with a <lb />cart to the royal
                        vault&#8212;haste! </l>
                    <l>Dig out King George's coffin, unwrap him quick <lb />from the grave-clothes,
                        box up his bones for a <lb />journey, </l>
                    <l>Find a swift Yankee clipper&#8212;here is freight for you,
                        <lb />black-bellied clipper, </l>
                    <l>Up with your anchor! shake out your sails! steer <lb />straight toward Boston
                        bay. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Now</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Then</add>
                        </subst> call for the President's marshal again, bring out <lb />the
                        government cannon, </l>
                    <l>Fetch home the roarers from Congress, make <choice>
                            <orig>an-<lb />other</orig>
                            <reg>another<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> procession, guard it with foot and <choice>
                            <orig>dra-<lb />goons.</orig>
                            <reg>dragoons<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>This centre-piece for them:</l>
                    <l>Look! all orderly citizens&#8212;look from the windows, <lb />women! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>The committee open the box, set up the regal ribs, <lb />glue those that will
                        not stay, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf174v" type="verso" n="340" facs="nyp.00015.348" />
                    <l>Clap the skull on top of the ribs, and clap a crown on <lb />top of the
                        skull. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                    <l>You have got your revenge, old buster! The crown is <lb />come to its own,
                        and more than its own. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>Stick your hands in your pockets, Jonathan&#8212;you <lb />are a made man
                        from this day, </l>
                    <l>You are mighty cute&#8212;and here is one of your <lb />bargains. </l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf175r" type="recto" n="341" facs="nyp.00015.349" />
            <lg type="cluster" xml:id="ppp.01576">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00066" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">CALAMUS.</head>
                <del type="overstrike">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Songs by the Calamus Pond.</head>
                    </add>
                </del>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01577">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00071" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">1.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline"
                                        >In paths untrodden.</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="margintop">By the Calamus Pond,
                                    I wander.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>By the Calamus Pond, I wander.</l>
                    </add>
                    <l><subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I<hi rend="smallcaps">N</hi></del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Through</add>
                        </subst> paths untrodden, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">in a</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and</add>
                            </subst> bower<add type="unmarked" place="inline">s,</add>
                        </add>
                        <anchor xml:id="t61" /></l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t61">
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">In the <add type="insertion"
                                        place="marginleft">green &#38;</add> growth by
                                        margin<del type="overstrike">s of pond-</del> waters,</del>
                            </restore>
                        </transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l>Escaped from the life that exhibits itself,</l>
                    <l>From all the standards hitherto published&#8212;from <lb />the pleasures,
                        profits, conformities, </l>
                    <l>Which too long I was offering to feed to my Soul</l>
                    <l>Clear to me now, standards not yet published&#8212; <lb />clear to me
                        that my Soul, </l>
                    <l>That the Soul of the man I speak for, feeds, rejoices <lb /><restore
                            rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">only in comrades;</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">only in love;</add>
                        </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Here, by myself, away from the clank of the world,</l>
                    <l>Tallying and talked to here by tongues aromatic,</l>
                    <l>No longer abashed&#8212;for in this secluded spot I can <lb />respond as
                        I would not dare elsewhere, </l>
                    <l>Strong upon me the life that does not exhibit itself, <lb />yet contains all
                        the rest, </l>
                    <l>Resolved to <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sing</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">chant</add>
                        </subst> no <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">song<del type="overstrike">s</del></del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">chant</add>
                        </subst> to-day but <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">those</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">that</add>
                        </subst> of manly <lb />attachment, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Projecting <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">them</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">it</add>
                            </subst> along that substantial life,</l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Bequeathing, hence, <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">a</add>
                            type<del type="overstrike">s</del> of athletic <subst>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">love,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">adhesiveness,</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst></l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf175v" type="verso" n="342" facs="nyp.00015.350" />
                    <l>Afternoon, <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">this</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">on</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> delicious Ninth Month, in my forty-<lb />first year, </l>
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">proceed</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /> at last</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">consent at last</add>
                        </subst>, for all who are, or have been, young <lb />men, </l>
                    <l>To tell <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><unclear
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses">in a
                                    wo</unclear>rd,</add>
                        </del> the secret of my nights and days,</l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">To celebrate</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">Namely,</add>
                        </subst> the need of <add type="insertion" place="marginright">
                            <del type="overstrike">athletic</del>
                            <del type="overstrike">faithful</del>
                        </add> comrades.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01578">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00072" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">2.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Scented herbage of my breast.</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline"
                                    >Calamus</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <note type="authorial">? Calamus. ? to lead the separate vol?</note>
                    </del>
                    <l>S<hi rend="smallcaps">CENTED</hi> herbage of my breast,</l>
                    <l>Leaves from you I yield, I write, to be perused <del type="overstrike"
                            >best</del>
                        <lb />afterwards, </l>
                    <l>Tomb-leaves, body-leaves, growing up above me, above <lb />death, </l>
                    <l>Perennial roots, tall leaves&#8212;O the winter shall not <lb />freeze
                        you, delicate leaves, </l>
                    <l>Every year shall you bloom again&#8212;Out from where <lb />you retired,
                        you shall emerge again; </l>
                    <l>O I do not know whether many, passing by, will <choice>
                            <orig>dis-<lb />cover</orig>
                            <reg>discover<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> you, or inhale your faint odor&#8212;but I <lb />believe a few
                        will; </l>
                    <l>O slender leaves! O blossoms of my blood! I permit <lb />you to tell, in your
                        own way, of the heart that is <lb />under you, </l>
                    <l>O burning and throbbing&#8212;surely all will one day be
                        <lb />accomplished; </l>
                    <l>O I do not know what you mean, there underneath
                        <lb />yourselves&#8212;you are not happiness, </l>
                    <l>You are often more bitter than I can bear&#8212;you burn <lb />and sting
                        me, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf176r" type="recto" n="343" facs="nyp.00015.351" />
                    <l>Yet you are very beautiful to me, you faint-tinged <lb />roots&#8212;you
                        make me think of Death, </l>
                    <l>Death is beautiful from you&#8212;(what indeed is <choice>
                            <orig>beau-<lb />tiful,</orig>
                            <reg>beautiful<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> except Death and Love?) </l>
                    <l>O I think it is not for <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">l</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">L</add>
                        </subst>ife I am chanting here my <lb />chant of lovers&#8212;I think it
                        must be for Death, </l>
                    <l>For how calm, how solemn it grows, to ascend to the <lb />atmosphere of
                        lovers, </l>
                    <l>Death or <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">l</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">L</add>
                        </subst>ife I am then indifferent&#8212;my Soul <choice>
                            <orig>de-<lb />clines</orig>
                            <reg>declines<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> to prefer, </l>
                    <l>I am not sure but the high Soul of lovers welcomes <lb />death most; </l>
                    <l>Indeed, O Death, I think now these leaves mean <choice>
                            <orig>pre-<lb />cisely</orig>
                            <reg>precisely<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> the same as you mean; </l>
                    <l>Grow up taller, sweet leaves, that I may see! Grow <lb />up out of my breast! </l>
                    <l>Spring away from the concealed heart there!</l>
                    <l>Do not fold yourselves so in your pink-tinged roots, <lb />timid leaves! </l>
                    <l>Do not remain down there so ashamed, herbage of my <lb />breast! </l>
                    <l>Come, I am determined to unbare this broad breast of <lb />mine&#8212;I
                        have long enough stifled and choked; </l>
                    <l>Emblematic and capricious blades, I leave you&#8212;now <lb />you serve
                        me not, </l>
                    <l>Away! I will say what I have to say, by itself,</l>
                    <l>I will escape from the sham that was proposed to me,</l>
                    <l>I will sound myself and comrades only&#8212;I will never <lb />again
                        utter a call, only their call, </l>
                    <l>I will raise, with it, immortal reverberations through <lb />The States, </l>
                    <l>I will give an example to lovers, to take permanent <lb />shape and will
                        through The States; </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf176v" type="verso" n="344" facs="nyp.00015.352" />
                    <l>Through me shall the words be said to make death <lb />exhilarating, </l>
                    <l>Give me your tone therefore, O Death, that I may <lb />accord with it, </l>
                    <l>Give me yourself&#8212;for I see that you belong to me <lb />now above
                        all, and are folded together <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">above all</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">inseparable</add>
                        </subst><lb />&#8212;you Love and Death are, </l>
                    <l>Nor will I allow you to balk me any more with what <lb />I was calling <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">l</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">L</add>
                        </subst>ife, </l>
                    <l>For now it is conveyed to me that you are the <choice>
                            <orig>pur-<lb />ports</orig>
                            <reg>purports<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> essential, </l>
                    <l>That you hide in these shifting forms of life, for
                        <lb />reasons&#8212;and that they are mainly for you, </l>
                    <l>That you, beyond them, come forth, to remain, the <lb />real reality, </l>
                    <l>That behind the mask of materials you patiently <lb />wait, no matter how
                        long, </l>
                    <l>That you will one day, perhaps, take control of all,</l>
                    <l>That you will perhaps dissipate this entire show of <lb />appearance, </l>
                    <l>That may be you are what it is all for&#8212;but it does <lb />not last
                        so very long, </l>
                    <l>But you will last very long.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01579">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00073" />
                    </relations>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <head type="main-authorial">3.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial">
                                <del seq="2" type="erased">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="interlinear"
                                        rend="underline"> T<gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        holding me now in hand.</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline"
                                    >These leaves conning you con at peril.</add>
                            </head>
                        </add>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HOEVER</hi> you are holding me now in
                                        hand,</l>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">T<gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">These leaves
                                    conning you con at peril;</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Without one thing all will be useless,</l>
                            </del>
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr up &#42;</note>
                            <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I give you fair warning,
                                before you attempt me <lb />further, </l>
                            <l>I am not what you supposed, but far different.<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">)</add></l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf177r" type="recto" n="345" facs="nyp.00015.353" />
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                            <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Advances <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a man</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">one</add>
                                </subst> to become my follower?</head>
                        </add>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Who is he that would</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Advances <del
                                            type="overstrike">a man</del>
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">one</add> to</add>
                                </subst> become my follower?</l>
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Who would sign himself</del>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        </add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="margintop">Is he who
                                        touches me now</add>
                                </subst> a candidate for my <choice>
                                    <orig>affec-<lb />tions?</orig>
                                    <reg>affections<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                                <del type="overstrike">Are you he?</del>
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">take in &#42;</note>
                        </del>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                            <l>The way is <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">suspicious&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                        >dreary&#8212;</add>
                                </subst>the result slow <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">and</add>
                                </subst> uncertain <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                                </subst>
                                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">take in &#42;</note>
                                <del type="overstrike">may-be destructive</del>; </l>
                            <l>You would have to give up all else&#8212;I alone would <lb />
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">expect</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">require</add>
                                </subst> to be your God, sole and exclusive, </l>
                            <l>Your novitiate would even then be long and <choice>
                                    <orig>ex-<lb />hausting,</orig>
                                    <reg>exhausting<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                            </l>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">The whole past theory of your life, and</del>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">a</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">A</add>
                                </subst>ll conformity <lb />to the lives around you, would have to
                                be <choice>
                                    <orig>aban-<lb />doned;</orig>
                                    <reg>abandoned<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                            </l>
                            <l>Therefore release me <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">now</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">at once</add>
                                </subst>, before troubling yourself <lb />any further <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                </subst>Let go your hand from my <lb />shoulders, </l>
                            <l>Put me down, and depart on your way.</l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Or <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">By
                                    stealth in <del type="overstrike">a</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">some</add> wood <del
                                        type="overstrike">for trial</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O my lover</add></add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l><del type="overstrike"><add type="insertion" place="marginleft"
                                    >First</add>Or else, only</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">b</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">B</add>
                            </subst>y stealth, in some wood, <del type="overstrike">for trial,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">O my lover</add>
                            <anchor xml:id="t62" /></l>
                        <l>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t62">Or back of a rock, in the open
                                air, <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="inline">O my lover for trial,</add>
                                </del></transpose>
                        </l>
                        <l>(For in any roofed room of a house I emerge not&#8212; <lb />nor in
                            company, </l>
                        <l>And in libraries I lie as one dumb, a gawk, or unborn, <lb />or dead,) </l>
                        <l>But just possibly <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >specially</add> with you on a high hill<del type="overstrike"
                                >&#8212;first</del>
                            <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">w</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">W</add>
                            </subst>atching lest any person, for miles around, <lb />approach
                            unawares, </l>
                        <l>Or possibly with you sailing at sea, or on the beach of <lb />the sea, or
                            some quiet island, </l>
                        <l>Here to put your lips upon mine I permit you,</l>
                        <l>With the comrade's long-dwelling kiss, or the new <lb />husband's kiss, </l>
                        <l>For I am the new husband, and I am the comrade.</l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">
                            <l>But I am not what you supposed, O my lover.</l>
                        </add>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf177v" type="verso" n="346" facs="nyp.00015.354" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>Or, <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">if you will,</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />for <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />of us still,</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> thrusting me beneath your clothing,</l>
                        <l>Where I may <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">feel the throbs of your heart,</del>
                            </restore> or rest <lb />
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">upon your</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">on your waist
                                    or</add>
                            </subst> hip, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">and feel the throbs of your
                                    heart,</add>
                            </del></l>
                        <l>Carry me when you go forth over land or sea;</l>
                        <l>For thus, merely touching you, is enough&#8212;is <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">best</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">better for both of
                                    us,</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>And thus, touching you, would I silently sleep and be <lb />carried
                            eternally. </l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <l><del type="overstrike">Thus</del> On your breast, on your silent
                                breast O my lover</l>
                        </add>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>But these leaves <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">conning, you con</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">opening <del
                                        type="overstrike">and</del> you open</add>
                            </subst> at peril, <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">O my lover,</add>
                            </del></l>
                        <l>For these leaves, and me, you will not understand, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="marginright">O my lover,</add></l>
                        <l>They will elude you at first, and still more <choice><orig>after-<lb />ward</orig><reg>afterward<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;I will certainly elude you, </l>
                        <l>Even while you should think you had unquestionably <lb />caught me,
                            behold! </l>
                        <l>Already you see I have escaped from you<del type="overstrike">.</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">O my lover,</add></l>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <l>Therefore <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">put</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">set</add>
                                </subst> me down of your own accord</l>
                            <l>Release your hands from my shoulders &#38; let me go.</l>
                        </add>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>For it is not for what I have put into it that I have <lb />written this
                            book, </l>
                        <l>Nor is it by reading it you will acquire it, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">O my lover,</add></l>
                        <l>Nor do those know me best who admire me<del type="overstrike">,</del> and
                            <lb />vauntingly praise me, </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Nor will the candidates for my love, (unless at most a <lb />very
                                few,) prove victorious, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Nor will my poems do good only&#8212;they will do just <lb />as much
                            evil, perhaps more <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>For all is useless without that which you may guess <lb />at many
                                times and not hit&#8212;that which I <lb />hinted at <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">;</add>
                                </subst></l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Therefore release me, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">at once,
                                take off your hands from my shoulders</add>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add><add
                                type="insertion" place="infralinear">Put me down</add> and depart on
                            your way <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">.</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">,</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">O my lover</add>
                            </del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">O my lover.</add></l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01580">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00075" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">4.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="margintop">As I walk alone, at
                                    candlelight</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">As I
                                walk <del type="erasure">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </del>
                                <del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the fields</add>
                                </del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">alone</add> at
                                candlelight,</add>
                        </subst>
                    </add>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>As I walk alone at candlelight</l>
                    </add>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">T<hi rend="smallcaps">HESE</hi> I,</del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">A<gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" />g</add>
                        </del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">s</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">S</add>
                        </subst>inging <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion">now</add>
                        </del> in spring, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">collect for</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the songs of</add>
                        </subst> lovers, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">and comrades</add></l>
                    <l>(For who but I should <subst>
                            <restore seq="3" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">understand</del>
                            </restore>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">sing of</add>
                        </subst> lovers, and all their <lb />sorrow and joy? </l>
                    <l>And who but I should be the poet of comrades?)</l>
                    <l>Collecting, I <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">seem to</add>
                        </del> traverse the garden, the world <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">in <gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" /> dream</add>
                        </del>&#8212;but <lb />soon I pass the gates, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Now along the pond-side&#8212;now wading in a little, <lb />fearing
                            not the wet, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Now by</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">Pass</add>
                        </subst> the post-and-rail fences, where the old stones <lb /><del
                            type="overstrike">thrown there,</del> picked from the fields, have <choice>
                            <orig>accu-<lb />mulated,</orig>
                            <reg>accumulated<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Wild-flowers and vines and weeds
                        come up through <lb />the stones, and partly cover them <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>Beyond these <lb />I pass, <anchor xml:id="t63" /></l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t63">Far, far in the forest,<add
                                type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add></transpose>
                        <del type="overstrike">before I think where I <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">get,</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and,</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginright">go,</add>
                            </subst></del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Solitary, smelling the earthy smell, stopping now and <lb />then in the
                        silence, </l>
                    <l>Alone I had thought&#8212;yet soon a <del type="overstrike">silent</del>
                        troop <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">gathers</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                        >drives</unclear>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">in <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </del> dusk</add><lb />around me, </l>
                    <l>Some walk by my side, and some behind, and some <lb />embrace my arms or
                        neck, </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">They, the</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">s</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">S</add>
                        </subst>pirits of friends, dead or alive&#8212;thicker <lb />they come,
                        a great crowd, and I in the middle, </l>
                    <l>Collecting, dispensing, singing in spring, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">there</del>
                            <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="marginright">here</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> I <choice>
                            <orig>wan-<lb />der</orig>
                            <reg>wander<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> with them, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"><del
                                type="overstrike">in my dream</del> in the dusk,</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>Plucking something for tokens&#8212;<del type="overstrike">something for
                            these, <lb />till I hit upon a name</del>&#8212;tossing toward
                        whoever <lb />is near me, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf178v" type="verso" n="348" facs="nyp.00015.356" />
                    <l>Here! lilac, with a branch of pine,</l>
                    <l>Here, out of my pocket, some moss which I pulled off <lb />a live-oak in
                        Florida, as it hung trailing down, </l>
                    <l>Here, some pinks and laurel leaves, and a handful of <lb />sage, </l>
                    <l>And here what I now draw from the water, wading in <lb />the pond-side, </l>
                    <l>(O here I last saw him that tenderly loves me&#8212;and <lb />returns
                        again, never to separate from me, </l>
                    <l>And this, O this shall henceforth be the token of
                        <lb />comrades&#8212;this calamus-root shall, </l>
                    <l>Interchange it, youths, with each other! Let none <lb />render it back!) </l>
                    <l>And twigs of maple, and a bunch of wild orange, and <lb />chestnut, </l>
                    <l>And stems of currants, and plum-blows, and the <lb />aromatic cedar; </l>
                    <l>These I, compassed around <add type="insertion">in dusk</add> by a thick <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">cloud</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">swarm</add>
                        </subst> of <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">spirits</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">lovers</add>
                        </subst>, </l>
                    <l>Wandering, point to, or touch as I pass, or throw them <lb />loosely from me, </l>
                    <l>Indicating to each one what he shall have&#8212;giving <lb />something to
                        each, </l>
                    <l>But what I drew from the water by the pond-side, that <lb />I reserve, </l>
                    <l>I will give of it&#8212;but only to them that love, as I <lb />myself am
                        capable of loving. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf179r" type="recto" n="349" facs="nyp.00015.357" />
                <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d27" />
                <note type="authorial" place="margintop">?</note>
                <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">out-all-this piece for the
                    present</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01581">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00067" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">5.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Sons of the Mother of
                            all</head>
                        <head type="main-authorial">To the States</head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>Sons of the mother of all!</l>
                        </add>
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginright">Out</note>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>S<hi rend="smallcaps">TATES!</hi></l>
                        </del>
                        <l>Were you looking to be <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">really</add>
                            </del> held together by the lawyers?</l>
                        <l>By an agreement on a paper? Or by arms?</l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>Away!</l>
                            </del>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">I arrive, bringing these,</del><add
                                    type="insertion"><del type="overstrike">But</del> O <del
                                        type="overstrike">for something</del></add> beyond <del
                                    type="overstrike">all</del> the forces of <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="marginright">lawyers and</add><lb /><del
                                    type="overstrike">courts and</del>
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">law or</add> arms, </l>
                            <l>
                                <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">These!</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">
                                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        </add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> to hold you together as firmly as the earth <lb />itself is
                                held together. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                            <l>The old breath of life, ever new,</l>
                            <l>Here! I pass it by contact to you, America.</l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                            <l>O mother! have you done much for me?</l>
                            <l>Behold, there shall from me be much done for you.</l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d26a" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">There shall from me be</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O that there might
                                    go from me</add>
                            </subst> a new <add type="insertion" place="marginright">American</add>
                                friendship&#8212;<del type="overstrike">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It shall</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">to</add>
                                    <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">To</add>
                                </subst>
                                <del>
                                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">OU</note>
                                </del><lb /> be called after my name, <lb /></del></l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It shall</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">O that</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">To</add>
                            </subst> circulate through The States, indifferent of <lb />place, </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">It shall</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">To</add>
                            </subst> twist and intertwist <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">them</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the
                                        States</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> through and around <add type="unmarked" place="marginright"
                                >them all.</add>
                            <lb />
                            <del type="overstrike">each other <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182;
                                        O</add>
                                </subst>Compact shall they be, showing <lb />new signs, </del></l>
                        <anchor xml:id="d26a" />
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>Affection <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">shall</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">only <del
                                        type="overstrike">can</del></add>
                            </subst> solve<add type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">every one of</del> the problems of <lb />freedom, </l>
                        <l>Those who love each other <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">shall be</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">shall become</add>
                            </subst> invincible,</l>
                        <l>They <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">shall</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> finally make America completely <choice>
                                <orig>victo-<lb />rious</orig>
                                <reg>victorious<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">in my name.</del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <anchor xml:id="d27" />
                    <pb xml:id="leaf179v" type="verso" n="350" facs="nyp.00015.358" />
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Over the battle, Sons of the
                            mother of all</head>
                    </add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop">out</note>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                                <l>One from Massachusetts <subst>
                                        <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">shall</del>
                                        </restore>
                                        <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                                >must</add>
                                        </del>
                                    </subst> be comrade to a <choice>
                                        <orig>Mis-<lb />sourian,</orig>
                                        <reg>Missourian<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice>
                                </l>
                                <l>One from Maine or Vermont, and a Carolinian and <lb />an
                                    Oregonese, shall be friends triune, <add type="unmarked"
                                        place="inline">&#182;</add>more <choice>
                                        <orig>pre-<lb />cious</orig>
                                        <reg>precious<lb /></reg>
                                    </choice> to each other than all the riches of the <lb />earth.
                                </l>
                            </lg>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <note type="authorial">out</note>
                        </del>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                            <l>To Michigan shall <subst>
                                    <del seq="2" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="supralinear">yet</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <del seq="4" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                            >still</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> be wafted perfume from Florida,</l>
                            <l>To the Mannahatta from <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Cuba or Mexico,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Oregon or
                                        Nevada,</add>
                                </subst></l>
                            <l>Not the perfume of flowers, but sweeter, and wafted <lb />beyond
                                death. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <note type="authorial">&#42;</note>
                        </del>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                                    <head type="main-authorial">No danger shall balk Americas'
                                        lovers</head>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <l>No danger shall balk <subst>
                                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Columbia's</del>
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                                  >America<del type="overwrite">n</del><add
                                                  type="overwrite" place="over">s</add></add>
                                        </subst> lovers,</l>
                                </del>
                                <l>
                                    <del type="overstrike">If need be, a thousand shall sternly
                                        immolate <choice>
                                            <orig>them-<lb />selves</orig>
                                            <reg>themselves<lb /></reg>
                                        </choice> for one, </del>
                                </l>
                                <l>
                                    <del type="hashmark">The Kanuck shall be willing to lay down his
                                        life for <lb />the Kansian, and the Kansian for the Kanuck,
                                        <lb />on due need. </del>
                                </l>
                            </lg>
                        </del>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <note type="authorial">&#42;</note>
                        </del>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                            <l>It shall be customary in all directions, in the houses <lb />and
                                streets, to see manly affection, </l>
                            <l>The departing brother or friend shall salute the <choice>
                                    <orig>re-<lb />maining</orig>
                                    <reg>remaining<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> brother or friend with a kiss. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>There shall be innovations,</l>
                            </del>
                            <l>There shall be <del type="overstrike">countless</del> linked
                                    hands&#8212;<del type="overstrike">namely,</del> the
                                <lb />Northeasterner's, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">with</add>
                                </subst> the Northwesterner's, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add>and <lb />the Southwesterner's, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">with</add>
                                </subst> those of the interior <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                                </subst>
                                <lb /><del type="overstrike">and all their brood,</del>
                            </l>
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">11.</note>
                            <l>These shall be masters of the world under a new <lb />power, </l>
                            <l>They shall laugh to scorn the attacks of all the <choice>
                                    <orig>re-<lb />mainder</orig>
                                    <reg>remainder<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> of the world. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf180r" type="recto" n="351" facs="nyp.00015.359" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop">&#42;</note>
                    <add type="insertion" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline"><gap
                                reason="deletion, illegible" /> Over the carnage sons of the mother
                            all</head>
                        <l>(Over the carnage sons of the mother of all</l>
                        <l>Rose to my ear <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">this</add>
                            </subst> pensive voice out of the west for your sake)</l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Affection shall yet, (it said)</l>
                        </del>
                    </add>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">? out</note>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                            <l>The most dauntless and rude shall touch face to face <lb />lightly, </l>
                            <l>The dependence of Liberty shall be lovers,</l>
                            <l>The continuance of Equality shall be comrades.</l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                            <l>These shall tie and band stronger than hoops of iron,</l>
                            <l>I, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">extatic</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">the encloser of
                                        all</add>
                                </subst>, O partners! O lands! <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">henceforth</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">will yet</add>
                                </subst> with the <lb />love of lovers tie you. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I will</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Come let us</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />t</add>
                            </del> make the continent indissoluble, <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">though it cost me</add>
                            </del></l>
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                                <l>(Thus cried the Phantomic <add type="insertion"
                                        place="supralinear">prophetic</add> voice, <del
                                        type="overstrike">down fr</del>
                                    <del type="overstrike">loftily of</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">rising</add> over the
                                    carnage, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">rising</add>
                                    over <del type="overstrike">the dead</del> the dead I <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">in anguish</add>
                                    mourn)</l>
                            </add>
                        </del>
                        <l>I <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">will</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">would</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> make the most splendid race the sun ever yet <lb />shone upon, </l>
                        <l>I <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">will</del>
                            </restore>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">yet</add> make divine magnetic
                            lands.</l>
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                    <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                        <l>I <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">will</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">yet</add>
                            </del> plant companionship thick as trees along all the <lb />rivers of
                            America, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and along
                            the shores of the <lb />great lakes, and all over the prairies <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>I <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">will</del>
                            </restore> make inseparable cities, with their arms about <lb />each
                            other's necks. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>For you <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">too</add>
                            </del> these, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">from me,</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">with my
                                        help,</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> O Democracy, to serve you, <lb />ma femme! </l>
                        <l>For you! for you, I am trilling these songs.<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">)</add></l>
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                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01582">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00076" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">6.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Not heaving from this ribb'd breast only.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>N<hi rend="smallcaps">OT</hi> heaving from <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">this</add>
                        </subst> ribb <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d breast only,</l>
                    <l>Not in sighs at night, in rage, dissatisfied with myself,</l>
                    <l>Not in those long-drawn, ill-suppres <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">sed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">t</add>
                        </subst> sighs,</l>
                    <l>Not in many an oath and promise broken,</l>
                    <l>Not in my wilful and savage soul's volition,</l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf180v" type="verso" n="352" facs="nyp.00015.360" />
                    <l>Not in the subtle nourishment of the air,</l>
                    <l>Not in this beating and pounding at my temples and <lb />wrists, </l>
                    <l>Not in the curious systole and diastole within, which <lb />will one day
                        cease, </l>
                    <l>Not in many a hungry wish, told to the skies only,</l>
                    <l>Not in cries, laughter, defiances, thrown from me <lb />when alone, far in
                        the wilds, </l>
                    <l>Not in husky pantings through clenched teeth,</l>
                    <l>Not in sounded and resounded words&#8212;chattering <lb />words, echoes,
                        dead words, </l>
                    <l>Not in the murmurs of my dreams while I sleep,</l>
                    <l>Nor the other murmurs of these incredible dreams of <lb />every day, </l>
                    <l>Nor in the limbs and senses of my body, that take you <lb />and dismiss you
                        continually&#8212;Not there, </l>
                    <l>Not in any or all of them, O adhesiveness! O pulse <lb />of my life! </l>
                    <l>Need I that you exist and show yourself, any more <lb />than in these songs.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01583">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00077" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">7.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Of the terrible <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">question</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">doubt</add>
                            </subst> of appearances.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">F</hi> the terrible <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">question</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">doubt</add>
                        </subst> of appearances,</l>
                    <l>Of the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">doubts, the</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">question,</add>
                        </subst> uncertaint <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ies</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">y</add>
                        </subst> after all,<add type="unmarked" place="marginright">&#8212;that
                            we may be deluded.</add></l>
                    <l>That may-be reliance and hope are but speculations <lb />after all, </l>
                    <l>That may-be identity beyond the grave is a beautiful <lb />fable only, </l>
                    <l>May-be the things I perceive&#8212;the animals, plants, <lb />men, hills,
                        shining and flowing waters, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf181r" type="recto" n="353" facs="nyp.00015.361" />
                    <l>The skies of day and night&#8212;colors, densities, forms <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="margintop">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="margintop">before &#38; around
                                me.</add>
                        </subst><lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>May-be these are, (as doubtless they are,) only <lb />apparitions,
                            <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> and the real something <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="marginright">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="marginright">still</add>
                        </subst> has <del type="overstrike">yet</del> to be <lb />known, </l>
                    <l>(How often they dart out of themselves, as if to <choice>
                            <orig>con-<lb />found</orig>
                            <reg>confound<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> me and mock me! </l>
                    <l>How often I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">think</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">see</add>
                        </subst> neither I know, nor any man <lb />knows, aught of them;) </l>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>May-be they only seem to me what they are, (as <lb />doubtless they
                            indeed but seem,) as from my <lb />present point of view <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>And might prove, (as of <lb />course they would,) naught of what
                            they appear, <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>or naught any how, from entirely changed points
                            <lb />of view; </l>
                    </del>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>To me, these <del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">doubts</add>
                        </del>, and the like of these, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >&#38; all doubts</add> are curiously <lb />answered by my lovers,
                        my dear friends; </l>
                    <l>When he whom I love travels with me, or sits a long <lb />while holding me by
                        the hand, </l>
                    <l>When the <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">subtle air,</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="overstrike">the impalpable, the sense</del> that <lb />words and
                        reason hold not, surround<add type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add> us and
                            <lb />pervade<add type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add> us, </l>
                    <l>Then I am charged with untold and untellable <choice><orig>wis-<lb />dom</orig><reg>wisdom<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;I am silent&#8212;I require nothing
                        further, </l>
                    <l>I cannot answer the question of appearances, or that <lb />of identity beyond
                        the grave, </l>
                    <l>But I walk or sit indifferent&#8212;I am satisfied,</l>
                    <l>He ahold of my hand has completely satisfied me.</l>
                </lg>
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                <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d28" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01584">
                    <relations>
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                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">8.</head>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <l>L<hi rend="smallcaps">ONG</hi> I thought that knowledge alone would suffice
                        <lb />me&#8212;O if I could but obtain knowledge! </l>
                    <l>Then my lands engrossed me&#8212;Lands of the prairies, <lb />Ohio's
                        land, the southern savannas, engrossed <lb />me&#8212;For them I would
                        live&#8212;I would be their <lb />orator; </l>
                    <l>Then I met the examples of old and new heroes&#8212;I <lb />heard of
                        warriors, sailors, and all dauntless <choice><orig>per-<lb />sons</orig><reg>persons<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;And it seemed to me that I too had it
                        <lb />in me to be as dauntless as any&#8212;and would <lb />be so; </l>
                    <l>And then, to enclose all, it came to me to strike up <lb />the songs of the
                        New World&#8212;And then I <choice>
                            <orig>be-<lb />lieved</orig>
                            <reg>believed<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> my life must be spent in singing; </l>
                    <l>But now take notice, land of the prairies, land of <lb />the south savannas,
                        Ohio's land, </l>
                    <l>Take notice, you Kanuck woods&#8212;and you Lake
                        <lb />Huron&#8212;and all that with you roll toward
                        <lb />Niagara&#8212;and you Niagara also, </l>
                    <l>And you, Californian mountains&#8212;That you each <lb />and all find
                        somebody else to be your singer of <lb />songs, </l>
                    <l>For I can be your singer of songs no longer&#8212;One <lb />who loves me
                        is jealous of me, and withdraws me <lb />from all but love, </l>
                    <l>With the rest I dispense&#8212;I sever from what I <lb />thought would
                        suffice me, for it does not&#8212;it is <lb />now empty and tasteless to
                        me, </l>
                    <l>I heed knowledge, and the grandeur of The States, <lb />and the example of
                        heroes, no more, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf182r" type="recto" n="355" facs="nyp.00015.363" />
                    <l>I am indifferent to my own songs&#8212;I will go with <lb />him I love, </l>
                    <l>It is to be enough for us that we are together&#8212;We <lb />never
                        separate again. </l>
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                <anchor xml:id="d28" />
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                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00070" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">9.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Hours continuing long, sore and
                            heavy hearted</head>
                    </add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out for revision</note>
                    <l>H<hi rend="smallcaps">OURS</hi> continuing long, sore and heavy-hearted,</l>
                    <l>Hours <del type="overstrike">of the dusk,</del> when I withdraw to a lonesome
                        <lb />and unfrequented spot, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> seating myself, leaning <lb />my face in my hands; </l>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
                    <l>Hours sleepless, deep in the night, when I go forth, <lb /><del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">s</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">S</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>peeding swiftly the country roads, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add>or through <lb />the city streets, <del
                            type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">o</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">O</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>r pacing miles and miles, <choice>
                            <orig>sti-<lb />fling</orig>
                            <reg>stifling<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> plaintive cries; </l>
                    <l><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>
                        </del>Hours discouraged, distracted&#8212;for the one I cannot
                        <lb />content myself without, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>soon I saw him content <lb />himself without me; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>Hours when I am
                        forgotten, <anchor xml:id="t64" /><del type="overstrike">(O weeks and months
                            are <lb />passing, but I believe I am never to forget!) </del></l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t64">Sullen and suffering
                            hours!</transpose>
                        <del type="overstrike">(I am ashamed&#8212;but it <lb />is
                            useless&#8212;I am what I am;) </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Hours of my torment<anchor xml:id="t65" />&#8212;<del type="overstrike">I
                            wonder if other men ever <lb /> have the like, out of the like feelings?
                        </del></l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t65">Is there <add type="insertion"
                                place="marginleft">over the whole earth</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">even</del> one other <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">man</add> like me <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">Is he as I am now</add>
                            distracted&#8212;his <lb />friend, his lover, lost to him?
                        </transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">Is he <del type="overstrike">too</del> as I am
                            now?</del> Does he <del type="overstrike">still</del> rise in the <choice>
                            <orig>morn-<lb />ing,</orig>
                            <reg>morning<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> dejected, thinking who is lost to him? <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">or</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />at night, awaking, think who is lost? </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf182v" type="verso" n="356" facs="nyp.00015.364" />
                    <l>Does he too harbor his friendship silent and endless? <lb />harbor his
                        anguish and passion? </l>
                    <l>Does some stray reminder, or the casual mention of a <lb />name, bring the
                        fit back upon him, taciturn and <lb />deprest? </l>
                    <l>Does he see himself reflected in me? In these hours, <lb />does he see the
                        face of his hours reflected? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01586">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00079" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">10.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">You</add>
                            </subst> bards of ages hence. </head>
                    </add>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="6" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Y<hi rend="smallcaps">OU</hi></del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">O</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Come</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">b</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">B</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>ards of ages hence! <del type="overstrike">when you refer to
                            me,</del> mind <lb />not so much my poems, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Nor speak of me that I prophesied of The States, and
                            <lb />led them the way of their glories; </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">But come,</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">I will take you down underneath this <lb />impassive
                            exterior&#8212;I will tell you what to say <lb />of me: <lb /></del>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">But</add> Publish my name and hang up
                        my picture as that of <lb />the tenderest lover, </l>
                    <l>The friend, the lover's portrait, of whom his friend, his <lb />lover, was
                        fondest, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Who was not <add type="insertion" place="marginleft"
                                >so</add> proud of his songs, but of the <choice>
                                <orig>measure-<lb />less</orig>
                                <reg>measureless<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> ocean of love within him <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            </subst>and freely poured <lb />it forth, </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Who often walked lonesome walks, thinking of his <lb />dear friends, his
                        lovers, </l>
                    <l>Who pensive, away from one he loved, often lay <choice>
                            <orig>sleep-<lb />less</orig>
                            <reg>sleepless<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and dissatisfied at night, </l>
                    <l>Who knew too well the sick, sick dread lest the one <lb />he loved might
                        secretly be indifferent to him, </l>
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                    <l>Whose happiest days were far away, through fields, in <lb />woods, on hills,
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>he and another,
                        wandering hand <lb />in hand, they twain, apart from other men, </l>
                    <l>Who oft as he sauntered the streets, curved with his <lb />arm the shoulder
                        of his friend <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>while the arm of <lb />his friend rested upon him also. </l>
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                    <head type="main-authorial">11.</head>
                    <del type="erasure">
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                            <head type="main-authorial"><add type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                    >Not</add> When I heard of <del type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                                </del> plaudits<add type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">my name <add type="insertion"
                                        place="supralinear">had</add> received</del></head>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <l><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Not</add>
                        </del> W<hi rend="smallcaps">HEN</hi> I heard <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="supralinear"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />t<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">had</add>
                                    received</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="supralinear">of the plaudits given
                                to my name</add>
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                        <del type="overstrike">at the close of the day how my name <lb />had been
                            received with plaudits</del> in the capitol, <lb />
                        <subst>
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                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
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                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike"><subst>
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                                </subst>till it was not a happy night for me that <choice>
                                    <orig>fol-<lb />lowed;</orig>
                                    <reg>followed<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                                <lb /></del>
                        </restore></l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">And else,</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Nor</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> when I caroused, <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">or</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">nor</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> when my plans were <lb />accomplished, <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">still I</del>
                        </restore> was <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">I</add>
                        </del>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">not</del>
                        </restore> happy; </l>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">2.</note>
                    </del>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>But the day when I
                        rose at dawn from the bed of <lb />perfect health, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add>refreshed, singing, inhaling the
                        <lb />ripe breath of autumn <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>When I saw the full moon in the west grow pale and <lb />disappear in the
                        morning light, </l>
                    <l>When I wandered alone over the beach, and, <choice>
                            <orig>undress-<lb />ing,</orig>
                            <reg>undressing<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> bathed, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >&#182;</add>laughing with the cool waters, and <lb />saw the sun rise, </l>
                    <l>And when I thought how my dear friend, my lover, <lb />was on his way coming,
                        O then I was happy; </l>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial">3.</note>
                    </del>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>O then each breath
                        tasted sweeter&#8212;and <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">all that day</del>
                        </restore>
                        <lb />my food nourished me more <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                        </restore>And the beautiful <lb />day passed <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">well</del>
                        </restore>, </l>
                    <l>And the next came with equal joy&#8212;And with the <lb />next, at
                        evening, came my friend; </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf183v" type="verso" n="358" facs="nyp.00015.366" />
                    <l>And that night, while all was still, I heard the waters <lb />roll slowly
                        continually up the shores, </l>
                    <l>I heard the hissing rustle of the liquid and sands, <lb /><del
                            type="overstrike">as directed to me,</del> whispering, to congratulate
                        <lb />me, </l>
                    <l>For the one I love most lay sleeping by me under the <lb />same cover in the
                        cool night, </l>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">4.</note>
                    </del>
                    <l>In the stillness, in the autumn moonbeams, his face <lb />was inclined toward
                        me, </l>
                    <l>And his arm lay lightly around my breast&#8212;And that <lb />night I was
                        happy. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01588">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00081" />
                    </relations>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">Out without fail</note>
                    <head type="main-authorial">12.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Are you the new person drawn toward me.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>A<hi rend="smallcaps">RE</hi> you the new person drawn toward me <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">?</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">and asking <lb />something <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">significant</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">more</add>
                            </subst> from me<del type="overstrike">?</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">than from others?</add>
                        </del><lb /></l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>To begin with, take warning&#8212;I am probably far <lb />different
                            from what you suppose; </l>
                    </del>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">And</add> Do you suppose you will
                        find in me your ideal?</l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">And</add> Do you think it so easy to
                        have me become your <lb />lover? </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Do you</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">And</add>
                        </subst> think the friendship of me would be unalloyed <lb />satisfaction? </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Do you</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">And</add>
                        </subst> suppose I am trusty and faithful?</l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Do you</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">And</add>
                        </subst> see no further than this fa&#231;ade&#8212;this smooth
                        <lb />and tolerant manner of me? </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Do you</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">And</add>
                        </subst> suppose yourself advancing on real ground <lb />toward a real
                        heroic man? </l>
                    <l>Have you no thought, O dreamer, that <del type="overstrike">it may be all
                            <lb />maya, illusion? O</del> the next step may precipitate <lb />you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">?</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf184r" type="recto" n="359" facs="nyp.00015.367" />
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>O let some past deceived one hiss in your ears, how <lb />many have prest
                            on the same as you are pressing <lb />now, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">How</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Ah</add>
                        </subst> many have fondly supposed what you are <choice>
                            <orig>sup-<lb />posing</orig>
                            <reg>supposing<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> now&#8212;only to be disappointed.<add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01589">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00082" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">13.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Roots and leaves themselves alone</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">C<hi rend="smallcaps">ALAMUS</hi> taste,</del>
                    </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>(For I must change the strain&#8212;these are not to be <lb />pensive
                            leaves, but leaves of joy,) </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Roots and leaves <del type="overstrike">unlike any but</del> themselves<del
                            type="overstrike">,</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">alone are these;</add></l>
                    <l>Scents brought to men and women from the wild <lb />woods, and from the
                        pond-side, </l>
                    <l>Breast-sorrel and pinks of love&#8212;fingers that wind <lb />around
                        tighter than vines, </l>
                    <l>Gushes from the throats of birds, hid in the foliage <lb />of trees, as the
                        sun is risen, </l>
                    <l>Breezes of land and love&#8212;Breezes set from living <lb />shores out
                        to you on the living sea&#8212;to you, <lb />O sailors! </l>
                    <l>Frost-mellowed berries, and Third Month twigs, <choice>
                            <orig>of-<lb />fered</orig>
                            <reg>offered<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> fresh to young persons wandering out in <lb />the fields when the
                        winter breaks up, </l>
                    <l>Love-buds, put before you and within you, whoever <lb />you are, </l>
                    <l>Buds to be unfolded on the old terms,</l>
                    <l>If you bring the warmth of the sun to them, they will <lb />open, and bring
                        form, color, perfume, to you, </l>
                    <l>If you become the aliment and the wet, they will <lb />become flowers,
                        fruits, tall branches and trees, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf184v" type="verso" n="360" facs="nyp.00015.368" />
                    <l>They are comprised in you just as much as in <choice><orig>them-<lb/>selves</orig><reg>themselves<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;perhaps more than in themselves, </l>
                    <l>They are not comprised in one season or succession, <lb />but many
                        successions, </l>
                    <l>They have come slowly up out of the earth and me, <lb />and are to come
                        slowly up out of you. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01590">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00083" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">14.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Not heat flames up and
                            consumes.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>N<hi rend="smallcaps">OT</hi> heat flames up and consumes,</l>
                    <l>Not sea-waves hurry in and out,</l>
                    <l>Not the air, delicious and dry, the air of the ripe <lb />summer, <subst>
                            <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </subst> bears lightly along white down-balls of <lb />myriads of seeds,
                        wafted, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>sailing
                        gracefully, to <lb />drop where they may <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst><anchor xml:id="t66" /></l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t66">Not these</transpose>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>O none of these, more than the flames <lb />of me, consuming,
                        burning for his love whom I <lb />love! </l>
                    <l>O none, more than I, hurrying in and out;</l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>Does the tide hurry,
                        seeking something, and never <lb />give up? O I the same; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>O nor down-balls,
                        nor perfumes, nor the high <lb />rain-emitting clouds, are borne through the
                        open <lb />air, </l>
                    <l>Any more than my Soul is borne through the open <lb />air, </l>
                    <l>Wafted in all directions, O love, for friendship, for <lb />you. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf185r" type="recto" n="361" facs="nyp.00015.369" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01591">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00084" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">15.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Trickle, <del type="overstrike">slow,</del>
                            drops</head>
                    </add>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">O <hi rend="smallcaps">DROPS</hi> of me!</del><add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#8212;</add> trickle, slow
                        drops <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">from eyes forehead and
                                breast.</add>
                        </del><add type="insertion" place="marginright">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my</add>
                            </subst> blue veins leaving,</add></l>
                    <l>Candid, from me falling&#8212;drip, bleeding drops,</l>
                    <l>From wounds made to free you whence you were <lb />prisoned, </l>
                    <l>From my face&#8212;from my forehead and lips,</l>
                    <l>From my <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">breast</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">heart</add>
                        </subst>&#8212;from within where I was <choice><orig>con-<lb />cealed</orig><reg>concealed<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;Press forth, red
                        drops&#8212;confession <lb />drops <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Stain every page&#8212;stain every song I sing, every <lb />word I say,
                        bloody drops <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let them know your scarlet heat&#8212;let them glisten <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Saturate them with yourself, all ashamed and wet <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Glow upon all I have written or shall write, <choice>
                            <orig>bleed-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>bleeding<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> drops <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Let it all be seen in your light, blushing drops.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01592">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00068" />
                    </relations>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <head type="main-authorial">16.</head>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HO</hi> is now reading this?</l>
                            </del>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>May-be one is now reading <del type="overstrike">this</del> who knows
                                some <lb />wrong-doing of my past life, </l>
                            <l>Or may-be a stranger is reading this who has secretly <lb />loved me, </l>
                            <l>Or may-be one who meets all my grand assumptions <lb />and egotisms
                                with derision, </l>
                            <l>Or may-be one who is puzzled at me.</l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf185v" type="verso" n="362" facs="nyp.00015.370" />
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                            <l>As if I were not puzzled at myself!</l>
                            <l>Or as if I never deride myself! (O conscience-struck! <lb />O
                                self-convicted!) </l>
                            <l>Or as if I do not secretly love strangers! (O tenderly, <lb />a long
                                time, and never avow it;) </l>
                            <l>Or as if I did not see, perfectly well, interior in <lb />myself, the
                                stuff of wrong-doing, </l>
                            <l>Or as if it could cease transpiring from me until it <lb />must
                                cease. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01593">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00006" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">17.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Of him I love day and night.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">F</hi> him I love day and night, I dreamed I heard he
                        <lb />was dead, </l>
                    <l>And I dreamed I went where they had buried him I <lb />love&#8212;but he
                        was not in that place, </l>
                    <l>And I dreamed I wandered, searching among burial-<lb />places, to find him, </l>
                    <l>And I found that every place was a burial-place,</l>
                    <l>The houses full of life were equally full of death, <lb />(This house is
                        now,) </l>
                    <l>The streets, the shipping, the places of amusement, <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the Chicago, <restore
                            rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">Boston, Philadelphia,</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="overstrike">the 
                            <choice><orig>Manna-<lb />hatta,</orig><reg>Mannahatta,<lb/></reg></choice></del> were as full of the dead as of the
                        living, </l>
                    <l>And fuller, O vastly fuller, of the dead than of the <lb />living; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">[</add>&#8212;And what I dreamed
                        I will henceforth tell to every <lb />person and age, </l>
                    <l>And I stand henceforth bound to what I dreamed;</l>
                    <l>And now I am willing to disregard burial-places, and <lb />dispense with
                        them, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf186r" type="recto" n="363" facs="nyp.00015.371" />
                    <l>And if the memorials of the dead were put up <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike"><choice><orig>indif-<lb />
                                ferently</orig><reg>indifferently<lb/></reg></choice> everywhere,</del>
                        </restore><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> even in the
                        room where I <lb />eat or sleep, I should be satisfied, </l>
                    <l>And if <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">the corpse of any one I love,</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="overstrike">or if my own <lb />corpse,</del> be duly rendered to
                        powder, and poured <lb />in the sea, I shall be satisfied, </l>
                    <l>Or if it be distributed to the winds, I shall be <choice>
                            <orig>sat-<lb />isfied.</orig>
                            <reg>satisfied<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01594">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00085" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">18.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="interlinear"
                                        rend="underline">C<gap reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">City of <del
                                        type="erasure">
                                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                            <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high"
                                                resp="ses">daily</unclear>
                                        </add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">orgies,</add> walks
                                        <del type="overstrike">of</del> and joys.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <l>C<hi rend="smallcaps">ITY</hi> of <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my</del>
                            <del seq="3">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                        >daily</unclear>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">orgies,</add>
                        </subst> walks and joys!</l>
                    <l>City whom that I have lived and sung <del type="overstrike">there</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">in your <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">streets</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">midst</add>
                            </subst></add> will one <lb />day make you illustrious, </l>
                    <l>Not the pageants of you&#8212;not your shifting <choice>
                            <orig>tab-<lb />leaux,</orig>
                            <reg>tableaux<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> your spectacles, repay me, </l>
                    <l>Not the interminable rows of your houses&#8212;nor the <lb />ships at the
                        wharves, </l>
                    <l>Nor the processions in the streets, nor the bright <choice>
                            <orig>win-<lb />dows,</orig>
                            <reg>windows<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> with goods in them, </l>
                    <l>Nor to converse with learned persons, or bear my <lb />share in the soiree or
                        feast; </l>
                    <l>Not those&#8212;but, as I pass, O Manhattan! your <choice>
                            <orig>fre-<lb />quent</orig>
                            <reg>frequent<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and swift flash of eyes <del type="overstrike">offering me
                            love,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Offering <del type="overstrike">me the</del> response of my
                        own&#8212;these repay <lb />me, </l>
                    <l>Lovers, continual lovers, only repay me.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf186v" type="verso" n="364" facs="nyp.00015.372" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01595">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00086" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">19.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial"> Behold this swarthy <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">unrefined</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">this
                                    unrefined</add>
                            </subst> face. </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                            <l>M<hi rend="smallcaps">IND</hi> you the timid models of the rest, the
                                <lb />majority? </l>
                            <l>Long I minded them, but hence I will not&#8212;for I <lb />have
                                adopted models for myself, and now offer <lb />them to The Lands.
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Behold this swarthy<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion">face</add>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">and</del>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">unrefined</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">this
                                    unrefined</add>
                            </subst> face&#8212;these gray <lb /><del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">and drowsy</add>
                            </del> eyes, </l>
                        <l>This beard&#8212;the white wool<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">in tufts,</add> unclipt upon
                            my neck,</l>
                        <l>My brown hands, and the silent manner of me, <choice>
                                <orig>with-<lb />out</orig>
                                <reg>without<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> charm; </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>Yet comes one, a
                            Manhattanese, and <del type="overstrike">ever</del> at parting,
                            <lb />kisses me lightly on the lips with <del type="overstrike"
                                >robust</del> love, </l>
                        <l>And I, in the public room, or on the crossing of the <lb />street, or on
                            the ship's deck, <del type="overstrike">kiss him in return;</del>
                        </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">We</del> observe <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">also</add> that salute of American comrades,
                                <del type="overstrike">land <lb />and sea, <lb /></del></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>We are those two natural and nonchalant persons.</l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01596">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00087" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">20.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">I saw in Louisiana a live oak
                            growing.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">SAW</hi> in Louisiana a live-oak growing,</l>
                    <l>All alone stood it, and the moss hung down from the <lb />branches, </l>
                    <l>Without any companion it grew there, uttering joyous <lb />leaves of dark
                        green, </l>
                    <l>And its look, rude, unbending, lusty, made me think <lb />of myself, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf187r" type="recto" n="365" facs="nyp.00015.373" />
                    <l>But I wondered how it could utter joyous leaves, <lb />standing alone there,
                        without its friend, its <lb />lover near&#8212;for I knew I could not, </l>
                    <l>And I broke off a twig with a certain number of <lb />leaves upon it, and
                        twined around it a little <lb />moss, </l>
                    <l>And brought it away&#8212;and I have placed it in sight <lb />in my room, </l>
                    <l>It is not needed to remind me as of my own dear <lb />friends, </l>
                    <l>(For I believe lately I think of little else than of <lb />them,) </l>
                    <l>Yet it remains to me a curious token&#8212;it makes me <lb />think of
                        manly love; </l>
                    <l>For all that, and though the live-oak glistens there in <lb />Louisiana,
                        solitary, in a wide flat space, </l>
                    <l>Uttering joyous leaves all its life, without a friend, a <lb />lover, near, </l>
                    <l>I know very well I could not.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01597">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00011" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">21.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline"><add type="unmarked"
                                place="supralinear">That</add> Music always around me</head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">religious</note>
                    </del>
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">That</add> M<hi rend="smallcaps"
                            >USIC</hi> always round me, unceasing, unbeginning&#8212; <lb />yet
                        long untaught I did not hear, </l>
                    <l>But now the chorus I hear, and am elated,</l>
                    <l>A tenor, strong, ascending, with power and health, <lb />with glad notes of
                        day-break I hear, </l>
                    <l>A soprano, at intervals, sailing buoyantly over <del type="overstrike">the
                            <lb />tops of</del> immense waves, </l>
                    <l>A transparent base, shuddering lusciously under and <lb />through the
                        universe, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf187v" type="verso" n="366" facs="nyp.00015.374" />
                    <l>The <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">triumphant tutti&#8212;the</del>
                        </restore> funeral wailings, with <lb />sweet flutes and
                            violins&#8212;<del type="overstrike">All</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">these I fill myself <lb />with; </del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginright">such now I hear;</add></l>
                    <l><del type="overstrike">I hear</del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">n</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">N</add>
                        </subst>ot the volumes of sound merely&#8212;I am <lb />moved by the
                        exquisite meanings, </l>
                    <l>I listen to the different voices winding in and out, <lb />striving, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> contending with fiery
                        vehemence to <lb />excel each other in emotion, </l>
                    <l>I <del type="overstrike">do not</del> think the performers know <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">not</add> themselves&#8212;But
                        <lb />now I think I begin to know them. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01598">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00088" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">22.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">To a stranger.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>P<hi rend="smallcaps">ASSING</hi> stranger! you do not know how longingly I
                        <lb />look upon you, </l>
                    <l>You must be he I was seeking, or she I was seeking, <lb />(It comes to me, as
                        of a dream,) </l>
                    <l>I have somewhere surely lived a life of joy with <lb />you, </l>
                    <l>All is recalled as we flit by each other, fluid, <choice>
                            <orig>affec-<lb />tionate,</orig>
                            <reg>affectionate<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> chaste, matured, </l>
                    <l>You grew up with me, were a boy with me, or a girl <lb />with me, </l>
                    <l>I ate with you, and slept with you&#8212;your body has <lb />become not
                        yours only, nor left my body mine <lb />only, </l>
                    <l>You give me the pleasure of your eyes, face, flesh, as <lb />we
                        pass&#8212;you take of my beard, breast, hands, <lb />in return, </l>
                    <l>I am not to speak to you&#8212;I am to think of you <lb />when I sit
                        alone, or wake at night alone, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf188r" type="recto" n="367" facs="nyp.00015.375" />
                    <l>I am to wait&#8212;I do not doubt I am to meet you <lb />again, </l>
                    <l>I am to see to it that I do not lose you.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01599">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00089" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">23.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">This moment as yearning <del
                                type="overstrike">and thoughtful</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and thoughtful</add></head>
                    </add>
                    <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">HIS</hi> moment as <del type="overstrike">I sit
                            alone,</del> yearning and thoughtful, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="marginright">I sit alone,</add><lb /><add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add> it seems to me there are other men in
                        other <lb />lands, yearning and thoughtful; </l>
                    <l>It seems to me I can look over and behold them, <lb />in Germany, Italy,
                        France, Spain <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>Or far, far <lb />away, in China, or in Russia or
                        India&#8212;talking <lb />other dialects; </l>
                    <l>And it seems to me if I could know those men <del type="overstrike"
                            >better</del>, <lb />I should become attached to them, as I do to men
                        <lb />in my own lands, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>It seems to me they are as wise, beautiful, benevolent, <lb />as any in
                            my own lands; </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>O I know we should be brethren and lovers,</l>
                    <l>I know I should be happy with them.</l>
                </lg>
                <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d29" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01600">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00090" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">24.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Not to destroy
                            institutions</head>
                    </add>
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                            <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">HEAR</hi> it is charged against me that I seek
                                to destroy <lb />institutions; </l>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Not to destroy institutions
                                <del type="overstrike">seek I</del></add>
                    </subst>
                    <l>But really I am neither for nor against institutions,</l>
                    <l>(What indeed have I in common with them?&#8212;Or <lb />what with the
                        destruction of them?) </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf188v" type="verso" n="368" facs="nyp.00015.376" />
                    <l>Only I will establish in the Mannahatta, and in every <lb />city of These
                        States, inland and seaboard, </l>
                    <l>And in the fields and woods, and above every keel <lb />little or large, that
                        dents the water, </l>
                    <l>Without edifices, or rules, or trustees, or any <choice>
                            <orig>ar-<lb />gument,</orig>
                            <reg>argument<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>The institution of the dear love of comrades.</l>
                </lg>
                <anchor xml:id="d29" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01601">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00091" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">25.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">The prairie&#8209;grass
                            accepting.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">HE</hi> prairie-grass <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">dividing</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">accepting</add>
                        </subst>&#8212;its <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">own</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">special</add>
                        </subst> odor breathing,</l>
                    <l>I demand of it the spiritual corresponding,</l>
                    <l>Demand the most copious and close companionship <lb />of men, </l>
                    <l>Demand the blades to rise of words, acts, beings,</l>
                    <l>Those of the open atmosphere, coarse, sunlit, fresh, <lb />nutritious, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Those that go their own gait, erect, stepping with <lb />freedom and
                            command&#8212;leading, not following, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">Those with a never-quell'd audacity&#8212;those
                            with <lb />sweet and lusty flesh, clear of taint,</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">choice and <lb /> chary of its love-power, </del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Those that look carelessly in the faces of Presidents <lb />and Governors, as
                        to say, <hi>Who are you?</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l>Those of earth-born passion, simple, never constrained, <lb />never obedient, </l>
                    <l>Those of inland America.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf189r" type="recto" n="369" facs="nyp.00015.377" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01602">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00093" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">26.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">We two boys together
                            clinging</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">E</hi> two boys together clinging,</l>
                    <l>One the other never leaving,</l>
                    <l>Up and down the roads going&#8212;North and South <lb />excursions
                        making, </l>
                    <l>Power enjoying&#8212;elbows stretching&#8212;fingers <choice>
                            <orig>clutch-<lb />ing,</orig>
                            <reg>clutching<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Armed and fearless&#8212;eating, drinking, sleeping, <choice>
                            <orig>lov-<lb />ing,</orig>
                            <reg>loving<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>No law less than ourselves owning&#8212;sailing, <choice>
                            <orig>soldier-<lb />ing,</orig>
                            <reg>soldiering<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> thieving, threatening, </l>
                    <l>Misers, menials, priests alarming&#8212;air breathing, <lb />water
                        drinking, on the turf or the sea-beach <lb />dancing, </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>With birds singing&#8212;With fishes swimming&#8212;With
                            <lb />trees branching and leafing, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Cities wrenching, ease scorning, statutes mocking, <lb />feebleness chasing, </l>
                    <l>Fulfilling our foray.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01603">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00014" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">27.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">O dying<del type="overstrike"
                                >,</del> always dying.</head>
                    </add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright" rend="circled">In?</note>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>O <hi rend="smallcaps">LOVE!</hi></l>
                    </del>
                    <l>O dying&#8212;always dying!</l>
                    <l>O the burials of me, past and present!</l>
                    <l>O me, while I stride ahead, material, visible, <choice>
                            <orig>imperi-<lb />ous</orig>
                            <reg>imperious<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> as ever! </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf189v" type="verso" n="370" facs="nyp.00015.378" />
                    <l>O <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">me,</del>
                        </restore> what I was for years, now dead, (I lament not <lb />&#8212;I
                        am content;), </l>
                    <l>O to disengage myself from those corpses of me, <lb />which <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">I turn and look</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">turning and
                                looking</add>
                        </subst> at, where I cast them! </l>
                    <l>To pass on, (O living! always living!) and leave the <lb />corpses behind!
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01604">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00092" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">28.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">When I perused the fame of heroes</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HEN</hi> I perus <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="edit">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">'d</add>
                        </subst> the <del type="overstrike">conquered</del> fame of heroes, <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#182;</add>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">When I heard of the</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">and the</del>
                        <lb />victories of <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">mighty</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">renown'd</add>
                        </subst>mighty generals, I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">do</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">did</add>
                        </subst> not envy the <lb />generals, </l>
                    <l>Nor the President in his Presidency, nor the rich in <lb />his great house; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>But when I read of the
                        brotherhood of lovers, how it <lb />was with them, </l>
                    <l>How through life, through dangers, odium, <choice>
                            <orig>un-<lb />changing,</orig>
                            <reg>unchanging<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> long and long, </l>
                    <l>Through youth, and through middle and old age, how <lb />unfaltering, <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">&#182;</add> how affectionate
                        and faithful they <lb />were, <anchor xml:id="t67" />
                    </l>
                    <l><transpose anchored="true" target="t67"><del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">ah,</add>
                            </del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>Then I <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">am</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">was</add>
                            </subst> pensive</transpose>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>I hastily <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">put down</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">dropt</add>
                        </subst> the book, <lb />and walk<add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                            >'d</add> away, filled with the bitterest envy. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf190r" type="recto" n="371" facs="nyp.00015.379" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01605">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00097" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">29.</head>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">Out</note>
                    </del>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">A <del type="overstrike">flitting</del> glimpse
                            caught through an interstice</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">O<hi rend="smallcaps">NE</hi></del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">A</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">flitting</del> glimpse, <add type="insertion"
                            >as</add> caught through an interstice,</l>
                    <l>Of <del type="overstrike">a crowd of</del> workmen and drivers <del
                            type="overstrike">in a bar-room,</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">late of a winter night</add>
                        <lb />around the stove, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">in a bar room,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">late of a winter night</del>&#8212;And <lb />I
                        unremarked, seated in a corner; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>Of a youth who loves me,
                        and whom I love, silently <lb />approaching, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>seating himself near, that he <lb />may hold me by the hand; </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>A long while, amid the
                        noises of coming and going <lb />&#8212;of drinking and oath and smutty
                        jest, </l>
                    <l>There we two, content, happy in <add type="insertion" place="marginright"
                            >just</add> being together, <lb />speaking <del type="overstrike"
                            >little,</del> perhaps not a word. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01606">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00094" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">30.</head>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                                <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">A promise to
                                    California</head>
                            </add>
                            <l>A <hi rend="smallcaps">PROMISE</hi>
                                <del type="overstrike">and gift</del> to California,</l>
                            <l>Also to the great Pastoral Plains, <subst>
                                    <restore seq="6" type="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and for Oregon:</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">inland <gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                    </del>
                                    <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                        <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and
                                            Washington</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst></l>
                            <l>Sojourning east a while longer, soon I travel to you, <lb />to
                                remain, to teach robust American love; </l>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <l>For I know very well that I and robust love belong
                                        <lb />among you, inland, and along the Western <lb />Sea <subst>
                                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                        </subst></l>
                                </del>
                            </restore>
                            <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>For The<del
                                    type="overstrike">se</del> States tend inland, and toward the
                                Western <lb />Sea&#8212;and I will also.<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">)</add>
                            </l>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf190v" type="verso" n="372" facs="nyp.00015.380" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01607">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00042" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">31.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">What ship, puzzled at
                            sea.</head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HAT</hi> ship, puzzled at sea, cons for the <del
                                type="overstrike">true</del>
                            <choice>
                                <orig>reck-<lb />oning?</orig>
                                <reg>reckoning<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                        <l>Or, coming in, to avoid the bars, and follow the <choice>
                                <orig>chan-<lb />nel,</orig>
                                <reg>channel<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> a perfect pilot needs? </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>Here, sailor! Here,
                            ship! take aboard the most <choice>
                                <orig>per-<lb />fect</orig>
                                <reg>perfect<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> pilot, </l>
                        <l>Whom, in a little boat, putting off, and rowing, I, <lb />hailing you,
                            offer. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">What place is besieged</head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>What place is besieged, and vainly tries to raise the <lb />siege? </l>
                        <l>Lo! I send to that place a commander, swift, brave, <lb />immortal, </l>
                        <l>And with him horse and foot&#8212;and parks of artillery,</l>
                        <l>And artillerymen, the deadliest that ever <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">fired</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">sighted</add>
                            </subst> gun.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01608">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00101" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">32.</head>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HAT</hi> think you I take my pen in hand to
                            record?</l>
                        <l>The battle-ship, perfect-model'd, majestic, that I saw <lb />pass the
                            offing to-day under full sail? </l>
                        <l>The splendors of the past day? Or the splendor of the <lb />night that
                            envelops me? </l>
                        <l>Or the vaunted glory and growth of the great city <lb />spread around
                            me?&#8212;No; </l>
                        <l>But I record of two simple men I saw to-day, on the <lb />pier, in the
                            midst of the crowd, parting the <choice>
                                <orig>part-<lb />ing</orig>
                                <reg>parting<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> of dear friends, </l>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf191r" type="recto" n="373" facs="nyp.00015.381" />
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>The one to remain hung on the other's neck, and <choice>
                                <orig>pas-<lb />sionately</orig>
                                <reg>passionately<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> kissed him, </l>
                        <l>While the one to depart, tightly prest the one to <lb />remain in his
                            arms. </l>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01609">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00096" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">33.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">No labor&#8209;saving
                            machine.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>N<hi rend="smallcaps">O</hi> labor-saving machine, <anchor xml:id="t68"
                         /></l>
                    <l>
                        <transpose anchored="true" target="t68">Nor discovery have I
                            made,</transpose>
                    </l>
                    <l>Nor will I be able to leave behind me any wealthy <lb />bequest to found a
                            hospital<add type="insertion" place="marginright">,</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">or library,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Nor <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                        </del> reminiscence of any deed of courage, for America <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>No <restore type="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">r</del>
                        </restore> literary success, <del type="overstrike">nor
                            intellect</del>&#8212;no<del type="overstrike">r</del> book <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">for</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">renown'd on</add>
                        </subst> the <lb />book-shelf; </l>
                    <l>Only <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">these</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">a few</add>
                        </subst> carols, vibrating through the air, I leave,</l>
                    <l>For comrades and lovers.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01610">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00100" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">34.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">I dream'd I saw a <del
                                type="overstrike">wondrous</del> city.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">DREAMED</hi>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">in a dream, I saw <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">&#182;</add> a city</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I saw a <del
                                    type="overstrike">wondrous</del> city,</add>
                        </subst> invincible to the <lb />attacks of the whole of the rest of the
                        earth, </l>
                    <l>
                        <del type="overstrike">I dreamed that was the new City of Friends,</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>Nothing was greater there than the quality of <del type="overstrike"
                            >robust</del>
                        <lb />love&#8212;it led the rest, </l>
                    <l>It was seen every hour in the actions of the men of <lb />that city, </l>
                    <l>And in all their looks and words.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf191v" type="verso" n="374" facs="nyp.00015.382" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01611">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00102" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">35.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">To the East and to the
                            West.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">T<hi rend="smallcaps">O</hi> you of New
                                England,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">To the East and to the
                                West,</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>To the man of the Seaside State, and of Pennsylvania,</l>
                    <l>To the Kanadian of the north&#8212;to the Southerner I <lb />love, </l>
                    <l>These, with perfect trust, to depict you as myself&#8212; <lb />the germs
                        are in all men; </l>
                    <l>I believe the main purport of These States is to found <lb />a superb
                        friendship, exalt, previously unknown, </l>
                    <l>Because I perceive it waits, and has been always <choice>
                            <orig>wait-<lb />ing,</orig>
                            <reg>waiting<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> latent in all men. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01612">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00099" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">36.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Earth, my likeness!</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>E<hi rend="smallcaps">ARTH!</hi> my likeness!</l>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">o<note type="editorial">W marked the
                            second "o" in "look" for correction because it had been set in the wrong
                            font</note></note>
                    <l>Though you look so impassive, ample and spheric <lb />there, </l>
                    <l>I now suspect that is not all;</l>
                    <l>I now suspect there is something fierce in you, eligible <lb />to burst
                        forth; </l>
                    <l>For an athlete is enamoured of me&#8212;and I of him,</l>
                    <l>But toward him there is something fierce and terrible <lb />in me, eligible
                        to burst forth, </l>
                    <l>I dare not tell it in words&#8212;not even in these songs.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf192r" type="recto" n="375" facs="nyp.00015.383" />
                <del type="edit">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
                    <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01613">
                        <relations>
                            <work ref="xxx.00098" />
                        </relations>
                        <head type="main-authorial">37.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                            <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">You on the
                                Mississippi.</head>
                        </add>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>A <hi rend="smallcaps">LEAF</hi> for hand in hand!</l>
                            <l>You natural persons old and young! You on the <lb />Eastern Sea, and
                                you on the Western! </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>You on the Mississippi, and on all the branches and <lb />bayous of the
                            Mississippi! </l>
                        <l>You friendly boatmen and mechanics! You roughs!</l>
                        <l>You twain! And all processions moving along the <lb />streets! </l>
                        <add type="insertion" place="margintop">I sing this song for hand in
                            hand&#8212;for natural persons old and young;</add>
                        <l>I wish to infuse myself among you till I see it <choice>
                                <orig>com-<lb />mon</orig>
                                <reg>common<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> for you to walk hand in hand. </l>
                    </lg>
                </del>
                <del type="edit">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01614">
                        <relations>
                            <work ref="xxx.00105" />
                        </relations>
                        <head type="main-authorial">38.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="erasure">Primeval my love</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">Fast anchor'd eternal
                                            <del type="overstrike">my</del>
                                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O</add> love</add>
                                </subst>
                            </head>
                        </add>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">P<hi rend="smallcaps">RIMEVAL</hi> my
                                    love for the</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Fast anchor'd
                                    eternal <del type="overstrike">my</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">O</add>
                                    love&#8212;O</add>
                            </subst> woman I love,</l>
                        <l>O bride ! O wife ! more resistless<del type="overstrike">, more
                                enduring</del>
                            <lb />than I can tell, the thought of you ! </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Then</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Though</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> separate, as disembodied, <del type="overstrike">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">the</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#38;</add>
                                </subst>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">purest born,</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginright">or another <add
                                    type="unmarked" place="supralinear">born</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">and purer;</del></add></l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">The</del> ethereal, the last athletic reality, my
                            consolation,</l>
                        <l>I ascend&#8212;I float in the regions of your love, O man,</l>
                        <l>O sharer of my roving life.</l>
                    </lg>
                </del>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01615">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00103" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">39.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Somtimes with one I
                            love.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>S<hi rend="smallcaps">OMETIMES</hi> with one I love, I fill myself with rage,
                        for <lb />fear I effuse unreturned love; </l>
                    <l>But now I think there is no unreturned love&#8212;the <lb />pay is
                        certain, one way or another, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf192v" type="verso" n="376" facs="nyp.00015.384" />
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="hashmark">
                            <l>Doubtless I could not have perceived the universe, <lb />or written
                                one of my poems, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                    >&#182;</add> if I had not freely <lb />given myself to
                                comrades, to love. </l>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="margintop">
                            <l>(I loved <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">a certain
                                    person</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">one</del> ardently, and my love was not
                                returned,</l>
                            <l>But out of it I have written these songs.)</l>
                        </add>
                    </subst>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01616">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00108" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">40.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">That shadow, my
                            likeness.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">HAT</hi> shadow, my likeness, that goes to and fro, <choice>
                            <orig>seek-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>seeking<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> a livelihood, chattering, chaffering, </l>
                    <l>How often I find myself standing and looking at it <lb />where it flits, </l>
                    <l>How often I question and doubt whether that is really <lb />me; </l>
                    <l>But in these, and among my lovers, and carolling my <lb />songs, </l>
                    <l>O I never doubt whether that is really me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01617">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00106" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">41.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure"><gap reason="deletion, illegible"
                                     />tude</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="over">Picking me out by <add
                                        type="insertion" place="supralinear">cunning and</add>
                                    secret signs</add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>Picking me out by cunning and secret signs</l>
                        </add>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">A<hi rend="smallcaps">MONG</hi> the
                                    men and women,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">I perceive
                                    among</add>
                            </subst> the multitude, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                >&#182;</add><del type="overstrike">I <choice><orig>per-<lb />ceive</orig><reg>perceive<lb/></reg></choice></del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">o</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">O</add>
                            </subst>ne <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">has arrived,</add>
                            <anchor xml:id="t69" /><del type="overstrike">picking me out by secret
                                and divine <lb />signs, </del></l>
                        <l>
                            <transpose anchored="true" target="t69">Acknowledging <del
                                    type="overstrike">none else <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                                    </subst> not</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">not</add> parent, <add
                                    type="insertion" place="supralinear">nor</add> wife, <choice>
                                    <orig>hus-<lb />band,</orig>
                                    <reg>husband<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> brother, <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                    >or</add> child, any nearer than I am; </transpose>
                        </l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#8212;</add>Some are
                            baffled&#8212;But that one is not&#8212;that one <lb />knows me.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Lover and perfect equal!</l>
                        <l>I meant that you should discover me so, by my faint <lb />indirections, </l>
                        <l>And I, when I meet you, mean to discover you by the <lb />like in you.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf193r" type="recto" n="377" facs="nyp.00015.385" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01618">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00104" />
                    </relations>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="margintop">tr to Drum Taps</note>
                    </del>
                    <head type="main-authorial">42.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="erasure">To you O my loving boy!</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="margintop"><gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" />the west</add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del>
                                <del seq="7" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="margintop">O t<gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /> prairie boy!</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="8" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">O
                                        <del type="overstrike">tan-faced Prairie boy.</del>
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">boy of the
                                    West</add></add>
                            </subst>
                        </head>
                    </add>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>O tan-faced prairie boy!</l>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                            <l>
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </l>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>O boy of the west! to you O my loving boy!</l>
                    </add>
                    <l><restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">T<hi rend="smallcaps">O</hi>
                                <del type="overstrike">the</del> you<del type="overstrike">ng</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">man,</del> many things <del type="overstrike"
                                    >to absorb, to engraft, <lb /> to develop,</del> I teach,</del>
                        </restore>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">to help</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">To help you</add>
                        </del>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">him</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">you</add>
                        </subst> become &#233;l&#232;ve of <lb />mine<restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">,</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">But</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">For all that</add>
                        </subst> if blood like mine circle not in <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">his</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">your</add>
                        </subst> veins,</l>
                    <l>If <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">he</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">you</add>
                        </subst> be not silently selected by lovers, and do not <lb />silently
                        select lovers, </l>
                    <l>Of what use <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">is</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">were</add>
                        </subst> it <del type="overstrike">that he seek</del> to become
                        &#233;l&#232;ve of <lb />mine? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01619">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00107" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">43.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">O you whom I <add
                                type="unmarked" place="supralinear">often and</add> silently come
                            where you are.</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>O <hi rend="smallcaps">YOU</hi> whom I <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">often and</del>
                        </restore> silently come where you <lb />are, <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">that</del>
                        </restore> I may be with you, </l>
                    <l>As I walk by your side, or sit near, or remain in the <lb />same room with
                        you, </l>
                    <l>Little you know the subtle electric fire that for your <lb />sake is playing
                        within me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01620">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00095" />
                    </relations>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <head type="main-authorial">44.</head>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Here</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Oft the
                                        frailest leaves of me</add>
                                </subst>
                            </head>
                        </add>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>H<hi rend="smallcaps">ERE</hi> my last words, and the most
                                baffling,</l>
                        </del>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Here</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Oft</add>
                            </subst> the frailest leaves of me, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">are</add>
                            </subst> yet my strongest-<lb />lasting, </l>
                        <l><del type="overstrike">Here</del> I shade down and hide my
                            thoughts&#8212;I do not <lb />expose them, </l>
                        <l>And yet they expose me more than all my other <lb />poems. </l>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf193v" type="verso" n="378" facs="nyp.00015.386" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01621">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00109" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">45.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">Full of life, compact,
                            visible.</head>
                    </add>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>F<hi rend="smallcaps">ULL</hi> of life, <del type="overstrike"
                                >sweet-blooded,</del> compact, visible,</l>
                        <l>I, forty years old the Eighty-third Year of The States,</l>
                        <l>To one a century hence, or any number of centuries <lb />hence, </l>
                        <l>To you, yet unborn, these, seeking you.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>When you read these, I, that was visible, am become <lb />invisible; </l>
                        <l>Now it is you, compact, visible, realizing my poems, <lb />seeking me,
                                <del type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">(is <gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" /> e?)</add>
                            </del></l>
                        <l>Fancying how happy you were, if I could be with <lb />you, and become
                            your lover; </l>
                        <l>Be it as if I were with you. Be not too certain but I <lb />am now with
                            you. </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf194r" type="recto" n="379" facs="nyp.00015.387" />
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01622">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00112" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">CROSSING BROOKLYN FERRY.</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline"><del
                                type="overstrike">Crowds</del> Crossing Brooklyn ferry, the day
                            declining.</add>
                    </subst>
                </head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>Crossing Brooklyn ferry, the day declining</l>
                    </add>
                    <l>F<hi rend="smallcaps">LOOD-TIDE</hi> below me! I watch you, face to face;</l>
                    <l>Clouds of the west! sun <del type="overstrike">there</del> half an hour high!
                        I <lb />see you also face to face. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>Crowds of men and women attired in the usual <choice>
                            <orig>cos-<lb />tumes!</orig>
                            <reg>costumes<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> how curious you are to me! </l>
                    <l>On the <del type="overstrike">ferry-</del>boats, the hundreds and hundreds
                        that <lb />cross, returning home, are more curious to me <lb />than you
                        suppose, </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>And you that shall cross from
                        shore to shore years <lb />hence, are more to me, and more in my <choice>
                            <orig>med-<lb />itations,</orig>
                            <reg>meditations<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> than you might suppose.<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>The impalpable sustenance of me from all things, at <lb />all hours of the
                        day, </l>
                    <l>The simple, compact, well-joined scheme&#8212;myself <lb />disintegrated,
                        every one disintegrated, yet part <lb />of the scheme, </l>
                    <l>The similitudes of the past, and those of the future,</l>
                    <l>The glories strung like beads on my smallest sights <lb />and
                        hearings&#8212;on the walk in the street, and <lb />the passage over the
                        river, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf194v" type="verso" n="380" facs="nyp.00015.388" />
                    <l>The current rushing so swiftly, and swimming with <lb />me far away, </l>
                    <l>The others that are to follow me, the ties between me <lb />and them, </l>
                    <l>The certainty of others&#8212;the life, love, sight, <choice>
                            <orig>hear-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>hearing<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of others. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>Others will enter the gates of the ferry, and cross <lb />from shore to
                        shore, </l>
                    <l>Others will watch the run of the flood-tide,</l>
                    <l>Others will see the shipping of Manhattan north and <lb />west, and the
                        heights of Brooklyn to the south <lb />and east, </l>
                    <l>Others will see the islands large and small,</l>
                    <l>Fifty years hence, others will see them as they cross, <lb />the sun half an
                        hour high, </l>
                    <l>A hundred years hence, or ever so many hundred <lb />years hence, others will
                        see them, </l>
                    <l>Will enjoy the sunset, the pouring in of the flood-<lb />tide, the falling
                        back to the sea of the ebb-tide. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>It avails not, neither time or place&#8212;instance avails <lb />not, </l>
                    <l>I am with you, you men and women of a generation, <lb />or ever so many
                        generations hence, </l>
                    <l>I project myself&#8212;also I return&#8212;I am with you, and
                        <lb />know how it is. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>Just as you feel when you look on the river and sky, <lb />so I felt, </l>
                    <l>Just as any of you is one of a living crowd, I was one <lb />of a crowd, </l>
                    <l>Just as you are refreshed by the gladness of the river, <lb />and the bright
                        flow, I was refreshed, </l>
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                    <l>Just as you stand and lean on the rail, yet hurry with <lb />the swift
                        current, I stood, yet was hurried, </l>
                    <l>Just as you look on the numberless masts of ships, <lb />and the
                        thick-stemmed pipes of steamboats, I <lb />look <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst>. </l>
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                    <l>I too many and many a time crossed the river, the <lb />sun half an hour
                        high, </l>
                    <l>I watched the Twelfth Month sea-gulls&#8212;I saw them <lb />high in the
                        air, floating with motionless wings, <lb />oscillating their bodies, </l>
                    <l>I saw how the glistening yellow lit up parts of their <lb />bodies, and left
                        the rest in strong shadow, </l>
                    <l>I saw the slow-wheeling circles, and the gradual <lb />edging toward the
                        south. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>I too saw the reflection of the summer sky in the <lb />water, </l>
                    <l>Had my eyes dazzled by the shimmering track of <lb />beams, </l>
                    <l>Look <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> at the fine centrifugal spokes of light round <lb />the shape of my
                        head in the sun-lit water, </l>
                    <l>Look <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> on the haze on the hills southward and south-<lb />westward, </l>
                    <l>Look <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> on the vapor as it flew in fleeces tinged with <lb />violet, </l>
                    <l>Look <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ed</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">t</add>
                        </subst> toward the lower bay to notice the arriving <lb />ships, </l>
                    <l>Saw their approach, saw aboard those that were near <lb />me, </l>
                    <l>Saw the white sails of schooners and sloops, saw the <lb />ships at anchor, </l>
                    <l>The sailors at work in the rigging, or out astride the <lb />spars, </l>
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                    <l>The round masts, the swinging motion of the hulls, <lb />the slender
                        serpentine pennants, </l>
                    <l>The large and small steamers in motion, the pilots in <lb />their
                        pilot-houses, </l>
                    <l>The white wake left by the passage, the quick <choice>
                            <orig>trem-<lb />ulous</orig>
                            <reg>tremulous<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> whirl of the wheels, </l>
                    <l>The flags of all nations, the falling of them at sun-set,</l>
                    <l>The scallop-edged waves in the twilight, the ladled <lb />cups, the
                        frolicsome crests and glistening, </l>
                    <l>The stretch afar growing dimmer and dimmer, the <lb />gray walls of the
                        granite store-houses by the <lb />docks, </l>
                    <l>On the river the shadowy group, the big steam-tug <lb />closely flanked on
                        each side by the barges&#8212;the <lb />hay-boat, the belated lighter, </l>
                    <l>On the neighboring shore, the fires from the foundry <lb />chimneys burning
                        high and glaringly into the <lb />night, </l>
                    <l>Casting, their flicker of black, contrasted with wild <lb />red and yellow
                        light, over the tops of houses, <lb />and down into the clefts of streets.
                    </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>These, and all else, were to me the same as they are <lb />to you, </l>
                    <l>I project myself a moment to tell you&#8212;also I <lb />return. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>I loved well those cities,</l>
                    <l>I loved well the stately and rapid river,</l>
                    <l>The men and women I saw were all near to me,</l>
                    <l>Others the same&#8212;others who look back on me, <lb />because I looked
                        forward to them, </l>
                    <l>(The time will come, though I stop here to-day and <lb />to-night.) </l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>What is it, then, between us?</l>
                    <l>What is the count of the scores or hundreds of years <lb />between us? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>Whatever it is, it avails not&#8212;distance avails not, and <lb />place
                        avails not. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <l>I too lived, <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">&#8212;Brooklyn, of
                            ample hills, was mine,</add> (I was of old Brooklyn,)</l>
                    <l>I too walked the streets of Manhattan Island, and <lb />bathed in the waters
                        around it, </l>
                    <l>I too felt the curious abrupt questionings stir within <lb />me, </l>
                    <l>In the day, among crowds of people, sometimes they <lb />came upon me, </l>
                    <l>In my walks home late at night, or as I lay in my <lb />bed, they came upon
                        me. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                    <l>I too had been struck from the float forever held in <lb />solution, </l>
                    <l>I too had received identity by my body,</l>
                    <l>That I was, I knew was of my body&#8212;and what I <lb />should be, I
                        knew I should be of my body. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>It is not upon you alone the dark patches fall,</l>
                    <l>The dark threw patches down upon me also,</l>
                    <l>The best I had done seemed to me blank and <choice>
                            <orig>sus-<lb />picious,</orig>
                            <reg>suspicious<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>My great thoughts, as I supposed them, were they not <lb />in reality meagre?
                        would not people laugh <lb />at me? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>It is not you alone who know what it is to be evil,</l>
                    <l>I am he who knew what it was to be evil,</l>
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                    <l>I too knitted the old knot of contrariety,</l>
                    <l>Blabbed, blushed, resented, lied, stole, grudged,</l>
                    <l>Had guile, anger, lust, hot wishes I dared not speak,</l>
                    <l>Was wayward, vain, greedy, shallow, sly, cowardly, <lb />malignant, </l>
                    <l>The wolf, the snake, the hog, not wanting in me,</l>
                    <l>The cheating look, the frivolous word, the adulterous <lb />wish, not
                        wanting, </l>
                    <l>Refusals, hates, postponements, meanness, laziness, <lb />none of these
                        wanting. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                    <l>But I was <del type="overstrike">a</del> Manhattanese, <del type="overstrike"
                            >free,</del> friendly, and proud</l>
                    <l>I was called by my nighest name by clear loud voices <lb />of young men as
                        they saw me approaching or <lb />passing, </l>
                    <l>Felt their arms on my neck as I stood, or the <choice>
                            <orig>neg-<lb />ligent</orig>
                            <reg>negligent<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> leaning of their flesh against me as I sat, </l>
                    <l>Saw many I loved in the street, or ferry-boat, or <choice>
                            <orig>pub-<lb />lic</orig>
                            <reg>public<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> assembly, yet never told them a word, </l>
                    <l>Lived the same life with the rest, the same old <choice>
                            <orig>laugh-<lb />ing,</orig>
                            <reg>laughing<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> gnawing, sleeping, </l>
                    <l>Played the part that still looks back on the actor or <lb />actress, </l>
                    <l>The same old r&#244;le, the r&#244;le that is what we make it,
                        <lb />as great as we like, </l>
                    <l>Or as small as we like, or both great and <lb />small. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>Closer yet I approach you,</l>
                    <l>What thought you have of me, I had as much of you <lb />&#8212;I laid in
                        my stores in advance, </l>
                    <l>I considered long and seriously of you before you <lb />were born. </l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                    <l>Who was to know what should come home to me?</l>
                    <l>Who knows but I am enjoying this?</l>
                    <l>Who knows but I am as good as looking at you now, <lb />for all you cannot
                        see me? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                    <l>It is not you alone, nor I alone,</l>
                    <l>Not a few races, nor a few generations, nor a few <lb />centuries, </l>
                    <l>It is that each came, or comes, or shall come, from its <lb />due emission,
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>without fail, either
                        now, or then, or <lb />henceforth. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                    <l>Every thing indicates&#8212;the smallest does, and the <lb />largest
                        does, </l>
                    <l>A necessary film envelops all, and envelops the Soul <lb />for a proper time.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                    <l>Now I am curious what sight can ever be more stately <lb />and admirable to
                        me than my mast-hemm'd <choice>
                            <orig>Man-<lb />hatta,</orig>
                            <reg>Manhatta<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>My river and sun-set, and my scallop-edged waves of <lb />flood-tide, </l>
                    <l>The sea-gulls oscillating their bodies, the hay-boat in <lb />the twilight,
                        and the belated lighter; </l>
                    <l>Curious what Gods can exceed these that clasp me <lb />by the hand,<add
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                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">That</add>
                        </subst> with voices I love call me <lb />promptly and loudly by my nighest
                        name as I <lb />approach, </l>
                    <l>Curious what is more subtle than this which ties me <lb />to the woman or man
                        that looks in my face, </l>
                    <l>Which fuses me into you now, and pours my meaning <lb />into you. </l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                    <l>We understand, then, do we not?</l>
                    <l>What I promised without mentioning it, have you not <lb />accepted? </l>
                    <l>What the study could not teach&#8212;what the preaching <lb />could not
                        accomplish is accomplished, is it not? </l>
                    <l>What the push of reading could not start is started by <lb />me personally,
                        is it not? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                    <l>Flow on, river! flow with the flood-tide, and ebb with <lb />the ebb-tide! </l>
                    <l>Frolic on, crested and scallop-edged waves!</l>
                    <l>Gorgeous clouds of the sunset! drench with your <lb />splendor me, or the men
                        and women generations <lb />after me; </l>
                    <l>Cross from shore to shore, countless crowds of <choice>
                            <orig>pas-<lb />sengers!</orig>
                            <reg>passengers<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Stand up, tall masts of Mannahatta!&#8212;stand up, <lb />beautiful hills
                        of Brooklyn! </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Bully for you! you proud, friendly, free <choice>
                                <orig>Manhat-<lb />tanese!</orig>
                                <reg>Manhattanese<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>Throb, baffled and curious brain! throw out questions <lb />and answers! </l>
                    <l>Suspend here and everywhere, eternal float of <choice>
                            <orig>solu-<lb />tion!</orig>
                            <reg>solution<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Blab, blush, lie, steal, you or I or any one after us!</l>
                    <l>Gaze, loving and thirsting eyes, in the house, or street, <lb />or public
                        assembly! </l>
                    <l>Sound out, voices of young men! loudly and musically <lb />call me by my
                        nighest name! </l>
                    <l>Live, old life! play the part that looks back on the <lb />actor or actress! </l>
                    <l>Play the old r&#244;le, the r&#244;le that is great or small,
                        <lb />according as one makes it! </l>
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                    <l>Consider, you who peruse me, whether I may not in <lb />unknown ways be
                        looking upon you; </l>
                    <l>Be firm, rail over the river, to support those who lean <lb />idly, yet haste
                        with the hasting current; </l>
                    <l>Fly on, sea-birds! fly sideways, or wheel in large <lb />circles high in the
                        air; </l>
                    <l>Receive the summer-sky, you water! and faithfully <lb />hold it, till all
                        downcast eyes have time to take <lb />it from you; </l>
                    <l>Diverge, fine spokes of light, from the shape of my <lb />head, or any one's
                        head, in the sun-lit water; </l>
                    <l>Come on, ships from the lower bay! pass up or down, <lb />white-sailed
                        schooners, sloops, lighters! </l>
                    <l>Flaunt away, flags of all nations! be duly lowered at <lb />sunset; </l>
                    <l>Burn high your fires, foundry chimneys! cast black <lb />shadows at
                        nightfall! cast red and yellow light <lb />over the tops of the houses; </l>
                    <l>Appearances, now or henceforth, indicate what you <lb />are; </l>
                    <l>You necessary film, continue to envelop the Soul;</l>
                    <l>About my body for me, and your body for you, be <lb />hung our divinest
                        aromas; </l>
                    <l>Thrive, cities! bring your freight, bring your shows, <lb />ample and
                        sufficient rivers; </l>
                    <l>Expand, being than which none else is perhaps more <lb />spiritual; </l>
                    <l>Keep your places, objects than which none else is <lb />more lasting. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                    <l>We descend upon you and all things&#8212;we arrest you <lb />all, </l>
                    <l>We realize the Soul only by you, you faithful solids <lb />and fluids, </l>
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                    <l>Through you color, form, location, sublimity, ideality,</l>
                    <l>Through you every proof, comparison, and all the <lb />suggestions and
                        determinations of ourselves. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                    <l>You have waited, you always wait, you dumb, <choice>
                            <orig>beauti-<lb />ful</orig>
                            <reg>beautiful<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> ministers! you novices! </l>
                    <l>We receive you with free sense at last, and are <lb />insatiate henceforward, </l>
                    <l>Not you any more shall be able to foil us, or <choice>
                            <orig>with-<lb />hold</orig>
                            <reg>withhold<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> yourselves from us, </l>
                    <l>We use you, and do not cast you aside&#8212;we plant <lb />you
                        permanently within us, </l>
                    <l>We fathom you not&#8212;we love you&#8212;there is <choice>
                            <orig>per-<lb />fection</orig>
                            <reg>perfection<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> in you also, </l>
                    <l>You furnish your parts toward eternity,</l>
                    <l>Great or small, you furnish your parts toward the <lb />Soul. </l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
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            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01623">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00274" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">LONGINGS FOR HOME.</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="underline">O
                            glistening, perfumed South!</add>
                    </subst>
                </head>
                <l><del type="overstrike">O <hi rend="smallcaps">MAGNET-</hi>S<hi rend="smallcaps"
                            >OUTH!</hi></del> O glistening, perfumed South! <add type="insertion"
                        place="supralinear">My South! O magnet&#8209;south</add>
                    <del type="overstrike">My <lb /> South!</del>
                </l>
                <l>O quick mettle, rich blood, impulse, and love! Good <lb />and evil! O all dear to
                    me! </l>
                <l>O dear to me my birth-things&#8212;All moving things, <lb />and the trees
                    where I was born&#8212;the grains, <lb />plants, rivers; </l>
                <l>Dear to me my own slow sluggish rivers where they <lb />flow, distant, over flats
                    of silvery sands, or <lb />through swamps, </l>
                <l>Dear to me the Roanoke, the Savannah, the <choice>
                        <orig>Altama-<lb />haw,</orig>
                        <reg>Altamahaw<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> the Pedee, the Tombigbee, the Santee, the <lb />Coosa, and the Sabine; </l>
                <l>O pensive, far away wandering, I return with my Soul <lb />to haunt their banks
                    again, </l>
                <l>Again in Florida I float on transparent lakes&#8212;I float <lb />on the
                    Okeechobee&#8212;I cross the hummock land, <lb />or through pleasant
                    openings, or dense forests, </l>
                <l>I see the parrots in the woods&#8212;I see the papaw tree <lb />and the
                    blossoming titi; </l>
                <l>Again, sailing in my coaster, on deck, I coast off <lb />Georgia&#8212;I
                    coast up the Carolinas, </l>
                <l>I see where the live-oak is growing&#8212;I see where the <lb />yellow-pine,
                    the scented bay-tree, the lemon and <lb />orange, the cypress, the graceful
                    palmetto; </l>
                <l>I pass rude sea-headlands and enter Pamlico Sound <lb />through an inlet, and
                    dart my vision inland, </l>
                <pb xml:id="leaf199v" type="verso" n="390" facs="nyp.00015.398" />
                <l>O the cotton plant! the growing fields of rice, sugar, <lb />hemp! </l>
                <l>The cactus, guarded with thorns&#8212;the laurel-tree, <lb />with large white
                    flowers, </l>
                <l>The range afar&#8212;the richness and barrenness&#8212;the <lb />old
                    woods charged with mistletoe and trailing <lb />moss, </l>
                <l>The piney odor and the gloom&#8212;the awful natural <lb />stillness, (Here
                    in these dense swamps the free-<lb />booter carries his gun, and the fugitive
                    slave has <lb />his concealed hut;) </l>
                <l>O the strange fascination of these half-known, half-<lb />impassable swamps,
                    infested by reptiles, <choice>
                        <orig>resound-<lb />ing</orig>
                        <reg>resounding<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> with the bellow of the alligator, the sad noises <lb />of the
                    night-owl and the wild-cat, and the whirr <lb />of the rattlesnake; </l>
                <l>The mocking-bird, the American mimic, singing all <lb />the
                    forenoon&#8212;singing through the moon-lit <lb />night, </l>
                <l>The humming-bird, the wild-turkey, the raccoon, the <lb />opossum; </l>
                <l>A Tennessee corn-field&#8212;the tall, graceful, long-leaved
                    <lb />corn&#8212;slender, flapping, bright green, with <choice><orig>tas-<lb />sels</orig><reg>tassels<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;with beautiful ears, each well-sheathed in
                    <lb />its husk, </l>
                <l>An Arkansas prairie&#8212;a sleeping lake, or still bayou;</l>
                <l>O my heart! O tender and fierce pangs&#8212;I can stand <lb />them
                    not&#8212;I will depart; </l>
                <l>O to be a Virginian, where I grew up! O to be a <lb />Carolinian! </l>
                <l>O longings irrepressible! O I will go back to old <choice>
                        <orig>Ten-<lb />nessee,</orig>
                        <reg>Tennessee<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> and never wander more! </l>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf200r" type="recto" n="391" facs="nyp.00015.399" />
            <lg type="cluster" xml:id="ppp.01624">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00412" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">MESSENGER LEAVES.</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="margintop" rend="circled">Finale</add>
                    </subst>
                </head>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01625">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00125" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial"><del type="overstrike">To You,</del> Whoever You
                        Are.</head>
                    <lg type="linegroup">
                        <del type="hashmark">
                            <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">1.</note>
                            <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HOEVER</hi> you are, I fear you are walking the
                                walks of <lb />dreams, </l>
                            <l>I fear those realities are to melt from under your feet <lb />and
                                hands; </l>
                            <l>Even now, your <del type="overstrike">features,</del> joys, <del
                                    type="overstrike">speech, house, trade,</del>
                                <lb />manners, troubles, follies, <del type="overstrike">costume,
                                    crimes,</del>
                                <choice>
                                    <orig>dis-<lb />sipate</orig>
                                    <reg>dissipate<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> away from you, </l>
                            <l>Your true Soul and body appear before me,</l>
                            <l>They stand forth out of affairs&#8212;out of <del
                                    type="overstrike">commerce, <lb /> shops, law, science,</del>
                                work, <del type="overstrike">farms,</del> clothes, the <lb />house,
                                    <del type="overstrike">medicine, print,</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>buying, selling,
                                eating, <lb />drinking, suffering, dying. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Whoever you are, now I place my hand upon you, <lb />that you be my poem, </l>
                        <l>I whisper with my lips close to your ear,</l>
                        <l>I have loved many women and men, but I love none <lb />better than you.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>O I have been dilatory and dumb,</l>
                        <l>I should have made my way straight to you long ago,</l>
                        <l>I should have blabbed nothing but you, I should have <lb />chanted
                            nothing but you. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf200v" type="verso" n="392" facs="nyp.00015.400" />
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>I will leave all, and come and make the hymns of <lb />you; </l>
                        <l>None have understood you, but I understand you,</l>
                        <l>None have done justice to you&#8212;you have not done <lb />justice
                            to yourself, </l>
                        <l>None but have found you imperfect&#8212;I only find no
                            <lb />imperfection in you, </l>
                        <l>None but would subordinate you&#8212;I only am he who <lb />will
                            never consent to subordinate you, </l>
                        <l>I only am he who places over you no master, owner, <lb />better, God,
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>beyond what
                            waits intrinsically in <lb />yourself. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>Painters have painted their swarming groups, and the <lb />centre figure
                            of all, </l>
                        <l>From the head of the centre figure spreading a <choice>
                                <orig>nim-<lb />bus</orig>
                                <reg>nimbus<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> of gold-colored light, </l>
                        <l>But I paint myriads of heads, but paint no head <choice>
                                <orig>with-<lb />out</orig>
                                <reg>without<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> its nimbus of gold-colored light, </l>
                        <l>From my hand, from the brain of every man and <lb />woman it streams,
                            effulgently flowing forever. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>O I could sing such grandeurs and glories about you!</l>
                        <l>You have not known what you are&#8212;you have <choice>
                                <orig>slum-<lb />bered</orig>
                                <reg>slumbered<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> upon yourself all your life, </l>
                        <l>Your eyelids have been the same as closed most of <lb />the time <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>What you have done returns already in mockeries,</l>
                        <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>Your thrift, knowledge,
                            prayers, if they do not return <lb />in mockeries, what is their
                                return?<add type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>The mockeries are not you,</l>
                        <l>Underneath them, and within them, I see you lurk,</l>
                        <l>I pursue you where none else has pursued you,</l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf201r" type="recto" n="393" facs="nyp.00015.401" />
                        <l>Silence, the desk, the flippant expression, the night, <lb />the
                            accustomed routine, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>if these conceal you from <lb />others, or from
                            yourself, they do not conceal you <lb />from me <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>The shaved face, the unsteady eye, the impure <choice>
                                <orig>com-<lb />plexion,</orig>
                                <reg>complexion<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> if these balk others, they do not balk <lb />me <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <l>The pert apparel, the deformed attitude, <choice>
                                <orig>drunken-<lb />ness,</orig>
                                <reg>drunkenness<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> greed, premature death, all these I part <lb />aside <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                </del>
                                <add seq="4" type="insertion" place="inline">.</add>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>I track through your windings and turnings&#8212;I come
                                <lb />upon you where you thought eye should never <lb />come upon
                                you. <subst>
                                    <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="1" type="unmarked" place="inline"><gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" /> (<gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" />the Sou)</add>
                                    </del>
                                    <add seq="3" type="unmarked" place="inline">your
                                        Soul&#8212;that is really you.</add>
                                </subst></l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>There is no endowment in man or woman that is not <lb />tallied in you, </l>
                        <l>There is no virtue, no beauty, in man or woman, but <lb />as good is in
                            you, </l>
                        <l>No pluck, no endurance in others, but as good is <lb />in you, </l>
                        <l>No pleasure waiting for others, but an equal pleasure <lb />waits for
                            you. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>As for me, I give nothing to any one, except I give <lb />the like
                            carefully to you, </l>
                        <l>I sing the songs of the glory of none, not God, sooner <lb />than I sing
                            the songs of the glory of you. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                        <l>Whoever you are! claim your own at any hazard!</l>
                        <l>These shows of the east and west are tame compared <lb />to you, </l>
                        <l>These immense meadows&#8212;these interminable rivers
                            <lb />&#8212;you are immense and interminable as they, </l>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf201v" type="verso" n="394" facs="nyp.00015.402" />
                        <l>These furies, elements, storms, motions of Nature, <lb />throes of
                            apparent dissolution <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>you are he or <lb />she who is master or mistress over them, </l>
                        <l>Master or mistress in your own right over Nature, <lb />elements, pain,
                            passion, dissolution. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                        <l>The hopples fall from your ankles&#8212;you find an <choice>
                                <orig>un-<lb />failing</orig>
                                <reg>unfailing<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> sufficiency, </l>
                        <l>Old or young, male or female, rude, low, rejected by <lb />the rest,
                            whatever you are promulges itself, </l>
                        <l>Through birth, life, death, burial, the means are <choice>
                                <orig>pro-<lb />vided,</orig>
                                <reg>provided<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> nothing is scanted, </l>
                        <l>Through angers, losses, ambition, ignorance, ennui, <lb />what you are
                            picks its way. </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01626">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00230" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To a Foil <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d Revolter or Revoltress.</head>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>C<hi rend="smallcaps">OURAGE!</hi> my brother or my sister!</l>
                        <l>Keep on! Liberty is to be subserv <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                            </subst>d, whatever occurs;</l>
                        <l>That is nothing, that is quell <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">'</add>
                            </subst>d by one or two failures, <lb />or any number of failures, </l>
                        <l>Or by the indifference or ingratitude of the people, <lb />or by any
                            unfaithfulness, </l>
                        <l>Or the show of the tushes of power&#8212;soldiers, cannon,
                            <lb />penal statutes. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr to 3</note>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>What we believe in waits latent forever<add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add> through <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">all the continents,</add><lb /><del
                                type="overstrike">Asia, Africa, Europe, North and South America,
                                <lb /> Australia, Cuba,</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and all the islands
                            and <choice>
                                <orig>archi-<lb />pelagoes</orig>
                                <reg>archipelagoes<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> of the sea. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf202r" type="recto" n="395" facs="nyp.00015.403" />
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr to</note>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l><restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike">What we believe in</del>
                            </restore> invites no one, promises nothing, <lb /><add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <restore rend="erased">
                                <del type="overstrike"><subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">s</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">S</add>
                                    </subst>its in calmness</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del type="overstrike">and light</del>, is positive and <choice>
                                <orig>com-<lb />posed,</orig>
                                <reg>composed<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> knows no discouragement, </l>
                        <l>Wait <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">s</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">ing</add>
                            </subst> patiently <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >waiting</add> its time<add type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">&#8212;a year&#8212;a century&#8212;a
                                <lb /> hundred centuries.</del>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                        <l>The battle rages with many a loud alarm and <choice>
                                <orig>fre-<lb />quent</orig>
                                <reg>frequent<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> advance and retreat, </l>
                        <l>The infidel triumphs&#8212;or supposes he triumphs,</l>
                        <l>The prison, scaffold, garrote, hand-cuffs, iron necklace <lb />and
                            anklet, lead-balls, do their work, </l>
                        <l>The named and unnamed heroes pass to other <lb />spheres, </l>
                        <l>The great speakers and writers are exiled&#8212;they lie <lb />sick
                            in distant lands, </l>
                        <l>The cause is asleep&#8212;the strongest throats are still,
                            <lb />choked with their own blood, </l>
                        <l>The young men drop their eyelashes toward the <lb />ground when they meet <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>But for all this, liberty has not gone out of the place, <lb />nor the
                            infidel entered into possession. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                        <l>When liberty goes out of a place, it is not the first <lb />to go, nor
                            the second or third to go, </l>
                        <l>It waits for all the rest to go&#8212;it is the last.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>When there are no more memories <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                >of hearoes and martyrs,</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">of the superb <lb /> lovers of the nations of the
                                world, </del></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>The superb lovers' names scouted in the public <lb />gatherings by
                                the lips of the orators, </l>
                            <l>Boys not christened after them, but christened after <lb />traitors
                                and murderers instead, </l>
                        </del>
                        <pb xml:id="leaf202v" type="verso" n="396" facs="nyp.00015.404" />
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>Tyrants' and priests' successes really acknowledged <lb />anywhere,
                                for all the ostensible appearance, </l>
                            <l>You or I walking abroad upon the earth, elated at <lb />the sight of
                                slaves, no matter who they are, </l>
                        </del>
                        <l>And when all life, and all the Souls of men and women <lb />are
                            discharged from any part of the earth, </l>
                        <l>Then <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">only</add> shall <del
                                type="overstrike">the instinct of</del> liberty be discharged from
                            <lb />that part of the earth, </l>
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Then shall</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">And</add>
                            </subst> the infidel and the tyrant come into <lb />possession. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                        <l>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Then</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear"
                                        >Therefore</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> courage <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">!</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">, revolter!
                                    revoltress!</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <l>For till all ceases, neither must you cease.</l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>I do not know what you are for, (I do not what I am <lb />for myself, nor
                            what any thing is for,) </l>
                        <l>But I will search carefully for it <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">even</add> in being foil <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">'</add>
                            </subst>d,</l>
                        <l>In defeat, poverty, imprisonment&#8212;for they too are <lb />great.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>Did we think victory great?</l>
                        <l>So it is&#8212;But now it seems to me, when it cannot be
                            <lb />helped, that defeat is great, </l>
                        <l>And that death and dismay are great.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf203r" type="recto" n="397" facs="nyp.00015.405" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01627">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00238" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To Him that was Crucified.</head>
                    <l>M<hi rend="smallcaps">Y</hi> spirit to yours, dear brother,</l>
                    <l>Do not mind because many, sounding your name, do <lb />not understand you, </l>
                    <l>I do not sound your name, but I understand you, <lb />(there are others
                        also;) </l>
                    <l>I specify you with joy, O my comrade, to salute you, <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">A</add>
                        </subst>nd <del type="overstrike">to</del> salute those who are with you,
                        before and <lb />since&#8212;and those to come also, </l>
                    <l>That we all labor together, transmitting the same <lb />charge and
                        succession; </l>
                    <l>We few, equals, indifferent of lands, indifferent of <lb />times, </l>
                    <l>We, enclosers of all continents, all castes&#8212;allowers <lb />of all
                        theologies, </l>
                    <l>Compassionaters, perceivers, rapport of men,</l>
                    <l>We walk silent among disputes and assertions,<del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> but <lb />reject not the disputers, nor any thing that is
                        <lb />asserted, </l>
                    <l>We hear the bawling and din&#8212;we are reached at <lb />by divisions,
                        jealousies, recriminations on every <lb />side, </l>
                    <l>They close peremptorily upon us, to surround us, <lb />my comrade, </l>
                    <l>Yet we walk unheld, free, the whole earth over, <lb />journeying up and
                            down,<add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> till we make
                        our <choice>
                            <orig>in-<lb />effaceable</orig>
                            <reg>ineffaceable<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> mark upon time and the diverse eras, </l>
                    <l>Till we saturate time and eras, that the men and <lb />women of races, ages
                        to come,<add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <del type="overstrike">may</del> prove <choice>
                            <orig>breth-<lb />ren</orig>
                            <reg>brethren<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and lovers, as we are. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf203v" type="verso" n="398" facs="nyp.00015.406" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01628">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00015" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To One shortly To Die.</head>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>F<hi rend="smallcaps">ROM</hi> all the rest I single out you, having a
                            message <lb />for you: </l>
                        <l>You are to die&#8212;Let <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">others</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">your friends</add>
                            </subst> tell you what they <lb />please, I <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">cannot</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">will not</add>
                                </del>
                            </subst> prevaricate, </l>
                        <l>I am exact and merciless, but I love you&#8212;There is <lb />no
                            escape for you. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>Softly I lay my right hand upon you&#8212;you just <lb />feel it, </l>
                        <l>I do not argue&#8212;I bend my head close, and half-<lb />envelop it, </l>
                        <l>I sit quietly by&#8212;I remain faithful,</l>
                        <l>I am more than nurse, more than parent or neighbor,</l>
                        <l>I absolve you from all except yourself, spiritual,
                            <lb />bodily&#8212;that is eternal, </l>
                        <l>(The corpse you will leave will be but <choice>
                                <orig>excremen-<lb />titious.)</orig>
                                <reg>ecrementitious<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>The sun bursts through in unlooked-for directions!</l>
                        <l>Strong thoughts fill you, and confidence&#8212;you smile!</l>
                        <l>You forget you are sick, as I forget you are sick,</l>
                        <l>You do not see the medicines&#8212;you do not mind the <lb />weeping
                            friends&#8212;I am with you, </l>
                        <l>I exclude others from you&#8212;there is nothing to be
                            <lb />commiserated, </l>
                        <l>I do not commiserate&#8212;I congratulate you.</l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf204r" type="recto" n="399" facs="nyp.00015.407" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01629">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00261" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To a Common Prostitute.</head>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                        <l>B<hi rend="smallcaps">E</hi> composed&#8212;be at ease with
                            me&#8212;I am Walt <lb />Whitman, liberal and lusty as Nature, </l>
                        <l>Not till the sun excludes you, do I exclude you,</l>
                        <l>Not till the waters refuse to glisten for you, and the <lb />leaves to
                            rustle for you, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">do</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Shall</add>
                            </subst> my words refuse to <lb />glisten and rustle for you. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                        <l>My girl, I appoint with you an appointment <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                            </subst>and I <lb />charge you that you make preparation to be
                            <lb />worthy to meet me, </l>
                        <l>And I charge you that you be patient and perfect till <lb />I come. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                        <l>Till then, I salute you with a significant look, that <lb />you do not
                            forget me. </l>
                    </lg>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01630">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00154" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To Rich Givers.</head>
                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HAT</hi> you give me, I cheerfully accept,</l>
                    <l>A little sustenance, a hut and garden, a little money <lb />&#8212;these
                        as I rendezvous with my poems, </l>
                    <l>A traveller's lodging and breakfast as I journey <lb />through The States <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>Why should I be ashamed <lb />to own such gifts? Why to advertise
                        for them? </l>
                    <l>For I myself am not one who bestows nothing upon <lb />man and woman, </l>
                    <l>For I <del type="overstrike">know that what I</del> bestow upon any man or
                            <lb />woman<del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del> is <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">nothing</add>
                        </del>
                        <del type="overstrike">no less than</del> the entrance to all the
                        <lb />gifts of the universe. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf204v" type="verso" n="400" facs="nyp.00015.408" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01631">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00245" />
                    </relations>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <head type="main-authorial">To a Pupil.</head>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>I<hi rend="smallcaps">S</hi> reform needed? Is it through
                                    you?</l>
                            </del>
                            <l>The greater the <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">reform</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">work</add>
                                </subst> needed, the greater the <choice><orig>P<hi
                                        rend="smallcaps">ER-<lb />SONALITY</hi></orig><reg>P<hi rend="smallcaps"
                                            >ERSONALITY</hi><lb/></reg></choice> you need to accomplish it. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l><del type="overstrike">You!</del> do you <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">indeed</add>
                                </del> not see how it <del type="overstrike">would</del> serve<add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add> to have eyes,
                                <lb />blood, complexion, clean and sweet? </l>
                            <l>Do you not see how it <del type="overstrike">would</del> serve<add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">s</add> to have such a <lb />body
                                and Soul, that when you enter the crowd, <lb />an atmosphere of
                                desire and command enters <lb />with you, and every one is impressed
                                with your <lb />personality? </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                            <l>O the magnet! the flesh over and over!</l>
                            <l>Go, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">mon cher</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">dear
                                        friend</add>
                                </subst>! if need be, give up all else, and <choice>
                                    <orig>com-<lb />mence</orig>
                                    <reg>commence<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> to-day to inure yourself<add type="unmarked"
                                    place="inline">,</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">to pluck, reality, <lb /> self-esteem,
                                    definiteness, elevatedness,</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>Rest not, till you rivet and publish yourself of your <lb />own
                                personality. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01632">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00171" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To The States,<lb />To Identify the 16th, 17th, or
                        18th Presidentiad.</head>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginright">
                            <del type="overstrike"><del type="overstrike">(written</del>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">printed May</add>
                                1860)</del> written 1857-8-9.</note>
                    </del>
                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HY</hi> reclining, interrogating? Why myself and all
                        <lb />drowsing? </l>
                    <l>What deepening twilight! Scum floating atop of the <lb />waters! </l>
                    <l>Who are they, as bats and night-dogs, askant in the <lb />Capitol? </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf205r" type="recto" n="401" facs="nyp.00015.409" />
                    <l>What a filthy Presidentiad! (O south, your torrid <lb />suns! O north, your
                        arctic freezings!) </l>
                    <l>Are those really Congressmen? Are those the great <lb />Judges? Is that the
                        President? </l>
                    <l>Then I will sleep a while yet&#8212;for I see that These <lb />States
                        sleep, for reasons; </l>
                    <l>(With gathering murk&#8212;with muttering thunder and <lb />lambent
                        shoots, we all duly awake, </l>
                    <l>South, north, east, west, inland and seaboard, we will <lb />surely awake.)
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01633">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00037" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To a Cantatrice.</head>
                    <l>H<hi rend="smallcaps">ERE</hi>, take this gift!</l>
                    <l>I was reserving it for some hero, orator, or general,</l>
                    <l>One who should serve the good old cause, the <choice>
                            <orig>prog-<lb />ress</orig>
                            <reg>progress<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and freedom of the race, <del type="overstrike">the cause of
                            <lb /> my Soul;</del>
                    </l>
                    <l>But I see that what I was reserving belongs to you <lb />just as much as to
                        any. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01634">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00035" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">Walt Whitman's Caution.</head>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">?</note>
                    <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">O</hi> The States, or any one of them, or any city of
                        <lb />The States, <hi rend="italic">Resist much, obey little</hi>, </l>
                    <l>Once unquestioning obedience, once fully enslaved,</l>
                    <l>Once fully enslaved, no nation, state, city, of this <lb />earth, ever
                        afterward resumes its liberty. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf205v" type="verso" n="402" facs="nyp.00015.410" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01635">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00152" />
                    </relations>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">(?)</note>
                    </del>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To a
                        Pre<!-- Whitman marked the letter "s" which had been set in the wrong type size in the 1860 edition -->sident.</head>
                    <l>A<hi rend="smallcaps">LL</hi> you are doing and saying is to America dangled
                        <lb />mirages, </l>
                    <l>You have not learned of Nature&#8212;of the politics of <lb />Nature, you
                        have not learned the great <choice>
                            <orig>ampli-<lb />tude,</orig>
                            <reg>amplitude<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> rectitude, impartiality, </l>
                    <l>You have not seen that only such as they are for <lb />These States, </l>
                    <l>And that what is less than they, must sooner or later <lb />lift off from
                        These States. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01636">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00027" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To other Lands.</head>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">HEAR</hi> you have been asking for something to <choice>
                            <orig>repre-<lb />sent</orig>
                            <reg>represent<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> the new race, our self-poised Democracy, </l>
                    <l>Therefore I send you my poems, that you behold in <lb />them what you wanted.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01637">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00168" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To Old Age.</head>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">SEE</hi> in you the estuary that enlarges and spreads
                        <lb />itself grandly as it pours in the great sea. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf206r" type="recto" n="403" facs="nyp.00015.411" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01638">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00498" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To You.</head>
                    <l>L<hi rend="smallcaps">ET</hi> us twain walk aside from the rest;</l>
                    <l>Now we are together privately, do you discard <choice>
                            <orig>cer-<lb />emony,</orig>
                            <reg>ceremony<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Come! vouchsafe to me what has yet been vouchsafed <lb />to
                        none&#8212;Tell me the whole story, </l>
                    <l>Tell me what you would not tell your brother, wife, <lb />husband, or
                        physician. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01639">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00023" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">To You.</head>
                    <l>S<hi rend="smallcaps">TRANGER!</hi> if you, passing, meet me, and desire to
                        <lb />speak to me, why should you not speak to me? </l>
                    <l>And why should I not speak to you?</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf206v" type="verso" n="404" facs="nyp.00015.412" />
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01640">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00275" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">MANNAHATTA.</head>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">1</note>
                <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">WAS</hi> asking for something specific and perfect for
                    <lb />my city, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">and behold! here is</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">whereupon, lo!
                            upsprang</add>
                    </subst> the aboriginal <lb />name! </l>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">2</note>
                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                <l>Now I see what there is in a name, a word, liquid, <lb />sane, unruly, musical,
                    self-sufficient, </l>
                <l>I see that the word of my city, is that word up there,</l>
                <l>Because I see that word nested in nests of water-bays, <lb />superb, with tall
                    and wonderful spires, </l>
                <l>Rich, hemmed thick all around with sailships and <lb />steamships <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                    </subst>an island sixteen miles long, solid-<lb />founded, </l>
                <l>Numberless crowded streets&#8212;high growths of iron, <lb />slender, <add
                        type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>strong, light, splendidly
                    uprising toward <lb />clear skies; </l>
                <l>Tides swift and ample, well-loved by me, toward <choice>
                        <orig>sun-<lb />down,</orig>
                        <reg>sundown<lb /></reg>
                    </choice>
                </l>
                <l>The flowing sea-currents, the little islands, the larger <lb />adjoining islands,
                    the heights, the villas, </l>
                <l>The countless masts, the white shore-steamers, the <lb />lighters, <add
                        type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the ferry-boats, the black
                    sea-steamers, <lb />well-model'd; </l>
                <l>The down-town streets, the jobbers' houses of business <lb />
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                    </subst>the houses of business of the ship-merchants, <lb />and
                    money-brokers&#8212;the river-streets, </l>
                <pb xml:id="leaf207r" type="recto" n="405" facs="nyp.00015.413" />
                <l>Immigrants arriving, fifteen or twenty thousand in a <lb />week, </l>
                <l>The carts hauling goods&#8212;the manly race of drivers <lb />of
                    horses&#8212;the brown-faced sailors, </l>
                <l>The summer<del type="overstrike">-</del>air, the bright sun shining, and the <choice>
                        <orig>sail-<lb />ing</orig>
                        <reg>sailing<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> clouds aloft, </l>
                <l>The winter snows, the sleigh-bells&#8212;the broken ice in <lb />the river,
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>passing along, up or
                    down, with the <lb />flood-tide or ebb-tide; </l>
                <l>The mechanics of the city, <del type="overstrike">the masters,</del> well-formed,
                        <lb /><del type="overstrike">beautiful-faced,</del> looking you straight in
                    the eyes; </l>
                <l>Trottoirs thronged&#8212;vehicles&#8212;Broadway&#8212;the <choice>
                        <orig>wo-<lb />men</orig>
                        <reg>women<lb /></reg>
                    </choice>&#8212;the shops and shows, </l>
                <l>The parades, processions, bugles playing, flags flying, <lb />drums beating; </l>
                <l>A million people&#8212;manners free and superb&#8212;open <lb />voices <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                    </subst>hospitality&#8212;the most courageous and <lb />friendly young men; </l>
                <l>The free city! no slaves! no owners of slaves!</l>
                <l>The beautiful city! the city of hurried and sparkling <lb />waters! the city of
                    spires and masts! </l>
                <l>The city nested in bays! my city!</l>
                <l>The city of such women, I am mad to be with them! <lb />I will return after death
                    to be with them! </l>
                <l>The city of such young men, I swear I cannot live <lb />happy, <add
                        type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>without I often go talk,
                    walk, eat, drink, <lb />sleep, with them! </l>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf207v" type="verso" n="406" facs="nyp.00015.414" />
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01641">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00126" />
                            </relations>
                <del type="erasure">
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">tr to Pioneers O
                        Pioneers</note>
                </del>
                <head type="main-authorial">FRANCE, <lb /> The 18th Year of These States.</head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>A <hi rend="smallcaps">GREAT</hi> year and place,</l>
                    <l>A harsh, discordant, natal scream rising, to touch the <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">mother's heart</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright"><del type="overstrike"
                                    >heart of the</del> mother of all</add>
                        </subst> closer than any yet. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="supralinear">When</add> I walked the shores of
                        my Eastern Sea,</l>
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">When</add> Heard over the waves the
                        little voice,</l>
                    <l>Saw the divine infant, where she woke, mournfully <lb />wailing, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>amid the roar of cannon,
                        curses, shouts, <lb />crash of falling buildings, </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">I</add> Was not so sick from the
                        blood in the gutters running <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>nor from the single corpses, nor those in heaps, <lb />nor those
                        borne away in the tumbrils, </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">I</add> Was not so desperate at the
                        battues of death <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;was <lb /> not so</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#182; Nor</add>
                        </subst> shocked at the repeated fusillades of the <lb />guns. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>Pale, silent, stern, what could I say to that long-<lb />accrued retribution? </l>
                    <l>Could I wish humanity different?</l>
                    <l>Could I wish the people made of wood and stone?</l>
                    <l>Or that there be no justice in destiny or time?</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf208r" type="recto" n="407" facs="nyp.00015.415" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>O Liberty! <del type="overstrike">O mate for me!</del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">s</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">S</add>
                            </subst>ee here in my <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">own</add>
                            </del> heart!</add></l>
                    <l>Here too <del type="overstrike">keeps</del> the blaze, the bullet and the
                        axe, in <lb />reserve, to fetch them out in case of need <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Here too, though long deprest, still is not destroyed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Here <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">too</del>
                        </restore> could rise at last, murdering and extatic <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Here <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">too</del>
                        </restore> would demand full arrears of vengeance.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>Hence I sign this salute over the sea,</l>
                    <l>And I do not deny that terrible red birth and baptism,</l>
                    <l>But remember the little voice that I heard wailing&#8212; <lb />and wait
                        with perfect trust, no matter how long, </l>
                    <l>And from to-day, sad and cogent, I maintain the <lb />bequeath'd cause, as
                        for all lands, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="marginright">in the name of the mother of
                                all,</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>And I send these words to Paris, with my love,</l>
                    <l>And I guess some chansonniers there will understand <lb />them, </l>
                    <l>For I guess there is latent music yet in France&#8212; <lb />floods of
                        it, </l>
                    <l>O I hear already the bustle of instruments&#8212;they <lb />will soon be
                        drowning all that would interrupt <lb />them, </l>
                    <l>O I think the east wind brings a triumphal and free <lb />march, </l>
                    <l>It reaches hither&#8212;it swells me to joyful madness,</l>
                    <l>I will run transpose it in words, to justify it,</l>
                    <l>I will yet sing a song for you, ma femme.</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf208v" type="verso" n="408" facs="nyp.00015.416" />
            <lg type="cluster" xml:id="ppp.01642">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00413" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">THOUGHTS.</head>
                <add type="unmarked" place="marginleft">
                    <head type="main-authorial">Finale</head>
                </add>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01643">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00416" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">1.</head>
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">F</hi> the visages of things&#8212;And of piercing
                        through <lb />to the accepted hells beneath; </l>
                    <l>Of ugliness&#8212;To me there is just as much in it as <lb />there is in
                        beauty&#8212;And now the ugliness of <lb />human beings is acceptable to
                        me; </l>
                    <l>Of detected persons&#8212;To me, detected persons are <lb />not, in any
                        respect, worse than undetected <choice><orig>per-<lb />sons</orig><reg>persons<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;and are not in any respect worse than I
                        <lb />am myself; </l>
                    <l>Of criminals&#8212;To me, any judge, or any juror, is <lb />equally
                        criminal&#8212;and any reputable person is <lb />also&#8212;and the
                        President is also. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01644">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00415" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">2.</head>
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">F</hi> waters, forests, hills,</l>
                    <l>Of the earth at large, whispering through medium <lb />of me; </l>
                    <l>Of vista&#8212;Suppose some sight in arriere, through the <lb />formative
                        chaos, presuming the growth, fulness, <lb />life, now attained on the
                        journey; </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf209r" type="recto" n="409" facs="nyp.00015.417" />
                    <l>(But I see the road continued, and the journey ever <lb />continued;) </l>
                    <l>Of what was once lacking on the earth, and in due <lb />time has become
                        supplied&#8212;And of what will <lb />yet be supplied, </l>
                    <l>Because all I see and know, I believe to have purport <lb />in what will yet
                        be supplied. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01645">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00242" />
                    </relations>
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                            <head type="main-authorial">3.</head>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                            <head type="main-authorial">Thought</head>
                        </add>
                    </subst>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">for Finale if needed</note>
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">F</hi> persons arrived at high positions, ceremonies,
                        <lb />wealth, scholarships, and the like, </l>
                    <l>To me, all that those persons have arrived at, sinks <lb />away from them,
                        except as it results to their <lb />bodies and Souls, </l>
                    <l>So that often to me they appear gaunt and naked,</l>
                    <l>And often, to me, each one mocks the others, and <lb />mocks himself or
                        herself, </l>
                    <l>And of each one, the core of life, namely happiness, <lb />is full of the
                        rotten excrement of maggots, </l>
                    <l>And <del type="overstrike">often</del>, to me, those men and women pass <choice>
                            <orig>un-<lb />wittingly</orig>
                            <reg>unwittingly<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> the true realities of life, and go toward <lb />false realities, </l>
                    <l>And <del type="overstrike">often</del>, to me, they are alive after what
                        custom <lb />has served them, but nothing more, </l>
                    <l>And <del type="overstrike">often</del>, to me, they are sad, hasty, unwaked <choice>
                            <orig>son-<lb />nambules,</orig>
                            <reg>sonnambules<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> walking the dusk. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf209v" type="verso" n="410" facs="nyp.00015.418" />
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01646">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00148" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">4.</head>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">Thought</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">F</hi> ownership&#8212;As if one fit to own things
                        could not <lb />at pleasure enter upon all, and incorporate them <lb />into
                        himself or herself; </l>
                    <l>Of Equality&#8212;As if it harmed me, giving others the <lb />same
                        chances and rights as myself&#8212;As if it <lb />were not indispensable
                        to my own rights that <lb />others possess the same; </l>
                    <l>Of Justice&#8212;As if Justice could be any thing but <lb />the same
                        ample law, expounded by natural <lb />judges and saviours, </l>
                    <l>As if it might be this thing or that thing, according <lb />to decisions.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01647">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00017" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">5.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Thought</add>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                    <l>A<hi rend="smallcaps">S</hi> I sit with others, at a great feast, suddenly,
                        while <lb />the music is playing, </l>
                    <l>To my mind, (whence it comes I know not,) spectral, <lb />in mist, of a wreck
                        at sea, </l>
                    <l>Of the flower of the marine science of fifty <choice>
                            <orig>genera-<lb />tions,</orig>
                            <reg>generations<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> foundered off the Northeast coast, and <lb />going
                        down&#8212;Of the steamship Arctic going <lb />down, </l>
                    <l>Of the veiled tableau&#8212;Women gathered together <lb />on deck, pale,
                        heroic, waiting the moment that <lb />draws so close&#8212;O the moment! </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf210r" type="recto" n="411" facs="nyp.00015.419" />
                    <l>O the huge sob&#8212;A few bubbles&#8212;the white foam
                        <lb />spirting up&#8212;And then the women gone, </l>
                    <l>Sinking there, while the passionless wet flows on&#8212; <lb />And I now
                        pondering, Are those women indeed <lb />gone? </l>
                    <l>Are Souls drowned and destroyed so?</l>
                    <l>Is only matter triumphant?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01648">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00451" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">6.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Thoughts</add>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">F</hi> what I write from myself&#8212;As if that
                        were not <lb />the resum&#233;; </l>
                    <l>Of Histories&#8212;As if such, however complete, were <lb />not less
                        complete than my poems; </l>
                    <l>As if the shreds, the records of nations, could possibly <lb />be as lasting
                        as my poems; </l>
                    <l>As if here were not the amount of all nations, and of <lb />all the lives of
                        heroes. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01649">
                    <relations>
                        <work ref="xxx.00162" />
                    </relations>
                    <head type="main-authorial">7.</head>
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">F</hi> obedience, faith, adhesiveness;</l>
                    <l>As I stand aloof and look, there is to me something <lb />profoundly
                        affecting in large masses of men, <choice>
                            <orig>fol-<lb />lowing</orig>
                            <reg>following<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> the lead of those who do not believe in <lb />men. </l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf210v" type="verso" n="412" facs="nyp.00015.420" />
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01650">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00231" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">UNNAMED LANDS.</head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>N<hi rend="smallcaps">ATIONS</hi> ten thousand years before These States, and
                        <lb />many times ten thousand years before These <lb />States, </l>
                    <l>Garnered clusters of ages, that men and women like <lb />us grew up and
                        travelled their course, and <lb />passed on; </l>
                    <l>What vast-built cities&#8212;What orderly republics&#8212; <lb />What
                        pastoral tribes and nomads, </l>
                    <l>What histories, rulers, heroes, perhaps transcending <lb />all others, </l>
                    <l>What laws, customs, wealth, arts, traditions,</l>
                    <l>What sort of marriage&#8212;What costumes&#8212;What <lb />physiology
                        and phrenology, </l>
                    <l>What of liberty and slavery among them&#8212;What <lb />they thought of
                        death and the Soul, </l>
                    <l>Who were witty and wise&#8212;Who beautiful and poetic
                        <lb />&#8212;Who brutish and undeveloped, </l>
                    <l>Not a mark, not a record remains&#8212;And yet all <lb />remains. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>O I know that those men and women were not for <lb />nothing, any more than
                        we are for nothing, </l>
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                    <l>I know that they belong to the scheme of the world <lb />every bit as much as
                        we now belong to it <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">, </del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst>and as <lb />all will henceforth belong to it. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>Afar they stand&#8212;yet near to me they stand,</l>
                    <l>Some with oval countenances, learned and calm,</l>
                    <l>Some naked and savage&#8212;Some like huge collections <lb />of insects <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Some in tents&#8212;herdsmen, patriarchs, tribes, <choice>
                            <orig>horse-<lb />men,</orig>
                            <reg>horsemen<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Some prowling through woods&#8212;Some living <choice>
                            <orig>peacea-<lb />bly</orig>
                            <reg>peaceably<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> on farms, laboring, reaping, filling barns, </l>
                    <l>Some traversing paved avenues, amid temples, palaces, <lb />factories,
                        libraries, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>shows,
                        courts, theatres, <choice>
                            <orig>won-<lb />derful</orig>
                            <reg>wonderful<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> monuments. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>Are those billions of men really gone?</l>
                    <l>Are those women of the old experience of the earth <lb />gone? </l>
                    <l>Do their lives, cities, arts, rest only with us?</l>
                    <l>Did they achieve nothing for good, for themselves?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">believe</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">think</add>
                        </subst> of all those billions of men and women that <lb />filled the
                        unnamed lands, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>every one
                        exists this <lb />hour, here or elsewhere, invisible to us, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>in exact <lb />proportion
                        to what he or she grew from in life, <lb /><add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add>and out of what he or she did, felt,
                        became, loved, <lb />sinned, in life. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">believe</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">think</add>
                        </subst> that was not the end of those nations, or any <lb />person of them,
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>any more than this
                        shall be the <lb />end of my nation, or of me; </l>
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                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">7.</note>
                    <l>Of their languages, phrenology, government, coins, <choice>
                            <orig>med-<lb />als,</orig>
                            <reg>medals<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>marriage, literature,
                        products, games, <choice>
                            <orig>juris-<lb />prudence,</orig>
                            <reg>jurisprudence<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> wars, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>manners,
                        amativeness, crimes, <lb />prisons, slaves, heroes, poets, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>I suspect their <choice>
                            <orig>re-<lb />sults</orig>
                            <reg>results<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> curiously await in the yet unseen world &#8212; <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>counterparts of what
                        accrued to them in the seen <lb />world <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#182;</add>
                    <l>I suspect I shall meet them there,</l>
                    <l>I suspect I shall there find each old particular of those <lb />unnamed
                        lands. </l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01651">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00248" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">KOSMOS.</head>
                <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HO</hi> includes diversity, and is Nature,</l>
                <l>Who is the amplitude of the earth, and the coarseness <lb />and sexuality of the
                    earth, and the great <add type="insertion" place="marginright">toleration
                        &#38;</add>charity <lb />of the earth, and the equilibrium also, </l>
                <l>Who has not looked forth from the windows, the eyes, <lb />for nothing <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>
                    </subst>or whose brain held audience with <lb />messengers for nothing; </l>
                <l>Who contains believers and disbelievers&#8212;Who is the <lb />most majestic
                    lover; </l>
                <l>Who holds duly his or her triune proportion of realism, <lb />spiritualism, and
                    of the sthetic, or intellectual, </l>
                <l>Who, having considered the body, finds all its organs <lb />and parts good; </l>
                <l>Who, out of the theory of <del type="overstrike">the earth, and of</del> his or
                    her <lb />body<del type="overstrike">,</del> understands by subtle analogies<del
                        type="overstrike">,</del>
                    <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">all other theories,</add> the theory
                    <lb />of a city, a poem, and of the large politics of <lb />These States; </l>
                <pb xml:id="leaf212r" type="recto" n="415" facs="nyp.00015.423" />
                <l>Who believes not only in our globe, with its sun and <lb />moon, but in other
                    globes, with their suns and <lb />moons; </l>
                <l>Who, constructing the house of himself or herself, not <lb />for a day, but for
                    all time, sees races, eras, dates, <lb />generations, </l>
                <l>The past, the future, dwelling there, like space, <choice>
                        <orig>insep-<lb />arable</orig>
                        <reg>inseparable<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> together. </l>
            </lg>
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01652">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00145" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">A HAND-MIRROR.</head>
                <l>H<hi rend="smallcaps">OLD</hi> it up sternly! See this it sends back! (Who is
                    <lb />it? Is it you?) </l>
                <l>Outside fair costume&#8212;within, ashes and filth,</l>
                <l>No more a flashing eye&#8212;no more a sonorous voice <lb />or springy step, </l>
                <l>Now some slave's eye, voice, hands, step,</l>
                <l>A drunkard's breath, unwholesome eater's face, <choice>
                        <orig>ve-<lb />nerealee's</orig>
                        <reg>venerealee's<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> flesh, </l>
                <l>Lungs rotting away piecemeal, stomach sour and <lb />cankerous, </l>
                <l>Joints rheumatic, bowels clogged with abomination,</l>
                <l>Blood circulating dark and poisonous streams,</l>
                <l>Words babble, hearing and touch callous,</l>
                <l>No brain, no heart left&#8212;no magnetism of sex;</l>
                <l>Such, from one look in this looking-glass ere you go <lb />hence, </l>
                <l>Such a result so soon&#8212;and from such a beginning!</l>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf212v" type="verso" n="416" facs="nyp.00015.424" />
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01653">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00034" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="2" type="erasure">
                            <add seq="1" type="insertion" place="supralinear">First</add>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="3" type="insertion" place="over">A thought of</add>
                    </subst> BEGINNERS.</head>
                <l>H<hi rend="smallcaps">OW</hi> they are provided for upon the earth, (<choice>
                        <orig>appear-<lb />ing</orig>
                        <reg>appearing<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> at intervals,) </l>
                <l>How dear and dreadful they are to the earth,</l>
                <l>How they inure to themselves as much as to any&#8212; <lb />What a paradox
                    appears, their age, </l>
                <l>How people respond to them, yet know them not,</l>
                <l>How there is something relentless in their fate, all <lb />times, </l>
                <l>How all times mischoose the objects of their adulation <lb />and reward, </l>
                <l>And how the same inexorable price must still be paid <lb />for the same great
                    purchase. </l>
            </lg>
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01654">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00251" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">TESTS.</head>
                <l>A<hi rend="smallcaps">LL</hi> submit to them, where they sit, inner, secure,
                    <lb />unapproachable to analysis, in the Soul; </l>
                <l>Not traditions&#8212;not the outer authorities are the
                    <lb />judges&#8212;they are the judges of outer <choice>
                        <orig>authori-<lb />ties,</orig>
                        <reg>authorities<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> and of all traditions, </l>
                <l>They corroborate as they go, only whatever <choice>
                        <orig>corrobo-<lb />rates</orig>
                        <reg>corroborates<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> themselves, and touches themselves <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                        <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright">;</add>
                    </subst></l>
                <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>For all that, they have it forever in
                    themselves to <choice>
                        <orig>cor-<lb />roborate</orig>
                        <reg>corroborate<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> far and near, without one exception.<add type="unmarked"
                        place="inline">)</add>
                </l>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf213r" type="recto" n="417" facs="nyp.00015.425" />
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01655">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00039" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">SAVANTISM.</head>
                <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">HITHER</hi>, as I look, I see each result and glory <choice>
                        <orig>re-<lb />tracing</orig>
                        <reg>retracing<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> itself and nestling close, always <choice>
                        <orig>obli-<lb />gated;</orig>
                        <reg>obligated<lb /></reg>
                    </choice>
                </l>
                <l>Thither hours, months, years&#8212;thither trades, <choice>
                        <orig>com-<lb />pacts,</orig>
                        <reg>compacts<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> establishments, even the most minute, </l>
                <l>Thither every-day life, speech, utensils, politics, <choice>
                        <orig>per-<lb />sons,</orig>
                        <reg>persons<lb /></reg>
                    </choice> estates, </l>
                <l>Thither we also, I with my leaves and songs, trustful, <lb />admirant, </l>
                <l>As a father, to his father going, takes his children <lb />along with him. </l>
            </lg>
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01656">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00150" />
                            </relations>
                <head type="main-authorial">PERFECTIONS.</head>
                <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">NLY</hi> themselves understand themselves, and the like
                    <lb />of themselves, </l>
                <l>As Souls only understand Souls.</l>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf213v" type="verso" n="418" facs="nyp.00015.426" />
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01657">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00417" />
                            </relations>
                <del type="hashmark">
                    <head type="main-authorial">SAYS.</head>
                    <lg type="section">
                        <head type="main-authorial">1.</head>
                        <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">SAY</hi> whatever tastes sweet to the most perfect <choice>
                                <orig>per-<lb />son</orig>
                                <reg>person<lb /></reg>
                            </choice>
                            <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">, </del>
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">&#8212;</add>
                            </subst><add type="edit" rend="smallcaps">that</add> is finally right.
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="section">
                            <head type="main-authorial">2.</head>
                            <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">SAY</hi> nourish a great intellect, a great
                                brain;</l>
                            <l>If I have said anything to the contrary, I hereby <lb />retract it.
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="section">
                            <head type="main-authorial">3.</head>
                            <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">SAY</hi> man shall not hold property in
                                man;</l>
                            <l>I say the least developed person on earth is just as <lb />important
                                and sacred to himself or herself, as <lb />the most developed person
                                is to himself or <choice>
                                    <orig>her-<lb />self.</orig>
                                    <reg>herself<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                            </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="section">
                        <head type="main-authorial">4.</head>
                        <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">SAY</hi> where liberty draws not the blood out of
                            <lb />slavery, there slavery draws the blood out of <lb />liberty <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                            </subst></l>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <l>I say the word of the good old cause in These States, <lb />and
                                resound it hence over the world. </l>
                        </del>
                    </lg>
                </del>
                <pb xml:id="leaf214r" type="recto" n="419" facs="nyp.00015.427" />
                <!-- According to Golden, the leaf containing Nos 5-8, pp 419-20, is missing from the BB -->
                <gap reason="cut away" />
                <lg type="section">
                    <head type="main-authorial">5.</head>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">SAY</hi> the human shape or face is so great, it must
                        <lb />never be made ridiculous; </l>
                    <l>I say for ornaments nothing outre can be allowed,</l>
                    <l>And that anything is most beautiful without <choice>
                            <orig>orna-<lb />ment,</orig>
                            <reg>ornament<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>And that exaggerations will be sternly revenged in <lb />your own physiology,
                        and in other persons' <choice>
                            <orig>phys-<lb />iology</orig>
                            <reg>physiology<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> also; </l>
                    <l>And I say that clean-shaped children can be jetted <lb />and conceived only
                        where natural forms prevail <lb />in public, and the human face and form are
                        <lb />never caricatured; </l>
                    <l>And I say that genius need never more be turned to <lb />romances, </l>
                    <l>(For facts properly told, how mean appear all <lb />romances.) </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="section">
                    <head type="main-authorial">6.</head>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">SAY</hi> the word of lands fearing nothing&#8212;I
                        will <lb />have no other land; </l>
                    <l>I say discuss all and expose all&#8212;I am for every <lb />topic openly; </l>
                    <l>I say there can be no salvation for These States <choice>
                            <orig>with-<lb />out</orig>
                            <reg>without<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> innovators&#8212;without free tongues, and ears <lb />willing
                        to hear the tongues; </l>
                    <l>And I announce as a glory of These States, that <lb />they respectfully
                        listen to propositions, reforms, <lb />fresh views and doctrines, from
                        successions of <lb />men and women, </l>
                    <l>Each age with its own growth.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf214v" type="verso" n="420" facs="nyp.00015.428" />
                <lg type="section">
                    <head type="main-authorial">7.</head>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">HAVE</hi> said many times that materials and the Soul
                        <lb />are great, and that all depends on physique; </l>
                    <l>Now I reverse what I said, and affirm that all depends <lb />on the
                        &#230;sthetic or intellectual, </l>
                    <l>And that criticism is great&#8212;and that refinement is <lb />greatest
                        of all; </l>
                    <l>And I affirm now that the mind governs&#8212;and that <lb />all depends
                        on the mind. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="section">
                    <head type="main-authorial">8.</head>
                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">ITH</hi> one man or woman&#8212;(no matter which
                        one&#8212; <lb />I even pick out the lowest,) </l>
                    <l>With him or her I now illustrate the whole law;</l>
                    <l>I say that every right, in politics or what-not, shall be <lb />eligible to
                        that one man or woman, on the same <lb />terms as any. </l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
            <pb xml:id="leaf215r" type="recto" n="421" facs="nyp.00015.429" />
            <lg type="sequence" xml:id="ppp.01658">
                <relations>
                                <work ref="xxx.00418" />
                            </relations>
                <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">all this out</note>
                <head type="main-authorial">DEBRIS.</head>
                <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Leaves&#8209;droppings.</add>
                <del type="overstrike">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear" rend="underline">Who is wisest? and who
                        wins?</add>
                </del>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01132">
                    <l>H<hi rend="smallcaps">E</hi> is wisest who has the most caution,</l>
                    <l>He only wins who goes far enough.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01133">
                    <l>A<hi rend="smallcaps">NY</hi> thing is <del type="overstrike">as good
                            as</del> established, when that is <lb />established that will produce
                            it<del type="overstrike"> and continue it</del>. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01134">
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear" rend="underline">The only good
                            army</add>
                    </del>
                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HAT</hi> General has a good army in himself, has <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">the only</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />good army <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">.</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>He happy in himself, or she happy in herself, is <lb />happy, </l>
                        <l>But I tell you you cannot be happy by others, <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">nor by any thing but yourself.</add>
                            <del type="overstrike">any <lb /> more than you can beget or conceive a
                                child by <lb />others. </del></l>
                    </del>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01135">
                    <l>H<hi rend="smallcaps">AVE</hi> you learned lessons only of those who admired
                        <lb />you, and were tender with you, and stood aside <lb />for you? </l>
                    <l>Have you not learned the great lessons of those who <lb />rejected you, and
                        braced themselves against you? <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>or who treated you with contempt, or disputed <lb />the
                        passage with you? </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>Have you had no practice to receive opponents when <lb />they come? </l>
                    </del>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf215v" type="verso" n="422" facs="nyp.00015.430" />
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">3. <l>But appeal not to me, O
                            despairers</l>
                        <l>To me too</l></add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">Finale</note>
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline"><add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">Ah</add> Despairing Cries.</head>
                    </add>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">Religious</note>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr to Leaves of Grass</note>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">Ah</add> D<hi rend="smallcaps"
                            >ESPAIRING</hi> cries float ceaselessly toward me, day and <lb />night, </l>
                    <l>The sad voice of Death&#8212;the call of my nearest <lb />lover, putting
                        forth, alarmed, uncertain, </l>
                    <l>
                        <hi rend="italic">This sea I am quickly to sail, come tell me,</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l><hi rend="italic">Come tell me where I am speeding&#8212;tell me my</hi>
                        <lb /><hi rend="italic">destination</hi>. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01136">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">2.</note>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">UNDERSTAND</hi> your anguish, <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">O my lover</add>
                        </del> but I cannot help you,</l>
                    <l>I approach, hear, behold <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">you,
                            despairers&#8212;</add>&#8212;the sad mouth, the look <lb />out
                        of the eyes, your mute inquiry, </l>
                    <l>
                        <hi rend="italic">Whither I go from the bed I now recline on, come</hi>
                        <lb />
                        <hi rend="italic">tell me;</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="marginleft">I see hear all&#8212;</add>Old
                        age, alarmed, uncertain&#8212;A young woman's <lb />voice appealing to
                        me, for comfort, </l>
                    <l>A young man's voice, <hi>Shall I not escape?</hi></l>
                </lg>
                <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                    <head type="main-authorial">
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="erasure">? Figures</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Pa<gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />s</add>
                            </del>
                            <del seq="5" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Fantoccini></add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="6" type="unmarked" place="interlinear">Figures.</add>
                        </subst>
                    </head>
                </add>
                <note type="authorial" place="interlinear">1</note>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01137">
                    <l>A <hi rend="smallcaps">THOUSAND</hi> perfect men and women appear,</l>
                    <l>Around each gathers a cluster of friends, and gay</l>
                    <l>children and youths, with offerings.</l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="interlinear">2</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01138">
                    <l>A <hi rend="smallcaps">MASK</hi>&#8212;a perpetual natural disguiser of
                        herself,</l>
                    <l>Concealing her face, concealing her form,</l>
                    <l>Changes and transformations every hour, every <choice>
                            <orig>mo-<lb />ment,</orig>
                            <reg>moment<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Falling upon her even when she sleeps.</l>
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                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
                <note type="authorial" place="supralinear">3</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01139">
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">NE</hi> sweeps by, attended by an immense train,</l>
                    <l>All emblematic of peace&#8212;not a soldier or menial <lb />among them.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="supralinear">4</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01140">
                    <l>O<hi rend="smallcaps">NE</hi> sweeps by, <add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear">very</add>old, with black eyes, and profuse
                        <lb />white hair <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">and beard;</add>
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                    </l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>He has the simple magnificence of health and <lb />strength, </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>His face strikes as with flashes of lightning whoever <lb />it turns toward.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="supralinear">5</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01141">
                    <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">HREE</hi> old men slowly pass, followed by three
                        others, <lb />and they by three others, </l>
                    <l>They are <del type="overstrike">beautiful</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear"><del type="overstrike"
                                >perfectly</del>
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">in perfect</add> health<del
                                type="overstrike">ly&#8212;</del></add>&#8212;the one in the
                        middle of each <lb />group holds his companions by the hand, </l>
                    <l>As they walk, they give out perfume wherever they <lb />walk. </l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="supralinear">6</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01142">
                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">OMEN</hi> sit, or move to and fro&#8212;some old,
                        some <lb />young, </l>
                    <l>The young are beautiful&#8212;but the old are more <lb />beautiful than
                        the young. </l>
                </lg>
                <note type="authorial" place="supralinear">7</note>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01143">
                    <l>W<hi rend="smallcaps">HAT</hi> weeping face is that looking from the
                        window?</l>
                    <l>Why does it stream those sorrowful tears?</l>
                    <l>Is it for some burial place, vast and dry?</l>
                    <l>Is it to wet the soil of graves?</l>
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                <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">Finale</note>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">Religious</note>
                <del type="overstrike">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">Leaves of Grass</note>
                </del>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01144">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                        <head type="main-authorial">I will take an egg out of the robin's
                            nest</head>
                    </add>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">WILL</hi>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
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                        </del> take an egg out of the robin's nest in the <lb />orchard, </l>
                    <l>I will take a branch of gooseberries from the old bush <lb />in the garden,
                        and go and preach to the world; </l>
                    <l>You shall see I will not meet a single heretic or <lb />scorner, </l>
                    <l>You shall see how I stump clergymen, and confound <lb />them, </l>
                    <l>You shall see me showing a scarlet tomato, and a <lb />white pebble from the
                        beach. </l>
                </lg>
                <del type="hashmark">
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                        <l>B<hi rend="smallcaps">EHAVIOR</hi>&#8212;fresh, native, copious, each
                            one for <choice>
                                <orig>him-<lb />self</orig>
                                <reg>himself<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> or herself, </l>
                        <l>Nature and the Soul expressed&#8212;America and <choice>
                                <orig>free-<lb />dom</orig>
                                <reg>freedom<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> expressed&#8212;In it the finest art, </l>
                        <l>In it pride, cleanliness, sympathy, to have their <lb />chance, </l>
                        <l>In it physique, intellect, faith&#8212;in it just as much as <lb />to
                            manage an army or a city, or to write a book <lb />&#8212;perhaps
                            more, </l>
                        <l>The youth, the laboring person, the poor person, <lb />rivalling all the
                            rest&#8212;perhaps outdoing the <lb />rest, </l>
                        <l>The effects of the universe no greater than its;</l>
                        <l>For there is nothing in the whole universe that can <lb />be more
                            effective than a man's or woman's daily <lb />behavior can be, </l>
                        <l>In any position, in any one of These States.</l>
                    </lg>
                </del>
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                <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                    <head type="main-authorial">Not the <del type="overstrike">overland</del>
                        pathfinder <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">traveling
                            overland</add></head>
                </add>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01146">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">tr down &#42;</note>
                    <transpose anchored="true" target="t70">
                        <l>N<hi rend="smallcaps">OT</hi> the <add type="insertion"
                                place="supralinear">sea&#8209;</add>pilot <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">has charged</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">charges</add>
                            </subst> himself to bring his ship <lb />into port, <add type="unmarked"
                                place="inline">&#182;</add>though beaten back, and many times
                            <lb />baffled, </l>
                    </transpose>
                    <l>Not the <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">overland</add> path-finder,
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                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
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                            </add>
                        </del><del type="overstrike">penetrating inland,</del>
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">traveling overland</add> weary and
                        <lb />long, </l>
                    <l>By deserts parched, snows chilled, rivers wet, <choice>
                            <orig>per-<lb />severes</orig>
                            <reg>perseveres<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> till he reaches his destination, </l>
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">&#42;</note>
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                    <l>More than I have charged myself, heeded or <choice>
                            <orig>un-<lb />heeded,</orig>
                            <reg>unheeded<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>to compose a free march
                        for These <lb />States, </l>
                    <l>To be exhilarating music to them, years, centuries <lb />hence. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01147">
                    <add type="unmarked" place="interlinear">
                        <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">As if a phantom, caress <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">ing</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">'d</add>
                            </subst> me</head>
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                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                        <l>As if a phantom, <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">soothing</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">caress<del
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                                        place="over">'d</add></add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">accompanied</del> me,</l>
                    </add>
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">THOUGHT</hi> I was not alone, walking here by the
                        shore,</l>
                    <l>But the one I thought was <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">with me,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginleft">close <del
                                    type="overstrike">to</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">to</add> my
                                side&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> as now I walk by <lb />the shore, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#8212;the one<del type="overstrike">s</del> I loved,
                            that caress'd me,</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>As I lean and look through the glimmering light&#8212; <lb />that one has
                        utterly disappeared, </l>
                    <l>And those appear that <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">perplex me.</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="marginright"><del type="overstrike"
                                    >mock and</del> are hateful to me and mock me.</add>
                        </subst></l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
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                <head type="main-authorial">SLEEP-CHASINGS.</head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>I <hi rend="smallcaps">WANDER</hi> all night in my vision,</l>
                    <l>Stepping with light feet, swiftly and noiselessly <choice>
                            <orig>step-<lb />ping</orig>
                            <reg>stepping<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and stopping, </l>
                    <l>Bending with open eyes over the shut eyes of <lb />sleepers, </l>
                    <l>Wandering and confused, lost to myself, ill-assorted, <lb />contradictory, </l>
                    <l>Pausing, gazing, bending, and stopping.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>How solemn they look there, stretched and still!</l>
                    <l>How quiet they breathe, the little children in their <lb />cradles! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>The wretched features of ennuy&#233;s, the white features <lb />of
                        corpses, the livid faces of drunkards, the sick-<lb />gray faces of
                        onanists, </l>
                    <l>The gashed bodies on battle-fields, the insane in their <lb />strong-doored
                        rooms, the sacred idiots, the <choice>
                            <orig>new-<lb />born</orig>
                            <reg>newborn<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> emerging from gates, and the dying <choice>
                            <orig>emer-<lb />ging</orig>
                            <reg>emerging<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> from gates, </l>
                    <l>The night pervades them and infolds them.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>The married couple sleep calmly in their bed&#8212;he <lb />with his palm
                        on the hip of the wife, and she <lb />with her palm on the hip of the
                        husband, </l>
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                    <l>The sisters sleep lovingly side by side in their bed,</l>
                    <l>The men sleep lovingly side by side in theirs,</l>
                    <l>And the mother sleeps, with her little child carefully <lb />wrapped. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>The blind sleep, and the deaf and dumb sleep,</l>
                    <l>The prisoner sleeps well in the prison&#8212;the <choice>
                            <orig>run-<lb />away</orig>
                            <reg>runaway<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> son sleeps, </l>
                    <l>The murderer that is to be hung next day&#8212;how <lb />does he sleep? </l>
                    <l>And the murdered person&#8212;how does he sleep?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>The female that loves unrequited sleeps,</l>
                    <l>And the male that loves unrequited sleeps,</l>
                    <l>The head of the money-maker that plotted all day <lb />sleeps, </l>
                    <l>And the enraged and treacherous dispositions&#8212; <lb />all, all sleep.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                    <l>I stand in the dark with drooping eyes by the worst-<lb />suffering and the
                        most restless, </l>
                    <l>I pass my hands soothingly to and fro a few inches <lb />from them, </l>
                    <l>The restless sink in their beds&#8212;they fitfully sleep.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>Now I pierce the darkness&#8212;new beings appear,</l>
                    <l>The earth recedes from me into the night,</l>
                    <l>I saw that it was beautiful, and I see that what is not <lb />the earth is
                        beautiful. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                    <l>I go from bedside to bedside&#8212;I sleep close with <lb />the other
                        sleepers, each in turn, </l>
                    <l>I dream in my dream all the dreams of the other <lb />dreamers, </l>
                    <l>And I become the other dreamers.</l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>I am a dance&#8212;Play up, there! the fit is whirling <lb />me fast!
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>I am the ever-laughing&#8212;it is new moon and twilight,</l>
                    <l>I see the hiding of douceurs&#8212;I see nimble ghosts <lb />whichever
                        way I look, </l>
                    <l>Cache, and cache again, deep in the ground and sea, <lb />and where it is
                        neither ground or sea. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>Well do they do their jobs, those journeymen divine,</l>
                    <l>Only from me can they hide nothing, and would not <lb />if they could, </l>
                    <l>I reckon I am their boss, and they make me a pet <lb />besides, </l>
                    <l>And surround me and lead me, and run ahead when <lb />I walk, </l>
                    <l>To lift their cunning covers, to signify me with <lb />stretched arms, and
                        resume the way; </l>
                    <l>Onward we move! a gay gang of blackguards! with <lb />mirth-shouting music
                        and wild-flapping pennants <lb />of joy! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <l>I am the actor, the actress, the voter, the politician,</l>
                    <l>The emigrant and the exile, the criminal that stood <lb />in the box, </l>
                    <l>He who has been famous, and he who shall be famous <lb />after to-day, </l>
                    <l>The stammerer, the well-formed person, the wasted <lb />or feeble person.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                    <l>I am she who adorned herself and folded her hair <lb />expectantly, </l>
                    <l>My truant lover has come, and it is dark.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf219r" type="recto" n="429" facs="nyp.00015.437" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>Double yourself and receive me, darkness!</l>
                    <l>Receive me and my lover too&#8212;he will not let me go <lb />without
                        him. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>I roll myself upon you, as upon a bed&#8212;I resign <lb />myself to the
                        dusk. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                    <l>He whom I call answers me and takes the place of <lb />my lover, </l>
                    <l>He rises with me silently from the bed.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>Darkness! you are gentler than my lover&#8212;his flesh <lb />was sweaty
                        and panting, </l>
                    <l>I feel the hot moisture yet that he left me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                    <l>My hands are spread forth, I pass them in all <lb />directions, </l>
                    <l>I would sound up the shadowy shore to which you <lb />are journeying. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                    <l>Be careful, darkness! already, what was it touched <lb />me? </l>
                    <l>I thought my lover had gone, else darkness and he <lb />are one, </l>
                    <l>I hear the heart-beat&#8212;I follow, I fade away.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                    <l>O hot-cheeked and blushing! O foolish hectic!</l>
                    <l>O for pity's sake, no one must see me now! my <lb />clothes were stolen while
                        I was abed, </l>
                    <l>Now I am thrust forth, where shall I run?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                    <l>Pier that I saw dimly last night, when I looked from <lb />the windows! </l>
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                    <l>Pier out from the main, let me catch myself with you <lb />and
                        stay&#8212;I will not chafe you, </l>
                    <l>I feel ashamed to go naked about the world.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                    <l>I am curious to know where my feet stand <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>and <lb />what this is flooding me, childhood or manhood <lb />
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>and the hunger that crosses the bridge <lb />between. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>The cloth laps a first sweet eating and drinking,</l>
                    <l>Laps life-swelling yolks&#8212;laps ear of rose-corn, milky <lb />and
                        just ripened; </l>
                    <l>The white teeth stay, and the boss-tooth advances in <lb />darkness, </l>
                    <l>And liquor is spilled on lips and bosoms by touching <lb />glasses, and the
                        best liquor afterward. </l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                    <l>I descend my western course, my sinews are flaccid,</l>
                    <l>Perfume and youth course through me, and I am <lb />their wake. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>It is my face yellow and wrinkled, instead of the <lb />old woman's, </l>
                    <l>I sit low in a straw-bottom chair, and carefully darn <lb />my grandson's
                        stockings. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>It is I too, the sleepless widow looking out on the <lb />winter midnight, </l>
                    <l>I see the sparkles of starshine on the icy and pallid <lb />earth. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>A shroud I see, and I am the shroud&#8212;I wrap a body <lb />and lie in
                        the coffin, </l>
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                    <l>It is dark here under ground&#8212;it is not evil or pain
                        <lb />here&#8212;it is blank here, for reasons. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                    <l>It seems to me that everything in the light and air <lb />ought to be happy, </l>
                    <l>Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave, let <lb />him know he has
                        enough. </l>
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                    <l>I see a beautiful gigantic swimmer swimming naked <lb />through the eddies of
                        the sea, </l>
                    <l>His brown hair lies close and even to his head&#8212; <lb />he strikes
                        out with courageous arms&#8212;he urges <lb />himself with his legs, </l>
                    <l>I see his white body&#8212;I see his undaunted eyes,</l>
                    <l>I hate the swift-running eddies that would dash him <lb />head-foremost on
                        the rocks. </l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                    <l>What are you doing, you ruffianly red-trickled waves?</l>
                    <l>Will you kill the courageous giant? Will you kill <lb />him in the prime of
                        his middle age? </l>
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                    <l>Steady and long he struggles,</l>
                    <l>He is baffled, banged, bruised&#8212;he holds out while <lb />his
                        strength holds out, </l>
                    <l>The slapping eddies are spotted with his blood&#8212; <lb />they bear him
                        away&#8212;they roll him, swing him, <lb />turn him, </l>
                    <l>His beautiful body is borne in the circling eddies, <lb />it is continually
                        bruised on rocks, </l>
                    <l>Swiftly and out of sight is borne the brave corpse.</l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>I turn, but do not extricate myself,</l>
                    <l>Confused, a past-reading, another, but with darkness <lb />yet. </l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="34">
                    <l>The beach is cut by the razory ice-wind&#8212;the wreck-<lb />guns sound, </l>
                    <l>The tempest lulls&#8212;the moon comes floundering <lb />through the
                        drifts. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="35">
                    <l>I look where the ship helplessly heads end on&#8212;I <lb />hear the
                        burst as she strikes&#8212;I hear the howls <lb />of
                        dismay&#8212;they grow fainter and fainter. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="36">
                    <l>I cannot aid with my wringing fingers,</l>
                    <l>I can but rush to the surf, and let it drench me and <lb />freeze upon me.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="37">
                    <l>I search with the crowd&#8212;not one of the company is <lb />washed to
                        us alive; </l>
                    <l>In the morning I help pick up the dead and lay them <lb />in rows in a barn.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="38">
                    <l>Now of the old war-days, the defeat at Brooklyn,</l>
                    <l>Washington stands inside the lines&#8212;he stands on the
                        <lb />intrenched hills, amid a crowd of officers, </l>
                    <l>His face is cold and damp&#8212;he cannot repress the <lb />weeping
                        drops, </l>
                    <l>He lifts the glass perpetually to his eyes&#8212;the color <lb />is
                        blanched from his cheeks, </l>
                    <l>He sees the slaughter of the southern braves confided <lb />to him by their
                        parents. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="39">
                    <l>The same, at last and at last, when peace is declared,</l>
                    <l>He stands in the room of the old tavern&#8212;the well-<lb />beloved
                        soldiers all pass through, </l>
                    <l>The officers speechless and slow draw near in their <lb />turns, </l>
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                    <l>The chief encircles their necks with his arm, and <lb />kisses them on the
                        cheek, </l>
                    <l>He kisses lightly the wet cheeks one after another&#8212; <lb />he shakes
                        hands, and bids good-by to the army. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="40">
                    <l>Now I tell what my mother told me to-day as we sat <lb />at dinner together, </l>
                    <l>Of when she was a nearly grown girl, living home <lb />with her parents on
                        the old homestead. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="41">
                    <l>A red squaw came one breakfast-time to the old <lb />homestead, </l>
                    <l>On her back she carried a bundle of rushes for <lb />rush-bottoming chairs, </l>
                    <l>Her hair, straight, shiny, coarse, black, profuse, half-<lb />enveloped her
                        face, </l>
                    <l>Her step was free and elastic, and her voice sounded <lb />exquisitely as she
                        spoke. </l>
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                    <l>My mother looked in delight and amazement at the <lb />stranger, </l>
                    <l>She looked at the freshness of her tall-borne face, and <lb />full and pliant
                        limbs, </l>
                    <l>The more she looked upon her she loved her,</l>
                    <l>Never before had she seen such wonderful beauty and <lb />purity, </l>
                    <l>She made her sit on a bench by the jamb of the <choice><orig>fire-<lb/>place</orig><reg>fireplace<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;she cooked food for her, </l>
                    <l>She had no work to give her, but she gave her <lb />remembrance and fondness.
                    </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>The red squaw staid all the forenoon, and toward the <lb />middle of the
                        afternoon she went away, </l>
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                    <l>O my mother was loth to have her go away!</l>
                    <l>All the week she thought of her&#8212;she watched for <lb />her many a
                        month, </l>
                    <l>She remembered her many a winter and many a <lb />summer, </l>
                    <l>But the red squaw never came, nor was heard of <lb />there again. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>Now Lucifer was not dead&#8212;or if he was, I am his <lb />sorrowful
                        terrible heir, </l>
                    <l>I have been wronged&#8212;I am oppressed&#8212;I hate him <lb />that
                        oppresses me, </l>
                    <l>I will either destroy him, or he shall release me.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="45">
                    <l>Damn him! how he does defile me!</l>
                    <l>How he informs against my brother and sister, and <lb />takes pay for their
                        blood! </l>
                    <l>How he laughs when I look down the bend, after the <lb />steamboat that
                        carries away my woman! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="46">
                    <l>Now the vast dusk bulk that is the whale's bulk, it <lb />seems mine, </l>
                    <l>Warily, sportsman! though I lie so sleepy and <choice>
                            <orig>slug-<lb />gish,</orig>
                            <reg>sluggish<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">my tap</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="infralinear">the tap of my
                                flukes</add>
                        </subst> is death. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="47">
                    <l>A show of the summer softness! a contact of <choice>
                            <orig>some-<lb />thing</orig>
                            <reg>something<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> unseen! an amour of the light and air! </l>
                    <l>I am jealous, and overwhelmed with friendliness,</l>
                    <l>And will go gallivant with the light and air myself,</l>
                    <l>And have an unseen something to be in contact with <lb />them also. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="48">
                    <l>O love and summer! you are in the dreams, and <lb />in me! </l>
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                    <l>Autumn and winter are in the dreams&#8212;the farmer <lb />goes with his
                        thrift, </l>
                    <l>The droves and crops increase, and the barns are well-<lb />filled. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="49">
                    <l>Elements merge in the night&#8212;ships make tacks in <lb />the dreams, </l>
                    <l>The sailor sails&#8212;the exile returns home,</l>
                    <l>The fugitive returns unharmed&#8212;the immigrant is <lb />back beyond
                        months and years, </l>
                    <l>The poor Irishman lives in the simple house of his <lb />childhood, with the
                        well-known neighbors and <lb />faces, </l>
                    <l>They warmly welcome him&#8212;he is barefoot again, he <lb />forgets he
                        is well off; </l>
                    <l>The Dutchman voyages home, and the Scotchman <lb />and Welshman voyage home,
                        and the native of <lb />the Mediterranean voyages home, </l>
                    <l>To every port of England, France, Spain, enter well-<lb />filled ships, </l>
                    <l>The Swiss foots it toward his hills&#8212;the Prussian goes <lb />his
                        way, the Hungarian his way, and the Pole <lb />his way, </l>
                    <l>The Swede returns, and the Dane and Norwegian <lb />return. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="50">
                    <l>The homeward bound, and the outward bound,</l>
                    <l>The beautiful lost swimmer, the ennuy&#233;, the onanist, <lb />the
                        female that loves unrequited, the <choice>
                            <orig>money-<lb />maker,</orig>
                            <reg>moneymaker<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>The actor and actress, those through with their parts, <lb />and those
                        waiting to commence, </l>
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                    <l>The affectionate boy, the husband and wife, the voter, <lb />the nominee that
                        is chosen, and the nominee that <lb />has failed, </l>
                    <l>The great already known, and the great any time <lb />after to-day, </l>
                    <l>The stammerer, the sick, the perfect-formed, the <lb />homely, </l>
                    <l>The criminal that stood in the box, the judge that <lb />sat and sentenced
                        him, the fluent lawyers, the <lb />jury, the audience, </l>
                    <l>The laugher and weeper, the dancer, the midnight <lb />widow, the red squaw, </l>
                    <l>The consumptive, the erysip <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">a</add>
                        </subst>lite, the idiot, he that <lb />is wronged, </l>
                    <l>The antipodes, and every one between this and them <lb />in the dark, </l>
                    <l>I swear they are averaged now&#8212;one is no better <lb />than the
                        other, </l>
                    <l>The night and sleep have likened them and restored <lb />them. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="51">
                    <l>I swear they are all beautiful!</l>
                    <l>Every one that sleeps is beautiful&#8212;everything in <lb />the dim
                        light is beautiful, </l>
                    <l>The wildest and bloodiest is over, and all is peace.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="52">
                    <l>Peace is always beautiful,</l>
                    <l>The myth of heaven indicates peace and night.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="53">
                    <l>The myth of heaven indicates the Soul;</l>
                    <l>The Soul is always beautiful&#8212;it appears more or it <lb />appears
                        less&#8212;it comes, or it lags behind, </l>
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                    <l>It comes from its embowered garden, and looks <lb />pleasantly on itself, and
                        encloses the world, </l>
                    <l>Perfect and clean the genitals previously jetting, and <lb />perfect and
                        clean the womb cohering, </l>
                    <l>The head well-grown, proportioned and plumb, and <lb />the bowels and joints
                        proportioned and plumb. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="54">
                    <l>The Soul is always beautiful,</l>
                    <l>The universe is duly in order, everything is in its <lb />place, </l>
                    <l>What is arrived is in its place, and what waits is <lb />in its place; </l>
                    <l>The twisted skull waits, the watery or rotten blood <lb />waits, </l>
                    <l>The child of the glutton or venerealee waits long, and <lb />the child of the
                        drunkard waits long, and the <lb />drunkard himself waits long, </l>
                    <l>The sleepers that lived and died wait&#8212;the far <lb />advanced are to
                        go on in their turns, and the <lb />far behind are to go on in their turns, </l>
                    <l>The diverse shall be no less diverse, but they shall <lb />flow and
                        unite&#8212;they unite now. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="55">
                    <l>The sleepers are very beautiful as they lie unclothed,</l>
                    <l>They flow hand in hand over the whole earth, from <lb />east to west, as they
                        lie unclothed, </l>
                    <l>The Asiatic and African are hand in hand&#8212;the <lb />European and
                        American are hand in hand, </l>
                    <l>Learned and unlearned are hand in hand, and male <lb />and female are hand in
                        hand, </l>
                    <l>The bare arm of the girl crosses the bare breast of <lb />her
                        lover&#8212;they press close without lust&#8212;his <lb />lips press
                        her neck, </l>
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                    <l>The father holds his grown or ungrown son in his <lb />arms with measureless
                        love, <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add> and the son holds
                        <lb />the father in his arms with measureless love, </l>
                    <l>The white hair of the mother shines on the white <lb />wrist of the daughter, </l>
                    <l>The breath of the boy goes with the breath of the <lb />man, friend is
                        inarmed by friend, </l>
                    <l>The scholar kisses the teacher, and the teacher kisses <lb />the
                        scholar&#8212;the wronged is made right, </l>
                    <l>The call of the slave is one with the master's call, and <lb />the master
                        salutes the slave, </l>
                    <l>The felon steps forth from the prison <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">, </add>
                        </subst>the insane <lb />becomes sane <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>the suffering of sick persons is <lb />relieved, </l>
                    <l>The sweatings and fevers stop&#8212;the throat that was <lb />unsound is
                        sound <subst>
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                        </subst>the lungs of the consumptive <lb />are resumed <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">, </add>
                        </subst>the poor distressed head is free, </l>
                    <l>The joints of the rheumatic move as smoothly as ever, <lb />and smoother than
                        ever, </l>
                    <l>Stiflings and passages open <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">, </add>
                        </subst>the paralyzed become <lb />supple, </l>
                    <l>The swelled and convulsed and congested awake to <lb />themselves in
                        condition, </l>
                    <l>They pass the invigoration of the night, and the <lb />chemistry of the
                        night, and awake. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="56">
                    <l>I too pass from the night,</l>
                    <l>I stay a while away O night, but I return to you <lb />again, and love you.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="57">
                    <l>Why should I be afraid to trust myself to you?</l>
                    <l>I am not afraid&#8212;I have been well brought forward <lb />by you, </l>
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                    <l>I love the rich running day, but I do not desert her <lb />in whom I lay so
                        long, </l>
                    <l>I know not how I came of you, and I know not where <lb />I go with
                        you&#8212;but I know I came well, and <lb />shall go well. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="58">
                    <l>I will stop only a time with the night, and rise <lb />betimes, </l>
                    <l>I will duly pass the day, O my mother, and duly <lb />return to you. </l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
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                                <work ref="xxx.00266" />
                            </relations>
                <note type="authorial" place="margintop" rend="circled">?</note>
                <add type="unmarked" place="margintop">
                    <head type="main-authorial" rend="underline">To think of Burial!</head>
                </add>
                <head type="main-authorial">BURIAL<del type="overstrike">.</del>
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="inline">and Time</add>
                    </del></head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">O</hi> think of <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">it!</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">th<gap
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                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="inline">burial!</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>To think of <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">time&#8212;of all that</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                        </del> retrospect <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">ion</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                    <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                        >ion</unclear>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>!</l>
                    <l>To think of to-day, and the ages continued <choice>
                            <orig>hence-<lb />forward!</orig>
                            <reg>henceforward<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>Have you guessed you yourself would not continue?</l>
                    <l>Have you dreaded those earth-beetles?</l>
                    <l>Have you feared the future would be nothing to you?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                    <l>Is to-day nothing? Is the beginningless past nothing?</l>
                    <l>If the future is nothing, they are just as surely <lb />nothing. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                    <l>To think that the sun rose in the east! <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        </del>that men <lb />and women were flexible, real, alive! <del
                            type="overstrike">that <choice><orig>every-<lb />thing</orig><reg>everything<lb/></reg></choice>
                            was alive! </del></l>
                    <l>To think that you and I did not see, feel, think, nor <lb />bear our part! </l>
                    <l>To think that we are now here, and bear our part!</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                    <l>Not a day passes&#8212;not a minute or second, without <lb />an
                        accouchment! </l>
                    <l>Not a day passes&#8212;not a minute or second, without a <lb />corpse!
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                    <l>The dull nights go over, and the dull days also,</l>
                    <l>The soreness of lying so much in bed goes over,</l>
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                    <l>The physician, after long putting off, gives the silent <lb />and terrible
                        look for an answer, </l>
                    <l>The children come hurried and weeping, and the <lb />brothers and sisters are
                        sent for, </l>
                    <l>Medicines stand unused on the shelf&#8212;(the camphor-<lb />smell has
                        long pervaded the rooms,) </l>
                    <l>The faithful hand of the living does not desert the <lb />hand of the dying, </l>
                    <l>The twitching lips press lightly on the forehead of <lb />the dying, </l>
                    <l>The breath ceases, and the pulse of the heart ceases,</l>
                    <l>The corpse stretches on the bed, and the living look <lb />upon it, </l>
                    <l>It is palpable as the living are palpable.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                    <l>The living look upon the corpse with their eye-sight,</l>
                    <l>But without eye-sight lingers a different living, and <lb />looks curiously
                        on the corpse. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                    <l>To think that the rivers will flow, and the snow fall, <lb />and fruits
                        ripen, and act upon others as upon <lb />us now&#8212;yet not act upon
                        us! </l>
                    <l>To think of all these wonders of city and country, <lb />and others taking
                        great interest in them&#8212;and <lb />we taking no interest in them!
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                    <l>To think how eager we are in building our houses!</l>
                    <l>To think others shall be just as eager, and we quite <lb />indifferent! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <l>I see one building the house that serves him a few <lb />years, or seventy or
                        eighty years at most, </l>
                    <l><add type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>I see one building the house that
                        serves him longer <lb />than that.<add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >)</add>
                    </l>
                </lg>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>Slow-moving and black lines creep over the whole <lb />earth <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>they never cease&#8212;they are the burial <lb />lines, </l>
                    <l>He that was President was buried, and he that is now <lb />President shall
                        surely be buried. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>Cold dash of waves at the ferry-wharf <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>posh and <lb />ice in the river, half-frozen mud in the streets,
                            <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">A</add>
                        </subst> gray discouraged sky overhead, the short last <lb />daylight of
                        Twelfth Month, </l>
                    <l>A hearse and stages&#8212;other vehicles give place&#8212; <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the funeral of an old
                        Broadway stage-driver, the <lb />cortege mostly drivers. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>Steady the trot to the cemetery, duly rattles the <lb />death-bell, <add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>the gate is passed, the
                        new-dug grave <lb />is halted at, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>the living alight, the hearse <choice>
                            <orig>un-<lb />closes,</orig>
                            <reg>uncloses<lb /></reg>
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                    <l>The coffin is passed <subst>
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                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">out</del>
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                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">forth</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst>, lowered and settled, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>the <lb />whip is laid on the coffin, the earth is
                        swiftly <lb />shovelled in, </l>
                    <l>The mound above is flatted with the spades&#8212; <lb />silence, </l>
                    <l>A minute, no one moves or speaks&#8212;it is done,</l>
                    <l>He is decently put away&#8212;is there anything more?</l>
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                    <l>He was a good fellow, free-mouthed, quick-tempered, <lb />not bad-looking,
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>able to take his own
                        part, witty, <lb />sensitive to a slight, <add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">&#182;</add>ready with life or death for <lb />a
                        friend, fond of women, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >&#182;</add>gambled, ate hearty, <lb />drank hearty, had known what it
                        was to be <lb />flush, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                        >&#182;</add>grew low-spirited toward the last, sickened, <lb />was
                        helped by a contribution, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>died, aged forty-<lb />one years&#8212;and that was
                        his funeral. </l>
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                    <l>Thumb extended, finger uplifted, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>apron, cape, gloves, <lb />strap, wet-weather clothes,
                        whip carefully chosen, <lb /><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>boss, spotter, starter, hostler, somebody loafing
                        <lb />on you, you loafing on somebody, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>head-way, man <lb />before and man behind, good day's
                        work, bad <lb />day's work, <add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                            >&#182;</add>pet stock, mean stock, first out, last <lb />out,
                        turning in at night, </l>
                    <l>To think that these are so much and so nigh to <lb />other drivers <subst>
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                        </subst> and he there takes no interest <lb />in them! </l>
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                    <l>The markets, the government, the working-man's <lb />wages <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>to think what account they are through <lb />our nights and days! </l>
                    <l>To think that other working-men will make just as <lb />great account of them <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>yet we make little or <lb />no account! </l>
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                    <l>The vulgar and the refined <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>what you call sin and <lb />what you call goodness&#8212;to
                        think how wide a <lb />difference! </l>
                    <l>To think the difference will still continue to others, <lb />yet we lie
                        beyond the difference. </l>
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                    <l>To think how much pleasure there is!</l>
                    <l>Have you pleasure from looking at the sky? have <lb />you pleasure from
                        poems? </l>
                    <l>Do you enjoy yourself in the city? or engaged in <lb />business? <add
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                        and <choice>
                            <orig>elec-<lb />tion?</orig>
                            <reg>election<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> or with your wife and family? </l>
                    <l>Or with your mother and sisters? or in womanly <lb />house-work? or the
                        beautiful maternal cares? </l>
                    <l>These also flow onward to others&#8212;you and I flow <lb />onward, </l>
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                    <l>But in due time you and I shall take less interest <lb />in them. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>Your farm, profits, crops,&#8212;to think how engrossed <lb />you are! </l>
                    <l>To think there will still be farms, profits, crops&#8212;yet <lb />for
                        you, of what avail? </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>What will be, will be well&#8212;for what is, is well,</l>
                    <l>To take interest is well, and not to take interest shall <lb />be well. </l>
                </lg>
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                    <l>The sky continues beautiful,</l>
                    <l>The pleasure of men with women shall never be sated, <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>nor the pleasure of women
                        with men, nor the <lb />pleasure from poems, </l>
                    <l>The domestic joys, the daily house-work or business, <lb />the building of
                        houses <subst>
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                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">&#182;</add>
                        </subst>these are not <choice><orig>phan-<lb />tasms</orig><reg>phantasms<lb/></reg></choice>&#8212;they have weight, form, location; </l>
                    <l>Farms, profits, crops, markets, wages, government, <lb />are none of them
                        phantasms, </l>
                    <l>The difference between sin and goodness is no <lb />delusion, </l>
                    <l>The earth is not an echo&#8212;man and his life, and all <lb />the things
                        of his life, are well-considered. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                    <l>You are not thrown to the winds&#8212;you gather <choice>
                            <orig>cer-<lb />tainly</orig>
                            <reg>certainly<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> and safely around yourself <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                    </l>
                    <l>Yourself! Yourself! Yourself, forever and ever!</l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                    <l>It is not to diffuse you that you were born of your <lb />mother and
                        father&#8212;it is to identify you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst>
                        <lb />It is not that you should be undecided, but that you <lb />should be
                        decided; </l>
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                    <l>Something long preparing and formless is arrived and <lb />formed in you, </l>
                    <l>You are thenceforth secure, whatever comes or goes.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="24">
                    <l>The threads that were spun are gathered, the weft <lb />crosses the warp, the
                        pattern is systematic. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="25">
                    <l>The preparations have every one been justified,</l>
                    <l>The orchestra have sufficiently tuned their <choice>
                            <orig>instru-<lb />ments,</orig>
                            <reg>instruments<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> the baton has given the signal. </l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="26">
                    <l>The guest that was coming&#8212;he waited long, for
                        <lb />reasons&#8212;he is now housed, </l>
                    <l>He is one of those who are beautiful and happy&#8212; <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>he is one of those that
                        to look upon and be <lb />with is enough. </l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="27">
                    <l>The law of the past cannot be eluded,</l>
                    <l>The law of the present and future cannot be eluded,</l>
                    <l>The law of the living cannot be eluded&#8212;it is <choice>
                            <orig>eter-<lb />nal,</orig>
                            <reg>eternal<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>The law of promotion and transformation cannot be <lb />eluded, </l>
                    <l>The law of heroes and good-doers cannot be eluded,</l>
                    <l>e law of drunkards, informers, mean persons&#8212; <lb />not one iota of
                        it can be eluded. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="28">
                    <l>Slow-moving and black lines go ceaselessly over the <lb />earth, </l>
                    <l>Northerner goes carried, and southerner goes carried, <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">&#182;</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">A</add>
                        </subst>nd they on the Atlantic side, and they on the <lb />Pacific, and
                        they between, <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="edit">A</add>
                        </subst>nd all through the <lb />Mississippi country, and all over the
                        earth. </l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="29">
                    <l>The great masters and kosmos are well as they go&#8212; <lb />the heroes
                        and good-doers are well, </l>
                    <l>The known leaders and inventors, and the rich owners <lb />and pious and
                        distinguished, may be well, </l>
                    <l>But there is more account than that&#8212;there is strict <lb />account
                        of all. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="30">
                    <l>The interminable hordes of the ignorant and wicked <lb />are not nothing, </l>
                    <l>The barbarians of Africa and Asia are not nothing,</l>
                    <l>The common people of Europe are not nothing&#8212;the <lb />American
                        aborigines are not nothing, </l>
                    <l>The infected in the immigrant hospital are not <lb />nothing&#8212;the
                        murderer or mean person is not <lb />nothing, </l>
                    <l>The perpetual successions of shallow people are not <lb />nothing as they go, </l>
                    <l>The lowest prostitute is not nothing&#8212;the mocker of <lb />religion
                        is not nothing as he goes. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="31">
                    <l>I shall go with the rest&#8212;we have satisfaction,</l>
                    <l>I have dreamed that we are not to be changed so <lb />much, nor the law of us
                        changed, </l>
                    <l>I have dreamed that heroes and good-doers shall <lb />be under the present
                        and past law, </l>
                    <l>And that murderers, drunkards, liars, shall be under <lb />the present and
                        past law, </l>
                    <l>For I have dreamed that the law they are under now <lb />is enough. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="32">
                    <l>And I have dreamed that the satisfaction is not so <lb />much changed, and
                        that there is no life <choice>
                            <orig>with-<lb />out</orig>
                            <reg>without<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> satisfaction; </l>
                    <l>What is the earth? what are body and Soul, without <lb />satisfaction? </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf228r" type="recto" n="447" facs="nyp.00015.455" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="33">
                    <l>I shall go with the rest,</l>
                    <l>We cannot be stopped at a given point&#8212;that is no
                        <lb />satisfaction, </l>
                    <l>To show us a good thing, or a few good things, for a <lb />space of
                        time&#8212;that is no satisfaction, </l>
                    <l>We must have the indestructible breed of the best, <lb />regardless of time.
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="34">
                    <l>If otherwise, all these things came but to ashes of <lb />dung, </l>
                    <l>If maggots and rats ended us, then <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">alarm!</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">Alarum!</add>
                        </subst> for we are <lb />betrayed! </l>
                    <l>Then indeed suspicion of death.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="35">
                    <l>Do you suspect death? If I were to suspect death, I <lb />should die now <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Do you think I could walk pleasantly and well-suited <lb />toward
                        annihilation? </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="36">
                    <l>Pleasantly and well-suited I walk <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>Whither I walk I cannot define, but I know it is good,</l>
                    <l>The whole universe indicates that it is good,</l>
                    <l>The past and the present indicate that it is good.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="37">
                    <l>How beautiful and perfect are the animals! How <lb />perfect is my Soul! </l>
                    <l>How perfect the earth, and the minutest thing upon <lb />it! </l>
                    <l>What is called good is perfect, and what is called bad <lb />is just as
                        perfect, </l>
                    <l>The vegetables and minerals are all perfect, and the <lb />imponderable
                        fluids are perfect; </l>
                    <l>Slowly and surely they have passed on to this, and <lb />slowly and surely
                        they yet pass on. </l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf228v" type="verso" n="448" facs="nyp.00015.456" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="38">
                    <l>My Soul! if I realize you, I have satisfaction,</l>
                    <l>Animals and vegetables! if I realize you, I have <choice>
                            <orig>sat-<lb />isfaction,</orig>
                            <reg>satisfaction<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                    </l>
                    <l>Laws of the earth and air! if I realize you, I have <lb />satisfaction. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="39">
                    <l>I cannot define my satisfaction, yet it is so,</l>
                    <l>I cannot define my life, yet it is so.</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="40">
                    <l>O it comes to me now<del type="overstrike">!</del><add type="unmarked"
                            place="inline">lighting up Burial and Time!</add></l>
                    <l>I swear I think now that everything without <choice>
                            <orig>excep-<lb />tion</orig>
                            <reg>esception<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> has an eternal Soul! </l>
                    <l>The trees have, rooted in the ground! the weeds of <lb />the sea have! the
                        animals! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="41">
                    <l>I swear I think there is nothing but immortality!</l>
                    <l>That the exquisite scheme is for it, and the nebulous <lb />float is for it,
                        and the cohering is for it! </l>
                    <l>And all preparation is for it! and identity is for it! <lb />and life and
                        death are altogether for it! </l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
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            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01661">
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                                <work ref="xxx.00294" />
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                    <head type="main-authorial"><subst>
                        <restore seq="6" rend="erased">
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">TO MY SOUL.</del>
                        </restore>
                        <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" />ure</add>
                        </del>
                        <del seq="5" type="erasure">
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">As <gap
                                    reason="deletion, illegible" /> departure</add>
                        </del></subst>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>A<hi rend="smallcaps">S</hi> nearing departure,</l>
                    <l>As the time draws nigh, glooming<add type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">from you,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><del type="overstrike"
                                    >&#8212;</del> a cloud,</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>A <del type="overstrike">cloud&#8212;a</del> dread beyond, of I know not
                        what, <choice>
                            <orig>dark-<lb />ens</orig>
                            <reg>darkens<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> me. </l>
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                <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                    <l>I <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">shall</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">that yet</add>
                        </subst> go forth <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                        </subst>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">yet <add type="unmarked"
                                    place="supralinear">for</add> awhile,</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>I <restore rend="edit">
                            <del type="overstrike">shall</del>
                        </restore> traverse The States&#8212;but I cannot tell whither <lb />or
                        how long; </l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Perhaps</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">And</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> soon, some day or night <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">perhaps</add>
                        </del>while I am singing, <lb /><del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">
                                <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                            </add>
                        </del>my voice will suddenly cease. </l>
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                    <l>O Book and Chant! must all then amount to but this?</l>
                    <l>O Body &#38; Soul! was our long presistent voyage <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">
                                <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses"
                                    >but</unclear>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">only</add>
                        </subst> for this!</l>
                    <l>Was our life of struggling &#38; pride only for this?</l>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">For all has</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">Was it all to</add>
                        </subst> barely arrive<del type="overstrike">d</del>
                        <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">but</add>
                        </del> at this beginning of me!</l>
                    <l>This beginning of me . . . . And yet it is Enough, O Soul!</l>
                    <l>We have positively appeared&#8212;that is enough.</l>
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                            <l>All moves over us, we are patient</l>
                            <l>From my tent <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion">of war</add>
                                </del> emerging<del type="overstrike">,</del>
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">no more</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">for good</add>
                                </subst></l>
                            <l><del type="overstrike">Loosing</del> the tent&#8209;ropes</l>
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                <delSpan type="hashmark" spanTo="#d30" />
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                    <l>O <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">my</add>
                        </del> Soul! <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline">then all arrive <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overwrite">d</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">s</add>
                                </subst> at last this?</add>
                        </del>
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">is <del type="overstrike">all <del
                                    type="overwrite">to</del> then</del>
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">
                                <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">your</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">our</add>
                                </subst> long persistent voyage</add> only for this?</add></l>
                    <subst>
                        <del seq="1" type="hashmark">
                            <l>
                                <del type="overstrike">Then all may arrive to but this;</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>The glances of my eyes, that swept the daylight,</l>
                            <l>The unspeakable love I interchanged with women,</l>
                            <l>My joys in the open air&#8212;my walks through the <choice>
                                    <orig>Man-<lb />nahatta,</orig>
                                    <reg>Manahatta<lb /></reg>
                                </choice>
                            </l>
                            <l>The continual good will I have met&#8212;the curious
                                <lb />attachment of young men to me, </l>
                            <l>My reflections alone&#8212;the absorption into me from <lb />the
                                landscape, stars, animals, thunder, rain, <lb />and snow, in my
                                wanderings alone, </l>
                            <l>The words of my mouth, rude, ignorant, arrogant&#8212; <lb />my
                                many faults and derelictions, </l>
                        </del>
                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginbot">
                            <l>Must <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">all your</add>
                                </del>
                                <del type="overstrike">all this</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">my life of</add>
                                </del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">our life of</add>
                                    struggl<del type="overwrite">es</del><add type="overwrite"
                                    place="over">ing</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">and</del>
                                <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear">and</add> pride and <del
                                    type="overstrike">hope</del>
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">our <del type="overstrike"
                                        >your</del> foil'd hope &#38; love</add> amount to but
                                this?</l>
                        </add>
                    </subst>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf229v" type="verso" n="450" facs="nyp.00015.458" />
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <l>The light touches, on my lips, of the lips of my <choice>
                                <orig>com-<lb />rades,</orig>
                                <reg>comrades<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> at parting, </l>
                        <l>The tracks which I leave, upon the side-walks and <lb />fields, <del
                                type="erasure">
                                <add type="unmarked" place="inline"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />this private exercise,</add>
                            </del></l>
                    </del>
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">May</del>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">
                                    <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Must all</add>
                        </subst> but arrive <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">at this beginning of me,</del>
                        </restore></l>
                    <l>This <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">bare</add>
                        </del> beginning of me <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">. . . .
                        </add>&#8212; <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" type="edit">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">a</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">A</add>
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                        </subst>nd yet it is enough, O <del type="erasure">my</del> Soul <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>O <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="insertion" place="infralinear">my</add>
                        </del> Soul, we have positively appeared&#8212;that is enough.</l>
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            <pb xml:id="leaf230r" type="recto" n="451" facs="nyp.00015.459" />
            <lg type="poem" xml:id="ppp.01662">
                <relations>
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                <head type="main-authorial" rend="italic"><del type="overstrike">
                        <add type="unmarked" place="supralinear" rend="underline">To conclude,</add>
                    </del> So long!</head>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="1">
                    <l>T<hi rend="smallcaps">O</hi> conclude<del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">, So long!</add>
                        </del> &#8212;I announce what comes after me,</l>
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>The thought must be promulged, <del type="overstrike">that</del> all I
                            know at <lb />any time suffices for <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">that</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">the</add>
                            </subst> time <del type="overstrike">only</del>&#8212;not <choice>
                                <orig>subse-<lb />quent</orig>
                                <reg>subsequent<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> time; </l>
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                    <l>I announce greater offspring, orators, days <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright">&#8212;</add>
                        </subst> and then <lb />depart. </l>
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                <del type="erasure">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                </del>
                <del type="erasure">
                    <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
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                <restore rend="erased">
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                        <lg type="linegroup" n="2">
                            <l>I remember I said <del type="overstrike">to myself at the
                                    winter-close,</del> before <lb />my leaves sprang<add
                                    type="unmarked" place="inline">,</add>
                                <del type="overstrike">at all,</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">that</del>
                                <del type="overstrike"><add type="unmarked" place="inline"
                                        >&#182;</add>I would become a <lb /> candid and unloosed
                                    summer-poet</del>
                                <del type="overstrike">
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </del>
                            </l>
                            <l><del type="erasure">
                                    <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">
                                        <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                    </add>
                                </del> I <del type="overstrike">said I</del>
                                <restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">would</del>
                                </restore> rais <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">ing</add>
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                                </subst> my voice jocund and strong, <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">with</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginright"><gap
                                                reason="deletion, illegible" />d</add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst>
                                <lb /><restore rend="erased">
                                    <del type="overstrike">reference to</del>
                                </restore> consummations. </l>
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                        <lg type="linegroup" n="3">
                            <l>When America does what was promised,</l>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>When each part is peopled with free people,</l>
                            </del>
                            <del type="overstrike">
                                <l>When there is no city on earth to lead my city, the <lb />city of
                                    young men, the Mannahatta city&#8212;But <lb />when the
                                    Mannahatta leads all the cities of the <lb />earth, </l>
                            </del>
                            <l>When <del type="overstrike">there are</del> plentiful athletic
                                    bards<add type="insertion" place="supralinear">appear,</add><del
                                    type="overstrike">,</del> inland and <lb />seaboard, </l>
                            <l>When through These States walk <del type="overstrike">a hundred</del>
                                millions <lb />of superb persons, </l>
                            <l>When the rest part away for superb persons, and <choice>
                                    <orig>con-<lb />tribute</orig>
                                    <reg>contribute<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> to them, </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                </restore>
                <pb xml:id="leaf230v" type="verso" n="452" facs="nyp.00015.460" />
                <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
                <del type="edit">
                    <del type="erasure">
                        <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                    </del>
                    <restore rend="erased">
                        <del type="edit">
                            <lg type="linegroup">
                                <l>When <del type="overstrike">fathers, firm, unconstrained,
                                        open-eyed&#8212;When</del>
                                    <lb />breeds of the most perfect mothers denote <lb />America, </l>
                                <l>
                                    <subst>
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Then to me <add
                                                type="insertion" place="supralinear">content</add>
                                            <del type="overstrike">ripeness and
                                            conclusion.</del></del>
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">Then to me
                                            the <del type="overstrike">results</del>
                                            <add type="unmarked" place="infralinear">end</add> of my
                                            carols</add>
                                    </subst>
                                </l>
                            </lg>
                        </del>
                    </restore>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="4">
                            <l>Yet <subst>
                                    <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                        <del seq="1" type="overstrike">not me, after
                                            all&#8212;let none be content</del>
                                    </restore>
                                    <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                        <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">
                                            <gap reason="deletion, illegible" />
                                        </add>
                                    </del>
                                </subst> with me <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">?</add>
                                </subst></l>
                            <l>I myself seek a man better than I am, or a woman <lb />better than I
                                am, </l>
                            <l>I invite defiance, and to make myself superseded,</l>
                            <l>All I have done, I <del type="overstrike">would</del> cheerfully give
                                to be trod <lb />under foot, <subst>
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">if it might only be</del>
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">for</add>
                                </subst> the soil of <choice>
                                    <orig>supe-<lb />rior</orig>
                                    <reg>superior<lb /></reg>
                                </choice> poems. </l>
                        </lg>
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="5">
                            <l>I have established nothing for good,</l>
                            <l>I have but established these things, till things farther <lb />onward
                                shall be prepared to be established, </l>
                            <l>And I <del type="overstrike">am</del> myself <add type="insertion"
                                    place="infralinear">am but</add> the preparer of things farther
                                <lb />onward. </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="6">
                        <l>I have pressed through in my own right,</l>
                        <l>I have offered my style to every one&#8212;I have <choice>
                                <orig>jour-<lb />neyed</orig>
                                <reg>journeyed<lb /></reg>
                            </choice> with confident step, </l>
                        <l>While my pleasure is yet at the full, I whisper <lb /><hi rend="italic"
                                >So long,</hi>
                        </l>
                        <l>And take the young woman's hand, and the young <lb />man's hand, <del
                                type="hashmark">
                                <add type="insertion" place="marginbot">
                                    <l>And give them, projected, the sound of my voice, for the <subst>
                                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">last time.</del>
                                            <del seq="3" type="overstrike">
                                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"
                                                  >future.</add>
                                            </del>
                                            <add seq="4" type="unmarked" place="infralinear">last
                                                time.</add>
                                        </subst></l>
                                </add>
                            </del>
                            <subst>
                                <restore seq="4" rend="erased">
                                    <del seq="1" type="overstrike">for the last time.</del>
                                </restore>
                                <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                    <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">and draw them <gap
                                            reason="deletion, illegible" /></add>
                                </del>
                            </subst>
                        </l>
                    </lg>
                    <del type="hashmark">
                        <lg type="linegroup" n="7">
                            <l>Once more I enforce you to give play to yourself&#8212; <lb />and
                                not depend on me, <del type="overstrike">or on any one but <lb />
                                    yourself,</del>
                            </l>
                            <l>Once more I proclaim the whole of America for each <lb />individual,
                                without exception </l>
                        </lg>
                    </del>
                </del>
                <pb xml:id="leaf231r" type="recto" n="453" facs="nyp.00015.461" />
                <note type="authorial" place="marginleft">out</note>
                <note type="authorial" place="marginright">out</note>
                <del type="edit">
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="8">
                        <l>As I have announced the true theory of the youth, <lb />manhood,
                            womanhood, of The States, I adhere <lb />to it; </l>
                        <l>As I have announced myself on immortality, the body, <lb />procreation,
                            hauteur, prudence, </l>
                        <l>As I joined the stern crowd that still confronts the <lb />President with
                            menacing weapons&#8212;I adhere <lb />to all, </l>
                        <l>As I have announced each age for itself, this moment <lb />I set the
                            example. </l>
                    </lg>
                    <lg type="linegroup" n="9">
                        <l>I demand the choicest edifices to destroy them;</l>
                        <l>Room! room! for new far-planning draughtsmen and <lb />engineers! </l>
                        <l>Clear that rubbish from the building-spots and the <lb />paths! </l>
                    </lg>
                </del>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="10">
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">So long!</hi>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>I announce natural persons to arise,</l>
                    <l>I announce justice triumphant,</l>
                    <l>I announce uncompromising liberty and equality,</l>
                    <l>I announce the justification of candor, and the <choice>
                            <orig>justi-<lb />fication</orig>
                            <reg>justification<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> of pride. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="11">
                    <l>I announce that the identity of These States is a <lb />single identity only, </l>
                    <l>I announce <del type="overstrike">
                            <add type="insertion" place="marginleft">out of all its wars,</add>
                        </del> the Union more and more compact,</l>
                    <l>I announce splendors and majesties to make all the <lb />previous politics of
                        the earth insignificant. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="12">
                    <l>I announce adhesiveness&#8212;I say it shall be limitless,
                        <lb />unloosened, </l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf231v" type="verso" n="454" facs="nyp.00015.462" />
                    <l>I say you shall yet find the friend you <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">was</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">were</add>
                        </subst>
                        <choice>
                            <orig>look-<lb />ing</orig>
                            <reg>looking<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> for. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="13">
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">So long!</hi>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>I announce a man or woman coming&#8212;perhaps you <lb />are the one,<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline"><del type="overwrite">&#8212;</del>
                            (So long!)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>I announce a great individual, fluid as Nature, chaste, <lb />affectionate,
                        compassionate, fully armed. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="14">
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <l>
                            <hi rend="italic">So long!</hi>
                        </l>
                    </del>
                    <l>I announce a life that shall be copious, vehement, <lb />spiritual, bold, </l>
                    <l>And I announce an old age that shall lightly and <lb />joyfully meet its
                        translation. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="15">
                    <l>O thicker and faster!<add type="unmarked" place="inline" rend="underline"
                                ><del type="overwrite">&#8212;</del> (So long!)</add></l>
                    <l>O crowding too close upon me!</l>
                    <l>I foresee too much&#8212;it means more than I thought,</l>
                    <l>
                        <add type="insertion" place="marginleft" rend="underline">So long! </add>
                        <restore rend="erased">
                            <del type="overstrike">It appears to me I am dying.</del>
                        </restore>
                    </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="16">
                    <l>
                        <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">Now</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="marginleft">Hasten</add>
                        </subst> throat<del type="edit">,</del><add type="insertion"
                            place="supralinear"><del type="overstrike">&#8212;</del>and</add>
                        sound your last! <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline" rend="underline">
                                <unclear reason="deletion, illegible" cert="high" resp="ses">So
                                    long!</unclear>
                            </add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>Salute me&#8212;salute the <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">future</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear">days</add>
                        </subst> once more. Peal the <lb />old cry once more. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="17">
                    <l>Screaming electric, the atmosphere using,</l>
                    <l>At random glancing, each as I notice absorbing,</l>
                    <l>Swiftly on, but a little while alighting,</l>
                    <l>Curious enveloped messages delivering,</l>
                    <l>Sparkles hot, seed ethereal, down in the dirt dropping,</l>
                    <l>Myself unknowing, my commission obeying, to <choice>
                            <orig>ques-<lb />tion</orig>
                            <reg>question<lb /></reg>
                        </choice> it never daring, </l>
                    <l>To ages, and ages yet, the growth of the seed leaving,</l>
                    <pb xml:id="leaf232r" type="recto" n="455" facs="nyp.00015.463" />
                    <l>To troops out of me rising&#8212;they the tasks I have set
                        <lb />promulging, </l>
                    <l>To women certain whispers of myself bequeathing&#8212; <lb />their
                        affection me more clearly explaining, </l>
                    <l>To young men my problems offering&#8212;no dallier I&#8212; <lb />I
                        the muscle of their brains trying, </l>
                    <l>So I pass&#8212;a little time vocal, visible, contrary,</l>
                    <l>Afterward, a melodious echo, passionately bent for&#8212; <lb /><add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">(</add>death making me <add
                            type="insertion" place="supralinear">really</add> undying,<add
                            type="unmarked" place="inline">)</add>
                    </l>
                    <l>The best of me then when no longer visible&#8212;for <lb />toward that I
                        have been incessantly preparing. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="18">
                    <l>What is there more, that I lag and pause, and crouch <lb />extended with
                        unshut mouth? </l>
                    <l>Is there a single final farewell?</l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="19">
                    <l>My songs cease&#8212;I abandon them,</l>
                    <l>From behind the screen where I hid, I advance <choice>
                            <orig>per-<lb />sonally</orig>
                            <reg>personally<lb /></reg>
                        </choice>
                        <add type="insertion" place="inline">&#182; <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">s</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">S</add>
                            </subst>olely <del type="overstrike">
                                <add type="insertion" place="supralinear">reader,</add>
                            </del> to you <subst>
                                <del seq="1" type="overwrite">,</del>
                                <add seq="2" type="overwrite" place="over">.</add>
                            </subst>
                            <del type="overstrike">whoever you are.</del></add>. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="20">
                    <l><add type="insertion" place="margintop">Camerado,</add> This is no book,</l>
                    <l>Who touches this, touches a man,</l>
                    <l>(Is it night? Are we here alone?)</l>
                    <l>It is I you hold, and who holds you,</l>
                    <l>I spring from the pages into your arms&#8212;decease <lb />calls me
                        forth. </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="21">
                    <del type="overstrike">
                        <add type="insertion" place="supralinear" rend="underline">
                            <l>So long!</l>
                        </add>
                    </del>
                    <l>O how your fingers drowse me! <del type="erasure">
                            <add type="unmarked" place="inline" rend="underline">So long!</add>
                        </del></l>
                    <l>Your breath falls around me like dew&#8212;your pulse <lb />lulls the
                        tympans of my ears, </l>
                    <l>I feel immerged from head to foot,</l>
                    <l>Delicious&#8212;enough.</l>
                </lg>
                <pb xml:id="leaf232v" type="verso" n="456" facs="nyp.00015.464" />
                <lg type="linegroup" n="22">
                    <l>Enough, O deed impromptu and secret!</l>
                    <l>Enough, O gliding present! Enough, O summ <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">e</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="insertion" place="supralinear">'</add>
                        </subst>d-up <lb />past! </l>
                </lg>
                <lg type="linegroup" n="23">
                    <l>Dear friend, whoever you are, here, take this kiss,</l>
                    <l>I give it especially to you&#8212;Do not forget me,</l>
                    <l>I feel like one who has done his work&#8212;I progress on <subst>
                            <del seq="1" type="overstrike">,</del>
                            <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="inline">;</add>
                        </subst></l>
                    <l>The unknown sphere, more <subst>
                            <restore seq="4" type="erased">
                                <del seq="1" type="overstrike">real</del>
                            </restore>
                            <del seq="3" type="erasure">
                                <add seq="2" type="unmarked" place="supralinear"><gap
                                        reason="deletion, illegible" />eet</add>
                            </del>
                        </subst> than I dreamed, <lb />more direct, darts awakening rays about
                        me&#8212; <lb /><hi>So long!</hi>
                    </l>
                    <l>Remember my words&#8212;I love you&#8212;I depart from
                        <lb />materials, </l>
                    <l>I am as one disembodied, triumphant, dead.</l>
                </lg>
            </lg>
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<div1 type="part"><head type="main-authorial">WALT WHITMAN</head>

<p><hi rend="smallcaps">FROM</hi> time to time echoes reach this country, from across the Atlantic, of controversies
regarding the literary and worldly well-being of the American poet, Walt Whitman. For instance,
Mr. Joaquin Miller delivers a lecture to an American audience, telling them that Whitman is
disgracefully treated by his countrymen; and forthwith some one writes from the United States to
a London review to say that Mr. Miller is all in the wrong, and the American public well
affected, and even affectionately disposed, towards Whitman. Lately the <hi>West Jersey
Press</hi> (26th January) has published an article named "Walt Whitman's Actual American
Position." It comes to us authenticated by Whitman's own words:&#8212;"My theory is that the plain
truth of the situation here is best stated; it is even worse than described in the article." It may,
therefore, interest some of our readers if we reproduce the principal passages:&#8212;</p>
<p>The real truth is that with the exception of a very few readers (women equally with men),
Whitman's poems in their public reception have fallen still-born in this country. They have been
met, and are met to-day, with the determined denial, disgust, and scorn of orthodox American
authors, publishers, and editors, and, in a pecuniary and worldly sense, have certainly wrecked
the life of their author.</p>

<p>"From 1845 to 1855 Whitman, then in Brooklyn and New York cities, bade fair to be a good
business man, and to make his mark and fortune in the usual way&#8212;owned several houses, was
worth some money, and 'doing well.' But, about the latter date, he suddenly abandoned all, and
commenced writing poems, got possessed by the notion that he must make epics or lyrics, 'fit for
the New World.' . . . . Little or no impression (at least ostensibly) seems to have been made. Still
he stands alone. No established publishing house will yet publish his books. Most of the stores
will not even sell them. In fact, his works have never been really published at all. Worse still; for
the last three years he left them in charge of book agents in New York city, who, taking
advantage of the author's illness and helplessness, have, three of them, one after another,
successively thievishly embezzled every dollar of the proceeds!</p>
<p>"Repeated attempts to secure a small income by writing for the magazines during his illness have
been utter failures. The <hi>Atlantic</hi> will not touch him. His offerings to <hi>Scribner</hi> are
returned with insulting notes; the <hi>Galaxy</hi> the same. <hi>Harper's</hi> did print a couple of
his pieces two years ago, but imperative orders from head-quarters have stopped anything
further. All the established American poets studiously ignore Whitman. . . . . But the poet himself
is more resolute and persevering than ever. 'Old, poor, and paralyzed,' he has, for a twelve-month
past, been occupying himself by preparing, largely with his own handiwork, here in Camden, a
small edition of his complete works in two volumes, which he himself now sells, partly 'to keep
the wolf from the door' in old age, and partly to give, before he dies, as absolute an expression as
may be to his ideas. 'Leaves of Grass' is mainly the same volume previously issued, but has some
small new pieces, and gives two characteristic portraits. Of 'Two Rivulets' he has printed the
newer parts here in Camden."</p></div1>-->
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